Alright as promised, here we go
[ General]
Timing settings are okay.
Make sure tags don't conflict with the rest of the diffs, like AiMod suggests, fix some preview point snapping in the taiko difficulties and, finally, make sure all letterbox boxes are ticked or unticked.
[ -GN's Normal]
00:33:769 (1,3) - Man this blanket here could look better if the two sliders were not almost overlapping. Try spreading 3 out a little bit and move it backwards like shown in the image below. Make sure you readjust some of the spacing afterwards if you choose to follow this piece of advice.
00:36:049 (6,1) - I see no reason why you wouldn't want to follow the sliderpath here and reversing the flow like you're doing here. Will ruin blanket, sure, but the result would be much more appealing in my eyes if you could pull off something like shown next up. If you decide not to follow this suggestion, I would at least suggest to make 1 a little more curvy for a better blanket with circle 4.
00:40:260 (3) - Middle point at x:143 y:239 and endpoint at x:166 y:326 should make this blanket perfect.
00:44:295 (5) - Avoid this sort of slider, please. It's pretty hard to read, especially considering that this is the first difficulty in the set, you should give the 1/2 repeat spam a rest. For this here, I would just go with 2 sliders with 1/2 spacing.
00:45:699 (2,4) - As before, the circle internally overlaps with the slider, making the combination look ugly. Suggestion here is to do the same as above
00:47:979 (3,4) - This sort of spacing can be a little confusing for newcomers. Easiest solution here would be to rotate 4 clockwise enough so that it doesn't overlap with 3, making it also a bit more readable in that aspect. You could flip 3 horizontally on top of that for maximum Kreygasm. Ending result could look like this:
00:50:084 (3,4,5) - Here we have another overlap that could easily be avoided. Moving 4 a bit downwards so that the spacing will allow you to move 5 a bit to the left and readjusting the blanket without the overlap seems to be the better choice here. End result:
00:53:418 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Having those basically muted is unintuitive and in my opinion silly. Doesn't serve for a buildup any better than it would be if you added some hitsounds to it.
00:58:506 (4) - Moving the midpoint to x:149 y:178 and the endpoint to x:111 y:217 in this slider should pretty up this blanket quite a lot.
01:00:084 (2) - Why not go for a double blanket here?! Make the slider's head blanket with the slider 4 I mentioned above and rotate this here slider 2 enough so that it blankets with 1! Wouldn't that be cool? Here like so:
01:05:699 (3) - Move this slider to x:275 y:299 and see the magic
01:09:734 (3,1) - This looks pretty neat, nice!
01:15:918 (1) - No point starting this 1/8 afterwards. Noone has enough reaction time at this level for 1/8 spacing. Would move it 1/4 apart instead.
01:29:909 - Not sure if you need this green line for anything. Remove it if you want.
01:41:137 (1,2,1) - Now this looks more like it! Nice!
01:45:348 (3,1) - Kaguya disapproves of this blanket and also of the copypasta that has taken place here. Just moving the middle point of slider 1 to x:259 y:221 makes the blanket lots more delicious.
01:53:242 (3) - These sliderpoints (along with others so far) have given me the impression that you have done a rush job to this. The imperfect blankets speak for themselves. Middlepoint at x:257 y:337 and endpoint at x:184 y:371 fix your blanket.
01:57:277 (2) - Same suggestion as previously, use 2 sliders.
02:02:892 (5) - Same as above actually!
02:03:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Since you seem to have copypasted this entire section, I guess fixing the stuff from the previous section identical to it and copypasting them here again works.
02:13:418 (1,2,3,4) - You seem to have fixed the issue here as opposed to your previous section.
02:31:663 (1,1) - This combinations looks pretty bad-looking. Why don't you make orange blanket blue's sliderend? Flow could get improved as well! Like so:
02:34:514 (1) - Same as previously, 1/4 spacing at least.
Endnote: I found so many spacing issues that mentioning them here could make me starve. The 1/2 spread across 0.8 and 1.1 in the DS is really not optimal for Normal difficulties, especially ones that are considered the easiest difficulty of the set. Some nice ideas here but they feel unrefined.
[ Ayu's Hard]
I suppose timing has changed and you haven't resnapped anything. Fix that issue.
00:55:699 (2,3,1) - This might be a little hard to read. I'm not really sure what could be done here to prevent that since I feel this fits the most. What I can think of only is removing the reverse from 02:13:416 (1) - this and making a 1/2 slider in place where the sliderend was at in the timeline so it should look like this:
00:57:275 (4) - Curve this just a tiny little more for a better blanket with the circle. Moving the middle point down a few pixels should do the trick.
01:12:012 (2,5) - I find this overlap not so good-looking. Why not try a stack there?
01:29:909 - Same as the Normal diff, yo don't need this green line.
02:14:293 (2,3,1) - Same issue as the copypasted part of this.
This diff is really good, barely found anything!
[ Tesla's Insane]
00:26:225 (5,1) - I don't get the space created here. This can be mapped to vocals with 1/2 sliders.
00:27:804 (6) - Moving this to x:329 y:119 makes a better blanket.
00:44:295 (3,4,5,6) - Yeah as I told you before, I have huge issues with this. 1/4 with silenced sliderends is not good, especially on an Insane level difficulty. Making these 1/2 circles or making the sliderends at least audible would be better.
00:54:821 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are barely audible. Increase volume at least a little bit. Flowbreak on the stream part is also a little too hard for Insane dificulty.
01:12:716 (5,6) - Not sure how I feel about these after seeing the stream before it. I assume you're looking for variety but sacrificing consistency for variety resulting in making the map harder is to be reconsidered.
01:44:821 (5,1) - Same as previously.
02:35:874 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Yeah this is too much. Nerf this by a lot.
Endnote: Too much 1/4 in this. Too much indeed. The Hard difficulty has no 1/4 whatsoever and right afterwards we jump to 1/4 kicksliders. Pretty big space in difficulty if you ask me, it shows in the star rating as well. Nearly two whole stars difficulty gap is too much and quite frankly unrankable. As a final note I suggest that you remove plenty of 1/4 from this.
[ Pinky]
00:23:242 (2) - Bend this a little more, more curvy, more sexy, more blanket!
00:44:295 (3,4,5,6) - Not really sure for this difficulty, I guess we can let this slide since you consider this an X diff probably.
01:02:190 (3,5) - Blanket yo. x:225 y:43 best blanket.
01:29:909 - I don't know why this green line is even here anymore :/
01:47:628 (4,5) - Why don't you blanket this?
Endnote: This is a pretty good difficulty. It even has way less kicksliders than Insane, which proves that you can make something difficult out of this song without them. Nice ideas here.
[ General]
Timing settings are okay.
Make sure tags don't conflict with the rest of the diffs, like AiMod suggests, fix some preview point snapping in the taiko difficulties and, finally, make sure all letterbox boxes are ticked or unticked.
[ -GN's Normal]
00:33:769 (1,3) - Man this blanket here could look better if the two sliders were not almost overlapping. Try spreading 3 out a little bit and move it backwards like shown in the image below. Make sure you readjust some of the spacing afterwards if you choose to follow this piece of advice.
00:36:049 (6,1) - I see no reason why you wouldn't want to follow the sliderpath here and reversing the flow like you're doing here. Will ruin blanket, sure, but the result would be much more appealing in my eyes if you could pull off something like shown next up. If you decide not to follow this suggestion, I would at least suggest to make 1 a little more curvy for a better blanket with circle 4.
00:40:260 (3) - Middle point at x:143 y:239 and endpoint at x:166 y:326 should make this blanket perfect.
00:44:295 (5) - Avoid this sort of slider, please. It's pretty hard to read, especially considering that this is the first difficulty in the set, you should give the 1/2 repeat spam a rest. For this here, I would just go with 2 sliders with 1/2 spacing.
00:45:699 (2,4) - As before, the circle internally overlaps with the slider, making the combination look ugly. Suggestion here is to do the same as above
00:47:979 (3,4) - This sort of spacing can be a little confusing for newcomers. Easiest solution here would be to rotate 4 clockwise enough so that it doesn't overlap with 3, making it also a bit more readable in that aspect. You could flip 3 horizontally on top of that for maximum Kreygasm. Ending result could look like this:
00:50:084 (3,4,5) - Here we have another overlap that could easily be avoided. Moving 4 a bit downwards so that the spacing will allow you to move 5 a bit to the left and readjusting the blanket without the overlap seems to be the better choice here. End result:
00:53:418 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Having those basically muted is unintuitive and in my opinion silly. Doesn't serve for a buildup any better than it would be if you added some hitsounds to it.
00:58:506 (4) - Moving the midpoint to x:149 y:178 and the endpoint to x:111 y:217 in this slider should pretty up this blanket quite a lot.
01:00:084 (2) - Why not go for a double blanket here?! Make the slider's head blanket with the slider 4 I mentioned above and rotate this here slider 2 enough so that it blankets with 1! Wouldn't that be cool? Here like so:
01:05:699 (3) - Move this slider to x:275 y:299 and see the magic
01:09:734 (3,1) - This looks pretty neat, nice!
01:15:918 (1) - No point starting this 1/8 afterwards. Noone has enough reaction time at this level for 1/8 spacing. Would move it 1/4 apart instead.
01:29:909 - Not sure if you need this green line for anything. Remove it if you want.
01:41:137 (1,2,1) - Now this looks more like it! Nice!
01:45:348 (3,1) - Kaguya disapproves of this blanket and also of the copypasta that has taken place here. Just moving the middle point of slider 1 to x:259 y:221 makes the blanket lots more delicious.
01:53:242 (3) - These sliderpoints (along with others so far) have given me the impression that you have done a rush job to this. The imperfect blankets speak for themselves. Middlepoint at x:257 y:337 and endpoint at x:184 y:371 fix your blanket.
01:57:277 (2) - Same suggestion as previously, use 2 sliders.
02:02:892 (5) - Same as above actually!
02:03:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Since you seem to have copypasted this entire section, I guess fixing the stuff from the previous section identical to it and copypasting them here again works.
02:13:418 (1,2,3,4) - You seem to have fixed the issue here as opposed to your previous section.
02:31:663 (1,1) - This combinations looks pretty bad-looking. Why don't you make orange blanket blue's sliderend? Flow could get improved as well! Like so:
02:34:514 (1) - Same as previously, 1/4 spacing at least.
Endnote: I found so many spacing issues that mentioning them here could make me starve. The 1/2 spread across 0.8 and 1.1 in the DS is really not optimal for Normal difficulties, especially ones that are considered the easiest difficulty of the set. Some nice ideas here but they feel unrefined.
[ Ayu's Hard]
I suppose timing has changed and you haven't resnapped anything. Fix that issue.
00:55:699 (2,3,1) - This might be a little hard to read. I'm not really sure what could be done here to prevent that since I feel this fits the most. What I can think of only is removing the reverse from 02:13:416 (1) - this and making a 1/2 slider in place where the sliderend was at in the timeline so it should look like this:
00:57:275 (4) - Curve this just a tiny little more for a better blanket with the circle. Moving the middle point down a few pixels should do the trick.
01:12:012 (2,5) - I find this overlap not so good-looking. Why not try a stack there?
01:29:909 - Same as the Normal diff, yo don't need this green line.
02:14:293 (2,3,1) - Same issue as the copypasted part of this.
This diff is really good, barely found anything!
[ Tesla's Insane]
00:26:225 (5,1) - I don't get the space created here. This can be mapped to vocals with 1/2 sliders.
00:27:804 (6) - Moving this to x:329 y:119 makes a better blanket.
00:44:295 (3,4,5,6) - Yeah as I told you before, I have huge issues with this. 1/4 with silenced sliderends is not good, especially on an Insane level difficulty. Making these 1/2 circles or making the sliderends at least audible would be better.
00:54:821 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are barely audible. Increase volume at least a little bit. Flowbreak on the stream part is also a little too hard for Insane dificulty.
01:12:716 (5,6) - Not sure how I feel about these after seeing the stream before it. I assume you're looking for variety but sacrificing consistency for variety resulting in making the map harder is to be reconsidered.
01:44:821 (5,1) - Same as previously.
02:35:874 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Yeah this is too much. Nerf this by a lot.
Endnote: Too much 1/4 in this. Too much indeed. The Hard difficulty has no 1/4 whatsoever and right afterwards we jump to 1/4 kicksliders. Pretty big space in difficulty if you ask me, it shows in the star rating as well. Nearly two whole stars difficulty gap is too much and quite frankly unrankable. As a final note I suggest that you remove plenty of 1/4 from this.
[ Pinky]
00:23:242 (2) - Bend this a little more, more curvy, more sexy, more blanket!
00:44:295 (3,4,5,6) - Not really sure for this difficulty, I guess we can let this slide since you consider this an X diff probably.
01:02:190 (3,5) - Blanket yo. x:225 y:43 best blanket.
01:29:909 - I don't know why this green line is even here anymore :/
01:47:628 (4,5) - Why don't you blanket this?
Endnote: This is a pretty good difficulty. It even has way less kicksliders than Insane, which proves that you can make something difficult out of this song without them. Nice ideas here.