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Akatsuki Nagi

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Akatsuki Nagi 2014-09-19T07:24:44+00:00

2014-09-19 14:44 Kagamine Ren: 偷偷改成了8.5
2014-09-19 14:44 Nagi awa: ..
2014-09-19 14:44 Nagi awa: 这么慢不用8.5吧
2014-09-19 14:46 Kagamine Ren: 少一点DT少一些伤害
2014-09-19 14:46 Kagamine Ren: 我总觉得改完没有改之前打起来好玩=。=不知道是不是错觉
2014-09-19 14:46 Nagi awa: 8.5也想挡住DT的脚步
2014-09-19 14:46 Nagi awa: 图样
2014-09-19 14:46 Nagi awa: 要我提点建议么=。=
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 像我这种打不了8.5DT的
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: =。=
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 00:01:192 (2,3) -
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 来啊来
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 啊
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 对准啊
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 你这是啥
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 啊
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 对准了啊
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 不对准不会stack的啊。。
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 。。
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 224 188
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 225 190
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 对准个鬼啊
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 哦歪了一点
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: ...
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 不要在意这些细节
2014-09-19 14:48 Nagi awa: 你一般怎么对准的
2014-09-19 14:48 Nagi awa: 喂这要在意
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 后面还有这样的啊
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 做完滑条对一下就行了
2014-09-19 14:48 Nagi awa: =。=
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 懒得弄..
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 这个要对准的不然不会自动stack
2014-09-19 14:49 Kagamine Ren: stack是啥
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 就是
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 如果你原地摆100个连打
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 会自动变成串对吧
2014-09-19 14:49 Kagamine Ren: 啊
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 就是一条
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 自动错位那个
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 那就叫stack
2014-09-19 14:50 Kagamine Ren: 哪里有得看
2014-09-19 14:50 Kagamine Ren: 自动错位
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 。。
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 你打图的时候才看得到
2014-09-19 14:50 Kagamine Ren: 、、
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 你可以试试原地摆7个note
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 然后test
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 这7个note不是完全重叠的啊
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 会向右下角偏一点的
2014-09-19 14:51 Kagamine Ren: 好像是唉
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 嗯
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 如果你的note没有完全重合
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 就不会自动stack
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 巨丑
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 然后啊
2014-09-19 14:51 Kagamine Ren: =。=
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 按F6把你所有的线的音效改成soft再说
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 做图的时候你开着N真的听得清音乐么
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 不利于下节奏的
2014-09-19 14:52 Kagamine Ren: 。
2014-09-19 14:52 Kagamine Ren: 其实我现在只想把排列搞好.
2014-09-19 14:52 Kagamine Ren: 这些细节
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 排列搞好了最后发现节奏不合
2014-09-19 14:52 Kagamine Ren: 我i还是改一下把
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 还是要重改
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 00:05:252 (5) -
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 这里这个滑条太不合节奏
2014-09-19 14:53 Nagi awa: 要么三连要么两个点滑条听起来太怪了
2014-09-19 14:53 Kagamine Ren: 嗯.
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 00:14:952 (1) -
2014-09-19 14:54 Kagamine Ren: 确实..
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 用四分滑条吧
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 八分之三听起来实在太诡异
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 建议多听几遍
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 或者干脆打打看
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 每次打到这里我就想吐了
2014-09-19 14:54 Kagamine Ren: 我靠
2014-09-19 14:54 Kagamine Ren: 这个是我失误
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 有种note不在节奏上的感觉
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 。。
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 额
2014-09-19 14:55 Kagamine Ren: 后面是四分的...
2014-09-19 14:55 Kagamine Ren: 没注意
2014-09-19 14:55 Nagi awa: 00:27:245 (4) -
2014-09-19 14:56 Nagi awa: 这个往后一格放红线上比较好
2014-09-19 14:56 Nagi awa: 你看看这一个小节就是蓝色这部分
2014-09-19 14:56 Nagi awa: 应该是一个节奏循环
2014-09-19 14:56 Nagi awa: 你这个4不在循环上
2014-09-19 14:56 Kagamine Ren: 听错了
2014-09-19 14:56 Kagamine Ren: 确实应该在红线上
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 等等
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 你说的后面
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 00:29:388 (1) -
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 是这个？
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 我建议是四分
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 不是二分啊
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 四分好听多了
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 就是滑条头在白线上尾在蓝线上
2014-09-19 14:58 Nagi awa: 00:35:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里有两个问题。。一个是节奏比较少所以你选择overmap了不过我感觉overmap的不太好
2014-09-19 14:58 Kagamine Ren: 太长啦///
2014-09-19 14:59 Kagamine Ren: 还好吧...
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 另一个问题是五连和三连不一样三连往往重音在三连的第三下所以要红线起白线结束
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 五连往往是白线起白线结束
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 这里这个五连不在节奏上
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 要么改三连要么换位置
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 太长了是指啥？
2014-09-19 14:59 Kagamine Ren: 四分
2014-09-19 15:00 Kagamine Ren: 那个是四连+滑条啊
2014-09-19 15:00 Kagamine Ren: 滑条重音
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 四分太长了？
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 。。
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 你是不是理解错了什么
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: http://puu.sh/bF2nQ/53509cc490.jpg
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 00:29:388 (1) -
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 我说的是这样
2014-09-19 15:02 Kagamine Ren: 哦哦
2014-09-19 15:02 Nagi awa: 00:35:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - 那我还是继续说这里的问题你说重音在滑条头部其实这里滑条头部没有重音只有个人声如果你觉得你要overmap的话你要跟节奏啊
2014-09-19 15:02 Kagamine Ren: 理解错了
2014-09-19 15:02 Nagi awa: 比如你这里改成三连+滑条试试
2014-09-19 15:02 Nagi awa: 我觉得要比五连顺耳多了
2014-09-19 15:03 Nagi awa: 00:36:155 (7,8,9) - 这个节奏太违和了重音起在三连前面了把89往后移一个四分拍然后放到后面1的上面会好一些
2014-09-19 15:04 Nagi awa: 【虽然其实我觉得没有好特别多这里要我下就不下这样的节奏了
2014-09-19 15:06 Nagi awa: 00:40:215 (1) - 这里开始的节奏有点不对曲子啊。。
2014-09-19 15:06 Nagi awa: http://puu.sh/bF2Cx/c9a9e98e52.jpg 建议这样
2014-09-19 15:07 Nagi awa: 00:44:275 (3,4) - 往前挪一格好一下
2014-09-19 15:07 Nagi awa: 一些
2014-09-19 15:07 Nagi awa: 00:44:500 (5) - 看到好多蓝线结尾滑条了。。这种滑条除非节奏很适合，否则很少有出现
2014-09-19 15:07 Nagi awa: 这里不怎么适合吧
2014-09-19 15:08 Nagi awa: 00:45:628 (1) - 这个也是还是二分滑条合节奏一些
2014-09-19 15:08 Kagamine Ren: 跟错了
2014-09-19 15:08 Kagamine Ren: 发现了
2014-09-19 15:08 Nagi awa: /.\
2014-09-19 15:08 Nagi awa: 嗯嗯
2014-09-19 15:09 Nagi awa: 00:48:899 (4) - 这个也是我之前说的循环节奏问题往后放一格吧
2014-09-19 15:10 Kagamine Ren: 跟错了
2014-09-19 15:10 Kagamine Ren: .
2014-09-19 15:11 Nagi awa: 01:18:786 (6,7,8) -
2014-09-19 15:11 Nagi awa: 这里我建议是67 和 8 换个位置
2014-09-19 15:11 Nagi awa: 你应该听一下就懂我意思惹0.0
2014-09-19 15:12 Nagi awa: 01:23:523 (1) - 滑条尾啊yeye
2014-09-19 15:12 Nagi awa: 莫名出现的蓝线结尾
2014-09-19 15:12 Nagi awa: 改到白线去
2014-09-19 15:13 Nagi awa: 01:25:666 (2) - 这里人声不是在白线么。。怎么蓝线起了
2014-09-19 15:13 Kagamine Ren: 这个滑条我想重新拉
2014-09-19 15:14 Kagamine Ren: 根错了=.=
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 重新拉归重新拉。。你节奏要先确保啊
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 01:26:906 (1) -
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 转盘的头部没有节奏
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 把转盘往后挪一格
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 这里加个note
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: 。。正好你转盘结尾也放错地方了放红线上啊
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: =.=
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: 好了比较明显的节奏问题就这些吧
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: 我建议是对着节奏再处理一遍排列
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: =。=

加油很好听的曲子qwq
【顺带打死噗啪

Karen

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Karen 2014-09-19T07:53:51+00:00

Nagi awa wrote:
IRC mod
2014-09-19 14:44 Kagamine Ren: 偷偷改成了8.5
2014-09-19 14:44 Nagi awa: ..
2014-09-19 14:44 Nagi awa: 这么慢不用8.5吧
2014-09-19 14:46 Kagamine Ren: 少一点DT少一些伤害
2014-09-19 14:46 Kagamine Ren: 我总觉得改完没有改之前打起来好玩=。=不知道是不是错觉
2014-09-19 14:46 Nagi awa: 8.5也想挡住DT的脚步
2014-09-19 14:46 Nagi awa: 图样
2014-09-19 14:46 Nagi awa: 要我提点建议么=。=
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 像我这种打不了8.5DT的
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: =。=
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 00:01:192 (2,3) -
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 来啊来
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 啊
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 对准啊
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 你这是啥
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 啊
2014-09-19 14:47 Kagamine Ren: 对准了啊
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 不对准不会stack的啊。。
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 。。
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 224 188
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 225 190
2014-09-19 14:47 Nagi awa: 对准个鬼啊
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 哦歪了一点
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: ...
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 不要在意这些细节
2014-09-19 14:48 Nagi awa: 你一般怎么对准的
2014-09-19 14:48 Nagi awa: 喂这要在意
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 后面还有这样的啊
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 做完滑条对一下就行了
2014-09-19 14:48 Nagi awa: =。=
2014-09-19 14:48 Kagamine Ren: 懒得弄..
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 这个要对准的不然不会自动stack
2014-09-19 14:49 Kagamine Ren: stack是啥
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 就是
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 如果你原地摆100个连打
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 会自动变成串对吧
2014-09-19 14:49 Kagamine Ren: 啊
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 就是一条
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 自动错位那个
2014-09-19 14:49 Nagi awa: 那就叫stack
2014-09-19 14:50 Kagamine Ren: 哪里有得看
2014-09-19 14:50 Kagamine Ren: 自动错位
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 。。
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 你打图的时候才看得到
2014-09-19 14:50 Kagamine Ren: 、、
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 你可以试试原地摆7个note
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 然后test
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 这7个note不是完全重叠的啊
2014-09-19 14:50 Nagi awa: 会向右下角偏一点的
2014-09-19 14:51 Kagamine Ren: 好像是唉
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 嗯
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 如果你的note没有完全重合
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 就不会自动stack
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 巨丑
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 然后啊
2014-09-19 14:51 Kagamine Ren: =。=
2014-09-19 14:51 Nagi awa: 按F6把你所有的线的音效改成soft再说
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 做图的时候你开着N真的听得清音乐么
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 不利于下节奏的
2014-09-19 14:52 Kagamine Ren: 。
2014-09-19 14:52 Kagamine Ren: 其实我现在只想把排列搞好.
2014-09-19 14:52 Kagamine Ren: 这些细节
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 排列搞好了最后发现节奏不合
2014-09-19 14:52 Kagamine Ren: 我i还是改一下把
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 还是要重改
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 00:05:252 (5) -
2014-09-19 14:52 Nagi awa: 这里这个滑条太不合节奏
2014-09-19 14:53 Nagi awa: 要么三连要么两个点滑条听起来太怪了
2014-09-19 14:53 Kagamine Ren: 嗯.
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 00:14:952 (1) -
2014-09-19 14:54 Kagamine Ren: 确实..
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 用四分滑条吧
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 八分之三听起来实在太诡异
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 建议多听几遍
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 或者干脆打打看
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 每次打到这里我就想吐了
2014-09-19 14:54 Kagamine Ren: 我靠
2014-09-19 14:54 Kagamine Ren: 这个是我失误
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 有种note不在节奏上的感觉
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 。。
2014-09-19 14:54 Nagi awa: 额
2014-09-19 14:55 Kagamine Ren: 后面是四分的...
2014-09-19 14:55 Kagamine Ren: 没注意
2014-09-19 14:55 Nagi awa: 00:27:245 (4) -
2014-09-19 14:56 Nagi awa: 这个往后一格放红线上比较好
2014-09-19 14:56 Nagi awa: 你看看这一个小节就是蓝色这部分
2014-09-19 14:56 Nagi awa: 应该是一个节奏循环
2014-09-19 14:56 Nagi awa: 你这个4不在循环上
2014-09-19 14:56 Kagamine Ren: 听错了
2014-09-19 14:56 Kagamine Ren: 确实应该在红线上
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 等等
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 你说的后面
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 00:29:388 (1) -
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 是这个？
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 我建议是四分
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 不是二分啊
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 四分好听多了
2014-09-19 14:57 Nagi awa: 就是滑条头在白线上尾在蓝线上
2014-09-19 14:58 Nagi awa: 00:35:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里有两个问题。。一个是节奏比较少所以你选择overmap了不过我感觉overmap的不太好
2014-09-19 14:58 Kagamine Ren: 太长啦///
2014-09-19 14:59 Kagamine Ren: 还好吧...
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 另一个问题是五连和三连不一样三连往往重音在三连的第三下所以要红线起白线结束
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 五连往往是白线起白线结束
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 这里这个五连不在节奏上
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 要么改三连要么换位置
2014-09-19 14:59 Nagi awa: 太长了是指啥？
2014-09-19 14:59 Kagamine Ren: 四分
2014-09-19 15:00 Kagamine Ren: 那个是四连+滑条啊
2014-09-19 15:00 Kagamine Ren: 滑条重音
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 四分太长了？
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 。。
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 你是不是理解错了什么
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: http://puu.sh/bF2nQ/53509cc490.jpg
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 00:29:388 (1) -
2014-09-19 15:00 Nagi awa: 我说的是这样
2014-09-19 15:02 Kagamine Ren: 哦哦
2014-09-19 15:02 Nagi awa: 00:35:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - 那我还是继续说这里的问题你说重音在滑条头部其实这里滑条头部没有重音只有个人声如果你觉得你要overmap的话你要跟节奏啊
2014-09-19 15:02 Kagamine Ren: 理解错了
2014-09-19 15:02 Nagi awa: 比如你这里改成三连+滑条试试
2014-09-19 15:02 Nagi awa: 我觉得要比五连顺耳多了
2014-09-19 15:03 Nagi awa: 00:36:155 (7,8,9) - 这个节奏太违和了重音起在三连前面了把89往后移一个四分拍然后放到后面1的上面会好一些
2014-09-19 15:04 Nagi awa: 【虽然其实我觉得没有好特别多这里要我下就不下这样的节奏了
2014-09-19 15:06 Nagi awa: 00:40:215 (1) - 这里开始的节奏有点不对曲子啊。。
2014-09-19 15:06 Nagi awa: http://puu.sh/bF2Cx/c9a9e98e52.jpg 建议这样
2014-09-19 15:07 Nagi awa: 00:44:275 (3,4) - 往前挪一格好一下
2014-09-19 15:07 Nagi awa: 一些
2014-09-19 15:07 Nagi awa: 00:44:500 (5) - 看到好多蓝线结尾滑条了。。这种滑条除非节奏很适合，否则很少有出现
2014-09-19 15:07 Nagi awa: 这里不怎么适合吧
2014-09-19 15:08 Nagi awa: 00:45:628 (1) - 这个也是还是二分滑条合节奏一些
2014-09-19 15:08 Kagamine Ren: 跟错了
2014-09-19 15:08 Kagamine Ren: 发现了
2014-09-19 15:08 Nagi awa: /.\
2014-09-19 15:08 Nagi awa: 嗯嗯
2014-09-19 15:09 Nagi awa: 00:48:899 (4) - 这个也是我之前说的循环节奏问题往后放一格吧
2014-09-19 15:10 Kagamine Ren: 跟错了
2014-09-19 15:10 Kagamine Ren: .
2014-09-19 15:11 Nagi awa: 01:18:786 (6,7,8) -
2014-09-19 15:11 Nagi awa: 这里我建议是67 和 8 换个位置
2014-09-19 15:11 Nagi awa: 你应该听一下就懂我意思惹0.0
2014-09-19 15:12 Nagi awa: 01:23:523 (1) - 滑条尾啊yeye
2014-09-19 15:12 Nagi awa: 莫名出现的蓝线结尾
2014-09-19 15:12 Nagi awa: 改到白线去
2014-09-19 15:13 Nagi awa: 01:25:666 (2) - 这里人声不是在白线么。。怎么蓝线起了
2014-09-19 15:13 Kagamine Ren: 这个滑条我想重新拉
2014-09-19 15:14 Kagamine Ren: 根错了=.=
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 重新拉归重新拉。。你节奏要先确保啊
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 01:26:906 (1) -
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 转盘的头部没有节奏
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 把转盘往后挪一格
2014-09-19 15:14 Nagi awa: 这里加个note
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: 。。正好你转盘结尾也放错地方了放红线上啊
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: =.=
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: 好了比较明显的节奏问题就这些吧
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: 我建议是对着节奏再处理一遍排列
2014-09-19 15:15 Nagi awa: =。=
加油很好听的曲子qwq
【顺带打死噗啪

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ts8zs

2,124 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-09-25T06:14:03+00:00

00:29:275 (1) - 00:14:839 (1) - keep same
00:42:922 (8) - 看着挤
01:11:794 (6,7,8) - ds
01:23:297 (5,6) - 低级错误=。=
01:28:711 - spinner end here
怎么说呢……看起来没什么梗呢=。=

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-09-25T10:25:51+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
00:29:275 (1) - 00:14:839 (1) - keep same 嗯，改了
00:42:922 (8) - 看着挤好往下了点
01:11:794 (6,7,8) - ds 嗯
01:23:297 (5,6) - 低级错误=。= 看不大懂指的啥呢....T.T
01:28:711 - spinner end here 好哒
怎么说呢……看起来没什么梗呢=。=

蟹蟹mod！！第一次作图摆不出什么梗，也不敢摆OvO

Last edited by Karen 2014-09-25T10:37:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kagamine Rin

27 posts

Joined June 2011

Kagamine Rin 2014-09-25T10:28:54+00:00

摸噗啪

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:02:320 (1,2) - 感觉摆的太开了
00:08:410 (3,4,5,6) - （其实很多地方摆的都像这样，间距太大，不跟flow，多摆些几何形状吧
比如00:22:621 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这儿，几个单点摆成五边形会不会好看很多？
滑条也是，几乎都是一直线，稍微带点弧度会好看很多
我是觉得有很多单点的地方间距放开了摆，有滑条的时候就跟着flow走，间距不要太大，该包的包好）
00:22:282 (7,8) - 删掉，听起来有些多余了
00:29:839 - 白线没note听起来很奇怪……加一个
00:47:433 (1,3) - 两个滑条拍子不一样长啊，听起来很奇怪
01:07:282 (1,3) - 不好看/.\摆的靠近一点，包紧一点
01:17:884 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 红线开始连打有些意义不明，建议删掉8,7重新摆一下，剩下的摆成五连
01:23:523 (1) - 还是难看啊;_;
01:28:711 - 转盘结尾放这里吧，红线上有个音

好，想说的全在上面的括号里了
祝早日1st rank

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-09-25T11:11:34+00:00

Kagamine Rin wrote:
摸噗啪
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:02:320 (1,2) - 感觉摆的太开了稍微移了一点，这边本来就是想要跳的大一点
00:08:410 (3,4,5,6) - （其实很多地方摆的都像这样，间距太大，不跟flow，多摆些几何形状吧好，我再思考思考怎么摆
比如00:22:621 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这儿，几个单点摆成五边形会不会好看很多？
滑条也是，几乎都是一直线，稍微带点弧度会好看很多
我是觉得有很多单点的地方间距放开了摆，有滑条的时候就跟着flow走，间距不要太大，该包的包好）其实只是我懒，一改五边形后面都要跟着变T.T好吧我老老实实改改
00:22:282 (7,8) - 删掉，听起来有些多余了嗯改了
00:29:839 - 白线没note听起来很奇怪……加一个嗯，改了
00:47:433 (1,3) - 两个滑条拍子不一样长啊，听起来很奇怪嗯嗯
01:07:282 (1,3) - 不好看/.\摆的靠近一点，包紧一点我得保持间距，先放着
01:17:884 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 红线开始连打有些意义不明，建议删掉8,7重新摆一下，剩下的摆成五连嗯这部分重新做了
01:23:523 (1) - 还是难看啊;_; 还是不会拉T.T，我再试试
01:28:711 - 转盘结尾放这里吧，红线上有个音嗯。改了

好，想说的全在上面的括号里了
祝早日1st rank

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-Hatano Kokoro-

70 posts

Joined March 2014

-Hatano Kokoro- 2014-09-26T15:54:24+00:00

楼主你好。我看了上面的mod，即使图做普通点也好，不是一定需要有梗，规则里可没有一定要有梗这条
我所说的添加泡泡就是在滑条底下或者合适的地方添加circle
[timing]

无

[audio]

加上音效
音量不适合调成100%，40~60左右即可

[insane]

00:01:418 (3) - 把这个折返滑条改成不折返的
00:14:839 - 添加个泡泡，和后面滑条做成二连
00:14:952 (1) - 延长滑条至后面小红线 00:15:177
00:18:109 - 加个泡泡放在 00:17:997 (5) 底下做成二连
00:20:816 - 加个泡泡放在 00:20:703 (2) 底下做成二连
00:22:057 - 这个地方有歌词，不如换四连或者和 00:22:170 (1) 做成五连
00:26:343 - 此处和 00:26:455 (3) 做成二连，节奏会很好
00:29:388 (1) - 如果是自己的创意就不改了，要是想改就看下面
接着上面的，在 00:29:275 处添加泡泡，重叠在 00:29:388 (1) 开头上，同时把滑条 00:29:388 (1) 的尾部拉长至 00:29:613
00:30:064 (3) - bug？折返不应该在蓝线上，修改方法可以参照下面
先去掉 00:30:064 直到 00:30:967的所有物件，然后以 00:30:064 开头做1/4拍的一个三连（重叠或者移动的三连都行）。然后在 00:30:628 处添加泡泡，再在 00:30:741 作为滑条开头添加滑条，滑条结束至 00:30:967。此部分修改结束。（懒得上图了）
00:31:982 - 添加泡泡
00:40:666 - 添加泡泡
00:45:628 (1) - 滑条延长至 00:45:854 ，把后面的 00:45:967 (2) 移动到滑条下或者比较近的地方
00:47:997 (3,4,5) - bgm没听出来有连打，泡泡虽然可以作为伴奏，但太违和感还是不行
00:48:786 - 添加泡泡
00:51:042 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 这段挺好的
01:00:967 (3) - 此处滑条不符，改法看下面
先去掉这个滑条，在 01:00:967 添加泡泡。然后在 01:01:192 做个移动的1/4拍三连
01:01:756 (5) - 去掉
01:09:989 (4) - 延长滑条，结束至 01:10:215 ，然后把 01:10:328 (5) 移动到滑条尾部附近
01:10:328 (5) - 在这下面添加一个泡泡，做成二连
01:23:297 (5,6) - 出现在同一时间，不允许用这种方式加强音效，要用绿线。
mod结束

[other]

我在摸这图，为什么楼主一直在修改这图？，这让我很不好摸
最好用上distance snap，就在作图界面右侧
就这些了，祝能rank♪(^∇^*)

ts8zs

2,124 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-09-27T00:55:31+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
ts8zs wrote:
00:42:922 (8) - 看着挤好往下了点我是说那个滑条看着挤=。=
01:11:794 (6,7,8) - ds
01:23:297 (5,6) - 低级错误=。= 看不大懂指的啥呢....T.T 指的是两个物体在同一个时间轴
01:28:711 - spinner end here
怎么说呢……看起来没什么梗呢=。=
蟹蟹mod！！第一次作图摆不出什么梗，也不敢摆OvO 没关系慢慢改=。=

-Hatano Kokoro- wrote:
楼主你好。我看了上面的mod，即使图做普通点也好，不是一定需要有梗，规则里可没有一定要有梗这条
我所说的添加泡泡就是在滑条底下或者合适的地方添加circle[/color]
[other]
我在摸这图，为什么楼主一直在修改这图？，这让我很不好摸 和这有啥关系=。=
最好用上distance snap，就在作图界面右侧 这是Insane啊喂=。=
♪(^∇^*)

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-09-27T08:03:06+00:00

-Hatano Kokoro- wrote:
楼主你好。我看了上面的mod，即使图做普通点也好，不是一定需要有梗，规则里可没有一定要有梗这条
我所说的添加泡泡就是在滑条底下或者合适的地方添加circle
[timing]
无
[audio]
加上音效现在加好了
音量不适合调成100%，40~60左右即可现在改好了，前面只做了节奏和排列OvO
[insane]
00:01:418 (3) - 把这个折返滑条改成不折返的嗯，好的
00:14:839 - 添加个泡泡，和后面滑条做成二连 OK
00:14:952 (1) - 延长滑条至后面小红线 00:15:177 这个先保留意见
00:18:109 - 加个泡泡放在 00:17:997 (5) 底下做成二连稍微改了一下
00:20:816 - 加个泡泡放在 00:20:703 (2) 底下做成二连 OK
00:22:057 - 这个地方有歌词，不如换四连或者和 00:22:170 (1) 做成五连嗯.
00:26:343 - 此处和 00:26:455 (3) 做成二连，节奏会很好嗯.
00:29:388 (1) - 如果是自己的创意就不改了，要是想改就看下面关于这个滑条还是先保留意见
接着上面的，在 00:29:275 处添加泡泡，重叠在 00:29:388 (1) 开头上，同时把滑条 00:29:388 (1) 的尾部拉长至 00:29:613
00:30:064 (3) - bug？折返不应该在蓝线上，修改方法可以参照下面
先去掉 00:30:064 直到 00:30:967的所有物件，然后以 00:30:064 开头做1/4拍的一个三连（重叠或者移动的三连都行）。然后在 00:30:628 处添加泡泡，再在 00:30:741 作为滑条开头添加滑条，滑条结束至 00:30:967。此部分修改结束。（懒得上图了）嗯这部分参考你说的改了一下
00:31:982 - 添加泡泡嗯 OK
00:40:666 - 添加泡泡嗯
00:45:628 (1) - 滑条延长至 00:45:854 ，把后面的 00:45:967 (2) 移动到滑条下或者比较近的地方 √
00:47:997 (3,4,5) - bgm没听出来有连打，泡泡虽然可以作为伴奏，但太违和感还是不行改掉了
00:48:786 - 添加泡泡 √
00:51:042 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 这段挺好的
01:00:967 (3) - 此处滑条不符，改法看下面
先去掉这个滑条，在 01:00:967 添加泡泡。然后在 01:01:192 做个移动的1/4拍三连 √
01:01:756 (5) - 去掉 √
01:09:989 (4) - 延长滑条，结束至 01:10:215 ，然后把 01:10:328 (5) 移动到滑条尾部附近 √
01:10:328 (5) - 在这下面添加一个泡泡，做成二连 √
01:23:297 (5,6) - 出现在同一时间，不允许用这种方式加强音效，要用绿线。这个是我蠢了
mod结束
[other]
我在摸这图，为什么楼主一直在修改这图？，这让我很不好摸 QAQ我也不能一直不改等mod吧T.T
最好用上distance snap，就在作图界面右侧 同上，insane除了串并不需要开DS
就这些了，祝能rank♪(^∇^*)

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-09-27T08:07:18+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
ts8zs wrote:
00:42:922 (8) - 看着挤好往下了点我是说那个滑条看着挤=。=
01:11:794 (6,7,8) - ds
01:23:297 (5,6) - 低级错误=。= 看不大懂指的啥呢....T.T 指的是两个物体在同一个时间轴
01:28:711 - spinner end here
怎么说呢……看起来没什么梗呢=。=
蟹蟹mod！！第一次作图摆不出什么梗，也不敢摆OvO 没关系慢慢改=。=

-Hatano Kokoro- wrote:
楼主你好。我看了上面的mod，即使图做普通点也好，不是一定需要有梗，规则里可没有一定要有梗这条
我所说的添加泡泡就是在滑条底下或者合适的地方添加circle[/color]
[other]
我在摸这图，为什么楼主一直在修改这图？，这让我很不好摸 和这有啥关系=。=
最好用上distance snap，就在作图界面右侧 这是Insane啊喂=。=
♪(^∇^*)

非常感谢你帮我看图

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-10-11T15:09:53+00:00

刚把累

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Karen

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Karen 2014-10-11T15:47:27+00:00

AIR wrote:

刚把累

osu file format v13

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woc好快，蟹蟹w

I Want a Cuddle

I Want a Cuddle 2014-10-13T21:08:03+00:00

[Normal]
Change AR to 4

00:12:019 (2) - Move this to x:92 y:124
00:20:365 (3,4) - Don't overlap please. It looks awful (oh i noticed this is a Distance Snapping problem; nvm)
00:47:658 (2) - Move this note to 00:47:884 ? It sounds better
01:03:899 (3) - Delete this note? Even better, make a slider from 01:03:673 till 01:04:125
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937

[AIR's Hard]
Change OD to 6
Change AR to 7

00:02:094 - Make a note here
00:02:997 - Also here.
00:05:027 (2) - I don't like this slider. Make it prettier
00:18:561 (9) - NC here.
00:20:365 (3) - Dont NC here.
00:22:170 (1) - NC here.
00:38:749 (3) - Delete this note.
00:42:019 (11) - NC here.
00:43:824 (2) - Dont NC here.
00:45:628 (1) - NC here.
00:50:027 (7) - Delete this note.
01:10:891 (5) - I dont like this slider. Instead, you can make short sliders.
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-13T23:57:56+00:00

I Want a Cuddle wrote:
[Normal]
Change AR to 4 really?

00:12:019 (2) - Move this to x:92 y:124 changed
00:20:365 (3,4) - Don't overlap please. It looks awful (oh i noticed this is a Distance Snapping problem; nvm) ok,moved it
00:47:658 (2) - Move this note to 00:47:884 ? It sounds better it's a little difficult,i changed the notes to a long slider
01:03:899 (3) - Delete this note? Even better, make a slider from 01:03:673 till 01:04:125 i think this note has no problem
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937 it's not good

[AIR's Hard]
Change OD to 6
Change AR to 7 hmm,ok,changed

00:02:094 - Make a note here ok
00:02:997 - Also here. it's no need i think
00:05:027 (2) - I don't like this slider. Make it prettier i thik it's not bad
00:18:561 (9) - NC here. ok
00:20:365 (3) - Dont NC here. √
00:22:170 (1) - NC here. √
00:38:749 (3) - Delete this note. √
00:42:019 (11) - NC here. √
00:43:824 (2) - Dont NC here. √
00:45:628 (1) - NC here. √
00:50:027 (7) - Delete this note. √
01:10:891 (5) - I dont like this slider. Instead, you can make short sliders. maybe?
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937 it's not good

No insane mod?
but still ty,i'll mod your map soon

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-14T02:08:24+00:00

50 % maping
40 % hitsounds

my diff :3

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I Want a Cuddle

I Want a Cuddle 2014-10-14T02:43:31+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
I Want a Cuddle wrote:
[Normal]
Change AR to 4 really?

00:12:019 (2) - Move this to x:92 y:124 changed
00:20:365 (3,4) - Don't overlap please. It looks awful (oh i noticed this is a Distance Snapping problem; nvm) ok,moved it
00:47:658 (2) - Move this note to 00:47:884 ? It sounds better it's a little difficult,i changed the notes to a long slider
01:03:899 (3) - Delete this note? Even better, make a slider from 01:03:673 till 01:04:125 i think this note has no problem
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937 it's not good

[AIR's Hard]
Change OD to 6
Change AR to 7 hmm,ok,changed

00:02:094 - Make a note here ok
00:02:997 - Also here. it's no need i think
00:05:027 (2) - I don't like this slider. Make it prettier i thik it's not bad
00:18:561 (9) - NC here. ok
00:20:365 (3) - Dont NC here. √
00:22:170 (1) - NC here. √
00:38:749 (3) - Delete this note. √
00:42:019 (11) - NC here. √
00:43:824 (2) - Dont NC here. √
00:45:628 (1) - NC here. √
00:50:027 (7) - Delete this note. √
01:10:891 (5) - I dont like this slider. Instead, you can make short sliders. maybe?
01:27:019 (1) - Adjust this spinner from 01:27:132 to 01:28:937 it's not good

No insane mod?
but still ty,i'll mod your map soon

I don't mod insane because i don't play it neither idk if it's good or it's bad.

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-14T04:09:54+00:00

i need insane mod.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-14T06:38:39+00:00

add "eLtigreXXx" "KokoroStudiox3" in tags

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-14T07:13:44+00:00

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:
add "eLtigreXXx" "KokoroStudiox3" in tags

ok I'll add them
and plz finish the diff first.

Guu

125 posts

Joined July 2008

Guu 2014-10-14T15:44:23+00:00

[Easy]
good

[Normal]
00:18:561 (1) - 形状可以再扭一点~
01:26:230 (4) - 改成白线结束红线再加个单点？

[AIR's Hard]
00:02:997 - 00:06:606 - 前面是主跟那个钢琴声吧O.O，是的话这两个地方还是不要漏掉的好

[Hatsukoi]
重头戏来惹
排列比我渣图整齐太多;w;
我就主摸下节奏吧
00:17:546 (3) - 去掉，00:18:448 - 加到这里，00:18:899 (2) - 这个去掉，00:19:350 再在这里加一个note
00:21:719 (8,9,1,2) - 总觉得角度不够顺手，1和2的方向可以改改，间距再大一点
00:22:959 - 建议加个note。不过那样排列也都要改了……四暗刻
00:24:876 (3,4,5) - 这三个ctrl+g一下w
00:25:779 (1,3) - 这两个滑条可以改成尾部放红线上再接一个note
00:27:583 (1,2,3) - 推荐间距拉大点，这里节奏比较强
00:29:162 (6,7,1) - 这三个也像00:30:064 (4,5,6) - 这几个一样摆吧，走向朝下
00:36:493 - miss鼓点
00:46:756 - miss鼓点，应该是个三连，柑橘可以用往返滑条
00:49:125 - 也系miss
00:49:688 - 同上
01:10:666 (8,1,2) - 应该是个五连
01:13:598 (3,4,5) - 柑橘不太适合这里放三连，推荐放在01:13:937
01:14:500 (1) - 尾部放蓝线再加个note
01:15:515 - 加个note改五连
01:16:192 (9) - 去掉
01:19:801 - 这里加个note，01:20:027 (2) - 这个去掉

整体不错吖，加油~owo

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-14T16:28:31+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
KokoroStudiox3 wrote:
add "eLtigreXXx" "KokoroStudiox3" in tags

ok I'll add them
and plz finish the diff first.

finish
is in forum mp:3

and

edit
kokoros diff

fixed x.x

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Last edited by KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-15T01:12:25+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-14T23:33:23+00:00

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:

50 % maping
40 % hitsounds

my diff :3

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sorry i didn't notice it
Thanks for your awesome diff!

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-15T08:09:31+00:00

finish
is in forum mp:3

and

edit
kokoros diff

fixed x.x

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upload your diff in my forum pm
but i don't kown what the last sentence mean .The diff's name?

Kagamine Rin

27 posts

Joined June 2011

Kagamine Rin 2014-10-15T13:28:46+00:00

[Kokoro's Easy]

May be OD+1?
01:26:906 (1) - Spinner finish at here:01:26:906 (1) -

[Normal]

01:14:500 (4) - 滑条盖白线导致少clap，建议改一下。（也可以不改

[AIR's Hard]

00:02:094 (4,5) - - whistle。前面的note和滑条头上都有，这儿没有，不好听。
00:15:628 (2) - 滑条盖掉了白线，听起来很奇怪，建议拆成一个note+一个二分滑条。
00:34:125 (5,6) - 5的滑条尾和6的头尾全部finish。很明显背景有重音，这里需要强调一下。
00:51:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段2,4clap。原来的1,3,5clap听起来非常奇怪。然后12滑条头加whistle。
01:02:997 (7) - 滑条盖白线导致少了一个clap，建议改一下。（也可以不改

[Hatsukoi]

00:04:801 (2) - whistle。前面的二连+滑条开头都有whistle，到这边突然没有了，听起来很奇怪。
00:07:734 (1) - finish。三个鼓点出来以后音乐开始有鼓点节奏了，用finish作一下强调。
00:14:049 (5) - finish。很明显的两个重音，后面一个有finish，前面一个为什么不加一下呢？
00:14:500 (6) - 略微往右上移一点，和前后两个note对称。
00:25:328 (6) - whistle。用clap显吵。
00:27:583 (1,2,3) - 三个重音，距离可以稍微摆的大一些。
00:34:801 (9) - nc。然后后面的00:35:027 (1) - 去掉nc。这里是不是看错白线了啊……
00:39:764 (3) - 往上摆一些。
00:39:764 (3) - 往左摆一些，和前后两个距离拉开一点。这个note在时间轴上比较孤立，不用和前后的物件靠的太近。
00:58:260 (1) - 滑条尾少clap。
01:04:350 (3,4,5) - 这个三连摆原地吧，距离太小了不好看。或者拉开距离摆也行。
01:09:087 (1,2,3) - 其实我觉得这儿像原来一样跟歌词很好，听起来也自然很多。这样改吧：
SPOILER
然后再加3个clap
01:18:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五连不要挤在一起，摆开一点好看。

改过以后比以前要好多了，加油！

Kagamine Rin

27 posts

Joined June 2011

Kagamine Rin 2014-10-15T13:29:39+00:00

校园网真是感人

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-15T14:17:29+00:00

Guu wrote:
[Easy]
good

[Normal]
00:18:561 (1) - 形状可以再扭一点~ OK,稍微扭了一点
01:26:230 (4) - 改成白线结束红线再加个单点？感觉差不多，先保留

[Hatsukoi]
重头戏来惹
排列比我渣图整齐太多;w;
我就主摸下节奏吧
00:17:546 (3) - 去掉，00:18:448 - 加到这里，嗯这里fix 00:18:899 (2) - 这个去掉，00:19:350 再在这里加一个note 这里还是保持原样
00:21:719 (8,9,1,2) - 总觉得角度不够顺手，1和2的方向可以改改，间距再大一点换了个梗
00:22:959 - 建议加个note。不过那样排列也都要改了……四暗刻这里全部改了
00:24:876 (3,4,5) - 这三个ctrl+g一下w OK
00:25:779 (1,3) - 这两个滑条可以改成尾部放红线上再接一个note 这里感觉还是原来的好一点
00:27:583 (1,2,3) - 推荐间距拉大点，这里节奏比较强 OK
00:29:162 (6,7,1) - 这三个也像00:30:064 (4,5,6) - 这几个一样摆吧，走向朝下 OK
00:36:493 - miss鼓点 OK
00:46:756 - miss鼓点，应该是个三连，柑橘可以用往返滑条 OK fixed
00:49:125 - 也系miss
00:49:688 - 同上都fix了
01:10:666 (8,1,2) - 应该是个五连嗯
01:13:598 (3,4,5) - 柑橘不太适合这里放三连，推荐放在01:13:937 改啦
01:14:500 (1) - 尾部放蓝线再加个note 这里放note就超过范围了QAQ
01:15:515 - 加个note改五连嗯好的
01:16:192 (9) - 去掉嗯
01:19:801 - 这里加个note，01:20:027 (2) - 这个去掉改了

整体不错吖，加油~owo

谢Modwww

Karen

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Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-15T14:42:51+00:00

Kagamine Rin wrote:
:roll:

[Normal]
01:14:500 (4) - 滑条盖白线导致少clap，建议改一下。（也可以不改丨改了
[Hatsukoi]
00:04:801 (2) - whistle。前面的二连+滑条开头都有whistle，到这边突然没有了，听起来很奇怪。其实这里是跟音下whistle但是确实是漏了
00:07:734 (1) - finish。三个鼓点出来以后音乐开始有鼓点节奏了，用finish作一下强调。[/color]
00:14:049 (5) - finish。很明显的两个重音，后面一个有finish，前面一个为什么不加一下呢？这个漏了233
00:14:500 (6) - 略微往右上移一点，和前后两个note对称。 fixed
00:25:328 (6) - whistle。用clap显吵。这里先保留，clap音效我应该会换的
00:27:583 (1,2,3) - 三个重音，距离可以稍微摆的大一些。嗯改了
00:34:801 (9) - nc。然后后面的00:35:027 (1) - 去掉nc。这里是不是看错白线了啊…… 看错了233..
00:39:764 (3) - 往上摆一些。 √
00:39:764 (3) - 往左摆一些，和前后两个距离拉开一点。这个note在时间轴上比较孤立，不用和前后的物件靠的太近。你的复读机该返厂了，没复制好时间点
00:58:260 (1) - 滑条尾少clap。 √
01:04:350 (3,4,5) - 这个三连摆原地吧，距离太小了不好看。或者拉开距离摆也行。改成原地了
01:09:087 (1,2,3) - 其实我觉得这儿像原来一样跟歌词很好，听起来也自然很多。这样改吧：唔这里先暂时不改，跟声音感觉不太好
SPOILER
然后再加3个clap
01:18:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五连不要挤在一起，摆开一点好看。 OK
[/notice]

改过以后比以前要好多了，加油！

不能给两次星 sad

Kagamine Rin

27 posts

Joined June 2011

Kagamine Rin 2014-10-15T15:34:04+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
不能给两次星 sad

不要在意细节

Last edited by Kagamine Rin 2014-10-16T08:10:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

bibilicu

3,578 posts

Joined October 2013

bibilicu 2014-10-15T15:54:24+00:00

Normal

01:14:952 (4,5) - There two objects are less the 10ms apart!

Kokoro's Easy

A preview time is not set! Set one on Timing Section!

Hatsukoi

01:14:951 (1) - Object's end is offscreen!

AIR's Hard
00:37:732 (6) - Object's end is not snapped!

YOU SHOULD DISABLE THE COUNTDOWN!

GOOD LUCK!

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-15T17:09:30+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:

finish
is in forum mp:3

and

edit
kokoros diff

fixed x.x

SPOILER

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upload your diff in my forum pm
but i don't kown what the last sentence mean .The diff's name?

the code was incorrect fixed
but it's okay with the forum code

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-15T17:26:54+00:00

Inconsistency in Countdown: -

AIR's Hard : 0
Hatsukoi : 1
Kokoro's Easy: 1
Normal : 1

Inconsistency in Tags:

[AIR's Hard :
[Hatsukoi : eLtigreXXx,KokoroStudiox3,Sphere,AIR,Hatsukoi Limited -
[Kokoro's Easy :
[Normal :

hard
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:00:616 - snap to 00:00:628
00:43:505 - snap to 00:43:485

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-16T11:16:03+00:00

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:
Inconsistency in Countdown: -

AIR's Hard : 0
Hatsukoi : 1
Kokoro's Easy: 1
Normal : 1

Inconsistency in Tags:

[AIR's Hard :
[Hatsukoi : eLtigreXXx,KokoroStudiox3,Sphere,AIR,Hatsukoi Limited -
[Kokoro's Easy :
[Normal :

hard
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:00:616 - snap to 00:00:628
00:43:505 - snap to 00:43:485

thanks! update!

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-10-18T07:51:29+00:00

Guu wrote:
[AIR's Hard]
00:02:997 - 00:06:606 - 前面是主跟那个钢琴声吧O.O，是的话这两个地方还是不要漏掉的好这个难度的话节奏太密集不太合适

Kagamine Rin wrote:
[AIR's Hard]
00:02:094 (4,5) - - whistle。前面的note和滑条头上都有，这儿没有，不好听。+clap
00:15:628 (2) - 滑条盖掉了白线，听起来很奇怪，建议拆成一个note+一个二分滑条。红线加了whistle
00:34:125 (5,6) - 5的滑条尾和6的头尾全部finish。很明显背景有重音，这里需要强调一下。fix
00:51:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段2,4clap。原来的1,3,5clap听起来非常奇怪。然后12滑条头加whistle。fix
01:02:997 (7) - 滑条盖白线导致少了一个clap，建议改一下。（也可以不改比较合适，就这样吧

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
AIR's Hard
00:37:732 (6) - Object's end is not snapped!fix

update!

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Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-18T11:14:45+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Normal

01:14:952 (4,5) - There two objects are less the 10ms apart!

Kokoro's Easy

A preview time is not set! Set one on Timing Section!

Hatsukoi

01:14:951 (1) - Object's end is offscreen!

AIR's Hard
00:37:732 (6) - Object's end is not snapped!

YOU SHOULD DISABLE THE COUNTDOWN!

GOOD LUCK!

no fix thanks

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2014-10-18T18:38:18+00:00

From m4m

General

你的背景好可爱啊~~~ www
00:58:260 - kiai time should start here on the downbeat

Kokoro's Easy

00:04:125 (1,2) - if you want, you can blanket:
SPOILER
01:01:418 (1,2) - switch NC so that NC starts on the downbeat. Same at 01:15:854 (1,2) - and 01:19:012 (1,3) - , switch NC
01:26:906 (1) - end spinner on 01:29:839 - , then add inherited point at 01:29:839 - and lower volume to around 40%. This way the spinner sound isn't louder than the music

Normal

00:32:094 (6) - end at 00:32:546 - on the beat. After that you can blanket 00:33:448 (2,3) -
00:35:478 (4,5) - try this rhythm:

Repeat slider maps the back and forth sound in the music
00:47:433 (1) - sounds better if you use repeat slider like 00:48:335 (2) -
01:01:869 (1) - move middle point down a bit and move slider to x 112 y 176 to blanket with 01:01:418 (5) -
SPOILER
01:14:049 (3,4) - , 01:15:403 (5,6) - I think you should avoid stacking notes one beat apart, it will be confusing to newer players and they might hit both notes really fast.

AIR's Hard

00:06:831 (4) - you're missing a strong sound in the music at 00:07:170 - , consider turning this slider into a repeat slider so you can map the sound

Same thing at 00:06:606 - , try adding a circle there.
00:15:403 - 00:43:373 - you should add some claps to this section (every second and fourth beat)
00:26:117 - add a circle here to make a triplet since there's a strong sound here in the music. Delete 00:26:004 (5) - afterwards since it isn't on any sound in the music
00:45:854 (2) - move closer to previous object. This is spaced the same distance between 00:45:628 (1,3) - but the rhythm is not the same, 00:45:854 (2) - should be closer to 00:45:628 (1) - . Easier to read this way
01:00:064 (7) - move points so beginning and end of slider are parallel, I think it will look nicer:
SPOILER

Hatsukoi

00:14:049 (5) - NC to emphasize sound in music and because of anti-jump
00:17:433 (2,3,4,5) - you can make jumps more fun if you put them so they're not in a straight line. Try putting 00:17:658 (3) - at x 244 y 136 and 00:17:884 (4) - at ~x 360 y 224
00:19:914 (5) - maybe ctrl+g will flow better
00:53:072 (2,3) - I think this pattern flows better, especially the flow into 00:53:749 (5) - :
SPOILER
01:11:794 (3,4,5,6) - too many overlaps here, try a pattern like this:
SPOILER
I think it looks and flows better~
01:14:049 (5,6) - this stack might break flow, try putting 01:14:275 (6) - at ~x 204 y 176, I think it will flow better

Have fun mapping~ uwu

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-19T04:45:50+00:00

pkk wrote:
From m4m

General
你的背景好可爱啊~~~ www www
00:58:260 - kiai time should start here on the downbeat k

Normal
00:32:094 (6) - end at 00:32:546 - on the beat. After that you can blanket 00:33:448 (2,3) - k
00:35:478 (4,5) - try this rhythm: k

Repeat slider maps the back and forth sound in the music
00:47:433 (1) - sounds better if you use repeat slider like 00:48:335 (2) - k
01:01:869 (1) - move middle point down a bit and move slider to x 112 y 176 to blanket with 01:01:418 (5) - hmm,i think it's no neccesary but changed
SPOILER
01:14:049 (3,4) - , 01:15:403 (5,6) - I think you should avoid stacking notes one beat apart, it will be confusing to newer players and they might hit both notes really fast. ok,fix
Hatsukoi
00:14:049 (5) - NC to emphasize sound in music and because of anti-jump k
00:17:433 (2,3,4,5) - you can make jumps more fun if you put them so they're not in a straight line. Try putting 00:17:658 (3) - at x 244 y 136 and 00:17:884 (4) - at ~x 360 y 224 k
00:19:914 (5) - maybe ctrl+g will flow better k
00:53:072 (2,3) - I think this pattern flows better, especially the flow into 00:53:749 (5) - : change to another way
SPOILER
01:11:794 (3,4,5,6) - too many overlaps here, try a pattern like this: changed
SPOILER
I think it looks and flows better~
01:14:049 (5,6) - this stack might break flow, try putting 01:14:275 (6) - at ~x 204 y 176, I think it will flow better k,it looks better
[/notice]

Have fun mapping~ uwu

thank you for modding! 谢谢！

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-19T15:29:47+00:00

pkk wrote:
From m4m

[notice]Kokoro's Easy
00:04:125 (1,2) - if you want, you can blanket: ok
SPOILER
01:01:418 (1,2) - switch NC so that NC starts on the downbeat. Same at 01:15:854 (1,2) - and 01:19:012 (1,3) - , switch NC must be in the circle
01:26:906 (1) - end spinner on 01:29:839 - , then add inherited point at 01:29:839 - and lower volume to around 40%. This way the spinner sound isn't louder than the music ok

[/list]

Have fun mapping~ uwu

my diff

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58260
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13147
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

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TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:Kokoro's Easy
Source:Hatsukoi Limited
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[Difficulty]
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thanks

Pereira006

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2014-10-19T23:10:42+00:00

[General]

Why using slider tick is 2? you can listen this music very carefully, that 2 tick is 70% overmapped, could use 1 tick, is really better IMO
in tags why you need this Sphere ? there already Artist so people will be easy search this song, remove this Sphere
add AudioLeadIn: 1000 look better for this music
Disable Widescreen Support for all diff's there no SB
Disable Letterbox during break for all diff's there no Break
That Color combo is default? is unfit this music IMO try this http://puu.sh/ciOqt/5c9b6fb5c2.png or change you own
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,192,0
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,100,255
Combo4 : 43,43,255
```

[Kokoro's Easy]

Hitsound:

00:28:034 (4) - no change auto to normal from in sampleset the both (start and end) ? there beat that i can hear, also could fix you pattern
00:43:373 (2) - could change auto to normal in sampleset, missing change
00:46:982 (6) - in addiition why drum and clap ? not sense really, change to auto and sampleset change to normal
00:51:042 (2) - that normal could change end to start, better, could fix you pattern
00:51:944 (3) - in end, could change auto to normal in sampleset, look like you are missing this
00:58:260 (3) - no add finish in start ? vocal+beat strong
01:12:696 (3) - ^ same

could work more this hitsound

Gameplay:

00:25:328 (2) - could grid 1 left to perfect blanket with 00:23:974 (1)
00:37:057 (4,1,2,3,4) - I feel this bad flow, that 00:37:508 (1,2,3,4) - could grid 7 right could better flow (can't puush.... site is screw up) if you do that care spacing other parts
00:37:057 (4,1) - inconsistency spacing
01:07:282 (4) - could grid 1 down to perfect align with 01:06:831 (3) also would perfect blanket with 01:06:380 (2) too
01:12:245 (2,3) - could improve blanket Can't show you picture, puush is down...
01:15:854 (1,2) - inconsistency spacing

not big problem, just nazi

[Normal]

Song Setup:

I wanna see Ar+1 really good for this diff you can testplay

Gameplay:

00:01:418 (2) - could grid 1 left to perfect blanket with 00:00:516 (1), if you do that care spacing
00:08:636 (2) - I feel this flow could improve more, move place to x:260 y:220, that could really good, you can try test play
00:10:440 (5) - still need improve flow
00:10:891 (6) - this still need perfect stack with 00:12:245 (2)
00:18:561 (1) - you sure wanna keep this ? look weird and also bad flow with 00:19:914 (2)
00:25:779 (1) - need grid 1 down to perfect align with 00:23:974 (4) just improve gameplay
00:26:681 (2,4) - I not really like this overlaps, change this pattern pls, bad overlaps and hard read for this diff
00:33:899 (3) - still possible to make blanket with 00:33:448 (2)
00:35:027 (4) - really hard when I did test play, is hard to read with 00:33:899 (3), could change place or move shape
00:37:508 (3) - really unsymentrical shape, try this code
```
156,32,37508,2,0,B|202:24|251:49|251:49|300:24|348:32,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
if you do that care spacing in 00:38:861 (4,5)
00:57:358 (5) - I'm sorry this is very bad curve, pls improve more curve
01:01:418 (5) - could blanket with 01:00:064 (4), if you do that carefully spacing in 01:01:869 (1,2)
01:01:869 (1,2) - that (1) in tail could improve blanket with 01:02:771 (2)
01:15:403 (5,6) - really unstack, need perfect stack with 0.0x spacing

Still need improve gameplays, also didn't mod hitsound look consistency for me

[AIR's Hard]

hitsound:

00:02:320 (4) - in begin, that sampleset "normal" look not sense this music, this part music is relax and only melody, could change to auto
00:15:403 at 00:57:007 - I know there whistle lot, but sometime I feel is lack hitsound, where Normal hit ? like other diff's, this could add more hitsound... Fell lack hitsound, can't mod
01:13:598 (9) - that whistle could un start and clap in end, sound better
01:13:147 (6) - remove whistle and clap, sound better

Still need more hitsound

Gameplay:

00:07:734 (5) - you missing add NC there, could fix you pattern style
00:19:463 (2) - very unsymentric shape, try perfect symentric

huh there huge confuse spacing, there lot inconsistency spacing too many anti-spacing and jump that made me confuse play, I will give example:
00:17:658 (7,8,1) - I don't know why you did this part 1.00x this made me confuse play, could fix original your spacing like 1.50x or 1.20 is really good like you did other pattern like this 00:24:876 (1,2,3,4)
00:35:703 (1,2,3) - ^ same
00:40:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - again, 1.50x is really good like you did,
there more, I know this is "hard" but is hard to play...

still more work

[Hatsukoi]

hitsound:

00:00:516 (1) - missing add finish in begin
00:01:418 (3) - could add whistle in begin, there melody, that very well fit IMO

very consistency, nice

Gameplay:

00:10:215 (2) - still need stack with 00:09:087 (6)
00:23:974 (1) - can be improve more curve ? like this 00:25:779 (1)?
00:30:741 (8) - I really not like overlaps with this part 00:31:869 (4,5,6) too hard read with skin default you have change pattern that part 00:30:741 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) or do something
00:39:538 (2) - still possible blanket with 00:38:410 (1) if you do that care pattern in 00:39:538 (2,3,4)
00:54:651 (1) - why don't more blanket with 00:54:425 (8) ? like you did this 01:00:064 (1), just improve gameplay
00:58:937 (2,3) - ^ same

[]
Very impressive, still more work
Any question ask me so i can explain better
I wish good luck

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-20T01:59:05+00:00

all done

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edit : fixed my diff

Last edited by KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-20T03:00:07+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-20T02:43:22+00:00

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:

all done

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20,80,13034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,80,13147,2,0,B|72:100|72:100|136:104|136:104|156:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,14049,2,0,L|508:56,2,140,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15403,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15628,2,0,P|324:224|236:240,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,268,16305,2,0,L|132:356,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,104,17207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17433,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17658,2,0,B|192:132|192:132|228:128|228:128|276:112,1,140
336,88,18335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,60,18561,6,0,L|388:200,1,140
436,328,19463,2,0,B|428:316|428:316|380:332|328:308|328:308|300:324,1,140
76,336,20365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,20591,2,0,P|110:333|145:327,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21493,2,0,L|92:216,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,84,22170,6,0,P|84:96|156:72,1,140
256,40,22846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,23072,2,0,P|423:95|492:83,1,140
256,192,23974,2,0,B|228:150|163:160|163:160|121:210|152:257,1,210,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24876,6,0,B|328:184|328:184|352:192|352:192|412:184,1,140
500,184,25553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,184,25666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,184,25779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,312,26004,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,312,26230,2,0,L|376:304,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,340,26681,2,0,L|204:332,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,308,27132,1,2,0:0:0:0:
8,344,27358,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,236,27583,5,6,0:0:0:0:
40,132,27809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,132,27922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,132,28034,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,28,28260,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,28,28485,2,0,B|112:44|112:44|156:44|156:44|208:64,1,140,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,48,29388,6,0,P|384:88|332:84,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,160,30064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,212,30290,2,0,B|344:272|344:272|340:308|340:308|304:336,1,140
204,308,30967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,308,31192,2,0,P|140:288|64:308,1,140
70,304,31869,2,0,B|44:236|44:236|64:168,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,72,32546,2,0,L|84:4,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,100,32997,6,0,P|216:116|312:96,1,140
412,68,33673,1,10,0:0:0:0:
412,68,33786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,68,33899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,34125,2,0,B|468:200|468:200|464:236|464:236|436:296,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,35027,2,0,L|208:340,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,208,35703,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,35929,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,240,36155,2,0,B|192:204|192:204|200:148|168:120,1,140
24,40,37057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,40,37282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,40,37508,2,0,L|100:36,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,36,37959,2,0,L|276:32,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,32,38410,5,0,0:0:0:0:
463,53,38636,1,2,0:0:0:0:
463,53,38861,2,0,B|479:95|431:121|474:152|455:182|464:205,1,140
404,262,39538,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,340,39764,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,348,40215,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,336,40440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,336,40553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,336,40666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,324,40891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,232,41117,1,6,0:0:0:0:
168,240,41343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,240,41455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,41568,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,128,41794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,128,42019,6,0,P|296:228|268:332,2,210,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,96,43824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,44049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,44162,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,88,44500,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,88,44726,2,0,P|324:116|440:80,1,210
439,80,45515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,80,45628,5,2,0:0:0:0:
480,200,45854,2,0,L|472:256,1,35,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,348,46305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,348,46531,2,0,B|380:332|380:332|344:336|344:336|284:324,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,47433,6,0,B|72:332|72:332|16:324,2,105,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,48335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,192,48561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,48673,2,0,B|60:144|60:144|80:80,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,52,49237,2,0,P|244:64|340:52,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,32,49914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,32,50140,2,0,B|480:72|480:72|492:120|472:164,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,324,51042,6,0,B|440:312|440:312|404:320|404:320|336:308,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,51944,2,0,B|108:316|108:316|80:328|80:328|20:316,2,140,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,53072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,53185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,53297,2,0,L|352:212,2,70,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,76,54200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,144,54425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,216,54651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,108,55102,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,92,55328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,84,55440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,76,55553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,60,55779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,216,56004,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,108,56230,1,6,0:0:0:0:
120,248,56681,1,4,0:0:0:0:
284,224,56906,1,4,0:0:0:0:
20,100,58260,6,0,P|128:84|188:100,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,58937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,59162,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,236,59613,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,60064,2,0,B|364:304|364:304|328:320|328:320|256:312,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,60741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,60967,2,0,B|40:288|40:288|24:224|56:176,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,61869,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62320,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,48,62546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62997,2,0,P|472:128|452:228,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,63673,2,0,L|368:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,64125,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64576,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65027,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65478,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66380,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66831,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67282,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68185,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69087,5,6,0:0:0:0:
80,348,69312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,256,69538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,164,69764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,164,69876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,164,69989,1,6,0:0:0:0:
4,72,70215,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,56,70440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,40,70666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,70779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,40,70891,2,0,B|256:92|348:44|348:44|424:116|516:48,2,335.999989746094,6|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,73147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,180,73373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,180,73485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,180,73598,2,0,P|280:148|192:152,1,167.999994873047,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74500,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74952,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75403,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76305,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77433,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77884,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79012,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79463,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79914,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80816,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81719,5,6,0:0:0:0:
84,88,81944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,168,82170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,232,82395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,200,82621,1,6,0:0:0:0:
244,272,82846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,352,83072,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,328,83297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,83410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,83523,2,0,P|200:296|296:316,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,328,84200,6,0,L|412:340,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,288,84651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,200,84876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85328,2,0,B|440:84|384:80|384:80|364:100|364:100|304:80|248:104,1,251.999992309571,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,36,86230,2,0,B|132:88|132:88|124:132|124:132|152:180,1,125.999996154785,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86906,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87019,12,4,88711,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89162,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89388,1,0,0:0:0:0:

~~sry it's not your diff.~~
thanks! updated!

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-20T04:34:06+00:00

Pereira006 wrote:
[General]
Why using slider tick is 2? you can listen this music very carefully, that 2 tick is 70% overmapped, could use 1 tick, is really better IMO k
in tags why you need this Sphere ? there already Artist so people will be easy search this song, remove this Sphere k
add AudioLeadIn: 1000 look better for this music k
Disable Widescreen Support for all diff's there no SB k
Disable Letterbox during break for all diff's there no Break k
That Color combo is default? is unfit this music IMO try this http://puu.sh/ciOqt/5c9b6fb5c2.png or change you own k
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,192,0
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,100,255
Combo4 : 43,43,255
[Normal]

Song Setup:

I wanna see Ar+1 really good for this diff you can testplay k
Gameplay:
00:01:418 (2) - could grid 1 left to perfect blanket with 00:00:516 (1), if you do that care spacing k
00:08:636 (2) - I feel this flow could improve more, move place to x:260 y:220, that could really good, you can try test play k
00:10:440 (5) - still need improve flow hmm,no change here,i think it's no need
00:10:891 (6) - this still need perfect stack with 00:12:245 (2) k
00:18:561 (1) - you sure wanna keep this ? look weird and also bad flow with 00:19:914 (2) changed
00:25:779 (1) - need grid 1 down to perfect align with 00:23:974 (4) just improve gameplay k
00:26:681 (2,4) - I not really like this overlaps, change this pattern pls, bad overlaps and hard read for this diff k
00:33:899 (3) - still possible to make blanket with 00:33:448 (2) k
00:35:027 (4) - really hard when I did test play, is hard to read with 00:33:899 (3), could change place or move shape k
00:37:508 (3) - really unsymentrical shape, try this code k
156,32,37508,2,0,B|202:24|251:49|251:49|300:24|348:32,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
if you do that care spacing in 00:38:861 (4,5)
00:57:358 (5) - I'm sorry this is very bad curve, pls improve more curve k
01:01:418 (5) - could blanket with 01:00:064 (4), if you do that carefully spacing in 01:01:869 (1,2) k
01:01:869 (1,2) - that (1) in tail could improve blanket with 01:02:771 (2) k
01:15:403 (5,6) - really unstack, need perfect stack with 0.0x spacing fixed

Still need improve gameplays, also didn't mod hitsound look consistency for me
[Hatsukoi]

hitsound:

00:00:516 (1) - missing add finish in begin k
00:01:418 (3) - could add whistle in begin, there melody, that very well fit IMO k
very consistency, nice

Gameplay:

00:10:215 (2) - still need stack with 00:09:087 (6) k
00:23:974 (1) - can be improve more curve ? like this 00:25:779 (1)? k
00:30:741 (8) - I really not like overlaps with this part 00:31:869 (4,5,6) too hard read with skin default you have change pattern that part 00:30:741 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) or do something changed the overlaps
00:39:538 (2) - still possible blanket with 00:38:410 (1) if you do that care pattern in 00:39:538 (2,3,4) k
00:54:651 (1) - why don't more blanket with 00:54:425 (8) ? like you did this 01:00:064 (1), just improve gameplay k
00:58:937 (2,3) - ^ same k
[]
Very impressive, still more work
Any question ask me so i can explain better
I wish good luck

Thanks for modding! It's really helpful!
thanks again.

Pereira006

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2014-10-20T04:44:22+00:00

Ho forget to said !!!!

remove " Hatsukoi Limited " from in tags for all diff's there aldready in sourçe, so that is easy search, you don't need this "Hatsukoi Limited"

that all I hope i did full check, anyway, kill me pls, no kudosu and once again, good luck!

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-20T04:49:22+00:00

Pereira006 wrote:
Ho forget to said !!!!

remove " Hatsukoi Limited " from in tags for all diff's there aldready in sourçe, so that is easy search, you don't need this "Hatsukoi Limited"

that all I hope i did full check, anyway, kill me pls, no kudosu and once again, good luck!

ok,thanks!

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-10-20T14:44:23+00:00

送一心关注十一连患者(

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-20T14:47:17+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
送一心关注十一连患者(

不如送个mod啊，M4M也行，顺便我是单抽党，单抽出奇迹

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-10-21T15:49:52+00:00

irc

22:28 Kagamine Ren: 大号晚上好呀
22:28 Kagamine Ren: 接不接mod req
22:28 Kagamine Ren: o.o
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0.0
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 来 发个图
22:29 *Kagamine Ren is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501894 Sphere - Future Stream]
22:29 Kagamine Ren: 1st 可能比较水
22:30 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 我慢慢下(
22:31 Kagamine Ren: 没问题o.o
22:33 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对了 来试试我图啊
22:38 Kagamine Ren: 好呀
22:38 Kagamine Ren: 刚刚拿东西去了
22:39 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/523692 Nitta Emi - Someday of my life]
22:39 Kagamine Ren: owo np
22:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 111
22:40 Kagamine Ren: 哇 果果
22:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哇 果果
22:43 Kagamine Ren: 下好了
22:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好111
22:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 你那个也下好了
22:48 Kagamine Ren: acc好难
22:48 Kagamine Ren: o.o
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: od8
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 原来OD8
22:49 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 感觉SV加一点做难一点会比较好玩
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 这样有些慢 还不太好大
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 打
22:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
22:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 有道理
22:50 Kagamine Ren: 有一种很郁闷的感觉o.o
22:50 Kagamine Ren: 另外cinema好厉害
22:51 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: cinema233
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 要是这样做出来能玩就好了
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 就能做出各种音游来(?
22:54 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501894 Sphere - Future Stream]
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 来
22:55 Kagamine Ren: 我觉得能想出这种东西来已经很厉害 了
22:55 Kagamine Ren: 网好卡，
22:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: FC啦！
22:57 Kagamine Ren: 这也能fc
22:57 Kagamine Ren: 我觉得各种不顺手
22:59 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: dt好难啊(
22:59 Kagamine Ren: （是很难
23:00 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 感觉前面做的挺好 后面有些乱了就
23:01 Kagamine Ren: 乱啊..
23:01 Kagamine Ren: orz
23:04 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:43:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏好不科学
23:04 Kagamine Ren: 这里跟鼓点的
23:04 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 减速的这一段就一直跟着人声就可以了 都是串的话和减速挺矛盾
23:04 Kagamine Ren: 改了很多次 都不是很满意
23:05 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:21:493 (8) - 这个别1.5
23:05 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ...
23:06 Kagamine Ren: 这个不行么...
23:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不是不行.. 但是不好..
23:06 Kagamine Ren: 思考
23:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
23:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可以的话全都1.5就好啦
23:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:07 Kagamine Ren: 233.
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 减速这段挺长的啊
23:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 鼓声敲3/4的部分
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 没串吧..
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 只放了三连
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 就是那么长啊
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我说二连
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也不是二连 00:47:433 (1,2) - 这种把节奏复杂化的
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 白线上也没鼓音啊
23:10 Kagamine Ren: 这样啊
23:11 Kagamine Ren: 懂了
23:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 卡桶挑战 关注十一连患者
23:15 Kagamine Ren: 233
23:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:29:162 (1,2) - 这两个note的音量也变成30啦
23:17 Kagamine Ren: 这里我就是想调成30来着
23:17 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
23:18 Kagamine Ren: 音量我自己感觉着调的 完全不懂
23:18 Kagamine Ren: 感觉到最后音量小一点好
23:20 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0.0哦
23:21 Kagamine Ren: 感觉音量全都要改233
23:21 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 123456788
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:22:621 (4,5,6) - 这里不要放得和前面二分拍间距一样大 制造些差别
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这样容易看出来节奏
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:05:478 (1,2,3) - 这里摆的不好看.. 你随便调一下位置
23:24 Kagamine Ren: 恩浩
23:24 Kagamine Ren: 好
23:24 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:09:312 (2,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156996
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: bg那个好像果果啊
23:25 Kagamine Ren: 二连啊
23:25 Kagamine Ren: 。。
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 又看了看还是不像
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:13:147 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里可以放个串啊 为啥不放
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 发色和眼睛像吧
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对啊
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 串 好主意
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 111111
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 1111
23:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:28:485 (4,5) - 我到这种地方都好想放maimai那种星星梗
23:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可惜没有
23:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:56:907 (2,3) - 这里间距不科学 加个newcombo或者拉远一点
23:28 Kagamine Ren: 没碰过maimai
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯 你问kagamine rin(
23:29 Kagamine Ren: 233.
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:59:162 (3,1) - 这种地方最好把两个弄成对称的
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 复制一个 然后粘贴 ctrl+h ctrl+j ctrl+g什么的
23:30 Kagamine Ren: 嗯 好
23:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:11:794 (3) - 在这里加个finish或者clap
23:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 后面都是13clap 前面是24 中间加点衔接的东西比较好
23:35 Kagamine Ren: 唔..
23:36 Kagamine Ren: 这里我好像后面clap都下错了
23:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我倒是听得还可以啊 或者你把后面的都改了也好(
23:36 Kagamine Ren: 思考
23:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你看
23:38 Kagamine Ren: 看啥.
23:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 看你啊
23:39 Kagamine Ren: orz
23:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对了 我记得sphere是小写的啊
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 是不是一个sphere
23:40 Kagamine Ren: 啊？
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/37202
23:40 Kagamine Ren: 我不太清楚 就知道是个组合
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 那到时候问下清楚这个的吧
23:41 Kagamine Ren: 应该是一个吧
23:41 Kagamine Ren: 我在查一下
23:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 那我就贴论坛啦
23:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好晚了 清了LP睡啦

normal
01:02:771 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157059
01:23:523 (1) - 不好看
一个normal难度, 做那种扭曲的滑条, 至少一拍长的没有必要啊长的做一做就行了

air's hard
都不按ds摆的不能这样请remap

总之都fc了应该图还好吧...

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-21T15:54:57+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

irc

22:28 Kagamine Ren: 大号晚上好呀
22:28 Kagamine Ren: 接不接mod req
22:28 Kagamine Ren: o.o
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0.0
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
22:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 来 发个图
22:29 *Kagamine Ren is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501894 Sphere - Future Stream]
22:29 Kagamine Ren: 1st 可能比较水
22:30 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 我慢慢下(
22:31 Kagamine Ren: 没问题o.o
22:33 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对了 来试试我图啊
22:38 Kagamine Ren: 好呀
22:38 Kagamine Ren: 刚刚拿东西去了
22:39 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/523692 Nitta Emi - Someday of my life]
22:39 Kagamine Ren: owo np
22:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 111
22:40 Kagamine Ren: 哇 果果
22:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 哇 果果
22:43 Kagamine Ren: 下好了
22:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好111
22:44 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 你那个也下好了
22:48 Kagamine Ren: acc好难
22:48 Kagamine Ren: o.o
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: od8
22:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 原来OD8
22:49 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 感觉SV加一点做难一点会比较好玩
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 这样有些慢 还不太好大
22:49 Kagamine Ren: 打
22:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
22:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 有道理
22:50 Kagamine Ren: 有一种很郁闷的感觉o.o
22:50 Kagamine Ren: 另外cinema好厉害
22:51 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: cinema233
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 要是这样做出来能玩就好了
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 就能做出各种音游来(?
22:54 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501894 Sphere - Future Stream]
22:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 来
22:55 Kagamine Ren: 我觉得能想出这种东西来已经很厉害 了
22:55 Kagamine Ren: 网好卡，
22:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: FC啦！
22:57 Kagamine Ren: 这也能fc
22:57 Kagamine Ren: 我觉得各种不顺手
22:59 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: dt好难啊(
22:59 Kagamine Ren: （是很难
23:00 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 感觉前面做的挺好 后面有些乱了就
23:01 Kagamine Ren: 乱啊..
23:01 Kagamine Ren: orz
23:04 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:43:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏好不科学
23:04 Kagamine Ren: 这里跟鼓点的
23:04 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 减速的这一段就一直跟着人声就可以了 都是串的话和减速挺矛盾
23:04 Kagamine Ren: 改了很多次 都不是很满意
23:05 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:21:493 (8) - 这个别1.5
23:05 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ...
23:06 Kagamine Ren: 这个不行么...
23:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不是不行.. 但是不好..
23:06 Kagamine Ren: 思考
23:06 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
23:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可以的话全都1.5就好啦
23:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:07 Kagamine Ren: 233.
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 减速这段挺长的啊
23:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 鼓声敲3/4的部分
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 没串吧..
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 只放了三连
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 就是那么长啊
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我说二连
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也不是二连 00:47:433 (1,2) - 这种把节奏复杂化的
23:10 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 白线上也没鼓音啊
23:10 Kagamine Ren: 这样啊
23:11 Kagamine Ren: 懂了
23:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 卡桶挑战 关注十一连患者
23:15 Kagamine Ren: 233
23:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:29:162 (1,2) - 这两个note的音量也变成30啦
23:17 Kagamine Ren: 这里我就是想调成30来着
23:17 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
23:18 Kagamine Ren: 音量我自己感觉着调的 完全不懂
23:18 Kagamine Ren: 感觉到最后音量小一点好
23:20 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0.0哦
23:21 Kagamine Ren: 感觉音量全都要改233
23:21 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 123456788
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:22:621 (4,5,6) - 这里不要放得和前面二分拍间距一样大 制造些差别
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这样容易看出来节奏
23:23 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:05:478 (1,2,3) - 这里摆的不好看.. 你随便调一下位置
23:24 Kagamine Ren: 恩浩
23:24 Kagamine Ren: 好
23:24 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:09:312 (2,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156996
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: bg那个好像果果啊
23:25 Kagamine Ren: 二连啊
23:25 Kagamine Ren: 。。
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:25 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 又看了看还是不像
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:13:147 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里可以放个串啊 为啥不放
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 发色和眼睛像吧
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对啊
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 串 好主意
23:26 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 111111
23:26 Kagamine Ren: 1111
23:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:28:485 (4,5) - 我到这种地方都好想放maimai那种星星梗
23:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可惜没有
23:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:56:907 (2,3) - 这里间距不科学 加个newcombo或者拉远一点
23:28 Kagamine Ren: 没碰过maimai
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯 你问kagamine rin(
23:29 Kagamine Ren: 233.
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:59:162 (3,1) - 这种地方最好把两个弄成对称的
23:29 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 复制一个 然后粘贴 ctrl+h ctrl+j ctrl+g什么的
23:30 Kagamine Ren: 嗯 好
23:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:11:794 (3) - 在这里加个finish或者clap
23:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 后面都是13clap 前面是24 中间加点衔接的东西比较好
23:35 Kagamine Ren: 唔..
23:36 Kagamine Ren: 这里我好像后面clap都下错了
23:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我倒是听得还可以啊 或者你把后面的都改了也好(
23:36 Kagamine Ren: 思考
23:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你看
23:38 Kagamine Ren: 看啥.
23:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 看你啊
23:39 Kagamine Ren: orz
23:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
23:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 对了 我记得sphere是小写的啊
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 是不是一个sphere
23:40 Kagamine Ren: 啊？
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/37202
23:40 Kagamine Ren: 我不太清楚 就知道是个组合
23:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 那到时候问下清楚这个的吧
23:41 Kagamine Ren: 应该是一个吧
23:41 Kagamine Ren: 我在查一下
23:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊 那我就贴论坛啦
23:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好晚了 清了LP睡啦

normal
01:02:771 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157059
01:23:523 (1) - 不好看
一个normal难度, 做那种扭曲的滑条, 至少一拍长的没有必要啊长的做一做就行了

air's hard
都不按ds摆的不能这样请remap

总之都fc了应该图还好吧...

thanks for modding,大号太好了！

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-10-22T10:10:51+00:00

你看看这，又没按ds，砍了

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Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,572 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-10-22T11:43:42+00:00

IRC on Insane and Metadata

2014-10-22 16:01 Minakami Yuki: so lte's begin
2014-10-22 16:01 Minakami Yuki: let's*
2014-10-22 16:01 Minakami Yuki: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520110 Sphere - Future Stream]
2014-10-22 16:01 Minakami Yuki: 首先我觉得air的那个hard不太行
2014-10-22 16:01 Kagamine Ren: 嗯对
2014-10-22 16:01 Kagamine Ren: 我已经让他整个该一遍了
2014-10-22 16:01 Minakami Yuki: 现在在改？
2014-10-22 16:01 Kagamine Ren: 嗯
2014-10-22 16:01 Minakami Yuki: 哦那就先不看了
2014-10-22 16:02 Minakami Yuki: 尽量让他控制在2.7star左右
2014-10-22 16:02 Minakami Yuki: spread比较好
2014-10-22 16:02 Kagamine Ren: 嗯
2014-10-22 16:02 Kagamine Ren: 好我跟他说一下
2014-10-22 16:03 Minakami Yuki: k
2014-10-22 16:03 Minakami Yuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520476 Sphere - Future Stream [Kokoro's Easy]]
2014-10-22 16:03 Minakami Yuki: 他看得懂中文吗
2014-10-22 16:03 Kagamine Ren: 看不懂
2014-10-22 16:04 Minakami Yuki: 那我单独写一个easy的算了
2014-10-22 16:04 Kagamine Ren: 唔我觉得还是写一下比较好
2014-10-22 16:04 Minakami Yuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520110 Sphere - Future Stream [Normal]]
2014-10-22 16:04 Kagamine Ren: 嗯
2014-10-22 16:04 Kagamine Ren: normal也还不太行..
2014-10-22 16:04 Minakami Yuki: 。。
2014-10-22 16:06 Minakami Yuki: so 意思是我只用看insane么。。
2014-10-22 16:06 Kagamine Ren: 看看nm吧..
2014-10-22 16:06 Kagamine Ren: 对这个不太自信/
2014-10-22 16:06 Minakami Yuki: 嗯……
2014-10-22 16:07 Minakami Yuki: 开头就不太对劲
2014-10-22 16:07 Minakami Yuki: 既然00:02:997 (5,6) - 跟这个，最好开头就都跟这个
2014-10-22 16:07 Kagamine Ren: 。。
2014-10-22 16:08 Minakami Yuki: 要是我的话开头会这么下http://puu.sh/clPQG/090140e8aa.jpg
2014-10-22 16:08 Kagamine Ren: 嗯我觉得还是不跟这个 删掉好了
2014-10-22 16:08 Minakami Yuki: 你太拘谨于白线了 感觉就是
2014-10-22 16:09 Kagamine Ren: o.o
2014-10-22 16:10 Minakami Yuki: 我看了下你整个normal跟在白线上的特别多
2014-10-22 16:10 Minakami Yuki: 和easy感觉没啥差别
2014-10-22 16:10 Kagamine Ren: 这样啊..
2014-10-22 16:11 Minakami Yuki: 当然不是不可以都跟白线
2014-10-22 16:11 Minakami Yuki: 都跟白线的normal基本是没easy的那种-.-
2014-10-22 16:12 Kagamine Ren: 我分不大清做easy和normal的区别..
2014-10-22 16:12 Minakami Yuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/513708 Harada Hitomi - The Brave Under The Summer Sky. [Normal]]
2014-10-22 16:12 Minakami Yuki: 可以给你参考下
2014-10-22 16:13 Kagamine Ren: 好
2014-10-22 16:13 Minakami Yuki: (这个mtb又在强行推销自己的图
2014-10-22 16:13 Kagamine Ren: o.o
2014-10-22 16:15 Minakami Yuki: easy其实就是极度简化节奏
2014-10-22 16:15 Minakami Yuki: 所以基本都是在白线上
2014-10-22 16:16 Kagamine Ren: 嗯..
2014-10-22 16:16 Minakami Yuki: 我自己的图  en这两个的区别应该是很明显的吧.-.
2014-10-22 16:18 Kagamine Ren: 这个nm 放的好满
2014-10-22 16:18 Minakami Yuki: 但是难度也上不去
2014-10-22 16:18 Minakami Yuki: 你是不是怕把n做难了啊
2014-10-22 16:19 Kagamine Ren: 不敢放.
2014-10-22 16:19 Kagamine Ren: 一开始担心超2星了
2014-10-22 16:20 Minakami Yuki: 超了2星也是normal啊
2014-10-22 16:20 Minakami Yuki: 不超2.25就行了
2014-10-22 16:20 Minakami Yuki: 最好就是在2左右
2014-10-22 16:20 Minakami Yuki: 1.71的n一般是没easy的n
2014-10-22 16:20 Kagamine Ren: 这个easy是后来送来的
2014-10-22 16:20 Kagamine Ren: 不是最低难度不能超2星吗
2014-10-22 16:21 Minakami Yuki: 你现在有easy了啊
2014-10-22 16:22 Kagamine Ren: 我做的时候没有  就想着不要超了..
2014-10-22 16:22 Minakami Yuki: 嗯……那现在好好改改吧=w=
2014-10-22 16:23 Kagamine Ren: 好
2014-10-22 16:23 Minakami Yuki: 还有一点就是
2014-10-22 16:23 Minakami Yuki: 00:06:831 (4,5,6) - 
2014-10-22 16:23 Minakami Yuki: 这种节奏还是拿折返滑条代替比较好
2014-10-22 16:24 Kagamine Ren: 好的.
2014-10-22 16:24 Minakami Yuki: 00:27:583 (3,4) - 这里也是 比较明显的蓝线点怎么做到白线上去了=。=
2014-10-22 16:25 Kagamine Ren: 简化过头了  我当时就想着跟着白线一个一个放的..
2014-10-22 16:25 Minakami Yuki: nm的sv 1.1~1.2吧 反正也是要re
2014-10-22 16:25 Minakami Yuki: 这地方不适合简化
2014-10-22 16:25 Kagamine Ren: 厚
2014-10-22 16:25 Minakami Yuki: easy里面这么放折返也是没问题的
2014-10-22 16:25 Minakami Yuki: 稍等 去方便下
2014-10-22 16:26 Kagamine Ren: 。
2014-10-22 16:28 Minakami Yuki: i
2014-10-22 16:28 Minakami Yuki: am
2014-10-22 16:28 Minakami Yuki: back
2014-10-22 16:28 Minakami Yuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501894 Sphere - Future Stream [Hatsukoi]]
2014-10-22 16:28 Minakami Yuki: ok?
2014-10-22 16:29 Kagamine Ren: 好
2014-10-22 16:29 Minakami Yuki: 00:03:899 (7) - 一定是没stack好
2014-10-22 16:30 Minakami Yuki: 00:04:125 (1) - 这里头上我觉得还是补上个finish
2014-10-22 16:30 Minakami Yuki: 00:05:478 (5) - 尾巴whistle
2014-10-22 16:31 Kagamine Ren: 嗯嗯
2014-10-22 16:31 Kagamine Ren: 感觉不错
2014-10-22 16:31 Minakami Yuki: 00:06:831 - 这里把音量提升到50%
2014-10-22 16:32 Kagamine Ren: 音量方面 我不太懂 都是随便凭感觉调的
2014-10-22 16:32 Minakami Yuki: 这里三声finish突出
2014-10-22 16:32 Minakami Yuki: 而且后面基本全局音乐就开始啦
2014-10-22 16:33 Minakami Yuki: 00:06:831 - 之前只能算前奏 30%行
2014-10-22 16:33 Minakami Yuki: 00:07:734 (1) - 同样这里开头也加个finish
2014-10-22 16:33 Minakami Yuki: 00:08:410 (3,7) - 这两个的红线上也补上whistle
2014-10-22 16:34 Minakami Yuki: 00:11:794 (3,7) - 这两声clap感觉不太合
2014-10-22 16:35 Kagamine Ren: 00:10:215 (2) - 那这个不补么
2014-10-22 16:35 Kagamine Ren: 跟前面差不多把
2014-10-22 16:35 Minakami Yuki:  补补补
2014-10-22 16:36 Minakami Yuki: 00:11:794 (3,7) - http://puu.sh/clQTv/dbb174147f.jpg
2014-10-22 16:36 Minakami Yuki: 改drum
2014-10-22 16:36 Minakami Yuki: 这里两个clap太响了,我试了下normal sampleset也觉得偏响
2014-10-22 16:37 Kagamine Ren: 哇还可以这么改
2014-10-22 16:38 Kagamine Ren: 我还以为drum是很响的东西
2014-10-22 16:38 Minakami Yuki: drum不想
2014-10-22 16:38 Minakami Yuki: 响
2014-10-22 16:38 Minakami Yuki: 不过这是什么鼓我说不清 哎 乐理比较差
2014-10-22 16:38 Kagamine Ren: 听了一下感觉跟soft一样..
2014-10-22 16:39 Minakami Yuki: 00:14:049 (1,2) - 这太缩了
2014-10-22 16:40 Kagamine Ren: 放右边会不会不顺手
2014-10-22 16:40 Minakami Yuki: 00:09:087 (6,2) - 对了你这个是stack么
2014-10-22 16:41 Kagamine Ren: 左边的话 没什么合适的地方
2014-10-22 16:41 Kagamine Ren: 应该是的...
2014-10-22 16:44 Minakami Yuki: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2159094
2014-10-22 16:44 Minakami Yuki: 试试看这么放
2014-10-22 16:45 Kagamine Ren: 厚
2014-10-22 16:49 Minakami Yuki: 00:18:561 (1,2) - hmm stack
2014-10-22 16:49 Minakami Yuki: 00:19:463 (4,5) - 这俩弧度看上去不太一样啊-.-
2014-10-22 16:50 Kagamine Ren: ...没用复制
2014-10-22 16:50 Minakami Yuki: 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里的我怎么听都觉得有点怪.0.
2014-10-22 16:52 Kagamine Ren: 这里跟鼓点不好玩想弄个串过度一下
2014-10-22 16:52 Kagamine Ren: 感觉还是挺自然的吧.
2014-10-22 16:52 Minakami Yuki: http://puu.sh/clRrb/eedb01d547.jpg
2014-10-22 16:53 Minakami Yuki: 这样听听？
2014-10-22 16:54 Minakami Yuki: 00:24:764 - 00:25:666 - 
2014-10-22 16:54 Minakami Yuki: 这两个地方加note
2014-10-22 16:55 Kagamine Ren: 思考
2014-10-22 16:58 Minakami Yuki: 这俩白线三连
2014-10-22 16:58 Minakami Yuki: 怎么看怎么不爽
2014-10-22 16:59 Minakami Yuki: 特别这里00:25:666 - 还很清楚
2014-10-22 16:59 Kagamine Ren: 确实  这里改了
2014-10-22 17:00 Minakami Yuki: 00:25:779 (1,2,3,4) - 这个有点蛋疼……
2014-10-22 17:00 Minakami Yuki: http://puu.sh/clRJo/980d1ca619.jpg
2014-10-22 17:00 Kagamine Ren: 这里也蛋疼啊
2014-10-22 17:01 Minakami Yuki: 这种中间那个蓝线应该给人击打感=.=
2014-10-22 17:02 Kagamine Ren: 唔 好吧
2014-10-22 17:02 Minakami Yuki: 00:27:922 (2,3) - 我还是建议全部fin
2014-10-22 17:03 Kagamine Ren: 嗯.
2014-10-22 17:04 Minakami Yuki: 妈蛋我刚刚谁去拿外卖掷色子出来个99
2014-10-22 17:05 Kagamine Ren: 蛤蛤蛤
2014-10-22 17:05 Kagamine Ren: 你也用这个啊
2014-10-22 17:05 Minakami Yuki: 虽然说是谁最低谁去拿
2014-10-22 17:05 Kagamine Ren: 我们都是最小的去拿
2014-10-22 17:05 Kagamine Ren: 然后今天中午我最小 唉
2014-10-22 17:08 Minakami Yuki: 00:34:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的话我比较倾向这么下节奏http://puu.sh/clRYz/db94927b0a.jpg
2014-10-22 17:08 Minakami Yuki: 前面的1/4不太明显啊 后面的比较明显你反而放1/2了
2014-10-22 17:08 Minakami Yuki: 最明显的地方还放了滑条=.=
2014-10-22 17:08 Minakami Yuki: 00:35:478 (6) - 
2014-10-22 17:09 Kagamine Ren: =。=
2014-10-22 17:13 Kagamine Ren: 这里按你说的改了
2014-10-22 17:13 Minakami Yuki: 00:42:922 (7,5) - 这种话条扭曲程度有点大
2014-10-22 17:14 Kagamine Ren: 嗯.
2014-10-22 17:14 Minakami Yuki: 00:44:500 (5) - 头上whistle
2014-10-22 17:15 Minakami Yuki: 01:02:997 (4,1) - 一看就是没复制-.-
2014-10-22 17:16 Minakami Yuki: 01:05:252 (8,2) - 这个可以stack吧=a=
2014-10-22 17:16 Minakami Yuki: 01:07:057 (4,3) - 这两个也可以stack
2014-10-22 17:17 Kagamine Ren: 这种开DS 不方便stack
2014-10-22 17:17 Kagamine Ren: 我就懒得弄了..
2014-10-22 17:18 Minakami Yuki: 也行啦 stack看起来就比较舒服
2014-10-22 17:18 Minakami Yuki: 再说insane也可以不管ds的啊=.=
2014-10-22 17:18 Kagamine Ren: 我弄一下好了
2014-10-22 17:18 Kagamine Ren: =。=
2014-10-22 17:18 Minakami Yuki: 01:16:305 (1,3) - 这个貌似直接藏在slider下面了
2014-10-22 17:18 Minakami Yuki: 不过也可以不动
2014-10-22 17:19 Minakami Yuki: 01:22:621 (4) - 这里最好nc下 鼓点突变不太好读
2014-10-22 17:19 Minakami Yuki: 01:27:019 (1,1,2) - 这里30%也太低了吧 =.=
2014-10-22 17:20 Kagamine Ren: =。=
2014-10-22 17:21 Kagamine Ren: 改了
2014-10-22 17:22 Minakami Yuki: 另外几个metadata的
2014-10-22 17:22 Minakami Yuki: 基本是一定要改的
2014-10-22 17:22 Minakami Yuki: Source: ハツコイリミテッド
2014-10-22 17:23 Kagamine Ren: sorce啊..
2014-10-22 17:23 Minakami Yuki: 把 Hatsukoi Limited 移到tag
2014-10-22 17:23 Kagamine Ren: 我看了别的可以用英文的
2014-10-22 17:23 Minakami Yuki: 尽量用原版
2014-10-22 17:23 Kagamine Ren: 厚吧
2014-10-22 17:23 Minakami Yuki: 加上tag: Rimiteddo
2014-10-22 17:23 Minakami Yuki: スフィア
2014-10-22 17:24 Minakami Yuki: 另外tag里面不是用逗号分开的
2014-10-22 17:24 Kagamine Ren: 对了 sphere到底大写还是小写
2014-10-22 17:24 Minakami Yuki: 半角空格分开
2014-10-22 17:24 Kagamine Ren: 哦哦
2014-10-22 17:24 Minakami Yuki: 你现在这个没错
2014-10-22 17:24 Kagamine Ren: 咦 别人都小号s
2014-10-22 17:25 Kagamine Ren: 有点虚
2014-10-22 17:25 Minakami Yuki: 那我再查一下.-.
2014-10-22 17:25 Kagamine Ren: .-.
2014-10-22 17:26 Minakami Yuki: 现在大小写都有rank的
2014-10-22 17:26 Minakami Yuki: 不过都是至少一年一签的图
2014-10-22 17:26 Minakami Yuki: 以前
2014-10-22 17:27 Kagamine Ren: ._.
2014-10-22 17:27 Kagamine Ren: 那先待定吧
2014-10-22 17:27 Minakami Yuki: 大写
2014-10-22 17:27 Minakami Yuki: 确定
2014-10-22 17:27 Minakami Yuki: http://vgmdb.net/album/44277
2014-10-22 17:29 Kagamine Ren: 厚厚厚
2014-10-22 17:30 Kagamine Ren: 我得吃饭去了 今天太感谢你了，顺便问下只论这个insane的话 离能泡还差多远
2014-10-22 17:31 Minakami Yuki: 稍微还有点距离
2014-10-22 17:31 Minakami Yuki: 主要排列有点乱
2014-10-22 17:31 Kagamine Ren: 好，蟹蟹;w;
2014-10-22 17:31 Kagamine Ren: 我一直都在改排列 心累
2014-10-22 17:32 Minakami Yuki: 主要就是摆的规律一点
2014-10-22 17:32 Minakami Yuki: 嘛
2014-10-22 17:32 Kagamine Ren: o.o
2014-10-22 17:33 Minakami Yuki: 等我把easy的mod
2014-10-22 17:33 Minakami Yuki: 补完 就po上去.-.
2014-10-22 17:33 Kagamine Ren: 嗯 我先走了
2014-10-22 17:34 Kagamine Ren: 88
2014-10-22 17:34 Minakami Yuki: 8

[Kokoro's Easy]

00:01:869 (2,3) - imo whistle at tail is much better than at head
00:05:478 (2,3,4,5) - also, whistle on 3 and 5's head, remove whistle on 2 and 4
00:06:831 (5) - also add finish on tail, repeat and head.
00:07:734 (1) - recommend not to hide a circle (even stack) in easy~
00:11:343 (1) - whistle at head?
00:13:147 (3,4) - swap the whistle and finish?
00:19:012 - add a slidertick sound? feel quite strange without ticksound here....
00:38:410 (3) - whistle?
00:42:922 (1,2) - finish?
00:50:591 (1,2) - swap nc
00:57:358 (1,3) - swap nc?
01:11:794 (1,3) - ^
01:17:207 (4,1) - make a better blanket?

Good luck.~

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-22T17:34:10+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
[Kokoro's Easy] all done
00:01:869 (2,3) - imo whistle at tail is much better than at head done
00:05:478 (2,3,4,5) - also, whistle on 3 and 5's head, remove whistle on 2 and 4 done
00:06:831 (5) - also add finish on tail, repeat and head. done
00:07:734 (1) - recommend not to hide a circle (even stack) in easy~
00:11:343 (1) - whistle at head? done
00:13:147 (3,4) - swap the whistle and finish? done
00:19:012 - add a slidertick sound? feel quite strange without ticksound here....ok
00:38:410 (3) - whistle? done
00:42:922 (1,2) - finish? done
00:50:591 (1,2) - swap nccombo is in circle
00:57:358 (1,3) - swap nc? done
01:11:794 (1,3) - ^ done
01:17:207 (4,1) - make a better blanket? done

Good luck.~

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Harold Miner

Harold Miner 2014-10-23T09:00:34+00:00

Hatsukoi

stream的DS可能还可以大一点
00:03:899 (7) - 和之前的note没叠好
00:10:215 (2,4) - 同上
00:12:245 (5) - NC？
00:25:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 总觉得不太好看
00:39:538 (2,1) - blanket？
00:42:470 (3,4,5,6,7) - DS？
00:44:952 - 感觉这里可以加个note
00:54:425 (8) - 这个和00:53:749 (5) - 做一个blanket应该会好看点
01:05:252 (8,2,3) - 感觉叠起来打起来比较爽
01:09:651 (4,5) - 没叠好
01:09:989 (6,7,8) - 同上
01:12:245 (5,1) - 同上

水平就那样了也不要介意吧

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,490 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-10-23T09:12:41+00:00

no kd
[Metadata]

Source: 初恋限定。
Add them to Tags: hatsukoi limited kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子高垣彩陽豊崎愛生戸松遥

来自于官方网站
reference:
anime：http://www.j-hatsukoi.com/
artist：http://planet-sphere.jp/main.php
另外我建议你加个video，不过bg也得一并换。（用非相关BG是对原作的不尊重，虽然不是一定要换）

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-23T09:50:04+00:00

Harold Miner wrote:
Hatsukoi

stream的DS可能还可以大一点不想太难
00:03:899 (7) - 和之前的note没叠好 fixed
00:10:215 (2,4) - 同上 fixed
00:12:245 (5) - NC？ k
00:25:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 总觉得不太好看换了一种
00:39:538 (2,1) - blanket？....k
00:42:470 (3,4,5,6,7) - DS？ fixed
00:44:952 - 感觉这里可以加个note hmm...k
00:54:425 (8) - 这个和00:53:749 (5) - 做一个blanket应该会好看点 fixed
01:05:252 (8,2,3) - 感觉叠起来打起来比较爽 k
01:09:651 (4,5) - 没叠好 k
01:09:989 (6,7,8) - 同上 k
01:12:245 (5,1) - 同上 k

水平就那样了也不要介意吧

thanks for mod!

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2014-10-23T11:55:03+00:00

送1星就不摸啦
加油

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-23T12:11:27+00:00

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
送1星就不摸啦
加油

Harold Miner

Harold Miner 2014-10-23T12:49:00+00:00

DT之后都5星多了还说不想太难

Harold Miner

Harold Miner 2014-10-24T12:08:49+00:00

Hard

00:25:779 (3,4,5) - 这几个的音量可以考虑逐渐变大
00:47:433 (1,2,3) - 同上
01:21:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
00:34:801 - 这里应该能再放一个note 毕竟大白线空着总感觉不太好
00:53:974 - 感觉这里漏音了
00:56:681 (6) - NC？
00:58:260 - kiai可以考虑从这里开始否则喷泉已经出来了但是没有note打总感觉有点怪
另外hard和insane的难度有点差的太多了总觉得hard有点太简单了

Normal

00:16:079 (3) - 这个应该往后移1/4吧？
00:17:884 (6) - 这个音效似乎是可以去掉的另外觉得应该可以往后延长1/4更符合vocal
00:35:027 - 感觉这里漏音了
00:42:922 (4) - NC？
01:17:433 (2,3) - 总觉得这两个note之间有点奇怪
01:21:719 (4) - 这个应该是3/4的折返吧？
总觉得有些地方和vocal不太符合建议开25%再听听

EZ

前几个OD都是AR减掉1 这个感觉OD2也不错
00:45:177 (4,5) - blanket
00:57:358 (3) - NC？

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-24T14:05:25+00:00

Harold Miner wrote:
Hard
另外hard和insane的难度有点差的太多了总觉得hard有点太简单了 Hard就这个难度正好

Normal

00:16:079 (3) - 这个应该往后移1/4吧？听错.O.
00:17:884 (6) - 这个音效似乎是可以去掉的另外觉得应该可以往后延长1/4更符合vocal 音效fixed
00:35:027 - 感觉这里漏音了k
00:42:922 (4) - NC？ k
01:17:433 (2,3) - 总觉得这两个note之间有点奇怪哪里奇怪...
01:21:719 (4) - 这个应该是3/4的折返吧？嗯听错了
总觉得有些地方和vocal不太符合建议开25%再听听

手贱多给了个KD，BAT pls remove this kd

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2014-10-25T06:54:13+00:00

hi, from M4M~

[General]
・i recommend to change the source "初恋限定。" ⇒　"Hatsukoi Limited". (for reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/8230)
・kiai time is not on scale. if you have any idea, ignore this.

[Kokoro's Easy]
・00:23:964 (1,2) - make blanket more neatly.
・00:45:167 (4) - move to x256:y220. its better to make blanket.
・01:21:709 (1) - the place is too right, so how about use reverse slider and make the length more short?

[Normal]
some sliders end are not on scale. check AImod.(ctrl+shift+a)

・00:07:724 (1,2,3) - circle3 is overlapped to slide1. and it's good if you can remake slider and make blankets.
・00:09:528 (4,5) - ^^
・00:17:197 (5,6) - 　make a blanket.
・00:23:739 (4,5) - a little overlapped, adjust the placement.
・00:27:573 (3,4) - ^^
・00:30:054 (2,3) - objects are covering healthbar and over the window!! it's unrankable issue
・00:37:498 (2) - make it symmetry, it's better look and feel.
・00:45:393 (5,6,7) - it's better to adjust overlapping.
・01:29:152 (1,2) - how about place center?

[AIR'Hard]
・00:39:754 (5,6) - how about making blanket?
・00:45:618 (4,5) - ^^
・01:10:881 (7) - it's long, make half or not reverse and add some objects.

[Hatsukoi]
・00:05:017 (4,5) - copy the slider4 and paste pattern to slider5.
・00:54:641 (1) - near by healthbar, down its place.
・00:59:152 (3) - overlapped to healthbar.

good luck!

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-10-25T10:46:59+00:00

Harold Miner wrote:
Hard

00:25:779 (3,4,5) - 这几个的音量可以考虑逐渐变大√
00:47:433 (1,2,3) - 同上没必要
01:21:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
00:34:801 - 这里应该能再放一个note 毕竟大白线空着总感觉不太好省略有时候效果不见得坏
00:53:974 - 感觉这里漏音了要补就要用1/4，这个难度用不上
00:56:681 (6) - NC？√√
00:58:260 - kiai可以考虑从这里开始否则喷泉已经出来了但是没有note打总感觉有点怪@ren,统一下看看要不要修kiai

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[General]
clap声音太大丽，用AU啥的调低点，然后拉高整体音量. 现在有的地方节奏上压白线的地方感觉头重脚轻，不压白线的地方感觉空荡荡的..
调过timing? 绿线全unsnap了，对齐一下

[Hatsukoi]
30%的音量太小，建议低音量部分调高些
00:03:889 (7) - 建议拿到下面去
00:43:927 (2,4) - 这两只note没听出来跟音乐啊
00:34:566 (8) - finish
01:00:054 (5) - NC
01:22:385 (1,2) - NC对换
01:00:054 (5) - 这根绿线干啥的..后面又没有note

[Hard]
有些间距看着比较别扭..比如00:18:325 (8) - 这只就像后挤进来的一样……放开一点嘛比如这样http://puu.sh/cr47y/d3c278aba2.jpg
00:28:475 (6) - 前后平行一下嘛0.0 #治好多年强迫症#
00:34:566 - finish有奇效
00:42:912 - 、00:43:363 - 、00:43:814 - 均建议加finish
00:56:896 (7) - ^
01:22:611 - ^
01:29:378 (2) - ^

[Normal]
怎么一堆unsnap 没法看啊

[Easy]
看下General调整绿线snap
00:57:348 - 15%音量听不到了吧，可能会unrankable
01:05:017 - 这里finish莫名，建议拿掉

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Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-26T14:42:49+00:00

M o k o r i wrote:
hi, from M4M~

[General]
・i recommend to change the source "初恋限定。" ⇒　"Hatsukoi Limited". (for reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/8230) old maps can't be reference,and it has been checked carefully.
・kiai time is not on scale. if you have any idea, ignore this. fixed

[Normal]
some sliders end are not on scale. check AImod.(ctrl+shift+a) fixed

・00:07:724 (1,2,3) - circle3 is overlapped to slide1. and it's good if you can remake slider and make blankets. k
・00:09:528 (4,5) - ^^ they can't blanket because of the DS
・00:17:197 (5,6) - 　make a blanket. ...k
・00:23:739 (4,5) - a little overlapped, adjust the placement. they must overlap because of the DS
・00:27:573 (3,4) - ^^ ^^
・00:30:054 (2,3) - objects are covering healthbar and over the window!! it's unrankable issue fixed
・00:37:498 (2) - make it symmetry, it's better look and feel. k
・00:45:393 (5,6,7) - it's better to adjust overlapping. k
・01:29:152 (1,2) - how about place center? hmm,i think no

[Hatsukoi]
・00:05:017 (4,5) - copy the slider4 and paste pattern to slider5. k
・00:54:641 (1) - near by healthbar, down its place. can't understand...
・00:59:152 (3) - overlapped to healthbar. [/color]

good luck!

EmingK wrote:
随便看两眼

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore
[General]
clap声音太大丽，用AU啥的调低点，然后拉高整体音量. 现在有的地方节奏上压白线的地方感觉头重脚轻，不压白线的地方感觉空荡荡的.. 还好把.-.
调过timing? 绿线全unsnap了，对齐一下 [/color]

[Hatsukoi]
30%的音量太小，建议低音量部分调高些 k
00:03:889 (7) - 建议拿到下面去 k
00:43:927 (2,4) - 这两只note没听出来跟音乐啊改了
00:34:566 (8) - finish 没必要吧
01:00:054 (5) - NC k
01:22:385 (1,2) - NC对换 k
01:00:054 (5) - 这根绿线干啥的..后面又没有note 我觉得你复制错地方了，不过我知道你说的是什么...fixed

[Normal]
怎么一堆unsnap 没法看啊汗，all fixed

[Easy]
看下General调整绿线snap 这个得用英文.. 我在下面翻译一下吧.._.
00:57:348 - 15%音量听不到了吧，可能会unrankable
01:05:017 - 这里finish莫名，建议拿掉

美丽

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-26T14:54:10+00:00

@KokoroStudiox3

EmingK wrote:
随便看两眼
[Easy]
看下General调整绿线snap Fixed by me
00:57:348 - 15%音量听不到了吧，可能会unrankable Translation: 15%Volume is too low,and maybe unrankable
01:05:017 - 这里finish莫名，建议拿掉 Translation: suggest to remove this Finish

美丽

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-26T14:58:40+00:00

AIR wrote:

Harold Miner wrote:
Hard

00:25:779 (3,4,5) - 这几个的音量可以考虑逐渐变大√
00:47:433 (1,2,3) - 同上没必要
01:21:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
00:34:801 - 这里应该能再放一个note 毕竟大白线空着总感觉不太好省略有时候效果不见得坏
00:53:974 - 感觉这里漏音了要补就要用1/4，这个难度用不上
00:56:681 (6) - NC？√√
00:58:260 - kiai可以考虑从这里开始否则喷泉已经出来了但是没有note打总感觉有点怪@ren,统一下看看要不要修kiai Kagamine Ren:我这的kiai就是这个地方啊...不知道你那的版本过旧还是啥>.<

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zxhzxhz

70 posts

Joined November 2012

zxhzxhz 2014-10-26T19:55:47+00:00

[Hatsukoi]
00:02:197 (5) - overmap
00:15:618 (6,7) - blanket
00:15:618 (6,7,8,1,2) - http://puu.sh/crEMk/317e9cf50d.jpg
8在5下面，滑条轻微调整一下以保持ds，00:17:423 (2) - 也调整一下位置
00:19:904 (5) - 形状调整一下和4一样
00:26:445 (3) - 92,175
00:27:348 (6) - 176,256
00:29:152 (6,7,1) - 这样的连打最好间距保持在0.9（和00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6) - 一样）不然感觉很乱的说，前面后面同样的情况就不列举了
00:45:393 (6) - nc
00:29:152 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/crFFS/b2614ab132.jpg
00:44:490 (3,1) - 这俩弯的太狠了，稍微改一下
00:49:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议这些二连改短滑条，不然非常卡手（可能是因为我实力太弱orz）
01:03:663 (1) - http://puu.sh/crG5g/aabc3e6e92.jpg
01:04:340 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/crGbA/9a303a7918.jpg
01:16:295 (1) - 形状不怎么好看
美丽
偷个懒QAQ
祝你图早日rank

柑橘我毁图功力越来越强了(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻

truonant

408 posts

Joined October 2013

truonant 2014-10-27T01:18:19+00:00

Hello M4M from your queue.

Sorry for late mod, been really busy!

00:05:919 (1) –move to x240 y:224
00:25:769 (1,2,3) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs33G/ad03677031.jpg
00:26:671 (4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs36G/151a692aa2.jpg
00:26:107 (2,3,4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs3xP/ead22a8c60.jpg
00:37:272 (2,3,4,5,6) – make a star pattern shape
Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs41d/e0d413651c.jpg

00:40:205 (1,2) – move so slider head stacks on 00:39:754 (3) –
00:39:979 (4) – move to x212 y340
00:40:881 (3) - move to x164 y:156
00:41:107 (4) - stack on 00:40:656 (2) -

00:51:483 – drum sound?
00:52:385 -^
00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,5) – make star pattern shape
01:13:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:16:972 (3) – hard to read. move around or rotate 01:16:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:21:032 (6,7) – weird distance kills the flow, space these out more

00:01:408 (3) – I think this will look better as a curved slider instead of bezier
00:01:182 (2) – if you’re going to map, you should do the same with 00:02:084 -, 00:02:987 –
00:04:115 (1) – NC here and remove NC from 00:04:791 (1) –
00:07:724 (6) – NC
00:17:423 (6) - - - remove this. It doesn’t fit with the vocals. And it doesn’t make sense to stack on slider head if there’s no syllable like here 00:15:618 (2) -
00:17:648 (7) – shorten to ½ slider and add circle at 00:18:099 –
00:21:032 – add circle and NC
00:21:483 (6) – turn slider into repeat slider
00:23:062 (3) – this slider doesn’t fit the vocals at 00:23:287 –
00:23:964 (4) – doesn’t hit vocal + downbeat at 00:24:415 - . If you insist on using a 6/4
00:25:543 (2) – clap doesn’t fit
00:38:400 (5,6,7) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs6VB/58e0d4c5b9.jpg
00:38:400 (1) – remove NC and add it here 00:40:205
00:54:190 (5,6,7) – inconsistent spacing between these notes

00:45:393 (5) - overlap doesn’t look good and bad flow
01:02:761 (2) – blanket
01:08:175 (6) - stack

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-10-27T07:34:04+00:00

EmingK wrote:
[Hard]
有些间距看着比较别扭..比如00:18:325 (8) - 这只就像后挤进来的一样……放开一点嘛比如这样http://puu.sh/cr47y/d3c278aba2.jpg√
00:28:475 (6) - 前后平行一下嘛0.0 #治好多年强迫症#√√
00:34:566 - finish有奇效√√√
00:42:912 - 、00:43:363 - 、00:43:814 - 均建议加finish √
00:56:896 (7) - ^√
01:22:611 - ^√
01:29:378 (2) - ^√

√√√√√

truonant wrote:

00:01:408 (3) – I think this will look better as a curved slider instead of bezier√
00:01:182 (2) – if you’re going to map, you should do the same with 00:02:084 -, 00:02:987 –
00:04:115 (1) – NC here and remove NC from 00:04:791 (1) –√
00:07:724 (6) – NC√
00:17:423 (6) - - - remove this. It doesn’t fit with the vocals. And it doesn’t make sense to stack on slider head if there’s no syllable like here 00:15:618 (2) - √
00:17:648 (7) – shorten to ½ slider and add circle at 00:18:099 –
00:21:032 – add circle and NC
00:21:483 (6) – turn slider into repeat slider
00:23:062 (3) – this slider doesn’t fit the vocals at 00:23:287 –
00:23:964 (4) – doesn’t hit vocal + downbeat at 00:24:415 - . If you insist on using a 6/4
00:25:543 (2) – clap doesn’t fit√√
00:38:400 (5,6,7) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs6VB/58e0d4c5b9.jpg
00:38:400 (1) – remove NC and add it here 00:40:205 √√
00:54:190 (5,6,7) – inconsistent spacing between these notes√

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Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2014-10-27T08:54:01+00:00

听说要在年底前摸完图

Koroko's Easy

01:19:002 (1) - blanket with 01:17:197 (4) -
kiaitime上加点whistle比较好，比如那些1,3白线上，不然本来kiaitime的音量就这么低，现在打起来像打空气一样
nice diff.

Normal

00:09:528 (4) - 我跟你说，在这种长度下，三点式的滑条是最整洁漂亮的滑条之一，还有一种是00:58:250 (1) - 这样的，我建议你把滑条都改一下，现在这样我觉得很乱，如果你说这是你的风格的话倒也没啥问题，不过我觉得这么吐槽你滑条的我应该不是第一个了
00:23:739 (4,5) - 排列不太好看，重叠部分有点多
00:34:566 - finish
00:35:693 - whistle 改成 finish
00:36:596 - ^
00:45:393 (5) - 节奏古怪，不如改成一个note接一个3/2的滑条
01:08:175 (6) - 你这是坑死人不偿命吗
kiai部分的音效有点混乱我没有看懂，就不评论了（

AIR's Hard

开头的节奏有点古怪，你看00:02:084 - 00:02:987 - 这两处明显有声音你没放note，00:12:009 (2,4) - 这两处没啥音你却放了note
00:45:618 (4,5) - blanket会好看点
01:13:588 - whistle
nice diff

Hatsukoi

这难度名没关系？？
00:59:152 (3) - 可能会挡血条
01:12:686 (1) - Ctrl+G试试
01:21:709 (1) - .......
懒比了就这样好了

然后我的那张图mapset补齐了你可以去摸啦

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-27T15:16:07+00:00

蟆的偷懒打会图怎么这么多mod! stress

zxhzxhz wrote:
[Hatsukoi]
00:02:197 (5) - overmap 故意的.
00:15:618 (6,7) - blanket 这里排列全改了
00:15:618 (6,7,8,1,2) - http://puu.sh/crEMk/317e9cf50d.jpg
8在5下面，滑条轻微调整一下以保持ds，00:17:423 (2) - 也调整一下位置
00:19:904 (5) - 形状调整一下和4一样 k
00:26:445 (3) - 92,175
00:27:348 (6) - 176,256 这两个稍微变了位置
00:29:152 (6,7,1) - 这样的连打最好间距保持在0.9（和00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6) - 一样）不然感觉很乱的说，前面后面同样的情况就不列举了改了
00:45:393 (6) - nc k
00:29:152 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/crFFS/b2614ab132.jpg 参考了一下改了
00:44:490 (3,1) - 这俩弯的太狠了，稍微改一下 k
00:49:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议这些二连改短滑条，不然非常卡手（可能是因为我实力太弱orz） keep
01:03:663 (1) - http://puu.sh/crG5g/aabc3e6e92.jpg k
01:04:340 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/crGbA/9a303a7918.jpg keep
01:16:295 (1) - 形状不怎么好看 k
美丽
偷个懒QAQ
祝你图早日rank
柑橘我毁图功力越来越强了(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻

r
Thanks for mod~!

truonant wrote:
Hello M4M from your queue.

Sorry for late mod, been really busy! np

00:05:919 (1) –move to x240 y:224 hmm...keep
00:25:769 (1,2,3) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs33G/ad03677031.jpg k
00:26:671 (4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs36G/151a692aa2.jpg k
00:26:107 (2,3,4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs3xP/ead22a8c60.jpg k
00:37:272 (2,3,4,5,6) – make a star pattern shape keep.
Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs41d/e0d413651c.jpg mostly changed as you
00:40:205 (1,2) – move so slider head stacks on 00:39:754 (3) –
00:39:979 (4) – move to x212 y340
00:40:881 (3) - move to x164 y:156
00:41:107 (4) - stack on 00:40:656 (2) -
00:51:483 – drum sound?
00:52:385 -^ fixed
00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,5) – make star pattern shape changed a bit
01:13:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ k
01:16:972 (3) – hard to read. move around or rotate 01:16:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - no change..i think it's not difficult in an insane diff
01:21:032 (6,7) – weird distance kills the flow, space these out more k

00:45:393 (5) - overlap doesn’t look good and bad flow k
01:02:761 (2) – blanket k
01:08:175 (6) - stack k

thanks for mod!

Spring Roll wrote:
听说要在年底前摸完图

Normal
00:09:528 (4) - 我跟你说，在这种长度下，三点式的滑条是最整洁漂亮的滑条之一，还有一种是00:58:250 (1) - 这样的，我建议你把滑条都改一下，现在这样我觉得很乱，如果你说这是你的风格的话倒也没啥问题，不过我觉得这么吐槽你滑条的我应该不是第一个了 hao,你这变态喜欢三点式
00:23:739 (4,5) - 排列不太好看，重叠部分有点多 k
00:34:566 - finish k
00:35:693 - whistle 改成 finish k
00:36:596 - ^
00:45:393 (5) - 节奏古怪，不如改成一个note接一个3/2的滑条 k
01:08:175 (6) - 你这是坑死人不偿命吗 fixed
kiai部分的音效有点混乱我没有看懂，就不评论了（我也看不懂

Hatsukoi
这难度名没关系？？为什么有关系
00:59:152 (3) - 可能会挡血条不挡吧
01:12:686 (1) - Ctrl+G试试 k
01:21:709 (1) - ....... ......（换了一个
懒比了就这样好了懒比了，不给kd了

然后我的那张图mapset补齐了你可以去摸啦年底之前

HabiHolic

5,462 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-10-31T12:37:00+00:00

modding soon~

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-31T18:45:49+00:00

Modding sooner

Overall:
00:57:348 - This is an interesting choice for Kiai. Mostly because there's not really any sort of impact point yet, you're doing the pick-ups to the chorus. And you get that in the preview point, but not in the kiai. You should probably put your kiai where the preview point is (And honestly, put your preview point where the kiai currently is)

Insane:
00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's cool that you do the whole 0.5x thing for streams, I do that too, but the emphasis on that is that you need a sort of consistency when dealing with that. This is not consistent.
00:45:618 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:709 (1) - This is a pretty odd slider tbh
01:25:769 (2,3) - Really wish this was farther from (1). It's not bad, but it'd be cooler to show the distance and stuff, especially since there's such big jumps after

Hard:
00:01:408 (2) - Wish this was up a little higher so (1) flows straight to it
00:11:333 (1) - If you're going to do this, spread apart the two red points so the curve is more notable.
00:12:235 (3) - Like I feel like you adjusted the spacing for the sake of making things not overlap but they overlapped anyway so uhhh
00:19:453 (2) - This isn't as pretty as you think
00:33:663 (2) - This hitsound is SUPER out of place, especially since the drum beat is on the white tick, not the red tick (I'm not using my headphones, so if I'm a dumbass, then whoops)
00:38:400 (5,6,1) - I feel like this would be better mapped with removing (6), and having (1) be a jump from (5)
00:46:521 (5) - I really hate it when people go into my maps and are like "fix your blanket" because I honestly don't give two fucks about blankets, but. . . this looks desperately like it wants to be blanketed (or at least curved to match the circle). So either adjust that, or blanket it.
00:57:348 - KIAI IS NOT SNAPPED
01:00:054 (6) - If you're gonna do this, the slider should be like, not super wonky like this.
01:01:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why the stacks??
01:10:881 (7) - The slider isn't the issue, it's the repeat. There's lots of cool words here, but you're just like "nah man repeat"

Normal:
00:04:115 (1) - This curve isn't really working all that great.
00:15:393 (2,3,4) - For a normal, it'd be better to have something assist people into getting the 1/4, such as having it within a repeat or something, rather than just expecting them to feel a triplet on the first vocal line. It's fine to do later, but for normal mode, the most important thing you have to do is establish the fact that you have a pattern as easily as possible.
00:28:475 (4) - This looks way too cramped
00:30:280 (3) - ^
00:35:017 (4,5) - This is kind of odd. Maybe have a note in between these 2 so the syncopation makes a little more sense.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - For normal mode, you generally should try sticking to blue-tick notes being sliders, ESPECIALLY when it's the first in a section. That's because sliders have a bit more leniency, so people will be more successful even if they're not 100% competent in the rhythm.
00:44:716 (4,5) - The direction of the slider wants to go left, but the next note is to the right.
00:47:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - THIS. THIS IS HOW YOU DO IT. Gold star, use this for a reference point on how to deal with all the other things.
00:56:896 (3) - Stack might be a bit confusing for normal players.
00:58:250 (1) - Have (4) flow to this rather than just making it an awkward shift.
00:58:250 - DRUM THEORY. CLAPS ON THE FIRST AND THIRD SMALL WHITE TICK (or 2 and 4, if you're looking at it as measures). REMEMBER THAT.
01:29:152 (1,2) - This is now technically unrankable. Normal diffs should have 2 beats of blank space before the next notes.

Easy:
00:07:836 (1) - Stacks may be very confusing for easy players.
01:27:009 (1) - End this at the same time as the other diffs

For as long as my mod post was, I like the map. I'd suggest getting like, 2 more mods, then calling me back.

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-11-01T02:23:22+00:00

M4M hello.

[Easy]

00:06:821 (5,1) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see.
00:13:137 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved.
00:45:167 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]

00:01:408 (2,3,4) - This flow is not good because it requires sharp changes in angle between each object. Try to make it smoother:
SPOILER
00:06:596 (4,5) - Try to have the slider point in the same direction as the circle's path to it, or stack the circle and slider head.
00:15:393 (2,3) - You have a lot of 3/4 gaps which should be avoided in Easy/Normals. It's best to use 3/4 repeating sliders wherever they happen, like at 00:15:844 and 00:17:648
00:18:551 (1) - This slider should curve down to flow better from previous object.
00:35:468 (5,6) - Same as 00:06:596 (4,5)
00:41:107 (2,3) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - 00:45:618 (6) - Repeating 3/4 slider works much better than circles or ignoring it.
00:55:543 (2,3) - Same as earlier
00:58:250 (1) - Move this down, below 00:57:348 (4) - to flow better.
01:07:272 (5,6) - Don't stack on slider ends
01:22:611 (5,6,7) - Another 3/4 slider would work better here.
SPOILER
01:26:220 (4) - I think you have an extra slider point at the end.

[Hard]

00:05:919 (4) - You should really extend this slider by 1/2 beat or 1/4 beat + add a circle after to follow the music better.
00:06:821 (5) - This is a hard diff, don't ignore the strong music.
00:45:618 (4,5) - overlap is extremely ugly. I would blanket or at least not overlap them.
00:55:318 (2,3) - stacking a circle on the end of a repeat slider is confusing for inexperienced players to read. It's best to unstack.
01:24:190 (1,2) - ^
01:26:220 (6,7) - Can easily get mistaken for 1/2. Make the slider repeat.

[Insane]

00:08:175 (2,3) - awkward play, should ctrl-g (3)
00:32:423 - this is better as a circle so you can have keypress on the vocal
00:40:543 - ^
00:49:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm in this area is hard to read. can't tell when something is 1/2 or 3/4. It's best to make sure that the gaps between objects are 1/2 or 1/4, like what you did 01:09:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was good. You should make 00:49:227 (1,5) - sliders:
01:07:272 (1,2,3) - It's better to eliminate the jump between 01:07:272 (1,2) - so you have more emphasis on the 01:07:949 (2,3) - jump.
SPOILER
01:18:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl-G these so it flows better from previous object.

Normal and Insane need a lot more work tbh with object placement and design. It means you can arrange the objects better to make the map look and play nicer. Good luck~

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,473 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-11-01T02:28:49+00:00

Artist: sphere

路過留個名 =w= nokd

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,490 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-01T13:43:51+00:00

Flask wrote:
Artist: sphere

路過留個名 =w= nokd

wiki can't be used as reference as it's not official, please refer to p/3452861

其实这个大小写都无所谓，之前在这个图已经说过一番了，https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3454195
~~既然F将要看的话那我就歇歇了=w=~~

Akatsuki Nagi

53 posts

Joined July 2014

Akatsuki Nagi 2014-11-01T14:53:02+00:00

pipa要飞啦！！！111
我怀疑我已经被暗地里打得不成人形了QAQ

[Hatsukoi]

01:09:415 (3,5) - 不加whistle感觉少了点东西
00:45:957 (2,3) - 这里太近了，打的时候很别扭，建议交换00:46:295 (3,4) - 和00:47:197 (6) - ，同时你可以考虑把00:46:746 (5) - 换个角度【其实我觉得不换更好
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈
SPOILER
00:49:453 - ~00:51:032 - 这里音没下怎么准吧。。开50%听一下重音是在00:49:227 - 、00:49:566 - 、00:49:904 - 、00:50:130 - 、00:50:468 - 、00:51:032 - 几个地方，如果节奏下满应该这么下↓ 当然如果你不打算这么满（虽然我觉得有必要），起码00:49:566 (2,3) - 这个不能落在白线上
SPOILER

[AIR‘s Hard]

我能不能说我没看懂。。不是太了解这个bpm的hard是什么概念orz
看了一遍感觉没啥太值得吐槽的地方=-=

[Normal]

it seems all things are fine XD 【我真不是偷懒啊不要打我

[Easy]

00:06:821 (5,1) - Maybe not stack here
00:13:137 (3,4) - blanket?
01:04:566 (5) - ctrl+shift+r
SPOILER
01:06:370 (2,4) - blanket
01:21:709 (1) - are u sure it isnt outside? move a little left maybe better (and adjust the notes near this)

哥哥啊你快飞了，飞了之后带带我好不好呀T.T
主难度很不错呢，有努力还是有回报哒>w> 虽然我想说不放二连我们还是好朋友
低难度我现在也在愁。。看不太懂实在说不出几个地方来orz
祝好运w

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-01T15:27:06+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Modding sooner

Overall:
00:57:348 - This is an interesting choice for Kiai. Mostly because there's not really any sort of impact point yet, you're doing the pick-ups to the chorus. And you get that in the preview point, but not in the kiai. You should probably put your kiai where the preview point is (And honestly, put your preview point where the kiai currently is) k,changed

Insane:
00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's cool that you do the whole 0.5x thing for streams, I do that too, but the emphasis on that is that you need a sort of consistency when dealing with that. This is not consistent. changed to 0.5x
00:45:618 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:21:709 (1) - This is a pretty odd slider tbh changed
01:25:769 (2,3) - Really wish this was farther from (1). It's not bad, but it'd be cooler to show the distance and stuff, especially since there's such big jumps after k

Normal:
00:04:115 (1) - This curve isn't really working all that great. ok.changed.
00:15:393 (2,3,4) - For a normal, it'd be better to have something assist people into getting the 1/4, such as having it within a repeat or something, rather than just expecting them to feel a triplet on the first vocal line. It's fine to do later, but for normal mode, the most important thing you have to do is establish the fact that you have a pattern as easily as possible. k
00:28:475 (4) - This looks way too cramped changed
00:30:280 (3) - ^
00:35:017 (4,5) - This is kind of odd. Maybe have a note in between these 2 so the syncopation makes a little more sense. k,it sounds better.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - For normal mode, you generally should try sticking to blue-tick notes being sliders, ESPECIALLY when it's the first in a section. That's because sliders have a bit more leniency, so people will be more successful even if they're not 100% competent in the rhythm. changed to a repeat
00:44:716 (4,5) - The direction of the slider wants to go left, but the next note is to the right. k
00:47:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - THIS. THIS IS HOW YOU DO IT. Gold star, use this for a reference point on how to deal with all the other things.
00:56:896 (3) - Stack might be a bit confusing for normal players. k
00:58:250 (1) - Have (4) flow to this rather than just making it an awkward shift. k
00:58:250 - DRUM THEORY. CLAPS ON THE FIRST AND THIRD SMALL WHITE TICK (or 2 and 4, if you're looking at it as measures). REMEMBER THAT. hmm,you mean use drum claps on all the objects in kiai?,sry can't understand
01:29:152 (1,2) - This is now technically unrankable. Normal diffs should have 2 beats of blank space before the next notes. fixed

For as long as my mod post was, I like the map. I'd suggest getting like, 2 more mods, then calling me back.

thanks a lot! really helpful.

xxdeathx wrote:
M4M hello.

[Normal]
00:01:408 (2,3,4) - This flow is not good because it requires sharp changes in angle between each object. Try to make it smoother:
SPOILER
00:06:596 (4,5) - Try to have the slider point in the same direction as the circle's path to it, or stack the circle and slider head. k,stack
00:15:393 (2,3) - You have a lot of 3/4 gaps which should be avoided in Easy/Normals. It's best to use 3/4 repeating sliders wherever they happen, like at 00:15:844 and 00:17:648 k
00:18:551 (1) - This slider should curve down to flow better from previous object. k
00:35:468 (5,6) - Same as 00:06:596 (4,5) hmm..changed the slider's direction
00:41:107 (2,3) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see. k
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - 00:45:618 (6) - Repeating 3/4 slider works much better than circles or ignoring it. changed this part
00:55:543 (2,3) - Same as earlier fixed
00:58:250 (1) - Move this down, below 00:57:348 (4) - to flow better. moved a little down
01:07:272 (5,6) - Don't stack on slider ends k
01:22:611 (5,6,7) - Another 3/4 slider would work better here. k
SPOILER
01:26:220 (4) - I think you have an extra slider point at the end. fixed

[Insane]
00:08:175 (2,3) - awkward play, should ctrl-g (3) k
00:32:423 - this is better as a circle so you can have keypress on the vocal hmm..can't agree with u on this,i think it's better now
00:40:543 - ^
00:49:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm in this area is hard to read. can't tell when something is 1/2 or 3/4. It's best to make sure that the gaps between objects are 1/2 or 1/4, like what you did 01:09:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was good. You should make 00:49:227 (1,5) - sliders: changed most of this
01:07:272 (1,2,3) - It's better to eliminate the jump between 01:07:272 (1,2) - so you have more emphasis on the 01:07:949 (2,3) - jump. k
SPOILER
01:18:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl-G these so it flows better from previous object. k
Normal and Insane need a lot more work tbh with object placement and design. It means you can arrange the objects better to make the map look and play nicer. Good luck~

Thanks a lot!!!

Nagi awa wrote:
pipa要飞啦！！！111
我怀疑我已经被暗地里打得不成人形了QAQ

[Hatsukoi]

01:09:415 (3,5) - 不加whistle感觉少了点东西 k
00:45:957 (2,3) - 这里太近了，打的时候很别扭，建议交换00:46:295 (3,4) - 和00:47:197 (6) - ，同时你可以考虑把00:46:746 (5) - 换个角度【其实我觉得不换更好改了位置
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER
00:49:453 - ~00:51:032 - 这里音没下怎么准吧。。开50%听一下重音是在00:49:227 - 、00:49:566 - 、00:49:904 - 、00:50:130 - 、00:50:468 - 、00:51:032 - 几个地方，如果节奏下满应该这么下↓ 当然如果你不打算这么满（虽然我觉得有必要），起码00:49:566 (2,3) - 这个不能落在白线上这里跟的鼓点，不过这里节奏前面mod提到了我改了
SPOILER
[Normal]

it seems all things are fine XD 【我真不是偷懒啊不要打我必须大四
哥哥啊你快飞了，飞了之后带带我好不好呀T.T
主难度很不错呢，有努力还是有回报哒>w> 虽然我想说不放二连我们还是好朋友
低难度我现在也在愁。。看不太懂实在说不出几个地方来orz
祝好运w

谢mod，射你

Akatsuki Nagi

53 posts

Joined July 2014

Akatsuki Nagi 2014-11-01T15:37:35+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER

理解错了啦，我是说不应该滑条尾落重音，而实际上这里滑条尾有个重音（更具体其实是蓝线那边），加一个note能对上这里的节奏。test的时候我就感觉挺别扭的=-=

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-01T15:40:47+00:00

Nagi awa wrote:
Kagamine Ren wrote:
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER
理解错了啦，我是说不应该滑条尾落重音，而实际上这里滑条尾有个重音（更具体其实是蓝线那边），加一个note能对上这里的节奏。test的时候我就感觉挺别扭的=-=

可能对重音理解不一样...我觉得那个不是重音..

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-11-01T16:30:38+00:00

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AIR

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Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-02T11:13:55+00:00

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Karen

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Karen 2014-11-02T14:13:17+00:00

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Colourful

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Colourful 2014-11-04T14:43:42+00:00

送一分

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-11-22T06:33:35+00:00

Hatsukoi

00:09:077 (6,2,4) - 这个点重复的好多……把00:10:205 (2) - 移动到x 292 y 328附近，再把00:10:430 (3) - ctrl g ，这样会好一些
SPOILER
00:14:039 (1,1) - 这两个为什么要nc……？;w;00:14:942 (1) - 这里倒是应该nc……
00:20:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然都有音，但是不建议这样stream过去，建议跟一下‘叮叮叮的声音，00:20:355 -和00:20:693 -例如:http://puu.sh/d0yw4/9747a950b2.png或者http://puu.sh/d0yzc/d804039750.png
00:23:964 (1,2,3,4) - 跟vocal吧……http://puu.sh/d0yMC/9de6b5a45f.png，毕竟你00:25:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里都跟了
00:25:318 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列实在不好看……自己再组合组合
00:28:475 (4) - 可以延长到00:28:814 -
00:29:378 (1,2) - 做成滑条，比较符合这里合唱的感觉【？我tm在说什么】
01:12:235 (5,1) - 这个……那么问题来了，这俩感觉不是特别直怎么办……所以01:12:235 (5,6) - 稍微修一下哇
对比图
整容后：整容前：
01:21:483 (8,1,2) - 不好看……改了吧，虽然说摸图应该提出建议，但是每个人的审美是不一样的:3所以我就不附加排列了。
01:25:769 (2,3) - 呜哇……好狠心啊，01:26:220 (3) - 放这么远，放x200 y 208 和01:24:190 (3) - 这个stack吧

kiai和不是kiai的地方ds几乎都是1.8没有什么区别呢……而且ds太高了对于排列来说就不太好控制。再有的问题就是有点乱用往返slider的感觉，也不是说乱用……就是用了以后让player感觉不舒服，例如00:16:746 (1,2) - 这里就让我觉得有些别扭，slider是个有弹性的东西，希望能加以琢磨和善用，虽然我也是作图弱鸡鸡，但是这一点还是能感觉到的

节奏上有些单调了，几乎都是stream/二分之一slider，可以多仔细听听，很多地方可以根据vocal或者bgm里特殊的音而做出不一样的感觉。排列方面虽然不太理想，需要加一点火候:3，不过还是建议加强物件之间的联系，当然也不要太强求了。附上一张bpm差不多，排列比较好我也炒鸡喜欢的一张图http://osu.ppy.sh/b/167963啊……我自以为是地说了好多…/.\

然后是重点要看的nm

你现在这个nm的确有些悲剧了……
其实做nm很简单:3
就是疯狂无脑flow blanket
我做nm是不太喜欢小部分的overlap的，所以我们要调一个适合的sv和一个适合的ds
对我个人来说，当两个1/1slider正好可以blanket成这样的时候就是合适了

SPOILER

于是我采用的是sv 1.3 ds 1.3
.-.其他的有点难以描述，……我尝试做了几秒钟，你可以看看
但是我不建议完全按我的风格来做，因为每个人都有自己喜欢的柑橘，所以慢慢寻找吧少年:3

code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:Normal
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520110
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-103,"op.avi"
0,0,"BOXXy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations

[TimingPoints]
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14829,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
42799,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
57348,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
89603,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255

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148,276,7724,2,0,P|200:260|276:296,1,130

Hard

音量忽大忽小有点吓人……
前奏几个beat没有跟啊，00:02:084 - 00:02:987 -00:06:596 00:08:400 -00:09:302 -00:10:205 -
00:06:821 (5) - 改成一个3/4折返slider吧
00:23:964 (4) - 3/4折返
01:12:235 -01:25:769 -这两个音做一下

Last edited by OblivioN 2014-11-23T09:53:18+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Karen

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Karen 2014-11-22T13:08:20+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
Hatsukoi
00:09:077 (6,2,4) - 这个点重复的好多……把00:10:205 (2) - 移动到x 292 y 328附近，再把00:10:430 (3) - ctrl g ，这样会好一些
SPOILER
嗯好
00:14:039 (1,1) - 这两个为什么要nc……？;w;00:14:942 (1) - 这里倒是应该nc…… 重音想NC一下的..还是去掉了
00:20:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然都有音，但是不建议这样stream过去，建议跟一下‘叮叮叮的声音，00:20:355 -和00:20:693 -例如:http://puu.sh/d0yw4/9747a950b2.png或者http://puu.sh/d0yzc/d804039750.png 这里弄了两个短滑条
00:23:964 (1,2,3,4) - 跟vocal吧……http://puu.sh/d0yMC/9de6b5a45f.png，毕竟你00:25:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里都跟了嗯，改了
00:25:318 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列实在不好看……自己再组合组合后面改成长折返了
00:28:475 (4) - 可以延长到00:28:814 - 看了下好像并不合适，keep
00:29:378 (1,2) - 做成滑条，比较符合这里合唱的感觉【？我tm在说什么】 k
01:12:235 (5,1) - 这个……那么问题来了，这俩感觉不是特别直怎么办……所以01:12:235 (5,6) - 稍微修一下哇好的，你这皮肤看的好清楚，我用的默认..不仔细看还看不出来...
对比图
整容后：整容前：
01:21:483 (8,1,2) - 不好看……改了吧，虽然说摸图应该提出建议，但是每个人的审美是不一样的:3所以我就不附加排列了。好的ww
01:25:769 (2,3) - 呜哇……好狠心啊，01:26:220 (3) - 放这么远，放x200 y 208 和01:24:190 (3) - 这个stack吧嗯好.-.
kiai和不是kiai的地方ds几乎都是180没有什么区别呢……而且ds太高了对于排列来说就不太好控制。再有的问题就是有点乱用往返slider的感觉，也不是说乱用……就是用了以后让player感觉不舒服，例如00:16:746 (1,2) - 这里就让我觉得有些别扭，slider是个有弹性的东西，希望能加以琢磨和善用，虽然我也是作图弱鸡鸡，但是这一点还是能感觉到的节奏上有些单调了，几乎都是stream/二分之一slider，可以多仔细听听，很多地方可以根据vocal或者bgm里特殊的音而做出不一样的感觉。排列方面虽然不太理想，需要加一点火候:3，不过还是建议加强物件之间的联系，当然也不要太强求了。附上一张bpm差不多，排列比较好我也炒鸡喜欢的一张图http://osu.ppy.sh/b/167963啊……我自以为是地说了好多…/.\ 唔，排列真是硬伤啊，看了很多很多图自己摆的时候还是不会摆.感觉没救
然后是重点要看的nm
你现在这个nm的确有些悲剧了……
其实做nm很简单:3
就是疯狂无脑flow blanket
我做nm是不太喜欢小部分的overlap的，所以我们要调一个适合的sv和一个适合的ds
对我个人来说，当两个1/1slider正好可以blanket成这样的时候就是合适了
SPOILER
于是我采用的是sv 1.3 ds 1.3
.-.其他的有点难以描述，……我尝试做了几秒钟，你可以看看
但是我不建议完全按我的风格来做，因为每个人都有自己喜欢的柑橘，所以慢慢寻找吧少年:3
code
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Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
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那个……其他diff等你新的nm出来以后我一起看

谢谢y哥ww，我re完Normal再找你啦ww

Nyark Tolegna

191 posts

Joined December 2013

Nyark Tolegna 2014-11-23T09:06:32+00:00

I was passing by here~

Hard

00:02:084 - 00:02:987 - Need hit circle no ?
00:18:551 (1) - Blanket
00:54:190 (5,6,7) - it would be best to place them perpendicular

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-23T18:06:14+00:00

Coming back in

Overall:
00:07:724 - there ARE drums here, so it'd be nice if you added hitsounds to follow that.

Insane:
00:59:152 (3) - Overlaps with HP bar with standard skin
01:05:468 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe do a different combo color for this since it's hard to see with the video

Hard:
00:07:724 - Not sure if the hitsounds here neccesarily follow the music
00:14:942 - pls claps on 2 and 4
00:36:596 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider
00:46:521 (5) - Finish on end of slider?

Normal:
01:27:009 (1) - If I didn't mention this in my last mod, I'm literally retarded. There's no enough space between then end of the spinner and the next note!

Easy:
01:26:896 (1) - Hitsound or something at the end of this?

biggest issue now is just hitsounds being full and complete. The map itself is mostly fine.

Call me back after.

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-24T08:07:24+00:00

Hard

音量忽大忽小有点吓人…… 从人群中。。。改了
前奏几个beat没有跟啊，00:02:084 - 00:02:987 -00:06:596 00:08:400 -00:09:302 -00:10:205 - 差不多
00:06:821 (5) - 改成一个3/4折返slider吧唔。。
00:23:964 (4) - 3/4折返改成一拍还比较容易理解
01:12:235 -01:25:769 -这两个音做一下

[Hard]00:02:084 - 00:02:987 - Need hit circle no ?
00:18:551 (1) - Blanket
00:54:190 (5,6,7) - it would be best to place them perpendicular

thanks！

Hard:
00:07:724 - Not sure if the hitsounds here neccesarily follow the music
00:14:942 - pls claps on 2 and 4
00:36:596 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider
00:46:521 (5) - Finish on end of slider?

all fixed

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Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-26T10:20:49+00:00

all updated!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-26T23:18:44+00:00

my kudosu

One more thing:

Normal:
01:27:009 (1) - You put the hitsound in the easy but not the normal ;ww;!! pls finish boomtiy boom

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-27T19:16:33+00:00

uguu

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-28T00:01:35+00:00

CDFA wrote:
uguu

thanks!

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-28T07:24:49+00:00

飞腊

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-11-29T04:14:35+00:00

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Artist should be "sphere", not "Sphere"
http://www.planet-sphere.jp/main.php

Also, no Hatsukoi/sphere BG?

Didn't plan to check it but I feel bad by just throwing some random post, lol

[

Easy]
I have no complains here.

[

Normal]
00:06:821 (3) - This blanket could be slightly better.
00:08:626 (3) - ^
00:14:942 (1) - So we have this slider going up and the next slider is in the bottom, not a big deal, but could this slider (1) have the end going down?
00:32:084 (6) - This blanketting (7) would be cool.
00:40:205 (1) - This tiny overlap can be easily avoided. Example: http://puu.sh/d9DLx.png
01:17:423 (3,4) - This really feels weird while playing, as we have the strong vocals, then suddenly you go for the instrumental, it'd be nice to have something like you did in 01:02:987 (3,4) -

[

Hard]
00:34:340 - This beat feels empty with nothing on it, make 00:34:115 (3) - a 1/2 slider with a reverse?
01:12:235 - Something similar about this.
01:25:769 - ^

[

Insane]
00:06:821 (5,6,7,1) - The spacing here is really misleading, as the four notes aren't the same in time, but have a very similar spacing, and the spacing in 00:06:370 (2,3) - is very similar to 00:06:821 (5,6) - , despite being different in time too try using a smaller spacing in 00:07:498 (7,1) - and in 00:06:370 (2,3) -
00:14:490 (10,11) - I don't think this jump fits nicely there, as the next note has not a big impact to deserve it.
00:43:588 (9,1,2,3) - Same issue about misleading 3/4 spacings.
01:25:769 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider for this, I know the intention, but by 1/2 slider you'd have a small pause which would emphasize vocals nicely.

That'd be all, I guess.

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,490 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-29T05:18:08+00:00

okay, artist again:

according to the official site: http://planet-sphere.jp/main.php
some screenshots:

SPOILER

referring to this p/3455523 (it was not disqualified again, cuz it doesn't worth that, but not mean it's good, right?)

"sphere" only appears in picture not text.
in other words, both fine but we prefer Sphere more.

Karen

2,874 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-29T06:07:22+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Artist should be "sphere", not "Sphere" As fycho said, 'Sphere' has no problem here
http://www.planet-sphere.jp/main.php

Also, no Hatsukoi/sphere BG? i can't find a nice BG which related to this song for this map.and,i think it's not a big issue,if you can find one,ok,i will change it

Didn't plan to check it but I feel bad by just throwing some random post, lol

[ Easy]
I have no complains here.

[ Normal]
00:06:821 (3) - This blanket could be slightly better.
00:08:626 (3) - ^
00:14:942 (1) - So we have this slider going up and the next slider is in the bottom, not a big deal, but could this slider (1) have the end going down?
00:32:084 (6) - This blanketting (7) would be cool.
00:40:205 (1) - This tiny overlap can be easily avoided. Example: http://puu.sh/d9DLx.png
01:17:423 (3,4) - This really feels weird while playing, as we have the strong vocals, then suddenly you go for the instrumental, it'd be nice to have something like you did in 01:02:987 (3,4) -

[ Insane]
00:06:821 (5,6,7,1) - The spacing here is really misleading, as the four notes aren't the same in time, but have a very similar spacing, and the spacing in 00:06:370 (2,3) - is very similar to 00:06:821 (5,6) - , despite being different in time too try using a smaller spacing in 00:07:498 (7,1) - and in 00:06:370 (2,3) -
00:14:490 (10,11) - I don't think this jump fits nicely there, as the next note has not a big impact to deserve it.
00:43:588 (9,1,2,3) - Same issue about misleading 3/4 spacings.
01:25:769 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider for this, I know the intention, but by 1/2 slider you'd have a small pause which would emphasize vocals nicely.

That'd be all, I guess.

my part all fixed,thanks!

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-11-29T06:56:15+00:00

:C

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-29T19:56:12+00:00

Man I'm gonna need some industrial bubbles or something with how much they get popped

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-30T12:19:32+00:00

osu file format v13

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284,240,64115,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65468,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67272,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68175,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69077,5,6,0:0:0:0:
28,344,69415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69979,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70881,2,0,P|136:48|88:144,1,251.999992309571,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,150,71784,6,0,P|148:132|268:144,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,72460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,72686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,192,72912,2,0,L|504:204,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,284,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,73588,2,0,P|304:204|208:216,1,167.999994873047,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|388:336,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85318,2,0,B|432:96|432:96|364:100|364:100|316:92,1,167.999994873047,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,44,86220,2,0,B|152:96|152:96|144:140|144:140|172:188,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,4,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,4,0:0:0:0:

all fixed

Karen

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Karen 2014-11-30T14:18:44+00:00

ok
all updated!

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2014-12-02T03:56:12+00:00

First of all, I apologize for rushing a bubble pop. As both are correct, artist can stay for consistency with the other ranked versions of this song.
About the BG, eh, I haven't watched the show so I can't help much here and not going to be picky about this.

Just a few stuff I'd want to say before rebubble.

[Normal]
00:14:942 (1) - Rotate this 20° anti-clockwise, so it leads better to the next slider
00:40:205 (1) - I think you're missing a whistle here.
01:17:423 (3) - Remove the finish in the end and add it in the beginning of 01:17:874 (4) - also, you could try moving a bit the long slider because the way it leads next note is a bit bad.

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:12:235 (1) - A finish in the end would be nice.
01:25:769 - ^ Same here, add the whistle like in the previous slider too.

[Insane]
00:14:716 (11) - You could try removing this note to keep clean the strongest beats here.

Don't kudosu this post, poke me back.

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