Random mod cuz I like the song a lot
[Normal]
00:21:586 (2,1) - Blanket needs improvement, move (1) to 204,184
00:23:144 (2,1) - Blanket these 2 better, try this
00:26:261 (2) - Goes up too high -> Hits HPbar --> Unrankable
00:32:885 (2,4) - These 2 are slightly overlapping, move (4) a bit to the right
00:34:833 (5,1) - Try to blanket them
00:47:300 (2,1) - Try to blanket them, move (1) to 320:286 for example
00:56:261 (3) - Might be too wiggly, which is unrankable, I recommend to change it, just to be on the safe side
01:21:196 (2) - Try to make the shape a little better, it seems to not end nicely
01:30:157 (2) - Try to make the slider tick exactly at the top of the slider, put the red node at around 163:47
01:32:105 (2) - Slider looks ugly, being so curvy. Try to make it more curvy with grey nodes, instead of (ugly) red ones
01:42:430 (2) - You are better off deleting this note, because this part is really calm, and the 1/2 after the 4/1 feels just overdone
01:45:547 (4) - ^^
01:52:365 (3) - You can better make this 1/1 instead of 3/2 to emphasize the strong beat
02:02:495 (2,3) - Consider making (2) grey-noded instead of red-noded to make a blanket
02:24:313 (1,2) - Try to make the red nodes be on the same place as the slider ticks, to make it emphasize the beat better
02:33:664 (1,2) - Improve blanket, make (1) a little less curvy (tilt end a little to the right) and then move (2) so it fits
02:45:742 (2,2) - This overlap looks a little ugly, move the second (2) a little to the right, so it doesn't overlap anymore
03:06:391 (1,2) - Feels weird for a normal, just make it a reverse 3/4 slider with a circle at the end
[Hard]
00:39:118 (4,5) - Blanket needs slight improvement, move (4) to 99:92
00:44:573 (2) - NC, because it is the start of the kiai, and the strong beat starts here as well
00:49:053 (6) - Move to 232:170 to improve blanket
00:50:612 (4) - Move to 80:100 to improve blanket
01:10:287 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move (4) to 337:143
01:27:625 (4,5,6) - Improve the blankets
01:55:482 (3,4) - You can try to make these 2 blanket, but it isn't neccessary considering you use the tail of (3) for other purposes
02:03:079 (3,4) - Try to blanket these 2
02:22:170 (4,5,6,1) - Feels a little overdone, maybe make it a little less strong (remove a reverse for example)
02:29:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Might be a little too hard for hard, I recommend making it 1/2 circles
02:30:547 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part has really complex timing. You mapped it well, but it's way to hard, considering most of the music is off-beat here, which make it really hard to follow. I strongly recommend making this part easier, as most people will probably break their combo here
[Insane]
00:43:794 (1) - Please change this slider. AFAIK, Wiggles like this are unrankable, and you also have a slow-down, which already happens due to the wiggles. I strongly recommend changing the shape of this
00:54:313 (2,3,4) - This plays very badly, Ctrl G (2) and make (3) 2 circles, 1/6 at 154 BPm isn't that fast
01:11:846 (1,2,3) - ^^, w/o the Ctrl G of (2)
01:11:066 (11) - NC, the combo starts to get really long here, and as here is a strong beat, I recommend you to change it
01:14:962 (5) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
01:18:079 (1,2,3) - Make (2) into circles, but you will need to change this a little, so it looks nice, or it will be a strange triangle)
01:33:664 (1) - Make it curvy as well, to bland in with the previous sliders
01:48:469 (1,2,3) - These sliders look better if they have grey nodes, instead of red ones (01:51:586 (1,2) - Like these for example) They are a little overnoded now
01:56:846 (5) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
01:58:079 (2) - ^^
02:14:378 (2) - ^^
02:17:300 (3) - ^^
02:20:612 (2) - ^^
02:28:696 - Add a note? There is a strong violin here, and it makes sense, due to previous patterns
02:44:962 (3) - Either stack this with the end of 02:43:794 (3) - or blanket it with 02:44:573 (2). It feels really random now, and it makes no sense to me
You then probably want to move 02:45:937 (2) - as well
02:49:540 (4) - Delete, this is a quiet part, so you should not want to overmap, do you?
02:50:612 (8) - Move to 208:236 for a better blanket
02:53:014 (3) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
02:54:216 - Add a note, it fits in with the strong violin
02:58:014 (2) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
03:00:937 (5) - ^^
03:04:248 (2) - ^^
03:07:170 (1) - Silence the tail maybe, it sounds really loud, but it might be unrankable, as there is no sliderslide audible. Your choice
I really like this map (so this mod is really picky)
Good luck on getting this ranked, you deserve a star as well :3
Mutual me please MrAwesomemapper