Hey kajiyatta :3
General:- I think this video is NSFW i highly suggest you to delete it, since some BAT might say so o.o
Easy:- 00:03:141 (1) - how about adding a whistle to the slider's repeat, sounds kinda fitting with the music o.o
- 00:17:308 (2) - i highly suggest you to delete this note, since i really don't really think it follows anything in music. And this is an easy so you should make this diff a bit easier
- 00:20:474 (3) - move this slider one grid down so it'll be symmetry with the slider (1) o.o
- 00:20:474 (3) - a finish on slider's start would sound great imo
- 00:27:808 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the voice pretty well
- 00:30:974 (2) - how about making this curved slider to give nice effect to the slider? like this o.o
- 00:31:974 (3) - how about adding a slidertick sound on here 00:32:141 sounds kinda fitting with the music
- 00:51:141 (1) - finish on slider's start would sound greet imo
- 00:55:808 (4) - how about moving the 2nd and 3rd slider's points a bit up so it'll avoid touching with the next slider's body
- 00:56:474 (1) - how about adding a finish on slider's start to follow the vocal here, you kinda missed it here
- 01:02:808 (2) - try to perfect stuck this note under 01:01:141 (3) - slider's tail
- 01:13:808 (3) - a finish on slider's start would sound great imo
- 01:20:474 (1) - ^
- 01:21:808 (3) - a whistle on slider's repeat would sound awesome here, it'll follow the voice great here <3
- 01:27:141 (3) - how about add a whistle with the clap here? it'll sound much better imo
- 01:29:808 (2) - adding finish would follow great with the music
Normal:- 00:44:474 (3) - how about curving this slider a bit, it'll give nice flow with your diff here, much better then liner slider o.o
- 00:51:141 (1) - how about adding a finish on slider's start to follow the vocal
- 00:56:474 (1) - ^
- 01:09:808 (1) - ^
- 01:15:141 (1) - ^
- 01:20:474 (1) - ^
- 01:27:974 (5) - I don't think this slider's tail follows anything...I highly suggest you removing the repeat on this slider
- 01:36:474 (1) - finish on slider's start would be awesome here
Hard:- 00:34:641 (7) - I think it would be better if you curved this slider a bit, liner slider kinda don't flow right here o.o
- 00:45:808 (1) - I think you should add a finish on slider's start here
- 00:51:141 (1) - ^
- 00:54:808 (4) - how about making ctrl+g with this slider? it'll give nice flow with this slider o.o
- 00:57:974 (1) - how about adding a nc here, to follow the vocal
- 01:14:141 (6) - I think the flow would be better here, if this was with ctrl+g
- 01:31:141 (1) - finish on slider start would follow the music good imo
- 01:36:141 (6) - how about ctrl+g with this slider? it'll give nice flow with your style here o.o
Insane:- 00:01:808 (1) - how about adding nc here, to shorten your combo here o.o
- 00:04:308 (1) - ^ for the jump
- 00:06:974 (6) - ^
- 00:12:308 (6) - ^
- 00:14:974 (7) - ^
- 00:20:474 (7) - ^
- 00:25:808 (6) - ^
- 00:28:474 (6) - how about moving this slider one grid down to symmetry with the next slider
- 00:51:141 (1) - finish on slider's start would be great imo
- 00:56:474 (1) - ^
- 01:09:808 (1) - ^
- 01:20:474 (1) - ^
- 01:21:808 (5) - ^
- 01:32:974 (7) - how about ctrl+g this slider, it'll give nice flow to it, maybe curving it as well would be good too ></
- 01:35:308 (6) - ^ just to ctrl+g here
That's all i can find here, I think insane has so many nc needs to be fixed imo. but I think that's about it <3
Good job with the map kajiyatta and nice song choice, because Chata is so moe <3 ;w;
Good luck with ranking it :3