From my queue
Good luck with your map
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- 00:19:129 (7) - You've got a lot of unnecessary slider points here. The same curve could be achieved with just 3. A few more of your sliders are like this in both diffs and it's just messy. If you don't change them in this map, at least for future maps make sliders without spamming points.
- 00:41:352 (8,9) - The flow here feels a bit off, consider making these symmetric to the previous slider/circle (not the slider curve, just make the slider start point symmetric with the previous slider's end point)
- 01:16:629 (2) - Would look better if it was blanketed (and since you're breaking the flow here with it anyway, there's no reason not to)
- 01:23:018 (3,4,5) - The (not quite) linear pattern here looks off. Consider having them flow in a circular motion out of the slider. Maybe something like this? (or the reverse of this having it concave instead of convex, basically what you have but more pronounced)
- 01:29:685 (2,3) - The blanket here is a little off.
- 02:13:018 (3) - Consider rotating this about 15 degrees counter-clockwise so it flows better.
- 02:24:685 (8,9) - Blanket
- 00:23:018 (3) - Would flow better if you rotated it a few degrees clockwise.
- 00:35:796 (2,3) - These feel unbalanced. Consider adjusting the curve on 3 so it matches.
- 01:02:741 (2,3,4) - There's nothing to indicate 3 in the music, but I guess it's ok as it is. (Same goes for the rest of the triples)
- 01:13:018 I just chose this because it was the largest gap, but there are quite a few sections which you left unmapped that, in my opinion, would make the map a lot nicer to play if they were filled in.
- 01:27:463 (1) - Consider increasing the spacing between this and the previous slider as you've got a new combo and another instrument coming in here.
- 01:43:574 (1) - Copy/paste is bad. Try to come up with a new set of patterns for the ending.
Good luck with your map