hey, m4m from my queue
General
-fine
Insane
-00:08:311 (1) - imo this long slider has covered up some potential beats to be mapped, i would try something like this? http://puu.sh/gwyS9/b412142547.jpg this way you can seperate the drum from the instrumentals
-00:34:957 (1) - this covers up the guitar at 00:35:142 - which imo is awkward to play, maybe tr this rhythm to map both the vocal and guitar? http://puu.sh/gwzdH/68647a96b7.jpg
-00:37:752 (4) - shouldnt this follow the same pattern as 1,2,3 as in, putting them in a straight line?
-00:38:684 (3) - add nc for the sv change
-00:49:864 (1,2,3,4) - having all these passive sliders are a bit annoying to play imo, since they all start on weak beats and end on the strong beats, if you invert their placement having them start on strong beats and end on weak beats would feel so much better to play. Also i wanna note although this isnt really important they all kind of look the same, and go in the same flow, maybe try changing it up a bit so it isn't as boring (imo)
-00:52:100 (2,3,4,5,6) - this jump doesnt flow very well imo, i mean you've got the flow going nicely 00:51:541 (1,2,3) - but at 4 the flow completely changes direction , something like this maybe flow a lot better..http://puu.sh/gwzCM/301ea9cbb4.jpg it doesnt have to be exactly like this but hopefully you get the idea; see how the followpoints form a star
-01:03:186 - how about mapping this note? since its part of the stream that you're following
Hard
-00:49:117 (2,2) - hate to be nazi but stack properly lol
-00:54:335 (1) - remove NC, i'd suggest you NC at kiai time instead
pretty solid hard, personally i think some flow (especially, since some parts imo dont flow as well as in you break the flow etc) and rhythms can be improved but i didnt really want to write about my own preference in this mod =w=
Normal
-00:08:311 (1) - remove nc to follow your nc pattern, unless you have a reason for this which i can really see why
-00:21:726 (2,4) - please avoid this overlappp it doesnt look good ;-; you can move 00:22:472 (3,4) - to the right a bit
-01:10:920 (3) - 01:12:410 (1) - ^ you can move 1 up a bit'
-how come your nc pattern changes here 01:18:372 - keep it the same as the rest of the map, 1 nc every 2 measures
good luck
General
-fine
Insane
-00:08:311 (1) - imo this long slider has covered up some potential beats to be mapped, i would try something like this? http://puu.sh/gwyS9/b412142547.jpg this way you can seperate the drum from the instrumentals
-00:34:957 (1) - this covers up the guitar at 00:35:142 - which imo is awkward to play, maybe tr this rhythm to map both the vocal and guitar? http://puu.sh/gwzdH/68647a96b7.jpg
-00:37:752 (4) - shouldnt this follow the same pattern as 1,2,3 as in, putting them in a straight line?
-00:38:684 (3) - add nc for the sv change
-00:49:864 (1,2,3,4) - having all these passive sliders are a bit annoying to play imo, since they all start on weak beats and end on the strong beats, if you invert their placement having them start on strong beats and end on weak beats would feel so much better to play. Also i wanna note although this isnt really important they all kind of look the same, and go in the same flow, maybe try changing it up a bit so it isn't as boring (imo)
-00:52:100 (2,3,4,5,6) - this jump doesnt flow very well imo, i mean you've got the flow going nicely 00:51:541 (1,2,3) - but at 4 the flow completely changes direction , something like this maybe flow a lot better..http://puu.sh/gwzCM/301ea9cbb4.jpg it doesnt have to be exactly like this but hopefully you get the idea; see how the followpoints form a star
-01:03:186 - how about mapping this note? since its part of the stream that you're following
Hard
-00:49:117 (2,2) - hate to be nazi but stack properly lol
-00:54:335 (1) - remove NC, i'd suggest you NC at kiai time instead
pretty solid hard, personally i think some flow (especially, since some parts imo dont flow as well as in you break the flow etc) and rhythms can be improved but i didnt really want to write about my own preference in this mod =w=
Normal
-00:08:311 (1) - remove nc to follow your nc pattern, unless you have a reason for this which i can really see why
-00:21:726 (2,4) - please avoid this overlappp it doesnt look good ;-; you can move 00:22:472 (3,4) - to the right a bit
-01:10:920 (3) - 01:12:410 (1) - ^ you can move 1 up a bit'
-how come your nc pattern changes here 01:18:372 - keep it the same as the rest of the map, 1 nc every 2 measures
good luck