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Rizia 2015-02-02T11:10:44+00:00

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[General]
AudioFilename: Toumei Ereji - Touka Arisu.mp3
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[Metadata]
Title:Toumei Elegy
TitleUnicode:透明エレジー
Artist:Ouka Alice
ArtistUnicode:櫻花アリス
Creator:Awaken
Version:Extra
Source:
Tags:n-buna
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我直接接著做下去的
音效求幫加
thx

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,397 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-02-02T12:03:51+00:00

雄兔想rank 雌兔想rank

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-02T17:25:23+00:00

updated.
音效考完试加

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,608 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2015-02-04T01:12:05+00:00

passing by, some metadata stuff:

Ouka Alice is an UTAUloid, so basically a Vocaloid. The person who did the tuning cover is Konuko (こぬこ) so that should be artist, not Ouka Alice
Should also add Megpoid Gumi to the tags since that's the original Vocaloid for this song

So basically,

Artist: こぬこ
Romanised Artist: Konuko
Title: 透明エレジー
Romanised Title: Toumei Elegy
Tags: n-buna ouka alice megpoid gumi utau vocaloid

I think that'll do it, no kd

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-04T13:35:10+00:00

fixed.

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2015-02-04T15:40:40+00:00

[Gonkanau]
03:01:402 (4,5) - omg lol

SPOILER

All diff Aimod check plz

Found unused .wav files:
soft-hitnormal2.wav

nokd

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-05T05:08:13+00:00

fixed.

Lavender

Beatmap Nominator

892 posts

Joined January 2014

Lavender 2015-02-05T07:45:39+00:00

mark

EncoreW

833 posts

Joined June 2013

EncoreW 2015-02-05T14:04:16+00:00

百度上找了一下，这歌的作者是ナブナ，原曲是sm20383788，翻唱的视频是sm24609969，有些似乎可以加进tags里面

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-05T14:06:29+00:00

tm1209 wrote:
百度上找了一下，这歌的作者是ナブナ，原曲是sm20383788，翻唱的视频是sm24609969，有些似乎可以加进tags里面

好其实n-buna就是我也把日文加进去好了 nico地址的话我再看看要不要加好了。- 。

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2015-02-07T03:40:58+00:00

modding here.

[Easy]

You must forget to take the hitsound pattern.
00:02:220 (2,3,1) - This didn't look that good, I advise to change it.

[Regraz's Normal]

00:05:493 (1) - Make the last point to 260,96? It looks much better.
00:23:357 (2,5) - A little overlap here, reducing it would look fine.
00:48:039 (3,4) - Is it acceptable to set this pattern in Normal diff? ;o;
00:57:857 (1) - This looks ;w; maybe make it symmetrical.
02:31:130 (5,1) - Same as above.

[Insane]

00:01:130 (1,2) - Flow looks not that fine, maybe reduce 2?
00:13:593 This break is too long, mapping some of them would be better.
00:09:720 (4,5,6) - In Extra you set reverse slider ;w; Insane should be easier than Extra so I think getting it reverse slider is a good idea.
00:36:243 What happened to the part since here? You may forget to change the SV.
02:00:857 (3,4,1) - I tested and I think it's really a hard flow. ;w;
02:42:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Getting these circles moving dont really fit the song, making it the same as Extra is better.
03:07:948 (1,1,1,2) - It's suddenly too hard!

[wkyikawa's Extra]

There's no hitsound either.
01:00:584 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern doesnt look that good..
01:48:039 (1) - This clap sounds weird.
01:52:266 (1,2,3) - This flow isnt that good..
01:58:402 (3) - NC is no need here.
02:11:902 (6) - It's better to stack this with the head of the slider.
03:06:857 (2) - NC? Avoid misread to 1/2 rhythm.
03:08:493 (1,2,1) - This flow is considerable, I know you want a blanket but it's hard to find its shape when players are playing, so another kind flow can fit better here imo.

[Gonkanau]

Hitsound is not completed.
00:24:175 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing here is too big, you may change a pattern here.
01:10:948 (1) - Straight slider can be better than curve one.

Good Luck to you~!

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-02-07T06:19:00+00:00

rinsukir wrote:
modding here.

[Regraz's Normal]
00:05:493 (1) - Make the last point to 260,96? It looks much better. OK
00:23:357 (2,5) - A little overlap here, reducing it would look fine. OK
00:48:039 (3,4) - Is it acceptable to set this pattern in Normal diff? ;o; Guess it is ok
00:57:857 (1) - This looks ;w; maybe make it symmetrical. Intended, for micro-flow
02:31:130 (5,1) - Same as above.
Good Luck to you~!

Thank you! >w<

Code:

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Toumei Ereji - Touka Arisu.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53084
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
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[Metadata]
Title:Toumei Elegy
TitleUnicode:透明エレジー
Artist:Konuko
ArtistUnicode:こぬこ
Creator:Awaken
Version:Regraz's Normal
Source:
Tags:櫻花アリス ナブナ Regraz Kawaiwkyik n-buna ouka alice megpoid gumi utau vocaloid
BeatmapID:546409
BeatmapSetID:219380

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261,177,82948,2,0,B|251:307|251:307|272:335,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,81,84039,2,0,P|405:80|425:162,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,161,85130,2,0,P|171:167|125:146,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,58,85675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,154,85948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,246,86220,6,0,P|99:297|11:297,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,87311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,88130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,66,88402,2,0,B|243:68|271:149|271:149|305:164|352:146,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,78,89220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,182,89493,6,0,B|476:231|476:231|433:279|462:312|462:312|397:303|364:355|364:355|321:296|289:314,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,248,90584,6,0,P|215:172|147:111,2,165,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,323,91675,2,0,B|102:285|104:229|104:229|23:265,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,353,92766,2,0,B|382:356|382:356|408:336,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,242,93857,2,0,L|360:245,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,134,94402,2,0,L|226:131,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,179,94948,6,0,P|67:203|44:118,2,165,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,122,96039,2,0,P|299:98|322:183,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,222,97130,2,0,L|191:333,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,349,97675,2,0,L|293:238,1,110,8|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,183,98220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,127,98493,2,0,L|264:61,2,55,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
388,183,99039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
342,282,99311,6,0,B|307:304|261:293|261:293|234:326|164:326,2,165,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,354,100402,2,0,P|446:313|441:236,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,174,100948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,77,101220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,40,101493,6,0,P|249:55|198:48,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,40,102039,2,0,P|49:87|39:140,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,210,102584,2,0,B|171:235|171:235|180:329|269:350,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,318,103402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
293,233,103675,6,0,P|283:197|387:185,2,165,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,318,104766,2,0,L|485:313,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,203,105311,2,0,P|465:149|478:94,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,49,105857,6,0,B|321:48|321:48|283:78|246:60|246:60|203:108|137:89|137:89|111:121|65:130,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,237,106948,2,0,P|101:300|78:352,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,149,107766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,245,108039,6,0,B|249:222|286:229|286:229|330:300|426:285,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,207,108857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
386,159,109130,2,0,P|364:88|396:47,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,229,109948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,169,110221,6,0,P|136:161|91:176,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,229,111039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
362,322,111312,2,0,P|425:341|487:323,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,111857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
478,136,112130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
406,53,112403,6,0,B|370:57|370:57|308:102|226:66|226:66|194:66,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,31,113221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,139,113494,2,0,P|103:193|116:250,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,195,114312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,266,114585,2,0,P|361:278|412:255,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,163,115130,2,0,L|445:94,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,165,115676,6,0,B|291:147|241:161|241:161|206:106|236:56|264:54,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,39,116494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
434,128,116766,6,0,P|424:232|324:267,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,313,117585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,230,117857,2,0,P|78:234|38:251,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,156,118676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
317,233,118948,6,0,P|395:237|435:254,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,156,119766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,99,120039,2,0,B|111:175|163:236|163:236|131:257|82:262,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,167,120857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
6,273,121130,6,0,B|18:346|98:352|98:352|143:344|186:327,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,278,121948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,336,122221,2,0,P|389:273|376:219,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,159,122766,2,0,P|282:96|295:42,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,29,123312,6,0,L|161:38,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,114,124130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,193,124403,2,0,P|189:262|164:307,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,114,125221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
350,168,125493,5,4,0:0:0:0:
67,72,142948,6,0,P|157:58|122:226,1,330,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,332,144039,2,0,P|220:303|312:121,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,135,145130,2,0,P|263:282|414:336,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,230,146221,2,0,P|307:110|445:76,1,330,0|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
474,181,147311,6,0,B|410:157|312:216|312:216|217:236|151:183,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,291,148402,2,0,B|233:350|342:324|342:324|397:334|452:358,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,250,149493,2,0,B|427:221|375:214|375:214|446:128|367:66|367:66|300:60,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,144,150584,2,0,P|185:166|128:156,1,110,0|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
48,101,151130,1,8,3:0:0:0:
47,103,151675,6,0,B|129:157|96:284|96:284|143:327|235:295,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,303,152766,2,0,B|401:329|448:286|448:286|415:159|497:105,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,49,153857,2,0,P|225:100|90:45,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,148,154948,2,0,B|140:221|271:215|271:215|243:308,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,337,156039,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,337,156857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,337,157130,2,0,B|351:248|465:227|465:227|481:135|396:88,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,70,158220,2,0,P|127:156|70:67,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,72,159311,2,0,P|175:189|82:224,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,333,160130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,124,162584,6,0,L|284:95,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,314,163675,2,0,L|80:343,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,228,164766,2,0,P|351:233|378:358,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,175,165857,2,0,P|167:170|140:45,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,72,166948,5,0,0:0:0:0:
354,72,167493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,237,168039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,237,168584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,58,169130,2,0,B|200:52|200:52|240:96|201:153,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,331,170220,1,4,0:0:0:0:
93,331,171311,6,0,P|96:263|17:190,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,354,172402,2,0,L|370:344,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,246,173493,2,0,P|157:162|94:105,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,294,174584,2,0,L|386:231,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,129,175130,2,0,L|258:66,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,131,175675,6,0,P|107:142|97:54,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,180,176766,2,0,B|280:312|280:312|242:350,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,120,177857,2,0,P|450:119|476:44,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,178948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,153,179220,2,0,P|98:173|51:160,2,110,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,180039,6,0,B|404:97|404:97|473:170,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,230,180857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,308,181130,2,0,P|354:336|411:337,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,209,181948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,298,182220,6,0,B|108:334|80:297|80:297|102:223|36:197,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,183039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,42,183311,2,0,L|248:45,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,148,183857,2,0,L|299:203,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,258,184402,6,0,P|322:251|357:361,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,346,185220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
507,250,185493,2,0,L|511:130,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,346,186311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
345,317,186584,6,0,P|269:296|224:309,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,296,187130,2,0,P|74:290|24:310,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,200,187675,6,0,B|136:186|192:227|192:227|259:188|371:214,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,271,188766,6,0,B|487:197|432:133|432:133|438:93|468:58,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,45,189584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,109,189857,2,0,P|188:109|148:69,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,129,190402,2,0,L|64:254,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,255,190948,6,0,P|233:246|297:274,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,339,191766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,351,192039,2,0,L|434:335,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,232,192857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,179,193130,6,0,P|364:112|480:142,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,232,193948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
369,278,194220,2,0,L|248:310,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,266,194766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,163,195039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,61,195311,6,0,L|39:48,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,81,196130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,59,196402,2,0,L|490:46,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,162,197220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,244,197493,6,0,P|250:302|271:359,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,138,198311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,72,198584,2,0,B|87:59|87:59|107:143|18:199,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,296,199402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,327,199675,5,4,0:0:0:0:

我记得原来有Custom的Clap怎么变成默认音效了。。。还是我记错了？

Len

Beatmap Nominator

2,836 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2015-02-08T09:46:14+00:00

awesome..

mrturtle99

191 posts

Joined April 2014

mrturtle99 2015-02-08T19:40:06+00:00

Hi from my modding que~
The verse in this song is so good~

Easy

-needs to be fixed
you can delete the inheriting timing point at 00:18:039 since it's in a break
00:27:311 (1) -
Quick slider change for better symmetry
00:37:130 (2) - I think there should be a NC here
00:42:584 (2) - ^
01:36:039 (2) - ^
02:26:220 (2) - ^
02:29:493 (2) - ^
02:32:766 (2) - ^
02:37:130 (2) - ^
02:38:220 (1) - Break needs to be after this spinner
02:57:857 (1) - this slider just looks kind of off-putting, consider redesigning it

Regraz's Normal

-should be fixed
00:27:039 (3,1) - I think the NC should be on the HC, not the slider
01:20:766 (3) -
Slider change for a better looking slider
01:22:948 (3) -
More Slider Change
01:28:130 (3) - maybe put a NC here
01:32:766 (3) - same change as 01:22:948 (3) -
02:36:039 (1,2) - take NC off of 02:36:039 (1) - and put it on 02:36:857 (2) -
02:40:130 (6) - insert a break after this
02:56:766 (2) - same change as 01:22:948 (3) -

Hard

-needs to be fixed
00:06:584 (5) - NC
00:27:311 (1) - should put a break after this HC
01:21:857 (1) - ^
01:24:039 (2) - NC
01:28:402 (3) - ^
02:05:220 (1,2) - NC should be on the HC, not the slider, and these should also be closer together
02:38:220 (1) - insert a break after this spinner
02:44:766 (5) - NC
02:56:766 (1) - when making loops, it's best to work in a smaller grid view unless you are very accomplished at making them, and you should also only use 5 slider points arranged in a pentagonal shape with no red slider points more info here
Example

Insane

-needs to be fixed
00:09:584 (3) - NC
There is another inheriting point in the break at 00:18:039 that can be deleted
00:29:493 (3) - NC
00:33:857 (3) - ^
00:45:857 (4) - ^
02:25:130 (3,1) - put the NC on 02:25:130 (3) - and take it off 02:25:948 (1) -
02:32:766 (1) - take off NC
02:33:857 (2) - NC

pw384

Beatmap Nominator

2,320 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2015-02-09T03:27:01+00:00

m4m

两个鬼畜难度02:12:584 - 是不是这里不同啊1111

身体不太好没有仔细看随便写一点 orz

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[General]

Clear

[Easy]

AImod 有三个unsnap
AR+0.5~1 不然EZ->NM的ARgap有点大
02:04:948 (1) - 做成弯的吧不然有些无聊
低难度有啥好看的美丽

[Regraz's Normal]

AImod 有三个unsnap
00:20:766 (1,2) - 没有对齐我好难受orz
00:24:584 (5) - 弧度有些大了
01:01:198 - 按照音乐来说的话，这里作为kiai的开始不太好，我建议从01:01:402 - - 开始是kiai，然后01:02:152 - 关一次kiai，在01:02:220 - 打开kiai
01:45:857 (1) - 我觉得让slidertick落在红点上会更好玩 e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2724075
Picture
01:55:743 - 根据音乐，这一根线应该移动到01:55:811 -
01:56:698 - 关kiai，01:56:766 - 开kiai
02:31:130 (5,1) - (SUPER NAZI) 没stack好
02:42:584 (1,2,3,4) - 跟着钢琴走的话，不应该用滑条。全用circle有奇效
02:49:130 (5) - ^
03:07:743 - kiai应当从03:07:948 - 开始而不是现在的位置
03:08:698 - 关kiai，03:08:766 - 开kiai
03:18:584 - 我觉得这里应当把kiai关掉。另外03:19:675 - 开kiai。03:19:743 - 关kiai

[Hard]

unsnap wwwww
Combo color呢？
看creator's words我觉得这个难度是Evil_Twilight做的，所以难度名改成G's Hard?
但是tags里没有他名字
00:06:584 (5,1) - NC反一下
00:46:948 (1,2,3,4,1) - (nazi) 五角星不齐
00:51:311 (1,2) - (nazi) 对称一下？
01:28:402 (3) - NC
02:36:039 (3,1) - NC反一下

[Insane]

unsnap wwwwwww
00:09:720 (4) - 很奇怪，还是改成一个note吧或者先放1/4折返滑条再放圆圈。现在这样不知道到底是要跟什么。如果按照我的建议去改的话就是跟vocal
01:35:357 (2) - 用直的或者改成红点比弯的滑条更好
01:40:948 (1) - 不要加NC，因为你01:45:311 (3) - 没加
01:45:857 (1,2,3,4) - 改成四个1/2滑条吧，不然会觉得你这里串轨了

[CollabExtra]

unsnap...
combocolor呢?
00:09:720 (3) - 同insane，感觉很奇怪的说
00:24:857 (3,4,1) - flow不好。建议把3移动到x=412, y=344处
00:31:675 (5) - NC
00:33:857 (7,8,9) - 节奏不应该是这样的吗?: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2724685
Picture
00:41:902 (1) - 去掉NC
00:44:766 - 00:52:948 - 这一段为啥跟vocal
01:01:675 (2) - 后面是连打，用1/2滑条更好
01:20:630 (7) - 跳的flow不好，放到x=476, y=132上面吧
01:42:175 (5) - (nazi) 放到x=340, y=100上面去
01:43:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - (nazi) 五角星不齐
01:46:948 (1,2) - 放1/2滑条跳比放3/4滑条要好
02:32:493 (2,3) - 3/4的滑条的用意？首先这里临近的note没有表明应该用3/4滑条，其次3/4滑条不合曲

[鬼畜Second]

uuunnnnssssnnnaaapppp.....
00:11:220 (1) - 去掉NC
00:51:311 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 用1/2滑条有奇效
01:01:402 (1) - 用1/2滑条节奏上有奇效
01:01:675 (1,2) - 改成五连打hhh
02:12:584 (1,2,1,2) - 一拳打爆
02:15:857 (1,2,3,4) - 这里太绕了
02:40:675 - 去掉break有奇效。然后我右击了半天都去不掉，后来才发现这样可以把break去掉：
A. 02:42:039 - 加一个note
B. 然后右击break
C. 去掉刚才的note
D. 保存
02:50:220 - 不用1/2折返吗？2333
02:59:766 (1) - 1/2滑条。因为3/4滑条啥都没跟，听起来很奇怪
03:08:220 (1,2) - 改成五连打好玩
03:13:130 - 这里为啥不用03:04:402 - 用的类似于水滴的音效？
03:19:402 (1) - 改成1/2滑条，然后03:19:607 - 加一个note，这样节奏更加饱满

加油

等有星了来射一发
阿瓦肯姐姐你的跳怎么那么恶俗啊

xarathas

16 posts

Joined November 2013

xarathas 2015-02-10T01:52:31+00:00

Really fun Map, though the Extra difficulty is a lot more enjoyable to play with AR 9.3/9.4

LoupDuQc

17 posts

Joined May 2014

LoupDuQc 2015-02-11T20:30:56+00:00

G's Insane have Ouka Alice for the artist, unlike all the other ones that have Konuko...

Posthumous_old

3 posts

Joined July 2014

Posthumous_old 2015-02-12T16:19:13+00:00

Second Gonkanau

00:30:584 (1) - 这应该是灰的吧
00:53:493 (1) - 头头加个finish
01:01:130 (1) - 这里搞normal那种哨子音比较刺激啊2333

没啥不过好难啊我五百年都打不动的图;w;

Last edited by Posthumous_old 2015-02-12T16:28:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

[ Oneiroi ]

18 posts

Joined June 2013

[ Oneiroi ] 2015-02-12T16:21:08+00:00

modding here from your request

[General]

Check tags, some of the codes are terrible.

[Second Gonkanau]

01:12:039 (1) - Same as above, this should be gray.
01:47:766 (1) - You may add NC here due to DS changing.
01:53:493 (3) - Add Finish on head?
02:04:948 (1) - This sounds weird..
02:17:493 (1) - Change this combo color to red?

So HARD map!!

Kurashina Asuka_old

1 post

Joined August 2014

Kurashina Asuka_old 2015-02-12T16:24:40+00:00

wow!! 透明哀歌好き!! >w<

[General]

The artist of Insane is different from others.

[Second Gonkanau]

02:27:311 (1) - You must forget clap here.
02:38:220 (1) - Make it stay here? 02:40:402
03:04:402 (1) - Finish on head.
03:16:266 (2) - This sounds weird..
03:18:039 (1,2,3,4) - Clap amused, deleting some of them would be good.
03:19:675 (2) - Change a kind of Finish? This seems not that perfect.

:> gogo rank I want to see that!!

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-12T16:34:25+00:00

Almost fixed all, thank you guys :3

Reply mods later.

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2015-02-12T21:16:11+00:00

玩了一波屌
可惜我做不出图了唉

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-13T02:42:08+00:00

Oracle wrote:
玩了一波屌
可惜我做不出图了唉

爷爷你早已火遍大江南北了啊

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2015-02-13T12:10:31+00:00

hello, from queue
這歌手的吶喊好讚阿~

Easy
00:33:857 (1) - 覺得頭的clap不適合...不過都可
03:18:584 (1) - 換成slider+circle? 最後一個音打擊下去效果應該比較好

Regraz's Normal
00:16:402 (1,3) - 平行看起來比較整齊,而且音樂有對稱
00:30:584 (4,5) - 尾的clap刪掉...不過都可,因為其他段好像也是這個模式,可是還是建議調小聲點...
01:00:584 (6) - 順時針轉30度?看起來應該比較美觀
01:30:584 (1) - 摁...這樣? :

Hard
00:57:584 (5) - 不懂為什麼這裡要用1/4的滑條...雖然節奏可能適合但我覺得幾乎都被歌詞蓋過了
01:40:130 - 加個點在01:40:402 (1) - 的頭?
01:48:448 (2,3) - ctrl+g?

G's Insane
顏色沒有設定是故意的嗎 o.o 我上次看還沒這難度...應該是還沒設定吧(?
00:42:311 (1) - 去掉NC
01:40:130 (4) - clap然後去掉01:39:857 (3) - 的clap
02:06:311 (4) - 304|320? 只是覺得較順..
02:20:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 唔...這...~~偷懶意味?~~ 不當我沒說
03:19:675 (5) - 這個finish應該也可以用到其他難度中

Extreme
01:37:402 (2) - 372|140?
03:19:402 (1) - 也許可以這樣 :

大概就這些,最後兩個難度真的不會摸ww
Good Luck~~

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-14T03:58:33+00:00

rinsukir

rinsukir wrote:
modding here.

[Easy]
You must forget to take the hitsound pattern. done.
00:02:220 (2,3,1) - This didn't look that good, I advise to change it. changed

[Insane]
00:01:130 (1,2) - Flow looks not that fine, maybe reduce 2? changed a kind of pattern.
00:13:593 This break is too long, mapping some of them would be better. maybe not that long imo.
00:09:720 (4,5,6) - In Extra you set reverse slider ;w; Insane should be easier than Extra so I think getting it reverse slider is a good idea. fixed
00:36:243 What happened to the part since here? You may forget to change the SV. lol I forgot that.
02:00:857 (3,4,1) - I tested and I think it's really a hard flow. ;w; ctrl+g ed.
02:42:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Getting these circles moving dont really fit the song, making it the same as Extra is better. fixed
03:07:948 (1,1,1,2) - It's suddenly too hard! hah get it harder!
[wkyikawa's Extra]
There's no hitsound either. fixed
01:00:584 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern doesnt look that good.. :< I dont have any other idea to fix that..
01:48:039 (1) - This clap sounds weird. removed
01:52:266 (1,2,3) - This flow isnt that good.. changed..
01:58:402 (3) - NC is no need here. removed
02:11:902 (6) - It's better to stack this with the head of the slider. no, current one may be better.
[Gonkanau]
Hitsound is not completed. done
00:24:175 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing here is too big, you may change a pattern here. I changed here many times but it's always hard, changed a pattern.
01:10:948 (1) - Straight slider can be better than curve one. fixed
Good Luck to you~!

Thanks rinsukir :33

mrturtle

mrturtle99 wrote:
Hi from my modding que~
The verse in this song is so good~
Easy
-needs to be fixed fixed.
you can delete the inheriting timing point at 00:18:039 since it's in a break deleted.
00:27:311 (1) - Quick slider change for better symmetryorz fixed, should be better now.
00:37:130 (2) - I think there should be a NC here
00:42:584 (2) - ^
01:36:039 (2) - ^
02:26:220 (2) - ^
02:29:493 (2) - ^
02:32:766 (2) - ^
02:37:130 (2) - ^
02:38:220 (1) - Break needs to be after this spinner fixed
02:57:857 (1) - this slider just looks kind of off-putting, consider redesigning it ;w; I dont have good idea to design this slider..
Hard
-needs to be fixed fixed
00:06:584 (5) - NC fixed
00:27:311 (1) - should put a break after this HC No break here is better imo.
01:21:857 (1) - ^
01:24:039 (2) - NC fixed
01:28:402 (3) - ^ fixed
02:05:220 (1,2) - NC should be on the HC, not the slider, and these should also be closer together I'm folllwing the vocal here, both ways are okay but I prefer current one.
02:38:220 (1) - insert a break after this spinner fixed
02:44:766 (5) - NC should be no need since they're all stacked.
02:56:766 (1) - when making loops, it's best to work in a smaller grid view unless you are very accomplished at making them, and you should also only use 5 slider points arranged in a pentagonal shape with no red slider points hmm I want to change this slider too.. But this doesn't work well when I testplay..more info here
Insane
-needs to be fixed fixed
00:09:584 (3) - NC fixed
There is another inheriting point in the break at 00:18:039 that can be deleted deleted..wait, I mapped this part =w=
00:29:493 (3) - NC fixed
00:33:857 (3) - ^ fixed
00:45:857 (4) - ^ fixed
02:25:130 (3,1) - put the NC on 02:25:130 (3) - and take it off 02:25:948 (1) - current should be okay.
02:32:766 (1) - take off NC fixed
02:33:857 (2) - NC fixed

Thanks mrturtle lol

384

384059043 wrote:
m4m

两个鬼畜难度02:12:584 - 是不是这里不同啊1111

身体不太好没有仔细看随便写一点 orz

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[General]
Clear

[Easy]
AImod 有三个unsnap fixed

AR+0.5~1 不然EZ->NM的ARgap有点大 fixed
02:04:948 (1) - 做成弯的吧不然有些无聊 fixed

低难度有啥好看的美丽

[Hard]
unsnap wwwww fixed

Combo color呢？ fixed

看creator's words我觉得这个难度是Evil_Twilight做的，所以难度名改成G's Hard?
但是tags里没有他名字我找G神做hard 结果做到了4.5 gg

00:06:584 (5,1) - NC反一下不用吧

00:46:948 (1,2,3,4,1) - (nazi) 五角星不齐 fixed

00:51:311 (1,2) - (nazi) 对称一下？这是对称的

01:28:402 (3) - NC fixed

02:36:039 (3,1) - NC反一下现在也可以

[Insane]
unsnap wwwwwww fixed

00:09:720 (4) - 很奇怪，还是改成一个note吧或者先放1/4折返滑条再放圆圈。现在这样不知道到底是要跟什么。如果按照我的建议去改的话就是跟vocal 三连变折返而已没多复杂

01:35:357 (2) - 用直的或者改成红点比弯的滑条更好直的有点无聊啊

01:40:948 (1) - 不要加NC，因为你01:45:311 (3) - 没加 fixed

01:45:857 (1,2,3,4) - 改成四个1/2滑条吧，不然会觉得你这里串轨了还好

[CollabExtra]
unsnap... fixed

combocolor呢? fixed

00:09:720 (3) - 同insane，感觉很奇怪的说 same

00:24:857 (3,4,1) - flow不好。建议把3移动到x=412, y=344处改了个位置不过好像更不好了

00:31:675 (5) - NC fixed

00:33:857 (7,8,9) - 节奏不应该是这样的吗?: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2724685 换一下节奏

00:41:902 (1) - 去掉NC fixed

00:44:766 - 00:52:948 - 这一段为啥跟vocal 因为啊很明显..

01:01:675 (2) - 后面是连打，用1/2滑条更好改梗

01:20:630 (7) - 跳的flow不好，放到x=476, y=132上面吧换了个位置

01:42:175 (5) - (nazi) 放到x=340, y=100上面去

01:43:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - (nazi) 五角星不齐 fixed

01:46:948 (1,2) - 放1/2滑条跳比放3/4滑条要好 1/2没有拖拽感

[鬼畜Second]
uuunnnnssssnnnaaapppp..... fixed

00:11:220 (1) - 去掉NC fixed

00:51:311 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 用1/2滑条有奇效

01:01:402 (1) - 用1/2滑条节奏上有奇效再想想

01:01:675 (1,2) - 改成五连打hhh 不妥

02:12:584 (1,2,1,2) - 一拳打爆一拳被打爆

02:15:857 (1,2,3,4) - 这里太绕了全re了

02:40:675 - 去掉break有奇效。然后我右击了半天都去不掉，后来才发现这样可以把break去掉：
A. 02:42:039 - 加一个note
B. 然后右击break
C. 去掉刚才的note
D. 保存我感觉有break比较好吧

02:50:220 - 不用1/2折返吗？2333 goodidea

02:59:766 (1) - 1/2滑条。因为3/4滑条啥都没跟，听起来很奇怪 kiai前的准备

03:08:220 (1,2) - 改成五连打好玩五连好像不怎么好

03:13:130 - 这里为啥不用03:04:402 - 用的类似于水滴的音效？这里我用普通finish了

03:19:402 (1) - 改成1/2滑条，然后03:19:607 - 加一个note，这样节奏更加饱满 3/4比较合适啊

加油
等有星了来射一发
阿瓦肯姐姐你的跳怎么那么恶俗啊

谢谢384姐姐

Posthumous

Posthumous wrote:
Second Gonkanau
00:30:584 (1) - 这应该是灰的吧 fixed
00:53:493 (1) - 头头加个finish 有点吵
01:01:130 (1) - 这里搞normal那种哨子音比较刺激啊2333 fixed
没啥不过好难啊我五百年都打不动的图;w;

谢

Oneiroi

Oneiroi wrote:
modding here from your request

[General]
Check tags, some of the codes are terrible.
fixed

[Second Gonkanau]
01:12:039 (1) - This should be gray. fixed
01:47:766 (1) - You may add NC here due to DS changing. hmm no
01:53:493 (3) - Add Finish on head? a little noisy..
02:04:948 (1) - This sounds weird.. may be okay
02:17:493 (1) - Change this combo color to red? fixed
So HARD map!!

thanks

Kurashina Asuka

Kurashina Asuka wrote:
wow!! 透明哀歌好き!! >w<

[General]
The artist of Insane is different from others.
fixed

[Second Gonkanau]
02:27:311 (1) - You must forget clap here. fixed
02:38:220 (1) - Make it stay here? 02:40:402 both are okay..
03:04:402 (1) - Finish on head. added
03:16:266 (2) - This sounds weird.. should be fine.
03:18:039 (1,2,3,4) - Clap amused, deleting some of them would be good. hmm deleted
03:19:675 (2) - Change a kind of Finish? This seems not that perfect. fixed
:> gogo rank I want to see that!!

ありがとう!!

frogsan

bigfrog wrote:
hello, from queue
這歌手的吶喊好讚阿~

Easy
00:33:857 (1) - 覺得頭的clap不適合...不過都可还是换了种;w;
03:18:584 (1) - 換成slider+circle? 最後一個音打擊下去效果應該比較好我感觉finish放在折返滑条的尾巴也可以的
Hard
00:57:584 (5) - 不懂為什麼這裡要用1/4的滑條...雖然節奏可能適合但我覺得幾乎都被歌詞蓋過了嗯..我看看该怎么改
01:40:130 - 加個點在01:40:402 (1) - 的頭? 好像也可以诶
01:48:448 (2,3) - ctrl+g? flow好像变差了..
Extreme
01:37:402 (2) - 372|140? 好~
03:19:402 (1) - 也許可以這樣这样好像不美啊;w; :
大概就這些,最後兩個難度真的不會摸ww
Good Luck~~

谢谢青蛙!! =w=

xarathas wrote:
Really fun Map, though the Extra difficulty is a lot more enjoyable to play with AR 9.3/9.4

Reduce it to 9.2

LoupDuQc wrote:
G's Insane have Ouka Alice for the artist, unlike all the other ones that have Konuko...

Fixed.

Thank you everyone!!

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,397 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-02-14T11:36:06+00:00

Fix a lot. Forum-pm me if you want me to reply.
@Awaken 啊挖坑大大 Help me fix metadata issues, thank you!
Code:

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Elegy.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53084
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Toumei Elegy
TitleUnicode:透明エレジー
Artist:Konuko
ArtistUnicode:こぬこ
Creator:Awaken
Version:Regraz's Normal
Source:
Tags:櫻花アリス ナブナ Regraz Kawaiwkyik  Evil_Twilight n-buna ouka alice megpoid gumi utau vocaloid
BeatmapID:546409
BeatmapSetID:219380

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,125693,141748
2,160330,161384
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1130,272.727272727273,4,2,1,100,1,0
1130,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
9857,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
53493,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
61130,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
62220,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
70948,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
108039,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
115675,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
116766,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
125493,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
162585,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
171311,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
180039,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
187675,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
188766,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
198584,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
199675,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,7,7
Combo2 : 107,196,98
Combo3 : 77,193,185
Combo4 : 99,216,169
Combo5 : 201,198,186
Combo6 : 193,191,187

[HitObjects]
311,250,1130,6,0,B|358:281|401:262|401:262|445:263|481:286,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,250,2220,2,0,B|150:278|111:262|111:262|67:263|31:286,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,154,3311,2,0,P|241:108|136:107,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,218,4402,2,0,L|467:192,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,304,4948,2,0,L|341:330,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,260,5493,6,0,B|246:198|285:158|285:158|226:125,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,352,6584,2,0,P|116:368|56:322,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,352,7675,2,0,P|408:368|468:322,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,261,8766,2,0,P|193:204|149:204,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,254,9311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,156,9584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
94,74,9857,6,0,P|154:60|217:78,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,72,10402,2,0,P|363:62|416:76,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,175,10948,2,0,L|459:291,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-14T11:45:28+00:00

updated.

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2015-02-15T22:41:23+00:00

my internet is back, and I'm back to my vocaloid queue, and here's a mod

EASY

00:49:130 (1) - maybe is better if you move this slider a bit more in the grid
really good easy diff, nothing more to say :3 (just, why you didn't put any clap hitsound?)

REGRAZ'S NORMAL

00:53:493 (1,3) - blancket can easyly be better
01:48:039 (1,3) - same here since this part is copyed
02:28:402 (2) - you can make this slider follow better 02:27:311 (1) - 's curve
03:12:039 (3) - maybe it's better if you change the shape of this slider. this straight line don't fit well with 03:10:948 (1) - 's curve

HARD

- 00:04:948 (4) - I think this slider should be a bit more distant. this feels pretty bad whyle playing because the distance between 00:02:220 (2,3) - is a lot more than 00:03:311 (3,4) - while the tempo tells that it should be the opposite. so, or you add a note at 00:04:675 - or you move 00:04:948 (4) - more distant.
- 00:09:857 - what do you think of adding a note here?
- 00:27:448 - to 00:28:402 - I really think you should map this part. after that you've followed the beats, so why did you missed all of these? also it will help while playing to get into this slower part imo.
- 00:41:493 (1,2,3) - why these big jumps here? it should be more like 00:38:220 (1,2,3) - ..maybe try moving 00:41:766 (2) - to x:503 y:345 or anyway in that zone, so the jump will be just between 00:41:766 (2,3) - and the flow not that bad.
- 00:56:493 - I think you should make the player hit that beat. try this rhythm maybe

SPOILER

- 01:09:925 (1) - add finish?
- 01:21:993 - to 01:22:948 - same as before. you should map this part imo.
- 01:56:220 (3) - I think this should be stacked to 01:56:357 (4) -
- 02:44:766 (5,6,7,8) - these can also be separated imo. just to make this stack pattern a bit less boring. you can place them at x:154 y:328
- 02:53:493 (3,4,1) - these jumps are too big for this slow part. try to reduce them

G'S INSANE

01:01:675 (2,3) - better delete 01:01:948 (3) - and extend the slider to 01:01:948 - rhyrhm is better imo
02:00:584 (3,4,5,6) - make them with a better curve
02:54:993 - here I hear a beat that I think should be added
02:57:857 (1,1) - stack perfectly

Good luck!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2015-02-16T16:38:46+00:00

還是一堆問題 (看來你已經先刪了重複綠線的部分了，我懶的全部對一遍再刪掉，寫太多好麻煩)
~~跟SSH有得比，花了三.四天~~

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

Aimod many error in there.
SPOILER
第一條紅線和綠線的音量怎麼不一樣 (Your diff)
5%音量用的時機只有在spinner和滑條尾可以靜，其他像note和tick建議還是不要太小聲 (note設5%會被噴，20%為低限)，QAT會挑。
Kiai用100%聽的滑條聲有點兒大，調90%看看 (Easy diff)
Cancel widescreen in the last diff.

[Easy] Same time repeat green line need to fix : 00:36:039 -.

00:42:584 (2) - Use drum hitsound in the slider reverse? Sounds like the background have the default drum voice I think (Another diff,too)
00:49:130 (1) - 好像離格子超出太多，往右邊移一點吧
01:01:130 (2) - Slider reverse 1ms offset.
01:20:220 (2) - 這滑條尾可以用5%，但後面那些物件(頭和Tick)不能同時小聲啊，unrankable。
01:39:311 (1) - 同上
02:42:584 (1) - Same above
02:51:311 (1) - 碰到分數版了，而且同上也是不能用5%
03:14:220 (2) - Slider end missed finish.

[Regraz's Normal]

00:03:311 (3) - NC，還是別太長，看的不太習慣，兩大白一NC的combo看起來比較正常。
00:07:675 (3) - Same above (後面也是)
00:43:948 (4) - Feel remove clap and add finish hitsound in reverse sounds like better
01:27:311 (2,3) - Avoid the space beat stack with these note,so confused for 1st playing I think (QAT也有高機會噴這個，忘了之前哪張圖)
02:31:130 (5,1) - Same above.

[Hard] (N到H的spread gap有點大(試著減到3.5 star?)，建議把CS調小一點到3.5 (這樣3.58 stars)，然後跳盡量縮到2.00左右，比如00:21:311 (2) - 這就跳的有點大)

00:44:493 (2) - (234|130) make close a bit with 00:44:766 (1) - and do a triangle notes pattern too.
SPOILER
01:06:584 (6,1) - Switch NC
01:08:766 (7,1) - Same above
01:09:925 (1) - 怎麼反而到Hard就沒做這邊節奏了反而break (02:22:948 (1) - 也是)
01:19:675 (2) - NC
01:39:039 (4,1) - 會被QAT挑，need to fix this so big jump distance (2.00~2.20x better)
02:05:220 (1) - Sounds like has no 1/4 rhythm here (Also just want keep the 1/4 in Extreme diff)
02:18:039 (3,1) - The same as 01:39:039
02:51:311 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - 這跳也太惡俗 (4倍還有5倍的)，在Hard跳太大了這需要重調間距。
03:07:675 (1,2) - The same as 00:44:493

[G's Insane] Same time repeat green line need to fix : 03:07:948 -.

00:05:902 (2,1,2) - Feel the same distance space (Different rhythm set DS) seems hard to read I think.
00:07:675 (1,2) - The same as above
00:35:220 (1) - Not so sure this bent slider can be applied or not,ask QAT check this.
00:42:311 (1) - Not so suggest set a single NC here,remove it?
01:10:948 (1) - Missed finish?
01:30:311 (1) - 現在這滑條多tick減速不能用了，換一個吧
02:22:402 (3) - 確定後面節奏不做一下? (都Break15秒了有點久)
02:57:857 (1) - Same as 01:30:31

[Extreme]

00:34:130 (2) - Seems missed a note to follow vocal? Or follow the drum beat 00:34:266 (2) - here.
01:01:130 (2) - Slider reverse 1ms offset.
01:28:811 (2) - Also can add a note make play better (To follow drum beat)
01:29:220 (3) - Same above

[wkyikawa's Extra]

00:05:902 (2) - Add a note to follow drum will played better (00:06:039 (2) - This sounds like not so obviously,hard to point here I guess )
00:36:857 (3) - 雖然這滑條沒有違反rule，但建議還是移上面一點點。
01:21:311 (1,1) - Seems not need to do NC spam,also remove it. (Not so hard to read here)
01:42:175 (5) - (389|51)?
02:51:311 (1) - 這邊的音樂聽起來的速度沒那麼快，但是卻跟kiai一樣的速度，調個0.75x做漸變試試?

[Second Gonkanau]

00:07:675 (2) - Also can add a reverse at the medium tick (00:08:084)?
00:32:766 (6) - Forgot set NC?
00:42:311 (3) - Stack 00:42:584 (1) - slider head?
00:46:675 (7) - Missed a note (vocal) ?
01:01:130 (1) - Slider 1ms offset
01:21:857 (1) - 這一段可以跟Extreme比較一下，有些比較重的鼓音都沒跟到，不如全部都加上去吧，會玩得更好
01:29:493 (5) - Forgot set NC?
01:40:266 (2,3) - 有stream怎麼不跟
02:22:948 (1) - 同01:21:857
02:42:584 (1) - Do a antijump at this part?
02:51:039 (2) - 可以加一個note做空拍
02:59:220 (2,3) - 這兩條白線也加一下note，這個不加有點難判定那個減速的slider.

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,397 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-02-17T02:15:56+00:00

@luxoDeh Allfixed
@chuanye：音效那个觉得还是现在的好听，就先不改了
其他的都改了
感谢！
但是为什么AIMOD还是有很多metadata不一致。。。我重新下载的。。。。
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299,314,163675,2,0,L|80:343,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,228,164766,6,0,P|351:233|378:358,1,220
249,175,165857,2,0,P|167:170|140:45,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,72,166948,5,0,0:0:0:0:
354,72,167493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,237,168039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,237,168584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,58,169130,6,0,B|200:52|200:52|240:96|201:153,1,220
93,331,170220,1,4,0:0:0:0:
93,331,171311,6,0,P|96:263|17:190,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,354,172402,2,0,L|370:344,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,246,173493,6,0,P|157:162|94:105,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,294,174584,2,0,L|386:231,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,129,175130,2,0,L|258:66,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,131,175675,6,0,P|107:142|97:54,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,180,176766,2,0,B|280:312|280:312|242:350,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,120,177857,6,0,P|450:119|476:44,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,178948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,153,179220,2,0,P|98:173|51:160,2,110,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,180039,6,0,B|404:97|404:97|473:170,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,230,180857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,308,181130,2,0,P|354:336|411:337,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,209,181948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,298,182220,6,0,B|108:334|80:297|80:297|102:223|36:197,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,183039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,42,183311,2,0,L|248:45,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,148,183857,2,0,L|299:203,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,258,184402,6,0,P|322:251|357:361,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,346,185220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
507,250,185493,2,0,L|511:130,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,346,186311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
345,317,186584,6,0,P|269:296|224:309,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,296,187130,2,0,P|74:290|24:310,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,200,187675,2,0,B|136:186|192:227|192:227|259:188|371:214,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,271,188766,6,0,B|487:197|432:133|432:133|438:93|468:58,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,45,189584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,109,189857,2,0,P|188:109|148:69,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,129,190402,2,0,L|64:254,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,255,190948,6,0,P|233:246|297:274,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,339,191766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,351,192039,2,0,B|320:351|320:351|434:335,1,220
469,232,192857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,179,193130,6,0,P|364:112|480:142,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,232,193948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
369,278,194220,2,0,L|248:310,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,266,194766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,163,195039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,61,195311,6,0,L|39:48,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,81,196130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,59,196402,2,0,L|490:46,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,162,197220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,244,197493,6,0,P|250:302|271:359,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,138,198311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,72,198584,2,0,B|87:59|87:59|107:143|18:199,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,296,199402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,327,199675,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Evil_Twilight

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Evil_Twilight 2015-02-17T05:20:03+00:00

bigfrog

顏色沒有設定是故意的嗎 o.o 我上次看還沒這難度...應該是還沒設定吧(?
00:42:311 (1) - 去掉NC O
01:40:130 (4) - clap然後去掉01:39:857 (3) - 的clap O
02:06:311 (4) - 304|320? 只是覺得較順.. O
02:20:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 唔...這...偷懶意味? 不當我沒說音都是一樣的就重疊了
03:19:675 (5) - 這個finish應該也可以用到其他難度中

luxoDeh

01:01:675 (2,3) - better delete 01:01:948 (3) - and extend the slider to 01:01:948 - rhyrhm is better imo X
02:00:584 (3,4,5,6) - make them with a better curve O
02:54:993 - here I hear a beat that I think should be added X
02:57:857 (1,1) - stack perfectly O

smallboat

Same time repeat green line need to fix : 03:07:948 -.
00:05:902 (2,1,2) - Feel the same distance space (Different rhythm set DS) seems hard to read I think. X
00:07:675 (1,2) - The same as above X
00:35:220 (1) - Not so sure this bent slider can be applied or not,ask QAT check this. 01爸爸說這沒問題
00:42:311 (1) - Not so suggest set a single NC here,remove it? O
01:10:948 (1) - Missed finish? O
01:30:311 (1) - 現在這滑條多tick減速不能用了，換一個吧聽說紅點平均一點就行，如果還是不行我在改唄
02:22:402 (3) - 確定後面節奏不做一下? (都Break15秒了有點久) X, 要懂的把不擅長的地方藏好，寧願不做也不要做的亂七八糟

02:57:857 (1) - Same as 01:30:31 01爸爸說這種沒事

Awaken

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Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-17T05:45:35+00:00

updated Normal and Insane :3

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Awaken 2015-02-17T12:37:03+00:00

luxoDeh wrote:
my internet is back, and I'm back to my vocaloid queue, and here's a mod

EASY

00:49:130 (1) - maybe is better if you move this slider a bit more in the grid move left or move right?
really good easy diff, nothing more to say :3 (just, why you didn't put any clap hitsound?) I'm thinking about if I need to add claps or whistles.

HARD

- 00:04:948 (4) - I think this slider should be a bit more distant. this feels pretty bad whyle playing because the distance between 00:02:220 (2,3) - is a lot more than 00:03:311 (3,4) - while the tempo tells that it should be the opposite. so, or you add a note at 00:04:675 - or you move 00:04:948 (4) - more distant. remapped this part.
- 00:09:857 - what do you think of adding a note here? hmm not that good cuz I like the current feeling
- 00:27:448 - to 00:28:402 - I really think you should map this part. after that you've followed the beats, so why did you missed all of these? also it will help while playing to get into this slower part imo. maybe give players some relaxing time..?
- 00:41:493 (1,2,3) - why these big jumps here? it should be more like 00:38:220 (1,2,3) - ..maybe try moving 00:41:766 (2) - to x:503 y:345 or anyway in that zone, so the jump will be just between 00:41:766 (2,3) - and the flow not that bad. fixed this another way
- 00:56:493 - I think you should make the player hit that beat. try this rhythm maybe ;w; I cant open up the link
SPOILER
- 01:09:925 (1) - add finish? done
- 01:21:993 - to 01:22:948 - same as before. you should map this part imo.
- 01:56:220 (3) - I think this should be stacked to 01:56:357 (4) - done
- 02:44:766 (5,6,7,8) - these can also be separated imo. just to make this stack pattern a bit less boring. you can place them at x:154 y:328 separating feeling didnt fit me..
- 02:53:493 (3,4,1) - these jumps are too big for this slow part. try to reduce them done

Good luck!

Thank you luxoDeh!

smallboat wrote:
還是一堆問題 (看來你已經先刪了重複綠線的部分了，我懶的全部對一遍再刪掉，寫太多好麻煩)
~~跟SSH有得比，花了三.四天~~

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
Aimod many error in there. allllll fixed!!
SPOILER
第一條紅線和綠線的音量怎麼不一樣 (Your diff) fixed
5%音量用的時機只有在spinner和滑條尾可以靜，其他像note和tick建議還是不要太小聲 (note設5%會被噴，20%為低限)，QAT會挑。 都改到20%以上了
Kiai用100%聽的滑條聲有點兒大，調90%看看 (Easy diff) 音效重整
Cancel widescreen in the last diff. fixed

[Easy] Same time repeat green line need to fix : 00:36:039 -. deleted
00:42:584 (2) - Use drum hitsound in the slider reverse? Sounds like the background have the default drum voice I think (Another diff,too) fixed
00:49:130 (1) - 好像離格子超出太多，往右邊移一點吧 fixed
01:01:130 (2) - Slider reverse 1ms offset. 是说绿线偏了吗我看了看好像没偏
01:20:220 (2) - 這滑條尾可以用5%，但後面那些物件(頭和Tick)不能同時小聲啊，unrankable。 fixed
01:39:311 (1) - 同上 fixed
02:42:584 (1) - Same above fixed
02:51:311 (1) - 碰到分數版了，而且同上也是不能用5% fixed
03:14:220 (2) - Slider end missed finish. fixed
[Hard] (N到H的spread gap有點大(試著減到3.5 star?)，建議把CS調小一點到3.5 (這樣3.58 stars)，然後跳盡量縮到2.00左右，比如00:21:311 (2) - 這就跳的有點大) 改了上面的star顺便飞到3.66 恐怕改CS大法起不了多大作用了 2.22到3.66应该不算太大吧
00:44:493 (2) - (234|130) make close a bit with 00:44:766 (1) - and do a triangle notes pattern too. fixed another way
SPOILER
01:06:584 (6,1) - Switch NC
01:08:766 (7,1) - Same above fixed both
01:09:925 (1) - 怎麼反而到Hard就沒做這邊節奏了反而break (02:22:948 (1) - 也是) 我把easy的这两个地方删了
01:19:675 (2) - NC done
01:39:039 (4,1) - 會被QAT挑，need to fix this so big jump distance (2.00~2.20x better) fixed
02:05:220 (1) - Sounds like has no 1/4 rhythm here (Also just want keep the 1/4 in Extreme diff) 应该有不过没有这么放应该也可以
02:18:039 (3,1) - The same as 01:39:039 fixed
02:51:311 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - 這跳也太惡俗 (4倍還有5倍的)，在Hard跳太大了這需要重調間距。 fixed
03:07:675 (1,2) - The same as 00:44:493 这个应该还好
[Extreme]
00:34:130 (2) - Seems missed a note to follow vocal? Or follow the drum beat 00:34:266 (2) - here. hmm adding a note here is a little hard to read and it should okay since I mainly follow vocals in this part.
01:01:130 (2) - Slider reverse 1ms offset. fixed
01:28:811 (2) - Also can add a note make play better (To follow drum beat) added
01:29:220 (3) - Same above added
[wkyikawa's Extra]
00:05:902 (2) - Add a note to follow drum will played better (00:06:039 (2) - This sounds like not so obviously,hard to point here I guess ) maybe a little hard to read if so imo, because I dont follow the drums here.
00:36:857 (3) - 雖然這滑條沒有違反rule，但建議還是移上面一點點。 fixed
01:21:311 (1,1) - Seems not need to do NC spam,also remove it. (Not so hard to read here) ok removed
01:42:175 (5) - (389|51)? fixed with another point
[Second Gonkanau]
00:07:675 (2) - Also can add a reverse at the medium tick (00:08:084)? hmm both ways are okay but I prefer current one.
00:32:766 (6) - Forgot set NC? done
00:42:311 (3) - Stack 00:42:584 (1) - slider head? let me think about it.. this seems better..
00:46:675 (7) - Missed a note (vocal) ? added
01:01:130 (1) - Slider 1ms offset fixed
01:21:857 (1) - 這一段可以跟Extreme比較一下，有些比較重的鼓音都沒跟到，不如全部都加上去吧，會玩得更好改节奏了
01:29:493 (5) - Forgot set NC? should be no need to NC imo.
01:40:266 (2,3) - 有stream怎麼不跟刚过舒缓段就来连打效果不好
02:22:948 (1) - 同01:21:857 这里比较想少放点note
02:42:584 (1) - Do a antijump at this part? Stacking here may be better imo.
02:51:039 (2) - 可以加一個note做空拍这里感觉加不加效果差不多
02:59:220 (2,3) - 這兩條白線也加一下note，這個不加有點難判定那個減速的slider. 这里改了梗 note还是先不加

谢谢船业 ;DD

smallboat

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Joined January 2010

smallboat 2015-02-20T18:40:41+00:00

Confirm these diff set and spread are fine (By IamKwaN discuss,she says fine),so it can go for it.

Bless "Happy New Year's Eve" ~~(Although late)~~

Bubbled !

Awaken

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Awaken 2015-02-21T01:35:32+00:00

Thank you!!

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

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Satellite 2015-02-21T01:53:14+00:00

nice map :3　Extreme <3

xChippy

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Joined August 2011

xChippy 2015-02-21T09:56:45+00:00

Did some IRC modding, did some tweeking on the rythm and fixed the artist/title on the easy
~~

Hypehypehype

Awaken

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Awaken 2015-02-21T09:58:08+00:00

THANK YOU THANK YOU LOL!!

orbital gun

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orbital gun 2015-02-21T10:02:34+00:00

hitsounding on second gonkanau sounds awful ):

pw384

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pw384 2015-02-21T10:06:54+00:00

hype 7.03

Awaken

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Awaken 2015-02-21T10:08:28+00:00

Jaitonat wrote:
hitsounding on second gonkanau sounds awful ):

): maybe not that obvious

Awaken

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Awaken 2015-02-21T10:28:10+00:00

Here's the irc imformation.

SPOILER

2015-02-21 16:54 Awaken: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/555965 Konuko - Toumei Elegy]
2015-02-21 16:54 Awaken: this map
2015-02-21 16:57 xChippy: hmm..
2015-02-21 16:57 xChippy: I looked at smallboat's post
2015-02-21 16:57 xChippy: but imo
2015-02-21 16:57 xChippy: the spread N-H is to large tho :O
2015-02-21 16:57 Awaken: hmm about this
2015-02-21 16:57 Awaken: I've asked QAT
2015-02-21 16:57 Awaken: who says it's fine
2015-02-21 16:58 xChippy: Which?
2015-02-21 16:58 Awaken: kwan
2015-02-21 16:58 xChippy: Because most of those QATs have conflicting view of mapping lol
2015-02-21 16:58 xChippy: hmm
2015-02-21 16:59 Awaken: since I didnt set any 1/4 in hard, it may be not that hard
2015-02-21 16:59 Awaken: also no jumps
2015-02-21 16:59 xChippy: No jumps at all isnt the case but yeah the little jumps are fine but the intensity
2015-02-21 16:59 xChippy: Normal is
2015-02-21 17:00 xChippy: Consistent
2015-02-21 17:00 xChippy: 1/1
2015-02-21 17:00 xChippy: The kiai in hard is spam 1/2
2015-02-21 17:01 Awaken: hmm maybe few continuation
2015-02-21 17:01 Awaken: circles
2015-02-21 17:01 Awaken: dont make it very hard, though 1/2 ..
2015-02-21 17:03 xChippy: well I can give it a shot
2015-02-21 17:03 xChippy: Metadata confirmed?
2015-02-21 17:03 Awaken: yes!
2015-02-21 17:04 Awaken: which is by captin said
2015-02-21 17:07 xChippy: @Extreme
2015-02-21 17:08 xChippy: 02:12:584 (1,2,3,1) -
2015-02-21 17:08 xChippy: Wouldnt this make more sense http://puu.sh/g6c4Y/dcda0a705d.jpg
2015-02-21 17:11 Awaken: hmm I'm not sure if this will be a little hard to read?
2015-02-21 17:11 xChippy: wouldnt this be easier to read lol?
2015-02-21 17:12 xChippy: Or you can turn
2015-02-21 17:12 xChippy: it to this
2015-02-21 17:12 xChippy: http://puu.sh/g6cgQ/2427758a9e.jpg
2015-02-21 17:13 xChippy: http://puu.sh/g6cja/c268947fa6.jpg this would follow the music
2015-02-21 17:14 Awaken: lol great idea!
2015-02-21 17:14 Awaken: did it
2015-02-21 17:15 xChippy: Maybe fix this blanket a bit 03:00:857 (6,1) -
2015-02-21 17:16 Awaken: fixed
2015-02-21 17:17 xChippy: I'll be taking a quick check on the insane+ diffs fast than
2015-02-21 17:17 xChippy: cuz its only the kiai anyway lol
2015-02-21 17:17 Awaken: lol that's really pretty nice!!
2015-02-21 17:19 xChippy: brb toilet o3o
2015-02-21 17:19 Awaken: hah lol
2015-02-21 17:23 xChippy: Just a little smth in the insane 02:20:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - idk maybe thing of something more creative lol
2015-02-21 17:23 xChippy: I mean stack 5 1/2s is fine but eeh
2015-02-21 17:25 Awaken: mapper said that sounds of these circles are the same and emphasize them well, this is why he use stacking circles here lwl
2015-02-21 17:26 xChippy: well ok
2015-02-21 17:27 xChippy: 02:54:993 - only place where he left out the drum
2015-02-21 17:27 xChippy: maybe map it?
2015-02-21 17:30 Awaken: I asked, and he said he would love to follow the amazing "Zembu Zembu Zembu" o3o
2015-02-21 17:37 xChippy: lol o3o
2015-02-21 17:37 xChippy: insane seems fine for the rest
2015-02-21 17:38 Awaken: wow glad to hear that!
2015-02-21 17:48 xChippy: omg those jumps www
2015-02-21 17:48 xChippy: well I'm fine with it
2015-02-21 17:48 xChippy: update and I'll qualify
2015-02-21 17:49 Awaken: www right now!
2015-02-21 17:50 Awaken: updated~
2015-02-21 17:52 xChippy: oh wait
2015-02-21 17:52 xChippy: Easy
2015-02-21 17:52 xChippy: is missing
2015-02-21 17:52 xChippy: Jap artist and title
2015-02-21 17:52 Awaken: omg
2015-02-21 17:52 xChippy: Also G's Insane = Evil twilight o3o?
2015-02-21 17:53 Awaken: yes o3o!
2015-02-21 17:53 xChippy: okie~
2015-02-21 17:54 Awaken: should be okay now :3
2015-02-21 17:55 xChippy: Okie~ o3o
2015-02-21 17:57 xChippy: \o3o/
2015-02-21 17:57 Awaken: wowwww!!! arigatou !!!
2015-02-21 17:58 xChippy: ~~

xLolicore-

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xLolicore- 2015-02-21T11:42:37+00:00

Happy Chinese New Year, hope it goes through the qualifying process. Best of luck to ya, Awaken ^_^

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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yf_bmp 2015-02-21T11:56:44+00:00

草人

Avena

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Avena 2015-02-21T12:19:31+00:00

Gratz :3

One small question.
How the hell is Evil_Twilight's diff called "G's Insane"
How is G related to Evil_Twilight
I'd probably thing it's Garven or Gero who mapped the diff.
I NEED THE UNDERSTANDINGS

Awaken

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Awaken 2015-02-21T12:20:56+00:00

Priti wrote:
Gratz :3

One small question.
How the hell is Evil_Twilight's diff called "G's Insane"
How is G related to Evil_Twilight
I'd probably thing it's Garven or Gero who mapped the diff.
I NEED THE UNDERSTANDINGS

Take a look at evil's gds, all of them are called G's diff, which should be fine.

FlobuFlobs

617 posts

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FlobuFlobs 2015-02-21T13:11:10+00:00

If this gets unranked take look a look at g's insane

There a many almost overlapping and some overlapping objects like
02:07:539 (7) - 02:10:130 (2) - 01:18:039 (2) - 01:09:584 (4) - etc
^
same in extrem
03:12:311 (3) - 03:09:311 (3) - 03:06:584 (1) - 01:31:402 (3) - etc

and dont forget to hr playtest the diffs to avoid other overlapps >_>

and consider to change combo colour q_q

Avena

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Avena 2015-02-21T13:56:23+00:00

Awaken wrote:
Priti wrote:
Gratz :3

One small question.
How the hell is Evil_Twilight's diff called "G's Insane"
How is G related to Evil_Twilight
I'd probably thing it's Garven or Gero who mapped the diff.
I NEED THE UNDERSTANDINGS
Take a look at evil's gds, all of them are called G's diff, which should be fine.

but.. why..

Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2015-02-21T14:03:41+00:00

02:36:039 (2) -

02:49:675 (2) -

Youve got endless space towards the top of the screen, why would you place them almost-out-of-screen? D:
It might still be okay, but some QATs are allergic to these. I wouldnt want to risk an unrank because of that

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-02-21T14:08:50+00:00

Priti wrote:
but.. why..

Because logic = nonexistent.

Sellenite

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Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2015-02-21T15:20:19+00:00

白爷爷

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2015-02-21T16:09:24+00:00

[Extreme]
02:05:766 (2) - risky object.

IDK acceptable or not.

Poruteri

Former osu! Champion: 2014

132 posts

Joined February 2012

Poruteri 2015-02-21T16:59:23+00:00

What does Gonkanau mean?

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2015-02-21T19:03:54+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
[Extreme]
02:05:766 (2) - risky object.

IDK acceptable or not.

not, its offscreen
*summons qat*

Timorisu

772 posts

Joined November 2012

Timorisu 2015-02-21T19:47:08+00:00

Aka wrote:
NewRulerNA wrote:
[Extreme]
02:05:766 (2) - risky object.

IDK acceptable or not.

not, its offscreen
*summons qat*

gg wp

rip gundam

unko

521 posts

Joined March 2014

unko 2015-02-21T21:17:08+00:00

Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.

Mazzerin

493 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazzerin 2015-02-21T21:52:09+00:00

nookls wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.

what are you talking about, if a note is offscreen by a pixel it's a trash unplayable map with zero signs of quality

DeletedUser_4329079

DeletedUser_4329079 2015-02-21T22:17:31+00:00

nookls wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.

That's why half of the newly ranked beatmaps are TV sizes, and the approved category has been dead since 2013

Brazzers_old_1

Brazzers_old_1 2015-02-21T22:21:03+00:00

nookls wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.

Now FC it at 1024x768

FlobuFlobs

617 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2015-02-21T22:24:53+00:00

Default wrote:
nookls wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.
That's why half of the newly ranked beatmaps are TV sizes, and the approved category has been dead since 2013

Approved isnt dead, approved is for marathon maps with a draintime of +5min

DeletedUser_4329079

DeletedUser_4329079 2015-02-21T22:28:00+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Approved isnt dead, approved is for marathon maps with a draintime of +5min

Which can't get ranked because they have 659559+ notes which need to be moved a pixel to the left/right or whatever. Check the date of the lastest approved map and tell me if it's dead or not.

Edit: Damn why am I so whiny anyway t.t I need some sleep, being an active BAT/QAT is probably hard as hell

Yales

826 posts

Joined February 2013

Yales 2015-02-21T23:27:37+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.

That's why half of the newly ranked beatmaps are TV sizes, and the approved category has been dead since 2013

Approved isnt dead, approved is for marathon maps with a draintime of +5min

Well... Things have changed since 2013, and most people will agree that it didn't change in a good way. So we can somehow say that approval is dead, yes.

-

Awesome map, really impressed :3

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-02-22T00:09:10+00:00

Default wrote:
FlobuFlobs wrote:
Approved isnt dead, approved is for marathon maps with a draintime of +5min
Which can't get ranked because they have 659559+ notes which need to be moved a pixel to the left/right or whatever. Check the date of the lastest approved map and tell me if it's dead or not.

Edit: Damn why am I so whiny anyway t.t I need some sleep, being an active BAT/QAT is probably hard as hell

There are a couple of approved maps each week. It's just given heart instead of a flame recently, so it shows under ranked rather than approved, as the systems are pretty much the same now excluding that you need 3 nominations rather than 2 to get approved.

the ones in qualified right now:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/270999
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/53342
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/277279
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/253969

Yales

826 posts

Joined February 2013

Yales 2015-02-22T00:23:44+00:00

deetz wrote:
[

There are a couple of approved maps each week. It's just given heart instead of a flame recently, so it shows under ranked rather than approved, as the systems are pretty much the same now excluding that you need 3 nominations rather than 2 to get approved.

the ones in qualified right now:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/270999
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/53342
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/277279
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/253969

Uh... Approval now is just for marathon. (as you can see by yourself on the links you posted). They just should have named it "marathon section" instead of giving the old name "approval" to avoid confusion. Because "approval" wasn't always for marathon only.

Well, about an offscreen problem it has to be fixed though and I don't get why this talk about marathon for this kind of problem. o.o

ac8129464363

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Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2015-02-22T00:31:40+00:00

Yales wrote:
deetz wrote:
[

There are a couple of approved maps each week. It's just given heart instead of a flame recently, so it shows under ranked rather than approved, as the systems are pretty much the same now excluding that you need 3 nominations rather than 2 to get approved.

the ones in qualified right now:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/270999
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/53342
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/277279
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/253969
Uh... Approval now is just for marathon. (as you can see by yourself on the links you posted). They just should have named it "marathon section" instead of giving the old name "approval" to avoid confusion. Because "approval" wasn't always for marathon only.

Well, about an offscreen problem it has to be fixed though and I don't get why this talk about marathon for this kind of problem. o.o

yep i understand that lol

just Default doesn't know that approval still exists for marathons because they don't give maps flames anymore, and they don't show up under the Approved tab anymore as a result. Which would lead him to think that maps don't get approved anymore

VINXIS

Featured Artist

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Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-02-22T00:46:04+00:00

ok

saiyuri

215 posts

Joined June 2013

saiyuri 2015-02-22T01:15:39+00:00

=w=

Adralil

Adralil 2015-02-22T02:42:29+00:00

pls dont unrank it ok its ok map pls pls dont

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-22T04:42:10+00:00

nookls wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.

lol xd lets rank rabbit jumping styl!!! its fun, playable and coherent 2 me hehe :p

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2015-02-22T05:02:46+00:00

i think you guys can make more excuses to call qat instead of the funny offscreen which is inconsequential

DeletedUser_4329079

DeletedUser_4329079 2015-02-22T06:01:23+00:00

deetz wrote:
It's just given heart instead of a flame recently, so it shows under ranked rather than approved, as the systems are pretty much the same now excluding that you need 3 nominations rather than 2 to get approved.

Oh ok, that's how it should've been since the begining ^^

Hadis

73 posts

Joined October 2013

Hadis 2015-02-22T09:01:23+00:00

Mazzerin wrote:
what are you talking about, if a note is offscreen by a pixel it's a trash unplayable map with zero signs of quality

I laughed hard.

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-22T09:22:38+00:00

probably rrtyui didnt make that thing a big deal. so it's okay

silmarilen

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Joined February 2010

silmarilen 2015-02-22T11:47:57+00:00

nookls wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.

or just dont map offscreen. it's not hard.

Jenny

2,200 posts

Joined November 2010

Jenny 2015-02-22T13:53:13+00:00

nookls wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.

Keep in mind where the interface is, avoid quirky overlaps and you're fine, dandy and it doesn't look bad or off.

Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2015-02-22T15:32:36+00:00

silmarilen wrote:
nookls wrote:
Christ I really don't understand all the "perfection" blah blah about the beatmap ranking process. So what if a note is a pixel offscreen, is that really a reason to unrank? If it's fun and doesn't have issues that ruin its playability and/or status as a coherent beatmap i really don't think it matters.
or just dont map offscreen. it's not hard.

/thread (please?)

Dekadent

17 posts

Joined August 2013

Dekadent 2015-02-22T18:07:28+00:00

Congratulations on having this map ranked (in theory)!

PS. previous BG was a lot better ;_;
PS2. Transparent Wailing dif was great too, rip

CXu

osu! Alumni

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CXu 2015-02-22T18:26:53+00:00

Off-screen notes have always been unrankable, so I don't see how this is anything new or groundbreaking that BN/QAT care about "a few pixels". And they should be caught at some point by modders/BN during modding in the first place, though I dunno how many actually look for these things. + It's annoying to have to change the resolution to 4:3 to check for off-screen notes to the left or right.

It's not a huge deal anyway. Just unqualify, fix the slider, and get it qualified again. Scores get wiped, but that's why it's qualified and not ranked in the first place.

Asphyxia

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2015-02-22T19:45:15+00:00

Reasons for Disqualification

02:05:766 (2) - in Extreme is off-screen. This issue explains itself and requires being fixed in order to get your map re-qualified.
02:14:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - in Second Gonakanau creates a massive difficulty gap within the difficulty itself. You can compare both wkyikawa's Extra and Second Gonkanau from 02:14:220 - to 02:18:584 - , the gap is quite huge. Reducing the spacing to something more suitable is strongly recommended. We don't think it is appropriate in its current state.

Additional modding

General

The combo colors 4 and 5 are too similar, they're really hard to distinguish from each other. Please consider changing one of them (possibly combo color 5) to something darker.
Increasing the volume on every section by 10-15% wouldn't hurt at all, since the objects feel rather inaudible from time to time when the hitsounds are not dominate.

Easy

00:33:857 (1) - Please don't ignore the stanza, it makes your earlier pattern (00:27:311 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ) feel very inconsistent due to the stanza having such a similar sound to it. That being said, you could use a rhythm according to the example below, because it'd also follow the vocals better!
Example
01:20:220 (2) - Nicely done, I like the shape a lot!
01:29:493 (1) - Again, please don't let the slider end cover the stanza, since the stanza is again dominate enough for you to place a note there.
01:33:857 (1) - ^ and so on...
I liked the difficulty a lot, the only downside was that some of the important beats were covered by slider ends, where as you could have just placed a note there to emphasis certain a beat, pattern or even a part better.

Regraz's Normal

00:48:039 (3,4) - I would not stack these, because you already stacked 00:18:039 (4,5) - and having stacks that are rhythmically different may get a bit troublesome for beginners.
00:57:857 (1) - I find it more appealing if the slider was shaped more according to the example below, gives the slider more of a blanket-friendly shape:
Example
01:01:130 (1,1) - Blanket could be better here.
01:52:403 (1) - Same would apply to this slider as well, if you decided to make changes to the previous one.
03:07:675 (3) - This slider feels really weird, mainly because 03:07:948 - has such a strong beat. I'd advise you to change the rhythm to something more appropriate, so the strong beat gets emphasized.
Example

Hard

00:20:766 (1,2) - Even though there's a small break between these sliders, the spacing still feels quite large. Consider reducing it please.
02:18:039 (3,1) - Same goes here, reducing the spacing would definitely make this difficulty more appropriate for the Hard players.
02:56:766 (1) - The loop of this slider would definitely look more appealing if it would be symmetric, try this?
Example

G's Insane

01:29:493 (1,1,1) - Consider changing this part visually, because right now it looks really cramped.
02:12:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - Please consider using at least some repeat sliders here, because this creates a huge difficulty spike to the difficulty itself, and making the gap from Hard > Insane also rather iffy.

wkyikawa's Extra

01:21:857 (5) - Please put a new combo here, every difficulty has one except this.

Good luck re-qualifying this set! The BNG will handle it from now on and as always, if you have any questions, feel free to ask me!

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-22T19:47:35+00:00

rip

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

voynich 2015-02-22T19:48:35+00:00

I was right about to do Extreme...
Oh well.Go back to editing this map and hopefully it might get ranked!

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-02-22T19:51:57+00:00

rip 7 star dreams

aefrogdog

8 posts

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aefrogdog 2015-02-22T19:54:09+00:00

Awh :c

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ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-02-22T19:54:58+00:00

aefrogdog wrote:
Why was it unranked?

lol

jesse1412

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jesse1412 2015-02-22T19:59:41+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
02:14:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - in Second Gonakanau creates a massive difficulty gap within the difficulty itself. You can compare both wkyikawa's Extra and Second Gonkanau from 02:14:220 - to 02:18:584 - , the gap is quite huge. Reducing the spacing to something more suitable is strongly recommended. We don't think it is appropriate in its current state.

The gap isn't that huge and this is the peak of the song, don't be silly. Alternatively, make the entire map harder to fix.

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Yauxo

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Yauxo 2015-02-22T20:00:30+00:00

That was to be expected.

Dont even think about mapping objects offscreen, always proof-read (or watch in this case) and dont count on nobody noticing.

Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

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Xilver15 2015-02-22T20:02:02+00:00

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xLolicore-

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xLolicore- 2015-02-22T20:03:38+00:00

Welp. No more 7 stars? ;-;

Azer

World Cup Organiser

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Azer 2015-02-22T20:04:37+00:00

I agree with the 'nerf'. That part alone was twice as hard to FC compared to the rest of the difficulty, you could see so many 8xx combo scores on the leaderboards, even though as jesse says it's the peak of the song, the gap was way too much.

VINXIS

Featured Artist

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VINXIS 2015-02-22T20:13:01+00:00

kk let's make it exactly 7.00 stars now lesgo

Yuudachi-kun

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Yuudachi-kun 2015-02-22T20:15:55+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
That was to be expected.

Dont even think about mapping objects offscreen, always proof-read (or watch in this case) and dont count on nobody noticing.

Mazzerin wrote:
what are you talking about, if a note is offscreen by a pixel it's a trash unplayable map with zero signs of quality

jesse1412

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jesse1412 2015-02-22T20:21:01+00:00

Xilver wrote:
tbh I agree with disqualify, the hard part in the 7 star diff really did need a nerf and in general the whole mapset needs a bit more work. Asphyxia the hero

P.S - Awaken why did you get rid of Transparent Wailing's mapping, that version of the difficulty was so good ;w;

jesus1412 wrote:
The gap isn't that huge and this is the peak of the song, don't be silly. Alternatively, make the entire map harder to fix.
wat

You need to understand that you can only make a map that difficult until it just doesn't fit the music anymore, and IMO the peak of the song didn't need overdone jumps like it has right now, so making it harder would just make it even more unfitting.

I agree with changing the jumps to be more intuitive, but how does difficulty effect how well a map goes with the music? It's the hardest part of the map and it's the peak of the song, that's just how it is, obviously a lot of people will break there. Difficulty is only overdone or unfitting when it doesn't fit the rest of the map, in this case the difficulty of those jumps is fitting relative to the rest of the map (in my opinion, and we're talking only in opinions here). I think it's silly to say that if the rest of the map became harder then the map suddenly wouldn't fit with the music, difficulty is a subjective thing and to some people some of the parts simply appear overdone or too hard; but what about the people who think that everything is flowing perfectly while actually being a challenge for once? I know that people who can tackle this map are far and few but there's not much out there for those people, I personally can't do those jumps but if we go on what you and I think then there's no one left to cater for the people beyond us. I don't agree that these jumps are too much compared to the rest of map in the sense that they're the peak of the map and anyone who can consistently maintain combo on the rest of the map can most probably keep combo on those jumps every once in a while (as it should be, the peak of the map is the part people should focus on FCing).

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-02-22T20:21:23+00:00

Xilver wrote:
in general the whole mapset needs a bit more work

honestly, imo if you don't go into specifics while saying it this is one of the least helpful things you can say :/

-GN

Champion Above Champions

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-GN 2015-02-22T20:30:58+00:00

While internal difficulty spikes are completely okay in my book, I think it should be changed around a bit, mostly because the hand motions for the latter half of the extreme part(particularly this 02:16:948 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ) is very awkward to play and requires quite wonky hand movement(and very precise too, given the high spacing). although, i don't think you should nerf the pattern too much - it really makes the map worthwhile and memorable, which i think is great. i seem to be in the minority here, though.

a couple other notes on small things that I found to be weird in the map:
01:26:220 (1) - put this on the sliderstart of the (3) before it, to continue the back and forth thing. quite minor, but i don't think it makes sense as is.
02:04:948 (1,2) - i understand you'd want to emphasise the vocals and the start of the solo, but please don't make 1/4 jumps like this.
02:19:948 (1) - this one note is quite underwhelming since it breaks the upbeat clap pattern. considering it's the final part of the solo it's more noticeable.
02:22:675 (4) - please adjust this so that it flows better coming out of (3).
02:44:766 (5,6,7,8) - these make little sense considering the music. i'd expect separate stacks where the music change notes (so it'd go like 4-2-1-1)
02:49:130 (1,2) - ^ likewise, these two should be stacked

Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

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Xilver15 2015-02-22T20:40:20+00:00

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CXu

osu! Alumni

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CXu 2015-02-22T20:47:07+00:00

Most of the kiai sections use about 2.5x as spacing, while the peak of the map have spacing at around 3.0x, and the final kiai having jumps that are slightly harder than the previous kiai's. I don't really think this is too much of a difficulty gap, and I can FC or 1xmiss on them fairly often (220bpm streams too hard). Also, the mapset has 3 extra difficulties; it should be fine to have one extremely challenging diff in the mapset. + Those jumps are fun.

Xilver wrote:
You bring up some good points, but to me there is a level where the map doesn't fit with the song anymore, even if all parts of the map are mapped with similar difficulty scale. Clearly you can't really map a 7 star map on a low BPM TV Size Anime OP, at least if you want it to be ranked, so there's some basic ratio between the song and its map. And while it doesn't apply for this map since it's not TV Size derp, I feel like the ratio still exists.

I bet Silynn probably did that at some point.

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jesse1412

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jesse1412 2015-02-22T20:47:58+00:00

Xilver wrote:
Oh well, you know a lot more than me about how mapping works so there's really no point to debate here. We'll see how this map ends up being

Everything you said was totally correct until we got to here

. I'm just a player, I'm the target demographic of the ranking criteria so I let my opinion out. We seem to have different views on how difficulty effects a map and it's relationship with the song and that's fine, I just hope we can respect the mappers opinion on such a subjective matter.

MEK

66 posts

Joined September 2013

MEK 2015-02-22T20:54:03+00:00

Unrank for difficulty spike is super inconsistent. Look at maps like Daidai Genome and Best FriendS which were ranked very recently.

Wishy

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Wishy 2015-02-22T21:05:14+00:00

Map was perfect, difficulty peaks are to be expected on songs that have that kind of rhythm, as jesse says it's the peak of the song, it would feel just wrong if difficulty didn't go a lot higher.

If we go by this logic maps like IMAGE MATERIAL should be unranked because they have a huge difficulty spike on a single part. :ss

This kind of issues should not be addressed this way. Talking about the highest difficulty only, it caters to a very small percentage of the playerbase, FC wise probably less than 100/200 players, difficulty wise (getting few misses) probably to less than 1000. This kind of maps are what keep entertaining high skilled players. Personally I kind of played the map just because of that very hard part, loved it (it was even harder before the diff name got changed imo). Haven't played the updated version but if that whole part got nerfed and now is as hard as the rest of the map then it's kind of... plain boring really.

When you play "long" maps you do want difficulty spikes, otherwise it's extremely boring to play. Look at this Hayabi or whatever it's called this map with the Awoken Challenge difficulty. It gets A LOT harder towards the end as in that's the only part where you can miss but afaik it's fine and the map is ranked. Why doesn't this work that way here?

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[Hello Goodbye]

[Hello Goodbye] 2015-02-22T21:08:17+00:00

Wishy wrote:
Map was perfect, difficulty peaks are to be expected on songs that have that kind of rhythm, as jesse says it's the peak of the song, it would feel just wrong if difficulty didn't go a lot higher.

If we go by this logic maps like IMAGE MATERIAL should be unranked because they have a huge difficulty spike on a single part. :ss

Done. Srsly, i hope u can rank it again.

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