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Sellenite

Pururut wrote:

我怎么可能会end on hard .问了一下tic他硬说要加easy,那就没办法了 :(
留给他的,难度都搞好了跑过来说只搞到hard实在是萨比,而且他总有办法挑spread,也是个蛋疼人物
Topic Starter
Pururut

Sellenite wrote:

Pururut wrote:

我怎么可能会end on hard .问了一下tic他硬说要加easy,那就没办法了 :(
留给他的,难度都搞好了跑过来说只搞到hard实在是萨比,而且他总有办法挑spread,也是个蛋疼人物
我已经超光速做好了easy 并且留下了一堆艹点,等人助攻中233
[Kamiya]
form to in-game

[E]

00:29:410 (1,2) - please add the Whistle
00:35:538 (5) - please add the Whistle too~
01:28:644 (3,4) - fix blanket plz~
01:30:687 (1,2) - ^
02:03:368 (4,5) - ^
02:58:517 (1,2) - ^
04:14:091 (1,2) - ^
↑that's all~
good luck and good job~
:)
Zweib
zi ji kan zhe gai 0.0 尽量从降星角度考虑

[Easy]
delete the useless green line?
00:12:049 (2) - end at 174,147
00:46:772 (4) - you didn't follow the vocal strictly, so add a circle?
01:01:580 (3) - remove this and move 01:01:836 (4) to here
01:07:708 (3) - remove this?
01:09:495 (3) - ^
01:27:623 (2) - revese it and remove 01:28:644 (3)
01:30:687 (1,2) - make better blanket
01:36:814 (5,1,1,2,1) - remove these, reverse 01:35:793 (4) - and let the break start at 01:38:857
01:58:772 (2) - remove this?
02:20:219 (5,6) - use reverse slider?
02:32:985 (4) - reverse it and remove (1)
02:43:708 (3,1) - better blanket
02:48:304 (1) - ^
02:58:006 (3) - remove it
03:10:772 (1) - start at 03:10:517 end at 03:13:836
03:18:942 (1) - add a 2/1 slider here and 03:20:985 (2) and 3/2 slider 03:23:027 (3) and 1/2 slider 03:24:559 (4)
and break start here: 03:27:112
03:59:793 (3) - end at 04:01:325 ?
04:18:176 (1) - end at 04:24:304 ?
04:26:346 (1) - end at 04:28:389

edit: double post, deny kds pls
emorhconom
Hello~ Merry Christmas!
As you request

[Easy]
00:08:985 (1) - remove NC?
00:13:070 (1) - ^
00:24:814 (1) - ^
00:26:602 (1) - ^
00:27:878 (2,1) - swap NC?
00:35:538 (5) - NC?
01:08:219 (1) - remove NC
01:12:304 (1) - ^
01:16:389 (1) - ^
01:18:432 (4,1) - swap NC?
01:32:729 (1,3) - ^
01:57:240 (1,3) - ^
02:03:368 (4,1) - ^
02:44:219 (1) - remove NC?
02:48:304 (1,3) - swap NC?
02:52:389 (1,3) - ^
02:56:474 (1) - remove NC
03:00:559 (1) - ^
03:49:580 (1) - ^
04:07:963 (1) - ^
04:12:049 (1) - ^
00:23:283 (1,2) - no stack?
00:48:304 (3) - use reverse slider and add a circle at 00:49:836 (4) , delete slider 00:49:325 (4)
01:11:283 (2,1) - too close
01:13:325 (2,1) - ^
01:55:197 (1,2) - no stack?
02:21:240 (6) - distance snap
02:36:049 (3) - replace it with a circle
02:46:261 (1) - ^
03:47:538 (1) - move it up by a bit
04:01:836 (1,2) - blanket?
126_old
Hi~

From your in-game request

[easy]
00:58:006 (3) - try curve this slider?
01:01:580 (3,4) - stack
01:28:644 (3,4) - blanket?
02:12:559 (2,3) - ^
02:20:219 (5,6,1,2) - use same distance
02:29:921 (1) - nearly off-screen
02:31:963 (3,4) - better blanket
02:44:219 (1) - ^
02:53:410 (2,3) - ^
04:07:963 (1) - move right by 1 grid
04:14:091 (1,2) - blanket perfectly

sorry poor mod all nazi issues
Frey
Free mod not for kd

[Easy]

· 00:13:070 (1) - NC?

· 00:20:219 (2) - 个人建议,形状和00:18:176 (4) - 一样最好

· 00:26:602 (1) - NC?

· 00:34:517 (4) - Blanket可以包的更好看一点

· 00:40:134 (2,3) - 我还没想到怎么改,但是我想问一下为什么这附近只有这里用了Drum音效

· 01:09:495 (3) - 小P你不是说你只开1/1吗,这里很奇怪的用了1/2,我建议还是删掉这个滑条,然后在01:09:751放个圆圈

· 01:12:304 (1,2) - 之间的DS有一些问题,你只需要稍微挪动一下这两个滑条,因为它们并不在格点上。挪动之后,DS会好一点(个人认为如果大于0.05就需要修改)

· 02:17:921 (3,4) - 如果你本来打算做Blanket的话,那么你需要稍微美化一下这里

· 02:20:219 (5) - 为了美观,建议和02:17:921 (3) - 一样(你只需要复制粘贴然后反转就行)

· 02:21:240 (6,1) - 这里DS需要统一一下。

· 02:23:793 (3,4) - 这两个滑条,互相平行的话更好看。

· 02:25:836 (1) - 从Flow上来说,放到大概X148 y140更好

· 02:28:644 (2,1) - 这里的blanket需要美化

· 02:54:432 (3) - NC,因为这里有Finish,也是音乐Kiai的开始。

· 03:06:687 (1) - 如果是我的话,我会选择一个对称的弧形滑条。

· 03:18:942 - 03:27:112 没用的绿线可以删了

· 04:14:091 (1,2) - 实话说,这个Blanket没有包好。1,放到x172 y256; 2, 放到x124 y180

爱你<3,但是P总你可以做的更稳的。
Sellenite

Zweib wrote:

he lou xia zu he zhe kan
命不久矣
Topic Starter
Pururut
猪尾巴 gg
Topic Starter
Pururut
4dong

[Kamiya] wrote:

form to in-game

[E]

00:29:410 (1,2) - please add the Whistle
00:35:538 (5) - please add the Whistle too~ ok
01:28:644 (3,4) - fix blanket plz~ fixed
01:30:687 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:03:368 (4,5) - ^ fixed
02:58:517 (1,2) - ^ fixed
04:14:091 (1,2) - ^ fixed
↑that's all~
good luck and good job~
:)

Zweib

Zweib wrote:

zi ji kan zhe gai 0.0 尽量从降星角度考虑 he lou xia zu he zhe kan

[Easy]
delete the useless green line? ok
00:12:049 (2) - end at 174,147 ok
00:46:772 (4) - you didn't follow the vocal strictly, so add a circle? ok
01:01:580 (3) - remove this and move 01:01:836 (4) to here ok
01:07:708 (3) - remove this? ok
01:09:495 (3) - ^ ok
01:27:623 (2) - revese it and remove 01:28:644 (3) ok
01:30:687 (1,2) - make better blanket fixed
01:36:814 (5,1,1,2,1) - remove these, reverse 01:35:793 (4) - and let the break start at 01:38:857 ok
01:58:772 (2) - remove this? ok
02:20:219 (5,6) - use reverse slider? no
02:32:985 (4) - reverse it and remove (1) ok
02:43:708 (3,1) - better blanket fixed
02:48:304 (1) - ^ fixed
02:58:006 (3) - remove it ok
03:10:772 (1) - start at 03:10:517 end at 03:13:836 ok
03:18:942 (1) - add a 2/1 slider here and 03:20:985 (2) and 3/2 slider 03:23:027 (3) and 1/2 slider 03:24:559 (4)
and break start here: 03:27:112 nice
03:59:793 (3) - end at 04:01:325 ? no
04:18:176 (1) - end at 04:24:304 ? no
04:26:346 (1) - end at 04:28:389 no

emorhconom

emorhconom wrote:

Hello~ Merry Christmas!
As you request

[Easy]
00:08:985 (1) - remove NC? fixed
00:13:070 (1) - ^ ^
00:24:814 (1) - ^ ^
00:26:602 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:878 (2,1) - swap NC? ^
00:35:538 (5) - NC? ^
01:08:219 (1) - remove NC ^
01:12:304 (1) - ^ ^
01:16:389 (1) - ^ ^
01:18:432 (4,1) - swap NC? ^
01:32:729 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:57:240 (1,3) - ^ ^
02:03:368 (4,1) - ^ ^
02:44:219 (1) - remove NC? ^
02:48:304 (1,3) - swap NC? ^
02:52:389 (1,3) - ^ ^
02:56:474 (1) - remove NC ^
03:00:559 (1) - ^ ^
03:49:580 (1) - ^ ^
04:07:963 (1) - ^ ^
04:12:049 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:283 (1,2) - no stack? ^
00:48:304 (3) - use reverse slider and add a circle at 00:49:836 (4) , delete slider 00:49:325 (4) hmm,no
01:11:283 (2,1) - too close ?
01:13:325 (2,1) - ^ ^
01:55:197 (1,2) - no stack? ok
02:21:240 (6) - distance snap fixed
02:36:049 (3) - replace it with a circle ok
02:46:261 (1) - ^ ok
03:47:538 (1) - move it up by a bit ok
04:01:836 (1,2) - blanket? ok

126

126 wrote:

Hi~

From your in-game request

[easy]
00:58:006 (3) - try curve this slider? ok
01:01:580 (3,4) - stack ok
01:28:644 (3,4) - blanket? ok
02:12:559 (2,3) - ^ ok
02:20:219 (5,6,1,2) - use same distance ok
02:29:921 (1) - nearly off-screen ok
02:31:963 (3,4) - better blanket fixed
02:44:219 (1) - ^ fixed
02:53:410 (2,3) - ^ fixed
04:07:963 (1) - move right by 1 grid fixed
04:14:091 (1,2) - blanket perfectly i'm try

sorry poor mod all nazi issues

Frey

Frey wrote:

Free mod not for kd

[Easy]

· 00:13:070 (1) - NC?

· 00:20:219 (2) - 个人建议,形状和00:18:176 (4) - 一样最好

· 00:26:602 (1) - NC?

· 00:34:517 (4) - Blanket可以包的更好看一点

· 00:40:134 (2,3) - 我还没想到怎么改,但是我想问一下为什么这附近只有这里用了Drum音效 好象是漏了normal也补了

· 01:09:495 (3) - 小P你不是说你只开1/1吗,这里很奇怪的用了1/2,我建议还是删掉这个滑条,然后在01:09:751放个圆圈 罪魁祸首就是滚轮

· 01:12:304 (1,2) - 之间的DS有一些问题,你只需要稍微挪动一下这两个滑条,因为它们并不在格点上。挪动之后,DS会好一点(个人认为如果大于0.05就需要修改) 好了

· 02:17:921 (3,4) - 如果你本来打算做Blanket的话,那么你需要稍微美化一下这里 ok

· 02:20:219 (5) - 为了美观,建议和02:17:921 (3) - 一样(你只需要复制粘贴然后反转就行) ok

· 02:21:240 (6,1) - 这里DS需要统一一下。 ok

· 02:23:793 (3,4) - 这两个滑条,互相平行的话更好看。ok

· 02:25:836 (1) - 从Flow上来说,放到大概X148 y140更好 ok

· 02:28:644 (2,1) - 这里的blanket需要美化 ok

· 02:54:432 (3) - NC,因为这里有Finish,也是音乐Kiai的开始。 ok

· 03:06:687 (1) - 如果是我的话,我会选择一个对称的弧形滑条。我觉得现在蛮好的

· 03:18:942 - 03:27:112 没用的绿线可以删了 ok

· 04:14:091 (1,2) - 实话说,这个Blanket没有包好。1,放到x172 y256; 2, 放到x124 y180 ok

爱你<3,但是P总你可以做的更稳的。

thanks :D 顺便抽查moe4d
-Nanaka-
ok...ok...
red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.


[General]
Normal SV Too high :o
SV1.08 SV1.48 ??? SV1.5
Poor balance SV1.28 The remake around :(


[Easy]
  1. Aimod check plz
  2. 00:42:176 (4,5) - Slightly above
  3. 01:06:176 (1,2,3,4) - Why do different here only with the other...02:38:091 (1,2,3,4) - I think that it can be arranged
  4. 01:19:453 (2) - hmm.....It's suddenly even if in small, end point Sampleset Normal? other points
  5. 01:34:772 (1,2,3,4) - I can be a little more beautiful
  6. 02:16:644 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is Hard,try
  7. 03:24:814 (1) - end point 03:26:091 - Vol40%gleen line add Finish?
  8. 03:49:580 (2) - NC
  9. 03:55:708 (2) - ^
  10. 04:26:346 (1) - Less desirable....width side movement?
[Normal]
  1. Aimod check plz
  2. 00:23:283 - Remove 0.5 line Should not be shifting :? SV1.0 Lock fixed :o
  3. 01:06:176 - ^Not 1.2 :o
this difficulty needs more work still I will see again


[Hard]
  1. add whisle 01:47:027 - 01:48:049 (2) - All point 01:49:070 (3) - hed end point 01:50:857 -
  2. 01:51:112 - Vol10%? Why to strong sound...
  3. 03:25:325 (1,2,3,4) - try
  4. 00:35:538 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 02:12:049 (2,4) - Stack
  6. 04:01:325 (8) - NC 1.5 SV
Nice Hard :)

Please be consistent with hitsound and volume :?
mod time:1 hour
Topic Starter
Pururut

-Nanaka- wrote:

ok...ok...
red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.


[General]
Normal SV Too high :o
SV1.08 SV1.48 ??? SV1.5
Poor balance SV1.28 The remake around :( normal locked 1.28sv now :D


[Easy]
  1. Aimod check plz fixed
  2. 00:42:176 (4,5) - Slightly above ok
  3. 01:06:176 (1,2,3,4) - Why do different here only with the other...02:38:091 (1,2,3,4) - I think that it can be arranged fixed
  4. 01:19:453 (2) - hmm.....It's suddenly even if in small, end point Sampleset Normal? other points ok
  5. 01:34:772 (1,2,3,4) - I can be a little more beautiful i'm try
  6. 02:16:644 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is Hard,try ok
  7. 03:24:814 (1) - end point 03:26:091 - Vol40%gleen line add Finish? ok
  8. 03:49:580 (2) - NC ok
  9. 03:55:708 (2) - ^ ok
  10. 04:26:346 (1) - Less desirable....width side movement? redrawed :D
[Normal]
  1. Aimod check plz ok
  2. 00:23:283 - Remove 0.5 line Should not be shifting :? SV1.0 Lock fixed :o ok
  3. 01:06:176 - ^Not 1.2 :o
ok
this difficulty needs more work still I will see again :D 1.28sv now adjusted all note


[Hard]
  1. add whisle 01:47:027 - 01:48:049 (2) - All point 01:49:070 (3) - hed end point 01:50:857 - ok
  2. 01:51:112 - Vol10%? Why to strong sound... 50% now
  3. 03:25:325 (1,2,3,4) - try nice
  4. 00:35:538 (1) - Remove NC ok
  5. 02:12:049 (2,4) - Stack ok
  6. 04:01:325 (8) - NC 1.5 SV
ok
Nice Hard :)

Please be consistent with hitsound and volume :?
mod time:1 hour
thank you very much :D
-Nanaka-
Normal Check No Kd ;)

[Normal]
  1. OD+1 HP+0.5
  2. DS check
  3. 01:30:687 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion
  4. 02:13:325 - add Note
  5. 02:21:751 - additions soft whistle
  6. 02:33:751 (4,1,2,3,4) - hmmm....be packed also 02:36:049 (3,4) - incompatibility try
  7. 02:33:751 - Finish 02:36:049 - whistle
  8. 02:50:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better you to another rhythm
  9. 02:55:453 (3,4) - rhythm suggestion
  10. 03:00:304 (3,4) - 03:00:559 - 1/1 slider
  11. 03:02:602 (1,2) - 01:30:687 (1,2) - same rhythm
  12. 03:17:410 (4,5,6) - rhythm suggestion
  13. 03:24:559 (4) - NC
  14. 03:27:112 (2) - add whistle
  15. 03:50:346 (2) - NC
  16. 03:50:602 (3,4) - 03:51:623 - add whistle
  17. 03:54:687 (2,3,4) - NC
  18. 04:10:006 (1,2) - 02:55:453 (3,4) - same rhythm
  19. 04:16:134 - sampl Normal 04:16:644 - Clap
  20. 00:53:921 (3) - 02:25:836 (3) - Add soft Finish
  21. 02:27:878 (1) - 00:55:963 (1) - Same Hitsound
Gogo :oops:
Topic Starter
Pururut

-Nanaka- wrote:

Normal Check No Kd ;)

[Normal]
  1. OD+1 HP+0.5 ok
  2. DS check ok
  3. 01:30:687 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion hmmm,maybe is fine?
  4. 02:13:325 - add Note ok
  5. 02:21:751 - additions soft whistle ok
  6. 02:33:751 (4,1,2,3,4) - hmmm....be packed also 02:36:049 (3,4) - incompatibility try hmmm, ok i'm try
  7. 02:33:751 - Finish 02:36:049 - whistle ok
  8. 02:50:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better you to another rhythm ..i think is fine don't slap me
  9. 02:55:453 (3,4) - rhythm suggestion ok
  10. 03:00:304 (3,4) - 03:00:559 - 1/1 slider hmm, i'm added a note
  11. 03:02:602 (1,2) - 01:30:687 (1,2) - same rhythm i'm added a 1/2 slider
  12. 03:17:410 (4,5,6) - rhythm suggestion ok
  13. 03:24:559 (4) - NC ok
  14. 03:27:112 (2) - add whistle ok
  15. 03:50:346 (2) - NC ok
  16. 03:50:602 (3,4) - 03:51:623 - add whistle ok
  17. 03:54:687 (2,3,4) - NC ok
  18. 04:10:006 (1,2) - 02:55:453 (3,4) - same rhythm same?
  19. 04:16:134 - sampl Normal 04:16:644 - Clap ok
  20. 00:53:921 (3) - 02:25:836 (3) - Add soft Finish ok
  21. 02:27:878 (1) - 00:55:963 (1) - Same Hitsound ok
Gogo :oops:
love you ♥
lkx_Shore
Fine.
Bubbled
Topic Starter
Pururut
感谢拉克修 :D
Narcissu
@Cherry Blossom:i think use 1/8 slider instead of 1/12 stream is ok …… of course i change it …… but i want know …… how do you think ?
Topic Starter
Pururut
all fine waiting for lkx rebubble.
lkx_Shore
Reb
gxytcgxytc
恭喜rank!
Frey
兔饼群又一个毕业啦~! :)
Cherry Blossom
Fixed inconsistent NCs and hitsounds.
Now this map can be qualified.
Congratz, first Ranked Map !
Topic Starter
Pururut

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Fixed inconsistent NCs and hitsounds.
Now this map can be qualified.
Congratz, first Ranked Map !
thank baka cb :D

thanks everyone
-Nanaka-
unique slider :D
Congratz :)
Zero__wind

Frey wrote:

兔饼群又一个毕业啦~! :)
Konei
Narcissu's Insane is really nice, congratz!
gxytcgxytc

gxytcgxytc wrote:

恭喜rank!
Sellenite
黑科技rank图
爽!
Narcissu
thx pururut ,my 1st ranked GD (>_<)
BeatofIke
Ceui <3
iyasine
yay!
Koiyuki
gratzz 1st qualifyyyyy
Vhy

BeatofIke wrote:

Ceui <3
Topic Starter
Pururut
thx (≧y≦*)
Garven
Hey Pururut,

We need to disqualify your map for the following reason:

[Extra]
01:22:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These should be 1/4, not 1/3

These are other issues that came up during the review process:

[Easy]
00:47:027 (4) - This could have been mapped more beginner-friendly. Try to not have random 1.5 beat changes where there isn't much calling for it in the music.
The spinner use is questionable just because there are several that are really long and have ambiguous starts.

Same sentiment about the spinner use in the Normal.

[Hard]
02:55:453 (3,1,2,3) - Not sure what's going on with this sudden increased spacing
04:10:006 (1) - Not sure if that hitsound was intended

[Insane]
02:06:942 (2) - Missing clap

[Extra]
02:50:346 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure what's going on with this spacing here
03:04:644 (1) - This part's flow is really poor and should be redesigned.

Overall, the hitsounds really need tending to. There were holes and inconsistencies all over. It's hard to do with such a long map, but please be careful with it.
Extra also should have more modding done on it - pay special attention to flow and spacing consistency.
Topic Starter
Pururut

Garven wrote:

Hey Pururut,

We need to disqualify your map for the following reason:

[Extra]
01:22:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These should be 1/4, not 1/3 ok

These are other issues that came up during the review process:

[Easy]
00:47:027 (4) - This could have been mapped more beginner-friendly. Try to not have random 1.5 beat changes where there isn't much calling for it in the music. i delete this note,add a 1/1 silder at 00:46:772
The spinner use is questionable just because there are several that are really long and have ambiguous starts. i delete some spinner

Same sentiment about the spinner use in the Normal. do some adjustment

[Hard]
02:55:453 (3,1,2,3) - Not sure what's going on with this sudden increased spacing ok,
04:10:006 (1) - Not sure if that hitsound was intended remove finish

[Insane]
02:06:942 (2) - Missing clap added

[Extra]
02:50:346 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure what's going on with this spacing here 1.2ds now
03:04:644 (1) - This part's flow is really poor and should be redesigned. do some adjustment

Overall, the hitsounds really need tending to. There were holes and inconsistencies all over. It's hard to do with such a long map, but please be careful with it. uhhh,i think the hitsounds is fine,i asked a lot of people,they agree with me
Extra also should have more modding done on it - pay special attention to flow and spacing consistency.
Topic Starter
Pururut

Minakami Yuki wrote:

gratzz 1st qualifyyyyy
gratzz 1st disqualifyyyyy 233
Sellenite
sad
Okoratu
so do you want/need help with hitsoundthings or
Topic Starter
Pururut

Okoratu wrote:

so do you want/need help with hitsoundthings or
sure,if you willing help me :3
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