Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Remix) · forum

Pappy

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Pappy 2015-02-13T19:08:34+00:00

FINALLY

Sieg

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Sieg 2015-02-13T20:01:06+00:00

yay

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DeletedUser_3044645 2015-02-13T20:29:07+00:00

SPOILER

14:10 Nhawak: hello o3o
14:10 No Dap: hi o3o
14:10 Nhawak: how are you?
14:10 No Dap: good I guess
14:11 Nhawak: :3
14:11 Nhawak: you're accepting check requests? ;3;
14:11 *Nhawak runs
14:12 No Dap: maybe :#
14:12 No Dap: :3
14:12 *Nhawak is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/549630 Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Remix)]
14:15 *No Dap is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/549630 Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Remix) [Whispers]]
14:21 No Dap: well
14:21 No Dap: normal has too many stacks  alternaing 1/1 and 1/2 that its even confusing for me:3
14:22 Nhawak: oh ;w;
14:22 No Dap: damm
14:22 No Dap: 8.8 op
14:22 Nhawak: xD
14:26 No Dap: ok enough playin
14:26 *Nhawak runs
14:27 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/549630 Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Remix) [Whispers]]
14:27 No Dap: 00:21:186 (3,4) - i think this is meaninglessly too big
14:29 Nhawak: I'll fix o3o
14:35 Nhawak: the beatmap is ready for rank? or no? ;w;
14:37 No Dap: im
14:37 No Dap: asking around
14:37 No Dap: if this is unrankable http://puu.sh/fS9Wz/f6cd93b653.jpg
14:39 Nhawak: oh ;w;
14:40 Nhawak: CTRL + G
14:40 Nhawak: xD
14:40 No Dap: lol that works
14:42 No Dap: 00:23:328 (3) - maybe
14:42 No Dap: move it u
14:42 No Dap: up
14:42 No Dap: just a little bit more
14:42 No Dap: for better redability
14:43 Nhawak: sure
14:44 No Dap: 00:07:043 (1,2) - why are these closer?
14:44 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/549628 Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Remix) [Easy]]
14:44 No Dap: btw
14:45 Nhawak: omg xD
14:46 No Dap: 00:55:471 (1,2) - same here
14:50 Nhawak: fixed o3o
14:51 No Dap: ok
14:51 No Dap: well since normal diff is a guest diff
14:51 No Dap: is he online?
14:52 Nhawak: ye
14:52 Nhawak: krfawy
14:52 Nhawak: o3o
14:52 No Dap: can you ask to pm me
14:52 No Dap: actually
14:52 No Dap: ill just post on thread
14:53 Nhawak: ok
15:19 Nhawak: hard need changes? o3o
15:24 No Dap: just one thing
15:25 Nhawak: which?
15:26 No Dap: 00:55:328 (2) -

SPOILER

14:54 Krfawy: Hello I am Krfawy :3
14:54 No Dap: hey :3
14:55 Krfawy: Do you like my and Pappy's diff? XD
14:55 No Dap: yeah xD
14:55 No Dap: anyway
14:55 No Dap: 01:04:471 (3,4,1) - 
14:55 No Dap: this stack is broken in game
14:56 No Dap: manual stack them
14:56 Krfawy: OK
14:58 No Dap: tbh you have too many 1/1 and 1/2 stacks
14:58 No Dap: its going to be really confusing 
14:58 No Dap: let me just point out things that should be fixed 
14:59 Krfawy: Okiee dokiee :3
15:00 No Dap: 00:51:186 (7,1) - you can probably unstack these
15:00 No Dap: too many stack pause in a row
15:00 No Dap: 00:50:328 (6,7) - this one fits
15:00 No Dap: so unstack these i guess 00:52:043 (1,2) - 
15:01 Krfawy: fixed
15:05 No Dap: 00:55:043 (1,2,3) - 
15:05 No Dap: tbh this is really complex rhythm for a normal diff
15:05 No Dap: this is what I would do... 
15:05 No Dap: http://puu.sh/fSeDD/be6b27f9c7.jpg
15:08 No Dap: you can unstack this too 00:57:186 (2,3) - 
15:09 No Dap: 01:22:471 (1,2,1) - and broken stack
15:09 No Dap: I really prefer if you don't stack for this one but your choice
15:10 Krfawy: ok will fix those just still fixing that complex rhythm moment x'D
15:11 No Dap: 01:27:614 (1,2) - and here too
15:11 No Dap: rest looks good
15:13 Krfawy: one question
15:13 Krfawy: would I stack 00:57:614 (3,1) -
15:13 Krfawy: if I delete 00:58:257 (4) -
15:13 Krfawy: ?
15:14 No Dap: yeah
15:14 No Dap: but I don't recommend 
15:14 No Dap: well it might be just me
15:14 No Dap: but I never stack anything on slider end lol
15:14 Krfawy: oh
15:14 Krfawy: OK
15:14 No Dap: on my maps
15:14 No Dap: cuz I don't like them when I play :3
15:14 No Dap: but for normal and easy, it makes things harder
15:18 Krfawy: OK fixed everything
15:19 Krfawy: waiting for Nhawak for an update

@sieg

I find 00:55:043 (1,2) - this rhythm too hard to transit, so why don't you do this like insane

Edit : looks like it's gonna take some time. call me back when it's done

Sieg

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Sieg 2015-02-13T20:55:33+00:00

sure
http://puu.sh/fSmnJ/6d52eb590f.osu

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-13T21:04:27+00:00

updated :3

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DeletedUser_3044645 2015-02-13T21:19:13+00:00

Ok, adjusted OD on the higher diffs for better spread.

Qualified!!

and congratulations on your first ranked map!!

ghm12

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ghm12 2015-02-13T21:20:14+00:00

gratz nhawak <3

meii18

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meii18 2015-02-13T21:21:24+00:00

yay Gratz ! I like this song very much :3

Ariahod

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Ariahod 2015-02-13T21:23:02+00:00

Yaay~ congratz :33

iMega

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iMega 2015-02-13T21:23:42+00:00

gratzzzzzzzzzzzzz <3

Pappy

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Pappy 2015-02-13T21:29:44+00:00

Congratz my deer <3

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-13T21:31:38+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Ok, adjusted OD on the higher diffs for better spread.

Qualified!!

and congratulations on your first ranked map!!

OMG <33333

THANKS <33

Last edited by Buttercup 2015-02-14T00:31:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sieg

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Sieg 2015-02-13T21:57:30+00:00

congrats :3

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-02-14T00:08:12+00:00

OMG Gratz!sorry for late....

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-14T00:37:59+00:00

ghm12 wrote:
gratz nhawak <3

obrigado gato <3

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
yay Gratz ! I like this song very much :3

this song is amazing o3o thanks <3

Ariahod wrote:
Yaay~ congratz :33

valeu <333

iMega wrote:
gratzzzzzzzzzzzzz <3

obrigado ainmega o3o <3

Pappy wrote:
Congratz my deer <3

PAPPY <3 THANKS O3O

Sieg wrote:
congrats :3

Thanks \o/
Thanks for gd :3

HabiHolic wrote:
OMG Gratz!sorry for late....

Thanks Habi o3o
sorry for the hurry ;3;

Pereira006

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Pereira006 2015-02-14T01:33:41+00:00

what the... !! !! ! !

congratz

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-14T01:38:54+00:00

Pereira006 wrote:
what the... !! !! ! !

congratz

thanks Pereira

ShiraKai

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ShiraKai 2015-02-14T06:23:35+00:00

Gratz

Taskmaster

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Taskmaster 2015-02-14T08:04:57+00:00

Gratz

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-14T10:49:21+00:00

ShiraKai wrote:
Gratz

Thanks

[ Mephisto ] wrote:
Gratz

Thanks

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2015-02-14T12:02:38+00:00

Cool song~ Gz for your first rank! :3/

Secretpipe

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Secretpipe 2015-02-14T13:00:15+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
Cool song~ Gz for your first rank! :3/

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-14T19:10:33+00:00

thanks guys owo

- Marco -

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- Marco - 2015-02-14T22:47:07+00:00

\o3o/

Mao

Elite Mapper II

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Mao 2015-02-19T21:35:39+00:00

Reason for Disqualification

My main concern on this set are the stacks in Normal. Having a closer look at them each shows you that you have used 1/2 and 1/1 stacks all over the place both stacked onto notes/sliderheads and slidertails which might be really confusing for newbie players to play. Generally I'd recommend you to unstack one typ completely and also unstack all the ones below slidertails. Especially these ones are really hard to recognize for newer players which complements the overall confusion here. Have a look at the Normal's mod below to get an idea of what I want you to do.

Tl;dr Tidy up these different kinds of stacks as you can read in the Normal mod to avoid confusion. Optimal would be if just one type of stacks would be left (or you don't use them without any order in between each other). Also the stacks below slidertails should be substituted by regular spacing.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding

[

Easy]

00:56:757 (2) - /Minor/ - If you have the key-overlay activatey, it touches this very oddly and therefore I'd move this to the left. Quite minor though.
Nice and clean.

[

ZdzireXollab Normal]

What is this difficulty name? Normal Collab would be much easier to understand. :/
00:04:900 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you doing all the 1/1 stacks here? I'd rather go for something like what you did before to get some "variation" into it as these "anti-jumps" might not be the best idea here.
00:15:614 (4,5) - Stacks below slidertails in Normal difficulties are no good idea in general as it's pretty hard to read and might lead to confusion in combination with all the other stack types. I would recommend you to unstack all of these to increase the readability. (e.g. 01:04:471 (3,4,1) - , 01:22:471 (1,2,1) - , 01:25:900 (1,2) - )
00:50:328 (6,7) - Suddenly these are 1/1? Weren't the ones before all 1/2? Please unstack this. Same applies for 01:01:900 (1,2) - .
00:58:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Quite dense compared to the rest, don't you think so? I'd rather replace 2 by just a single circle but that's up to you.
01:01:471 (3,1) - This might be just me but I'd definitely unstack these as I would have expected a faster movement from all this 1/2 before implying that I felt like this is going to be 1/2.
01:27:614 (1,2) - 3/2 Stacks are really confusing, why is this even here ;_;
Generally the major issues are the stacks. Do what I have listed above (and adjust the others yourself!) and in the overall reason and you will be fine.

[

Whsipers]

00:47:757 (5) - Why are you mapping 1/8 here? I'd go for simple 1/4 but it should be fine if you want that kick as you hit all the notes correctly. Just wanted to mention this.
01:08:328 (3) - I understand what you want to do here but it might be better to actually introduce the new section with a clickable action by doing something like Sieg did. (Same applies to 01:15:186 (1) - , 01:22:043 (1) - , 01:28:900 (1) - )
01:36:186 (3) - How about raising the volume of this a bit? I know the section is fairly quiet but still 10% for a clickable object is so low.
Cool difficulty in general!

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Sorry for not being able to thoroughly as I am really short of time lately but well, the main focus here lies on the Normal where I have pointed out the most important overall facts. Good luck with this o/

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-19T22:12:53+00:00

NO ;W;

Last edited by Buttercup 2015-04-06T12:20:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Len

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Len 2015-02-20T04:07:46+00:00

ㅠㅠ

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DeletedUser_3044645 2015-02-20T04:36:48+00:00

2015-02-13 14:58 No Dap: tbh you have too many 1/1 and 1/2 stacks
2015-02-13 14:58 No Dap: its going to be really confusing
2015-02-13 14:58 No Dap: let me just point out things that should be fixed
2015-02-13 14:59 Krfawy: Okiee dokiee :3
2015-02-13 15:00 No Dap: 00:51:186 (7,1) - you can probably unstack these
2015-02-13 15:00 No Dap: too many stack pause in a row
2015-02-13 15:00 No Dap: 00:50:328 (6,7) - this one fits
2015-02-13 15:00 No Dap: so unstack these i guess 00:52:043 (1,2) -
2015-02-13 15:01 Krfawy: fixed
2015-02-13 15:05 No Dap: 00:55:043 (1,2,3) -
2015-02-13 15:05 No Dap: tbh this is really complex rhythm for a normal diff
2015-02-13 15:05 No Dap: this is what I would do...
2015-02-13 15:05 No Dap: http://puu.sh/fSeDD/be6b27f9c7.jpg
2015-02-13 15:08 No Dap: you can unstack this too 00:57:186 (2,3) -
2015-02-13 15:09 No Dap: 01:22:471 (1,2,1) - and broken stack
2015-02-13 15:09 No Dap: I really prefer if you don't stack for this one but your choice
2015-02-13 15:10 Krfawy: ok will fix those just still fixing that complex rhythm moment x'D
2015-02-13 15:11 No Dap: 01:27:614 (1,2) - and here too
2015-02-13 15:11 No Dap: rest looks good
2015-02-13 15:13 Krfawy: one question
2015-02-13 15:13 Krfawy: would I stack 00:57:614 (3,1) -
2015-02-13 15:13 Krfawy: if I delete 00:58:257 (4) -
2015-02-13 15:13 Krfawy: ?
2015-02-13 15:14 No Dap: yeah
2015-02-13 15:14 No Dap: but I don't recommend
2015-02-13 15:14 No Dap: well it might be just me
2015-02-13 15:14 No Dap: but I never stack anything on slider end lol
2015-02-13 15:14 Krfawy: oh
2015-02-13 15:14 Krfawy: OK
2015-02-13 15:14 No Dap: on my maps
2015-02-13 15:14 No Dap: cuz I don't like them when I play :3
2015-02-13 15:14 No Dap: but for normal and easy, it makes things harder

I guess it wasn't enough of unstacking. Should have popped the bubble instead of ranking it.

and yes. I'm not surprised. hope they (normal collabers) learned a lesson.

and this was also a good lesson for me : not to give my approval if I don't like something

gl in requalifiying

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-20T04:40:52+00:00

but....
A. this isn't the easiest diff of a set
B. it's appropriate for normal diffs to have stacks?

edit: okay if you're gunna dq this for the slider tail stacks and hidden circles i understand.

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-02-20T05:56:10+00:00

stacks are fine even if they are 1/1 and 1/2 ones, is a normal diff not an easy (new players play easy diffs not normals), but those hidden circles and slider stacks are bad for a normal diff

Krfawy

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Krfawy 2015-02-20T14:15:10+00:00

OK, today evening I'm back home so I can look at the normal and mod from Mao the KAT. Also I will fix Pap's parts if needed because he allowed me to do this and I think I know how to handle it. There's still one "but" to the mod from Mao: I won't change the name of the collab's name since it has a proper name - because Nogard Extra is something OK, so ZdzireXollab is ok too since it means it's made by two Poles and there's a 'Normal' name included. Sorry, nothing unrankable nor not suitable! ;_; Also it looks fun! >:3

See you in a few hours!

LVU Krfawy o3o

EDIT: Changed everything!

Update

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83,325,31043,6,0,P|48:314|10:225,1,140,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
28,160,31686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,92,31900,2,0,P|43:57|132:19,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,52,32543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,32757,6,0,L|328:64,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,44,33186,2,0,B|352:72|356:128|356:128|336:176,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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196,244,34471,6,0,P|132:256|52:208,1,140,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
20,92,35328,2,0,P|84:80|164:128,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,136,35971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,36186,5,4,1:0:0:0:
344,292,36614,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,228,37043,1,0,1:0:0:0:
404,104,37471,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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332,284,38328,2,0,B|368:276|368:276|404:284,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,116,39185,2,0,B|364:124|364:124|331:116,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39614,12,4,41328,1:0:0:0:
21,31,42186,6,0,P|16:63|25:113,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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119,277,43043,2,0,P|189:242|267:263,1,140,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
334,358,43900,2,0,P|368:362|403:357,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,330,44328,2,0,P|442:304|426:272,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,209,44757,6,0,P|476:141|456:70,1,140,4|2,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
334,140,45614,2,0,P|299:145|264:142,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,91,46043,2,0,P|181:88|146:92,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,135,46471,2,0,B|77:175|89:223|89:223|104:275,1,140,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
210,361,47328,2,0,B|257:342|257:342|308:337|333:301,1,140,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
382,169,48186,5,4,1:0:0:0:
289,64,48614,1,2,3:0:0:0:
178,147,49043,2,0,P|143:151|108:147,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,164,49471,2,0,P|28:197|10:226,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,296,49900,2,0,P|52:292|87:296,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,320,50328,2,0,B|187:327|216:297|242:270|283:284,2,140,2|8|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,233,51614,5,4,1:0:0:0:
121,126,52043,1,2,3:0:0:0:
212,19,52472,2,0,P|246:11|280:12,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,44,52900,2,0,P|349:78|364:108,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,167,53328,1,4,0:0:0:0:
497,271,53757,1,2,3:0:0:0:
497,271,54186,2,0,B|437:269|437:269|322:299|259:268,1,210,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,257,55043,6,0,B|163:258|119:343|119:343|149:252|110:210,1,280,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,113,56328,2,0,P|50:79|63:53,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,15,56757,5,4,0:0:0:0:
245,8,57186,2,0,P|241:54|226:83,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,112,57614,2,0,B|154:184|198:178|177:251,1,140,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
140,308,58257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,377,58471,6,0,B|192:349|235:349|235:349|239:329|253:315,1,140,4|2,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
377,255,59328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
431,211,59543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
431,141,59757,1,2,3:0:0:0:
377,98,59972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,113,60186,6,0,P|236:116|184:72,1,140,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
123,42,60828,2,0,L|51:9,2,70,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,112,61471,1,2,3:0:0:0:
9,188,61900,6,0,B|50:235|50:235|63:245|63:245|103:291,1,140,4|2,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
219,369,62757,2,0,P|225:310|234:286,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,242,63186,2,0,P|300:250|335:251,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,236,63614,5,4,0:0:0:0:
453,186,63828,2,0,P|468:222|506:247,2,70,0|2|4,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,120,64471,2,0,B|368:124|368:124|352:129|352:129|289:133,1,140,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
175,214,65328,6,0,P|153:162|160:75,2,140,4|2|0,1:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,267,66400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,322,66614,2,0,P|199:346|174:343,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,304,67043,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,224,67471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,260,67900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,68328,2,0,L|336:196,1,70
290,241,68757,6,0,P|232:187|152:206,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,207,69400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,274,69614,2,0,B|157:305|170:354|170:354|231:384|273:334,1,210,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,294,70471,6,0,P|344:227|405:200,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,171,71114,2,0,P|499:126|504:102,1,70,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,23,71757,2,0,P|360:35|325:37,1,70
255,42,72186,6,0,P|188:101|195:154,2,140,4|0|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,78,73471,2,0,P|401:150|399:157,1,70
380,209,73900,6,0,B|323:233|323:233|246:315,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,333,74543,2,0,P|192:344|140:346,1,70,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,207,75186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,81,75614,6,0,B|133:76|170:91|170:91|189:85|189:85|207:93|226:91,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,60,76471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,196,76900,2,0,P|376:229|372:275,1,70
381,330,77328,6,0,P|321:294|252:284,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,304,77971,2,0,P|152:315|117:315,1,70,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,45,79900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
390,79,80328,2,0,P|387:113|398:146,1,70
443,198,80757,6,0,P|462:264|431:326,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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304,372,81614,2,0,B|277:368|261:352|261:352|211:357|170:338,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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114,100,83328,2,0,B|130:186|196:203|196:203|231:188|265:193,1,210,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,234,84186,5,4,1:0:0:0:
204,59,84828,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,89328,12,0,96186,0:0:0:0:

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Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-20T15:09:54+00:00

GOGO RE-RANK \o3o/

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-20T22:52:50+00:00

Mao wrote:
Reason for Disqualification

My main concern on this set are the stacks in Normal. Having a closer look at them each shows you that you have used 1/2 and 1/1 stacks all over the place both stacked onto notes/sliderheads and slidertails which might be really confusing for newbie players to play. Generally I'd recommend you to unstack one typ completely and also unstack all the ones below slidertails. Especially these ones are really hard to recognize for newer players which complements the overall confusion here. Have a look at the Normal's mod below to get an idea of what I want you to do.

Tl;dr Tidy up these different kinds of stacks as you can read in the Normal mod to avoid confusion. Optimal would be if just one type of stacks would be left (or you don't use them without any order in between each other). Also the stacks below slidertails should be substituted by regular spacing.
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Additional Modding

[ Easy]
00:56:757 (2) - /Minor/ - If you have the key-overlay activatey, it touches this very oddly and therefore I'd move this to the left. Quite minor though. yep
Nice and clean.
[ ZdzireXollab Normal]
What is this difficulty name? Normal Collab would be much easier to understand. :/
00:04:900 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you doing all the 1/1 stacks here? I'd rather go for something like what you did before to get some "variation" into it as these "anti-jumps" might not be the best idea here.
00:15:614 (4,5) - Stacks below slidertails in Normal difficulties are no good idea in general as it's pretty hard to read and might lead to confusion in combination with all the other stack types. I would recommend you to unstack all of these to increase the readability. (e.g. 01:04:471 (3,4,1) - , 01:22:471 (1,2,1) - , 01:25:900 (1,2) - )
00:50:328 (6,7) - Suddenly these are 1/1? Weren't the ones before all 1/2? Please unstack this. Same applies for 01:01:900 (1,2) - .
00:58:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Quite dense compared to the rest, don't you think so? I'd rather replace 2 by just a single circle but that's up to you.
01:01:471 (3,1) - This might be just me but I'd definitely unstack these as I would have expected a faster movement from all this 1/2 before implying that I felt like this is going to be 1/2.
01:27:614 (1,2) - 3/2 Stacks are really confusing, why is this even here ;_;
Generally the major issues are the stacks. Do what I have listed above (and adjust the others yourself!) and in the overall reason and you will be fine.
[ Whsipers]
00:47:757 (5) - Why are you mapping 1/8 here? I'd go for simple 1/4 but it should be fine if you want that kick as you hit all the notes correctly. Just wanted to mention this.
01:08:328 (3) - I understand what you want to do here but it might be better to actually introduce the new section with a clickable action by doing something like Sieg did. (Same applies to 01:15:186 (1) - , 01:22:043 (1) - , 01:28:900 (1) - ) fixed all o3o
01:36:186 (3) - How about raising the volume of this a bit? I know the section is fairly quiet but still 10% for a clickable object is so low. sure
Cool difficulty in general!
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Sorry for not being able to thoroughly as I am really short of time lately but well, the main focus here lies on the Normal where I have pointed out the most important overall facts. Good luck with this o/

thanks, let's try again ;3;
BNs please!

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xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2015-02-22T03:28:02+00:00

Fixed unsnapped object in Whispers.

Rebubbled!

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-22T03:29:02+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Fixed unsnapped object in Whispers.

Rebubbled!

ya
thanks o3o

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2015-02-22T04:41:10+00:00

We only fix a minor issue on Normal difficulty (I also did a background check just to be safe *runs*). Mapset re-nominated to qualification status!

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-22T04:45:58+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
We only fix a minor issue on Normal difficulty (I also did a background check just to be safe *runs*). Mapset re-nominated to qualification status!

\o3o/
thank you so much <3

meii18

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meii18 2015-02-22T06:07:04+00:00

Regratz Nhawak ~

Taskmaster

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Taskmaster 2015-02-22T06:17:25+00:00

Regrats

Pappy

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Pappy 2015-02-22T08:15:08+00:00

Congrats Nhawak. <3

Gamu

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Gamu 2015-02-22T10:18:53+00:00

Congrats~ \:D/

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2015-02-22T12:07:32+00:00

Unranked due to inappropriate BG.

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Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-22T13:28:16+00:00

Thanks to everyone!

iMega

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iMega 2015-02-22T13:30:12+00:00

Near wrote:
Unranked due to inappropriate BG. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

near pls dkaposdkpaoskd

Mao

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Mao 2015-02-24T16:18:31+00:00

Grats :3

meii18

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meii18 2015-02-24T16:21:03+00:00

Near wrote:
Unranked due to inappropriate BG. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Seriously ?!

Buttercup

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Buttercup 2015-02-24T16:44:26+00:00