Mapper didn't reply to my irc chat, well then I just leave some suggestions here
01:51:857 - 01:52:130 - 01:52:266 - I guess you missed whistle here
03:11:902 (5) - 03:12:175 (2) - maybe whistles here
No kd. Good luck!
2015-03-04 21:01 OniJAM: 肯啊
2015-03-04 21:01 OniJAM: 你觉得这个怎么样
2015-03-04 21:01 OniJAM: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848121
2015-03-04 21:01 OniJAM: (其实我挺喜欢你原来那个摆法的
2015-03-04 21:03 OniJAM: 还有02:21:720 - 02:21:993 - 02:22:266 - 加上whistle听起来很不错 可以试试
2015-03-04 21:04 OniJAM: 如果把后面的蓝线也加上也挺好
2015-03-04 21:01 OniJAM: 你觉得这个怎么样
2015-03-04 21:01 OniJAM: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2848121
2015-03-04 21:01 OniJAM: (其实我挺喜欢你原来那个摆法的
2015-03-04 21:03 OniJAM: 还有02:21:720 - 02:21:993 - 02:22:266 - 加上whistle听起来很不错 可以试试
2015-03-04 21:04 OniJAM: 如果把后面的蓝线也加上也挺好
03:11:902 (5) - 03:12:175 (2) - maybe whistles here
No kd. Good luck!