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Aramary - Koibito Wo Uchi Otoshita Hi

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gdeath
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gdeath
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年8月11日 at 18:37:02

Artist: Sound Horizon
Title: Koibito Wo Uchi Otoshita Hi
Source: Sound Horizon
Tags: Sound Horizon
BPM: 122
Filesize: 21191kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. azuki's diff (4.94 stars, 391 notes)
  2. Easy (1.5 stars, 66 notes)
  3. Hard (4.79 stars, 390 notes)
  4. Normal (4.21 stars, 131 notes)
Download: Sound Horizon - Koibito Wo Uchi Otoshita Hi
Download: Sound Horizon - Koibito Wo Uchi Otoshita Hi (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd Beatmap

Special thanks:

video and storyboard by aboutmetal

azuki's diff by azuki
Last edited by Gens , edited 29 times in total.
hoimi_old
1 post
Joined August 2008
hoimi_old
Oh no,you mistaked the song name:(

Not "koi wo uchiotoshita hi"
right "koibito wo uchiotoshita hi"

I expect that it will be completed your map. :)
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath

hoimi wrote:

Oh no,you mistaked the song name:(

Not "koi wo uchiotoshita hi"
right "koibito wo uchiotoshita hi"

I expect that it will be completed your map. :)
hamn...i knew my title were wrong.however i intended to fix it when i have completed the normal.
anyway,thank you for your suggestion.now it has been fixed
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
change artist name " Sound Horizon"
gdeath
1,598 posts
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Topic Starter
gdeath

azuki wrote:

change artist name " Sound Horizon"
FIXED
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Offset:2995 (might just be an offset problem on my side)

Easy:
00:06:92 (4) - new combo (I kind of wanted to keep the combos short like the middle section)
00:10:84 (1) - I don't think it is very nice to have twice your normal spacing between combos on an easy (applies the use of this throughout the song. I just don't feel this is easy anymore with such jumps)
00:14:79 (5) - new combo
00:12:83 (4) - start a quarter note earlier and make a quarter note longer?
00:36:43 (2) - move a quarter note earlier?
00:44:30 (2) - " "
00:47:25 (2) - " "
00:55:12 (2) - " "
01:11:84 (4) - new combo

This diff feels a little weird with everything snapped to whole notes. I think you should snap to the lyrics more

Normal:
00:39:39 (2) - move a quarter note earlier
00:43:08 (2) - shorten a quarter note and start a quarter note later
00:45:05 (6) - " "
00:46:52 (1,2) - end 1 at 00:47:14 and start 2 at 00:47:51 and end it where it currently is
00:50:95 (2) - shorten a quarter note and start a quarter note later (probably should get rid of the repeat)
00:55:62 (4) - shorten a quarter note and end a quarter note earlier
00:58:82 (2) - shorten a quarter note and start a quarter note later
01:09:88 (1) - remove new combo

Hard:
00:04:97 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:01 (11) - align with 10?
01:22:18 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - make all spacing equal here
the first half of the song is pretty boring with almost every pattern being a straight line and a set of triple clicks or a single repeating slider. Add some more original patterns to this like some of the patterns and shapes in the second half.

Nice map. Star.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Offset:2995 (might just be an offset problem on my side)

Easy:
00:06:92 (4) - new combo (I kind of wanted to keep the combos short like the middle section)
00:10:84 (1) - I don't think it is very nice to have twice your normal spacing between combos on an easy (applies the use of this throughout the song. I just don't feel this is easy anymore with such jumps)
00:14:79 (5) - new combo
00:12:83 (4) - start a quarter note earlier and make a quarter note longer?
00:36:43 (2) - move a quarter note earlier?
00:44:30 (2) - " "
00:47:25 (2) - " "
00:55:12 (2) - " "
01:11:84 (4) - new combo

This diff feels a little weird with everything snapped to whole notes. I think you should snap to the lyrics more

Normal:
00:39:39 (2) - move a quarter note earlier
00:43:08 (2) - shorten a quarter note and start a quarter note later
00:45:05 (6) - " "
00:46:52 (1,2) - end 1 at 00:47:14 and start 2 at 00:47:51 and end it where it currently is
00:50:95 (2) - shorten a quarter note and start a quarter note later (probably should get rid of the repeat)
00:55:62 (4) - shorten a quarter note and end a quarter note earlier
00:58:82 (2) - shorten a quarter note and start a quarter note later
01:09:88 (1) - remove new combo

Hard:
00:04:97 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:01 (11) - align with 10?
01:22:18 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - make all spacing equal here
the first half of the song is pretty boring with almost every pattern being a straight line and a set of triple clicks or a single repeating slider. Add some more original patterns to this like some of the patterns and shapes in the second half.

Nice map. Star.
all fixed,except the easy.
concerning the easy,i intended to made the map,following the tempo, not lyrics.maybe i failed.
PS:i use 1/1 BSD to make easy.start a quarter note earlier ?I'll think a while.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Capitalize the title. Could you add some custom colours?

[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
00:44:060 (4) - Move 1/4 forward and make 1/4 shorter.
00:54:634 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter.
00:58:568 (9) - New combo.
00:59:183 (11) - Move 1/4 forward and make 1/4 shorter.
01:00:535 - Add a note note instead of slider.
01:00:904 - Add slider (start 01:00:904; end 01:01:273).
01:01:273 (15) - Delete a note.

[Hard]
00:04:962 (7) - New combo.
00:09:142 (8) - New combo.
00:12:831 (9) - New combo.
00:17:011 (11) - New combo.
00:18:732 (15) - End this slider on 00:18:732. Don't forget about re-insterting break.
00:40:003 - Add a note.
00:40:617 (11) - New combo.
00:44:798 (11) - New combo.
00:48:486 (6) - New combo.
01:04:224 (7) - New combo.
01:09:880 (11) - New combo.
01:13:076 (7) - New combo.
01:16:765 (7) - New combo.
02:45:290 (10) - New combo.
02:48:240 (7) - New combo.
02:53:158 (11) - New combo.
02:57:339 (9) - New combo.

You must put some hitsounds there.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath

fartownik wrote:

Capitalize the title. Could you add some custom colours?
OK.new colours was added

[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
00:44:060 (4) - Move 1/4 forward and make 1/4 shorter.
FIXED
00:54:634 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter.
i think no problem here?
00:58:568 (9) - New combo.
FIXED
00:59:183 (11) - Move 1/4 forward and make 1/4 shorter.
FIXED
01:00:535 - Add a note note instead of slider.
FIXED
01:00:904 - Add slider (start 01:00:904; end 01:01:273).
FIXED
01:01:273 (15) - Delete a note.
FIXED

[Hard]
00:04:962 (7) - New combo.
00:09:142 (8) - New combo.
00:12:831 (9) - New combo.
00:17:011 (11) - New combo.
00:18:732 (15) - End this slider on 00:18:732. Don't forget about re-insterting break.
sorry,i feel it is somewhat strange as your favour.but really thanks to help me mod the map
00:40:003 - Add a note.
FIXED
00:40:617 (11) - New combo.
00:44:798 (11) - New combo.
00:48:486 (6) - New combo.
01:04:224 (7) - New combo.
01:09:880 (11) - New combo.
01:13:076 (7) - New combo.
01:16:765 (7) - New combo.
02:45:290 (10) - New combo.
02:48:240 (7) - New combo.
02:53:158 (11) - New combo.
02:57:339 (9) - New combo.

You must put some hitsounds there.
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 3480, resnap. The reason for the large discrimination is because the start of the beat falls on what is supposedly the second beat of the song. Actually, with the current offset it should be 3486, but 3480 is the one for more accuracy. 3480. 3480. 3480.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Decrease hitsounds volume.
Try offset 3 471

[Easy]
00:02:97 (1) ~ 00:18:22 (4) - Use soft hitsounds here.
00:06:91 (5) - New combo.
01:17:25 (4) - Nazi. Down a bit.
01:17:74 (5) - If you do this ^ right a bit.

[Normal]
00:02:97 (1) ~ 00:18:22 (8) - Soft hitsounds here.
01:07:89 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jumps on normal?

[Hard]
00:02:97 (1) - ~ 00:17:48 (15) - Soft hitsounds.
01:27:32 (3) - Clap.
02:13:67 (10,11) - Spacing.

Nice map, star'd.
gdeath
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Topic Starter
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath

tieff wrote:

Decrease hitsounds volume.
fixed
Try offset 3 471

[Easy]
00:02:97 (1) ~ 00:18:22 (4) - Use soft hitsounds here.
nice advice.fixed
00:06:91 (5) - New combo.
done
01:17:25 (4) - Nazi. Down a bit.
done
01:17:74 (5) - If you do this ^ right a bit.
done

[Normal]
00:02:97 (1) ~ 00:18:22 (8) - Soft hitsounds here.
done
01:07:89 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jumps on normal?
fixed,changed another pattern

[Hard]
00:02:97 (1) - ~ 00:17:48 (15) - Soft hitsounds.
fixed
01:27:32 (3) - Clap.
fixed
02:13:67 (10,11) - Spacing.
fixed

Nice map, star'd.
thank you for your modding.
regarding the offset,i pondered for a long time.finally i ask about kiou2,and he told me that 3003 is OK.so i decide to use it.really thx again
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Hi!

Easy
01:03:98 (2) - move one beat later, and remove next (3)
01:05:83 - this timing section is not doing nothin here
01:23:16 - ^
01:23:90 - ^
01:23:65 (5) - move one beat later (if you do, fix timing section, spacing and add new combo) n_n

Normal
Forgot to Inherit timing sections?
00:18:49 - this timing section is not doing nothing here
01:05:59 - what's up with this timing section?
01:05:71 (1) - end spinner at 01:07:43
01:23:42 - this timing section is not doing nothing here

Hard
00:09:39 (4,5) - remove this notes, and start the slider were is (4), end point of the slider, just were it is, sounds better imo (if you do, fix spacing)
00:17:26 (13,14) - remove this notes, and start the slider were is (13), end point of the slider, just were it is (if you do, fix spacing)
01:12:83 - place a note here, sounds better, like in this part 01:04:47 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) (if you do, fix spacing)
01:12:83 - ^
02:45:05 - ^
02:48:00 - ^
02:48:98 - ^
02:52:92 - ^

Nice map, cool song
Have a Star :)
gdeath
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gdeath
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Vexed_old
162 posts
Joined January 2009
Vexed_old
[Easy]
You don't need to have this green tick here. Just change the audio in the red timing tick. Remove first green tick.
01:17:26 (4,5) - No biggy, but spacing.
00:10:38 (5,1) - spacing.
00:11:85 (3,4) - ^
00:34:97 (1,2) - spacing differs from 2 and three in same combo. Should be the same.
00:58:57 (1,2) - 3 is out of alignment with 1 causing 2, to be spaced incorrectly.
Basically just spacing issues, easily fixed if you just go through and use distance spacing.

[Normal]
01:05:71 (1) - The timing ticks on this spinner should be green. Not BPM ticks.

[Hard]
00:03:002 Remove green and and make to changes to red. You shouldn't ever have to stack timing marks.
You combos are reaching to high in numbers so im sure they will have to be moddified in this difficulty.
00:40:62 (11) - NC
00:44:56 (10) - ^
00:48:49 (6) - ^
00:52:42 (6) - ^
01:04:23 (7) - ^
01:04:23 (7) - ^
01:20:95 (5) - ^
01:22:18 (5) - ^
02:13:33 (2) - ^
02:14:31 (7) - ^
02:17:26 (10) - ^
02:25:13 (6) - ^ <------This one for sure. The rest, obviously you can do what ya want. I would try to something about the high combos though.
02:45:29 (11) - ^
02:48:24 (8) - ^
02:53:41 (13) - ^
02:56:36 (6) - ^
The reason for all the combo changes i have made, is that if you start making changes, the rest of the map should follow suit. Do what ya see fit i guess.

Starz.
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Breeze
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4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
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gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
gdeath
1,598 posts
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Topic Starter
gdeath

Breeze wrote:

哟,gdeath

我来随便看了下,提点建议

[easy]
00:17:757 (1,2) - 这个1,2好像没有和音乐有什么匹配,是不是换成 00:17:256 - 00:18:740的spinner更好? 哦,后面有SB...好吧,无视这个
00:42:839 (1) - 这个被前面的(3,4)挡住了,不怎么好看,把它改成向下的会比较好
fixed
01:05:953 spinner - 去掉,换成break吧
犹豫了下，at last i decided to fix it
01:14:437 - 加break,不过HP Drain rate低,不加也行
01:19:232 (6) - 没对上音乐,想想怎么改一下吧
fixed
01:22:183 (4) - 去掉,换成01:22:183 - 01:23:958的spinner更好,然后把后面的(1)放到中间
OK.fixed

[normal]
00:05:707 (6) - 往上移一小格,没对齐
fixed
00:37:182 slider的反弹处 - 在反弹处的前后各加个timing设置,把反弹处的声音去掉会比较好听,当然也完全可以不管他
fixed，后面两个note顺便加上了clap，感觉更有节奏感^_^


[hard]
00:38:395 (2,3,4) - 还是一个遮挡的问题,试着重新排列一下
fixed
00:40:380 (10) - 如果要配合声音的话要往前移一拍,另外这一堆note适当的用new combo看起不会那么眼花,比如就在10这开始新combo
fixed
00:46:527 (1) - 这个jump跳得有点太猛...
hamn..我觉得还行
01:01:527 (14) - 遮挡,这一堆也该有new combo
NC added
01:07:921 (1) - 跟spinner接的很近的note应该离中间近点,当然hard难度为了增加难度,远点也行,另spinner的结束响声不好听,尝试去掉
fixed
01:13:207 (7,8,9) - 这串就没什么问题,因为遮挡会比较容易花,而重叠时比较好的模式


nice map,star for you :)
嘛嘛，这么仔细的帮我MOD，貌似已经不是随便看下了(/≥▽≤/)
good advice.its very helpful.thx
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
final ver

Download: Sound Horizon - Koibito Wo Uchi Otoshita Hi (gdeath) [azuki's diff].osu
Last edited by azuki , edited 2 times in total.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Nice song and fine map.
star ;)
JamesLeao
366 posts
Joined October 2008
JamesLeao
hard:一些circle变slider（小建议、可不采纳）
nice map and beautiful storyboard , i like it . :P
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
hard
circle建议改为slider不然不协调……（不是建议 是忠告……哈哈…………）
AZUKI那难度看的我自卑 555
乃继续加油吧
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath
OK,i also think so.remake the hard^_^
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
EASY
I like how easy it is, and since you aim to make this difficulty to new players, you can consider a bigger circle size.
No problem here.

NORMAL
Good, no problem

HARD
00:44:806 - align it so that it is a straight line to 5 & 4
00:45:543 - I think slider end at 00:45:789 is better
00:57:347 - Make a slider here and let it end at 00:58:084 ?
02:11:240 - Lost storyboard is good
02:26:978 - Add a note here ? It sounds better with the singer sings "noh~~~~"

AZUKI"S DIFF
00:14:068 - Slider end at blue tick ?
00:18:740 - Reinsert break
01:14:317 - combo
01:18:003 - combo
01:18:740 - spacing of 11,12,13 got problem
02:25:994 - 02:27:839 - this part is good
02:52:183 - shorten it by 1 tick
02:54:150 - ^

Good map ! Starred !
gdeath
1,598 posts
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Topic Starter
gdeath

alvisto wrote:

EASY
I like how easy it is, and since you aim to make this difficulty to new players, you can consider a bigger circle size.
No problem here.
good idea.fixed

NORMAL
Good, no problem

HARD
00:44:806 - align it so that it is a straight line to 5 & 4
FIXED
00:45:543 - I think slider end at 00:45:789 is better
FIXED
00:57:347 - Make a slider here and let it end at 00:58:084 ?
FIXED
02:11:240 - Lost storyboard is good
thx
02:26:978 - Add a note here ? It sounds better with the singer sings "noh~~~~"
FIXED

AZUKI"S DIFF also fixed
Good map ! Starred !
thanks for your modding^_^
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
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CXu
Meh, first time modding xD
Please look at this only as suggestions, as there's a high chance I make mistakes and makes things worse than they are ^^"
Oh, and because I can't find anything big in this awesome map, I nitpick on stuff xD

[Easy]
00:05:46 (4) - Spacing
00:17:75 (3,4) - ^
00:42:83 (1) - ^
01:05:46 (3,1) - re-insert break
01:11:85 (1) - Spacing
01:18:74 (6) - Move 1 grid to the left

[Normal]
00:08:16 (4) - Move 2 grid to the left, or is it supposed to be out there?
00:45:78 (7) - spacing
00:57:83 (7,8) - spacing
01:12:71 (2) - Move to red tick before if you want to follow the old pattern, leave it if not xD

[Hard]
00:14:80 (1,13) - You spaced with 1,2x earlier, why did you use 1,0x here?
00:36:44 (7,1) - Align with 00:34:97 (1,2)?
00:37:42 (3,4) - ^
00:38:65 (1) - You changed back to 1,0x?
00:42:83 (1) - Okay, 1,2x I'll stop pointing this out, as it seems like it's intentional xD
01:00:29 (6) - Align with 01:00:05 (5)
01:01:52 (14) - ^
01:03:24 (5) - Spacing
01:05:21 (7,8) - ^
01:14:31 (1,4) - ^
01:25:13 (2,3,4) - ^
02:13:08 (6) - Move 1 grid to the left
02:26:97 (16) - Spacing
02:49:47 (7) - Make it a reverse slider?
02:56:36 (6) - Spacing

[azuki's diff]
00:57:83 (12) - This sounds wierd for me. No idea why
01:47:75 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:75 (1,2) seems to be 1,7x, while 01:48:24 (2,3,4) is 1,6x
01:49:72 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:18:00 (8) - Move one grid to the right
02:51:44 (3,4,5) - Spacing


Nice map :)
Sorry for nitpicking xD
Star~
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
Get rid of those 1 grid new combo things
Let`s start modding

overall
pretty good mapset Nice SB+song+map

<Easy>
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,255
Combo2 : 5,240,5
Combo3 : 5,5,240
Combo4 : 240,5,5
Combo5 : 128,255,255
open your .osu in notepad and copy those into it
you can also open other diff to know where you should put

<Normal>
00:36:93 (5) - No hitsounds here??

<Hard>
A bit overmapped (i list 5 parts)
00:44:80 (6,7) -
00:47:75 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:22:18 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
01:35:95 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
02:25:13 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
you can try to remove some notes to make your map more soft

<azuki>
01:22:18 (5) - wwwwwwwwwwwwwww
02:25:87 (4) - new combo
Hitsounds volume
Start~00:18:74: 70%~75%
00:34:84~00:50:21: 60%
00:50:70~01:05:46: 70%
01:07:92~break time: 80~90%
02:12~02:25: 70%
other volumes are good
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Sound Horizon - Koibito Wo Uchi Otoshita Hi (gdeath) [azuki's diff].osu
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gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath

CXu wrote:

Meh, first time modding xD
Please look at this only as suggestions, as there's a high chance I make mistakes and makes things worse than they are ^^"
Oh, and because I can't find anything big in this awesome map, I nitpick on stuff xD

[Easy]
00:05:46 (4) - Spacing
fixed
00:17:75 (3,4) - ^
fixed
00:42:83 (1) - ^
fixed
01:05:46 (3,1) - re-insert break
fixed
01:11:85 (1) - Spacing
i think no problem here?however thx your advice^_^
01:18:74 (6) - Move 1 grid to the left
fixed

[Normal]
00:08:16 (4) - Move 2 grid to the left, or is it supposed to be out there?
yeah,i intended to make this pattern
00:45:78 (7) - spacing
fixed
00:57:83 (7,8) - spacing
fixed
01:12:71 (2) - Move to red tick before if you want to follow the old pattern, leave it if not xD
i decide to leave it^_^

[Hard]
00:14:80 (1,13) - You spaced with 1,2x earlier, why did you use 1,0x here?
place of intensive notes i use 1.0,and place of loose notes i use 1.2,however some places have been fixed following your advice
00:36:44 (7,1) - Align with 00:34:97 (1,2)?
fixed
00:37:42 (3,4) - ^
fixed
00:38:65 (1) - You changed back to 1,0x?
^
00:42:83 (1) - Okay, 1,2x I'll stop pointing this out, as it seems like it's intentional xD
^
01:00:29 (6) - Align with 01:00:05 (5)
fixed
01:01:52 (14) - ^
fixed
01:03:24 (5) - Spacing
fixed
01:05:21 (7,8) - ^
fixed
01:14:31 (1,4) - ^
fixed
01:25:13 (2,3,4) - ^
fixed
02:13:08 (6) - Move 1 grid to the left
fixed
02:26:97 (16) - Spacing
fixed
02:49:47 (7) - Make it a reverse slider?
i decided to use my pattern,however thx your advice^_^
02:56:36 (6) - Spacing
fixed

[azuki's diff]
00:57:83 (12) - This sounds wierd for me. No idea why
01:47:75 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:75 (1,2) seems to be 1,7x, while 01:48:24 (2,3,4) is 1,6x
01:49:72 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:18:00 (8) - Move one grid to the right
02:51:44 (3,4,5) - Spacing

azuki's diff also be fixed

Nice map :)
Sorry for nitpicking xD
Star~
first mod?you mod my map seriously and your advice is very helpful for me.
thanks to your modding o(∩_∩)o
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