ts8zs wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

00:42:922 (8) - 看着挤 好 往下了点 我是说那个滑条看着挤=。=
01:11:794 (6,7,8) - ds
01:23:297 (5,6) - 低级错误=。= 看不大懂指的啥呢....T.T 指的是两个物体在同一个时间轴
01:28:711 - spinner end here
怎么说呢……看起来没什么梗呢=。=

蟹蟹mod！！第一次作图摆不出什么梗，也不敢摆OvO 没关系慢慢改=。=

-Hatano Kokoro- wrote:

楼主你好。我看了上面的mod，即使图做普通点也好，不是一定需要有梗，规则里可没有一定要有梗这条
我所说的添加泡泡就是在滑条底下或者合适的地方添加circle[/color]
[other]

1. 我在摸这图，为什么楼主一直在修改这图？，这让我很不好摸 和这有啥关系=。=
2. 最好用上distance snap，就在作图界面右侧 这是Insane啊喂=。=
   ♪(^∇^*)

AIR wrote:

刚把累

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I Want a Cuddle wrote:

[Normal]
Change AR to 4 really?

00:12:019 (2) - Move this to x:92 y:124 changed
00:20:365 (3,4) - Don't overlap please. It looks awful (oh i noticed this is a Distance Snapping problem; nvm) ok,moved it
00:47:658 (2) - Move this note to 00:47:884 ? It sounds better it's a little difficult,i changed the notes to a long slider
01:03:899 (3) - Delete this note? Even better, make a slider from 01:03:673 till 01:04:125 i think this note has no problem
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937 it's not good

[AIR's Hard]
Change OD to 6
Change AR to 7 hmm,ok,changed

00:02:094 - Make a note here ok
00:02:997 - Also here. it's no need i think
00:05:027 (2) - I don't like this slider. Make it prettier i thik it's not bad
00:18:561 (9) - NC here. ok
00:20:365 (3) - Dont NC here. √
00:22:170 (1) - NC here. √
00:38:749 (3) - Delete this note. √
00:42:019 (11) - NC here. √
00:43:824 (2) - Dont NC here. √
00:45:628 (1) - NC here. √
00:50:027 (7) - Delete this note. √
01:10:891 (5) - I dont like this slider. Instead, you can make short sliders. maybe?
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937 it's not good

Kagamine Ren wrote:

I Want a Cuddle wrote:

[Normal]
Change AR to 4 really?

00:12:019 (2) - Move this to x:92 y:124 changed
00:20:365 (3,4) - Don't overlap please. It looks awful (oh i noticed this is a Distance Snapping problem; nvm) ok,moved it
00:47:658 (2) - Move this note to 00:47:884 ? It sounds better it's a little difficult,i changed the notes to a long slider
01:03:899 (3) - Delete this note? Even better, make a slider from 01:03:673 till 01:04:125 i think this note has no problem
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937 it's not good

[AIR's Hard]
Change OD to 6
Change AR to 7 hmm,ok,changed

00:02:094 - Make a note here ok
00:02:997 - Also here. it's no need i think
00:05:027 (2) - I don't like this slider. Make it prettier i thik it's not bad
00:18:561 (9) - NC here. ok
00:20:365 (3) - Dont NC here. √
00:22:170 (1) - NC here. √
00:38:749 (3) - Delete this note. √
00:42:019 (11) - NC here. √
00:43:824 (2) - Dont NC here. √
00:45:628 (1) - NC here. √
00:50:027 (7) - Delete this note. √
01:10:891 (5) - I dont like this slider. Instead, you can make short sliders. maybe?
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937 it's not good

No insane mod?
but still ty,i'll mod your map soon

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:

add "eLtigreXXx" "KokoroStudiox3" in tags

Kagamine Ren wrote:

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:

add "eLtigreXXx" "KokoroStudiox3" in tags

ok I'll add them
and plz finish the diff first.

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KokoroStudiox3 wrote:

50 % maping
40 % hitsounds

my diff :3

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finish
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Guu wrote:

[Easy]
good

[Normal]
00:18:561 (1) - 形状可以再扭一点~ OK,稍微扭了一点
01:26:230 (4) - 改成白线结束红线再加个单点？ 感觉差不多，先保留

[Hatsukoi]
重头戏来惹
排列比我渣图整齐太多;w;
我就主摸下节奏吧
00:17:546 (3) - 去掉，00:18:448 - 加到这里， 嗯这里fix 00:18:899 (2) - 这个去掉，00:19:350 再在这里加一个note 这里还是保持原样
00:21:719 (8,9,1,2) - 总觉得角度不够顺手，1和2的方向可以改改，间距再大一点 换了个梗
00:22:959 - 建议加个note。不过那样排列也都要改了……四暗刻 这里全部改了
00:24:876 (3,4,5) - 这三个ctrl+g一下w OK
00:25:779 (1,3) - 这两个滑条可以改成尾部放红线上再接一个note 这里感觉还是原来的好一点
00:27:583 (1,2,3) - 推荐间距拉大点，这里节奏比较强 OK
00:29:162 (6,7,1) - 这三个也像00:30:064 (4,5,6) - 这几个一样摆吧，走向朝下 OK
00:36:493 - miss鼓点 OK
00:46:756 - miss鼓点，应该是个三连，柑橘可以用往返滑条 OK fixed
00:49:125 - 也系miss
00:49:688 - 同上 都fix了
01:10:666 (8,1,2) - 应该是个五连 嗯
01:13:598 (3,4,5) - 柑橘不太适合这里放三连，推荐放在01:13:937 改啦
01:14:500 (1) - 尾部放蓝线再加个note 这里放note就超过范围了QAQ
01:15:515 - 加个note改五连 嗯好的
01:16:192 (9) - 去掉 嗯
01:19:801 - 这里加个note，01:20:027 (2) - 这个去掉 改了

整体不错吖，加油~owo

Kagamine Rin wrote:

:roll:

[Normal]

• 01:14:500 (4) - 滑条盖白线导致少clap，建议改一下。（也可以不改 丨改了

[Hatsukoi]

• 00:04:801 (2) - whistle。前面的二连+滑条开头都有whistle，到这边突然没有了，听起来很奇怪。 其实这里是跟音下whistle但是确实是漏了
  00:07:734 (1) - finish。三个鼓点出来以后音乐开始有鼓点节奏了，用finish作一下强调。[/color]
  00:14:049 (5) - finish。很明显的两个重音，后面一个有finish，前面一个为什么不加一下呢？ 这个漏了233
  00:14:500 (6) - 略微往右上移一点，和前后两个note对称。 fixed
  00:25:328 (6) - whistle。用clap显吵。 这里先保留，clap音效我应该会换的
  00:27:583 (1,2,3) - 三个重音，距离可以稍微摆的大一些。 嗯 改了
  00:34:801 (9) - nc。然后后面的00:35:027 (1) - 去掉nc。这里是不是看错白线了啊…… 看错了233..
  00:39:764 (3) - 往上摆一些。 √
  00:39:764 (3) - 往左摆一些，和前后两个距离拉开一点。这个note在时间轴上比较孤立，不用和前后的物件靠的太近。 你的复读机该返厂了，没复制好时间点
  00:58:260 (1) - 滑条尾少clap。 √
  01:04:350 (3,4,5) - 这个三连摆原地吧，距离太小了不好看。或者拉开距离摆也行。 改成原地了
  01:09:087 (1,2,3) - 其实我觉得这儿像原来一样跟歌词很好，听起来也自然很多。这样改吧： 唔这里先暂时不改，跟声音感觉不太好
  
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  然后再加3个clap
  01:18:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五连不要挤在一起，摆开一点好看。 OK

[/notice]

改过以后比以前要好多了，加油！

Kagamine Ren wrote:

不能给两次星 sad

Kagamine Ren wrote:

finish
is in forum mp:3

and

edit
kokoros diff fixed x.x

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upload your diff in my forum pm
but i don't kown what the last sentence mean .The diff's name?

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:

Inconsistency in Countdown: -

AIR's Hard : 0
Hatsukoi : 1
Kokoro's Easy: 1
Normal : 1

Inconsistency in Tags:

[AIR's Hard :
[Hatsukoi : eLtigreXXx,KokoroStudiox3,Sphere,AIR,Hatsukoi Limited -
[Kokoro's Easy :
[Normal :

hard
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:00:616 - snap to 00:00:628
00:43:505 - snap to 00:43:485

Guu wrote:

[AIR's Hard]
00:02:997 - 00:06:606 - 前面是主跟那个钢琴声吧O.O，是的话这两个地方还是不要漏掉的好这个难度的话节奏太密集不太合适

Kagamine Rin wrote:

[AIR's Hard]

• 00:02:094 (4,5) - - whistle。前面的note和滑条头上都有，这儿没有，不好听。+clap
  00:15:628 (2) - 滑条盖掉了白线，听起来很奇怪，建议拆成一个note+一个二分滑条。红线加了whistle
  00:34:125 (5,6) - 5的滑条尾和6的头尾全部finish。很明显背景有重音，这里需要强调一下。fix
  00:51:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段2,4clap。原来的1,3,5clap听起来非常奇怪。然后12滑条头加whistle。fix
  01:02:997 (7) - 滑条盖白线导致少了一个clap，建议改一下。（也可以不改比较合适，就这样吧

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

AIR's Hard
00:37:732 (6) - Object's end is not snapped!fix

osu file format v13

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ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Normal

01:14:952 (4,5) - There two objects are less the 10ms apart!

Kokoro's Easy

A preview time is not set! Set one on Timing Section!

Hatsukoi

01:14:951 (1) - Object's end is offscreen!

AIR's Hard
00:37:732 (6) - Object's end is not snapped!

YOU SHOULD DISABLE THE COUNTDOWN!

GOOD LUCK!

pkk wrote:

From m4m

General

1. 你的背景好可爱啊~~~ www www
2. 00:58:260 - kiai time should start here on the downbeat k

Normal

1. 00:32:094 (6) - end at 00:32:546 - on the beat. After that you can blanket 00:33:448 (2,3) - k
   
2. 00:35:478 (4,5) - try this rhythm: k
   
   Repeat slider maps the back and forth sound in the music
   
3. 00:47:433 (1) - sounds better if you use repeat slider like 00:48:335 (2) - k
   
4. 01:01:869 (1) - move middle point down a bit and move slider to x 112 y 176 to blanket with 01:01:418 (5) - hmm,i think it's no neccesary but changed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:14:049 (3,4) - , 01:15:403 (5,6) - I think you should avoid stacking notes one beat apart, it will be confusing to newer players and they might hit both notes really fast. ok,fix

Hatsukoi

1. 00:14:049 (5) - NC to emphasize sound in music and because of anti-jump k
   
2. 00:17:433 (2,3,4,5) - you can make jumps more fun if you put them so they're not in a straight line. Try putting 00:17:658 (3) - at x 244 y 136 and 00:17:884 (4) - at ~x 360 y 224 k
   
3. 00:19:914 (5) - maybe ctrl+g will flow better k
   
4. 00:53:072 (2,3) - I think this pattern flows better, especially the flow into 00:53:749 (5) - : change to another way
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:11:794 (3,4,5,6) - too many overlaps here, try a pattern like this: changed
   
   SPOILER

   
   I think it looks and flows better~
   
6. 01:14:049 (5,6) - this stack might break flow, try putting 01:14:275 (6) - at ~x 204 y 176, I think it will flow better k,it looks better

[/notice]

Have fun mapping~ uwu

pkk wrote:

From m4m

[notice]Kokoro's Easy

1. 00:04:125 (1,2) - if you want, you can blanket: ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:01:418 (1,2) - switch NC so that NC starts on the downbeat. Same at 01:15:854 (1,2) - and 01:19:012 (1,3) - , switch NC must be in the circle
   
3. 01:26:906 (1) - end spinner on 01:29:839 - , then add inherited point at 01:29:839 - and lower volume to around 40%. This way the spinner sound isn't louder than the music ok

[/list]

Have fun mapping~ uwu

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1. Why using slider tick is 2? you can listen this music very carefully, that 2 tick is 70% overmapped, could use 1 tick, is really better IMO
2. in tags why you need this Sphere ? there already Artist so people will be easy search this song, remove this Sphere
3. add AudioLeadIn: 1000 look better for this music
4. Disable Widescreen Support for all diff's there no SB
5. Disable Letterbox during break for all diff's there no Break
6. That Color combo is default? is unfit this music IMO try this http://puu.sh/ciOqt/5c9b6fb5c2.png or change you own
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,192,0
   Combo2 : 255,128,64
   Combo3 : 255,100,255
   Combo4 : 43,43,255

1. 00:28:034 (4) - no change auto to normal from in sampleset the both (start and end) ? there beat that i can hear, also could fix you pattern
2. 00:43:373 (2) - could change auto to normal in sampleset, missing change
3. 00:46:982 (6) - in addiition why drum and clap ? not sense really, change to auto and sampleset change to normal
4. 00:51:042 (2) - that normal could change end to start, better, could fix you pattern
5. 00:51:944 (3) - in end, could change auto to normal in sampleset, look like you are missing this
6. 00:58:260 (3) - no add finish in start ? vocal+beat strong
7. 01:12:696 (3) - ^ same

1. 00:25:328 (2) - could grid 1 left to perfect blanket with 00:23:974 (1)
2. 00:37:057 (4,1,2,3,4) - I feel this bad flow, that 00:37:508 (1,2,3,4) - could grid 7 right could better flow (can't puush.... site is screw up) if you do that care spacing other parts
3. 00:37:057 (4,1) - inconsistency spacing
4. 01:07:282 (4) - could grid 1 down to perfect align with 01:06:831 (3) also would perfect blanket with 01:06:380 (2) too
5. 01:12:245 (2,3) - could improve blanket Can't show you picture, puush is down...
6. 01:15:854 (1,2) - inconsistency spacing
   
   not big problem, just nazi

1. I wanna see Ar+1 really good for this diff you can testplay

1. 00:01:418 (2) - could grid 1 left to perfect blanket with 00:00:516 (1), if you do that care spacing
2. 00:08:636 (2) - I feel this flow could improve more, move place to x:260 y:220, that could really good, you can try test play
3. 00:10:440 (5) - still need improve flow
4. 00:10:891 (6) - this still need perfect stack with 00:12:245 (2)
5. 00:18:561 (1) - you sure wanna keep this ? look weird and also bad flow with 00:19:914 (2)
6. 00:25:779 (1) - need grid 1 down to perfect align with 00:23:974 (4) just improve gameplay
7. 00:26:681 (2,4) - I not really like this overlaps, change this pattern pls, bad overlaps and hard read for this diff
8. 00:33:899 (3) - still possible to make blanket with 00:33:448 (2)
9. 00:35:027 (4) - really hard when I did test play, is hard to read with 00:33:899 (3), could change place or move shape
10. 00:37:508 (3) - really unsymentrical shape, try this code
    

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    if you do that care spacing in 00:38:861 (4,5)
11. 00:57:358 (5) - I'm sorry this is very bad curve, pls improve more curve
12. 01:01:418 (5) - could blanket with 01:00:064 (4), if you do that carefully spacing in 01:01:869 (1,2)
13. 01:01:869 (1,2) - that (1) in tail could improve blanket with 01:02:771 (2)
14. 01:15:403 (5,6) - really unstack, need perfect stack with 0.0x spacing
    
    Still need improve gameplays, also didn't mod hitsound look consistency for me

1. 00:02:320 (4) - in begin, that sampleset "normal" look not sense this music, this part music is relax and only melody, could change to auto
2. 00:15:403 at 00:57:007 - I know there whistle lot, but sometime I feel is lack hitsound, where Normal hit ? like other diff's, this could add more hitsound... Fell lack hitsound, can't mod
3. 01:13:598 (9) - that whistle could un start and clap in end, sound better
4. 01:13:147 (6) - remove whistle and clap, sound better
   
   Still need more hitsound

1. 00:07:734 (5) - you missing add NC there, could fix you pattern style
2. 00:19:463 (2) - very unsymentric shape, try perfect symentric

1. 00:00:516 (1) - missing add finish in begin
2. 00:01:418 (3) - could add whistle in begin, there melody, that very well fit IMO

1. 00:10:215 (2) - still need stack with 00:09:087 (6)
2. 00:23:974 (1) - can be improve more curve ? like this 00:25:779 (1)?
3. 00:30:741 (8) - I really not like overlaps with this part 00:31:869 (4,5,6) too hard read with skin default you have change pattern that part 00:30:741 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) or do something
4. 00:39:538 (2) - still possible blanket with 00:38:410 (1) if you do that care pattern in 00:39:538 (2,3,4)
5. 00:54:651 (1) - why don't more blanket with 00:54:425 (8) ? like you did this 01:00:064 (1), just improve gameplay
6. 00:58:937 (2,3) - ^ same

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:

all done

SPOILER

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Version:AIR's Hard
Source:Hatsukoi Limited
Tags:eLtigreXXx,KokoroStudiox3,Sphere,AIR,Hatsukoi Limited
BeatmapID:520109
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Future.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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sry it's not your diff.

Pereira006 wrote:

[General]

1. Why using slider tick is 2? you can listen this music very carefully, that 2 tick is 70% overmapped, could use 1 tick, is really better IMO k
2. in tags why you need this Sphere ? there already Artist so people will be easy search this song, remove this Sphere k
3. add AudioLeadIn: 1000 look better for this music k
4. Disable Widescreen Support for all diff's there no SB k
5. Disable Letterbox during break for all diff's there no Break k
6. That Color combo is default? is unfit this music IMO try this http://puu.sh/ciOqt/5c9b6fb5c2.png or change you own k
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,192,0
   Combo2 : 255,128,64
   Combo3 : 255,100,255
   Combo4 : 43,43,255

[Normal]

Song Setup:

1. I wanna see Ar+1 really good for this diff you can testplay k

Gameplay:

1. 00:01:418 (2) - could grid 1 left to perfect blanket with 00:00:516 (1), if you do that care spacing k
2. 00:08:636 (2) - I feel this flow could improve more, move place to x:260 y:220, that could really good, you can try test play k
3. 00:10:440 (5) - still need improve flow hmm,no change here,i think it's no need
4. 00:10:891 (6) - this still need perfect stack with 00:12:245 (2) k
5. 00:18:561 (1) - you sure wanna keep this ? look weird and also bad flow with 00:19:914 (2) changed
6. 00:25:779 (1) - need grid 1 down to perfect align with 00:23:974 (4) just improve gameplay k
7. 00:26:681 (2,4) - I not really like this overlaps, change this pattern pls, bad overlaps and hard read for this diff k
8. 00:33:899 (3) - still possible to make blanket with 00:33:448 (2) k
9. 00:35:027 (4) - really hard when I did test play, is hard to read with 00:33:899 (3), could change place or move shape k
10. 00:37:508 (3) - really unsymentrical shape, try this code k
    

    156,32,37508,2,0,B|202:24|251:49|251:49|300:24|348:32,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    
    if you do that care spacing in 00:38:861 (4,5)
11. 00:57:358 (5) - I'm sorry this is very bad curve, pls improve more curve k
12. 01:01:418 (5) - could blanket with 01:00:064 (4), if you do that carefully spacing in 01:01:869 (1,2) k
13. 01:01:869 (1,2) - that (1) in tail could improve blanket with 01:02:771 (2) k
14. 01:15:403 (5,6) - really unstack, need perfect stack with 0.0x spacing fixed
    
    Still need improve gameplays, also didn't mod hitsound look consistency for me

[Hatsukoi]

hitsound:

1. 00:00:516 (1) - missing add finish in begin k
2. 00:01:418 (3) - could add whistle in begin, there melody, that very well fit IMO k

very consistency, nice

Gameplay:

1. 00:10:215 (2) - still need stack with 00:09:087 (6) k
2. 00:23:974 (1) - can be improve more curve ? like this 00:25:779 (1)? k
3. 00:30:741 (8) - I really not like overlaps with this part 00:31:869 (4,5,6) too hard read with skin default you have change pattern that part 00:30:741 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) or do something changed the overlaps
4. 00:39:538 (2) - still possible blanket with 00:38:410 (1) if you do that care pattern in 00:39:538 (2,3,4) k
5. 00:54:651 (1) - why don't more blanket with 00:54:425 (8) ? like you did this 01:00:064 (1), just improve gameplay k
6. 00:58:937 (2,3) - ^ same k

[]
Very impressive, still more work
Any question ask me so i can explain better
I wish good luck

Pereira006 wrote:

Ho forget to said !!!!

remove " Hatsukoi Limited " from in tags for all diff's there aldready in sourçe, so that is easy search, you don't need this "Hatsukoi Limited"

that all I hope i did full check, anyway, kill me pls, no kudosu and once again, good luck!

Sellenite wrote:

送一心关注十一连患者(

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

irc

22:28 Kagamine Ren: 大号晚上好呀
22:28 Kagamine Ren: 接不接mod req
22:28 Kagamine Ren: o.o
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0.0
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 来 发个图
22:29 *Kagamine Ren is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501894 Sphere - Future Stream]
22:29 Kagamine Ren: 1st 可能比较水
22:30 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 我慢慢下(
22:31 Kagamine Ren: 没问题o.o
22:33 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对了 来试试我图啊
22:38 Kagamine Ren: 好呀
22:38 Kagamine Ren: 刚刚拿东西去了
22:39 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/523692 Nitta Emi - Someday of my life]
22:39 Kagamine Ren: owo np
22:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 111
22:40 Kagamine Ren: 哇 果果
22:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哇 果果
22:43 Kagamine Ren: 下好了
22:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好111
22:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 你那个也下好了
22:48 Kagamine Ren: acc好难
22:48 Kagamine Ren: o.o
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: od8
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 原来OD8
22:49 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 感觉SV加一点做难一点会比较好玩
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 这样有些慢 还不太好大
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 打
22:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
22:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 有道理
22:50 Kagamine Ren: 有一种很郁闷的感觉o.o
22:50 Kagamine Ren: 另外cinema好厉害
22:51 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: cinema233
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 要是这样做出来能玩就好了
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 就能做出各种音游来(?
22:54 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501894 Sphere - Future Stream]
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 来
22:55 Kagamine Ren: 我觉得能想出这种东西来已经很厉害 了
22:55 Kagamine Ren: 网好卡，
22:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: FC啦！
22:57 Kagamine Ren: 这也能fc
22:57 Kagamine Ren: 我觉得各种不顺手
22:59 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: dt好难啊(
22:59 Kagamine Ren: （是很难
23:00 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 感觉前面做的挺好 后面有些乱了就
23:01 Kagamine Ren: 乱啊..
23:01 Kagamine Ren: orz
23:04 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:43:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏好不科学
23:04 Kagamine Ren: 这里跟鼓点的
23:04 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 减速的这一段就一直跟着人声就可以了 都是串的话和减速挺矛盾
23:04 Kagamine Ren: 改了很多次 都不是很满意
23:05 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:21:493 (8) - 这个别1.5
23:05 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ...
23:06 Kagamine Ren: 这个不行么...
23:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不是不行.. 但是不好..
23:06 Kagamine Ren: 思考
23:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
23:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可以的话全都1.5就好啦
23:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:07 Kagamine Ren: 233.
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 减速这段挺长的啊
23:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 鼓声敲3/4的部分
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 没串吧..
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 只放了三连
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 就是那么长啊
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我说二连
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也不是二连 00:47:433 (1,2) - 这种把节奏复杂化的
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 白线上也没鼓音啊
23:10 Kagamine Ren: 这样啊
23:11 Kagamine Ren: 懂了
23:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 卡桶挑战 关注十一连患者
23:15 Kagamine Ren: 233
23:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:29:162 (1,2) - 这两个note的音量也变成30啦
23:17 Kagamine Ren: 这里我就是想调成30来着
23:17 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
23:18 Kagamine Ren: 音量我自己感觉着调的 完全不懂
23:18 Kagamine Ren: 感觉到最后音量小一点好
23:20 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0.0哦
23:21 Kagamine Ren: 感觉音量全都要改233
23:21 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 123456788
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:22:621 (4,5,6) - 这里不要放得和前面二分拍间距一样大 制造些差别
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这样容易看出来节奏
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:05:478 (1,2,3) - 这里摆的不好看.. 你随便调一下位置
23:24 Kagamine Ren: 恩浩
23:24 Kagamine Ren: 好
23:24 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:09:312 (2,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156996
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: bg那个好像果果啊
23:25 Kagamine Ren: 二连啊
23:25 Kagamine Ren: 。。
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 又看了看还是不像
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:13:147 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里可以放个串啊 为啥不放
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 发色和眼睛像吧
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对啊
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 串 好主意
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 111111
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 1111
23:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:28:485 (4,5) - 我到这种地方都好想放maimai那种星星梗
23:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可惜没有
23:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:56:907 (2,3) - 这里间距不科学 加个newcombo或者拉远一点
23:28 Kagamine Ren: 没碰过maimai
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯 你问kagamine rin(
23:29 Kagamine Ren: 233.
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:59:162 (3,1) - 这种地方最好把两个弄成对称的
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 复制一个 然后粘贴 ctrl+h ctrl+j ctrl+g什么的
23:30 Kagamine Ren: 嗯 好
23:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:11:794 (3) - 在这里加个finish或者clap
23:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 后面都是13clap 前面是24 中间加点衔接的东西比较好
23:35 Kagamine Ren: 唔..
23:36 Kagamine Ren: 这里我好像后面clap都下错了
23:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我倒是听得还可以啊 或者你把后面的都改了也好(
23:36 Kagamine Ren: 思考
23:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你看
23:38 Kagamine Ren: 看啥.
23:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 看你啊
23:39 Kagamine Ren: orz
23:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对了 我记得sphere是小写的啊
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 是不是一个sphere
23:40 Kagamine Ren: 啊？
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/37202
23:40 Kagamine Ren: 我不太清楚 就知道是个组合
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 那到时候问下清楚这个的吧
23:41 Kagamine Ren: 应该是一个吧
23:41 Kagamine Ren: 我在查一下
23:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 那我就贴论坛啦
23:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好晚了 清了LP睡啦

normal
01:02:771 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157059
01:23:523 (1) - 不好看
一个normal难度, 做那种扭曲的滑条, 至少一拍长的没有必要啊 长的做一做就行了

air's hard
都不按ds摆的 不能这样 请remap

总之都fc了应该图还好吧...

Minakami Yuki wrote:

[Kokoro's Easy] all done

1. 00:01:869 (2,3) - imo whistle at tail is much better than at head done
2. 00:05:478 (2,3,4,5) - also, whistle on 3 and 5's head, remove whistle on 2 and 4 done
3. 00:06:831 (5) - also add finish on tail, repeat and head. done
4. 00:07:734 (1) - recommend not to hide a circle (even stack) in easy~
5. 00:11:343 (1) - whistle at head? done
6. 00:13:147 (3,4) - swap the whistle and finish? done
7. 00:19:012 - add a slidertick sound? feel quite strange without ticksound here....ok
8. 00:38:410 (3) - whistle? done
9. 00:42:922 (1,2) - finish? done
10. 00:50:591 (1,2) - swap nccombo is in circle
11. 00:57:358 (1,3) - swap nc? done
12. 01:11:794 (1,3) - ^ done
13. 01:17:207 (4,1) - make a better blanket? done

Good luck.~

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Harold Miner wrote:

Hatsukoi

stream的DS可能还可以大一点 不想太难
00:03:899 (7) - 和之前的note没叠好 fixed
00:10:215 (2,4) - 同上 fixed
00:12:245 (5) - NC？ k
00:25:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 总觉得不太好看 换了一种
00:39:538 (2,1) - blanket？....k
00:42:470 (3,4,5,6,7) - DS？ fixed
00:44:952 - 感觉这里可以加个note hmm...k
00:54:425 (8) - 这个和00:53:749 (5) - 做一个blanket应该会好看点 fixed
01:05:252 (8,2,3) - 感觉叠起来打起来比较爽 k
01:09:651 (4,5) - 没叠好 k
01:09:989 (6,7,8) - 同上 k
01:12:245 (5,1) - 同上 k

水平就那样了 也不要介意吧

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

送1星 就不摸啦
加油

Harold Miner wrote:

Hard
另外hard和insane的难度有点差的太多了 总觉得hard有点太简单了 Hard就这个难度正好



Normal

00:16:079 (3) - 这个应该往后移1/4吧？ 听错.O.
00:17:884 (6) - 这个音效似乎是可以去掉的 另外觉得应该可以往后延长1/4更符合vocal 音效fixed
00:35:027 - 感觉这里漏音了k
00:42:922 (4) - NC？ k
01:17:433 (2,3) - 总觉得这两个note之间有点奇怪 哪里奇怪...
01:21:719 (4) - 这个应该是3/4的折返吧？ 嗯听错了
总觉得有些地方和vocal不太符合 建议开25%再听听

M o k o r i wrote:

hi, from M4M~

[General]
・i recommend to change the source "初恋限定。" ⇒　"Hatsukoi Limited". (for reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/8230) old maps can't be reference,and it has been checked carefully.
・kiai time is not on scale. if you have any idea, ignore this. fixed

[Normal]
some sliders end are not on scale. check AImod.(ctrl+shift+a) fixed

・00:07:724 (1,2,3) - circle3 is overlapped to slide1. and it's good if you can remake slider and make blankets. k
・00:09:528 (4,5) - ^^ they can't blanket because of the DS
・00:17:197 (5,6) - 　make a blanket. ...k
・00:23:739 (4,5) - a little overlapped, adjust the placement. they must overlap because of the DS
・00:27:573 (3,4) - ^^ ^^
・00:30:054 (2,3) - objects are covering healthbar and over the window!! it's unrankable issue fixed
・00:37:498 (2) - make it symmetry, it's better look and feel. k
・00:45:393 (5,6,7) - it's better to adjust overlapping. k
・01:29:152 (1,2) - how about place center? hmm,i think no

[Hatsukoi]
・00:05:017 (4,5) - copy the slider4 and paste pattern to slider5. k
・00:54:641 (1) - near by healthbar, down its place. can't understand...
・00:59:152 (3) - overlapped to healthbar. [/color]

good luck!

EmingK wrote:

随便看两眼

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[General]
clap声音太大丽，用AU啥的调低点，然后拉高整体音量. 现在有的地方节奏上压白线的地方感觉头重脚轻，不压白线的地方感觉空荡荡的.. 还好把.-.
调过timing? 绿线全unsnap了，对齐一下 [/color]

[Hatsukoi]
30%的音量太小，建议低音量部分调高些 k
00:03:889 (7) - 建议拿到下面去 k
00:43:927 (2,4) - 这两只note没听出来跟音乐啊 改了
00:34:566 (8) - finish 没必要吧
01:00:054 (5) - NC k
01:22:385 (1,2) - NC对换 k
01:00:054 (5) - 这根绿线干啥的..后面又没有note 我觉得你复制错地方了，不过我知道你说的是什么...fixed


[Normal]
怎么一堆unsnap 没法看啊 汗，all fixed

[Easy]
看下General调整绿线snap 这个得用英文.. 我在下面翻译一下吧.._.
00:57:348 - 15%音量听不到了吧，可能会unrankable
01:05:017 - 这里finish莫名，建议拿掉

美丽

EmingK wrote:

随便看两眼
[Easy]
看下General调整绿线snap Fixed by me
00:57:348 - 15%音量听不到了吧，可能会unrankable Translation: 15%Volume is too low,and maybe unrankable
01:05:017 - 这里finish莫名，建议拿掉 Translation: suggest to remove this Finish

美丽

AIR wrote:

Harold Miner wrote:

Hard

00:25:779 (3,4,5) - 这几个的音量可以考虑逐渐变大√
00:47:433 (1,2,3) - 同上没必要
01:21:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
00:34:801 - 这里应该能再放一个note 毕竟大白线空着总感觉不太好省略有时候效果不见得坏
00:53:974 - 感觉这里漏音了要补就要用1/4，这个难度用不上
00:56:681 (6) - NC？√√
00:58:260 - kiai可以考虑从这里开始 否则喷泉已经出来了但是没有note打总感觉有点怪@ren,统一下看看要不要修kiai Kagamine Ren:我这的kiai就是这个地方啊...不知道你那的版本过旧还是啥>.<

update

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EmingK wrote:

[Hard]
有些间距看着比较别扭..比如00:18:325 (8) - 这只就像后挤进来的一样……放开一点嘛比如这样http://puu.sh/cr47y/d3c278aba2.jpg√
00:28:475 (6) - 前后平行一下嘛0.0 #治好多年强迫症#√√
00:34:566 - finish有奇效√√√
00:42:912 - 、00:43:363 - 、00:43:814 - 均建议加finish √
00:56:896 (7) - ^√
01:22:611 - ^√
01:29:378 (2) - ^√

truonant wrote:

00:01:408 (3) – I think this will look better as a curved slider instead of bezier√
00:01:182 (2) – if you’re going to map, you should do the same with 00:02:084 -, 00:02:987 –
00:04:115 (1) – NC here and remove NC from 00:04:791 (1) –√
00:07:724 (6) – NC√
00:17:423 (6) - - - remove this. It doesn’t fit with the vocals. And it doesn’t make sense to stack on slider head if there’s no syllable like here 00:15:618 (2) - √
00:17:648 (7) – shorten to ½ slider and add circle at 00:18:099 –
00:21:032 – add circle and NC
00:21:483 (6) – turn slider into repeat slider
00:23:062 (3) – this slider doesn’t fit the vocals at 00:23:287 –
00:23:964 (4) – doesn’t hit vocal + downbeat at 00:24:415 - . If you insist on using a 6/4
00:25:543 (2) – clap doesn’t fit√√
00:38:400 (5,6,7) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs6VB/58e0d4c5b9.jpg
00:38:400 (1) – remove NC and add it here 00:40:205 √√
00:54:190 (5,6,7) – inconsistent spacing between these notes√

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Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
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zxhzxhz wrote:

[Hatsukoi]
00:02:197 (5) - overmap 故意的.
00:15:618 (6,7) - blanket 这里排列全改了
00:15:618 (6,7,8,1,2) - http://puu.sh/crEMk/317e9cf50d.jpg
8在5下面，滑条轻微调整一下以保持ds，00:17:423 (2) - 也调整一下位置
00:19:904 (5) - 形状调整一下和4一样 k
00:26:445 (3) - 92,175
00:27:348 (6) - 176,256 这两个稍微变了位置
00:29:152 (6,7,1) - 这样的连打最好间距保持在0.9（和00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6) - 一样）不然感觉很乱的说，前面后面同样的情况就不列举了 改了
00:45:393 (6) - nc k
00:29:152 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/crFFS/b2614ab132.jpg 参考了一下改了
00:44:490 (3,1) - 这俩弯的太狠了，稍微改一下 k
00:49:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议这些二连改短滑条，不然非常卡手（可能是因为我实力太弱orz） keep
01:03:663 (1) - http://puu.sh/crG5g/aabc3e6e92.jpg k
01:04:340 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/crGbA/9a303a7918.jpg keep
01:16:295 (1) - 形状不怎么好看 k
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偷个懒QAQ
祝你图早日rank
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truonant wrote:

Hello M4M from your queue.

Sorry for late mod, been really busy! np


00:05:919 (1) –move to x240 y:224 hmm...keep
00:25:769 (1,2,3) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs33G/ad03677031.jpg k
00:26:671 (4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs36G/151a692aa2.jpg k
00:26:107 (2,3,4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs3xP/ead22a8c60.jpg k
00:37:272 (2,3,4,5,6) – make a star pattern shape keep.
Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs41d/e0d413651c.jpg mostly changed as you

00:40:205 (1,2) – move so slider head stacks on 00:39:754 (3) –
00:39:979 (4) – move to x212 y340
00:40:881 (3) - move to x164 y:156
00:41:107 (4) - stack on 00:40:656 (2) -

00:51:483 – drum sound?
00:52:385 -^ fixed
00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,5) – make star pattern shape changed a bit
01:13:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ k
01:16:972 (3) – hard to read. move around or rotate 01:16:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - no change..i think it's not difficult in an insane diff
01:21:032 (6,7) – weird distance kills the flow, space these out more k


00:45:393 (5) - overlap doesn’t look good and bad flow k
01:02:761 (2) – blanket k
01:08:175 (6) - stack k

Spring Roll wrote:

听说要在年底前摸完图

Normal

1. 00:09:528 (4) - 我跟你说，在这种长度下，三点式的滑条是最整洁漂亮的滑条之一，还有一种是00:58:250 (1) - 这样的，我建议你把滑条都改一下，现在这样我觉得很乱，如果你说这是你的风格的话倒也没啥问题，不过我觉得这么吐槽你滑条的我应该不是第一个了 hao,你这变态喜欢三点式
2. 00:23:739 (4,5) - 排列不太好看，重叠部分有点多 k
3. 00:34:566 - finish k
4. 00:35:693 - whistle 改成 finish k
5. 00:36:596 - ^
6. 00:45:393 (5) - 节奏古怪，不如改成一个note接一个3/2的滑条 k
7. 01:08:175 (6) - 你这是坑死人不偿命吗 fixed
8. kiai部分的音效有点混乱我没有看懂，就不评论了（ 我也看不懂

Hatsukoi

1. 这难度名没关系？？ 为什么有关系
2. 00:59:152 (3) - 可能会挡血条 不挡吧
3. 01:12:686 (1) - Ctrl+G试试 k
4. 01:21:709 (1) - ....... ......（换了一个
5. 懒比了就这样好了 懒比了，不给kd了

然后我的那张图mapset补齐了你可以去摸啦 年底之前

1. 00:06:821 (5,1) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see.
2. 00:13:137 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved.
3. 00:45:167 (4,5) - ^

1. 00:01:408 (2,3,4) - This flow is not good because it requires sharp changes in angle between each object. Try to make it smoother:
   
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2. 00:06:596 (4,5) - Try to have the slider point in the same direction as the circle's path to it, or stack the circle and slider head.
   
3. 00:15:393 (2,3) - You have a lot of 3/4 gaps which should be avoided in Easy/Normals. It's best to use 3/4 repeating sliders wherever they happen, like at 00:15:844 and 00:17:648
4. 00:18:551 (1) - This slider should curve down to flow better from previous object.
5. 00:35:468 (5,6) - Same as 00:06:596 (4,5)
6. 00:41:107 (2,3) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see.
7. 00:43:814 (1,2,3) - 00:45:618 (6) - Repeating 3/4 slider works much better than circles or ignoring it.
8. 00:55:543 (2,3) - Same as earlier
9. 00:58:250 (1) - Move this down, below 00:57:348 (4) - to flow better.
10. 01:07:272 (5,6) - Don't stack on slider ends
11. 01:22:611 (5,6,7) - Another 3/4 slider would work better here.
    
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12. 01:26:220 (4) - I think you have an extra slider point at the end.

1. 00:05:919 (4) - You should really extend this slider by 1/2 beat or 1/4 beat + add a circle after to follow the music better.
2. 00:06:821 (5) - This is a hard diff, don't ignore the strong music.
3. 00:45:618 (4,5) - overlap is extremely ugly. I would blanket or at least not overlap them.
4. 00:55:318 (2,3) - stacking a circle on the end of a repeat slider is confusing for inexperienced players to read. It's best to unstack.
5. 01:24:190 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:26:220 (6,7) - Can easily get mistaken for 1/2. Make the slider repeat.

1. 00:08:175 (2,3) - awkward play, should ctrl-g (3)
2. 00:32:423 - this is better as a circle so you can have keypress on the vocal
3. 00:40:543 - ^
4. 00:49:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm in this area is hard to read. can't tell when something is 1/2 or 3/4. It's best to make sure that the gaps between objects are 1/2 or 1/4, like what you did 01:09:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was good. You should make 00:49:227 (1,5) - sliders:
   
5. 01:07:272 (1,2,3) - It's better to eliminate the jump between 01:07:272 (1,2) - so you have more emphasis on the 01:07:949 (2,3) - jump.
   
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6. 01:18:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl-G these so it flows better from previous object.

Flask wrote:

Artist: sphere

路過留個名 =w= nokd

• 
  01:09:415 (3,5) - 不加whistle感觉少了点东西
  00:45:957 (2,3) - 这里太近了，打的时候很别扭，建议交换00:46:295 (3,4) - 和00:47:197 (6) - ，同时你可以考虑把00:46:746 (5) - 换个角度【其实我觉得不换更好
  00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈
  SPOILER

  
  00:49:453 - ~00:51:032 - 这里音没下怎么准吧。。开50%听一下重音是在00:49:227 - 、00:49:566 - 、00:49:904 - 、00:50:130 - 、00:50:468 - 、00:51:032 - 几个地方，如果节奏下满应该这么下↓ 当然如果你不打算这么满（虽然我觉得有必要），起码00:49:566 (2,3) - 这个不能落在白线上
  SPOILER

  

• 
  我能不能说我没看懂。。不是太了解这个bpm的hard是什么概念orz
  看了一遍感觉没啥太值得吐槽的地方=-=

• 
  it seems all things are fine XD 【我真不是偷懒啊不要打我

• 
  00:06:821 (5,1) - Maybe not stack here
  00:13:137 (3,4) - blanket?
  01:04:566 (5) - ctrl+shift+r
  SPOILER

  
  01:06:370 (2,4) - blanket
  01:21:709 (1) - are u sure it isnt outside? move a little left maybe better (and adjust the notes near this)

CDFA wrote:

Modding sooner

Overall:
00:57:348 - This is an interesting choice for Kiai. Mostly because there's not really any sort of impact point yet, you're doing the pick-ups to the chorus. And you get that in the preview point, but not in the kiai. You should probably put your kiai where the preview point is (And honestly, put your preview point where the kiai currently is) k,changed

Insane:
00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's cool that you do the whole 0.5x thing for streams, I do that too, but the emphasis on that is that you need a sort of consistency when dealing with that. This is not consistent. changed to 0.5x
00:45:618 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:21:709 (1) - This is a pretty odd slider tbh changed
01:25:769 (2,3) - Really wish this was farther from (1). It's not bad, but it'd be cooler to show the distance and stuff, especially since there's such big jumps after k

Normal:
00:04:115 (1) - This curve isn't really working all that great. ok.changed.
00:15:393 (2,3,4) - For a normal, it'd be better to have something assist people into getting the 1/4, such as having it within a repeat or something, rather than just expecting them to feel a triplet on the first vocal line. It's fine to do later, but for normal mode, the most important thing you have to do is establish the fact that you have a pattern as easily as possible. k
00:28:475 (4) - This looks way too cramped changed
00:30:280 (3) - ^
00:35:017 (4,5) - This is kind of odd. Maybe have a note in between these 2 so the syncopation makes a little more sense. k,it sounds better.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - For normal mode, you generally should try sticking to blue-tick notes being sliders, ESPECIALLY when it's the first in a section. That's because sliders have a bit more leniency, so people will be more successful even if they're not 100% competent in the rhythm. changed to a repeat
00:44:716 (4,5) - The direction of the slider wants to go left, but the next note is to the right. k
00:47:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - THIS. THIS IS HOW YOU DO IT. Gold star, use this for a reference point on how to deal with all the other things.
00:56:896 (3) - Stack might be a bit confusing for normal players. k
00:58:250 (1) - Have (4) flow to this rather than just making it an awkward shift. k
00:58:250 - DRUM THEORY. CLAPS ON THE FIRST AND THIRD SMALL WHITE TICK (or 2 and 4, if you're looking at it as measures). REMEMBER THAT. hmm,you mean use drum claps on all the objects in kiai?,sry can't understand
01:29:152 (1,2) - This is now technically unrankable. Normal diffs should have 2 beats of blank space before the next notes. fixed

For as long as my mod post was, I like the map. I'd suggest getting like, 2 more mods, then calling me back.

xxdeathx wrote:

M4M hello.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:408 (2,3,4) - This flow is not good because it requires sharp changes in angle between each object. Try to make it smoother:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:06:596 (4,5) - Try to have the slider point in the same direction as the circle's path to it, or stack the circle and slider head. k,stack
   
3. 00:15:393 (2,3) - You have a lot of 3/4 gaps which should be avoided in Easy/Normals. It's best to use 3/4 repeating sliders wherever they happen, like at 00:15:844 and 00:17:648 k
4. 00:18:551 (1) - This slider should curve down to flow better from previous object. k
5. 00:35:468 (5,6) - Same as 00:06:596 (4,5) hmm..changed the slider's direction
6. 00:41:107 (2,3) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see. k
7. 00:43:814 (1,2,3) - 00:45:618 (6) - Repeating 3/4 slider works much better than circles or ignoring it. changed this part
8. 00:55:543 (2,3) - Same as earlier fixed
9. 00:58:250 (1) - Move this down, below 00:57:348 (4) - to flow better. moved a little down
10. 01:07:272 (5,6) - Don't stack on slider ends k
11. 01:22:611 (5,6,7) - Another 3/4 slider would work better here. k
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:26:220 (4) - I think you have an extra slider point at the end. fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:08:175 (2,3) - awkward play, should ctrl-g (3) k
2. 00:32:423 - this is better as a circle so you can have keypress on the vocal hmm..can't agree with u on this,i think it's better now
3. 00:40:543 - ^
4. 00:49:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm in this area is hard to read. can't tell when something is 1/2 or 3/4. It's best to make sure that the gaps between objects are 1/2 or 1/4, like what you did 01:09:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was good. You should make 00:49:227 (1,5) - sliders: changed most of this
   
5. 01:07:272 (1,2,3) - It's better to eliminate the jump between 01:07:272 (1,2) - so you have more emphasis on the 01:07:949 (2,3) - jump. k
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:18:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl-G these so it flows better from previous object. k

Normal and Insane need a lot more work tbh with object placement and design. It means you can arrange the objects better to make the map look and play nicer. Good luck~

Nagi awa wrote:

pipa要飞啦！！！111
我怀疑我已经被暗地里打得不成人形了QAQ

[Hatsukoi]

• 
  01:09:415 (3,5) - 不加whistle感觉少了点东西 k
  00:45:957 (2,3) - 这里太近了，打的时候很别扭，建议交换00:46:295 (3,4) - 和00:47:197 (6) - ，同时你可以考虑把00:46:746 (5) - 换个角度【其实我觉得不换更好 改了位置
  00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈 滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
  SPOILER

  
  00:49:453 - ~00:51:032 - 这里音没下怎么准吧。。开50%听一下重音是在00:49:227 - 、00:49:566 - 、00:49:904 - 、00:50:130 - 、00:50:468 - 、00:51:032 - 几个地方，如果节奏下满应该这么下↓ 当然如果你不打算这么满（虽然我觉得有必要），起码00:49:566 (2,3) - 这个不能落在白线上 这里跟的鼓点，不过这里节奏前面mod提到了我改了
  SPOILER

  

[Normal]

• 
  it seems all things are fine XD 【我真不是偷懒啊不要打我 必须大四

哥哥啊你快飞了，飞了之后带带我好不好呀T.T
主难度很不错呢，有努力还是有回报哒>w> 虽然我想说不放二连我们还是好朋友
低难度我现在也在愁。。看不太懂实在说不出几个地方来orz
祝好运w

Kagamine Ren wrote:

00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈 滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要

SPOILER