Did some IRC modding. Extra is way beyond what I would accept for this kind of song, sorry.
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2014-01-17 21:57 Garven: You there?
2014-01-17 21:57 jieusieu: yep
2014-01-17 21:57 Garven: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/227744 Suara - Musouka (TV Size) [Frobe's Easy]]
2014-01-17 21:58 Garven: Some of the tick sounds are off
2014-01-17 21:58 Garven: Mainly during the kiai
2014-01-17 21:58 Garven: He changed what beat he's using the clap on and it sounds weird
2014-01-17 22:00 Garven: 00:24:478 (1) - I'd recommend more recovery time after a spinner for an Easy difficulty
2014-01-17 22:01 Garven: 01:02:985 (1) - ctrl + h for better flow
2014-01-17 22:02 jieusieu: ok
2014-01-17 22:04 Garven: In Normal: 00:16:418 (1) -
2014-01-17 22:04 Garven: That whistle intended?
2014-01-17 22:05 jieusieu: maybe yes
2014-01-17 22:05 Garven: 00:48:657 (1,2,3,4,1) - This gets really hard compared to the rest of the map
2014-01-17 22:06 Garven: Might want to tone it down a little
2014-01-17 22:07 jieusieu: 00:48:657 (1,2,3) - you mean this?
2014-01-17 22:08 Garven: Yes. Just lots of 1/2 rhythms
2014-01-17 22:09 Garven: And it's the hardest part of the map
2014-01-17 22:11 jieusieu: hmm
2014-01-17 22:12 Garven: Hard: Distance snap changes 00:16:418 (1,2,3,4) - to 00:18:209 (1,2,3) -
2014-01-17 22:13 Garven: 00:26:492 (7,8,9) - I'm not seeing the point of these triple 1/4 rhythms
2014-01-17 22:13 Garven: There's nothing going on in the song that would facilitate that
2014-01-17 22:14 Garven: 00:27:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - Such a weird spot to increase spacing...
2014-01-17 22:14 Garven: 00:30:746 (1,2,3) - I guess it makes more sense than this one though
2014-01-17 22:15 Garven: And all the random 1/4s strewn throughout
2014-01-17 22:15 jieusieu: aww your english is to hard for me
2014-01-17 22:15 Garven: Sorry, sorry
2014-01-17 22:15 Garven: What part did you not understand?
2014-01-17 22:16 jieusieu: 00:30:746 (1,2,3) - this
2014-01-17 22:16 Garven: Ah, it was reference to the previous line
2014-01-17 22:16 Garven: So that increase in spacing was weird
2014-01-17 22:16 Garven: But the ones at :30 are much worse
2014-01-17 22:16 Garven: Made no sense as to why he chose to increase spacing there
2014-01-17 22:17 Garven: It's similar to 00:44:403 (9,10,1) -
2014-01-17 22:17 Garven: If he increased spacing in a consistent manner I wouldn't mind, but it's more increasing whenever he feels like it instead of following some pattern in the music.
2014-01-17 22:18 Garven: For example: 00:52:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - there's a jump star pattern here
2014-01-17 22:18 Garven: 00:55:821 (1,2,3) - But nothing here
2014-01-17 22:18 Garven: Even though it's essentially the same part in the song
2014-01-17 22:18 Garven: 01:02:537 (5,1) - Strange spot for a jump
2014-01-17 22:19 Garven: 01:06:567 (1,2,3) - And here when it's the exact same thing, still no jump pattern
2014-01-17 22:19 Garven: 01:19:776 (1,2,3) - Having so many 1/2 rhythms during a long-held note feels a bit much compared to the tension that the music has
2014-01-17 22:20 Garven: That last spinner ending spot is really weird too. Why is it snapped to 1/8?
2014-01-17 22:22 jieusieu: http://puu.sh/6oRVL.png
2014-01-17 22:24 Garven: I personally find just having a circle instead of a spinner fits better, but whichever works
2014-01-17 22:24 Garven: I still find it a strange spot to end
2014-01-17 22:27 jieusieu: hmm
2014-01-17 22:28 Garven: In Insane: 00:37:910 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is really really weird
2014-01-17 22:28 Garven: I'm ignoring all the bad overmapping. There's way too much here
2014-01-17 22:29 Garven: But this part was just plain odd to play
2014-01-17 22:29 Garven: 00:41:492 (1,2,3) - This one too
2014-01-17 22:30 Garven: 00:51:343 (4,5) - Ehhh I'd remove these. There's so much more power to the music if you emphasize the two beats at 00:51:119 - and 00:51:567 -
2014-01-17 22:31 Garven: 01:13:731 (1,2) - Doing this spacing with this rhythm and having 01:14:179 (2,3) - right afterward reads very very poorly. Fix this.
2014-01-17 22:32 Garven: Same with the copy/paste earlier
2014-01-17 22:32 Garven: 00:59:851 (2,3) -
2014-01-17 22:32 jieusieu: it's too hard to fix
2014-01-17 22:32 Garven: Have the mapper fix it
2014-01-17 22:33 jieusieu: ok i'll send it
2014-01-17 22:34 Garven: Oh wow
2014-01-17 22:34 Garven: This extra
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: It's very pretty but...
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: The flow is all over the place
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: And to be honest, it feels like it's for another song.
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: This song is nice and slow and powerful
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: But your map is like a fast-paced heart wrenching power throb
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: It feels compeltely against the spirit of the song.
2014-01-17 22:37 jieusieu: then it's unrankable? D:
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: It might be rankable...
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: but I wouldn't rank it
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: Do you understand what I'm trying to say though?
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: The map itself looks great
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: You have a good sense of presentation and patterns
2014-01-17 22:38 Garven: The problem is how the cursor moves from object to object
2014-01-17 22:38 Garven: Especially compared to the music that it's supporting.
2014-01-17 22:38 Garven: Also tick rate 2 would fit this better than 4
2014-01-17 22:41 jieusieu: ok...
2014-01-17 22:41 Garven: Sorry...
2014-01-17 22:42 jieusieu: but thanks to mod my map
2014-01-17 22:42 Garven: Maybe another BAT will be fine with it
2014-01-17 22:42 Garven: But yeah, it's beyond my personal threshold of an acceptable map for the song.
2014-01-17 22:44 jieusieu: xDD
2014-01-17 21:57 jieusieu: yep
2014-01-17 21:57 Garven: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/227744 Suara - Musouka (TV Size) [Frobe's Easy]]
2014-01-17 21:58 Garven: Some of the tick sounds are off
2014-01-17 21:58 Garven: Mainly during the kiai
2014-01-17 21:58 Garven: He changed what beat he's using the clap on and it sounds weird
2014-01-17 22:00 Garven: 00:24:478 (1) - I'd recommend more recovery time after a spinner for an Easy difficulty
2014-01-17 22:01 Garven: 01:02:985 (1) - ctrl + h for better flow
2014-01-17 22:02 jieusieu: ok
2014-01-17 22:04 Garven: In Normal: 00:16:418 (1) -
2014-01-17 22:04 Garven: That whistle intended?
2014-01-17 22:05 jieusieu: maybe yes
2014-01-17 22:05 Garven: 00:48:657 (1,2,3,4,1) - This gets really hard compared to the rest of the map
2014-01-17 22:06 Garven: Might want to tone it down a little
2014-01-17 22:07 jieusieu: 00:48:657 (1,2,3) - you mean this?
2014-01-17 22:08 Garven: Yes. Just lots of 1/2 rhythms
2014-01-17 22:09 Garven: And it's the hardest part of the map
2014-01-17 22:11 jieusieu: hmm
2014-01-17 22:12 Garven: Hard: Distance snap changes 00:16:418 (1,2,3,4) - to 00:18:209 (1,2,3) -
2014-01-17 22:13 Garven: 00:26:492 (7,8,9) - I'm not seeing the point of these triple 1/4 rhythms
2014-01-17 22:13 Garven: There's nothing going on in the song that would facilitate that
2014-01-17 22:14 Garven: 00:27:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - Such a weird spot to increase spacing...
2014-01-17 22:14 Garven: 00:30:746 (1,2,3) - I guess it makes more sense than this one though
2014-01-17 22:15 Garven: And all the random 1/4s strewn throughout
2014-01-17 22:15 jieusieu: aww your english is to hard for me
2014-01-17 22:15 Garven: Sorry, sorry
2014-01-17 22:15 Garven: What part did you not understand?
2014-01-17 22:16 jieusieu: 00:30:746 (1,2,3) - this
2014-01-17 22:16 Garven: Ah, it was reference to the previous line
2014-01-17 22:16 Garven: So that increase in spacing was weird
2014-01-17 22:16 Garven: But the ones at :30 are much worse
2014-01-17 22:16 Garven: Made no sense as to why he chose to increase spacing there
2014-01-17 22:17 Garven: It's similar to 00:44:403 (9,10,1) -
2014-01-17 22:17 Garven: If he increased spacing in a consistent manner I wouldn't mind, but it's more increasing whenever he feels like it instead of following some pattern in the music.
2014-01-17 22:18 Garven: For example: 00:52:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - there's a jump star pattern here
2014-01-17 22:18 Garven: 00:55:821 (1,2,3) - But nothing here
2014-01-17 22:18 Garven: Even though it's essentially the same part in the song
2014-01-17 22:18 Garven: 01:02:537 (5,1) - Strange spot for a jump
2014-01-17 22:19 Garven: 01:06:567 (1,2,3) - And here when it's the exact same thing, still no jump pattern
2014-01-17 22:19 Garven: 01:19:776 (1,2,3) - Having so many 1/2 rhythms during a long-held note feels a bit much compared to the tension that the music has
2014-01-17 22:20 Garven: That last spinner ending spot is really weird too. Why is it snapped to 1/8?
2014-01-17 22:22 jieusieu: http://puu.sh/6oRVL.png
2014-01-17 22:24 Garven: I personally find just having a circle instead of a spinner fits better, but whichever works
2014-01-17 22:24 Garven: I still find it a strange spot to end
2014-01-17 22:27 jieusieu: hmm
2014-01-17 22:28 Garven: In Insane: 00:37:910 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is really really weird
2014-01-17 22:28 Garven: I'm ignoring all the bad overmapping. There's way too much here
2014-01-17 22:29 Garven: But this part was just plain odd to play
2014-01-17 22:29 Garven: 00:41:492 (1,2,3) - This one too
2014-01-17 22:30 Garven: 00:51:343 (4,5) - Ehhh I'd remove these. There's so much more power to the music if you emphasize the two beats at 00:51:119 - and 00:51:567 -
2014-01-17 22:31 Garven: 01:13:731 (1,2) - Doing this spacing with this rhythm and having 01:14:179 (2,3) - right afterward reads very very poorly. Fix this.
2014-01-17 22:32 Garven: Same with the copy/paste earlier
2014-01-17 22:32 Garven: 00:59:851 (2,3) -
2014-01-17 22:32 jieusieu: it's too hard to fix
2014-01-17 22:32 Garven: Have the mapper fix it
2014-01-17 22:33 jieusieu: ok i'll send it
2014-01-17 22:34 Garven: Oh wow
2014-01-17 22:34 Garven: This extra
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: It's very pretty but...
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: The flow is all over the place
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: And to be honest, it feels like it's for another song.
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: This song is nice and slow and powerful
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: But your map is like a fast-paced heart wrenching power throb
2014-01-17 22:35 Garven: It feels compeltely against the spirit of the song.
2014-01-17 22:37 jieusieu: then it's unrankable? D:
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: It might be rankable...
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: but I wouldn't rank it
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: Do you understand what I'm trying to say though?
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: The map itself looks great
2014-01-17 22:37 Garven: You have a good sense of presentation and patterns
2014-01-17 22:38 Garven: The problem is how the cursor moves from object to object
2014-01-17 22:38 Garven: Especially compared to the music that it's supporting.
2014-01-17 22:38 Garven: Also tick rate 2 would fit this better than 4
2014-01-17 22:41 jieusieu: ok...
2014-01-17 22:41 Garven: Sorry...
2014-01-17 22:42 jieusieu: but thanks to mod my map
2014-01-17 22:42 Garven: Maybe another BAT will be fine with it
2014-01-17 22:42 Garven: But yeah, it's beyond my personal threshold of an acceptable map for the song.
2014-01-17 22:44 jieusieu: xDD