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Aoi Eir - GENESIS (TV size)

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Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls

xxdeathx wrote:

thanks rtyzen for star!

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi m4m from your queue

[General]
[list][*]At tags: aldnoah zero season 2 ending s2 ed inaho slaine アルドノア・ゼロ koreapenguin
I think it better to use only "season2" tag and delete "s2" why not both?
I guess I'm kinda worng here lol
Well you can keep the tag
I just thinking that if I use "season2" to search for this map the result will come just like when I type "s2" to search for this map, but it not work

Sorry ; ;
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx

HabiHolic wrote:



Modding Time

[General]

  1. None~ \o/
[Normal]

  1. 00:00:506 (1) - i think whistle add only tail batter. head delete whistle please. whistle sounds better on head
  2. 00:04:198 (1) - Sampleset add normal on the head? to emphasize that the music loud.. and delete clap please. clap fits
  3. 00:17:813 (5) - don't need this note. emphasize only vocal here. but other parts don't emphasize vocal
  4. 00:24:044 (3) - Whistle? added
  5. 00:40:198 (6) - add finish on the head. your missing this? i don't hear finish in music
  6. 00:56:236 - 00:56:582 - 00:56:813 - this part add clap batter hitsounding first one added, others don't sound good
  7. 01:07:659 - note here. it's too natural flow is not. added
  8. 01:07:890 (5,1) - swap NC here. i think start vocal (5) slider imo NC every 2 measures, also NC at 01:08:813 (1) - is also vocal
  9. 01:16:198 (1) - you can this note move Right. done
    SPOILER
[fuck slaine]

  1. 00:16:659 (3,4) - Ctrl+G is flow batter imo going for captin flow here
  2. 00:41:121 (1) - why this not use whistle? add please. added
  3. 00:56:236 (1,4) - this change NC? suitable for lyrics flow NC is for 3/4 rhythm change
  4. 01:16:313 ~ 01:18:044 - Don't empty the part. you can add break time and spiner i want to add spinner but the hi-hat is actually too late and not exactly at 01:18:044
  5. 01:27:044 (9) - Overlap exactly please. already stacked o.o
that all.
thank you habi!
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi m4m from your queue

[K.Penguin's Hard]
  1. 00:06:044 (1,2,3) - How about change this to slider like this 00:31:890 (1) - to avoid weird 3/4 spacing things here I never think there are has weird spacing, isn't normal?
  2. 00:20:352 (3,3) - Stack? why D:?
  3. 00:25:313 (4) - I'm not sure here , I can't hearing a beat here if you happen to hear it you can keep it you really should listen the song carefully again, there are has beat
  4. 00:27:736 (4,3) - Stack? why D:?
  5. 01:03:275 (1) - Move anchor point below the red one a bit 1 grid to the left so that the curve here will be better useless
  6. 01:23:582 (1,2,3) - Similiar to 00:06:044 (1,2,3) - same as first line
Good luck :)

HabiHolic wrote:



[K.Penguin's Hard]

  1. 00:00:506 (1) - 아까 노멀에서 언급했던거지만 이건 끝에 휘슬 넣는게 더 잘어울린다고 생각해요 시작 부분보다는
  2. 00:20:582 (1) - 이건 개인적으로 Ctrl+G 하는게 흐름이 더 좋아보이네요 지적하시기전 왜 그렇게 해두었나 앞뒤 패턴 의도를 먼저파악해주세요, 둥그런 슬라 끝에 서클스택되있는거 보셨으면 눈치채셨을텐데
  3. 00:34:659 (2) - 이건 곡선 슬라로 해도 괜찮을듯 싶네요 왜 그래야되는지 이유가없어서 못고치겠 orz
    SPOILER

  4. 00:41:121 (1) - 노멀에서 사용했듯이 커스톰 말고 기본 휘슬이 더 잘어울릴거 같은데.. 제 귀에는 드럼 베이스소리말곤 안들려서
  5. 01:16:313 ~ 01:18:044 - 이 부분은 브레이크 처리하거나 스피너로 채우시는게 좋을듯요 xxdesu 랑 똑같은이유
that all.

awdawdawdawd
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: aldnoahzero2ed.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 42852
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:GENESIS (TV size)
TitleUnicode:GENESIS（TV size）
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:藍井エイル
Creator:xxdeathx
Version:K.Penguin's Hard
Source:Aldnoah.Zero
Tags:aldnoah zero season 2 ending s2 ed inaho slaine アルドノア・ゼロ koreapenguin
BeatmapID:605813
BeatmapSetID:265097

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
>< my forgot star~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
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  • Normal
  1. AR 4,5? having 3 gap different with Hard looks not really good imo
  2. 00:05:121 (2) - just nazi thing but imo, this slider looks kinda curvy that i feel it still can improved from flow. try smoother the curve and arrange like http://puu.sh/fpNEP.jpg? it gives more natural flow imo
  3. 00:16:429 (3) - i feel the piano on head is important as the repeat has here. how about add whistle too in head? imo it sounds not really bad :p
  4. 00:19:659 (2) - a little bit curvy too, try smoother it? i feel it will give more natural flow, example http://puu.sh/frhQz.jpg
  5. 00:30:044 (1) - super nazi, 1 grid left for blanket lol
  6. 00:31:890 (5) - inconsistency spacing here, is it intentional?
  7. 00:40:198 (6) - add whistle on head for emphasize the vocal? it sounds better for me
  8. 00:34:659 (2,4) - personally i feel the curve of these sldiers a little bit too curvy, make it a little bit smoother would be nice imo but it's just my taste
  9. 00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for newbie and mapset which doesnt have easy, i feel these rhythms are too long. i'd say remove (4) here to give a little break
  10. 00:55:890 (5) - add finish on repeat? i know the music only drum, but imo the vocal is kinda strong, imo adding finish wont be bad to hear ~
  11. 00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  12. 01:01:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  13. 01:08:813 (1) - add finish on head? i hear a weak cymbal here
  14. 01:16:198 (1) - this flow is kinda like anti flow here. the natural flow says better to place in 260,160. just my taste after all


  • Hard
  1. 00:00:506 (1) - instead of in tail, better to add whistle on head. just my taste :C
  2. 00:01:659 (3) - if you can add whistle on 00:02:121 (4) - you should add for (3) too for consistency of the music pattern :C
  3. 00:02:813 - yep, should add whistle coz the music too
  4. 00:03:736 - you have to increase the volume maybe, i think 50% would be nice. currently kinda hard to hear imo
  5. 00:05:121 (2) - hmm 1,35x spacing here intentional? imo better to keep the spacing here. move this to 148,20 would fix the spacing and keep the blanket (if you apply 00:05:582 (3) - better move to 160,160 to avoid 1,45x as the minimum spacing for 1,5x here)
  6. 00:11:006 (4,5) - after those 1/4.. please dont make double 1/4.. tbh double 1/4 harder to catch than triplet.. please make them as 1/4 sldier or remove (4)
  7. 00:13:198 (1) - use same spacing? the design kinda look weird here. i'd say 388,104 and fix the stack for next object if you do
  8. 00:15:044 (1) - i think make circle and then 1/1 slider would be better coz piano at 00:15:275 - sounds so loud and feels empty here
  9. 00:16:890 (1) - ^
  10. 00:56:236 (2) - stack feels kinda weird. how about give movement at least? no need far movement. just 200,112 i think would be nice
  11. 01:16:313 - how about add spinner until 01:18:044 - ? well just my taste but imo the hp decreasing a little bit fast here.. i wonder some newbie player will fail because this part lol
  12. 00:43:429 (2,3) - i dont force you to change 3/4 slider and then circle circle like this but imo some newbie player cant catch something like this, you can keep one but dont use this pattern too much. i see this part can be changed so try change these circles (2,3) become slider instead? easier to catch
  13. 01:07:429 (2,3) - same as above


  • Insane
  1. 00:03:736 - same as hard, apply for Normal too if you want
  2. well i like this diff actually but imo this is really Insane diff and i think you need Light Insane for spread. Hard and Insane here have quite huge spread, actually because hard part like 01:05:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - and streams you have in Insane when Hard only just 3/4 sliders and 1/2 sliders (the most hard only triplet).. yep light insane around 3,1 stars would be nice for me

spread from Normal to Hard already nice. just worry about Hard to Insane >_<
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
xxdeathx
thank you for star habi!!

Xinely wrote:

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  • Normal
  1. AR 4,5? having 3 gap different with Hard looks not really good imo done
  2. 00:05:121 (2) - just nazi thing but imo, this slider looks kinda curvy that i feel it still can improved from flow. try smoother the curve and arrange like http://puu.sh/fpNEP.jpg? it gives more natural flow imo fix
  3. 00:16:429 (3) - i feel the piano on head is important as the repeat has here. how about add whistle too in head? imo it sounds not really bad :p ok
  4. 00:19:659 (2) - a little bit curvy too, try smoother it? i feel it will give more natural flow, example http://puu.sh/frhQz.jpg already plays fine, changing this part requires moving everything after orz
  5. 00:30:044 (1) - super nazi, 1 grid left for blanket lol fixed even more
  6. 00:31:890 (5) - inconsistency spacing here, is it intentional? fixed
  7. 00:40:198 (6) - add whistle on head for emphasize the vocal? it sounds better for me fixed for insane too
  8. 00:34:659 (2,4) - personally i feel the curve of these sldiers a little bit too curvy, make it a little bit smoother would be nice imo but it's just my taste intended curve
  9. 00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for newbie and mapset which doesnt have easy, i feel these rhythms are too long. i'd say remove (4) here to give a little break done
  10. 00:55:890 (5) - add finish on repeat? i know the music only drum, but imo the vocal is kinda strong, imo adding finish wont be bad to hear ~ done
  11. 00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:50:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - fix
  12. 01:01:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
  13. 01:08:813 (1) - add finish on head? i hear a weak cymbal here done
  14. 01:16:198 (1) - this flow is kinda like anti flow here. the natural flow says better to place in 260,160. just my taste after all moved


  • Insane
  1. 00:03:736 - same as hard, apply for Normal too if you want done
  2. well i like this diff actually but imo this is really Insane diff and i think you need Light Insane for spread. Hard and Insane here have quite huge spread, actually because hard part like 01:05:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - and streams you have in Insane when Hard only just 3/4 sliders and 1/2 sliders (the most hard only triplet).. yep light insane around 3,1 stars would be nice for me orz this song is already easy enough..I don't think the gap between hard and insane is unacceptable

spread from Normal to Hard already nice. just worry about Hard to Insane >_<
I feel patterns in insane are a reasonable upgrade from hard. There isn't much room in between them tbh
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin

Xinely wrote:

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  • Hard
  1. 00:00:506 (1) - instead of in tail, better to add whistle on head. just my taste :C
  2. 00:01:659 (3) - if you can add whistle on 00:02:121 (4) - you should add for (3) too for consistency of the music pattern :C
  3. 00:02:813 - yep, should add whistle coz the music too
  4. 00:03:736 - you have to increase the volume maybe, i think 50% would be nice. currently kinda hard to hear imo
  5. 00:05:121 (2) - hmm 1,35x spacing here intentional? imo better to keep the spacing here. move this to 148,20 would fix the spacing and keep the blanket (if you apply 00:05:582 (3) - better move to 160,160 to avoid 1,45x as the minimum spacing for 1,5x here) guess followed some updown it would be better
  6. 00:11:006 (4,5) - after those 1/4.. please dont make double 1/4.. tbh double 1/4 harder to catch than triplet.. please make them as 1/4 sldier or remove (4) when we make hard diff normally isn't map like this?
  7. 00:13:198 (1) - use same spacing? the design kinda look weird here. i'd say 388,104 and fix the stack for next object if you do
  8. 00:15:044 (1) - i think make circle and then 1/1 slider would be better coz piano at 00:15:275 - sounds so loud and feels empty here
  9. 00:16:890 (1) - ^ slider tick will cover them, so fine
  10. 00:56:236 (2) - stack feels kinda weird. how about give movement at least? no need far movement. just 200,112 i think would be nice
  11. 01:16:313 - how about add spinner until 01:18:044 - ? well just my taste but imo the hp decreasing a little bit fast here.. i wonder some newbie player will fail because this part lol
  12. 00:43:429 (2,3) - i dont force you to change 3/4 slider and then circle circle like this but imo some newbie player cant catch something like this, you can keep one but dont use this pattern too much. i see this part can be changed so try change these circles (2,3) become slider instead? easier to catch
  13. 01:07:429 (2,3) - same as above
same above with 00:11:006 (4,5) - this ^

spread from Normal to Hard already nice. just worry about Hard to Insane >_<
forgot reply wwwww

maybe hard
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96,204,43890,2,0,P|104:256|80:328,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,304,44813,6,0,L|356:292,2,105,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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219,117,46198,2,0,L|316:125,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,180,46659,6,0,L|421:75,2,105,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,280,47582,2,0,P|396:304|320:288,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,276,48044,2,0,L|296:352,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,255,48506,6,0,L|192:360,2,105,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,164,49429,2,0,P|160:116|144:52,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,36,49890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,108,50121,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,212,50352,6,0,L|268:204,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,136,51044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,168,51275,2,0,P|456:232|432:316,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,356,51967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,264,52198,6,0,L|164:268,1,70,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,332,52659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,332,52890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,256,53121,2,0,L|30:291,2,35,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,53582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,108,53813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,8,54044,6,0,L|284:16,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,54736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,54967,2,0,L|264:272,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,24,55890,5,6,0:0:0:0:
228,60,56236,1,6,0:0:0:0:
324,184,56582,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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428,176,57275,2,0,L|394:179,3,35,0|4|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
356,216,57736,6,0,P|340:284|372:352,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,274,58429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,216,58659,2,0,L|245:220,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,59121,2,0,L|212:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,104,59582,6,0,L|64:108,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,32,60275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,60506,2,0,P|372:108|444:72,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,85,61429,6,0,L|433:190,1,105,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,61890,2,0,L|488:240,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,336,62352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,336,62582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,376,62813,2,0,L|347:370,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,63275,6,0,B|244:280|256:248|256:248|272:212|258:180,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,63967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,164,64198,2,0,L|44:160,2,35,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,260,64659,2,0,L|164:256,3,35,8|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,236,65121,6,0,L|200:344,2,105,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,66044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,40,66506,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,120,66736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,212,66967,6,0,P|136:228|208:212,1,105,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,184,67429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,84,67659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,156,67890,2,0,B|332:208|332:208|316:240|316:240|316:293,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,352,68582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,296,68813,6,0,L|492:220,1,70,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,144,69275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,48,69506,2,0,L|516:56,2,35,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,32,69967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,108,70198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,56,70429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,70544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,70659,6,0,P|186:127|232:196,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,206,71352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,128,71582,1,12,0:0:0:0:
468,264,71929,1,12,0:0:0:0:
320,312,72275,1,12,0:0:0:0:
228,256,72506,6,0,L|136:264,1,70,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,212,72967,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,212,73198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,112,73429,2,0,L|92:56,2,35,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,140,73890,2,0,L|200:84,3,35,8|4|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
236,72,74352,6,0,L|324:64,2,70,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,12,75044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,52,75275,2,0,P|36:104|52:180,2,105,4|6|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,12,76198,5,6,0:0:0:0:
148,32,78736,6,0,L|156:72,2,35,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,92,79198,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,184,79429,2,0,L|104:224,3,35,2|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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88,68,81159,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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alacat
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alacat
As request about diff spread

In my opinion, It has the difficulty gap between Hard and Insane. (It's not too big) So it's not necessary to add difficulty between hard diff and insane.

Then, please try to reduce spacings, remake sliders instead circles (at stream part) or something for spread on Insane diff.

Both diffs are really good to go qualify :3 Good luck !

Edit:

forgot to tell about metadata lol

checked everything, TV size, space ... and so on. So it's fine! :D

pics :
SPOILER


Official website : http://www.aoieir.com/special/genesis_release/
koreapenguin
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하드 쉽다고 난이도올리라해놓고선 망했네
xxdeathx
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xxdeathx
Thank you very much alacat! I changed several streams into 1/4 sliders and and triples into 1/4 repeat sliders, and reduced spacing at a couple critical areas. I hope spread is better now!

Also being extra careful with metadata after the &Z disqualification xD
HabiHolic
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Rechecking

[Insane]

00:57:044 (5) - NC here? this part stream start
01:05:929 (4) - this note don't need imo.
01:09:736 (6) - NC
01:27:506 (1) - this spiner move 01:27:390 - here end 01:29:352 - here batter.


call me back
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Rizia
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Rizia
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:198 (5) - try whistle
  2. 00:30:852 (4) - no any voice here, maybe can ignore it
    SPOILER
  3. 00:33:275 (6) - didn't stack00:33:275 (6,1) - together is better imo
    SPOILER
[K.Penguin's Hard]
  1. Missing Video
  2. 00:17:582 - whsitle
  3. 00:21:506 - ^
  4. 00:29:121 (3) - stack better
  5. 00:38:352 (3,4) - suggestion
    SPOILER
  6. 00:46:082 - remove this clap?
  7. 01:11:582 (3) - nc
that all i can find
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
orz.. K.P diff video missing forgot..

thanks help Kawaiwkyik!
xxdeathx
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xxdeathx

HabiHolic wrote:

Rechecking

[Insane]

00:57:044 (5) - NC here? this part stream start fix
01:05:929 (4) - this note don't need imo. fix
01:09:736 (6) - NC fix
01:27:506 (1) - this spiner move 01:27:390 - here end 01:29:352 - here batter. i like 1/2 beat between note and spinner

call me back

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:198 (5) - try whistle added
  2. 00:30:852 (4) - no any voice here, maybe can ignore it following instruments too
    SPOILER
  3. 00:33:275 (6) - didn't stack00:33:275 (6,1) - together is better imo fix
    SPOILER
that all i can find
Thank you Habi and wkyik!

updated KP's diff too. KP discussed with Habi and fixed everything in wkyik's except 00:38:352 (3,4) because of preference.

missing video baka KP >.<
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
alright. good job~ here my first bubbled this

Bubbled
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xxdeathx
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Thank you Habi!!

http://puu.sh/fznwT/7c8f37d318.mp3
Rizia
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Rizia

xxdeathx wrote:

Thank you Habi!!

http://puu.sh/fznwT/7c8f37d318.mp3
lol first blood
Rizia
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Rizia
some small irc with mapper
everything is fine

Qualified

edit: too many qualified maps today! (8 max), i will qua this when system ok
edit2: is fine now, qualfied

log
2015-02-07 14:34 Kawaiwkyik: i try
2015-02-07 14:35 xxdeathx: let's see
2015-02-07 14:35 Kawaiwkyik: btw in insane 00:49:429 (4) - do you want stop it at 00:49:775 - ? unity with 00:43:890 (4) - 00:45:736 (4) - 00:47:582 (4) - 
2015-02-07 14:37 xxdeathx: fixed
2015-02-07 14:37 Kawaiwkyik: and 00:42:506 (2,3,4,5) - whistle here?
2015-02-07 14:38 xxdeathx: i think it sounds better without
2015-02-07 14:38 Kawaiwkyik: ok
2015-02-07 14:39 Kawaiwkyik: update~
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xxdeathx
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Thank you everyone! Got Kawaiwkyik's heart virginity~

http://puu.sh/fAdEH/21b6f81095.mp3
Rizia
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ok
Flask
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破處
koreapenguin
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wheeeeeeeeeeeeee
Xinely
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lol grats death~
Luna-
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Congratz~ :D

PD: Fuck Slane
Little
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speedranker
grats
CSLM
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CSLM

CloudSplash16 wrote:

speedranker
grats
xxdeathx
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3 weeks >.<
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gratz
and rip f slaine lol
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