Hey xxdeathx! from pm request
* 00:09:736 (3) - I'd really put a finish along with the clap. This part really needs it imo.
* 00:21:275 (4) - I feel like a whistle here would be better, instead on (5) - this souind is noticeably louder.
* 00:33:736 (1) - Add clap on the repeat? Sounds really strong there >_>
* 01:27:275 (1) - Did you leave out hitsounds here on purpose? I'd add a finish atleast.
* 00:07:082 - On this repeat there's a small clap sound I think.. dunno for sure actually. It's really soft though.
* 00:07:313 - Add whistle here on the slider end for the bass?
* 00:09:736 (1) - The slider head really needs a finish imo. The cymbal is really clear in the song itself.
* 00:11:006 (4) - Sounds more like a clap to me ;_;
* 00:13:198 (1) - I can perfectly see why you did this, but you know - she actually repeat the syllable and the actual long note starts at 00:13:429 and there's no slider tick or anything covering it, unlike 00:20:582 (1) - - I recommend shifting this slider 1/2 later and it kinda depends on you if you want some gaps before/after this slider.
* 00:32:813 (2) - Optional, but since your main focus is on the bass, I don't recommend skipping the beat at 00:33:044 - Try to use a slider + circle instead?
* 00:33:621 (5) - This one also sounds like a clap to me o_o
* 00:55:890 (1,2,3) - Loose circles like this might be hard to time for some players. Consider using a long slider with a repeat, or just spacing it out, like 01:23:582 (1,2,3) - .
* 01:20:813 (2) - Put a clap on the slider end?
* 00:09:159 (5) - The clap should be here instead. The music changes here for some reason lol.
* 00:09:275 (6) - Add a clap on this slider end? The sound there is quite strong.
* 00:09:736 (1) - Why didn't you put a finish along with the clap? It really needs a finish here imo, due to the cymbal in the song itself.
* 00:10:429 (6) - Here a clap on the head as well?
* 00:21:275 (2) - This one should get the whistle instead of (3) imo... This sound is much higher ._.
* 00:27:044 (2,3,4) - I'd ctrl+g this for rhythm purposes. The 'e' vocal, which is present at 00:27:275 - is quite a long note - which should get a slider imo.
* 00:30:044 (1,2) - Could you space this similar to like 00:04:198 (1,2) - ? I got a bit tricked by this, since 00:30:852 (4,5) - is also 1/4 but has larger spacing.
* 00:33:506 (8,9) - I do hear some claps here >_>
* 00:33:736 (1) - Add a clap along with the finish here? The rhythm you are using here and the instruments are getting very similar to parts like 00:07:890 (1,2,3) - If you do apply this, don't forget to place it at the other finishes at this part of the song.
* 00:34:082 (2) - Clap here on the head as well?
* 00:38:352 (4,5) - This probably won't suit you at all, but I'd personally ctrl+g part, since here there's a strong sound at 00:38:467 - which shouldn't really be missed in my point of view. It'd also create some variety in rhythm ^^
* 00:38:813 (7,1) - (optional) It's not unreadable, but I'd feel more comfortable if you spaced this out a little - since it's spaced like 1/4 now. The NC helps though. Consider placing it at (488,36) so it looks like it's correct DS, or somewhere like (292,68) for a similar jump like 00:20:813 (1,2) -
* 00:40:890 (4) - This note in particular sounds louder than the others, and an instrument in the song itself also lands here. Consider adding a clap?
* 00:51:159 (3) - This note here actually sounds strange to me. I listened to it at 25%, and it's definitely not an overmap - but it just sounds and plays so forced. Deleting this note would give more emphasis on the vocals, rather than some 1/4 note spam. To me, a rhythm like 00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - plays more natural.
* 00:51:159 (3) - (if you denied the suggestion above) This one also kinda sounds like a clap to me (sorry for all these clap suggestions ;_;)
* 00:53:006 (5) - ^
* 00:54:852 (4) - This sound in particular is very different than the rest of the song. You could try to add a hitsound here, but leaving it blank is fine I guess owo
* 00:55:659 (8) - Clap again?
* 01:00:275 (3,4) - This part of the song actually sounds a bit undermapped. Not a problem though, but I kinda thought you'd take advantage of those really noticeable 1/4 sounds in this part - considering the amount of 1/4 in this diff overall.
* 01:04:198 (4) - Clap on the repeat?
* 01:04:890 (7) - Again clap x_x?
* 01:07:198 (2) - Optional, but you could add a note here? I might see why you did it to keep consistent rhythm with 00:56:236 (1,2) - , but on the red tick there's actually a sound here, compared to the other one where's there's no sound on the red tick at all. If you do add the note, the NC (spam) for readability won't be needed.
* 01:08:813 (1) - Sounds more like a finish to me x_x
* 01:09:621 (5) - Add a clap?
* 01:11:121 (3) - ^
* 01:14:698 (3,4) - The 1/4 spacing is getting really big here, try to tone it down. After 5 tries I still get a 100 ;_; Using (460,144) or (432,188) seems more logical to me.
* 01:27:275 (1) - Same as Hard diff. Did you do this on purpose? No hitsound sounds so strange and empty here...
sorry for all those clap suggestions, most of them are on the blue tick so i guess you don't really need to add them ._.
don't forget to change the diff name before BATs check this (or keep it owo)
here's a star for you, and good luck o/
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* 00:09:736 (3) - I'd really put a finish along with the clap. This part really needs it imo.
* 00:21:275 (4) - I feel like a whistle here would be better, instead on (5) - this souind is noticeably louder.
* 00:33:736 (1) - Add clap on the repeat? Sounds really strong there >_>
* 01:27:275 (1) - Did you leave out hitsounds here on purpose? I'd add a finish atleast.
K.Penguin's Hard
* 00:07:082 - On this repeat there's a small clap sound I think.. dunno for sure actually. It's really soft though.
* 00:07:313 - Add whistle here on the slider end for the bass?
* 00:09:736 (1) - The slider head really needs a finish imo. The cymbal is really clear in the song itself.
* 00:11:006 (4) - Sounds more like a clap to me ;_;
* 00:13:198 (1) - I can perfectly see why you did this, but you know - she actually repeat the syllable and the actual long note starts at 00:13:429 and there's no slider tick or anything covering it, unlike 00:20:582 (1) - - I recommend shifting this slider 1/2 later and it kinda depends on you if you want some gaps before/after this slider.
* 00:32:813 (2) - Optional, but since your main focus is on the bass, I don't recommend skipping the beat at 00:33:044 - Try to use a slider + circle instead?
* 00:33:621 (5) - This one also sounds like a clap to me o_o
* 00:55:890 (1,2,3) - Loose circles like this might be hard to time for some players. Consider using a long slider with a repeat, or just spacing it out, like 01:23:582 (1,2,3) - .
* 01:20:813 (2) - Put a clap on the slider end?
OD6.9 slaine
* 00:09:159 (5) - The clap should be here instead. The music changes here for some reason lol.
* 00:09:275 (6) - Add a clap on this slider end? The sound there is quite strong.
* 00:09:736 (1) - Why didn't you put a finish along with the clap? It really needs a finish here imo, due to the cymbal in the song itself.
* 00:10:429 (6) - Here a clap on the head as well?
* 00:21:275 (2) - This one should get the whistle instead of (3) imo... This sound is much higher ._.
* 00:27:044 (2,3,4) - I'd ctrl+g this for rhythm purposes. The 'e' vocal, which is present at 00:27:275 - is quite a long note - which should get a slider imo.
* 00:30:044 (1,2) - Could you space this similar to like 00:04:198 (1,2) - ? I got a bit tricked by this, since 00:30:852 (4,5) - is also 1/4 but has larger spacing.
* 00:33:506 (8,9) - I do hear some claps here >_>
* 00:33:736 (1) - Add a clap along with the finish here? The rhythm you are using here and the instruments are getting very similar to parts like 00:07:890 (1,2,3) - If you do apply this, don't forget to place it at the other finishes at this part of the song.
* 00:34:082 (2) - Clap here on the head as well?
* 00:38:352 (4,5) - This probably won't suit you at all, but I'd personally ctrl+g part, since here there's a strong sound at 00:38:467 - which shouldn't really be missed in my point of view. It'd also create some variety in rhythm ^^
* 00:38:813 (7,1) - (optional) It's not unreadable, but I'd feel more comfortable if you spaced this out a little - since it's spaced like 1/4 now. The NC helps though. Consider placing it at (488,36) so it looks like it's correct DS, or somewhere like (292,68) for a similar jump like 00:20:813 (1,2) -
* 00:40:890 (4) - This note in particular sounds louder than the others, and an instrument in the song itself also lands here. Consider adding a clap?
* 00:51:159 (3) - This note here actually sounds strange to me. I listened to it at 25%, and it's definitely not an overmap - but it just sounds and plays so forced. Deleting this note would give more emphasis on the vocals, rather than some 1/4 note spam. To me, a rhythm like 00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - plays more natural.
* 00:51:159 (3) - (if you denied the suggestion above) This one also kinda sounds like a clap to me (sorry for all these clap suggestions ;_;)
* 00:53:006 (5) - ^
* 00:54:852 (4) - This sound in particular is very different than the rest of the song. You could try to add a hitsound here, but leaving it blank is fine I guess owo
* 00:55:659 (8) - Clap again?
* 01:00:275 (3,4) - This part of the song actually sounds a bit undermapped. Not a problem though, but I kinda thought you'd take advantage of those really noticeable 1/4 sounds in this part - considering the amount of 1/4 in this diff overall.
* 01:04:198 (4) - Clap on the repeat?
* 01:04:890 (7) - Again clap x_x?
* 01:07:198 (2) - Optional, but you could add a note here? I might see why you did it to keep consistent rhythm with 00:56:236 (1,2) - , but on the red tick there's actually a sound here, compared to the other one where's there's no sound on the red tick at all. If you do add the note, the NC (spam) for readability won't be needed.
* 01:08:813 (1) - Sounds more like a finish to me x_x
* 01:09:621 (5) - Add a clap?
* 01:11:121 (3) - ^
* 01:14:698 (3,4) - The 1/4 spacing is getting really big here, try to tone it down. After 5 tries I still get a 100 ;_; Using (460,144) or (432,188) seems more logical to me.
* 01:27:275 (1) - Same as Hard diff. Did you do this on purpose? No hitsound sounds so strange and empty here...
sorry for all those clap suggestions, most of them are on the blue tick so i guess you don't really need to add them ._.
don't forget to change the diff name before BATs check this (or keep it owo)
here's a star for you, and good luck o/