1. World's End - 4Key (4,51 stars, 3580 notes)

CTB by Razor Sharp
Taiko by Stefan
Standard by captin1

Pharos21 wrote:

OK
HI HI Ho~... ^.^

Sorry for the delay.. ^.^

here the mod.. 1st time handeling marathon >.<

before applying my mod.

uncheck =
*Letterbox During Break (mania don't use this)

The mod
colom
1.2.3.4

MOD

00:32:776 (32776|1,32940|2) - Ctrl J Done
00:35:727 (35727|2) - move to 2 Done

00:42:011 (42011|0,42066|1,42120|2,42175|3,42229|0,42284|1,42339|2,42393|3,42448|0,42503|1,42557|2,42612|3,42667|0,42721|1,42776|2,42831|3,42885|0,42940|1,42994|2,43049|3,43104|0,43158|1,43213|2,43268|3,43268|1,43268|0) - start at 00:41:956
00:43:213 (43213|1,43213|0) - move to whiteline above Done

no other problem found..

GL ^.^

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4k: |0|1|2|3|

-Kousei- wrote:

Hi! From My Queue.

Layout
4k: |0|1|2|3|

Worlds End

You should add Kiai times, if you don't know what is this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kiai_Time Done

1. 00:29:005 (29005|2) - Why a jackhammer here? Move this in 0 or 3, 3 is better Done
2. 01:16:874 (76874|3) - You're following the sax? Split this LN into 2 to do this. see this Done
3. 01:23:923 (83923|0) - This LN is incorrect because the note in the song starts at 01:23:923 (83923|0) - so I think you have to use only 3 columns for streams and one for this note Done, i think
4. 04:15:071 - Same as up see this Done
5. 04:18:022 - ^ see thisDone
6. 04:23:268 (263268|3) - I think it sould start here 04:23:268 (263268|3) - Same Times, dont understand this mod :c
7. 04:22:284 (262284|0,263268|3,263615|1,263615|2) - Equalize the end of these notes please Done
8. 05:36:237 (336237|3) - Make this finish a bit after to make sense of delay see this

Done

Starry- wrote:

hi feerum~

Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing: ☒

1. I don't see the point of a second red timing point. Delete that, and make the first offset slightly earlier. Can't give you exact values right now since no headphones .

Audio: ☑
BG: ☒

1. Irregular aspect ratio for resolution. I suggest you make it 1024x768 or 1366x768.

Metadata: ☒

1. Add tags. 'Sentimental Skyscraper' is the translation, also add 'emotional' 'cosmic mind' 'aqua trytone' etc.
2. Diff name Worlds End -> World's End

Preview Point: ☑
AiMod: ☑

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[Worlds End]

00:17:858 (17858|3) - Prefer if this little part was to follow pitch. Try:
00:17:858 (17858|3) - Move to 0
00:18:186 (18186|0) - Move to 3 -Done


00:21:464 (21464|0) - Quite surprising jackhammer as nothing suggests it in the music. Move to 1.-Done

00:28:678 (28678|1) - Pitch - move this to 3. Then,
00:29:005 (29005|3,29169|2,29333|1) - Move this triple 1 left for playability. -Done

00:30:481 (30481|1,30645|3,30809|1,30973|3) - Random repeat, try:
00:30:809 (30809|1) - Move to 2,
00:30:973 (30973|3) - Move to 0.
00:31:300 (31300|1) - Then I guess you can move this to 3 then, for pitch. -Done

00:33:923 (33923|1) - Move to 2, balance.-Done

00:38:022 (38022|3,38022|2,38022|0) - Keep in mind we're still only mapping to piano and drums, so three notes is unnecessary here.

00:41:874 (41874|0) - This 1/6 pattern starts really abruptly. I suggest doing a build up to it. To do that:
00:40:645 (40645|0) - Make this a 1/4 stream until 00:41:956 (41956) - . Then start using 1/6.
With really fast streams like this, you really need a good buildup. And make sure it always starts on that white tick, not the blue tick before. Thanks, Danke

00:43:678 (43678|1) - No noise, delete.
00:43:841 (43841|0) - ^
00:44:497 (44497|1) - ^ - All Done

00:47:530 (47530|3) - Move to 0, plays nicer. Maybe you can rearrange pattern after, too. -Done

00:51:464 (51464|1,51464|3) - Add a note at 0 for consistency.-Done

01:00:317 (60317|0) - Much better example of a buildup into 1/6!- Done

01:04:087 (64087|1) - Add note, noise, at 1.-Done

01:04:989 (64989|3) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:10:481 (70481|0,70645|0,70809|0,70973|0,71137|0) - Too cluttered in this column, maybe put a few notes elsewhere.-Done

01:12:366 (72366|2) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:12:694 (72694|2) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:17:899 (77899|2) - You're mapping lots to the beat, then randomly map this instead. The beat then kinda suddenly stops because of it. If you wanna map an LN here, then sure, but snap it to the red tick and at notes at:
01:17:858 (77858|1) - Add 1
01:17:940 (77940|0) - Add 0
To carry on the beat.You'r right, done

01:19:415 (79415|3) - Add note 3, noise.-Done

01:25:645 (85645|1) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:26:464 (86464|2) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:26:956 (86956|1,87120|1) - Noises are very inaudible here if anything, probably best to delete and make the other notes chords.

Etc.

I'm not going to pick out every single time there isn't a noise, thats just too long
You're going to have to do it yourself, just listen carefully in areas like this with lots of triples / streams.
To help, go View -> Volume, then adjust the hitsound volume fairly low. This'll help you listen to the parts without noise.
Thanks, Done

01:52:284 (112284|3) - Move to 2, then make a jack with the LN on 3. (since this is the style you're going for) -Done

From the 2:07~ section, why randomly go into drum hitsounds? kinda pointless imo. -Done, i think

03:13:760 (193760|0) - Maybe make this a chord at 2-3 instead? -Done

03:43:923 (223923|2,223923|1,223923|0,223923|3) - Defo no need for 4 notes here, remove one.-Done

04:03:432 (243432|1) - Move to 0 for balance.-Done

04:25:910 (265910|0) - Move to 1 or 3, hand balance.-Done

04:27:221 (267221|0,267221|1,267221|2) - In this section I don't see why you use 3 note chords, very quiet/mellow sorta section. Tone it down a bit -Done

05:07:713 (307713|0,307713|2,307795|1,307795|3,307877|1,307877|0,307877|2) - Things like these I can't even do. Big diff spike at the end of a 5 min map usually is bad ;w; try to make this a bit more playable. Eg. 05:07:795 (307795|1) - Delete this. Do it for the rest of these patterns too imo.-Yeah i was very uncertain when i was mapping this Part, it realy was to hard. So it's done

[]

Overall just try to be consistent in some parts using 4 chords and 3 chords, and also try not to map triples to sections where there's no noise. Pretty good map otherwise though <3 goodluck~

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

Hi! Here is modding from forum!

first, i recommand to use 1024x768 or 1366x768 size as BG. your current BG is not reasonable for ranked.-Sone

second, you need to change song name. Kanshou no Matenrou is not correct.

since the song is doujin song, you need to follow doujin song title. It's Aqua Trytone.-Done

third, the original song is not theme of reiuji utsuho. so i recommand to change bg something related to hijiri byakuran.

but.. hmm, please don't use original bg of this doujin album.. haha, it's 17+ perhaps..-Done

and. you need to work hitsounding further. it's really important thing.

[World's End]

Click!

• 
  
  * 00:01:301 - Well, since you didn't use time break, i suggest to add some notes here. here has sound to emphasize.
  
  * 00:15:235 - 00:17:038 - Move some notes to 3 for pattern balance -Done
  
  * 00:19:661 - down green line timing to here, the timing doesn't follow beatsnap.-Done
  
  * 00:47:803 (47803|3) - move to 1/4 correct beatsnap -Done
  
  * 00:59:005 - i suggest to start to use 1/4 stream from here. i guess it will be better to fit and represent song. -Done
  
  * 00:59:579 (59579|2,59661|1) - Ctrl + H for pattern balance -Done
  
  * 01:02:448 - http://puu.sh/eeMKZ/acd1af875e.jpg hmm nvm if you don't like -Well, i think as is is now it's good, but thanks
  
  * 01:02:940 - add notes here too -Done
  
  * 01:10:645 (70645|1) - move to 1 01:10:809 (70809|0) - move to 2 -Done
  
  * 01:14:333 (74333|2,74415|1) - Ctrl + H -Done
  
  * 01:17:038 (77038|2) - if you follow instrument, you should delete it and 01:16:874 (76874|3) - increase LN length to 01:17:202 - here -Done
  
  * 01:23:869 - add on 3 and delete 01:23:923 (83923|2) - it -Done
  
  * 01:23:923 - down yellow timing line here. -There it was! But i change it 30min ago! Okay done
  
  * 01:25:235 - ^
  
  * 01:46:219 - ^ - both done
  
  * 01:50:645 - http://puu.sh/eeNND/9d9274b06c.jpg -Done
  
  * 01:46:219 - 02:07:202 - i don't recommend to use hitnormal sound here.. it's not fit, and check green line
  
  * 02:07:202 - green line problem -Done
  
  * 02:15:235 (135235|2) - move to 2 cuz u using 3 notes on 3 column -Done
  
  * 02:25:563 - i think stream starting is here -Your right, done
  
  * 02:45:891 - 02:46:546 - here has good instrument sound to emphasize. don't leave notes here. i recommand to add more -Done
  
  * 02:51:300 (171300|0,171464|2) - same reasona as above instrument sound suggestion. -Done
  
  * 03:01:137 (181137|1) - contract LN length to 03:01:300 - here cuz of short instrument sound -Done
  
  * 03:03:923 (183923|0) - increase LN length to 03:04:251 - here -Done
  
  * 03:49:333 (229333|2,229415|2) - i think there is no good sound to emphasize sound by putting jackhammer. re-arrange please-Done
  
  * 03:57:858 - add notes
  
  * 04:00:153 - add note and it can follow vocal sound -both done
  
  * 04:05:727 (245727|2) - move to 4 -Done
  
  * 04:07:038 (247038|2) - Ctrl + H -Done
  
  * 04:13:596 - http://puu.sh/eePlr/8a5daa5766.jpg it should be like it to follow instrument sound or re-arrange. i just pointed out timing
  
  * 04:18:760 - add on 1 -Done
  
  * 04:23:615 - hmm, i don't know why u used red line here. delete please and consider about this 04:23:514 (263514|1,263615|1) - jackhammar - Yeah.. while mapping it sounds like there was a diff offset, i delete it now it's fine
  
  * 04:54:762 - http://puu.sh/eePLj/4ff1c86208.jpg Done
  
  * 05:26:565 - i don't recommend to use normal hitsound sound here too
  
  * 05:36:237 (336237|3) - i prefer to contract LN length 05:37:057 - here -Done

gl

Hellgert wrote:

from Queue

will not mention diff name becuase it was only 1

00:22:284 - add note on 2 -Done
00:32:612 (32612|3) - move to 1 -Done
00:35:891 (35891|1,36055|2) - ctrl+h -Done
00:44:743 (44743|0) - move to 4 -Done
01:00:317 (60317|0,60372|1,60426|2,60481|3,60535|2,60590|1,60645|0,60699|1,60754|2,60809|3) - suggest to remap -Done
01:22:503 (82503|1,82557|2,82612|3,82667|2,82721|1,82776|0,82831|1,82885|2,82940|3,82994|2,83049|1,83104|0,83158|1,83213|2,83268|3,83322|2,83377|1,83432|0,83486|1,83541|2,83596|3,83650|2,83705|1,83760|0,83814|1,83869|2) - and this too,really hard to read this thought -i think the stream is good, but thanks
02:02:776 (122776|0,122940|1,123104|0,123268|1,123432|0) - reverse those -Done
02:06:055 - you forget to put 1 note -Done
02:25:563 - add note -Done
03:12:940 - ^ -Done
03:16:874 - ^ -Done
03:20:809 - ^ -Done
03:22:120 - ^ -Done
03:27:366 - ^ -Done
04:07:858 - 04:12:776 - those section has no triple,so turn those quad to triple to make easy -Done
05:17:366 - add triple -Done
05:19:989 - ^ -Done
05:22:612 - ^ -Done

Marirose wrote:

Hey Feerum o/
from my queue
here's the mod

col=1,2,3,4

World's End

00:42:721 - the stream here,i think it should be 1/12 here lol -I think i let the stream how it is ^_^
00:49:497 - sound here is similar as 00:48:841 - (actually a bit different,but its not really heavy sound,so i recommand to use double notes here
,remove 00:49:497 (49497|2) - Done
00:50:809 (50809|2) - same reason,remove -Done
00:51:956 - according to ur idea,it must be double right? -Done
00:52:120 (52120|1) - remove this -Done
00:53:268 (53268|2,53268|1,53268|0,53432|0,53432|2,53432|3) - umm,all right this pattern is okay, 00:53:268 (53268|0) - remove this will better
then the strong beat start at 00:53:760 - ,i think you could use 3 notes for heavy hit from here -Done
00:54:743 - if i were you, i ll use double here for better play experience -Done
00:55:071 - advice w/ http://puu.sh/ermvV/6e74b70a7b.jpg
complain:

00:55:399 (55399|3,55399|2,55399|0) - 3notes for the strong beat,
00:55:071 - and 00:55:235 -each line double notes is okay

-This is great! Thanks!!

00:56:792 (56792|2) - i think you follow the drum sound here,its correct but not comfortable,use 50% speed to here, you ll find it is clearly start at 00:58:022 -
but,it is also not very comfortable...so,i recommand you can try to catch this beat start 00:59:005 - ←really really strong beat and vocal start,better to play Yeah.. for now i let it how it is.. when a 2nd mod says the same i will change it!

01:00:372 (60372|3,60426|2,60535|0,60590|3,60699|1,60754|0,60863|2,60918|1,61027|3,61137|1) - you make the pattern as stream,but attention,these note are "ghost"notes,cuz no sound here,plz remove - Thanks! Done!

01:01:300 - 1/6 started here is right Yes!


01:00:317 - until 01:01:628 - here's my advice http://puu.sh/erocz/0f08c3c474.jpg Thanks *-*

01:02:612 - a LN starts here,try to change 01:02:612 (62612|2,62940|2) - them I try it, hope it's right xD

01:04:087 - a bass(plz dont ignore this sound,just like 01:07:038 (67038|2) - , -Done

01:18:841 - a sax slap( (try short LN? -Done for now.. hope its right

01:22:120 (82120|3,82284|2) - and 01:21:792 (81792|3,81956|2) - are different,make them different pattern Done!

01:22:831 (82831|1,82885|2,82940|3,82994|2,83049|1,83104|0,83158|1,83213|2) - 1/4 STREAM BURST,NOT 1/6 AT ALL lol -Done

01:24:579 (84579|3,84579|1) - sax slap ( >< ,make it as http://puu.sh/eroRV/a8ea4c62eb.jpg,the LN start at 01:24:661 - Done!

01:35:399 (95399|3,95481|2,95563|1,95645|0) - i think here you can try alternate not stream stair,http://puu.sh/erp3P/600b8b7984.jpg -Done

01:38:186 - you follow the main piano sound here,make it double -Done

01:40:481 (100481|2) - remove -Done

01:44:087 (104087|3) - remove ,soft sound compare with 01:44:251 (104251|3,104251|2) - Yes, sounds great!

01:44:907 - fix some 1/6 to 1/4 -Done!

01:51:464 - not really fits jack here, http://puu.sh/erppT/b7ef064fd9.jpg -Done :3

02:26:765 (146765|1,146820|0) - unsnap,1/4 plz -Done

02:26:710 - add to 3 not for the really strong beat -Done


thats all ,great map XD

nice map for app
here's my star w/
Good Luck XD

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

(/>w<)/ From My Queue\(>w<\)

Column : 1 2 3 4

open it

[Comment]

sorry , i cant mod much on longer song , but ill try my best Every Mod helps!

[World's End]

00:35:399 - to - 00:40:481 - highly suggest you do LN + single note , follow the piano , and i think those double and triple note are unnecessary
00:41:300 (41300|2,41382|3,41464|2,41546|1,41628|0,41710|1,41792|2,41874|3) - this does not follow this - 00:40:645 (40645|0,40727|1,40809|2,40891|3,40973|2,41055|1,41137|0,41219|1) - and , 00:41:382 (41382|3,41464|2,41546|1,41628|0,41710|1,41792|2,41874|3) - remove - 00:41:300 (41300|2) - LN until - 00:41:956 -
00:42:557 (42557|3,42612|0,42667|1,42721|2,42776|3,42831|0,42885|1,42940|2,42994|3,43049|0,43104|1,43158|2,43213|3,43268|1,43268|0) - ctrl +h , change of phase I have think about it.. and i think i let it how it is, when another Mod says something to this i will change it!
00:45:235 (45235|3) - move to - 00:45:317 - Done!
00:46:219 (46219|2,46219|1) - you didnt add before on drum? remove 1 Done!
00:46:874 - add Done
00:43:596 - ^ Done
00:44:251 - ^ Done
00:44:907 - add to 1 Done
00:48:022 (48022|3) - move to 3 Done
00:48:514 (48514|3) - remove Done
00:49:661 (49661|0,49825|0) - remove Done
00:50:153 (50153|1) - remove Done
00:50:973 (50973|0,51137|0) - remove Done
00:52:120 - add Done
00:52:284 (52284|3,52448|2) - remove Done
00:54:743 - add 2 note , snare Done
00:55:727 (55727|1) - remove Done
00:56:055 - add Done
00:57:530 (57530|0,57530|3) - remove Done
00:57:694 - add , kick Done
00:57:858 - ^ kick Done
00:58:022 - add 2 note , rearrange , balance it Done
00:58:350 (58350|1) - remove , no kick Done
00:58:514 (58514|1) - remove Done
00:58:678 - add , rearrange Done
00:59:005 (59005|0) - move to - 00:59:333 - Done
00:59:825 - add , kick Done
01:00:153 (60153|3) - remove Done
01:00:809 (60809|0) - ^ Done
01:00:973 (60973|0) - ^ Done
01:01:519 (61519|1,61574|2,61628|1) - ctrl + h Done
that 1/8 start form here - 01:01:137 - Yes, have change it, Done!

stop modding ,

[2nd Comment]

you better rethink you kick and snare what note density should you used
better remapped with more balancing pattern , but still ... is an awesome chart

sorry :/

Kruzon wrote:

-Hi, it's been 2 weeks i guess, and sorry i could not gather most of the team mates to mod along, since they hate marathon lolIt's okay better late than never
-Before I begin, the following is my modding column format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4
-Oh god, it's stretching so damn long thanks to the links, you might want to do some horizontal scrolling to see the rest of the statements >>>>

World's End

00:22:284 (22284|2) - I suggest move this to 2, for better flow Done
00:22:448 (22448|1,22612|2) - Press Ctrl + J Done
00:31:137 (31137|2) - move to 2, emphasize consistent patterns 00:29:989 (29989|0,30153|1,30973|0,31137|1,31792|0,31956|1) - Done
00:51:137 (51137|2) - move to 1, try to form a 3-jacks note instead of 2 00:51:137 (51137|0,51300|0,51464|0) - and consistent as this 00:52:284 (52284|2,52366|1,52448|0,52448|3,52612|0,52612|2,52776|1,52776|0,52776|3) - Done

00:53:104 (53104|0,53268|0,53432|0) - Nay, you may stop the 3 jacks now. spread one of them away. Perhaps 00:53:104 (53104|0) - move to 2 Done
01:01:792 (61792|0,61792|2,61792|3,61956|2,61956|1,61956|3,62120|3,62120|0,62120|1) - messy, gives out obscure vibes on the current notes.
Since the rhythm felt ascending, perhaps Press Ctrl + H on 01:01:792 (61792|2,62120|1) - Done

01:01:956 (61956|3) - You might want to delete this, however this is optional I'll leave it as it is but thanks

01:05:399 (65399|1,65399|3,65399|2) - Unnecessary pressure here, doesn't have to put 3 notes here, besides it break your notes consistency.
Just plot through following this pattern consistency 01:04:415 (64415|2,64579|3,64579|0,64579|1,64743|3,64743|1,64907|1,64907|0,64907|2) -
1 - 3 - 1 - 3, .. 1 Note is enough Yes, done

01:14:333 (74333|1,74415|2) - awkward to press- How about Ctrl + J these notes? even neat flow Done
01:18:678 (78678|3) - has to be a long note, and chain along these long notes 01:18:841 (78841|1,79005|3,79169|2,79333|0) - The tension was rising high here and there's no abrupt stop or pause at the moment Done, i think

01:20:973 (80973|3,80973|1,80973|0) - this ruined the pattern, i believe a stair notes should be in effect here. I suggest resume plotting these stairs 01:20:399 (80399|3,80481|2,80563|1,80645|0,80727|1,80809|2) - I hope i have do it right, Done

01:23:186 (83186|3,83268|2,83322|1,83377|0,83432|1,83486|2,83541|3,83596|2,83650|1,83705|0,83760|1,83814|2,83869|3,83923|0,83923|1,83923|2) -
Very nice, the stair fit well with the high tension vibes, yes? <3

01:28:841 (88841|2,88841|0,89005|0,89005|2,89169|2,89169|0) - boring and rigid, you've been using jackhammers here and there, maybe it's time for
new pattern. Yes, done

01:29:333 (89333|1,89333|2,89333|3,89497|0,89497|1,89497|2,89661|1,89661|3,89661|0) - Inconsistent, you could have just follow the 3 1 3 1 step.
Besides, some of them are not even that strong to have 3 notes Done

01:45:399 (105399|3,105454|2,105508|1,105563|0,105617|1,105672|2,105727|3,105781|2,105836|1,105891|0,105945|1,106000|2,106055|3,106109|2,106164|1) - splendid beat, nice one with this <3

Starting from here, 03:39:005 (219005|0) - until 03:43:268 (223268|2) - If you follow her voice, then you will noticed that applying several long notes, chained along is very fitting and nice to use here. I'll leave it to your imagination on how to plot them, but it should be at least like several long notes
surrounded with stair of single notes. Very Nice, i rly try it, thanks!!

05:07:858 (307858|1,307858|0,307858|2,308022|2,308022|3,308022|0,308186|0,308186|2,308186|3,308186|1,308350|1,308350|2,308514|3,308514|2,308678|1,308678|2,308841|1,308841|0,308841|2,309005|1,309005|0,309169|2,309169|1,309169|3,309333|1,309333|2,309333|3,309333|0) -
rigid and boring + inconsistent- do something about it c: Done ^_^

05:12:940 (312940|3,312940|1,313022|0,313104|2,313104|1,313104|3,313268|2,313268|0,313432|2,313432|0,313432|1,313432|3,313596|3,313596|1,313760|2,313760|0,313760|1,313923|2,313923|3,314087|3,314087|1,314087|0,314251|0,314251|2,314415|3,314415|1,314415|2) -
these seems nice since there were less or close to none unnecessary density in notes <3

05:28:514 (328514|2,328678|2) - mm.. 05:28:514 (328514|2) - move to 4 perhaps Done
05:30:973 (330973|2) - move to 4, better flow Done

05:31:792 (331792|1) - move to 4
05:31:956 (331956|3) - move to 3
05:32:120 (332120|2) - move to 2 All three Done!

-world ended-

watch out for your notes density, avoid rigid pattern if possible-
good luck with your map C:

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi Feerum ~

little mod

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01:15:563 (75563|3) - end to 01:15:727 - Done
01:16:055 (76055|2) - move to 4? Yes

03:03:432 - add 4 Done

04:18:186 (258186|2) - end to 04:18:514 - Done
04:18:350 (258350|0) - delete Done

05:26:710 - (SV)Audio 30%~40% Thanks, done

good luck >w</

THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION

Stair thing

Burst

something like dis

BG Update, it should be fine now

Feerum wrote:

I have find the Time today to change a little bit the next part Kami, particularly all streams So you dont need to mention it again

SPOILER

jumptrill'n

SPOILER

OR

-Kamikaze- wrote:

So I'm here for the second time, this time officially

THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

First things first, metadata is wrong.
Title: 感傷の摩天楼
Romanized Title: Kanshou no Matenrou I KNEW IT! Why i have change it q_q
See this post for explanation: p/3299479
Tags: Add "marathon" "hijirin"->"hijiri" Done
Background: 1024x768 is okay, but I've found larger version of it, made it suitable for widescreen players and added few touches here and there, hope you like it

preview

Linkerino

Like?! LIKE?! I LOVE IT!!!!
Offset: 1371 (+70), change it after applying mod though. Also don't forget to re-snap notes and green lines Okay Kami, I believe in your skill as mapper/modder but +70? I have asked a friend and he told me that +70 is really too many.. i dont have change the offset and i will wait for your reply

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You have few LNs so consider raising OD to 8,5 Done!
I gotta say, this map came a really long way since I first saw it, it's so much better now Thanks

00:09:989 (9989|0,10153|2,10317|3) - Ctrl+H for pitch Done
00:12:940 (12940|2) - Move to 1st (pitch) Done
00:23:432 (23432|3,23923|0) - Ctrl+H Done
00:36:710 - Add on 4th for beat going in Done
00:37:858 - Add here too Done
00:39:333 - Add one here Done
00:45:235 (45235|0,45235|1) - Delete, not enough sounds for this (see 00:46:546 - ) Done
01:01:137 - First of all this burst is 1/8, not 1/6. Second of all, don't use those zig-zag (reverse) stairs all the time, try to make it more random or just normal stair, it's more fun for players. I'll give you 2 examples:

Stair thing

Burst

i was not sure and the #osumania told me with 1/6 Streams it's better to play, i feel like you that the 1/8 streams are maybe harder, but it's better for this song, so.. Done :3
01:05:071 - Why pause here? Done
01:09:497 (69497|0) - Change into normal note Done
01:12:284 - 01:12:612 - It's quite weird to see those notes as singles when there are only triples/doubles here, add at them or nerf rest of doubles Added Notes!
01:13:923 (73923|1) - Not needed LN Done
01:14:907 (74907|0,75235|0,75563|3) - Replace with normal notes, expressing every single saxophone sound with LNs is awkward to play, because of how cramped 4K is so I recommend adding LNs only to very strong longer sounds Allright, done
01:16:219 (76219|2,76546|2,76874|3) - ^ Also last LN is too long Done
01:17:858 (77858|2) - Extend by 1/2 and delete 01:18:678 (78678|3) - Done
01:18:760 - Add one note Okay
01:18:841 (78841|1) - Replace with normal note Done
01:19:169 (79169|2) - Same thing as before, too low sound to use LN on 4k. I'll stop mentioning similar cases from now on, so you have to fix them by yourself Done and, okay.. i realy try it
01:21:300 - It's a better idea to throw LNs away, and continue the 1/4 stream
01:22:612 - 1/8 burst here, since it's longer I recommend you to make it a simple stair

something like dis

Okay, i try it i make something that maybe is more "fun" to play, tell me please your feedback to this part
01:23:923 (83923|3,83923|2) - No need for those, express saxophone with LNs here
01:23:923 (83923|0) - Move to 3rd, or to the next lane after 01:23:882 - note if you arranged differently and make it end at 01:24:251 -
01:24:251 - Add LN until 01:24:579 -
01:24:661 (84661|3) - It should start on 01:24:579 -
01:24:579 (84579|2) - Remove Okay to this part, i was now sitting for 20min in front of the editor and try to make it so .. xD i hate myself for my bad english.. next Mod pls i Polish maybe i understand it better haha (no.. please no, i never go to school in poland.. It was a Joke.. A JOKE!)
====Density check, apply to this whole section====
01:25:399 (85399|1) - Remove, not enough sounds
01:25:891 - Remove one
01:26:055 - Add one
01:26:710 - Remove one
01:26:874 - Add one
====End of density check (ofc feel free to deny if you don't like it)==== i like, done :3
01:32:940 (92940|1) - Please don't use LNs for vocals. Not in 4k. Even in 7k that's bad most of the time Okay
01:35:399 - Jumptrill here? [34]->[12]->[34]->[12] That way, right?
01:36:874 - Missing piano note Done
01:38:514 - Missing note Done
01:42:448 - ^ Done
01:44:743 (104743|1,104743|0) - Delete Done
01:44:907 - It's not a bad idea to make 1/4 and then higher, but it might feels a little bit weird to play. Second thing, same zig-zag pattern again. Rearrange please. Third thing, it's 1/8, not 1/6. Okay i try to make it right, for the last 1/4 i used your suggestion for "burst" so i this time use stairs (i.. now it's a little bit embarrassing for me now but i still dont know all words for all pattern )
01:47:366 (107366|2) - Normal note, apply to all notes like this one. Pause in piano is intentional. And make it a single note, not double. Done!
01:54:415 (114415|0) - Move to 4th, awkward jack
02:19:005 - Missing note
02:24:251 - ^
02:25:399 - ^
02:25:481 - ^ All done
02:26:792 - 1/8 instead of 1/6 And again, patterns i try to make a mix with burst and stairs, is it okay? Playable? When not please tell it me!
02:34:743 (154743|3) - LN vocal, no please Okay
02:38:022 - You probably know what to do at this point Yes... i like this burst thing. (when i'm using it to often please tell me )
02:39:169 - Use LNs for diffrent sounds than vocals Mh.. i try it.. realy, tell me your feedback to this part.
02:49:333 - Apply my suggestion from 01:14:907 i try it, the good audible sax i have with LN's.. tell me your feedback, when it's "not" perfect tell it me, but dont tell me which LN's i should change, i will try it by myself (have to learn it ^_^)

I don't have time to finish the mod today, so apply this, I'll see your response and then edit post with second part of the mod.
Also throwing a star, because you deserve it

-Kamikaze- wrote:

======PART 2======

BG Update, it should be fine now

Feerum wrote:

I have find the Time today to change a little bit the next part Kami, particularly all streams So you dont need to mention it again

Sure thing
I consulted offset with my friend and he says it's fine as it is, so idk, maybe it's just me. Try asking someone good at timing to check it tho, just to be sure
Also I'll recheck first part before getting into second one

01:00:973 - 1/8 starts here imo Done
01:13:923 (73923|3) - Change to normal note and add another note at 3rd, similar to 01:13:268 - Okay, done
01:16:628 (76628|0) - To 2nd and then 01:16:710 (76710|1,76710|3,76792|0,76874|2) - Ctrl+H Done
01:21:219 - Missing note Done
01:24:743 - Hmm, I hear a 1/4 piano stair here, I suggest to make something like this (test it out before applying it, idk if it will play good):

SPOILER

It sound's not bad, i will make it so
01:35:399 - I meant something like this:

jumptrill'n

Oh okay, it's done!
01:44:907 - I'm still not sure if this should be like that, or if it should be a constant 1/8, ask someone specifically about this thing Okay i'll leave it how it is and ask someone for that ^_^
01:57:858 (117858|0) - Suggestion about making those pianos a normal note still stands and in fact it stays throughout the whole song ayyy Forget :c Done!
02:26:792 - Hmm, it's okay, but the change to normal stairs at the end might confuse players, try to experiment more with patterns, make it more random Okay i try
02:28:104 - Missing note tho Done
02:39:169 - Nope, that's not it, listen closely to longer instrument sounds and work with them. Try to make notes easy to hit when LNs are present too Okay i'm realy not sure how i should do this part but i think now it's okay
02:52:120 (172120|1) - 1/2 LN should fit into sax here Done
02:53:268 (173268|1,173268|3,173432|3,173432|1,173432|2,173596|1) - Try to avoid patterns like this, because you have jacks on both hands, hold on left and then you change to hold on right which is also in the middle of jacks, it kinda ruins your reading if you aren't that good with LNs. Solution to this pattern would be Ctrl+H'ing Ctrl+H dont work here, so i change it a little bit 02:53:268 (173268|1,173432|2,173432|1,173596|1) - and/or removing the LN (I think that it will play better with LN turned into normal note tbh) LN is gone aaaand
02:53:760 (173760|2) - If you did exactly what I mentioned above, move this to 1st Yes!
02:59:005 - This LN fits into sax well, but I feel that this will be more fun:

SPOILER

OR

i'll take the 2nd one because i dont use those patterns yet
03:20:317 - Use similar trill pattern as I mentioned ^ (ofc I mean for that second part of it) Side note, what you have mapped here is a standard trill and in the spoilerbox, first pattern is alternate trills and second one is jumptrills/handtrills Done
03:41:137 (221137|0) - If you really want to express that sound with LN, it should start at 03:40:973 - leave it on same column, then remove 03:40:973 (220973|1) - and move 03:40:809 (220809|0) - to 2nd All Done
03:41:628 - Add Done
03:50:809 - Try to randomise it more Hope i do it right
04:03:432 (243432|3,243596|2) - Try to avoid shielding like this (shield is when you have note on the same column just before/after LN), it's okay for note just before, but for the one after first LN it's very awkward. Also according to pitch LNs should be like 3->2->1 i Try, have change it a little bit
04:07:858 - Density is conflicting with 02:43:923 - I knew that this would be a problem, i just thing that it would be "funny" when this will be a little bit different, well, i change it again to 4->2->2->4
04:13:760 (253760|2) - 1/2 LN Done
04:18:514 - 1/4 starts here, also from now on Do not add LNs in the middle of stream like this, this is completely shit to playi knew this would be a problem xD No modder has say something to this so i let it.. but i tell to myself if only one persone say's that this is bad i will change it! So Done!
04:20:891 - Missing note Done
04:33:104 - Not layering the 1/8 here? i have add patterns for the 1/8 here but i think it starts at 04:33:432 -
04:36:546 - Missing note Done
04:40:809 - Missing note Done
04:44:497 (284497|3,284497|0,284579|0,284579|3) - Do something about this. By that I mean change burst pattern so that you don't have double jack here, single jack is okay imo Done
04:54:743 - Jumptrill? Done
05:06:874 - Missing note Done
05:09:497 - ^ Done
05:12:120 - ^ Done

One general thing about density: You have very random chord density throughout the map. For example 04:58:841 - is a 4-chord, while 05:00:153 - is a 3-chord when both have almost exactly same sound. You should turn your hitsounds to 0% (maybe save as new diff for backup) and check whole map by yourself and see what sound to map with 4-notes, with 3-notes, with 2-notes and what with single note. Then call someone who's good at density checks (try asking Fullerene-) to mod it. I didn't really go through it, because this mod would be 2-3 times longer. It's fun to play as it is, but you have to match the music's intensity and instruments well to get it approved.
Once again, good luck! \:D/

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Hi! From _andreamtr & _Xenophilius_'s modding Queue.

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

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1. 01:13:268 (73268|3,73596|3) - I suggest you can meke them LN Nope, it WAS an LN but without it's better to play
2. 01:13:923 (73923|1,73923|0,73923|3,74251|3,74251|0,74251|1) - Same ^ chose 2 notes Same as ^
3. 01:17:858 (77858|1) - Also from this point to the note after ^ Same^
4. 01:32:448 (92448|3) - Move to 0 Done
5. 02:48:841 (168841|2,168841|3,168841|0,168841|1) - Delete a note Done
6. 03:09:497 (189497|2) - Maybe you can extend this and remove the note after Nah, i think it's better how it is, but thanks :/

stankill wrote:

Hi Feerum



Layout: 1.2.3.4



The stream at 01:45:563 - 01:46:219 should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2617969 Done
01:46:219 : move note from 3 to 4 Yes, Done
The stream at 02:27:530 - 02:28:186 should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2618047 Done
02:28:186 : move note from 3 to 2 Done
The stream at 03:51:587 - 03:52:038 should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2618057 Done
The stream at 04:33:432 - 04:34:046 should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2618119 Done
04:34:087 : move note from 1 to 4 and delete note at 2 Yes, sir!
The stream at 04:43:268 - 04:44:538 should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2618157 Done
04:44:579 : move note from 4 to 2 and delete note at 3 Done!
The stream at 05:04:251 - 05:05:194 should look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2618181 Done
05:05:235 : move note from 1 to 3 aaaand Done!


It's a good map and it's fun to play Thanks :3
goodluck with your map :*

Valentrixe wrote:

From Moddar Huehue Team Mania

it's just a suggestion mod so you can reject if you think my mod doesn't fit, but please tell me the reason

huehue Click me Click me Click me huehue

[General]
no issues

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seems fine at earlier part, but..
00:35:408 - from this section you should keep using 1 note because the music consistency still same, instead move this section pattern to 00:38:031 - like this Okay, done
00:36:719 (36719|3) - ghost note, delete Done
00:40:654 - change the stair pattern in this section, the piano still stronger than 'sound that you follow now' i don't know what's that as stair, so i suggest you to change it like previous section, then you can start the stair at 00:41:637
you shouldn't use 1/6 stair, use 1/4.. then at 00:42:785 - use 1/8 stair
this is the example :
part 1
part 2 i make it a little bit different but yes, have change it
00:56:801 (56801|2) - ghost note
00:58:113 (58113|1) - ^
00:58:769 (58769|2) - ^
00:59:424 (59424|1) - ^
01:00:080 (60080|2) - ^
01:00:736 (60736|1) - ^ lol To this all^ Are you absolutely sure? i hear with 25% Speed drums at all this notes.
also from 00:57:375 - the pattern getting weirder imo Yeah your right, i have change the pattern a little bit :3
01:02:949 - too loud Done i think
01:09:342 - no hs? fixed
01:15:326 (75326|3) - ghost, again
01:16:637 (76637|1) - ^ Again, i hear the sound, this are not ghost notes
01:25:162 - you can use 1/8 here, following piano (optional) Not 1/8 but i heard there were two ghosts
01:29:014 - may use LN to follow piano (once again, optional) Nope, thanks
01:55:900 (115900|2) - delete Done
02:00:818 - add 1 note
02:39:178 - ^
02:39:506 - ^
02:41:801 - ^
02:42:129 - ^ these all, i realy was not sure yesterday so thanks to you, now added <3
02:43:932 - nice pattern at this section, like it ~ Hauu~ <3
03:14:096 (194096|2,194424|1) - delete? (optional) Nope, for the flow :3
03:25:408 - add 2 note Yes! Great!
04:03:113 - add 1 note
04:03:441 - ^
04:05:736 - ^
04:06:064 - ^ Same thing, was not sure, thank you
04:14:424 (254424|1) - ghost note, delete Oh my god, how i cant hear this, thanks
04:18:113 - add 1 note (optional) Nope
04:18:277 - ^ Yes!
04:25:408 - not good imo Have change it
04:37:211 (277211|2) - delete, the sound's too hazy imo (optional) Nope
04:48:850 (288850|3) - ^ Mh, no :/
04:43:277 - use 1/4, use 1/8 at 04:44:424 When i listen closely i head this all is good with 1/8 but thanks
04:58:523 - add 1 note Yes ^_^
05:37:047 (337047|2) - delete Okay!

okay, overall this map is good
but due to long drain time, you shouldn't make repetitive pattern so it wouldn't make this map boring to play
good luck huehue

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| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Blocko wrote:

You know what osu!mania needs?
MORE MARATHONS!

[General]
Hitsounds: I noticed that you used at least 1 type of hitsound for each row of notes in the song. That can be quite jarring and loud, especially if a 4-chord is filled with drum-hitfinish and it drowns out the music. Try to remove some hitsounds on the chords so the player can hear the music better without the hitsounds drowning it out.

Also, using other hitsounds such as soft-hitfinish and normal-hitfinish would make this map a lot better based on hearing it, so I think you should add those hitsounds in the notes so it sounds more 'natural'. Using soft-whistle in the song would be a nice addition, too.

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Mod suddenly appears when you click this

- You might wanna check the note technicality in this difficulty. Some of the notes were a bit overchorded, some were underchorded and some parts have missing notes in them.
- Try to arrange the patterns to be based on pitch relevancy to give out the best effect of playability for the player.

00:00:982 to 00:01:310 - At the start, you could map in this pattern for the mappable sounds here. You can leave it as it is if you want the notes to start later, though. For now i leave it as it is, but thanks

00:09:178 to 00:38:031 - Try to rearrange the patterns here so it matches the pitch relevancy of the piano. It will give a better feedback for the player if the patterns were to go along with the pitch, and it would give a feeling that the player is playing a piano. Here's an example of notes mapped based on pitch relevancy. http://puu.sh/fjvgr/af8ceb8e0f.jpg
You can do variations of this to add variety to the mapset, so keep that in mind. Ok i have try it ^.^

00:38:031 to 00:41:309 - 2 to 3-chords might be a bit too intense for this part because chords tend to give off a lot more impact than streams. Since we're building up to the next part of the music, maybe try to reduce some notes so it's building up at a right pace. Have reduce some notes

00:41:965 to 00:43:277 - The streams here are in 1/8th, but are mapped in 1/6th. It'd be better if this were to be in 1/8ths so it's technically correct along with the music. Done!

00:44:588 (44588|1,44588|3) - Move these notes 1 column to the left for better flow in pattern. Done

00:49:670 (49670|2,49752|1,49834|2) - Move the notes 1 column to the left for hand balance Done

00:52:621 (52621|0) - Move to 2 to make a difference to the pattern at the previous measure Done

00:53:441 (53441|2) - Move to 2 for hand balance Done!

00:55:654 - Add a note here for consistency Yes, done!

01:05:572 (65572|0,65900|1) - These notes are pretty inconsistent when the notes on the white lines commonly have 2 or 3-chords. Maybe map some notes here to fix their consistency. Great, done

01:06:637 (66637|2,66801|3) - These notes don't have sounds to accomodate them, so I think you should remove them. Yes!

01:09:342 (69342|0,69670|3,69998|0) - Remove? They're pretty overchorded imo. Or you can move these to the white lines for consistency, the choice is yours. moved to white line :3

01:11:309 (71309|2) - Move to 2, hand balance Done

01:11:391 (71391|3) - No actual sound here to highlight this note, remove Doe

01:13:605 (73605|1,73769|3) - Move both of these notes to 3 to put a little pitch relevancy in the chords. Done

01:14:916 (74916|1,74916|0,74916|2) - 3-chords might be a bit much for the sax and the kick. Remove one of the notes? Yes

01:16:228 (76228|1,76228|3,76228|2) - Same suggestion as above Done!

01:18:359 (78359|1) - Move to 1 for finger balance Done

01:19:998 - Add a note here to accent the crash Done

01:20:162 (80162|1,80162|0,80162|3) - 3-chords might be a bit intense for the kick and sax. It'd be better to remove one of them to lessen their impact. Done

01:21:309 to 01:22:621 - Map the kicks and snares here, just like what you did previously. Done

01:23:932 (83932|1) - Delete? One LN is enough to express the sax. Same suggestion for 01:24:260 (84260|3) - Done

01:25:244 (85244|2) - One of the notes should be soft-hitfinish or normal-hitfinish so it sounds better and feels like a part of the song. Ohhhh that sounds great, thanks!

01:25:736 (85736|2) - Move to 2 for pattern flow Yes

01:28:031 - I think you're missing a note for the sound heard here. Same suggestion for 01:30:654 - . Done

01:32:785 (92785|0) - Move to 3 for hand balance Done

01:33:605 (93605|3) - Move to 2 for better pattern synergy Done

01:34:752 (94752|3) - Move to 3 for finger balance Done

01:37:375 (97375|2) - Move to 2, flow in pattern Done

01:39:178 (99178|3) - 4-chord might be a bit strong here. Remove it to be consistent for the pattern in the next measure. Yes, sir!

01:43:359 - Missing note here Done

01:44:424 (104424|2,104424|3) - Only hearing 1 sound here, and it's pretty quiet. Remove one note? Done

01:52:949 (112949|0,113113|3) - Rearrange to 4,3 respectively for pitch Done

01:53:441 (113441|2,113605|3) - Ctrl + J for piano pitch relevancy Done

01:54:424 (114424|3,114588|0,114916|3) - Ctrl + H for pitch Done

02:05:736 - Missing snare note here Done

02:10:654 (130654|1,130818|2) - Ctrl + H for a better pattern flow Yes

02:12:129 (132129|1,132293|0) - Ctrl + J for pitch Done!

02:12:785 (132785|2) - Move to 1, same reason as above Done

02:19:342 - Missing kick here. Done

02:22:293 (142293|0) - Move to 4 for better pattern flow Done

02:31:965 (151965|1,152293|1) - Move both notes to 2 for note balance in each column Done i think

02:32:785 (152785|1,152949|2) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy Done

02:37:539 - Add a note here for consistency Done

02:39:014 (159014|2,159342|1,159670|0) - The LNs here don't really express the e-guitar correctly. It would play better if it were two 1/1 LNs, one on the red line and one on the white, which is something like this. Done

02:41:637 (161637|1,161965|2,162293|0) - Same suggestion as above Done

02:49:014 (169014|1,169014|3) - Ghost notes, remove.
If you applied the suggestion above, move 02:48:850 (168850|2) - to 2 for finger balance Done, how i cant hear that

02:59:178 (179178|3) - Move to 3 for pattern flow Done

03:01:146 (181146|3) - Move to 3 for pitch and flow Done

03:03:277 (183277|1) - Remove? I assume this note follows the saxophone echo, which is somewhat unnecessary Done

03:06:719 (186719|1,186883|0,187047|1) - Switch these around by column for pitch relevancy and note count balance between columns Done

03:07:211 - Missing 1/4 drum triplet here. Done

03:07:867 (187867|2,188031|3,188359|2) - Switch these around by column for pitch relevancy Done?

03:15:572 - Missing note here Yes

03:21:309 (201309|0) - Move to 3 for pitch relevancy Done

03:23:277 - Add a note here for bigger impact Done

03:23:441 - I think you're missing a piano note. Yes

03:31:801 (211801|2,211965|1) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy Done

03:33:441 (213441|2,213605|3) - Move 2 columns to the left for pitch and hand balance Done

03:41:473 (221473|3) - Move to 3 for better pattern flow Done

03:41:637 - Add a note here for a bigger impact Done

04:02:621 - Same suggestion as above

04:02:949 (242949|2,243277|1,243605|0) - Same thing about the LNs as the e-guitar. They don't really express the e-guitar correctly, and it would play better if it were two 1/1 LNs, one on the red line and one on the white. Something like this. Done

04:04:260 to 04:04:916 - I don't think 3-chords is suitable enough for this part. It's too strong imo
Also, 3-notes that all have normal-hitclap is quite jarring as they're generally loud, so remove some hitsound at those notes so they don't drown the music out. Done

04:05:572 (245572|1,245900|2,246228|3) - Same suggestion about the incorrectly expressing LNs for the e-guitar. Done

04:06:883 to 04:07:539 - Same suggestion about the 3-notes and hitclaps. Done

04:14:424 - Missing kick here Done

04:14:588 (254588|1,254752|2,254916|1) - Ctrl + H for better pattern flow Done

04:15:408 (255408|3) - Move to 2, same reason as above Done

04:17:867 (257867|3,258031|2) - Ctrl + J, same reason as above Done

04:22:293 (262293|1,262293|2) - Remove these two notes as one LN is enough to express the vocal.Done

04:23:523 - Add a note here for the piano. Though it adds a minijack, I think players at this level should be able to handle them. okay

04:26:064 - Missing kick here. Same for 04:26:146 - . Done

04:31:473 (271473|3) - Move to 2 for hand balance Done

04:31:801 (271801|1) - Move to 3 for better flow Done

04:34:916 (274916|3,275080|2) - Ctrl + J, same reason as above Done

04:36:883 - Missing note here Done

04:38:687 (278687|3,278687|0,278850|3,278850|0) - These chords are inconsistent with the other chords similar to this part. Add 1 or 2 notes in for the chords to fix inconsistencies. Done

04:44:752 - If I'm hearing it right, there's an audible sound here that can be mapped. Same for 04:46:064 - , 04:47:375 - and 04:48:523 - , All done!

04:49:834 - Add a note here for consistency Done

04:52:129 (292129|3) - Remove? 2-note is enough for the snare imo Done

04:54:424 (294424|1) - Add a note here for kick and consistency Done

04:55:244 - Missing note? Same for 04:56:555 - . Done

04:56:228 - Add a note here to express the change of instrument pitch Done

04:57:703 - Add a note for impact Done

05:01:637 (301637|1) - Add a note here for better flow of pattern Done

05:06:228 (306228|1) - Move to 3, same reason as above Done

05:23:769 (323769|0) - Move to 2 for pitch Done

05:24:588 (324588|1,324752|2) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy Done

05:28:850 (328850|3,329014|1,329178|2) - Rearrange to 2,3,4 for piano pitch Done

05:33:769 (333769|2) - Move to 4. No need to hammer the notes here since the piano constantly changes pitch Done

05:34:916 (334916|1) - Move to 3, same reason as above Done

05:36:555 (336555|2,336719|1,336883|2,337047|1) - Ctrl + H for pitch Done

This song's good. Plus, it's a marathon. Even better.
I hope my suggestions helped! Good luck on approval!