Hello
as requested
General:
delete SB\Thumbs.db
SB\Lyrics\sb.png is not used delete it or use (:
Advanced:
I'll go for general things here instead of detailed mod because i think map lacks some really core stuff.
1. Slow maps require more aesthetic part than fast ones, so you must be careful
*with slider shapes, e.g. 00:18:244 (5) is rough
*with variety you doing, e.g. 00:22:931 (1,3) - look at this transition in shapes, not nazi just bad
2. Flow
*watch you flow 00:22:931 (1) - 00:37:460 (5) - 15 seconds just clockwise flow
*00:44:490 (1,2,3) - thing like
http://puu.sh/aqe07/5c14c99654.jpg check
t/863293. Hitsounding
*just soft whistle ever white tick is quite boring
4. Difficulty
*I see a lot of potential in this song to have at least 2.5+/3+ stars diff, you should think about mapping/adjusting diff
You may try to contact -Bakari- to consult deeper about things i mentioned it seems he's interested in this mapset. Or ask me if you want.
Wish you best of luck with this.