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emorhconom
emorhconom
Hello~ Merry Christmas!
As you request

[Easy]
00:08:985 (1) - remove NC?
00:13:070 (1) - ^
00:24:814 (1) - ^
00:26:602 (1) - ^
00:27:878 (2,1) - swap NC?
00:35:538 (5) - NC?
01:08:219 (1) - remove NC
01:12:304 (1) - ^
01:16:389 (1) - ^
01:18:432 (4,1) - swap NC?
01:32:729 (1,3) - ^
01:57:240 (1,3) - ^
02:03:368 (4,1) - ^
02:44:219 (1) - remove NC?
02:48:304 (1,3) - swap NC?
02:52:389 (1,3) - ^
02:56:474 (1) - remove NC
03:00:559 (1) - ^
03:49:580 (1) - ^
04:07:963 (1) - ^
04:12:049 (1) - ^
00:23:283 (1,2) - no stack?
00:48:304 (3) - use reverse slider and add a circle at 00:49:836 (4) , delete slider 00:49:325 (4)
01:11:283 (2,1) - too close
01:13:325 (2,1) - ^
01:55:197 (1,2) - no stack?
02:21:240 (6) - distance snap
02:36:049 (3) - replace it with a circle
02:46:261 (1) - ^
03:47:538 (1) - move it up by a bit
04:01:836 (1,2) - blanket?
126_old
126_old
Hi~

From your in-game request

[easy]
00:58:006 (3) - try curve this slider?
01:01:580 (3,4) - stack
01:28:644 (3,4) - blanket?
02:12:559 (2,3) - ^
02:20:219 (5,6,1,2) - use same distance
02:29:921 (1) - nearly off-screen
02:31:963 (3,4) - better blanket
02:44:219 (1) - ^
02:53:410 (2,3) - ^
04:07:963 (1) - move right by 1 grid
04:14:091 (1,2) - blanket perfectly

sorry poor mod all nazi issues
Last edited by 126_old , edited 1 time in total.
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
Free mod not for kd

[Easy]

· 00:13:070 (1) - NC？

· 00:20:219 (2) - 个人建议，形状和00:18:176 (4) - 一样最好

· 00:26:602 (1) - NC？

· 00:34:517 (4) - Blanket可以包的更好看一点

· 00:40:134 (2,3) - 我还没想到怎么改，但是我想问一下为什么这附近只有这里用了Drum音效

· 01:09:495 (3) - 小P你不是说你只开1/1吗，这里很奇怪的用了1/2，我建议还是删掉这个滑条，然后在01:09:751放个圆圈

· 01:12:304 (1,2) - 之间的DS有一些问题，你只需要稍微挪动一下这两个滑条，因为它们并不在格点上。挪动之后，DS会好一点（个人认为如果大于0.05就需要修改）

· 02:17:921 (3,4) - 如果你本来打算做Blanket的话，那么你需要稍微美化一下这里

· 02:20:219 (5) - 为了美观，建议和02:17:921 (3) - 一样（你只需要复制粘贴然后反转就行）

· 02:21:240 (6,1) - 这里DS需要统一一下。

· 02:23:793 (3,4) - 这两个滑条，互相平行的话更好看。

· 02:25:836 (1) - 从Flow上来说，放到大概X148 y140更好

· 02:28:644 (2,1) - 这里的blanket需要美化

· 02:54:432 (3) - NC，因为这里有Finish，也是音乐Kiai的开始。

· 03:06:687 (1) - 如果是我的话，我会选择一个对称的弧形滑条。

· 03:18:942 - 03:27:112 没用的绿线可以删了

· 04:14:091 (1,2) - 实话说，这个Blanket没有包好。1，放到x172 y256; 2, 放到x124 y180

爱你<3，但是P总你可以做的更稳的。
Sellenite
1,092 posts
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Sellenite

Zweib wrote:

he lou xia zu he zhe kan
命不久矣
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut
猪尾巴 gg
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut
4dong

[Kamiya] wrote:

form to in-game

[E]

00:29:410 (1,2) - please add the Whistle
00:35:538 (5) - please add the Whistle too~ ok
01:28:644 (3,4) - fix blanket plz~ fixed
01:30:687 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:03:368 (4,5) - ^ fixed
02:58:517 (1,2) - ^ fixed
04:14:091 (1,2) - ^ fixed
↑that's all~
good luck and good job~
:)

Zweib

Zweib wrote:

zi ji kan zhe gai 0.0 尽量从降星角度考虑 he lou xia zu he zhe kan

[Easy]
delete the useless green line? ok
00:12:049 (2) - end at 174,147 ok
00:46:772 (4) - you didn't follow the vocal strictly, so add a circle? ok
01:01:580 (3) - remove this and move 01:01:836 (4) to here ok
01:07:708 (3) - remove this? ok
01:09:495 (3) - ^ ok
01:27:623 (2) - revese it and remove 01:28:644 (3) ok
01:30:687 (1,2) - make better blanket fixed
01:36:814 (5,1,1,2,1) - remove these, reverse 01:35:793 (4) - and let the break start at 01:38:857 ok
01:58:772 (2) - remove this? ok
02:20:219 (5,6) - use reverse slider? no
02:32:985 (4) - reverse it and remove (1) ok
02:43:708 (3,1) - better blanket fixed
02:48:304 (1) - ^ fixed
02:58:006 (3) - remove it ok
03:10:772 (1) - start at 03:10:517 end at 03:13:836 ok
03:18:942 (1) - add a 2/1 slider here and 03:20:985 (2) and 3/2 slider 03:23:027 (3) and 1/2 slider 03:24:559 (4)
and break start here: 03:27:112 nice
03:59:793 (3) - end at 04:01:325 ? no
04:18:176 (1) - end at 04:24:304 ? no
04:26:346 (1) - end at 04:28:389 no

emorhconom

emorhconom wrote:

Hello~ Merry Christmas!
As you request

[Easy]
00:08:985 (1) - remove NC? fixed
00:13:070 (1) - ^ ^
00:24:814 (1) - ^ ^
00:26:602 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:878 (2,1) - swap NC? ^
00:35:538 (5) - NC? ^
01:08:219 (1) - remove NC ^
01:12:304 (1) - ^ ^
01:16:389 (1) - ^ ^
01:18:432 (4,1) - swap NC? ^
01:32:729 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:57:240 (1,3) - ^ ^
02:03:368 (4,1) - ^ ^
02:44:219 (1) - remove NC? ^
02:48:304 (1,3) - swap NC? ^
02:52:389 (1,3) - ^ ^
02:56:474 (1) - remove NC ^
03:00:559 (1) - ^ ^
03:49:580 (1) - ^ ^
04:07:963 (1) - ^ ^
04:12:049 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:283 (1,2) - no stack? ^
00:48:304 (3) - use reverse slider and add a circle at 00:49:836 (4) , delete slider 00:49:325 (4) hmm,no
01:11:283 (2,1) - too close ?
01:13:325 (2,1) - ^ ^
01:55:197 (1,2) - no stack? ok
02:21:240 (6) - distance snap fixed
02:36:049 (3) - replace it with a circle ok
02:46:261 (1) - ^ ok
03:47:538 (1) - move it up by a bit ok
04:01:836 (1,2) - blanket? ok

126

126 wrote:

Hi~

From your in-game request

[easy]
00:58:006 (3) - try curve this slider? ok
01:01:580 (3,4) - stack ok
01:28:644 (3,4) - blanket? ok
02:12:559 (2,3) - ^ ok
02:20:219 (5,6,1,2) - use same distance ok
02:29:921 (1) - nearly off-screen ok
02:31:963 (3,4) - better blanket fixed
02:44:219 (1) - ^ fixed
02:53:410 (2,3) - ^ fixed
04:07:963 (1) - move right by 1 grid fixed
04:14:091 (1,2) - blanket perfectly i'm try

sorry poor mod all nazi issues

Frey

Frey wrote:

Free mod not for kd

[Easy]

· 00:13:070 (1) - NC？ 好

· 00:20:219 (2) - 个人建议，形状和00:18:176 (4) - 一样最好 好

· 00:26:602 (1) - NC？ 好

· 00:34:517 (4) - Blanket可以包的更好看一点 好

· 00:40:134 (2,3) - 我还没想到怎么改，但是我想问一下为什么这附近只有这里用了Drum音效 好象是漏了normal也补了

· 01:09:495 (3) - 小P你不是说你只开1/1吗，这里很奇怪的用了1/2，我建议还是删掉这个滑条，然后在01:09:751放个圆圈 罪魁祸首就是滚轮

· 01:12:304 (1,2) - 之间的DS有一些问题，你只需要稍微挪动一下这两个滑条，因为它们并不在格点上。挪动之后，DS会好一点（个人认为如果大于0.05就需要修改） 好了

· 02:17:921 (3,4) - 如果你本来打算做Blanket的话，那么你需要稍微美化一下这里 ok

· 02:20:219 (5) - 为了美观，建议和02:17:921 (3) - 一样（你只需要复制粘贴然后反转就行） ok

· 02:21:240 (6,1) - 这里DS需要统一一下。 ok

· 02:23:793 (3,4) - 这两个滑条，互相平行的话更好看。ok

· 02:25:836 (1) - 从Flow上来说，放到大概X148 y140更好 ok

· 02:28:644 (2,1) - 这里的blanket需要美化 ok

· 02:54:432 (3) - NC，因为这里有Finish，也是音乐Kiai的开始。 ok

· 03:06:687 (1) - 如果是我的话，我会选择一个对称的弧形滑条。我觉得现在蛮好的

· 03:18:942 - 03:27:112 没用的绿线可以删了 ok

· 04:14:091 (1,2) - 实话说，这个Blanket没有包好。1，放到x172 y256; 2, 放到x124 y180 ok

爱你<3，但是P总你可以做的更稳的。

thanks :D 顺便抽查moe4d
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
ok...ok...
red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.


[General]
Normal SV Too high :o
SV1.08 SV1.48 ??? SV1.5
Poor balance SV1.28 The remake around :(


[Easy]
  1. Aimod check plz
    SPOILER
  2. 00:42:176 (4,5) - Slightly above
    SPOILER
  3. 01:06:176 (1,2,3,4) - Why do different here only with the other...02:38:091 (1,2,3,4) - I think that it can be arranged
  4. 01:19:453 (2) - hmm.....It's suddenly even if in small, end point Sampleset Normal? other points
  5. 01:34:772 (1,2,3,4) - I can be a little more beautiful
  6. 02:16:644 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is Hard,try
    SPOILER
  7. 03:24:814 (1) - end point 03:26:091 - Vol40%gleen line add Finish?
  8. 03:49:580 (2) - NC
  9. 03:55:708 (2) - ^
  10. 04:26:346 (1) - Less desirable....width side movement?
[Normal]
  1. Aimod check plz
  2. 00:23:283 - Remove 0.5 line Should not be shifting :? SV1.0 Lock fixed :o
  3. 01:06:176 - ^Not 1.2 :o
this difficulty needs more work still I will see again


[Hard]
  1. add whisle 01:47:027 - 01:48:049 (2) - All point 01:49:070 (3) - hed end point 01:50:857 -
  2. 01:51:112 - Vol10%? Why to strong sound...
  3. 03:25:325 (1,2,3,4) - try
    SPOILER
  4. 00:35:538 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 02:12:049 (2,4) - Stack
  6. 04:01:325 (8) - NC 1.5 SV
Nice Hard :)

Please be consistent with hitsound and volume :?
mod time:1 hour
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut

-Nanaka- wrote:

ok...ok...
red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.


[General]
Normal SV Too high :o
SV1.08 SV1.48 ??? SV1.5
Poor balance SV1.28 The remake around :( normal locked 1.28sv now :D


[Easy]
  1. Aimod check plz fixed
    SPOILER
  2. 00:42:176 (4,5) - Slightly above ok
    SPOILER
  3. 01:06:176 (1,2,3,4) - Why do different here only with the other...02:38:091 (1,2,3,4) - I think that it can be arranged fixed
  4. 01:19:453 (2) - hmm.....It's suddenly even if in small, end point Sampleset Normal? other points ok
  5. 01:34:772 (1,2,3,4) - I can be a little more beautiful i'm try
  6. 02:16:644 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is Hard,try
    SPOILER
    ok
  7. 03:24:814 (1) - end point 03:26:091 - Vol40%gleen line add Finish? ok
  8. 03:49:580 (2) - NC ok
  9. 03:55:708 (2) - ^ ok
  10. 04:26:346 (1) - Less desirable....width side movement? redrawed :D
[Normal]
  1. Aimod check plz ok
  2. 00:23:283 - Remove 0.5 line Should not be shifting :? SV1.0 Lock fixed :o ok
  3. 01:06:176 - ^Not 1.2 :o
ok
this difficulty needs more work still I will see again :D 1.28sv now adjusted all note


[Hard]
  1. add whisle 01:47:027 - 01:48:049 (2) - All point 01:49:070 (3) - hed end point 01:50:857 - ok
  2. 01:51:112 - Vol10%? Why to strong sound... 50% now
  3. 03:25:325 (1,2,3,4) - try nice
    SPOILER
  4. 00:35:538 (1) - Remove NC ok
  5. 02:12:049 (2,4) - Stack ok
  6. 04:01:325 (8) - NC 1.5 SV
ok
Nice Hard :)

Please be consistent with hitsound and volume :?
mod time:1 hour
thank you very much :D
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
Normal Check No Kd ;)

[Normal]
  1. OD+1 HP+0.5
  2. DS check
    SPOILER
  3. 01:30:687 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion
    SPOILER
  4. 02:13:325 - add Note
  5. 02:21:751 - additions soft whistle
  6. 02:33:751 (4,1,2,3,4) - hmmm....be packed also 02:36:049 (3,4) - incompatibility try
    SPOILER
  7. 02:33:751 - Finish 02:36:049 - whistle
  8. 02:50:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better you to another rhythm
  9. 02:55:453 (3,4) - rhythm suggestion
    SPOILER
  10. 03:00:304 (3,4) - 03:00:559 - 1/1 slider
  11. 03:02:602 (1,2) - 01:30:687 (1,2) - same rhythm
  12. 03:17:410 (4,5,6) - rhythm suggestion
    SPOILER
  13. 03:24:559 (4) - NC
  14. 03:27:112 (2) - add whistle
  15. 03:50:346 (2) - NC
  16. 03:50:602 (3,4) - 03:51:623 - add whistle
    SPOILER
  17. 03:54:687 (2,3,4) - NC
  18. 04:10:006 (1,2) - 02:55:453 (3,4) - same rhythm
  19. 04:16:134 - sampl Normal 04:16:644 - Clap
  20. 00:53:921 (3) - 02:25:836 (3) - Add soft Finish
  21. 02:27:878 (1) - 00:55:963 (1) - Same Hitsound
Gogo :oops:
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut

-Nanaka- wrote:

Normal Check No Kd ;)

[Normal]
  1. OD+1 HP+0.5 ok
  2. DS check ok
    SPOILER
  3. 01:30:687 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion hmmm,maybe is fine?
    SPOILER
  4. 02:13:325 - add Note ok
  5. 02:21:751 - additions soft whistle ok
  6. 02:33:751 (4,1,2,3,4) - hmmm....be packed also 02:36:049 (3,4) - incompatibility try hmmm, ok i'm try
    SPOILER
  7. 02:33:751 - Finish 02:36:049 - whistle ok
  8. 02:50:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better you to another rhythm ..i think is fine don't slap me
  9. 02:55:453 (3,4) - rhythm suggestion ok
    SPOILER
  10. 03:00:304 (3,4) - 03:00:559 - 1/1 slider hmm, i'm added a note
  11. 03:02:602 (1,2) - 01:30:687 (1,2) - same rhythm i'm added a 1/2 slider
  12. 03:17:410 (4,5,6) - rhythm suggestion ok
    SPOILER
  13. 03:24:559 (4) - NC ok
  14. 03:27:112 (2) - add whistle ok
  15. 03:50:346 (2) - NC ok
  16. 03:50:602 (3,4) - 03:51:623 - add whistle ok
    SPOILER
  17. 03:54:687 (2,3,4) - NC ok
  18. 04:10:006 (1,2) - 02:55:453 (3,4) - same rhythm same?
  19. 04:16:134 - sampl Normal 04:16:644 - Clap ok
  20. 00:53:921 (3) - 02:25:836 (3) - Add soft Finish ok
  21. 02:27:878 (1) - 00:55:963 (1) - Same Hitsound ok
Gogo :oops:
love you ♥
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Fine.
Bubbled
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut
感谢拉克修 :D
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
@Cherry Blossom：i think use 1/8 slider instead of 1/12 stream is ok …… of course i change it …… but i want know …… how do you think ？
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut
all fine waiting for lkx rebubble.
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Reb
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
gxytcgxytc
恭喜rank!
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
兔饼群又一个毕业啦~！ :)
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Fixed inconsistent NCs and hitsounds.
Now this map can be qualified.
Congratz, first Ranked Map !
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Fixed inconsistent NCs and hitsounds.
Now this map can be qualified.
Congratz, first Ranked Map !
thank baka cb :D

thanks everyone
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
unique slider :D
SPOILER
Congratz :)
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind

Frey wrote:

兔饼群又一个毕业啦~！ :)
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Narcissu's Insane is really nice, congratz!
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
gxytcgxytc

gxytcgxytc wrote:

恭喜rank!
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
黑科技rank图
爽！
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
thx pururut ，my 1st ranked GD (>_<)
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Ceui <3
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
yay!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
gratzz 1st qualifyyyyy
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy

BeatofIke wrote:

Ceui <3
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut
thx （≧ｙ≦＊）
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Hey Pururut,

We need to disqualify your map for the following reason:

[Extra]
01:22:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These should be 1/4, not 1/3

These are other issues that came up during the review process:

[Easy]
00:47:027 (4) - This could have been mapped more beginner-friendly. Try to not have random 1.5 beat changes where there isn't much calling for it in the music.
The spinner use is questionable just because there are several that are really long and have ambiguous starts.

Same sentiment about the spinner use in the Normal.

[Hard]
02:55:453 (3,1,2,3) - Not sure what's going on with this sudden increased spacing
04:10:006 (1) - Not sure if that hitsound was intended

[Insane]
02:06:942 (2) - Missing clap

[Extra]
02:50:346 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure what's going on with this spacing here
03:04:644 (1) - This part's flow is really poor and should be redesigned.

Overall, the hitsounds really need tending to. There were holes and inconsistencies all over. It's hard to do with such a long map, but please be careful with it.
Extra also should have more modding done on it - pay special attention to flow and spacing consistency.
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut

Garven wrote:

Hey Pururut,

We need to disqualify your map for the following reason:

[Extra]
01:22:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These should be 1/4, not 1/3 ok

These are other issues that came up during the review process:

[Easy]
00:47:027 (4) - This could have been mapped more beginner-friendly. Try to not have random 1.5 beat changes where there isn't much calling for it in the music. i delete this note,add a 1/1 silder at 00:46:772
The spinner use is questionable just because there are several that are really long and have ambiguous starts. i delete some spinner

Same sentiment about the spinner use in the Normal. do some adjustment

[Hard]
02:55:453 (3,1,2,3) - Not sure what's going on with this sudden increased spacing ok,
04:10:006 (1) - Not sure if that hitsound was intended remove finish

[Insane]
02:06:942 (2) - Missing clap added

[Extra]
02:50:346 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure what's going on with this spacing here 1.2ds now
03:04:644 (1) - This part's flow is really poor and should be redesigned. do some adjustment

Overall, the hitsounds really need tending to. There were holes and inconsistencies all over. It's hard to do with such a long map, but please be careful with it. uhhh,i think the hitsounds is fine,i asked a lot of people,they agree with me
Extra also should have more modding done on it - pay special attention to flow and spacing consistency.
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut

Minakami Yuki wrote:

gratzz 1st qualifyyyyy
gratzz 1st disqualifyyyyy 233
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
sad
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,913 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
so do you want/need help with hitsoundthings or
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Pururut

Okoratu wrote:

so do you want/need help with hitsoundthings or
sure,if you willing help me :3
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom

Garven wrote:

01:22:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These should be 1/4, not 1/3
Just, this can be played as 1/3 or 1/6, violins are mainly snapped on brown ticks if you hear them carefully. I agree that it can be 1/4 too, but there are notes which sound offbeat if you use a 1/4 or 1/8 stream here.

And, Extra has been already remapped several times, what is "quality" ? It's just his first map for ranking, my first map is even worse than this map, and it is ranked. I don't feel any "gameplay issues" on this map, it plays well and looks simple. That's the kind of map i want to see ranked everyday.
Btw, i thought hitsounds were fine ;w;


nvm, Good luck on reranking Pururut.
Sellenite
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Sellenite
Overall, the hitsounds really need tending to. There were holes and inconsistencies all over. It's hard to do with such a long map, but please be careful with it.
already use black technology to be consistent 233
Okoratu
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Okoratu
03:39:368 (1) - よ hehehe
hi i am talking about hitsounding in Destiny, same could probably be done for your other diffsssssssss

Hitsound thingies

Note that i am only human and could probably do mistakessss
missing things
  1. 00:15:623 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would add actual claps with drum sampleset to the sliderheads here so that you have some audio feedback when playing (00:17:666 - and 00:18:176 - are missing drum sampleset anyways)
  2. 00:09:751 - whistle because of pitch change?
  3. 00:14:346 (4,5,6) - whistle on head and circles (you can lower volume a bit for these)
  4. 00:25:325 - whistle because same sound as 00:23:283 - just without the finish
  5. 00:26:091 - whistle because 00:24:049 (2) -
  6. 00:29:410 - whistle for same reasons
  7. 00:30:176 - whistle for same reasons
  8. 00:32:219 - whistle for same reasons
  9. 00:43:197 - missing drum sampleset
  10. 00:43:708 - http://puu.sh/e7grt/bcfa57b52c.jpg
  11. 00:55:963 (1) - drum sampleset with soft additions please
  12. 01:01:836 (6) - drum sampleset with soft additions for this
  13. 01:22:006 - adding a finish
  14. 01:35:283 (3) - clap missing
  15. 01:41:921 (1) - 2 whistles
  16. 01:46:006 (1) - if you added 2 whistles for 01:41:921 (1) - do here again
  17. 01:55:197 (1) - drum sampleset with soft additions
  18. 01:57:240 (1) - soft additions and whistle please
  19. 01:58:261 - drum sampleset
  20. 01:58:772 - drum sampleset
  21. 01:59:283 - drum sampleset with soft additions
  22. 02:01:325 (1) - soft additions with whistle please
  23. 02:03:368 - drum sampleset with soft additions please
  24. 02:03:878 - forgot drum sampleset on this one
  25. 02:06:942 - forgot drum sampleset on this one
  26. 02:11:538 (1) - drum sampleset with soft additions on this one
  27. 02:12:304 - whistle for consistency
  28. 02:12:559 (3) - forgot drum sampleset on this one
  29. 02:13:580 (1) - soft additions and whistle on this one
  30. 02:14:346 (3) - consistency whistle
  31. 02:15:623 (1) - soft additions and whistle on this one
  32. 02:16:389 (3) - consistency whistle
  33. 02:18:687 - drum sampleset
  34. 02:19:708 - soft additions and whistle
  35. 02:21:751 (1) - soft additions and whistle
  36. 03:10:261 - drum sampleset missing
  37. 03:10:772 - drum sampleset
  38. 03:11:283 (2) - drum sampleset, soft additions
  39. 03:11:793 - ^
  40. 03:12:304 - ^
  41. 03:12:814 - ^
  42. 03:13:836 - ^
  43. 03:14:346 (6) - ^
  44. 03:14:857 (1) - ^
  45. 03:15:368 (3) - ^
  46. 03:15:878 - ^
  47. 03:16:389 - ^
  48. 03:16:900 - ^
  49. 03:17:410 - ^
  50. 03:17:921 - ^
  51. 03:18:432 - ^
  52. 03:18:942 - ^
  53. 03:19:453 - ^
  54. 03:19:963 (4) - ^
  55. 03:20:474 (6) - ^
  56. 03:20:985 - ^
  57. 03:21:495 - ^
  58. 03:22:006 (4) - ^
  59. 03:22:517 - ^
  60. 03:23:027 - ^
  61. 03:23:538 - ^
  62. 03:23:793 - ^
  63. 03:24:559 - ^
  64. 03:24:814 - ^
  65. 03:38:346 (1) - whistle on head
  66. 03:39:112 - whistle and green line with 20% volume
  67. 03:39:368 - whistle and green line with 30% volume
  68. 03:43:453 - drum sampleset, soft additions and a whistle
  69. 04:22:517 - finish because of 04:20:219 (1,2) -

the following things sound out of place and should probably be removed/replaced
  1. 00:48:176 - not sure if drum sampleset intention or mistake
  2. 01:00:049 (1) - drum sampleset with soft additions on head fit better this is alternative
  3. 01:17:921 (6) - clap instead of finish??
  4. 01:20:729 - finish is supported by not much in the music, removing it would be better imo
  5. 01:21:240 (4) - ^
  6. 01:21:495 - replacing clap with finish would sound better together with 01:21:750 (6) - which has similar sound and finish, imo
  7. 01:35:793 - the drum additions here do nothing i think you meant to use drum sampleset
  8. 01:44:985 - i think a soft addition and a whistle fit this better than just a finish
  9. 01:47:155 (1) - again i think soft additions with whistle would fit better (if you did first do this)
  10. 02:02:091 - sampleset auto with a whistle please for consistency
  11. 02:57:751 - i think this finish is not supported by much in the music so better remove if you removed it in 01:25:325 -
  12. 03:13:325 (2,3,4,5,7) - i don't think the whistles on these sliderbodies were your intention
  13. 03:15:878 (5) - & 03:16:389 (6) - i don't think the whistle on thees sliderbodies were planned
  14. 03:17:155 (1,2,3,4,6) - see 03:15:878 (5) - & 03:16:389 (6) -
  15. 03:22:517 (6) - sliderbodywhistle unintended pretty much and should be removed

inconsistent throughout/within parts
  1. 02:27:878 (1) - should have same hitsounding as 00:55:963 (1) -
  2. 02:52:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - should do same hitsounds as whatever you did in 01:20:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
  3. 03:06:687 (1) - would use auto sampleset and finish here because you use 03:07:197 (4) - it and a clap here
  4. 04:14:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - completely inconsistent with 02:50:857 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:18:432 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please just do one thing for these 3

optional stuff
  1. 00:02:602 (1) - 25% or sth whistle on this spinner end sounds nicer than just muting
  2. 00:34:517 (3) - whistle on head
  3. 00:35:538 - would use a 40% green line (currently 30) and add a 60% one in similar to 00:31:453 (4) - 00:27:368 (3) -
  4. - the amount of whistles in the part from 00:39:623 - to 00:53:921 - annoy me so here's some whistle suggestions for that part -
    If you add a whistle on a white tick just set sampleset to drum and additions to soft!!
    1. 00:39:623 (1) - whistle on head
    2. 00:41:666 (2) - whistle on head
    3. 00:44:474 (4) - whistle on head for the distinct sound here maybe optional
    4. 00:45:495 (2) - whistle on tail
    5. 00:47:793 - whistle on this tail
    6. 00:49:836 (1) - whistle on head
    7. 00:51:878 (1) - whistle on head
    8. 00:53:921 (1) - whistle on head maybe
  5. 02:22:261 (3) - optional whistle
  6. 03:26:091 - would add a whistle for this string sound
  7. 03:27:112 (1) - whistle for piano??

Destiny
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ASK ME IF YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND SOMETHING INSTEAD OF DECLINING WITH "I DON'T UNDERSTAND"

Edit: happy birthday me yaay

I will get someone else to check what i just did for consistency
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