Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo Kazuya~ Ye I know I'm late >.< (soooo lazy uguu~)

- General :

1. I'm afraid SR between different diff is a little high and force you to do an other diff. Check it with a BAT.

wiki wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

1. Colours (3) and (4) are too similar. Can you make them differ a little more? Example.
   Note: you can just poke me if you need the code.
2. 02:00:085 - This part also feels like a kiai for me. I'm pretty sure you've forgotten to put a kiai here.

1. The diff is the easiest, so I would suggest reducing all settings by 1 or a least by 0,5. It will increase playability a lot.
2. 00:16:637 (3,4) - mind removing (4) and adding a repeat to (3)? It will make the rhythm easier and make rhythm more consistent. Example
3. 00:22:154 (4) - either add a new combo here or remove one from 00:27:671 (1) - in order to keep consistency in comboing.
4. 00:59:565 - the beat changes its sound at 00:59:395 - and havng a clickable object here would be great. Replace the repeat with a circle? Example
   Note: 01:11:464 (3) - same as above.
5. 01:49:740 (3) - in order to avoid a tricky 3/2 transition, you can map the beat at 01:50:257 - a simple circle will do. But a pattern like two 1/2 sliders should work, too
   
   Well mapped. I don't have much to say.

1. 00:04:568 (5,7) - feels overmapped. I believe that this part of the music was intended to be relaxing, so it's better if you remove these hitobjects. :c
2. 00:50:430 (2,4) - isn't x2.6 jump is too big for the diff? I would try to keep DS under x2.3 to keep the set balanced. If you're unsure, get some testplayers' opinions, first.
3. 01:24:137 (7) -this is the only 1/4 triplet in this part, it feels really random and unexpected. Can you remove the circle on the blue tick t keep things more consistent?
4. 01:38:706 (2) - the slider is placed too high, can we move it down a little? I am pretty sure it gets overlapped with the scores on 4:3 displays.
5. 02:21:464 (3,4) - I guess they are supposed to be 1/6 (as 1/3 doubles and plays as 1/6.) But both 1/6 and 1/8 sliders are too fast for a Hyper and might hurt the balance. Can we replace them with simple 1/3s? Examples
   
   I'd get a little more work on rhythm of the diff, but it is fine overall. ъ

1. 01:11:809 (1,2) - the music gets kinda calm here and the 1/1 gap represents it. The jump here feels exaggerated.
   Note: 01:35:947 (3,4) - same.
2. 02:12:384 (5,1) - the transition feels sorta forced, try a pattern like this or do something else if you agree that the pattern can get better.
3. 02:21:464 (5,6) - I'd say that it's 1/6. Howevrer, I recommend to get someone to confirm it.
   
   That's pretty much it. Nice ejob on this one!

It might need like 2-3 more mods (or 1 quality mod), then you're free to call me back if you'd like to.

1. Combo colours in Another are a little different. Please keep the same colours in all diffs, that's a important.
2. You have a missed skin elements.
   
   1. spinner-glow.png
3. Your spinner-background.png s just 1x1 file. Are you sure that you want to keep it that way?

1. Set AR to 4,5. It will look slightly better and it fits better for the easiest diff of the set.
2. 01:08:361 (2,3,4) - some players may mistakenly hit 94) too early, can we use a pattern like this, maybe?
3. 01:35:947 (2) - minor - can we rotate it a little, so it'd look neater? Example

1. 00:25:602 (2,3) - are you sure about the jump here? I would say that it is quite exaggerated. Reducing DS here might be a good idea.
2. 00:42:671 (3) - I am pretty sure that there should be a whistle on its head. There is a whistle on Standard and Another. So, replace the clap with a whistle.
3. 01:02:844 (2,3) - minor - curve on them makes your flow a little unnatural. How about this?
4. 01:20:085 (4,1) - try to unstack them a little, so, players will be able to notice (1) in time. Example
5. 01:24:137 (7) - think about it one more time, please. I highly recomend you to remove it since this is the ONLY triplet in the whole diff.
6. 01:43:533 - a strong drum hit is ignored here, are you sure that you want to kleep it that way?

1. 01:15:602 (5,6,1) - a sudden jump-stack transition might trick players. I would avoid the stack, if its possible.
2. 01:38:016 (1) - overmapped. Please think about replacing it with an 1/1 slider.

Your spinner-background.png s just 1x1 file. Are you sure that you want to keep it that way?

Desperate-kun wrote:

Good job!

Ranking Criteria wrote:

No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

1. Diff names don't really fit, although it's not a big problem.
2. The hardest diff of the mapset could have a higher OD due the AR and BPM.

An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed)