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Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Remix)

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Buttercup
1,065 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Lally wrote:

*reminder post* o3o coming soon
yay \o/
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
hihihi

[whisper]
  1. 00:13:686 (1) - NC patterns from here is kind strange for me. I think it is better to add NC when there is a down beat( for example:,make NC patterns like this)
    Picture
    especially for place like 00:19:043 (3) - , i think NC here is really necessary
  2. 00:23:757 (1,2,3) - try this?
    Picture
  3. 00:33:614 (5) - a strong beat in 00:34:043 and i think you should do sonmething to emphasize it, try this?
    Picture
  4. 00:53:971 (1,2,3) - move to x356 y60 is better(maybe :P

    the stream at end kind make me confused, i dont know if otthers are satisfied with them but please ask for some comments about the streams


[sieg's hard]
  1. 00:02:328 (4) - combined to a 2/1 slider is better i think
  2. 00:09:186 (4,5) - ^
  3. 00:14:757 (1) - set the note on the right side or stack it with 00:15:186 (2) - will be better
  4. 00:40:471 (3) - move to x464 y280 will be better


[end's hard]
  1. 00:03:614 (1) - use 2/1 slider?
    Picture
  2. 00:40:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for a easier hard ;w; try to use repeated slider?

    and i suggest you use bigger CS

easy and normal are fine for me
nice mapset! star for you~~~ ranking go go go :3c
Buttercup
1,065 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Mei wrote:

hihihi

[whisper]
  1. 00:13:686 (1) - NC patterns from here is kind strange for me. I think it is better to add NC when there is a down beat( for example:,make NC patterns like this) ok
    Picture
    especially for place like 00:19:043 (3) - , i think NC here is really necessary ok
  2. 00:23:757 (1,2,3) - try this? ok
    Picture
  3. 00:33:614 (5) - a strong beat in 00:34:043 and i think you should do sonmething to emphasize it, try this? ok
    Picture
    00:53:971 (1,2,3) - move to x356 y60 is better(maybe :P ok

    the stream at end kind make me confused, i dont know if otthers are satisfied with them but please ask for some comments about the streams god, I really like ;_;
Thanks Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeei <3

rip foreverends
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
thank guys :3
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AudioFilename: Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Dubstep Remix).mp3
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Title:Monster (DotEXE Remix)
TitleUnicode:Monster (DotEXE Remix)
Artist:Meg & Dia
ArtistUnicode:Meg & Dia
Creator:Nhawak
Version:Sieg's Hard
Source:
Tags:Sieg Foreverends dubstep short ver. cut
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Buttercup
1,065 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Buttercup
Beatmap Status :!:

Easy - All mods applied

Normal - All mods applied

Ends' Hard - Missing all mods rip

Sieg's Hard - All mods applied

Whispers - All mods applied
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
From queue.
[General]
  1. Use a BG either with 4:3 or 16:9 ratio.
  2. This isn't a proper reply to modders, please reply them politely, thank you.
[Insane]
  1. For every green line with 5% volume, please increase it to 25%, it doesn't encounter much difference, but it would be a lot safer to meet the ranking criteria.
  2. 00:18:614 (1) - Unnecessary NC, same for 00:40:471 (1) - 00:53:971 (1) - .
  3. 00:16:900 (1,2) - Swap NC, same for 00:22:257 (1,2) - 00:32:543 (1,2) - 01:00:614 (3,1) - like 00:53:757 (1) - .
  4. 00:30:721 (2) - S:C1 finish; 00:30:828 (3) - drum whistle.
  5. 00:43:578 (6) - This follows nothing, remove this to follow vocal strictly.
  6. 00:47:757 (6) - I don't understand why this is a 1/8 reversed slider instead of 1/4.
  7. 00:49:043 (1,2,3) - More spacing is needed like 00:42:186 (1,2,3) - , anti-jump really doesn't feel good.
  8. 00:57:614 (4) - Both vocal and wub end at 00:57:828 - , chop it into a 1/2 slider.
  9. 01:15:186 (7) - NC this instead of 01:16:043 (1) - as you have been using same spacing, different rhythm between 01:13:900 (3,6,7) - , like 01:19:471 (1) - , same for 01:22:043 (3,1) - .
  10. 01:22:900 (1,2) - ^ more spacing.
  11. 01:28:900 (5) - Either more spacing or a NC.
  12. 01:32:757 (1) - This is unrankable, replace it by another placement with clearly visible reversed arrow.
[Sieg]
  1. 00:22:471 (4) - CTRL+G this makes my move more comfortable and match with the higher pitch of 00:22:471 - instead of 00:22:900 (5) - . Same for 01:13:900 (4) - 01:17:328 (4) - 01:31:043 (4) - .
  2. 00:55:257 (2) - Wrong snap, should be something like this: http://puu.sh/eklg5.jpg
[Ends]
  1. 00:26:971 (4) - 用DS 呢個hard supposed係無咩跳同無stream,唔係同normal個spread就會差太遠
  2. 00:28:900 (1,2,1,2) - 00:32:328 (1,2,1,2) - 00:35:757 (1,2) - 00:40:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc. 太難
  3. 00:48:186 (1,2,1) - 我以為都係3/4 slider,點知唔係
After having a glance on E, N and H, I have much concern over the spread between these difficulties and it can't be fixed only with my mod, so I would rather encourage remapping some parts instead of giving it a go. The main problem would be Ends' Hard is too difficult with density even higher than Sieg's diff AND Normal is encompassing an imbalanced difficulty throughout the diff. Graphically, it can be shown like this:
E <-------------------> N <-----------------------> Ends' <-> Sieg's <---------> I
You can ask other BATs to bubble your map if you are doubtful about my views. Anyway, questions are welcomed and good luck!
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
@IamKwaN
sure thing, do be so mad (:
No changes for Ctrl+G I like current way and flow is fine
00:55:257 (2) would be great if you explain what you mean by wrong snap? If you not sure about 1\4 snap you can try to listen on 25% :3
thanks
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN

Sieg wrote:

@IamKwaN
sure thing, do be so mad (:
No changes for Ctrl+G I like current way and flow is fine
00:55:257 (2) would be great if you explain what you mean by wrong snap? If you not sure about 1\4 snap you can try to listen on 25% :3
thanks
Glance through other diffs and you will find what I mean.
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
can't figure out ;_;
can you, please explain with words?
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
00:55:471 - wubs are on 1/3 snapped instead of 1/4, a 1/3 reversed slider would be rhythmically correct:
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
that's a way more clear to understand
snapped to wubs but in a little different way

SPOILER
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Buttercup
1,065 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Buttercup

IamKwaN wrote:

From queue.
[General]
  1. Use a BG either with 4:3 or 16:9 ratio. ok
  2. This isn't a proper reply to modders, please reply them politely, thank you.
[Insane]
  1. For every green line with 5% volume, please increase it to 25%, it doesn't encounter much difference, but it would be a lot safer to meet the ranking criteria. ok
  2. 00:18:614 (1) - Unnecessary NC, same for 00:40:471 (1) - 00:53:971 (1) - . ok
  3. 00:16:900 (1,2) - Swap NC, same for 00:22:257 (1,2) - 00:32:543 (1,2) - 01:00:614 (3,1) - like 00:53:757 (1) - . ok
  4. 00:30:721 (2) - S:C1 finish; 00:30:828 (3) - drum whistle. ok
  5. 00:43:578 (6) - This follows nothing, remove this to follow vocal strictly. ok
  6. 00:47:757 (6) - I don't understand why this is a 1/8 reversed slider instead of 1/4. I think it's good
  7. 00:49:043 (1,2,3) - More spacing is needed like 00:42:186 (1,2,3) - , anti-jump really doesn't feel good.I remapped
  8. 00:57:614 (4) - Both vocal and wub end at 00:57:828 - , chop it into a 1/2 slider. only one thing changed
  9. 01:15:186 (7) - NC this instead of 01:16:043 (1) - as you have been using same spacing, different rhythm between 01:13:900 (3,6,7) - , like 01:19:471 (1) - , same for 01:22:043 (3,1) - .I remapped
  10. 01:22:900 (1,2) - ^ more spacing. I remapped
  11. 01:28:900 (5) - Either more spacing or a NC. I remapped
  12. 01:32:757 (1) - This is unrankable, replace it by another placement with clearly visible reversed arrow. fixed
Thank you so much <3



Beatmap Status :!:

Easy - All mods applied

Normal - All mods applied

Ends' Hard - Missing all mods rip

Sieg's Hard - All mods applied

Insane - All mods applied

NEW BG
NEW SB
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
General

01:26:581 onwards - when the BG fades out the dark blue combo 2 is really hard to see, maybe avoid using that colour at the end

Easy

00:54:186 (3) - why not use Normal sampleset finish for the end of the slider instead

Normal

00:55:043 (1) - Normal sampleset finish on start of slider
01:06:614 (3) - shift to x: 312 y: 152 I think that goes more in line with a better fluidity in moving

I guess for the Normal it's because of the section from 00:27:614 to 00:39:614 that kinda eschews the difficulty spread within the Normal, because it's much tougher and more dense than even the kiai time 00:41:328 - 01:07:043
Maybe map as well to some of the music that go on the 1/2 beats like at 00:45:614 - 00:47:757

End's Hard

00:02:757 (3,4) - try not to immediately have the jumps, especially at the slow start, includes 00:06:400 (2) because it's like you go more into the vocal section from 00:13:900 onwards but there aren't any jumps there
00:24:186 (1,2) - why the decrease in spacing here though
00:39:614 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend you not have this in the difficulty, try using a different set of objects
00:46:471 (1,2,3) - reduce this spacing
00:50:757 (1,2) - weird place to anti-jump, especially since 00:50:971 is quite a clear beat in the music and it's left as a gap
00:55:043 (1) - Normal sampleset finish would be better on the start of the slider

Sieg's Hard

00:55:043 (1) - Normal sampleset finish

Insane

00:19:686 (4,5,6) - why the varying spacing here though, it looks weird for this triplet
00:55:043 (7) - Normal sampleset finish on start of slider



Good Luck
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
#queue

Nhawak wrote:

Ends' Hard - Missing all mods rip
What about to contact the mapper and ask him for the permission to fix? maybe he is busy :V can happen

[Easy]
  1. Personally i dislike the spacing that you used specially here 00:00:186 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) -
  2. 00:19:471 (2,3) - *very nazi* fix the blanket
  3. 00:22:900 (2) - you got better flow by moving this circle like that
    SPOILER
  4. 00:32:757 (3) - copy pasta slider from the prev one would be better
  5. 00:36:614 (4,5) - instead of having a traight slider try to put it parallel to the prev one
    SPOILER
  6. 00:56:757 (2) - missing finish
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:471 (3,4,5,6,7) - in pattern like this personally i would use just sliders because you got the same again and you have to remember that this one is a normal
  2. 00:39:186 (4,5) - continue with the sliders
Foreverends
992 posts
Joined July 2011
Foreverends
I'm really sorry ;'(
because my computer still dosent work and im now during the exam orz
I can't fix those mods right now orz
but I will borrow my friend's computer and fix all the mods as soon as possible
I'm really really sorry that ive done nothing of it
please forgive me ;www;
Buttercup
1,065 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Buttercup

Foreverends wrote:

I'm really sorry ;'(
because my computer still dosent work and im now during the exam orz
I can't fix those mods right now orz
but I will borrow my friend's computer and fix all the mods as soon as possible
I'm really really sorry that ive done nothing of it
please forgive me ;www;
Do not worry, I wait patiently <3
Buttercup
1,065 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Buttercup

neonat wrote:

General

01:26:581 onwards - when the BG fades out the dark blue combo 2 is really hard to see, maybe avoid using that colour at the end ok, I will change the color

Easy

00:54:186 (3) - why not use Normal sampleset finish for the end of the slider instead ok o3o

Normal

00:55:043 (1) - Normal sampleset finish on start of slider ok
01:06:614 (3) - shift to x: 312 y: 152 I think that goes more in line with a better fluidity in moving ok

I guess for the Normal it's because of the section from 00:27:614 to 00:39:614 that kinda eschews the difficulty spread within the Normal, because it's much tougher and more dense than even the kiai time 00:41:328 - 01:07:043
Maybe map as well to some of the music that go on the 1/2 beats like at 00:45:614 - 00:47:757

Sieg's Hard

00:55:043 (1) - Normal sampleset finish Sieg, I changed it for you owo

Insane

00:19:686 (4,5,6) - why the varying spacing here though, it looks weird for this triplet is good for me '.'
00:55:043 (7) - Normal sampleset finish on start of slider ok oko ko kokoko :D



Good Luck
Thanks >u<

-
-
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Lally wrote:

#queue

Nhawak wrote:

Ends' Hard - Missing all mods rip
What about to contact the mapper and ask him for the permission to fix? maybe he is busy :V can happen

[Easy]
  1. Personally i dislike the spacing that you used specially here 00:00:186 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - is the same for all, is only very sparse because it is white>white tick
  2. 00:19:471 (2,3) - *very nazi* fix the blanket okay, fixed o3o
  3. 00:22:900 (2) - you got better flow by moving this circle like that ok
    SPOILER
  4. 00:32:757 (3) - copy pasta slider from the prev one would be better
  5. 00:36:614 (4,5) - instead of having a traight slider try to put it parallel to the prev one ok o3o
    SPOILER
  6. 00:56:757 (2) - missing finish fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:471 (3,4,5,6,7) - in pattern like this personally i would use just sliders because you got the same again and you have to remember that this one is a normal I like so :<
  2. 00:39:186 (4,5) - continue with the sliders ok
Thank you Lally owo
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
olá, como prometi mas atrasado lol

[easy]

Gameplay:

  1. 01:19:043 (3) - pelo teu estilo do cor, esqueceste por novo cor aqui, e pode ouvi o ritmo está mudar
  2. 01:26:757 (4) - ^ mesma
  3. 01:32:757 (3) - ^ mesma
tudo bom, awesome

[Normal]

  1. 00:00:186 ate 00:16:471 - vou dizer uma coisa sobre os cores, este dificuldade é o normal, deste patterno no 00:00:186 (1,2) - é muito curto e complicado para os novos jogadores, eu gostava tu fosse fazer remappear só os cores, exemplo apaga novo cor no 00:01:900 (1) e outras, se fizer isso é muito melhor e ajuda ao os novatos jogadores, como tu fizeste no Easy
tudo bom, outros patterno os cores está bom expecto no inicio

[Sieg's hard]

  1. 00:07:043 (1) - this should remove new color, and in 00:10:471 (6) - put new combo color, this should follow you style combo color like you did other pattern, just this I dunno why you put nc
  2. 00:00:186 at 00:13:900 - you combo color look weird, because other parts, you do every NC is 2 white tick long, in begin is 3, I suggest recheck in begin, if you don't get it my english just pm me ingame i will explain better
look good

[Insane]

  • Gameplay:
  1. 00:15:614 (5) - por novo cor, este é insane, é diferente easy e normal, mas parece esqueceste por novo cor aqui lol
  2. 00:29:328 (6) - ^ mesma
[]
look good!! omg I so noob wtfjsdijsadghdsf D:
Gameplay and hitsound is very good, only problem is nc ho I didn't mod End's hard because he missing all mods....
Any question ask me in game

bom trabalho Nhawak, está perto bubble, volto aqui outra vez se o Foreverends corrigir todas mods, se ele fizer, dar me toque, boa sorte !!
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
thanks Pereira006, CC changed
also few hitsounds added

SPOILER
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Buttercup
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Buttercup

Pereira006 wrote:

olá, como prometi mas atrasado lol

[easy]

Gameplay:

  1. 01:19:043 (3) - pelo teu estilo do cor, esqueceste por novo cor aqui, e pode ouvi o ritmo está mudar arrumei
  2. 01:26:757 (4) - ^ mesma arrumei
  3. 01:32:757 (3) - ^ mesma arrumei


tudo bom, awesome

[Normal]

  1. 00:00:186 ate 00:16:471 - vou dizer uma coisa sobre os cores, este dificuldade é o normal, deste patterno no 00:00:186 (1,2) - é muito curto e complicado para os novos jogadores, eu gostava tu fosse fazer remappear só os cores, exemplo apaga novo cor no 00:01:900 (1) e outras, se fizer isso é muito melhor e ajuda ao os novatos jogadores, como tu fizeste no Easy ok, arrumei todos


tudo bom, outros patterno os cores está bom expecto no inicio

[Insane]

  • Gameplay:
  1. 00:15:614 (5) - por novo cor, este é insane, é diferente easy e normal, mas parece esqueceste por novo cor aqui lol ok
  2. 00:29:328 (6) - ^ mesma ok

[]
look good!! omg I so noob wtfjsdijsadghdsf D:
Gameplay and hitsound is very good, only problem is nc ho I didn't mod End's hard because he missing all mods....
Any question ask me in game

bom trabalho Nhawak, está perto bubble, volto aqui outra vez se o Foreverends corrigir todas mods, se ele fizer, dar me toque, boa sorte !!
Muito obrigado Pereira :)
Miiku-
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Miiku-
gg adorei o map
Buttercup
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Buttercup

Miiku- wrote:

gg adorei o map
yay \o/
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Tarrasky
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Rank this plz, amazing map congrats
Buttercup
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Tarrasky wrote:

Rank this plz, amazing map congrats
Thanks Tarrasky owo <3
Nickelony
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Nickelony
Credit my MP3 Pls! D:

It's taken from my map... I've cut this in Sony Vegas about 2 years ago xD

BTW Nice map! :D






(Mine will be ranked "soon")
Buttercup
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Buttercup

Nickelony wrote:

Credit my MP3 Pls! D:

It's taken from my map... I've cut this in Sony Vegas about 2 years ago xD

BTW Nice map! :D






(Mine will be ranked "soon")
oh, ok
I took of nold, but I saw that he took from you xD
Thanks <3
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Ulysses
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Ulysses
:D
Buttercup
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nold_1702 wrote:

:D
hi :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Normal is mostly consisted with 1/1 in a slow and a constant pace whereas Hard is mainly consisted of 1/2 and even containing several wide spaced objects. Sorry, but I don't feel the spread is nice enough.

Blind betting denied. :(
Buttercup
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Buttercup

Sonnyc wrote:

Normal is mostly consisted with 1/1 in a slow and a constant pace whereas Hard is mainly consisted of 1/2 and even containing several wide spaced objects. Sorry, but I don't feel the spread is nice enough.

Blind betting denied. :(
\:

I'll fix this
Takeshi Kida
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nhawak sofrendo tadin ;-;
Buttercup
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não
Takeshi Kida
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sim
ShiraKai
534 posts
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ShiraKai
hi :3 from in-game chat!
Just mod Normal Diff~

[ZdzireXollab Normal]
  1. 00:13:043 (4,5,1) - hmm... (5) stuck on (1) with 1.0x DS? In the same way as 00:22:471 (3,4,5)
    image
  2. 00:15:186 (3,4) - strange spacing :o
  3. 00:19:686 (5) - change 1/2 slider?? In normal diff,this rhythm is not allowed imo :?
    :arrow: 00:24:828 (2) - ^
    :arrow: 00:34:043 (3) -
    :arrow: 00:34:043 (3) -
    :arrow: 00:47:114 (6) -
    :arrow: 00:53:757 (6) -
    :arrow: 01:14:543 (2) -
    :arrow: 01:28:257 (2) -
  4. 00:44:328 (6,1) - i think beginners confused :? It is difficult to to normal and put the stack in 1/2 rhythm imo.
    please try this :arrow:
    image
    :arrow: 00:56:971 (2,3) - ^
    image
    :arrow: 01:08:328 (4,1) -
    :arrow: 01:09:614 (3,1) -
    :arrow: 01:22:471 (1,2) -
    :arrow: 01:25:900 (1,2) -
hit sound is very nice :)
good luck~
Krfawy
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Krfawy

ShiraKai wrote:

hi :3 from in-game chat!
Just mod Normal Diff~

[ZdzireXollab Normal]
  1. 00:13:043 (4,5,1) - hmm... (5) stuck on (1) with 1.0x DS? In the same way as 00:22:471 (3,4,5) This is Pappy's construction, so we'd better wait for his opinion. If he agrees, it will be changed.
  2. 00:15:186 (3,4) - strange spacing :o Fixed XD
  3. 00:19:686 (5) - change 1/2 slider?? In normal diff,this rhythm is not allowed imo :? This kind of things is allowed. Sorry, but I'm not changing it. The same goes for the same moments listed below in your mod. :<
  4. 00:44:328 (6,1) - i think beginners confused :? It is difficult to to normal and put the stack in 1/2 rhythm imo.
    please try this :arrow: Good catch, changed!
    :arrow: 01:08:328 (4,1) - Let me ask Pappy if we can make a triangle polygon pattern so this moment it should be easier to read. -> Paps, tak jak widzisz, może zrobimy trójkątny patternt tutaj 01:07:471 (2,3,4) - a pod czwórką (kółkiem) byłby mój slider, czy nie pasuje? JBC znajdź mnie na forum albo w grze to ustalimy szczegóły jakbyś chciał.
    :arrow: 01:09:614 (3,1) - Fixed! :3
hit sound is very nice :)
good luck~

Shadren wrote:

[ZdzireXollab Normal]
00:45:400 (2) - delete circle Fixed!
00:51:186 (6) - I prefer to change this slider to 1/2 slider + circle http://puu.sh/fDOrj/30af2af21e.jpg To be honest I want to keep it for two reasons: #1 This cute heart-shaped pattern <3; #2 I want it to be easier, so I will keep it as it is.
00:47:757 - ^
01:09:614 (3) - what about this? http://puu.sh/fDOGB/4cf5c74661.jpg Fixed! :3
01:12:186 (1) - I prefer this http://puu.sh/fDOSD/c62bfa24bd.jpg But I prefer my version to the showed one ;3; Sorry, but I want to keep mine. =3=


Thank you for your mods guys! :3
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Buttercup
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Buttercup
Thanks ShiraKai
*updated* o3o
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Shadren
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Shadren
[ZdzireXollab Normal]
00:01:900 - remove NC
00:45:400 (2) - delete circle
00:51:186 (6) - I prefer to change this slider to 1/2 slider + circle http://puu.sh/fDOrj/30af2af21e.jpg
00:47:757 - ^
01:09:614 (3) - what about this? http://puu.sh/fDOGB/4cf5c74661.jpg
01:12:186 (1) - I prefer this http://puu.sh/fDOSD/c62bfa24bd.jpg
01:22:471 (1,2) - newbies can be miss there, so let's move (2) at spacing ?
01:25:900 (1,2) - ^

that's all. Good luck with map :)
Buttercup
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Buttercup

Shadren wrote:

[ZdzireXollab Normal]
00:01:900 - remove NC
00:45:400 (2) - delete circle
00:51:186 (6) - I prefer to change this slider to 1/2 slider + circle http://puu.sh/fDOrj/30af2af21e.jpg
00:47:757 - ^
01:09:614 (3) - what about this? http://puu.sh/fDOGB/4cf5c74661.jpg
01:12:186 (1) - I prefer this http://puu.sh/fDOSD/c62bfa24bd.jpg
01:22:471 (1,2) - newbies can be miss there, so let's move (2) at spacing ?
01:25:900 (1,2) - ^

that's all. Good luck with map :)
Thanks o3o

*Updated*
Pappy
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Pappy
No changes in my parts, things like "newbies can miss here" - easy is diff for newbies, normal is diff for more experienced players than beginners.
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
As promised!

[Whispers]
  1. You may consider using OD8, since the Hard already has OD7, so it'd make sense.
  2. 00:18:614 (4) - Move this more to the right? It'd give the note a better flow seeing how you positioned 00:18:186 (3) - , maybe x:284 y:204?
  3. 00:52:471 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Such patterns are kind of confusing for such Insane, if anything, you could space them out more so they would give you a visually a more stunning effect and helping players read that. Try this?
    Example
  4. 00:57:400 (4) - This note could be move to x:248 y:344 so it would create a nice, correct looking triangle
  5. 01:02:757 (2) - This slider looks kind of sloppy compared to your earlier ones, so I was thinking giving it a sharp shape.
    Example
  6. 01:11:328 (2) - You could move this note more to the right like in the first suggestion, to give it a better flow.
  7. 01:35:114 (7,8,9) - Would make it more interesting if you could 01:35:971 (9) - remove this, and place 3 notes instead. It'd definitely make the ending more interesting, since you used that many repeat sliders.
    Example
  8. Yay
[Sieg's Hard]
  1. The map itself plays well enough, but I didn't find it appealing at all, sorry. I decided not to really go into all that since I'd end up making a 2 hour rant-post why you shouldn't do this and why you should, and in the end it's just something personal. If you want to, I can elaborate my thoughts in-game if you're interested.
  2. The real issue is how 00:45:614 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and similar patterns are spaced. It's not too hard, but aiming that for a hard player isn't necessarily easy either, the spacing is surprisingly big. The map gave a HARDER feeling on such spots than the Insane, which is never a good sign so my personal advice would be to tone down the spacing a bit, so it wouldn't be too hard to aim. Making the spacing easier would also ease up the gap from Normal > Hard which would be pretty good.
[ZdzireXollab's Normal]
  1. 00:08:757 (3) - Would fit soooo much better as a slider that blankets 00:10:043 (4,1) - properly
    Example
  2. 00:30:186 (3) - Please consider spacing this out instead of stacking, such patterns can be quite confusing to newbies, especially when you have similar patterns where the rhythm is totally different (referring to 00:22:471 (3,4,5) - )
  3. 00:50:328 (5,6) - Like earlier, I wouldn't really stack them just to avoid the possible confusion it might cause.
  4. 01:06:186 (2) - Especially situations like this where you just put bunch of stacked stuff together, then the sudden rhythm-change even though the stack implies otherwise. Like earlier, consider spacing it normally
  5. 01:21:614 (3,1,2,3) - Etc etc, you know the deal by now
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:900 (1) - The NC itself seems rather useless, it'd be probably the best to just remove 00:14:757 (1) - combo?
  2. 00:19:471 (2,3) - Blanket it off
  3. Yay clean
Sorry for such short mod, the map itself is cool! Apologies for any possible grammar issues / typos, it's currently 7 am so zz.. Best of luck! ~
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