General
Its best (doesnt mean you cant) if you dont end sliders on the largest white tick since its the strongest beat and should be emphazied with the start of a slider or circle. the largest white tick is also where most NC's start, (they also start after breaks and spinners) so only have NC's on the largest white ticks(that doesnt mean on each one, only when it is reasonable)
This is what i mean 00:11:004 (1,2) - should be like this
and here, 00:10:310 (4) - where the slider ends on the large white tick, can be replaced by 2 circles (or whatever you want that makes sense)
-> http://puu.sh/abjrK/142b208a2a.jpg
so hopefully you keep that in mind ^^
the end is also a bit undermapped, you kind of end the map in the middle of the instrumentals, it would be nice if you mapped till the end ^^
Hard
00:24:476 - add circle
00:48:504 (2,3) - maybe just make these 1 beat sliders, the 1 1/2 beat sounds weird]
your blanketing can be worked on throughout the map,i dont think i need to keep mentioning these. Just blanket notes around the previous ones approach circle like this
( 01:03:504 (3,1) - )
02:08:087 (5) - take out
02:18:226 (2) - try this pattern
03:02:671 (7) - finished hitsound maybe?
03:10:448 (5) - dont stack on 3 slider
Normal
00:29:615 - add circle
00:31:282 - ^
00:33:504 - ^
00:48:921 (2,3,4,1) - starting these sliders on red ticks feel awkward to play, if i were you id try this pattern
same with the next few notes, starting them on red ticks just feel weird ><''
01:02:810 (2) - try this
ill stop mentioning these red notes, test play or look over the map and notice the ones that feel weird
01:12:671 (1,2) - blanket
03:06:004 (1,2,3) - try this
hoped that helped and good luck with your beatmap~
Its best (doesnt mean you cant) if you dont end sliders on the largest white tick since its the strongest beat and should be emphazied with the start of a slider or circle. the largest white tick is also where most NC's start, (they also start after breaks and spinners) so only have NC's on the largest white ticks(that doesnt mean on each one, only when it is reasonable)
This is what i mean 00:11:004 (1,2) - should be like this
and here, 00:10:310 (4) - where the slider ends on the large white tick, can be replaced by 2 circles (or whatever you want that makes sense)
-> http://puu.sh/abjrK/142b208a2a.jpg
so hopefully you keep that in mind ^^
the end is also a bit undermapped, you kind of end the map in the middle of the instrumentals, it would be nice if you mapped till the end ^^
Hard
00:24:476 - add circle
00:48:504 (2,3) - maybe just make these 1 beat sliders, the 1 1/2 beat sounds weird]
your blanketing can be worked on throughout the map,i dont think i need to keep mentioning these. Just blanket notes around the previous ones approach circle like this
( 01:03:504 (3,1) - )
02:08:087 (5) - take out
02:18:226 (2) - try this pattern
03:02:671 (7) - finished hitsound maybe?
03:10:448 (5) - dont stack on 3 slider
Normal
00:29:615 - add circle
00:31:282 - ^
00:33:504 - ^
00:48:921 (2,3,4,1) - starting these sliders on red ticks feel awkward to play, if i were you id try this pattern
same with the next few notes, starting them on red ticks just feel weird ><''
01:02:810 (2) - try this
ill stop mentioning these red notes, test play or look over the map and notice the ones that feel weird
01:12:671 (1,2) - blanket
03:06:004 (1,2,3) - try this
hoped that helped and good luck with your beatmap~