• 
  01:36:025 (4) - Maybe move this to the head of this slider that starts at 01:30:400 (1) for a slightly neater blanket?
  
  02:20:556 (1) - I would suggest moving the start of this spinner to 02:21:025 to start with the voice and make it end at 02:21:025 (1) .. Preferably with no hitsound or a very quiet whistle

• 00:13:558 (3) - Add a whistle on the head and tail of this slider?
  
  00:19:650 (2) - Remove this slider and take the slider at 00:21:525 (4) and Ctrl+H to make a more symmetrical look?
  
  Like this?

  
  
  00:22:931 (1) - I would suggest putting the head of this slider at the same location of where 00:21:056 (3) was for a slightly neater layout? :3
  
  00:25:743 (1) - Remove whistle o:
  
  00:33:242 (4) - Remove whistle o3o
  
  00:33:711 (5) - ^ ...
  
  00:46:365 (4) - It's just couple of nazi pixels off to the right from being symmetrical with 00:45:428 (3), but... QQ that pixel... Try taking the slider at 00:45:428 (3) and flipping it vertically instead at where 00:46:365 (4) is...? For a neater look Of course it'd mean adjusting the spot where 00:48:240 (1) is, but I think it'd look a bit cleaner...
  
  01:31:827 (2) - I think it would sound better if you moved this to 01:32:296 (2) O:
  
  01:33:233 (3) - Move to 01:33:702 (3) to match with the suggestion above ^

Xellie wrote:

Advanced
00:15:901 (2,3) - I think the whistle hitsounds here sound weird
(ok so I'm noticing that you have whistles on a lot of sliders and I feel like it's being overused) Ok, fixed.
01:21:985 (4) - this slider looks a little strange to me, the shape is kinda meh LOL. I didn't know that I had this slider in this kind of shape. Fixed
01:30:421 (1) - I think the curve on this is a tad harsh cause of the song Fixed.
01:37:451 (4,5,1) - I would stack the two notes on the slider end Nope, sorry.
01:43:310 (3) - this feels weird cause you were using singles for triples and stuff till now and now it's a kick slider, I'd put singles to keep the map consistent
01:47:059 (2) - same thing maybe I had it on triples before, but I changed it into this, 'cause is better imo.
01:51:922 (1,2,3,1) - these notes aren't on any ticks at all, snap them onto the right ticks ( I looked in 1/8 and saw them on ticks there, it feels weird to me xD) I know, in this part, the timing of the song is irregular, I tried my best to do it like it is now.
01:58:308 (6) - same thing as before
02:15:414 (1) - it feels weird that in the other diff you mapped till the end and had this spinner later than this diff

Overall I like it but at the same time find this difficulty weird where it's kinda in between a normal and hard. The thing I said about the kick sliders I realize you started using them a couple times but I'd still say to make them singles.

Hope I helped some \(>w<)/ good luck with the map ^^ Thank you!

Akami- wrote:

Hi, as requested. ^^
I'm not good at modding so dont take it seriously.


Advanced:
02:15:414 (1) - You can do something different than spinner IMO. ^^ - Fixed.
02:21:273 - Start spinner here. - I moved it o 02:19:164 (1) -

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Hope this will help, if not sorry.
I tried do my best.
Good luck. ^^ - Thx.

1. delete Thumbs.db from sb directory
2. bottom side of lyrics images cutted https://puu.sh/emRiX/6ffcba7939.jpg :\
3. seems like sb.png is unused
4. huh, sb is not widescreen :/ I don't really see a reason to make simple sb without widescreen support now

1. Timing is wrecked :\
2. You can try this mp3 https://puu.sh/en25D/6eea46c4ed.mp3 it have one glitch but well...
   https://puu.sh/en2a3/af672699d8.png

1. HP 2 AR 3 OD 2 on easy for better spread also current settings in unreasonable low
2. just minor suggestions to fix ds 00:15:432 (1,2) // 02:02:290 (2,3)

1. from 00:00:435 (1) to 00:23:869 (2) few 1/1 rhythm sliders will not hurt
   I have some 1/4 rhythm suggestions but doubt it can be done with current mp3\timing, so you should take care about this first then ask me to recheck alright, we did irc mod

Sieg wrote:

[SB]

1. bottom side of lyrics images cutted https://puu.sh/emRiX/6ffcba7939.jpg :\ - Miraculously I found old PSD so I fixed it.
2. seems like sb.png is unused - Removed
3. huh, sb is not widescreen :/ I don't really see a reason to make simple sb without widescreen support now -Fixed.

[General]

1. Timing is wrecked :\
2. You can try this mp3 https://puu.sh/en25D/6eea46c4ed.mp3 it have one glitch but well...
   https://puu.sh/en2a3/af672699d8.png - Fixed.

[Beginner]

1. HP 2 AR 3 OD 2 on easy for better spread also current settings in unreasonable low - Fixed.
2. just minor suggestions to fix ds 00:15:432 (1,2) // 02:02:290 (2,3) - Fixed.

[Advanced]

1. from 00:00:435 (1) to 00:23:869 (2) few 1/1 rhythm sliders will not hurt - Added.

Xgor wrote:

Checking the SB to see if it's ready!

Well one thing that's very noticeable is that that you haven't removed the background and because you cover it up with a black background the SB load skyrockets up to a constant 4.0x
If you follow this guide(t/55177) You can remove it and then SB in your background at the end instead. Also because the default background when it's removed is black you won't need black.png - Fixed.

It's also a good idea to remove the transparency on pj.png baka.png and diff.png - Fixed.

Some of your backgrounds are slightly misplaced. Like cutie002 is placed 319,236 in the SB. Look at the osb and fix so they are at 320,240. - I checked the osb and all the backgrounds are already set at 320,240


Yeah. these SB issues is a biit too much. I promise to re-bubble when you fixed them though.

1. Your timing is wrong, this is a simple timing song which has one red lines, bpm is 64, offset=328. The other timing points is useless. For 00:26:578 (1) -, though inst is off, but the main soundtrack and the vocal are fine so no need to add redlines. And for01:19:078 -, drum and vocals are actually at ticks but you added a timing point that made it complicated.
2. According to ranking criteria, There must not be any unnecessary transparency around storyboarded images, so crop and resize them as possible. 5.png, baka.png, diff.png and pj,png don’t meet this rule, please crop them.
3. We usually don’t use album name as source. Ranking criteria writes: Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series.
   So please move “Shrek 2” to tags

1. Remove Thumbs.db from folder.
2. 00:15:328 –what’s the point to use fountain here? It's not a beat that very strong.
3. Disable letterbox for all diffs( by fixing code in *.osu file)

1. 01:31:265 –I don’t recommend you use drum sampleset’s default sliderslide as “slidertick”, it doesn’t fit the music and it’s not the tend to use hitsounds. the sliderhitsound is a “hold” beat, which brings a bad feeling when playing

1. 00:30:328 –meaningless fountain, please remove it.
2. 00:45:328 (1,2) –remove whistles in the sliders’ body, it’s not the tend to use hitsounds, and they sound a bit noisy.
3. 00:50:015 (2) -^
4. 01:15:796 (2,4) –Try to make them a same shape for better view
5. 01:18:999 (6) –I think you miss a nc here, the combo up to10 which is too long for your diff

Fycho wrote:

Hello, hi.

[Reasons for Popping]

1. Your timing is wrong, this is a simple timing song which has one red lines, bpm is 64, offset=328. The other timing points is useless. For 00:26:578 (1) -, though inst is off, but the main soundtrack and the vocal are fine so no need to add redlines. And for01:19:078 -, drum and vocals are actually at ticks but you added a timing point that made it complicated. - As Sieg said, I won't do any changes to timing.
2. According to ranking criteria, There must not be any unnecessary transparency around storyboarded images, so crop and resize them as possible. 5.png, baka.png, diff.png and pj,png don’t meet this rule, please crop them. - Meaningless for me, but if you insist. Cropped.
3. We usually don’t use album name as source. Ranking criteria writes: Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series.
   So please move “Shrek 2” to tags - Aha. Shrek 2 is a movie, not an album title.

[Additional Modding]

~General~

1. Remove Thumbs.db from folder. - There is nothing there. Check it one more time. (I know it's a hidden file by Windows and I have activated opinion to see those hidden system files. Yes I checked everywhere.
2. 00:15:328 –what’s the point to use fountain here? It's not a beat that very strong. - *sigh* ok. removed
3. Disable letterbox for all diffs( by fixing code in *.osu file) - Fixed.

~Beginner~

1. 01:31:265 –I don’t recommend you use drum sampleset’s default sliderslide as “slidertick”, it doesn’t fit the music and it’s not the tend to use hitsounds. the sliderhitsound is a “hold” beat, which brings a bad feeling when playing - I think it's okay for me. Well, it's not my diff so I need to wait what Bakari will say about this.

~Advanced~

1. 00:30:328 –meaningless fountain, please remove it. - sure.
2. 00:45:328 (1,2) –remove whistles in the sliders’ body, it’s not the tend to use hitsounds, and they sound a bit noisy. - well, ok.
3. 00:50:015 (2) -^ - ^
4. 01:15:796 (2,4) –Try to make them a same shape for better view - Well, i tried. Check it.
5. 01:18:999 (6) –I think you miss a nc here, the combo up to10 which is too long for your diff - Fixed.

To be honest, placement and patterns of “Advanced diff” can be improved a lot, I suggest you get 2~3 mods then call me back for recheck, sorry for inconvience.

1. 01:58:218 (4,5) - There's a spacing mistake and it should be fixed.

Andrea wrote:

~Advanced~

1. 01:58:218 (4,5) - There's a spacing mistake and it should be fixed.

Sorry to come here just for saying this, but I noticed it while playing. ;w;

Natsu wrote:

not unrankable, but is really confused to play:



I guess this have to be fixed, anyways that's the purpose of qualified category.

Disqualification reason:

Natsu wrote:

not unrankable, but is really confused to play:



I guess this have to be fixed, anyways that's the purpose of qualified category.

01:58:218 (4,5) - spacing error. While this is usually not a reason to disqualify a map it is too obvious and disctracting in a slow map like this one.

Suggestions:

p3n wrote:

Disqualification reason:

Natsu wrote:

not unrankable, but is really confused to play:



I guess this have to be fixed, anyways that's the purpose of qualified category.

01:58:218 (4,5) - spacing error. While this is usually not a reason to disqualify a map it is too obvious and disctracting in a slow map like this one.

- Fixed...

1. 01:11:578 (1) - can you reduce the volume here just a bit? maybe 25% spinner sounds a bit loud, of course go back to normal volume in 01:15:328 (1) -
2. Just to make sure, are this little jumps on purpose: 01:15:796 (2,3) -, 01:28:453 (4,5) -, 01:52:828 (1,2) - ?
3. 02:17:203 add whistle? is in the music
4. 02:19:078 (7) - same as above add whistle, since you have one on beginner, btw the rhythm in beginner follow the music a lot better than the one here, maybe try:
   
   

1. 00:22:828 (1) - add whistle (since you have one in advanced)
2. 00:26:532 (1) - whitle in the tail, same reson as above
3. 00:52:828 (1) - missing whistle in the head
4. 00:56:578 (3) - ^
5. 02:17:203 (3) - add whistle in the head, since is in the music

calll me back (forum or in game pm) when you reply to this

Natsu wrote:

Hi

Advanced:

1. 01:11:578 (1) - can you reduce the volume here just a bit? maybe 25% spinner sounds a bit loud, of course go back to normal volume in 01:15:328 (1) - - Okay.
2. Just to make sure, are this little jumps on purpose: 01:15:796 (2,3) -, 01:28:453 (4,5) -, 01:52:828 (1,2) - ? - Yes.
3. 02:17:203 add whistle? is in the music - Sure.
4. 02:19:078 (7) - same as above add whistle, since you have one on beginner, btw the rhythm in beginner follow the music a lot better than the one here, maybe try: - Hmm...ok.
   
   

calll me back (forum or in game pm) when you reply to this

EDIT: Applied mod for Beginner.
Edit: remember to check p3n's suggestion about sb - checked.

Natsu wrote:

oh ok, check them careful Pjecoo, some of the suggestions make hitsounds inconsistent others are good tho, send me a pm back again xD

Natsu wrote:

oh ok, check them careful Pjecoo, some of the suggestions make hitsounds inconsistent others are good tho, send me a pm back again xD

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Advanced

1. 00:07:828(1)- Add whistle on slider's head - Ok.
2. 00:19:546(2)- Remove whistle from slider's reverse arrow because it don't fit the beat - Nope.
3. 00:21:421(4)- ^ - Nope.
4. 01:23:765(3)- Add clap on slider's head because clap emphasis - Ok.
5. 01:27:984(3)- Remove whistle from slider's head - Nope.