tieff wrote:

Decrease hitsounds volume.
fixed
Try offset 3 471

[Easy]
00:02:97 (1) ~ 00:18:22 (4) - Use soft hitsounds here.
nice advice.fixed
00:06:91 (5) - New combo.
done
01:17:25 (4) - Nazi. Down a bit.
done
01:17:74 (5) - If you do this ^ right a bit.
done

[Normal]
00:02:97 (1) ~ 00:18:22 (8) - Soft hitsounds here.
done
01:07:89 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jumps on normal?
fixed,changed another pattern

[Hard]
00:02:97 (1) - ~ 00:17:48 (15) - Soft hitsounds.
fixed
01:27:32 (3) - Clap.
fixed
02:13:67 (10,11) - Spacing.
fixed

Nice map, star'd.

Breeze wrote:

哟,gdeath

我来随便看了下,提点建议

[easy]
00:17:757 (1,2) - 这个1,2好像没有和音乐有什么匹配,是不是换成 00:17:256 - 00:18:740的spinner更好? 哦,后面有SB...好吧,无视这个
00:42:839 (1) - 这个被前面的(3,4)挡住了,不怎么好看,把它改成向下的会比较好
fixed
01:05:953 spinner - 去掉,换成break吧
犹豫了下，at last i decided to fix it
01:14:437 - 加break,不过HP Drain rate低,不加也行
01:19:232 (6) - 没对上音乐,想想怎么改一下吧
fixed
01:22:183 (4) - 去掉,换成01:22:183 - 01:23:958的spinner更好,然后把后面的(1)放到中间
OK.fixed

[normal]
00:05:707 (6) - 往上移一小格,没对齐
fixed
00:37:182 slider的反弹处 - 在反弹处的前后各加个timing设置,把反弹处的声音去掉会比较好听,当然也完全可以不管他
fixed，后面两个note顺便加上了clap，感觉更有节奏感^_^


[hard]
00:38:395 (2,3,4) - 还是一个遮挡的问题,试着重新排列一下
fixed
00:40:380 (10) - 如果要配合声音的话要往前移一拍,另外这一堆note适当的用new combo看起不会那么眼花,比如就在10这开始新combo
fixed
00:46:527 (1) - 这个jump跳得有点太猛...
hamn..我觉得还行
01:01:527 (14) - 遮挡,这一堆也该有new combo
NC added
01:07:921 (1) - 跟spinner接的很近的note应该离中间近点,当然hard难度为了增加难度,远点也行,另spinner的结束响声不好听,尝试去掉
fixed
01:13:207 (7,8,9) - 这串就没什么问题,因为遮挡会比较容易花,而重叠时比较好的模式


nice map,star for you

alvisto wrote:

EASY
I like how easy it is, and since you aim to make this difficulty to new players, you can consider a bigger circle size.
No problem here.
good idea.fixed

NORMAL
Good, no problem

HARD
00:44:806 - align it so that it is a straight line to 5 & 4
FIXED
00:45:543 - I think slider end at 00:45:789 is better
FIXED
00:57:347 - Make a slider here and let it end at 00:58:084 ?
FIXED
02:11:240 - Lost storyboard is good
thx
02:26:978 - Add a note here ? It sounds better with the singer sings "noh~~~~"
FIXED

AZUKI"S DIFF also fixed
Good map ! Starred !

CXu wrote:

Meh, first time modding xD
Please look at this only as suggestions, as there's a high chance I make mistakes and makes things worse than they are ^^"
Oh, and because I can't find anything big in this awesome map, I nitpick on stuff xD

[Easy]
00:05:46 (4) - Spacing
fixed
00:17:75 (3,4) - ^
fixed
00:42:83 (1) - ^
fixed
01:05:46 (3,1) - re-insert break
fixed
01:11:85 (1) - Spacing
i think no problem here?however thx your advice^_^
01:18:74 (6) - Move 1 grid to the left
fixed

[Normal]
00:08:16 (4) - Move 2 grid to the left, or is it supposed to be out there?
yeah,i intended to make this pattern
00:45:78 (7) - spacing
fixed
00:57:83 (7,8) - spacing
fixed
01:12:71 (2) - Move to red tick before if you want to follow the old pattern, leave it if not xD
i decide to leave it^_^

[Hard]
00:14:80 (1,13) - You spaced with 1,2x earlier, why did you use 1,0x here?
place of intensive notes i use 1.0,and place of loose notes i use 1.2,however some places have been fixed following your advice
00:36:44 (7,1) - Align with 00:34:97 (1,2)?
fixed
00:37:42 (3,4) - ^
fixed
00:38:65 (1) - You changed back to 1,0x?
^
00:42:83 (1) - Okay, 1,2x I'll stop pointing this out, as it seems like it's intentional xD
^
01:00:29 (6) - Align with 01:00:05 (5)
fixed
01:01:52 (14) - ^
fixed
01:03:24 (5) - Spacing
fixed
01:05:21 (7,8) - ^
fixed
01:14:31 (1,4) - ^
fixed
01:25:13 (2,3,4) - ^
fixed
02:13:08 (6) - Move 1 grid to the left
fixed
02:26:97 (16) - Spacing
fixed
02:49:47 (7) - Make it a reverse slider?
i decided to use my pattern,however thx your advice^_^
02:56:36 (6) - Spacing
fixed

[azuki's diff]
00:57:83 (12) - This sounds wierd for me. No idea why
01:47:75 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:75 (1,2) seems to be 1,7x, while 01:48:24 (2,3,4) is 1,6x
01:49:72 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:18:00 (8) - Move one grid to the right
02:51:44 (3,4,5) - Spacing

azuki's diff also be fixed

Nice map
Sorry for nitpicking xD
Star~

Alace wrote:

Get rid of those 1 grid new combo things
Let`s start modding

overall
pretty good mapset Nice SB+song+map

<Easy>
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,255
Combo2 : 5,240,5
Combo3 : 5,5,240
Combo4 : 240,5,5
Combo5 : 128,255,255
open your .osu in notepad and copy those into it
you can also open other diff to know where you should put

<Normal>
00:36:93 (5) - No hitsounds here??

<Hard>
A bit overmapped (i list 5 parts)
00:44:80 (6,7) -
00:47:75 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:22:18 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
01:35:95 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
02:25:13 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
you can try to remove some notes to make your map more soft

<azuki>
01:22:18 (5) - wwwwwwwwwwwwwww
02:25:87 (4) - new combo
Hitsounds volume
Start~00:18:74: 70%~75%
00:34:84~00:50:21: 60%
00:50:70~01:05:46: 70%
01:07:92~break time: 80~90%
02:12~02:25: 70%
other volumes are good

Alace wrote:

yeah
It`s much better now (Hard)

Hitsounds
IMO normal hitsounds fit only few parts (whistle and clap are too loud for this song)
01:07~01:22
02:43~end

I like azuki`s hitsounds more personally (fit the song very well)
Anyway it`s up to you
you don`t really need to change hitsounds

minyeob wrote:

[Hard]
01:35:46 (7) - How about moving this to center?
after thinking a while,i decide to leave my pattern.still thx for your advice^_^

deepsea wrote:

I got 99% on Hard with offset -10 (93% with current)
okay,fixed.thank youO(∩_∩)O

alan_629_6 wrote:

EASY
00:18:228 - reinsert the break
good eye.fixed

NORMAL
00:18:238 - reinsert the break - no
00:36:68 (4) - NAZI. alignment.sorry,i intended to do that.^_^
00:37:91 (7) - ^ - no
00:40:61 (6) - ^ - no
00:54:38 (1) - spacing dont follow the spacing between 2 new combo^_^
01:03:23 (3) - alignment? or you do it on purpose? - no

HARD
00:08:89 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - no
00:18:238 - reinsert break - no
01:04:22 (1) - ^ - no
01:55:124 - reinsert break - no
02:57:33 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^\ - no

good map and nice song! good job!!! wish your map will be ranked soon! i hope too(@^_^@)

RemmyX25 wrote:

Hm.

For some reason, [Easy] stops right after the map, but [Normal] ends much later on. I have a feeling its the storyboard elements left in [Normal] that's unnecessarily extending the song by a minute or so of NOTHING.
so stupid mistake>w< fixed

The maps are alright, I just want to see this little error fixed <3

azuki's difficulty:
Lacks in slider ticks. Would sound awesome if they were there.
increase to the slider ticks 1.