Yeaaah, sorry for the delay... ): It would be nice if you could reply to my mod, write down stuff you did and did not fix and WHY. Thank you <3
General thoughts
Beginner
Advanced
Overall it was a nice mapset although you need to work on your slider shapes on the Advanced difficulty a bit more, otherwise looks nice~
- Overall you got a nice mapset here, but your difficulty settings between those two difficulties are way too big and it needs to be fixed. So, for this very reason you should raise up your beginners settings up a notch. Example settings could be 2-3-2
- Yeaah, Fycho covered the general stuff otherwise so fix that ^^
- 00:04:184 (4) - Since beginner difficulties are kind of slow, usually a combos that tend to go over 5 or 6 are pretty long. (this is just my opinion, of course) So, you might want to consider adding a NC here.
- 00:11:683 (3) - ^ You get the idea by now (hopefully), if you agreed to do this, keep doing this
- 00:08:871 - This beat here is quite powerful and it's not very nice to ignore it, consider adding a whistle here. (this means that you have to add whistles to similar places like this also to keep your whistle pattern consistent)
- 00:16:370 (2) - I think overall this slider is fine, shape-wise.... not that much. Really the curve isn't the best because of that redpoint and it also creates an awful bump there that shouldn't be there. Here's an example picture for you how to improve this shape!
- 00:21:994 (6,1) - Do you mind fixing the blanket here?
- 00:41:678 (3) - The slider here has a nice shape, I like it very much but the main reason I brought this up is because it can be better in a way. As you can see here http://puu.sh/7co9X.jpg the blanket isn't perfect and again, the slider has a weird bump. Do it like this instead to fix both of them?
- 00:59:488 (5) - Usually sliders that end on a big white tick is bad, because of this you're kind of ignoring the powerful beat there that could be played but it's not ''wrong'' so feel free to keep it.
- 01:26:671 (3,4) - Blanket?
- 01:49:168 (3) - You forgot a whistle?
- This was very well done, great job!
- Because the song is so calm, a map deserves easy and rather calm settings, right? Just lower your HP + OD by one tick, I think this would make it better when playing but it's your choice.
- I don't see you using any whistles at the intro, why is that? Remember to add them, please!
- 00:18:244 (5) - The curve of this slider is a bit bad, sorry, this is a way to improve it though!
- 00:21:525 (4) - The second point in this slider feels really random and it makes it pretty bad, try removing it?
- 00:25:743 (1) - Sliders like these can be done only with 1 point since we have the new system, so this would apply to 00:30:899 (2) - , 00:52:927 (1,3) - and so on...
- 00:51:989 (5,6) - Remove the NC here to be consistent with 00:48:240 (1,2) - and 00:44:490 (1,2) - ?
- 00:56:676 (1,3) - These shapes aren't the most beautiful again, to improve this, you might want to try something like this instead!
Shaping done like this --> http://puu.sh/7coSP.jpg - 01:39:795 (3) - The shape again D: 01:44:481 (5) - same
- 02:10:259 (6) - ^
- To be consistent with your Beginner difficulty, end your slider 02:24:787 - here.
Overall it was a nice mapset although you need to work on your slider shapes on the Advanced difficulty a bit more, otherwise looks nice~