blueloniess wrote:

额QAQ抱歉额，因为这个叫做colorful box的歌，我摸过2个的说.....感觉你的竞争对手有点大的.....
flow的话，QAQ我是新人，对flow的把握一直都不是很好，所以我就尽量的做简单一点的说...所以我会不自觉的找出一些可以加包裹的地方的..如果可以的话，能够看看我的图么。。。https://osu.ppy.sh/s/287561

Adol Christin wrote:

blueloniess wrote:

额QAQ抱歉额，因为这个叫做colorful box的歌，我摸过2个的说.....感觉你的竞争对手有点大的.....
flow的话，QAQ我是新人，对flow的把握一直都不是很好，所以我就尽量的做简单一点的说...所以我会不自觉的找出一些可以加包裹的地方的..如果可以的话，能够看看我的图么。。。https://osu.ppy.sh/s/287561

我开坑其实是很早的，那时候只有kunka那张 (那张完全看不懂的居然就泡了，也是服了。。。)
flow就是一种感觉而已，这里有篇教程不知你看过没有，可以参考下。昨天zj也跟我提起过你的图。过两天来看吧。今天应该不会上线了

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Hi, 看上面都是中文，我果斷也在這裡用中文了
說實話這同一首歌我已經摸過好多個了="= 要不是刚开始没什么人做，我也不会开坑了
不過看了看覺得質量不錯就來啦 谢啦~
提醒，這裡大多是個人意見，且以這張圖的完成度來說並不需要過多修正。所以請斟酌看看，斟酌取用即可。

General
這裡我幾乎沒什麼意見，但是看了看總覺得combo colour有點兒詭異
看得出來五個顏色是為了要配上五個人的髮色，但是這顏色落差有點過大了啊，顏色也不太準確 cb color想搭配的是SHIROBAKO这个title的颜色，233。。。

Insane
00:06:819 - 在這個時間點之前不考慮放多一點東西嗎 ? 如果不，那請注意一下：00:01:975 (2,3) - 這種合起來的點稱為一組，盡量把每一組的距離再拉開點。尤其值得注意的是00:06:075 (4,5) - ，距離與前面完全不成比例，就算難度不高，看似可行實際上打起來有不小困難啊。我觉得现在这样挺好。最后一组是作个提示：后面节奏变化了。
00:08:310 (1,3) - blanket (對於blanket我要求比較嚴，所以被指出太多不要生氣) 失误失误。我不会介意nazi方面的mod，尽情放心地指出来。
00:23:777 (3,5) - blanket 好吧
00:26:012 (1,2,3) - 拉開距離，同樣道理。不是要求拉到整個版面，只需要不必太難辨認即可。另外，可以排成三角形，或是來回。有意为之。另外这个真的很难读吗？我觉得还好啊。
00:34:956 (5,1) - blanket 好吧
00:36:634 (1,2,3,4) - 同理，不多說。 同上
00:38:870 (3,4) - 有點歪。平行製造法：複製，ctrl+>>。 额，很不幸，我就是这么做的
00:40:361 (2,3,1) - blanket 包的很好啊
00:54:149 (2) - 不論這是否出自於個人喜好，但我認為1/8太超過了。 听了一下背后的音，我觉得1/8挺好。这个看bn怎么看了。
01:03:093 (6) - 可能少了一個clap。如果不想跟Whistle一起出現，可以不必。 嗯，这里确实应该是clap音而不是什么whistle，改了
01:13:715 (3) - 這是個好的形狀，但是起點應該從另外一頭開始。其轉折處沒有任何可聽見的節拍，同時他與前一個滑條並非平行，也不是從同一個地方開始。我認為這個形狀出現在此有那麼的一點多餘。遊玩部分的話，在我打起來有種難以形容的"黏答答的感覺"。仔细斟酌了下，觉得可以倒过来。红点的滑条用红点去压节奏是一种做法，但也不是说一定要这么用吧。
01:18:373 (1) - 也是可能少了一個clap。也是可以不必跟Whistle。像這種位置的一樣同理，如01:20:235 - 这个我听了背后的鼓声后决定这么下了，再看一些mod吧
01:18:932 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 利用工具把他們排得更像一個星型。 就是用工具摆的啊，那个create polygon circle。
01:23:776 (4) - 同前面所述。同上
01:25:453 (4) - clap 漏了。。。
01:25:825 (1) - clap这个有意留空的
01:25:825 (1,2) - 這兩個的形狀可以拉得更好、更整齊。我觉得挺好。后面那个是前面那个旋转过来的。

Hard
題外話，我覺得這個難度在排列以及note等等都比Insane好上不少，尤其是開頭的地方。这样啊，枉我remapInsane这么多次呢醒醒你一共就re了一次啊。

從開頭到 00:15:391 - 把遊戲音樂音量降低，檢查這一段的Hitsound是不是完全正確的 嗯，作了一些修改。但如果你是指2 4clap的话，那肯定不会改了。因为音乐确实是这样。
00:26:384 (2) - 放在正中央的垂直線上 嗯
00:26:757 (3) - 移到和 00:26:012 (1) - 相對的位置 (Ctrl+H) 嗯
00:40:360 (2,3,1) - blanket 跟着滑条的弧走，稍微牺牲一下
00:41:850 (2,3,1) - ^ 嗯
00:54:148 (5,6,7,8,1) - 把整條的連打弄得整齊一點。可以改更好的flow，改成直線，或是全部重疊，只要不是現在這樣。你觉得哪里不好看呢？我觉得整体上挺好
00:58:620 (3,1) - blanket 嗯

比較讓我覺得奇妙的是，Hard和Insane的音效排列法則完全不一樣。有考慮要統一的打算嗎 ? 我再仔细检查下

我的mod到這裡告一段落。
希望這對你會有幫助，同時把它做得更好。
加油，祝你好運谢谢

Xinely wrote:

我才知道这个图已经泡了,根据以前的页看起来有一些问题,还要我来mod吗?

walaowey wrote:

From #modqueue
Sorry for the late mod .. np

Imho, your map are really good lol. ty

anyway, here is my little mod. Hope it help you out.

Insane

00:22:844 (5,1) - Blanket this nicely fine for me
00:39:614 (1) - remove nc and start nc at 00:30:460 . It feels like the vocal/rhythm start there lol.. I did this firstly. However, vocal is random. following vocal is hard to keep consistency.
00:41:105 (1) - remove nc and start nc at 00:41:850
And few parts after that. Same
About the nc problem, its just my opinion. feel free to follow it or just ignore it xD

Hard

00:12:409 (5,1) - Blanket this nicely already nice enough
00:41:850 (2,3) - ^ same
and about the nc thing same as insane diff. same

Normal

Alright, seriously, this diff is very good. I didnt find any problem here

Easy

01:02:534 (4,1) - Blanket this nicely Already fine for me
01:27:316 - Imo, I think you should start this spinner at the red tick 01:27:502. Beginner should need extra time to adjust their hand for spinner. sure.

Hope it help you out
your map is very good. Its just that I found out that some of your slider blankets are a little off ,Thats all >w</ thanks

Gamu wrote:

Hello!

According to this CD jacket, romanised artist should be "ISHIDA YOKO".
Her official blog and official website are using "YOKO ISHIDA", but i think we should prioritize "ISHIDA YOKO". Also alacat is agreed with me.

CD jacket

Good luck :3

jonathanlfj wrote:

Alright lets give this another try

Adol Christin wrote:

Xinely wrote:

我才知道这个图已经泡了,根据以前的页看起来有一些问题,还要我来mod吗?

暂时不用mod了。自从zzh的帖子之后我对Insane作了很多修改（然后才开始找的mod），音效也全部重做了。应该没多少问题了。

Edit: 如果你愿意的话，可以帮忙再检查一下吗？

Xinely wrote:

如果zzh没来检你的图, 放学后我可以试试看
edit :最近很忙，马上有很多事， 可能周末我才能看。不好意思 orz

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

@Kodora don't qualify this map yet ~ kunkakunkakunkakunka's version is in qualified status so please wait until kunkakunkakunkakunka's version will be on ranked maps page

Xinely wrote:

when i have to wake up earlier to check this map lol Thanks and sorry about that.

• 
  General

1. remove widescreen support on Easy for consistency omg I forget this..... damn.... Nice catch

• 
  Easy

1. AR3 OD2 for better spread with Normal sure
2. 00:15:763 (1,2) - somehow the curve to tail is too curvy and make the flow looks a little bit forced, how about smoother it a little bit example http://puu.sh/gEHzU.jpg
   sure
3. 00:18:745 - 00:21:726 - 00:24:707 - 00:30:670 - personally i dont like finish on these times because the music is clearly piano here, change them with whistle instead? Hmm, right. I totally agree. Fixed in all the diffs.
4. 00:39:614 (1,2) - somehow when the slider's flow is going to upward, it feels not really natural for me, literally because my taste but i'd say something more natural flow for this one, i guess like http://puu.sh/gEIiM.jpg
   kk, fixed
5. 00:41:105 (3) - remove finish on head and replace with whistle (you can use soft default whistle imo), the music is clearly piano >< sure. but I prefer no hitsound rather than a whistle.
6. 00:47:068 (3) - ^ ^
7. 00:54:148 - remove unncessary greenline sure
8. 00:58:620 (2) - nazi, move 208,88 to make the flow become diagonal move a bit more to keep distance snap.
9. 00:59:738 (4,1) - try make this pattern's flow more circular to make better flow for this time, i guess something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2901408sure (move some more stuffs after this in order to keep DS)
10. 01:05:329 (3) - straight slider feels weird as well for the design, i'd say make this a little bit curvy http://puu.sh/gEJ7g.jpg sure, it looks untidy for me as well.
11. 01:08:683 (4,1) - the flow and design still can improve as well, i guess something like http://puu.sh/gEJmN.jpg
    

    448,168,68683,2,0,P|452:216|428:268,1,89.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    368,320,69428,6,0,P|280:367|170:361,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    128,316,70546,1,8,0:0:0:0:

    dunno which line I should replace with these codes. xD.... just make the change myself.
12. 01:15:391 (1,3) - i'd say to avoid this overlap since it might makes newbie confuse to read (3)'s flow, i'd say https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2901432 (if you agree so fix next spacings) I know this overlap is risky but dunno how to change. This would be fine.

• 
  Normal

1. OD and HP look quite low here, oD 4 HP3,5? kk (don't think there would be much difference between HP3.0 and HP3.5.... xD)
2. 00:06:075 (3) - spacing 0,5 for 1/1 gap is so low and makes confuse here, use 1,0x instead like 00:06:075 (3,2,3) - have a try
3. 00:08:311 (2) - same as above^
4. 00:09:055 - the drum music is loud here, try map it with circle?sure
5. 00:08:310 - try use volume 65 or 70 here? for 60% i feel a little bit hard to hear clap hitsound example in 00:11:664 - >< (if you agree so do for all diffs) 65%
6. 00:33:465 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm a little bit long here, maybe make 00:34:957 (4) - starts on 00:35:142 - instead to follow piano >< Not that long imo.
7. 00:40:361 (2) - better avoid 0,95x since it's the lowest spacing calculate for 1,0x (also 00:40:361 (2,3) - looks a little bit closer, almost overlap)It's 0.99*, right?
8. 01:07:193 (2) - the slider looks inconsistency with previous slider, remove this, copy paste from previous slider and rotate -50 degree clockwise to make consistent Recreate all the sliders.
9. 01:11:665 (4) - the flow is curving to downward, when you place next circle to upward, it looks overlapped and unnatural for me, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2901458 instead? I did this flow on purpose. (overlap cannot be completely avoided cuz it's 1/2)
10. 01:10:920 (3,1) - avoid the overlap as possible kk
11. 01:23:218 (5) - make this slider's curve on upward instead so it will give more natural flow to next slider, like http://puu.sh/gEKGV.jpg It's a long space between this and the next stuff so it would be fine. I would rather keep this cuz (4,5)'s flow is the same as (1,2,3).
12. 01:25:640 (3) - the rhythm is quite long, remove this pls >< kk

• 
  Hard

1. 00:12:223 (4) - the drum is weak here, instead of circle, how about remove or make a 1/2 slider start from 00:12:037 - ? sure
2. 00:21:353 (4) - nazi, 1,28x spacing could be change with 1,2x for the consistencykk
3. 00:33:652 (1) - i'd say use circle only for this time so you can give 1/1 break for the spread with Normal, the music on redtick is weak either >< Do you mean delete the circle? Maybe not.
4. 00:39:614 (1,2) - the flow feels unnatural here, i'd say make 00:40:360 (2,3) - become like http://puu.sh/gELmz.jpg sure.
5. 00:49:117 (2) - this slider somehow read as 1/1 when i testplayed, try reduce the jump here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2901501No change here, but I slightly move this slider downward.
6. 00:54:148 (5,6,7,8) - oh no, stream 4 circles like this makes spread not really good with Normal, try use 1/4 slider repeat instead of just make triplet kk

• 
  Insane

1. HP 6 or 6,5 instead since Hard only uses HP5, the spread looks a little bit unbalance
2. AR 9 feels so fast with comparing AR 7,5 on Hard. try use AR 8,5 instead HP=7 and AR=9 is fine.
3. 00:08:310 (1) - SV 1,0x feels so fast here, try use 0,85 or 0,9 first 0.9
4. 00:15:578 (5) - use 1,2x spacing instead since it is your normal spacing? kk
5. 00:18:373 (4) - move to 216,352 for the spacing, the jump looks not really well to play imo for the relax part and weak music sure
6. 00:19:864 (5,1) - it's weird to feel normal spacing on stanza when you have jumps on previous, try make 00:19:491 (3,4,5) - become like http://puu.sh/gEMhr.jpg instead yeah, just realize that while modding.
7. 00:28:621 (4) - here too, the jump feels not really well, better to use consistent spacing like move to 176,276 kk
8. 00:30:298 (4) - try stack this with 00:28:808 (5) - and move this to 00:30:485 (5) - 148,200 for better jump and flow? lol sure
9. 00:33:465 (5) - the jump should be on next slider instead of this circle because the cymbal, since arrange the jump for that is quite hard for this time, better remove this imo lol remapped this part
10. 00:48:466 (5) - overmapped i guess, better to remove since i feel uncomfortable with this circle on testplay too ok, Jonathan mentioned this before. I'll change this.
11. 00:54:149 (2) - tbh i dont hear 1/8 here but 1/4, the music is so weak, better to use 1/4 imo finally I change this back
12. 01:02:906 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - since your hard use 1/4 slider repeat and circle, i'd say make this easier like http://puu.sh/gENdf.jpg . but it's just my taste afterall >< I forget changing this in Hard.... No change here.
13. 01:05:889 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - i'd say 456 stacked and 781 stacked together to make easier but just taste again ww My taste is the triplet with movement.
14. 01:09:988 (2,3,4,5,6) - could you reduce the jump spacing here especially for the (2), they look so hard if we compare with your Hard diff Maybe no. Especially (2) is what I expected.
15. 01:12:038 (5,6) - make the spacing more consistent to make better movement here, example example? Hmmm but I got your meaning, accepted.
16. 01:13:715 (3) - NC for consistency since you NC'ed every stanzaoops..
17. 01:14:274 (4) - 92,176 so you can give a little jump for next slider to emphasize the cymbal kk
18. 01:14:833 (6) - the jump feels not really well again because the weak music, try move to 284,328? Slightly moved the next slider to adjust flow.
19. 01:23:776 (4) - i'd say to stop the 1/8 until 01:23:962 - , i know there are still piano for next but they sound so weak and hard to hear (im not unsure 100% they still exist or not) so try safer way with change like http://puu.sh/gENFp.jpg ? Piano sound does exist and, yours would be hard to read imo. I'll keep this slider.

hope you can consider the insane diff since they like the main problem and longest i mod, it's just my taste but i feel much better to fix them (ofc i dont force you to fix, just saying ww) Did massive change Also, I fixed the inconsistency of hitsound in Insane diff.

we will see in 7 days later!

Pappy wrote:

Well why you put box in tags, this is already in title so it's useful. : o

Xinely wrote:

recheck because i have time, nothing wrong to recheck now even i'll qualify in next week or 2 weeks agin lol

• 
  Easy

1. 01:19:863 (1) - remove NC and swap NC for 01:21:353 (3,1) - to keep NC every 2 stanza sure
2. 01:21:353 (3,1) - you have to avoid overlapping something like (1)'s tail in (3)'s body because it makes newbie confuse usuallyfixed

• 
  Normal

1. 00:40:361 (2,3) - ups sorry i did mistake with this before, try to avoid the (almost overlap) on this slider? i'd like to move 416,240 for it kk, and moved (1) a bit for DS

• 
  Insane

1. if you see from Easy > Normal > Hard (Hp 2 / 3,5 / 5) you can see the different is 1,5 so i'd say use HP 6,5 for Insane to keep the spread Ok, changed.
2. For AR usually Insane uses AR 9 for upper 180bpm and for 160bpm it would be better if you lower the AR a little bit like use 8,7 here (i tested and feel 8,7 works nicely), also you dont have any jump patterns so use lower AR helps the players read the pattern easier >< it does have some little jump... Hmmm.... anyway 8.7 is fine also, changed.
3. 00:09:614 - you forgot to change this back to 1,0x SV lol omg this mistake.....
4. 00:33:652 (1) - add whistle on head as consistency with Hard diffoops... fixed
5. 01:12:038 (5,6) - lol i missed to give example before, slap me pls never mind, I forget something which is more significant
6. 01:13:715 (3) - you didnt nc this yet right.... fixed.

Xinely wrote:

I tried catch adol in game but i never can catch him lol

Checked in few days ago actually and fine, just waiting the same song out from qualify set :3

Adol Christin wrote:

Xinely wrote:

I tried catch adol in game but i never can catch him lol

Checked in few days ago actually and fine, just waiting the same song out from qualify set :3

不胜感激。

星期五下午我外出了，现在在回程的路上，大概4小时后能到家吧。不好意思啊，求别打我>.<

Xinely wrote:

Actually no need wait you to online for the rank, i will do last check tomorrow since i havent see the map again after lfj's rebub. 4 hours to go to home.. when i sleep already xD

Btw stop giving kudosu to me, i dont mod or anything DX

zj0924 wrote:

我没找柯多拉要泡他就帮我泡了

zj0924 wrote:

我没找柯多拉要泡他就帮我泡了

我也服了，真是急不可耐啊。。我还在纠结到底押他还是押death给rank的。。。。

我也服了，真是急不可耐啊。。我还在纠结到底押他还是押death给rank的。。。。

zj0924 wrote:

我去，你别把spoiler去了啊……篡改原话是不对滴
放心吧，然而Xinely早已看穿了一切

imoutosan wrote:

哦呀哦呀 泡了 gratz~

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

恭喜1st~！

Hitorikko wrote:

Grats

AIR wrote:

贺电wwwwwwwwww

zj0924 wrote:

早上起来终于rank了，核电！
我继续等一个礼拜

Ranger wrote:

congratz your first ranked :3

Kagamine Ren wrote:

流弊流弊

ShiraKai wrote:

gratz Adol :3

-Nanaka- wrote:

Congrats ur 1st rank

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

*・゜・*:.。.* .。.:*・☆・゜・*:.。.*.。 .:*・ G r a t z ☆・゜・*:.。.*.。 .:*・☆・゜・*:.。.:*・☆・゜・*:.。.*.。 .:*・゜・*

Euny wrote:

gratz your first♥!