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Generally
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Generally
- 00:49:129 (2) - Now this moment is very quiet and I believe you could increase the volume to 45% or something similar. But please, think about increasing the volume because it's really hard to hear anything than music when it is a music game so I want to hear something more, for example hitsounds. XD
- 02:32:532 (1) - I think you should use 1/8 with the last spinner in the whole mapset. I think the spinner should end exactly here because now it doesn't sound too well.
- I am just wondering there's few hitsounds like whistles. Really, I think you could make more whistles at the beginning because now it feels so empty when you play the map.
- 00:00:796 (2) - You're not using a correct distance now because it's not consistent. Fix the spacing because it's unrankable.
- 00:07:463 (2) - Again a wrong spacing as before.
- 00:10:241 (5) - As above.
- 00:15:796 (4,5) - As above.
- 00:19:129 (7) - Because of the piano notes I think this slider would include a whistle at the very end like a few moments ago, just to improve the consistency and the rhythm.
- 00:22:463 (2,3,4,5) - Again - those sliders have wrong spacing! :< And I am wondering if the (3) slider would have a whistle at the very end too just to emphasize the music.
- 00:29:129 (2,3,4,5) - As above.
- 00:35:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - As above. I don't know what kind of DS you're using here but it's veeeeery insonsistent.
- 00:45:796 (2) - Wrong spacing.
- 00:48:574 (1) - I am just wondering if adding a 'whistle' at the end of the slider would make a better impression at the players.
- 00:49:685 (2) - Wrong spacing.
- 00:50:796 (4) - And I am wondering if it could have a whistle too, just to show this moment is very impressive. Now we can feel the music but I believe it can be shown a bit more.
- 00:51:352 (5,6) - Wrong spacing again!
- 00:58:018 (6,7) - There's an incorrect spacing too. And I think you can improve the music feeling by adding two whistles at (7) - at the very beginning and at the very end of the slider. What do you think about it?
- 01:02:463 (1) - Sorry for being so nazi but I really think these two sliders could have whistles at the beginning too. Just a stupid thing but I love hitsounding to the piano moments and I love to show the piano nature by adding extra whistles or other hitsounds, you know.
- 01:03:574 (2,3,4,1) - Anyways that moment has a wrong spacing too. ;_;
- 01:07:463 (2,3,4,5) - As above.
- 01:16:629 (2,4,5) - As above.
- 01:23:018 (3,6,7) - As above.
- 01:29:685 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - As above.
- 01:44:129 (2,4) - As above.
- 01:58:018 (3,4,5,6,1) - As above.
- 02:05:796 (2,3,4,5,6) - As above.
- 02:14:129 (4,5) - As above.
- 02:19:129 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - As above.
So everything except the spacing is a suggestion. The spacing must be fixed if you think about a ranked map, because it must be consistent. Generally the flow is not the best but I can see that you know something about mapping. Not bad.
- Consider reducing AR to 7. IMO it's good in the accurate way, but people may say it's just a little bit too fast for such a calm song. But it's just a future suggestion. Maybe ask people if AR8 is too high or not.
- 00:19:129 (1) - Well... To be honest, I think it'd follow the music better if you add a whistle sound at the beginning of the slider, instead of the end of that.
- 00:51:907 (6,7,8,9) - I am just wondering if you could add some more whistles in moments like that. I think adding more matching whistles would improve your map a lot because now I can feel an emptiness when I play your map.
- 01:02:741 (2,3,4) - Is the triplet really required? I mean - I like triplets, but not in such innocent and calm songs. It just breaks the melody IMO. ;_; The same thing: 01:29:407 (2,3,4) -
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