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Thanks mod Kodora sanKodora wrote:
as promiced~
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*AR8.5 feels quite fast and doesn't really works nice for such low note density, consider please reduse to 8.2-8.3 instead? changed AR8.3Overral pretty nice one, despite I highly dislike such usage of ticksounds and claps - if you can't make them consistent better don't use them at all, lack of claps during kiai sounds very strange.
- 00:03:622 (3,4) - Honestly overlaps like this looks rather messy than cool and doesn't looks/plays nice - could you please re-space it a bit to avoid such overlapping? Like this: ok fixed
- 00:05:512 (1,2) - Same as above ^
- 00:10:709 (3) - Too much whistles goes kinda noisy here; I'd suggest you remove one from this one for the better emphazis. removed
- 00:12:481 (2,3) - Since previous notes was 1/2, these two would be rather confusing as rhythm change here goes very unexpected, so people probably will misread these ones as 1/2 too. To solve this you may easily replace these two notes with one slider, so it'd plays more comfortable. You may keep 00:14:370 (5,6) - as notes since player would be able to "learn" rhythm here I understood. but not fit slider imo. and it is easy to start again because this part is immediate lol. so no changed
- 00:24:292 (6,1) - stack them instead according to your next pattern? fixed
- 02:40:000 (1) - Again, Ctrl+G would made it nicer to play ok fixed
- 02:50:984 (2) - Could you please space it a little bit closer to 02:51:103 (3) - ? This 1/8 jump is really harsh to play here as it now, and it's may be very confusing simplified it a little
- 02:57:481 (1,2) - your choosen rhythm feels quite weird here; there's a strong beat at 02:57:953 - , so it feels really weird that you're ignored this. Try this instead for better rhythm choice: fixed rhythm keep placement
- 03:05:040 (1) - Finish to head follow vocals? ok
- 03:27:244 (3) - This slider sounds better if you end it at the red tick instead nope. I seem to have a sound on a blue line imo
- 04:53:819 (1) - same as above I match it with a maaagic
- 05:29:370 (4) - Could go with NC follow pattern added
Good luck!
thank you for mod kodoraKodora wrote:
as promiced~Good luck!
- 00:40:355 (4,5) - Again, this overlapping looks quite bad. Perhaps replace it with same spacing, like this? fixed
- 00:40:709 (5) - I really don't like idea of ticksound here - this beat at 00:40:945 - definitely should be hit-able, as missing it feels really weird while playing. Maybe reduse 00:40:709 (5) - by 1/4 and add note at 00:41:063 (6) - ? That plays more natural here, imo
- 00:50:866 (1,2) - Similiar problem with overlapping as above fixed
- 01:01:260 (5,6) - Re-space (6) a little bit, same as you did at 01:00:315 (1,2) - for consistency fixed
- 01:09:173 (1) - Stuff like this sounds nice but it's very weird to play, considering that 1/8 here goes quite fast, and you starting stream at blue tick, which is also uncomfortable to play. Try this: shortened 1/8 with a nice way to fix the whole stream: fixed
- 01:24:882 (1,2) - Again, overlapping. fixed
- 01:28:071 (4) - Missing clap on tail I think whistle fit here
- 01:32:441 (1,2,3) - Stacking 1/2 notes after 1/4 is really bad idea and would confuse players a lot. Re-space these stacking, please no
- 01:39:173 (1,2) - Same problem with starting stream using 1/8 slider
- 01:40:000 (1,2,1) - Overlapping, and it easily can be misreaded as huge spacing issue. Please fix that.
- 01:46:733 (1) - Make Ctrl+G at this slider, so it'd be easier to hit :3
- 04:20:394 (3,4) - move it please a bit down so it'd be easier to read & hit: fixed
- 04:22:284 (5,1) - I really don't like these 1/2 stacking, can you please move it out from here? :v It plays really weird
- 04:23:819 (3) - Missing clap on tail I think whistle fit here
- 04:25:709 (6) - Please move it a bit closer to 04:25:355 (5) - , this 1/4 jump is really hard to read orz... fixed
- 04:29:134 (2,3) - and even harder here. This one really needs to be moved closer
- 04:33:858 (3) - missed finish on head fixed
- 04:34:921 (1) - Ctrl+G it please for better playability
- 05:01:260 (1,2,3,4) - please don't change spacing like this, these blue tick jumps are really very weird to play orz.. Can you please keep spacing here consistent? Or at least re-arrange placement to not start jumps at the blue ticks fixed
Sure.Kodora wrote:
someone please move this to pending forum because I can't
And When I asked rhythm help ome friends, I noticed mistakes.Fycho wrote:
sorry popped due to some issues
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- 00:20:630 (1) –whistle on slidertail and clap on 00:21:103 (2) –‘s head? 00:21:575 (4) –whistle on the head too, fixed all
- 02:31:024 (1) –finish on head, seems you missed it added
- 02:50:394 (5) –add whistle to follow high pitch instadded
- 03:06:929 (1) –missing finish imo[/color]
- 05:14:016 (1) –I think it’s more like a 1/8snap like http://puu.sh/g7F3q/72cbf75fec.jpg fixed
- 05:22:992 (1) –wronly snapped too, they should be like http://puu.sh/g7FdW/d8df24e707.jpg fixed
- 05:21:103 –double green lines at the same tick is unrankable.OMG deleted
- 05:29:606 (2) -1ms unsnapping makes the volume not follow your timing point, it should be at05:29:607 – fixed
all fixedFycho wrote:
sorry popped due to some issues
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- 00:20:630 (1) –whistle on slidertail and clap on 00:21:103 (2) –‘s head? 00:21:575 (4) –whistle on the head too,
- 01:20:630 (1) –clap? It’s snare drum imo
- 01:25:355 (2) –finish on head to follow cymbal like 04:21:103 (2) -? 02:52:284 (2) -too
- 01:44:725 (4) –finish on this too
- 01:48:504 (7) –spacing is confusing, I suggest you move it to(420,40)
- 02:31:024 (1) –finish on head, seems you missed it
- 02:50:394 (5) –add whistle to follow high pitch inst
- 03:06:929 (1) –missing finish imo
- 05:14:016 (1) –I think it’s more like a 1/8snap like http://puu.sh/g7F3q/72cbf75fec.jpg
- 05:22:992 (1) –wronly snapped too, they should be like http://puu.sh/g7FdW/d8df24e707.jpg
- 05:21:103 –double green lines at the same tick is unrankable.
- 05:29:606 (2) -1ms unsnapping makes the volume not follow your timing point, it should be at05:29:607 –
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Combo1 : 255,87,255
Combo2 : 17,255,255
Combo3 : 36,255,36
Combo4 : 255,112,43
Thank you Zero__windZero__wind wrote:
hello~
Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions
Generalomg why can't I see the bitrate of the mp3 file = = I should confirm with some other guyschecked with other programs http://puu.sh/geWUS/f94540d76d.png the bitrate should be 192but I'm not sure if the current mp3 file is safe for rankdiscussed with QATs and it should be ok :3
the combo colors seem a bit too bright on this bg, try using the code below? (turned the colors darker) I do not like it because it is too dark. but I thickened some colors[Colours]Collab
Combo1 : 255,87,255
Combo2 : 17,255,255
Combo3 : 36,255,36
Combo4 : 255,112,43
00:18:740 - raise the volume to 30% from this point? cause as the music becomes louder, 00:19:213 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - become less audiable nice idea changed
02:10:236 - why a clap here? better remove it imo ok removed
02:18:740 (3) - it would fit the music better if it ends 1/4 beat earlier (or use two circles). then you can move the clap to 02:18:858 - and use whistle at 02:18:740 - instead changed
02:22:638 (5,6) - try to use clap instead for these two notes, it would sound much better! ok!
02:26:418 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:25:355 (1,2) - spacing seems quite small comparing to the other 1/2-beat spacing in this part such as 02:21:575 (1,2) - and else, maybe move 02:26:063 (2,3,4) - together to around (84,232)? I understood it
02:35:866 - might want to add a clap here for the drums nice
02:50:866 (1,2) - maybe it's only me, but I feel that these notes are kinda hard to read because they stick too close to each other, maybe move 02:50:866 (1) - lower to (8,260)? changed
03:07:166 (2) - I think clap sounds better than whistle here added
03:33:622 (6) - ^ ^
03:43:071 - why dragging the breaktime here? I don't think it's necessary mapped it
04:37:638 (1,2) - the spacing feels kinda small here. I'm afraid that players may think theere's only 1/4 beat between them, like 04:36:693 (4,5) - . maybe change 1 like the pic below? ok
04:55:591 (1,2) - same problem like 02:50:866 (1,2) - , maybe move 04:55:591 (1) - to (480,276)? fixed
05:13:544 (1,2,1) - wrong snap here. please redo the rhythm like this with 1/3 snap divisor and probably remove the drum hitsounds because they would sound out of place I don't think 1/3 snap Rhythm. but 05:13:544 (1,2) - changed 1/4 snap Rhythm05:22:992 (1,1,2,1) - same here, please resnap them on 1/3 snap divisor instead. I know that it doesn't fit exactly right but it should be more reasonable and consistent.Couldn't be sure about these, trying to confirm with QATs btw, why no NC on 05:23:937 (2) - ? it should have one to be consistent I think keep it. but added NC
05:25:591 (6) - it plays better if you move it to 05:25:709 - imo, same rhythm as 05:27:244 (4,5,6) - I don't think same rhythm. keep it
that's all. call me back~
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!Zero__wind wrote:
00:43:780 (3) - this jump feels kinda big, maybe move it to around (196,368)? no
00:48:622 (6) - change it into a 1/4 slider, or two circles? because I think the beat at 00:48:740 - is more important than 00:48:858 - fixed
00:52:166 (6) - clap sounds better here fixed
00:59:725 (1) - similar to above, better add clap here fixed
01:03:504 - ^ fixed
01:09:173 (1) - the rhythm here seems wrong, I think there's no beat at 01:09:233 - , but rather at 01:09:351 - . I mean this 1/8 slider should better be moved to 01:09:292 - and a circle could be added at 01:09:173 - instead like fixed
01:10:827 (5) - clap on head instead should fit the music better imo fixed
01:16:969 (4) - clap sounds better than whistle here fixed
01:17:559 (2,3) - maybe CTRL+G ? no
01:20:276 - clap sounds better here fixed
01:24:055 (2) - ^ fixed
01:31:969 - ^ fixed
01:53:229 (1,2) - spacing feels a bit too small, I misread it as 1/2 jump when testing. maybe use 1.5x spacing between 01:53:229 (1,2,3) - fixed
04:12:244 - I think clap would sound better at this point, and on 04:12:717 (4) - fixed
04:19:803 (2) - ^ fixed
04:22:284 (5,1) - don't really like this stack, I'd rather prefer to move smoothly instead. consider something like the pic below? fixed
04:24:173 (5,2) - maybe move them together to (364,380)? it feels a bit weird to me to stack 04:24:055 (4,5) - together fixed
04:27:362 (2,1) - please try clap instead of whistle for them! it sounds much better than whistle spam fixed
05:00:551 (1,2,1) - this jump feels too big and forced for this part, there's no such big jump even in the kiais, so please use a smaller jump here. try moving 05:00:906 (2) - to around (368,104) fixed
05:05:630 (5,1) - same here. there's only 1/4 beat between 05:05:630 (5,1) - while the spacing inbetween is much bigger than the one between 05:05:984 (1,2) - where there's a 1/2-beat gap. try something like the pic below fixed
Thank you recheck Zero__windZero__wind wrote:
recheck, no kd
03:42:835 - since you mapped this part, your namecard(storyboard) should remain here, till 04:03:622 - I already fixed. Please try again redownload
03:50:394 (1,3) - consider shorten them by 1/4 beat. the jump is acceptable, but I'd say, not really good and intuitive in such a slow part. there are clear melody sounds at 03:50:866 - and 03:52:756 - so it won't be weird I see fixed
nothing else, good job
yeah it's because I didn't redownload last time lol, it's actually finerui wrote:
03:42:835 - since you mapped this part, your namecard(storyboard) should remain here, till 04:03:622 - I already fixed. Please try again redownload