Aoi Eir - GENESIS (TV size) · forum

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2015-01-29T00:23:32+00:00

hi o3o

[General]

remove aldnoah zero from tags you have it already in the source

[Normal]

i don't really wanted to be nazi in this mod so i'm gonna just point one time what i'm thinking about this kind of ''flow mistake'' 00:08:813 (2,3) - wich obv you can follow or not since is my personal opinion,as here you can see your actual pattern flow and in the right is how basicly should it be
SPOILER
is not such a big mistake but imo in easier difficulties this kind of naziness should be followed more since in the higheest diff is possible to have a jumpy flow and so on but in lower diff the spacing should be consistant so the flow should be smooty aswell
00:12:044 (2,3) - since you're having just a normal diffu as the easiest diff try to don't use stacks since for the beginners that wanna enjoy your map would be not so fun to play ;_; i'm goint to point this one just one,so if is your willing to fix wich would be reccomended you know where are the patterns where you mapped with stacks
00:41:121 (1) - feel so empty without any hitsound,a whistle could fit a bit here
00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - fot the easier diff in the mapset imo this is a bit to much stacks and continuos rhythm is a bit difficult imo
01:16:429 (1,1) - not really sure if you got enough recovery time for a Normal
is a nice diffu o3o

[Penguin o3o]

00:19:659 (2) - here the slider shape don't fits really much to the pattern itself imo is gonna to fit more if you're gonna to use a similar slider as the previous one 00:18:967 (1) - feels much better and clean with it
00:38:352 (3) - the same i could say about this slider,same situation ^
00:46:659 (1,2) - personally i don't like how it flows here i know you're doing a blanket with the second slider but flow how is the shape of slider 1 it looks like that is goint to the slider end of the (2) and not to the star the thing that i can sugeggest you is just to rotate or move the first sliders end tail and to move it to the left so that yes you'll have a blanket but the slider direction will point to the slider start and not end
SPOILER
01:16:313 - a spinner here would be great like in normal

[baka slaine]

HP 6.7 - 7 would be better is not a marathon and not such difficult so rise it up is not a hard diff
00:05:813 (7,8) - why don't you continue this kind of stacking 00:05:467 (5,6) - here aswell it feels really nice imo o3o
00:25:659 (7) - i'm not a fan of jumpy streams but imo like this you can save more the situation
SPOILER
00:27:044 (2) - ctrl+g and 00:26:352 (1) - ctrl+g for a better flow
01:16:313 - a spinner here would be great like in normal

nice mapset o3o ♥

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

xxdeathx 2015-01-29T02:37:08+00:00

Lally wrote:
hi o3o

[General]
remove aldnoah zero from tags you have it already in the source the source is one combined word, nowhere contains both words so i put in tags
[Normal]
i don't really wanted to be nazi in this mod so i'm gonna just point one time what i'm thinking about this kind of ''flow mistake'' 00:08:813 (2,3) - wich obv you can follow or not since is my personal opinion,as here you can see your actual pattern flow and in the right is how basicly should it be
SPOILER
is not such a big mistake but imo in easier difficulties this kind of naziness should be followed more since in the higheest diff is possible to have a jumpy flow and so on but in lower diff the spacing should be consistant so the flow should be smooty aswell i prefer to have stacks for circles before sliders since it's easier to hit, but unstacked circles after sliders because slider leniency lets them reach it more easily
00:12:044 (2,3) - since you're having just a normal diffu as the easiest diff try to don't use stacks since for the beginners that wanna enjoy your map would be not so fun to play ;_; i'm goint to point this one just one,so if is your willing to fix wich would be reccomended you know where are the patterns where you mapped with stacks
00:41:121 (1) - feel so empty without any hitsound,a whistle could fit a bit here added
00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - fot the easier diff in the mapset imo this is a bit to much stacks and continuos rhythm is a bit difficult imo fits the song, hope i don't have to change. those are all 1/1 sliders at a low bpm so it's not too hard
01:16:429 (1,1) - not really sure if you got enough recovery time for a Normal read the ranking criteria thread on this. the requirement is 2 beats for normal. also this is low bpm so 2 beats is more than enough.
is a nice diffu o3o
[baka slaine]
HP 6.7 - 7 would be better is not a marathon and not such difficult so rise it up is not a hard diff i thought that was too punishing especially for a low bpm song
00:05:813 (7,8) - why don't you continue this kind of stacking 00:05:467 (5,6) - here aswell it feels really nice imo o3o yeah it feels nice to have the first one spaced and the second one stacked
00:25:659 (7) - i'm not a fan of jumpy streams but imo like this you can save more the situation done
SPOILER
00:27:044 (2) - ctrl+g and 00:26:352 (1) - ctrl+g for a better flow looks worse to me orz
01:16:313 - a spinner here would be great like in normal nowhere good to end it
nice mapset o3o ♥

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-01-30T11:21:48+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hey xxdeathx! from pm request

K.Penguin's Hard

* 00:07:082 - On this repeat there's a small clap sound I think.. dunno for sure actually. It's really soft though. :/
* 00:07:313 - Add whistle here on the slider end for the bass?
* 00:09:736 (1) - The slider head really needs a finish imo. The cymbal is really clear in the song itself.
* 00:11:006 (4) - Sounds more like a clap to me ;_;
* 00:13:198 (1) - I can perfectly see why you did this, but you know - she actually repeat the syllable and the actual long note starts at 00:13:429 and there's no slider tick or anything covering it, unlike 00:20:582 (1) - - I recommend shifting this slider 1/2 later and it kinda depends on you if you want some gaps before/after this slider. there are is fine, will cover as some instrument sound to slider tick
* 00:32:813 (2) - Optional, but since your main focus is on the bass, I don't recommend skipping the beat at 00:33:044 - Try to use a slider + circle instead?
* 00:33:621 (5) - This one also sounds like a clap to me o_o
* 00:55:890 (1,2,3) - Loose circles like this might be hard to time for some players. Consider using a long slider with a repeat, or just spacing it out, like 01:23:582 (1,2,3) - .
* 01:20:813 (2) - Put a clap on the slider end?

HelloSCV wrote:
from my queue (again?)

[K.Penguin's Hard]
00:13:198 (1) - 피아노 소리에 맞춰서 휘슬넣으신 것 같은데, 이전 노트보다 여기 슬라이더 머리쪽에 두시는게 좀 더 낫지 않을까요? (00:16:659 (3,1) - 여기나 00:20:352 (3,1) - 여기도)
00:48:506 (1) - 여기에 클랩은 별로 어울리지 않는다고 생각해요, 노래에도 딱히 맞지않고 일관성 면에서도 좀 벗어난 느낌, 굳이 넣는다면 슬라이더 제일 첫 부분이 더 나을 것 같아요 곡이 원래그래서 어쩔수없 지우면 또 여기에 추가해 ^^ 이렇게 비디오처럼 보이는...
01:16:198 (1) - 노래에도 딱히 맞는 음이 없고해서 그런데 휘슬은 지우시는게? 항상 새마디나 크래시를 칠때는 베이스드럼과 같이나오는게 정석
01:16:313 - 인센에서도 언급했는데 아무래도 스피너 넣으시는게 나을 것 같아요, 자세한 이유는 인센에 첨부 xxdesu랑 이하동문
01:27:390 (1) - 역시나 인센에서도 언급한건데 50퍼센트는 좀 큰 것 같아요 30퍼센트 정도면 적당할듯

굿 딮
good luck :>

Lally wrote:
hi o3o

[Penguin o3o]
00:19:659 (2) - here the slider shape don't fits really much to the pattern itself imo is gonna to fit more if you're gonna to use a similar slider as the previous one 00:18:967 (1) - feels much better and clean with it i don't understand why you did point out about this, actually if there are have some big angulate like wigle slider then i can understand, but look there are just curve slider, also i don't like keep use same shape.
00:38:352 (3) - the same i could say about this slider,same situation ^
00:46:659 (1,2) - personally i don't like how it flows here i know you're doing a blanket with the second slider but flow how is the shape of slider 1 it looks like that is goint to the slider end of the (2) and not to the star the thing that i can sugeggest you is just to rotate or move the first sliders end tail and to move it to the left so that yes you'll have a blanket but the slider direction will point to the slider start and not end i never think there is have bad flow
SPOILER
01:16:313 - a spinner here would be great like in normalsame as above with xxdesu diff
nice mapset o3o ♥

awdawd

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Artist:Aoi Eir
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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-01-30T13:09:18+00:00

Hi m4m from your queue

[General]

At tags: aldnoah zero season 2 ending s2 ed inaho slaine アルドノア・ゼロ koreapenguin
I think it better to use only "season2" tag and delete "s2"
At title why the actaual title is spaced at (TV size ) but romanised one is not
SPOILER
K.Penguin Hard has widescreen support checked but the others doesn't

[Normal]

00:09:736 (3) - Clap at tail ? it sound pretty consistent with the drum in the music there
00:10:659 (4) - ^
00:13:890 (5) - I can see that the curve at tail is not that good imo, try this ?
SPOILER
00:17:813 (5) - I can feel that the beat on white tick here is a bit more emphasized than the beat on red tick so try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
and the vocal here 00:18:736 - doesn't really has any instrument sound in it so you can ignore this if you intend to follow the instrument here
00:30:736 (3) - At head addition drum- clap hitsound sound nice there imo
00:55:890 (5) - Clap at reverse arrow and tail ?

[K.Penguin's Hard]

00:06:044 (1,2,3) - How about change this to slider like this 00:31:890 (1) - to avoid weird 3/4 spacing things here
00:20:352 (3,3) - Stack?
00:25:313 (4) - I'm not sure here , I can't hearing a beat here if you happen to hear it you can keep it
00:27:736 (4,3) - Stack?
01:03:275 (1) - Move anchor point below the red one a bit 1 grid to the left so that the curve here will be better
01:23:582 (1,2,3) - Similiar to 00:06:044 (1,2,3) -

[f bomb slaine]

Why not OD 7.0 ?
*Insert hitsound suggestions from Normal*

00:27:044 (2,3) - I think this make them like this flow better since (2) and (3) is emphasized so you make a jump there but I feel that (4) doesn't emphasized it just feel like a low tone vocal with low instrument sound there so probably use low spacing there works better
SPOILER
00:55:890 (1,1,2,3) - The rhythm here kinda messy it seems like you think every beat here sound nice when clickable but I guess it that not good here imo , try this?
SPOILER

Great mapset :>

Good luck

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

xxdeathx 2015-01-31T08:30:00+00:00

thanks rtyzen for star!

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hi m4m from your queue

[General]
At tags: aldnoah zero season 2 ending s2 ed inaho slaine アルドノア・ゼロ koreapenguin
I think it better to use only "season2" tag and delete "s2" why not both?
At title why the actaual title is spaced at (TV size ) but romanised one is not both titles should be correct
SPOILER
K.Penguin Hard has widescreen support checked but the others doesn't will fix his
[Normal]
00:09:736 (3) - Clap at tail ? it sound pretty consistent with the drum in the music there not sure about these, since it sounds like too many claps
00:10:659 (4) - ^
00:13:890 (5) - I can see that the curve at tail is not that good imo, try this ? ok but it really looks the same tbh
SPOILER
00:17:813 (5) - I can feel that the beat on white tick here is a bit more emphasized than the beat on red tick so try this rhythm ? done
SPOILER
and the vocal here 00:18:736 - doesn't really has any instrument sound in it so you can ignore this if you intend to follow the instrument here
00:30:736 (3) - At head addition drum- clap hitsound sound nice there imo orz i don't think drum clap fits here
00:55:890 (5) - Clap at reverse arrow and tail ? clap is actually on 00:56:352 but it's being ignored in this diff x.x
[f bomb slaine]
Why not OD 7.0 ? because 6.9 slaine
*Insert hitsound suggestions from Normal*
00:27:044 (2,3) - I think this make them like this flow better since (2) and (3) is emphasized so you make a jump there but I feel that (4) doesn't emphasized it just feel like a low tone vocal with low instrument sound there so probably use low spacing there works better don't want to change this part, i really like how it currently plays out since the jumps 00:26:352 (1,2) - and 00:27:506 (3,4) - emphasize the vocals where i want them to
SPOILER
00:55:890 (1,1,2,3) - The rhythm here kinda messy it seems like you think every beat here sound nice when clickable but I guess it that not good here imo , try this? i will consider it later, but i left it empty because the music was relatively empty there
SPOILER
Great mapset :>

Good luck

thanks for mod and star!!

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-01-31T12:23:53+00:00

Modding Time

[General]

None~

[Normal]

00:00:506 (1) - i think whistle add only tail batter. head delete whistle please.
00:04:198 (1) - Sampleset add normal on the head? to emphasize that the music loud.. and delete clap please.
00:17:813 (5) - don't need this note. emphasize only vocal here.
00:24:044 (3) - Whistle?
00:40:198 (6) - add finish on the head. your missing this?
00:56:236 - 00:56:582 - 00:56:813 - this part add clap batter hitsounding
01:07:659 - note here. it's too natural flow is not.
01:07:890 (5,1) - swap NC here. i think start vocal (5) slider imo
01:16:198 (1) - you can this note move Right.
SPOILER

[K.Penguin's Hard]

00:00:506 (1) - 아까 노멀에서 언급했던거지만 이건 끝에 휘슬 넣는게 더 잘어울린다고 생각해요 시작 부분보다는
00:20:582 (1) - 이건 개인적으로 Ctrl+G 하는게 흐름이 더 좋아보이네요
00:34:659 (2) - 이건 곡선 슬라로 해도 괜찮을듯 싶네요
SPOILER
00:41:121 (1) - 노멀에서 사용했듯이 커스톰 말고 기본 휘슬이 더 잘어울릴거 같은데..
01:16:313 ~ 01:18:044 - 이 부분은 브레이크 처리하거나 스피너로 채우시는게 좋을듯요

[fuck slaine]

00:16:659 (3,4) - Ctrl+G is flow batter imo
00:41:121 (1) - why this not use whistle? add please.
00:56:236 (1,4) - this change NC? suitable for lyrics flow
01:16:313 ~ 01:18:044 - Don't empty the part. you can add break time and spiner
01:27:044 (9) - Overlap exactly please.

that all.

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-02-01T04:02:18+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
thanks rtyzen for star!

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hi m4m from your queue

[General]
[list][*]At tags: aldnoah zero season 2 ending s2 ed inaho slaine アルドノア・ゼロ koreapenguin
I think it better to use only "season2" tag and delete "s2" why not both?

I guess I'm kinda worng here lol
Well you can keep the tag
I just thinking that if I use "season2" to search for this map the result will come just like when I type "s2" to search for this map, but it not work

Sorry ; ;

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

xxdeathx 2015-02-01T06:54:09+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:

Modding Time

[General]

None~ \o/
[Normal]

00:00:506 (1) - i think whistle add only tail batter. head delete whistle please. whistle sounds better on head
00:04:198 (1) - Sampleset add normal on the head? to emphasize that the music loud.. and delete clap please. clap fits
00:17:813 (5) - don't need this note. emphasize only vocal here. but other parts don't emphasize vocal
00:24:044 (3) - Whistle? added
00:40:198 (6) - add finish on the head. your missing this? i don't hear finish in music
00:56:236 - 00:56:582 - 00:56:813 - this part add clap batter hitsounding first one added, others don't sound good
01:07:659 - note here. it's too natural flow is not. added
01:07:890 (5,1) - swap NC here. i think start vocal (5) slider imo NC every 2 measures, also NC at 01:08:813 (1) - is also vocal
01:16:198 (1) - you can this note move Right. done
SPOILER
[fuck slaine]

00:16:659 (3,4) - Ctrl+G is flow batter imo going for captin flow here
00:41:121 (1) - why this not use whistle? add please. added
00:56:236 (1,4) - this change NC? suitable for lyrics flow NC is for 3/4 rhythm change
01:16:313 ~ 01:18:044 - Don't empty the part. you can add break time and spiner i want to add spinner but the hi-hat is actually too late and not exactly at 01:18:044
01:27:044 (9) - Overlap exactly please. already stacked o.o
that all.

thank you habi!

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-02-01T08:17:22+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hi m4m from your queue

[K.Penguin's Hard]
00:06:044 (1,2,3) - How about change this to slider like this 00:31:890 (1) - to avoid weird 3/4 spacing things here I never think there are has weird spacing, isn't normal?
00:20:352 (3,3) - Stack? why D:?
00:25:313 (4) - I'm not sure here , I can't hearing a beat here if you happen to hear it you can keep it you really should listen the song carefully again, there are has beat
00:27:736 (4,3) - Stack? why D:?
01:03:275 (1) - Move anchor point below the red one a bit 1 grid to the left so that the curve here will be better useless
01:23:582 (1,2,3) - Similiar to 00:06:044 (1,2,3) - same as first line
Good luck

HabiHolic wrote:

[K.Penguin's Hard]

00:00:506 (1) - 아까 노멀에서 언급했던거지만 이건 끝에 휘슬 넣는게 더 잘어울린다고 생각해요 시작 부분보다는
00:20:582 (1) - 이건 개인적으로 Ctrl+G 하는게 흐름이 더 좋아보이네요 지적하시기전 왜 그렇게 해두었나 앞뒤 패턴 의도를 먼저파악해주세요, 둥그런 슬라 끝에 서클스택되있는거 보셨으면 눈치채셨을텐데
00:34:659 (2) - 이건 곡선 슬라로 해도 괜찮을듯 싶네요 왜 그래야되는지 이유가없어서 못고치겠 orz
SPOILER

00:41:121 (1) - 노멀에서 사용했듯이 커스톰 말고 기본 휘슬이 더 잘어울릴거 같은데.. 제 귀에는 드럼 베이스소리말곤 안들려서
01:16:313 ~ 01:18:044 - 이 부분은 브레이크 처리하거나 스피너로 채우시는게 좋을듯요 xxdesu 랑 똑같은이유
that all.

awdawdawdawd

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 42852
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:GENESIS (TV size)
TitleUnicode:GENESIS（TV size）
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:藍井エイル
Creator:xxdeathx
Version:K.Penguin's Hard
Source:Aldnoah.Zero
Tags:aldnoah zero season 2 ending s2 ed inaho slaine アルドノア・ゼロ koreapenguin
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HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-02-01T14:16:38+00:00

>< my forgot star~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-02-04T00:00:40+00:00

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random mod

Normal

AR 4,5? having 3 gap different with Hard looks not really good imo
00:05:121 (2) - just nazi thing but imo, this slider looks kinda curvy that i feel it still can improved from flow. try smoother the curve and arrange like http://puu.sh/fpNEP.jpg? it gives more natural flow imo
00:16:429 (3) - i feel the piano on head is important as the repeat has here. how about add whistle too in head? imo it sounds not really bad :p
00:19:659 (2) - a little bit curvy too, try smoother it? i feel it will give more natural flow, example http://puu.sh/frhQz.jpg
00:30:044 (1) - super nazi, 1 grid left for blanket lol
00:31:890 (5) - inconsistency spacing here, is it intentional?
00:40:198 (6) - add whistle on head for emphasize the vocal? it sounds better for me
00:34:659 (2,4) - personally i feel the curve of these sldiers a little bit too curvy, make it a little bit smoother would be nice imo but it's just my taste
00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for newbie and mapset which doesnt have easy, i feel these rhythms are too long. i'd say remove (4) here to give a little break
00:55:890 (5) - add finish on repeat? i know the music only drum, but imo the vocal is kinda strong, imo adding finish wont be bad to hear ~
00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:01:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:08:813 (1) - add finish on head? i hear a weak cymbal here
01:16:198 (1) - this flow is kinda like anti flow here. the natural flow says better to place in 260,160. just my taste after all

Hard

00:00:506 (1) - instead of in tail, better to add whistle on head. just my taste :C
00:01:659 (3) - if you can add whistle on 00:02:121 (4) - you should add for (3) too for consistency of the music pattern :C
00:02:813 - yep, should add whistle coz the music too
00:03:736 - you have to increase the volume maybe, i think 50% would be nice. currently kinda hard to hear imo
00:05:121 (2) - hmm 1,35x spacing here intentional? imo better to keep the spacing here. move this to 148,20 would fix the spacing and keep the blanket (if you apply 00:05:582 (3) - better move to 160,160 to avoid 1,45x as the minimum spacing for 1,5x here)
00:11:006 (4,5) - after those 1/4.. please dont make double 1/4.. tbh double 1/4 harder to catch than triplet.. please make them as 1/4 sldier or remove (4)
00:13:198 (1) - use same spacing? the design kinda look weird here. i'd say 388,104 and fix the stack for next object if you do
00:15:044 (1) - i think make circle and then 1/1 slider would be better coz piano at 00:15:275 - sounds so loud and feels empty here
00:16:890 (1) - ^
00:56:236 (2) - stack feels kinda weird. how about give movement at least? no need far movement. just 200,112 i think would be nice
01:16:313 - how about add spinner until 01:18:044 - ? well just my taste but imo the hp decreasing a little bit fast here.. i wonder some newbie player will fail because this part lol
00:43:429 (2,3) - i dont force you to change 3/4 slider and then circle circle like this but imo some newbie player cant catch something like this, you can keep one but dont use this pattern too much. i see this part can be changed so try change these circles (2,3) become slider instead? easier to catch
01:07:429 (2,3) - same as above

Insane

00:03:736 - same as hard, apply for Normal too if you want
well i like this diff actually but imo this is really Insane diff and i think you need Light Insane for spread. Hard and Insane here have quite huge spread, actually because hard part like 01:05:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - and streams you have in Insane when Hard only just 3/4 sliders and 1/2 sliders (the most hard only triplet).. yep light insane around 3,1 stars would be nice for me

spread from Normal to Hard already nice. just worry about Hard to Insane >_<

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

xxdeathx 2015-02-04T09:32:08+00:00

thank you for star habi!!

Xinely wrote:
~~placeholder~~
random mod

Normal
AR 4,5? having 3 gap different with Hard looks not really good imo done
00:05:121 (2) - just nazi thing but imo, this slider looks kinda curvy that i feel it still can improved from flow. try smoother the curve and arrange like http://puu.sh/fpNEP.jpg? it gives more natural flow imo fix
00:16:429 (3) - i feel the piano on head is important as the repeat has here. how about add whistle too in head? imo it sounds not really bad :p ok
00:19:659 (2) - a little bit curvy too, try smoother it? i feel it will give more natural flow, example http://puu.sh/frhQz.jpg already plays fine, changing this part requires moving everything after orz
00:30:044 (1) - super nazi, 1 grid left for blanket lol fixed even more
00:31:890 (5) - inconsistency spacing here, is it intentional? fixed
00:40:198 (6) - add whistle on head for emphasize the vocal? it sounds better for me fixed for insane too
00:34:659 (2,4) - personally i feel the curve of these sldiers a little bit too curvy, make it a little bit smoother would be nice imo but it's just my taste intended curve
00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for newbie and mapset which doesnt have easy, i feel these rhythms are too long. i'd say remove (4) here to give a little break done
00:55:890 (5) - add finish on repeat? i know the music only drum, but imo the vocal is kinda strong, imo adding finish wont be bad to hear ~ done
00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - fix
01:01:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:08:813 (1) - add finish on head? i hear a weak cymbal here done
01:16:198 (1) - this flow is kinda like anti flow here. the natural flow says better to place in 260,160. just my taste after all moved

Insane
00:03:736 - same as hard, apply for Normal too if you want done
well i like this diff actually but imo this is really Insane diff and i think you need Light Insane for spread. Hard and Insane here have quite huge spread, actually because hard part like 01:05:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - and streams you have in Insane when Hard only just 3/4 sliders and 1/2 sliders (the most hard only triplet).. yep light insane around 3,1 stars would be nice for me orz this song is already easy enough..I don't think the gap between hard and insane is unacceptable

spread from Normal to Hard already nice. just worry about Hard to Insane >_<

I feel patterns in insane are a reasonable upgrade from hard. There isn't much room in between them tbh

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-02-05T01:22:04+00:00

Xinely wrote:
~~placeholder~~

Hard
00:00:506 (1) - instead of in tail, better to add whistle on head. just my taste :C
00:01:659 (3) - if you can add whistle on 00:02:121 (4) - you should add for (3) too for consistency of the music pattern :C
00:02:813 - yep, should add whistle coz the music too
00:03:736 - you have to increase the volume maybe, i think 50% would be nice. currently kinda hard to hear imo
00:05:121 (2) - hmm 1,35x spacing here intentional? imo better to keep the spacing here. move this to 148,20 would fix the spacing and keep the blanket (if you apply 00:05:582 (3) - better move to 160,160 to avoid 1,45x as the minimum spacing for 1,5x here) guess followed some updown it would be better
00:11:006 (4,5) - after those 1/4.. please dont make double 1/4.. tbh double 1/4 harder to catch than triplet.. please make them as 1/4 sldier or remove (4) when we make hard diff normally isn't map like this?
00:13:198 (1) - use same spacing? the design kinda look weird here. i'd say 388,104 and fix the stack for next object if you do
00:15:044 (1) - i think make circle and then 1/1 slider would be better coz piano at 00:15:275 - sounds so loud and feels empty here
00:16:890 (1) - ^ slider tick will cover them, so fine
00:56:236 (2) - stack feels kinda weird. how about give movement at least? no need far movement. just 200,112 i think would be nice
01:16:313 - how about add spinner until 01:18:044 - ? well just my taste but imo the hp decreasing a little bit fast here.. i wonder some newbie player will fail because this part lol
00:43:429 (2,3) - i dont force you to change 3/4 slider and then circle circle like this but imo some newbie player cant catch something like this, you can keep one but dont use this pattern too much. i see this part can be changed so try change these circles (2,3) become slider instead? easier to catch
01:07:429 (2,3) - same as above
same above with 00:11:006 (4,5) - this ^

spread from Normal to Hard already nice. just worry about Hard to Insane >_<

forgot reply wwwww

maybe hard

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Last edited by koreapenguin 2015-02-06T10:36:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

alacat

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alacat 2015-02-05T15:57:08+00:00

As request about diff spread

In my opinion, It has the difficulty gap between Hard and Insane. (It's not too big) So it's not necessary to add difficulty between hard diff and insane.

Then, please try to reduce spacings, remake sliders instead circles (at stream part) or something for spread on Insane diff.

Both diffs are really good to go qualify :3 Good luck !

Edit:

forgot to tell about metadata lol

checked everything, TV size, space ... and so on. So it's fine!

pics :

SPOILER

Official website : http://www.aoieir.com/special/genesis_release/

koreapenguin

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koreapenguin 2015-02-05T16:07:30+00:00

하드 쉽다고 난이도올리라해놓고선 망했네

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2015-02-06T11:09:00+00:00

Thank you very much alacat! I changed several streams into 1/4 sliders and and triples into 1/4 repeat sliders, and reduced spacing at a couple critical areas. I hope spread is better now!

Also being extra careful with metadata after the &Z disqualification xD

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-02-06T14:26:49+00:00

Rechecking

[Insane]

00:57:044 (5) - NC here? this part stream start
01:05:929 (4) - this note don't need imo.
01:09:736 (6) - NC
01:27:506 (1) - this spiner move 01:27:390 - here end 01:29:352 - here batter.

call me back

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Rizia

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Rizia 2015-02-06T16:12:07+00:00

[Insane]

00:13:198 (5) - try whistle
00:30:852 (4) - no any voice here, maybe can ignore it
SPOILER
00:33:275 (6) - didn't stack00:33:275 (6,1) - together is better imo
SPOILER

[K.Penguin's Hard]

Missing Video
00:17:582 - whsitle
00:21:506 - ^
00:29:121 (3) - stack better
00:38:352 (3,4) - suggestion
SPOILER
00:46:082 - remove this clap?
01:11:582 (3) - nc

that all i can find

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-02-06T16:18:39+00:00

orz.. K.P diff video missing forgot..

thanks help Kawaiwkyik!

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2015-02-06T22:38:41+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Rechecking

[Insane]

00:57:044 (5) - NC here? this part stream start fix
01:05:929 (4) - this note don't need imo. fix
01:09:736 (6) - NC fix
01:27:506 (1) - this spiner move 01:27:390 - here end 01:29:352 - here batter. i like 1/2 beat between note and spinner

call me back

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Insane]
00:13:198 (5) - try whistle added
00:30:852 (4) - no any voice here, maybe can ignore it following instruments too
SPOILER
00:33:275 (6) - didn't stack00:33:275 (6,1) - together is better imo fix
SPOILER
that all i can find

Thank you Habi and wkyik!

updated KP's diff too. KP discussed with Habi and fixed everything in wkyik's except 00:38:352 (3,4) because of preference.

missing video baka KP >.<

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-02-06T23:53:15+00:00

alright. good job~ here my first bubbled this

Bubbled

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xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2015-02-06T23:53:53+00:00

Thank you Habi!!

http://puu.sh/fznwT/7c8f37d318.mp3

Rizia

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Rizia 2015-02-07T03:45:34+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Thank you Habi!!

http://puu.sh/fznwT/7c8f37d318.mp3

lol first blood

Rizia

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Rizia 2015-02-07T06:44:05+00:00

some small irc with mapper
everything is fine

Qualified

edit: too many qualified maps today! (8 max), i will qua this when system ok
edit2: is fine now, qualfied

log

2015-02-07 14:34 Kawaiwkyik: i try
2015-02-07 14:35 xxdeathx: let's see
2015-02-07 14:35 Kawaiwkyik: btw in insane 00:49:429 (4) - do you want stop it at 00:49:775 - ? unity with 00:43:890 (4) - 00:45:736 (4) - 00:47:582 (4) - 
2015-02-07 14:37 xxdeathx: fixed
2015-02-07 14:37 Kawaiwkyik: and 00:42:506 (2,3,4,5) - whistle here?
2015-02-07 14:38 xxdeathx: i think it sounds better without
2015-02-07 14:38 Kawaiwkyik: ok
2015-02-07 14:39 Kawaiwkyik: update~

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xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2015-02-07T08:44:41+00:00

Thank you everyone! Got Kawaiwkyik's heart virginity~

http://puu.sh/fAdEH/21b6f81095.mp3

Rizia

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Rizia 2015-02-07T08:49:58+00:00

ok