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Ayane - GO Love&Peace

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Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
oops i mean hard had too many finishes imo !!! oops~
Shadren
Featured Artist
531 posts
Joined March 2011
Shadren
Raose's mod

Raose wrote:

[General]

[Shadren's Hard]

maybe add a spinner for variation in scoreboard? added
  1. 01:23:494 (4,1) - think it'd be better if the slider curved left, not right, to follow the flow of 01:22:557 (2) I don't think so
  2. 01:33:104 (1,2) - hmmm this doesn't flow too well for me D: if you want a jump, how about deleting the repeat and place a circle next to (2)?
    changed

Mei's mod
[Shadren's Hard]

  • you've got 3 useless green line as well, check your timing
  1. 00:33:572 (1,2,3) - the spacing here is kind misleading , try this?

  2. 00:51:150 (3,4,5) - this is also kind misleading, try yhis

  3. 01:32:635 (3) - umm this is kind hard... if i were you i will stack it with 01:33:104 (1) -
  4. 01:36:619 (6,1) - switch NC
  5. 01:38:729 (4,1) - ^
Changed all
[notice]

Thank you for the mods, guys!

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osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Ayane - Go Love&Peace.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75057
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16233,46233
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:GO Love&Peace
TitleUnicode:GO→Love&Peace
Artist:Ayane
ArtistUnicode:彩音
Creator:Gleipnir
Version:Shadren's Hard
Source:超次元ゲイム ネプテューヌ mk2
Tags:Shadren Hyperdimension love&peace ed ending playstation geimu Choujigen Game Neptune
BeatmapID:515170
BeatmapSetID:202661

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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Video,211,"Hyperdimension Neptunia Mk2.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Skyhmer
372 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Skyhmer
SPOILER

Mei wrote:

hihihi

[insane]
  1. 00:03:104 useless green line here, remove it Fixed
  2. 01:14:354 ^ Fixed
  3. 00:28:416 (3) - move up one grip? Fixed
  4. 00:48:807 (2,3,4) - try this? i think it will fits the vocal better
    Picture
    I really think this doesnt fit the music that well, especally a note at 00:49:393
  5. 00:49:979 (1,2) - how about remove 2 and give a repeat to one, it will sounds much better I feel thats way too simple.
  6. 00:58:182 (3) - ctrl+g? Nice! Added
  7. 01:04:275 (4) - why not use your patterns to perform how rhythm is? you use hitsounds to make it sounds like ok, but it is the hardest diff and i suggest you to use more circles and sliders but not use hitsounds to instead them . umm what i mean in a word, try this
    Picture
    I see what you mean. Changed
  8. 01:29:119 (6) - move to x228 y196? Done
  9. 01:36:854 (1) - add a clap? That would not be consistant with the rest
  10. 01:41:541 it will be better if you add 2 1/2 slider here Pretty sure there is no way of this without making it look "messy"


[hard]
  1. 01:14:354 useless green line here Fixed
  2. 00:33:572 (1,1) - curve up gived better flow
    Picture
    Done
  3. 00:54:197 (2) - move to x420 y334? Done
  4. 01:21:854 (1) - add a finish? Not needed
  5. 01:36:854 (1) - add a finish? Not needed


[Shadren's Hard]

  • you've got 3 useless green line as well, check your timing
  1. 00:33:572 (1,2,3) - the spacing here is kind misleading , try this?
    Picture
  2. 00:51:150 (3,4,5) - this is also kind misleading, try yhis
    Picture
  3. 01:32:635 (3) - umm this is kind hard... if i were you i will stack it with 01:33:104 (1) -
  4. 01:36:619 (6,1) - switch NC
  5. 01:38:729 (4,1) - ^


[normal]
  1. 01:01:229 green line ;w; Fixed
well, i think both hard and insane need some more works. It plays fine but many overlaps and unconsistent spacing make your map looks kind of messy(maybe it is only for me). Anyway this is a pretty good map for a new mapper, good luck!

Ty for the mod!
Last edited by Skyhmer , edited 2 times in total.
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
-- Remove "love&peace" from tags since it already is in the title.
-- Personally ending the combo at 01:42:479 feels better to end the map.
-- Your sliderslide.wav are all unrankable. Use this instead.

Normal:

00:07:557 (2,1) - The distance is quite big even there is a time gap between these objects. Distance can be easily lessen by rotating (1).
00:18:104 - 00:25:604 - 00:29:354 - Remove Finish. Rather adding a clap fits the music better.
00:40:604 - 00:48:104 - 00:55:604 - Missing clap.
00:50:682 - 00:52:557 - Remove clap. It doesn't fit in the song since the actual sound appears 1/2 earlier.
00:58:885 (1) - Remove NC. There isn't much reason to leave 00:57:479 (1) as a single combo object.
01:03:104 (1) - 01:06:854 (1) - Remove NC since previously you were adding new combo each 2 stanza, and the pattern now is breaking consistency.
01:15:291 (1,1,1) - 01:30:291 (1,1,1) - Avoid using combo spams in your easiest difficulty! Using several new comboes reduce readability since no follow point appear between notes. If you want to use set the start of the kiai as a new combo, then only removing the combo of the second note will be fine.
01:18:104 (1) - 01:21:854 (1) - 01:25:604 (1) - 01:33:104 (1) - 01:36:854 (1) - Several remove NC suggestions to follow the 2 stanza term. The current combo cycle feels a little too short.
01:43:182 - 01:45:057 - Remove clap since it doesn't fit the song.

Since this is your easiest difficulty, the most recommended way is to maintain all distance consistently. Still in this case, variation can be made by setting the distance spacing as 0.9x in 00:01:229 - 00:16:229, and 1.0x from 00:16:229 to the end of the map. Distance spacing can be checked at the upper-right part of the screen when selecting an object as you will already know. Please check all of your spacing to avoid inconsistency such as 00:17:166 (2), 00:34:510 (6), 00:37:791 (2) etc. Will give a second check for the distance after your fix.

Shadren's Hard:

00:02:166 (3,4) - Distance can be maintained.
00:58:182 (2,3) - This jump doesn't fit the song.
01:48:221 (1) - End 1/2 earlier, or mute the end of the spinner. The hitsound isn't fitting the music well.

The gap with [Normal] and [Shadren's Hard] is big considering Shadren's version is easier than the other [Hard]. [Normal]'s rhythm is mostly consisted with 1/1, and the spread could be narrowed if Normal used more 1/2 objects. However that will make the difficulty inappropriate as the easiest one of the set, leading a need of a new [Easy] difficulty. The most possible solution I can think here is making [Shadren's Hard] a little easier by removing notable jumps such as 00:17:166 (3,4) - 00:21:385 (3,1) - 00:26:541 (4,5) and triple streams such as 00:14:236 (2) - 00:29:236 (5) - 00:34:861 (8).

Hard:

-- Remove unused inherited section at 00:04:979 for the sliderslide.
-- Use slidertick rate 2. It will work for nicely for overall 1/1 sliders, especially on 01:38:729 (1,2).

00:17:869 (1) - Maintain your distance consistently.
00:36:150 (5) - Maintain spacing. If this was a mini jump, it wasn't effective enough.
00:40:604 (1) - ^
00:47:166 (1) - NC doesn't seems that necessary here.

Insane:

00:12:479 (1,2) - sv change of 0.5x feels too much than the song. You should make these sliders a little more faster.
00:32:400 (3,4) - 00:39:900 (3,4) - Personally this jump feels a little random. It will be better if you just keeped the distance.
00:34:041 (3,4) - Again, this jump didn't seem to fit the song nicely. Jumps usually fits nicely when it heads to a strong beat. In this case, a jump appearing between 00:33:572 (2,3) would feel better.
01:04:744 (6) - Removing this note will fit the music better.
01:11:775 (4,1) - Leaving more space between these objects will be better to play.
01:42:479 (1,2,3) - Maintaining the distance as 0.8x will feel more consistent with 01:43:416 (4,5,6).
01:48:221 - I also think adding a spinner here won't be a bad idea to give more variation of score.

Hope your future maps can look more polished!
Call me back after fixing spacing issues in Normal difficulty, and spread issue in Shadren's Hard.
Santtu
539 posts
Joined November 2012
Santtu
Hi M4M, as we talked :)

Insane

00:04:041 (3) - improve this blanket
00:04:744 (4) - stack with 00:04:041 (3) -
00:04:979 (1,2,1,2) - I would like it more if these 1 - 2 notes are further from each others
suggest img
00:14:705 (4) - improve blanket
00:19:275 (2) - move to x336 y100
00:19:861 (5) - move to x377 y279
00:20:447 (2) - if this is blanket; improve it
00:23:260 (5) - improve blanket
00:32:869 (1) - ^
00:33:572 (2) - ^
00:34:744 (6) - move to x303 y212
00:34:861 (7) - move to x311 y248
00:40:135 (4) - move to x346 y103, or just improve 00:40:369 (1) - blanket
00:41:307 (3) - if you accepted moving to note, make this slider's end dot to be at same spot with it
this is what i meant
00:41:775 (4) - if you accepted two earlier fixes, move to x316 y206
00:53:611 (5) - move to x309 y131
00:54:666 (4) - if this is blanket, improve it
00:56:072 (3) - should this be mirrored from 00:54:666 (4) - ? if yes, fix it to same
01:02:166 (3) - should this be in same y as 01:01:697 (1) - ?
01:04:744 (6) - move to x204 y84
01:07:322 (2) - move to x66 y63, keep same form
01:09:197 (1) - should this be lined with 01:08:260 (4,5,6,7,8) - ? it's in different y coordinate
01:20:682 (3) - looks like blanket :d
01:21:619 (5) - move to x279 y129
01:31:111 (5) - move to x456 y181
01:31:697 (2) - move to x229 y148
01:32:166 (4) - blanket?
01:34:861 (8) - move to x282 y105
01:39:432 (2) - move to x254 y191, so distants are 1,20x to prev and next, it's not so stringent to be just in the middle. Do as you want :P
01:40:369 (4) - remember to stack this with ^ if you accepted it
01:45:525 (5) - why not stack with 01:44:119 (7) - ?

Good luck with map! :)
(if you have something in your mind, just PM me in game)
Skyhmer
372 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Skyhmer
SPOILER

smsh150 wrote:

Hi M4M, as we talked :)

Insane

00:04:041 (3) - improve this blanket Its already perfect
00:04:744 (4) - stack with 00:04:041 (3) - Keeping similar with 00:02:166 (3,4)
00:04:979 (1,2,1,2) - I would like it more if these 1 - 2 notes are further from each others I'd prefer to do that too but it currently works into 00:08:729 (1) in a way
suggest img
00:14:705 (4) - improve blanket Fixed
00:19:275 (2) - move to x336 y100 Adjusted 00:19:744 (4) So I could keep blanket and still line them of like you wanted
00:19:861 (5) - move to x377 y279 Its fine
00:20:447 (2) - if this is blanket; improve it Done
00:23:260 (5) - improve blanket Changed in Sonnyc's mod
00:32:869 (1) - ^ ^
00:33:572 (2) - ^ ^
00:34:744 (6) - move to x303 y212 Thats litteraly 1 grid
00:34:861 (7) - move to x311 y248 ^
00:40:135 (4) - move to x346 y103, or just improve 00:40:369 (1) - blanket Changed in Sonnyc's mod
00:41:307 (3) - if you accepted moving to note, make this slider's end dot to be at same spot with it
this is what i meant
00:41:775 (4) - if you accepted two earlier fixes, move to x316 y206
00:53:611 (5) - move to x309 y131 One grid again... Impossible with DS snap
00:54:666 (4) - if this is blanket, improve it Its not
00:56:072 (3) - should this be mirrored from 00:54:666 (4) - ? if yes, fix it to same Its already mirrored
01:02:166 (3) - should this be in same y as 01:01:697 (1) - ? Fixed
01:04:744 (6) - move to x204 y84 Done
01:07:322 (2) - move to x66 y63, keep same form All of them are rotated by the same degrees already, I wont touch them to screw it up.
01:09:197 (1) - should this be lined with 01:08:260 (4,5,6,7,8) - ? it's in different y coordinate Fixed
01:20:682 (3) - looks like blanket :d Looks like it, but intended.
01:21:619 (5) - move to x279 y129 Did something close
01:31:111 (5) - move to x456 y181 One grid again.
01:31:697 (2) - move to x229 y148 Kept because of distance spacing
01:32:166 (4) - blanket? Fixed
01:34:861 (8) - move to x282 y105 Sure
01:39:432 (2) - move to x254 y191, so distants are 1,20x to prev and next, it's not so stringent to be just in the middle. Do as you want :P Too easy.
01:40:369 (4) - remember to stack this with ^ if you accepted it
01:45:525 (5) - why not stack with 01:44:119 (7) - ?Done

Good luck with map! :)
(if you have something in your mind, just PM me in game)

Thx for the mod
Shadren
Featured Artist
531 posts
Joined March 2011
Shadren

Sonnyc wrote:

Shadren's Hard:

00:02:166 (3,4) - Distance can be maintained.
00:58:182 (2,3) - This jump doesn't fit the song.
01:48:221 (1) - End 1/2 earlier, or mute the end of the spinner. The hitsound isn't fitting the music well.

The gap with [Normal] and [Shadren's Hard] is big considering Shadren's version is easier than the other [Hard]. [Normal]'s rhythm is mostly consisted with 1/1, and the spread could be narrowed if Normal used more 1/2 objects. However that will make the difficulty inappropriate as the easiest one of the set, leading a need of a new [Easy] difficulty. The most possible solution I can think here is making [Shadren's Hard] a little easier by removing notable jumps such as 00:17:166 (3,4) - 00:21:385 (3,1) - 00:26:541 (4,5) and triple streams such as 00:14:236 (2) - 00:29:236 (5) - 00:34:861 (8).
Fixed all. Deleted all jumps, triplets. Changed diff name to "Advanced". Thank you for the mod!

Gleipnir, check tags pls

Diff
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 75057
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:GO→Love&Peace
Artist:Ayane
ArtistUnicode:彩音
Creator:Gleipnir
Version:Shadren's Advanced
Source:超次元ゲイム ネプテューヌ mk2
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Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Good luck! You'll need it.
Cerulean Veyron
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Cerulean Veyron
Go for it, Gleipnir! ^u^b
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Oops there was an audio in the video.. Popping for now.
Skyhmer
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Topic Starter
Skyhmer

Sonnyc wrote:

Oops there was an audio in the video.. Popping for now.
Couldn't even keep a bubble for half an hour.
Fixed

Gray Veyron wrote:

Go for it, Gleipnir! ^u^b
Ty Veyron!
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
haha repaired!
Delis
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Joined May 2012
Delis
ahhh there's already bubbled, im lateeee

[General]
i hope it's fine

[Insane]

  • 01:04:275 (4) - uh, I just don't really like slider that looks kinda messy for 1/2, what i wanted you to is like this http://puu.sh/eWI6T/76c9e38a44.png but whatever, this is your map.
    01:29:822 (2) - add a clap at 2nd reverse (red tick)?
    01:34:744 (7) - clap i guess
    01:41:307 - do you not wanna map this break? that's fine but it makes more comfortable if you mapped here too. this can be applied for other diffs as well, normal is really okay as is though.
    01:48:104 - raise the volume a bit? the finish feels low, apply every diff too if you've done this.
[Hard]

  • 00:21:150 (5,6,7,8) - this is totally overmapped for Hard difficulty, there's no object to make a stream in the music, just map it as song appears.
[Normal]
NewCombo usage is sometimes wrong like 00:36:854 (1) - / 00:44:354 (1) -, make it consistency if these aren't intended.

  • 00:01:229 (1) - make consistent spacing till 00:08:729 (1) - should be better :)
    00:12:479 (1) - can you stack this on 00:10:604 (3) - head? it makes more clearn, this is a bit important thing for lower diffs =D
    00:37:791 (2) - spacing!
    01:10:135 (2) - drum clap here? as there's clap each 2/4 white ticks in this part.
meii18
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meii18
sry I can't mod this during is bubbled . Good Luck !
Skyhmer
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Topic Starter
Skyhmer
SPOILER

Delis wrote:

ahhh there's already bubbled, im lateeee

[General]
i hope it's fine

[Insane]

  • 01:04:275 (4) - uh, I just don't really like slider that looks kinda messy for 1/2, what i wanted you to is like this http://puu.sh/eWI6T/76c9e38a44.png but whatever, this is your map. Changed.
    01:29:822 (2) - add a clap at 2nd reverse (red tick)? Sure.
    01:34:744 (7) - clap i guess Hmm, added
    01:41:307 - do you not wanna map this break? that's fine but it makes more comfortable if you mapped here too. this can be applied for other diffs as well, normal is really okay as is though. Yeah im gonna to leave it, I found it more fitting for this.
    01:48:104 - raise the volume a bit? the finish feels low, apply every diff too if you've done this. Increased for the sake of the finish.
[Hard]

  • 00:21:150 (5,6,7,8) - this is totally overmapped for Hard difficulty, there's no object to make a stream in the music, just map it as song appears. Removed
[Normal]
NewCombo usage is sometimes wrong like 00:36:854 (1) - / 00:44:354 (1) -, make it consistency if these aren't intended. Was intended but Ill change it cause your reasoning makes sense.

  • 00:01:229 (1) - make consistent spacing till 00:08:729 (1) - should be better :) Done
    00:12:479 (1) - can you stack this on 00:10:604 (3) - head? it makes more clearn, this is a bit important thing for lower diffs =D Tried to for a bit, but decided I couldn't without making it look very ugly in appearance
    00:37:791 (2) - spacing! Oops, nice catch.
    01:10:135 (2) - drum clap here? as there's clap each 2/4 white ticks in this part. Added

Ty for still doing the mod!
Delis
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Delis
ranked ~ or I should have waited for 2days http://www.ign.com/games/hyperdimension ... a-20015310
Len
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Len
congratzzzzzzzzzzz
Rizia
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Rizia
gratzzz
VINXIS
Featured Artist
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VINXIS
OHBOY
meii18
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meii18
Yay ! Congratz ! Sry that I didn't mod it ! ;_;
Mint
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Mint
congrats with your 1st ranked :)
Winnie
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Winnie
Congratz :)
Skyhmer
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Skyhmer
Thanks guys, it really means a lot considering it took 5 months^^

Delis wrote:

ranked ~ or I should have waited for 2days http://www.ign.com/games/hyperdimension ... a-20015310
I was actually planning on that, but never got a chance tell before it got ranked lol.
Cerulean Veyron
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Cerulean Veyron
Well, mine took 6 months :p Gz anyways, looks neat than what i last time saw this map~ :)
Skyhmer
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meii18
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meii18
To get my first rank took me only 3 months . Anyway gratz ! :3
Eni
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Eni
:) Grats on your first rank! :)

edit: so close lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2667769
Virgo
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Congratz :D
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