Hi Hi, here to mod cause you pmed me ^^ I'm not the best at modding non-insanes but I'll try my best :3
Beginner
00:22:931 (1) - you could blanket the 6 better with this
00:45:427 (1) - blanket the 4 better
01:13:548 (4) - you could blanket 3's slider end a little bit better
01:38:857 (2) - you might be able to blanket the 3 but I'm not sure
Overall the map is really nice, there were a couple overlaps that I noticed that I would usually say to fix but I get that it's because of the DS.
one last thing is that this 01:14:954 (5) - I'm pretty sure that easys don't usually use notes on red ticks but I think it should be fine
Advanced
00:15:901 (2,3) - I think the whistle hitsounds here sound weird
(ok so I'm noticing that you have whistles on a lot of sliders and I feel like it's being overused)
01:21:985 (4) - this slider looks a little strange to me, the shape is kinda meh
01:30:421 (1) - I think the curve on this is a tad harsh cause of the song
01:37:451 (4,5,1) - I would stack the two notes on the slider end
01:43:310 (3) - this feels weird cause you were using singles for triples and stuff till now and now it's a kick slider, I'd put singles to keep the map consistent
01:47:059 (2) - same thing maybe
01:51:922 (1,2,3,1) - these notes aren't on any ticks at all, snap them onto the right ticks ( I looked in 1/8 and saw them on ticks there, it feels weird to me xD)
01:58:308 (6) - same thing as before
02:15:414 (1) - it feels weird that in the other diff you mapped till the end and had this spinner later than this diff
Overall I like it but at the same time find this difficulty weird where it's kinda in between a normal and hard. The thing I said about the kick sliders I realize you started using them a couple times but I'd still say to make them singles.
Hope I helped some \(>w<)/ good luck with the map ^^
Beginner
00:22:931 (1) - you could blanket the 6 better with this
00:45:427 (1) - blanket the 4 better
01:13:548 (4) - you could blanket 3's slider end a little bit better
01:38:857 (2) - you might be able to blanket the 3 but I'm not sure
Overall the map is really nice, there were a couple overlaps that I noticed that I would usually say to fix but I get that it's because of the DS.
one last thing is that this 01:14:954 (5) - I'm pretty sure that easys don't usually use notes on red ticks but I think it should be fine
Advanced
00:15:901 (2,3) - I think the whistle hitsounds here sound weird
(ok so I'm noticing that you have whistles on a lot of sliders and I feel like it's being overused)
01:21:985 (4) - this slider looks a little strange to me, the shape is kinda meh
01:30:421 (1) - I think the curve on this is a tad harsh cause of the song
01:37:451 (4,5,1) - I would stack the two notes on the slider end
01:43:310 (3) - this feels weird cause you were using singles for triples and stuff till now and now it's a kick slider, I'd put singles to keep the map consistent
01:47:059 (2) - same thing maybe
01:51:922 (1,2,3,1) - these notes aren't on any ticks at all, snap them onto the right ticks ( I looked in 1/8 and saw them on ticks there, it feels weird to me xD)
01:58:308 (6) - same thing as before
02:15:414 (1) - it feels weird that in the other diff you mapped till the end and had this spinner later than this diff
Overall I like it but at the same time find this difficulty weird where it's kinda in between a normal and hard. The thing I said about the kick sliders I realize you started using them a couple times but I'd still say to make them singles.
Hope I helped some \(>w<)/ good luck with the map ^^