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Mariya Ise - Nadeshiko Romance (TV size)

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Sallad4ever
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, April 19, 2010 at 10:30:29 PM

Artist: Mariya Ise
Title: Nadeshiko Romance (TV size)
Source: Hanamaru Youchien
Tags: hinagiku narasaki
BPM: 116
Filesize: 15016kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.75 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Hard (4.78 stars, 211 notes)
  3. Normal (3.36 stars, 133 notes)
Download: Mariya Ise - Nadeshiko Romance (TV size)
Download: Mariya Ise - Nadeshiko Romance (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is one of my favorite ending in Hanamaru

Btw this is Hinagiku character song
Please do RE-DOWNLOAD for those before 13/4/2010

Skin element = 100%
Easy = 100%
Normal = 100%
Hard =100%

22/3/2010 -- New BG from Vicho-kun
29/3/2010 -- Siriru's early mod :)
1/4/2010 -- Moved to pending, New BG
1/4/2010 -- Astom's, orioncomet's,& soulfear's mod
2/4/2010 -- Leorda's, al2e10's, VanMoNky's, & LKs mod
4/4/2010 -- Please do RE-DOWNLOAD
6/4/2010 -- pieguy1372's & DJPop's mod
7/4/2010 -- Breeze's skin mod
9/4/2010 -- Add new skin element PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD
13/4/2010 -- Loweh's, wmfchris's, & ykcarrot's mod
19/4/2010 -- Shinxyn's & Sonnyc's mod
Vicho
This is my favorite ending from Hanamaru Youchien *___*
Hinagiku kawaii!! STAR STAR STAR!!!

Here's a BG :3

Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
OK Vicho-kun You have to tell me where do you got this pic :cry:
Gosh this is perfect please tell me Vicho-kun :cry:
Cyril Scarlet
I'm not good modder If some point you feel weird plz ignore that ^^

-General-

 ● Add 'anime' in TAG ?
 ● set BG colors ? :3


-Easy-

Fine


-Normal-

00:17:829 (10) - try to move for beautiful stack ?


-Hard-

00:22:743 (1,2) - this spacing is not same with 3~7
00:53:519 (6) - Move left 2 Tiny Grid ?
01:16:536 (4,5,6,9) - Move up 1 Grid ?
01:17:312 (7,8) - up 2 grid



STAR ~ Cute song Cute map Cute Hit Circle ~ ヾ(≧∇≦*)
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever

S i R i R u wrote:

I'm not good modder If some point you feel weird plz ignore that ^^ Don't worry I welcome any help :D

-General-

 ● Add 'anime' in TAG ? anime is already in genre so I believe won't have to add it :D
 ● set BG colors ? :3 How's pink


-Easy-

Fine Whew thanks :)


-Normal-

00:17:829 (10) - try to move for beautiful stack ? Tweak this a little ;)


-Hard-

00:22:743 (1,2) - this spacing is not same with 3~7 fixed :oops:
00:53:519 (6) - Move left 2 Tiny Grid ? I guess not
01:16:536 (4,5,6,9) - Move up 1 Grid ? Yup :)
01:17:312 (7,8) - up 2 grid Done :D



STAR ~ Cute song Cute map Cute Hit Circle ~ ヾ(≧∇≦*)Yatta :D still nothing to compare with your map though :D
Arigatou for the mod Siriru :)
Astom
Hi ~~~~

In red maybe important, In blue suggestion

[General]
-cut unnecesary transparency in hit50.png

[Easy]
-100%

[Normal]
-100%

[Hard]
-100%

*-* StaR
Nice song Sallad and skin x3
orioncomet
Just some suggestions.

[Normal]
01:08:001 (2) - replace sound whistle with finish?

[Hard]
- Overalldifficulty +1 or +2 plz, It will be easy to read more with those note
01:08:001 (4) - replace sound whistle with finish?

Star ^^
soulfear
[Easy]
np.
[Normal]
np.
[Hard]
OA+1

star.
Diasios
Nice map, starred~
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
Done all of them
Thanks for the mod Astom, orioncomet, n soulfear ;)
Also for the star xxheroxx :)
Sakura
[General]
-Nice skin ^^

[Easy]
-Havent seen a real [Easy] in a while, this looks good for the guidelines good job ^^

[Normal]
No problems found here

[Hard]
Best hard i've seen in a while, and proof that to make a Hard you dont need to make confusing stuff, challenging and fun

No problems were found on your beatmap ^^ +Star
Leorda
100% Sehat?

[Skin]
1) The hit0.png is missing
2) I think I don't like the hitcirle is transparent, make it untransparent?
3) My Netbook is little lag, I get 55fps-70fps while I test this beatmap, I think your skin or video makes my Netbook are lag........
4) I think the scorebar-color.png it's little blur, make it sharpen?

I can't find something wrong :cry:
STAR
al2e10
☆Al2e's mod !!

[Hard]
- Combo problem
00:08:001 (9) - New combo & 00:08:260 (1) Remove new combo
00:24:553 (7) - New combo & 00:24:812 (1) Remove new combo
00:26:622 (5) - New combo & 00:26:881 (1) Remove new combo
00:27:915 (5) OR 00:28:691 (6) Change to new combo 00:29:208 (1) Remove new combo
00:41:105 (8) - New combo & 00:41:363 (1) Remove new combo
00:45:243 (7) - New combo & 00:45:501 (1) Remove new combo
01:24:553 (4) - New combo?

[Normal]
- Combo problem
00:14:208 (7) - New combo

[ALL]
That not much problem in your map, GREAT !!
STAR !!
Vanmonky
Good work. There's only one thing I don't like.

01:24:553 (4) - Sounds weird. Bad idea to add finish at the end. How if reduce this two 1/1 ticks? Or silence this slider from 01:25:588. You may choose one of these suggestion or fix it with your own idea.

Anyway, the skin is good. You made it? Unfortunately, it has no comboburst. :|

Call me back for pubble.
LKs
cute skin >w<

Easy

[01:24:553] here stop the kiaitime

Normal


[00:15:76] use finish but not a whistle
[00:17:82] move a little right
[01:24:553] here stop the kiaitime

Hard

[01:26:622] here stop the kiaitime

star~
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
Nice to meet you Sakura301 :D

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
-Nice skin ^^ Thanks :)

[Easy]
-Havent seen a real [Easy] in a while, this looks good for the guidelines good job ^^ Glad it's good :D

[Normal]
No problems found here Fiuh

[Hard]
Best hard i've seen in a while, and proof that to make a Hard you don't need to make confusing stuff, challenging and fun Thank you very much :)

No problems were found on your beatmap ^^ +Star
Sehat Selalu ;)

Leorda wrote:

100% Sehat?

[Skin]
1) The hit0.png is missing :oops: added
2) I think I don't like the hitcirle is transparent, make it untransparent? Hm.. I try making the bubble visible and it didn't turn out very good :(
3) My Netbook is little lag, I get 55fps-70fps while I test this beatmap, I think your skin or video makes my Netbook are lag........ It's the video, I try using no-video and it get high fps, I'll change the video :D
4) I think the scorebar-color.png it's little blur, make it sharpen? Intentional

I can't find something wrong :cry: :D
STAR
Halo al2e10

al2e10 wrote:

☆Al2e's mod !!

[Hard]
- Combo problem
00:08:001 (9) - New combo & 00:08:260 (1) Remove new combo
00:24:553 (7) - New combo & 00:24:812 (1) Remove new combo
00:26:622 (5) - New combo & 00:26:881 (1) Remove new combo
00:27:915 (5) OR 00:28:691 (6) Change to new combo 00:29:208 (1) Remove new combo
00:41:105 (8) - New combo & 00:41:363 (1) Remove new combo
00:45:243 (7) - New combo & 00:45:501 (1) Remove new combo
01:24:553 (4) - New combo?

[Normal]
- Combo problem
00:14:208 (7) - New combo

All done :D
[ALL]
That not much problem in your map, GREAT !! :D Thank you :D
STAR !!

VanMoNky wrote:

Good work. There's only one thing I don't like.

01:24:553 (4) - Sounds weird. Bad idea to add finish at the end. How if reduce this two 1/1 ticks? Or silence this slider from 01:25:588. You may choose one of these suggestion or fix it with your own idea.
Actually near the end of the song you'll hear a noise around 01:25:070 (use earphone/headphone) that's why I use finish and no-silence slider to hide this :? I don't know how to remove the noise nor find any other version without those noise :cry:

Anyway, the skin is good. You made it? Unfortunately, it has no comboburst. :| Yeah I made it with my limited gimp skill, too bad I can't find any other hinagiku's picture for the combo burst :(

Call me back for pubble. Will do :D
Halo LKs :D

cute skin >w< Thanks :D

Easy

[01:24:553] here stop the kiaitime

Normal

[00:15:76] use finish but not a whistle
[00:17:82] move a little right
[01:24:553] here stop the kiaitime

Hard

[01:26:622] here stop the kiaitime
Done except the little nazi, I did it intentional

star~
Thank you very much for your star guys :)
Vanmonky
Too bad you don't follow my suggestion. I meant, hey that slider sucks and you need to fix it however. And yes, I heard that even before you told me. But, I think you are overacted. No need to follow such thing. OK, if you want to keep it, I will let you.

Pubbled.
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever

VanMoNky wrote:

Too bad you don't follow my suggestion. I meant, hey that slider sucks and you need to fix it however. And yes, I heard that even before you told me. But, I think you are overacted. No need to follow such thing. OK, if you want to keep it, I will let you.
:oops: I guess I'm overreacting :o I'm kinda afraid if there will be any MAT/BAT will complain about that noise, but I have your confirmation so I'll fix it. Really sorry bout this :cry:
Edit: silenced the slider how's this? :?
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Nice~
Star~
Desolationx_old
Great file ^.^ just played and havent found anything wrong yet, although i havent been playing for long =(
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
Thanks H-boy and Desolationx :oops:

It makes me happy if someone like my map :)
pieguyn
Easy:

-Perhaps use finishes a bit more like in Normal?

01:20:415 (3,5) - Perhaps make these a bit more symmetrical?
01:24:553 - End the Kiai here

Normal:

00:58:174 (6) - Align with the end of (5)
01:24:036 (4) - Move one level 3 grid right

Hard:

00:28:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - This seems a bit awkward... The spacing isn't consistent and it looks strange. I suggest moving (3) down one level 3 grid, (4) left one, (5) down one and left two, and (6) left two (and moving the notes afterward). :)
00:40:588 (6) - Move it one level 3 grid square left and one level 3 grid square down. Then move (7) to (4) two down, and (5) one down and one right. That way the area between the notes are all equal and it looks a lot nicer. :)
00:55:588 (1) - Make (1) equidistant from (2) and (3)?
01:24:553 - Move this timing section 1/4 earlier on the timeline. That way the volume doesn't depend on when you hit the note.

Also, I really liked the skin. :D

Nice work! :) *star*
DJPop
~Easy~
00:55:588 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:22:484 (5) - add hitfinish at end

~Normal~
00:17:829 (4) - stack it
00:22:484 (8) - new combo
00:23:001 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:760 (9) - new combo
00:31:277 (1) - remove new combo

~Hard~
01:24:553 (1) - silence the sliderslide


+Star
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
Halo pieguy1372 :)

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

-Perhaps use finishes a bit more like in Normal? Yup

01:20:415 (3,5) - Perhaps make these a bit more symmetrical? done
01:24:553 - End the Kiai here :oops: yup

Normal:

00:58:174 (6) - Align with the end of (5) ready
01:24:036 (4) - Move one level 3 grid right ok

Hard:

00:28:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - This seems a bit awkward... The spacing isn't consistent and it looks strange. I suggest moving (3) down one level 3 grid, (4) left one, (5) down one and left two, and (6) left two (and moving the notes afterward). :) nice
00:40:588 (6) - Move it one level 3 grid square left and one level 3 grid square down. Then move (7) to (4) two down, and (5) one down and one right. That way the area between the notes are all equal and it looks a lot nicer. :) great one
00:55:588 (1) - Make (1) equidistant from (2) and (3)? isn't it already?
01:24:553 - Move this timing section 1/4 earlier on the timeline. That way the volume doesn't depend on when you hit the note. it's ok like this

Also, I really liked the skin. :D Glad you like it :)

Nice work! :) *star*
Halo DJPop :)

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:55:588 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3) :? done?
01:22:484 (5) - add hitfinish at end Added

~Normal~
00:17:829 (4) - stack it :oops: ok
00:22:484 (8) - new combo yup
00:23:001 (1) - remove new combo ready
00:30:760 (9) - new combo yaha
00:31:277 (1) - remove new combo removed

~Hard~
01:24:553 (1) - silence the sliderslide I don't think I will :?

+Star
Thanks for your nazi pieguy1372 and DJPop's mod n star
A lot thanks to you all :)
Breeze
Sorry for delay, oh, it's already pubbled, good job on it
But I'm sorry I have to *pop* the pubble, there are something important that I think you must fit in your skin

[Skin]
  1. scorebar is a little long, it would cover score a bit
  2. scorebar-colour is under scorebar-bg not on it, is that on purpose? looked werid

    In general, custom skin shouldn't over the size of defult skin. your scorebar-colour is 607x72, which is too much higher than defult 646 x 13, any reason to make it like this?
PM me if you had done changes or you have any reason to make a skin like that, just let me know :)

Shulin
^ What breeze mentioned.

Apart from that maps are good.

~ Star.
Chacha17
Aaaaa >_> Sorry for late mod, but as I've expected I can't find anything wrong now.

Here you go.
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever

Breeze wrote:

Sorry for delay, oh, it's already pubbled, good job on it
But I'm sorry I have to *pop* the pubble, there are something important that I think you must fit in your skin

[Skin]
  1. scorebar is a little long, it would cover score a bit I didn't notice this cause I'm using widescreen resolution :oops: FIXED
    [attachment=1:69b77]0.jpg[/attachment:69b77]
  2. scorebar-colour is under scorebar-bg not on it, is that on purpose? looked werid
    [attachment=0:69b77]1.jpg[/attachment:69b77]
    In general, custom skin shouldn't over the size of defult skin. your scorebar-colour is 607x72, which is too much higher than defult 646 x 13, any reason to make it like this? Well I did this because when I put the scorebar-colour in the scorebar-bg it will mess up the two plants on the bg (I really like those :oops: ). So that's why I'm using the scorebar-colour template from Lucky star skin (by Utena) I think it's still okay because the readme file in the templateskin say's this
    " While I urge you to follow the size restrictions I have placed on the sprites, it is possible to alter the actual png sizes. Don't go too crazy, though."
    :)
PM me if you had done changes or you have any reason to make a skin like that, just let me know :)
Fiuh...hope this OK :?
Thanks for the mod Breeze :) of course thanks for Shulin's & Chacha17's star :D
Derekku
Just commenting on the skin elements..

If you insist on keeping the wide scoreboard, then please add custom score elements into the skin as well. These include: score-0 up to score-9, score-dot, score-x, and score-percent. A smaller/custom font should look much better.

The scorebar-ki cranes look really choppy. Could you try to find better images for them? :/

Sliderball's frames don't make a full circle, but it's unnoticeable in gameplay, so it's fine, I suppose.
Breeze
^Do what Derekku Chan mentioned in case of skin looked werid to those guys who used custom skin
Done that and you'll get your pubble back >_^
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
Done uploading all of the above :)

Except the crane, unfortunately that's happened because I rotated the pic :?

Please tell me your opinion about the font :D
I may change it if you don't like it
Breeze
Score is fine now
But scorebar-colour still under scorebar-bg, I can't come out with a reason why it be like that
try this one, it looked not so bad


And preview

I can't repubble this map unless you fixed the scorebar-colour issue, sorry :(

Derekku
Stepping in, again. :S

*The skin font should be score-0, for example; not default-0. The problem at hand here was the score at the top right, not the hitcircle numbers.

@Breeze: The Lucky Star skin uses a scorebar-background like that, so it's just up to user-preference. There really shouldn't be a problem with having the scorebar like that. (And if there is, the hp bar should be given some transparent space on the left so that it's in the middle of the scorebar instead of left-aligned.)

EDIT: I'd still like to see a new crane or an edited one that isn't so choppy. :(
Lunah_old
Hi! ;)

Easy
It's fine for me :3 ~

Normal
00:03:346 (3) - Add hitsound finish
00:07:484 (3) - Add hitsound finish
00:08:001 (3) - Add hitsound finish
00:11:622 (3) - Add hitsound finish

Hard
It's fine for me :3 ~

Nice map salad /me likes, Starrrr*
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
@Breeze
Well....I fixed the scorebar color to fit the scorebg now. I think it looks good :oops:

@Derekku_Chan
*Digging a hole and go into it :oops:
I don't know why I can misunderstand you're last post :oops:
Anyway I've added the score-etc but I can't fix the crane :o

LoweH wrote:

Hi! ;) Hi Hi

Easy
It's fine for me :3 ~ Glad to hear it :D

Normal
00:03:346 (3) - Add hitsound finish
00:07:484 (3) - Add hitsound finish
00:08:001 (3) - Add hitsound finish
00:11:622 (3) - Add hitsound finish
Only took 2 of the aboves


Hard
It's fine for me :3 ~ Yay :D

Nice map salad /me likes, Starrrr* :)
Thanks for your mod Loweh
wmfchris
[Hard]
0:47:570 (1) Flip it up-side-down? It's different from (2,3,4,5). ( (1) waves down then up while the others waves up then down)

[Normal]
0:13:691 (6) Maybe up 1 grid?
0:35:157 (x) Suggestion: add a note here and move (4) 1/2 backward?

[Easy]
0:08:001 (4,5) Move them down 1 grid?

nice song and pattern is place neat and nicely <3
star~
Derekku
@sallad: I was trying to say that there are two different sets of skinnable numbers. The first set (default-0, default-1, etc) are used for the hitcircles. The second set (score-0, score-1, etc) are used for the score at the top right of the screen and the combo counter at the bottom left. (Or is this the part you DID understand? :S)
Sure
[Easy]
00:13:691 (1) - remove new combo
00:14:208 (2) - new combo

[Normal] & [Hard]
Fine!


Good map. STAR~ ^^
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