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[General]
All clean here
[Collab]
*AR8.5 feels quite fast and doesn't really works nice for such low note density, consider please reduse to 8.2-8.3 instead?
Good luck!
[General]
All clean here
[Collab]
*AR8.5 feels quite fast and doesn't really works nice for such low note density, consider please reduse to 8.2-8.3 instead?
- 00:03:622 (3,4) - Honestly overlaps like this looks rather messy than cool and doesn't looks/plays nice - could you please re-space it a bit to avoid such overlapping? Like this:
- 00:05:512 (1,2) - Same as above
- 00:10:709 (3) - Too much whistles goes kinda noisy here; I'd suggest you remove one from this one for the better emphazis.
- 00:12:481 (2,3) - Since previous notes was 1/2, these two would be rather confusing as rhythm change here goes very unexpected, so people probably will misread these ones as 1/2 too. To solve this you may easily replace these two notes with one slider, so it'd plays more comfortable. You may keep 00:14:370 (5,6) - as notes since player would be able to "learn" rhythm here
- 00:24:292 (6,1) - stack them instead according to your next pattern?
- 00:40:355 (4,5) - Again, this overlapping looks quite bad. Perhaps replace it with same spacing, like this?
- 00:40:709 (5) - I really don't like idea of ticksound here - this beat at 00:40:945 - definitely should be hit-able, as missing it feels really weird while playing. Maybe reduse 00:40:709 (5) - by 1/4 and add note at 00:41:063 (6) - ? That plays more natural here, imo
- 00:50:866 (1,2) - Similiar problem with overlapping as above
- 01:01:260 (5,6) - Re-space (6) a little bit, same as you did at 01:00:315 (1,2) - for consistency
- 01:09:173 (1) - Stuff like this sounds nice but it's very weird to play, considering that 1/8 here goes quite fast, and you starting stream at blue tick, which is also uncomfortable to play. Try this: shortened 1/8 with a nice way to fix the whole stream:
- 01:24:882 (1,2) - Again, overlapping.
- 01:28:071 (4) - Missing clap on tail
- 01:32:441 (1,2,3) - Stacking 1/2 notes after 1/4 is really bad idea and would confuse players a lot. Re-space these stacking, please
- 01:39:173 (1,2) - Same problem with starting stream using 1/8 slider
- 01:40:000 (1,2,1) - Overlapping, and it easily can be misreaded as huge spacing issue. Please fix that.
- 01:46:733 (1) - Make Ctrl+G at this slider, so it'd be easier to hit :3
- 02:40:000 (1) - Again, Ctrl+G would made it nicer to play
- 02:50:984 (2) - Could you please space it a little bit closer to 02:51:103 (3) - ? This 1/8 jump is really harsh to play here as it now, and it's may be very confusing
- 02:57:481 (1,2) - your choosen rhythm feels quite weird here; there's a strong beat at 02:57:953 - , so it feels really weird that you're ignored this. Try this instead for better rhythm choice:
- 03:05:040 (1) - Finish to head follow vocals?
- 03:08:819 (1,2) - Needs to be re-spaced as you did at next similiar patterns
- 03:27:244 (3) - This slider sounds better if you end it at the red tick instead
- 04:20:394 (3,4) - move it please a bit down so it'd be easier to read & hit:
- 04:22:284 (5,1) - I really don't like these 1/2 stacking, can you please move it out from here? :v It plays really weird
- 04:23:819 (3) - Missing clap on tail
- 04:25:709 (6) - Please move it a bit closer to 04:25:355 (5) - , this 1/4 jump is really hard to read orz...
- 04:29:134 (2,3) - and even harder here. This one really needs to be moved closer
- 04:33:858 (3) - missed finish on head
- 04:34:921 (1) - Ctrl+G it please for better playability
- 04:53:819 (1) - same as above
- 05:01:260 (1,2,3,4) - please don't change spacing like this, these blue tick jumps are really very weird to play orz.. Can you please keep spacing here consistent? Or at least re-arrange placement to not start jumps at the blue ticks
- 05:11:418 (5,1) - Make it flows better:
- 05:29:370 (4) - Could go with NC follow pattern
Good luck!