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HabiHolic

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-10-31T12:37:00+00:00

modding soon~

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-31T18:45:49+00:00

Modding sooner

Overall:
00:57:348 - This is an interesting choice for Kiai. Mostly because there's not really any sort of impact point yet, you're doing the pick-ups to the chorus. And you get that in the preview point, but not in the kiai. You should probably put your kiai where the preview point is (And honestly, put your preview point where the kiai currently is)

Insane:
00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's cool that you do the whole 0.5x thing for streams, I do that too, but the emphasis on that is that you need a sort of consistency when dealing with that. This is not consistent.
00:45:618 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:709 (1) - This is a pretty odd slider tbh
01:25:769 (2,3) - Really wish this was farther from (1). It's not bad, but it'd be cooler to show the distance and stuff, especially since there's such big jumps after

Hard:
00:01:408 (2) - Wish this was up a little higher so (1) flows straight to it
00:11:333 (1) - If you're going to do this, spread apart the two red points so the curve is more notable.
00:12:235 (3) - Like I feel like you adjusted the spacing for the sake of making things not overlap but they overlapped anyway so uhhh
00:19:453 (2) - This isn't as pretty as you think
00:33:663 (2) - This hitsound is SUPER out of place, especially since the drum beat is on the white tick, not the red tick (I'm not using my headphones, so if I'm a dumbass, then whoops)
00:38:400 (5,6,1) - I feel like this would be better mapped with removing (6), and having (1) be a jump from (5)
00:46:521 (5) - I really hate it when people go into my maps and are like "fix your blanket" because I honestly don't give two fucks about blankets, but. . . this looks desperately like it wants to be blanketed (or at least curved to match the circle). So either adjust that, or blanket it.
00:57:348 - KIAI IS NOT SNAPPED
01:00:054 (6) - If you're gonna do this, the slider should be like, not super wonky like this.
01:01:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why the stacks??
01:10:881 (7) - The slider isn't the issue, it's the repeat. There's lots of cool words here, but you're just like "nah man repeat"

Normal:
00:04:115 (1) - This curve isn't really working all that great.
00:15:393 (2,3,4) - For a normal, it'd be better to have something assist people into getting the 1/4, such as having it within a repeat or something, rather than just expecting them to feel a triplet on the first vocal line. It's fine to do later, but for normal mode, the most important thing you have to do is establish the fact that you have a pattern as easily as possible.
00:28:475 (4) - This looks way too cramped
00:30:280 (3) - ^
00:35:017 (4,5) - This is kind of odd. Maybe have a note in between these 2 so the syncopation makes a little more sense.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - For normal mode, you generally should try sticking to blue-tick notes being sliders, ESPECIALLY when it's the first in a section. That's because sliders have a bit more leniency, so people will be more successful even if they're not 100% competent in the rhythm.
00:44:716 (4,5) - The direction of the slider wants to go left, but the next note is to the right.
00:47:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - THIS. THIS IS HOW YOU DO IT. Gold star, use this for a reference point on how to deal with all the other things.
00:56:896 (3) - Stack might be a bit confusing for normal players.
00:58:250 (1) - Have (4) flow to this rather than just making it an awkward shift.
00:58:250 - DRUM THEORY. CLAPS ON THE FIRST AND THIRD SMALL WHITE TICK (or 2 and 4, if you're looking at it as measures). REMEMBER THAT.
01:29:152 (1,2) - This is now technically unrankable. Normal diffs should have 2 beats of blank space before the next notes.

Easy:
00:07:836 (1) - Stacks may be very confusing for easy players.
01:27:009 (1) - End this at the same time as the other diffs

For as long as my mod post was, I like the map. I'd suggest getting like, 2 more mods, then calling me back.

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-11-01T02:23:22+00:00

M4M hello.

[Easy]

00:06:821 (5,1) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see.
00:13:137 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved.
00:45:167 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]

00:01:408 (2,3,4) - This flow is not good because it requires sharp changes in angle between each object. Try to make it smoother:
SPOILER
00:06:596 (4,5) - Try to have the slider point in the same direction as the circle's path to it, or stack the circle and slider head.
00:15:393 (2,3) - You have a lot of 3/4 gaps which should be avoided in Easy/Normals. It's best to use 3/4 repeating sliders wherever they happen, like at 00:15:844 and 00:17:648
00:18:551 (1) - This slider should curve down to flow better from previous object.
00:35:468 (5,6) - Same as 00:06:596 (4,5)
00:41:107 (2,3) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - 00:45:618 (6) - Repeating 3/4 slider works much better than circles or ignoring it.
00:55:543 (2,3) - Same as earlier
00:58:250 (1) - Move this down, below 00:57:348 (4) - to flow better.
01:07:272 (5,6) - Don't stack on slider ends
01:22:611 (5,6,7) - Another 3/4 slider would work better here.
SPOILER
01:26:220 (4) - I think you have an extra slider point at the end.

[Hard]

00:05:919 (4) - You should really extend this slider by 1/2 beat or 1/4 beat + add a circle after to follow the music better.
00:06:821 (5) - This is a hard diff, don't ignore the strong music.
00:45:618 (4,5) - overlap is extremely ugly. I would blanket or at least not overlap them.
00:55:318 (2,3) - stacking a circle on the end of a repeat slider is confusing for inexperienced players to read. It's best to unstack.
01:24:190 (1,2) - ^
01:26:220 (6,7) - Can easily get mistaken for 1/2. Make the slider repeat.

[Insane]

00:08:175 (2,3) - awkward play, should ctrl-g (3)
00:32:423 - this is better as a circle so you can have keypress on the vocal
00:40:543 - ^
00:49:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm in this area is hard to read. can't tell when something is 1/2 or 3/4. It's best to make sure that the gaps between objects are 1/2 or 1/4, like what you did 01:09:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was good. You should make 00:49:227 (1,5) - sliders:
01:07:272 (1,2,3) - It's better to eliminate the jump between 01:07:272 (1,2) - so you have more emphasis on the 01:07:949 (2,3) - jump.
SPOILER
01:18:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl-G these so it flows better from previous object.

Normal and Insane need a lot more work tbh with object placement and design. It means you can arrange the objects better to make the map look and play nicer. Good luck~

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-11-01T02:28:49+00:00

Artist: sphere

路過留個名 =w= nokd

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-01T13:43:51+00:00

Flask wrote:
Artist: sphere

路過留個名 =w= nokd

wiki can't be used as reference as it's not official, please refer to p/3452861

其实这个大小写都无所谓，之前在这个图已经说过一番了，https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3454195
~~既然F将要看的话那我就歇歇了=w=~~

Akatsuki Nagi

53 posts

Joined July 2014

Akatsuki Nagi 2014-11-01T14:53:02+00:00

pipa要飞啦！！！111
我怀疑我已经被暗地里打得不成人形了QAQ

[Hatsukoi]

01:09:415 (3,5) - 不加whistle感觉少了点东西
00:45:957 (2,3) - 这里太近了，打的时候很别扭，建议交换00:46:295 (3,4) - 和00:47:197 (6) - ，同时你可以考虑把00:46:746 (5) - 换个角度【其实我觉得不换更好
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈
SPOILER
00:49:453 - ~00:51:032 - 这里音没下怎么准吧。。开50%听一下重音是在00:49:227 - 、00:49:566 - 、00:49:904 - 、00:50:130 - 、00:50:468 - 、00:51:032 - 几个地方，如果节奏下满应该这么下↓ 当然如果你不打算这么满（虽然我觉得有必要），起码00:49:566 (2,3) - 这个不能落在白线上
SPOILER

[AIR‘s Hard]

我能不能说我没看懂。。不是太了解这个bpm的hard是什么概念orz
看了一遍感觉没啥太值得吐槽的地方=-=

[Normal]

it seems all things are fine XD 【我真不是偷懒啊不要打我

[Easy]

00:06:821 (5,1) - Maybe not stack here
00:13:137 (3,4) - blanket?
01:04:566 (5) - ctrl+shift+r
SPOILER
01:06:370 (2,4) - blanket
01:21:709 (1) - are u sure it isnt outside? move a little left maybe better (and adjust the notes near this)

哥哥啊你快飞了，飞了之后带带我好不好呀T.T
主难度很不错呢，有努力还是有回报哒>w> 虽然我想说不放二连我们还是好朋友
低难度我现在也在愁。。看不太懂实在说不出几个地方来orz
祝好运w

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-01T15:27:06+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Modding sooner

Overall:
00:57:348 - This is an interesting choice for Kiai. Mostly because there's not really any sort of impact point yet, you're doing the pick-ups to the chorus. And you get that in the preview point, but not in the kiai. You should probably put your kiai where the preview point is (And honestly, put your preview point where the kiai currently is) k,changed

Insane:
00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's cool that you do the whole 0.5x thing for streams, I do that too, but the emphasis on that is that you need a sort of consistency when dealing with that. This is not consistent. changed to 0.5x
00:45:618 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:21:709 (1) - This is a pretty odd slider tbh changed
01:25:769 (2,3) - Really wish this was farther from (1). It's not bad, but it'd be cooler to show the distance and stuff, especially since there's such big jumps after k

Normal:
00:04:115 (1) - This curve isn't really working all that great. ok.changed.
00:15:393 (2,3,4) - For a normal, it'd be better to have something assist people into getting the 1/4, such as having it within a repeat or something, rather than just expecting them to feel a triplet on the first vocal line. It's fine to do later, but for normal mode, the most important thing you have to do is establish the fact that you have a pattern as easily as possible. k
00:28:475 (4) - This looks way too cramped changed
00:30:280 (3) - ^
00:35:017 (4,5) - This is kind of odd. Maybe have a note in between these 2 so the syncopation makes a little more sense. k,it sounds better.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - For normal mode, you generally should try sticking to blue-tick notes being sliders, ESPECIALLY when it's the first in a section. That's because sliders have a bit more leniency, so people will be more successful even if they're not 100% competent in the rhythm. changed to a repeat
00:44:716 (4,5) - The direction of the slider wants to go left, but the next note is to the right. k
00:47:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - THIS. THIS IS HOW YOU DO IT. Gold star, use this for a reference point on how to deal with all the other things.
00:56:896 (3) - Stack might be a bit confusing for normal players. k
00:58:250 (1) - Have (4) flow to this rather than just making it an awkward shift. k
00:58:250 - DRUM THEORY. CLAPS ON THE FIRST AND THIRD SMALL WHITE TICK (or 2 and 4, if you're looking at it as measures). REMEMBER THAT. hmm,you mean use drum claps on all the objects in kiai?,sry can't understand
01:29:152 (1,2) - This is now technically unrankable. Normal diffs should have 2 beats of blank space before the next notes. fixed

For as long as my mod post was, I like the map. I'd suggest getting like, 2 more mods, then calling me back.

thanks a lot! really helpful.

xxdeathx wrote:
M4M hello.

[Normal]
00:01:408 (2,3,4) - This flow is not good because it requires sharp changes in angle between each object. Try to make it smoother:
SPOILER
00:06:596 (4,5) - Try to have the slider point in the same direction as the circle's path to it, or stack the circle and slider head. k,stack
00:15:393 (2,3) - You have a lot of 3/4 gaps which should be avoided in Easy/Normals. It's best to use 3/4 repeating sliders wherever they happen, like at 00:15:844 and 00:17:648 k
00:18:551 (1) - This slider should curve down to flow better from previous object. k
00:35:468 (5,6) - Same as 00:06:596 (4,5) hmm..changed the slider's direction
00:41:107 (2,3) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see. k
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - 00:45:618 (6) - Repeating 3/4 slider works much better than circles or ignoring it. changed this part
00:55:543 (2,3) - Same as earlier fixed
00:58:250 (1) - Move this down, below 00:57:348 (4) - to flow better. moved a little down
01:07:272 (5,6) - Don't stack on slider ends k
01:22:611 (5,6,7) - Another 3/4 slider would work better here. k
SPOILER
01:26:220 (4) - I think you have an extra slider point at the end. fixed

[Insane]
00:08:175 (2,3) - awkward play, should ctrl-g (3) k
00:32:423 - this is better as a circle so you can have keypress on the vocal hmm..can't agree with u on this,i think it's better now
00:40:543 - ^
00:49:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm in this area is hard to read. can't tell when something is 1/2 or 3/4. It's best to make sure that the gaps between objects are 1/2 or 1/4, like what you did 01:09:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was good. You should make 00:49:227 (1,5) - sliders: changed most of this
01:07:272 (1,2,3) - It's better to eliminate the jump between 01:07:272 (1,2) - so you have more emphasis on the 01:07:949 (2,3) - jump. k
SPOILER
01:18:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl-G these so it flows better from previous object. k
Normal and Insane need a lot more work tbh with object placement and design. It means you can arrange the objects better to make the map look and play nicer. Good luck~

Thanks a lot!!!

Nagi awa wrote:
pipa要飞啦！！！111
我怀疑我已经被暗地里打得不成人形了QAQ

[Hatsukoi]

01:09:415 (3,5) - 不加whistle感觉少了点东西 k
00:45:957 (2,3) - 这里太近了，打的时候很别扭，建议交换00:46:295 (3,4) - 和00:47:197 (6) - ，同时你可以考虑把00:46:746 (5) - 换个角度【其实我觉得不换更好改了位置
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER
00:49:453 - ~00:51:032 - 这里音没下怎么准吧。。开50%听一下重音是在00:49:227 - 、00:49:566 - 、00:49:904 - 、00:50:130 - 、00:50:468 - 、00:51:032 - 几个地方，如果节奏下满应该这么下↓ 当然如果你不打算这么满（虽然我觉得有必要），起码00:49:566 (2,3) - 这个不能落在白线上这里跟的鼓点，不过这里节奏前面mod提到了我改了
SPOILER
[Normal]

it seems all things are fine XD 【我真不是偷懒啊不要打我必须大四
哥哥啊你快飞了，飞了之后带带我好不好呀T.T
主难度很不错呢，有努力还是有回报哒>w> 虽然我想说不放二连我们还是好朋友
低难度我现在也在愁。。看不太懂实在说不出几个地方来orz
祝好运w

谢mod，射你

Akatsuki Nagi

53 posts

Joined July 2014

Akatsuki Nagi 2014-11-01T15:37:35+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER

理解错了啦，我是说不应该滑条尾落重音，而实际上这里滑条尾有个重音（更具体其实是蓝线那边），加一个note能对上这里的节奏。test的时候我就感觉挺别扭的=-=

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-01T15:40:47+00:00

Nagi awa wrote:
Kagamine Ren wrote:
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER
理解错了啦，我是说不应该滑条尾落重音，而实际上这里滑条尾有个重音（更具体其实是蓝线那边），加一个note能对上这里的节奏。test的时候我就感觉挺别扭的=-=

可能对重音理解不一样...我觉得那个不是重音..

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-11-01T16:30:38+00:00

SPOILER

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AIR

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Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-02T11:13:55+00:00

osu file format v13

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Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
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Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-02T14:13:17+00:00

All diffs updated

Colourful

80 posts

Joined July 2012

Colourful 2014-11-04T14:43:42+00:00

送一分

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-11-22T06:33:35+00:00

Hatsukoi

00:09:077 (6,2,4) - 这个点重复的好多……把00:10:205 (2) - 移动到x 292 y 328附近，再把00:10:430 (3) - ctrl g ，这样会好一些
SPOILER
00:14:039 (1,1) - 这两个为什么要nc……？;w;00:14:942 (1) - 这里倒是应该nc……
00:20:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然都有音，但是不建议这样stream过去，建议跟一下‘叮叮叮的声音，00:20:355 -和00:20:693 -例如:http://puu.sh/d0yw4/9747a950b2.png或者http://puu.sh/d0yzc/d804039750.png
00:23:964 (1,2,3,4) - 跟vocal吧……http://puu.sh/d0yMC/9de6b5a45f.png，毕竟你00:25:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里都跟了
00:25:318 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列实在不好看……自己再组合组合
00:28:475 (4) - 可以延长到00:28:814 -
00:29:378 (1,2) - 做成滑条，比较符合这里合唱的感觉【？我tm在说什么】
01:12:235 (5,1) - 这个……那么问题来了，这俩感觉不是特别直怎么办……所以01:12:235 (5,6) - 稍微修一下哇
对比图
整容后：整容前：
01:21:483 (8,1,2) - 不好看……改了吧，虽然说摸图应该提出建议，但是每个人的审美是不一样的:3所以我就不附加排列了。
01:25:769 (2,3) - 呜哇……好狠心啊，01:26:220 (3) - 放这么远，放x200 y 208 和01:24:190 (3) - 这个stack吧

kiai和不是kiai的地方ds几乎都是1.8没有什么区别呢……而且ds太高了对于排列来说就不太好控制。再有的问题就是有点乱用往返slider的感觉，也不是说乱用……就是用了以后让player感觉不舒服，例如00:16:746 (1,2) - 这里就让我觉得有些别扭，slider是个有弹性的东西，希望能加以琢磨和善用，虽然我也是作图弱鸡鸡，但是这一点还是能感觉到的

节奏上有些单调了，几乎都是stream/二分之一slider，可以多仔细听听，很多地方可以根据vocal或者bgm里特殊的音而做出不一样的感觉。排列方面虽然不太理想，需要加一点火候:3，不过还是建议加强物件之间的联系，当然也不要太强求了。附上一张bpm差不多，排列比较好我也炒鸡喜欢的一张图http://osu.ppy.sh/b/167963啊……我自以为是地说了好多…/.\

然后是重点要看的nm

你现在这个nm的确有些悲剧了……
其实做nm很简单:3
就是疯狂无脑flow blanket
我做nm是不太喜欢小部分的overlap的，所以我们要调一个适合的sv和一个适合的ds
对我个人来说，当两个1/1slider正好可以blanket成这样的时候就是合适了

SPOILER

于是我采用的是sv 1.3 ds 1.3
.-.其他的有点难以描述，……我尝试做了几秒钟，你可以看看
但是我不建议完全按我的风格来做，因为每个人都有自己喜欢的柑橘，所以慢慢寻找吧少年:3

code

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Hard

音量忽大忽小有点吓人……
前奏几个beat没有跟啊，00:02:084 - 00:02:987 -00:06:596 00:08:400 -00:09:302 -00:10:205 -
00:06:821 (5) - 改成一个3/4折返slider吧
00:23:964 (4) - 3/4折返
01:12:235 -01:25:769 -这两个音做一下

Last edited by OblivioN 2014-11-23T09:53:18+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-22T13:08:20+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
Hatsukoi
00:09:077 (6,2,4) - 这个点重复的好多……把00:10:205 (2) - 移动到x 292 y 328附近，再把00:10:430 (3) - ctrl g ，这样会好一些
SPOILER
嗯好
00:14:039 (1,1) - 这两个为什么要nc……？;w;00:14:942 (1) - 这里倒是应该nc…… 重音想NC一下的..还是去掉了
00:20:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然都有音，但是不建议这样stream过去，建议跟一下‘叮叮叮的声音，00:20:355 -和00:20:693 -例如:http://puu.sh/d0yw4/9747a950b2.png或者http://puu.sh/d0yzc/d804039750.png 这里弄了两个短滑条
00:23:964 (1,2,3,4) - 跟vocal吧……http://puu.sh/d0yMC/9de6b5a45f.png，毕竟你00:25:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里都跟了嗯，改了
00:25:318 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列实在不好看……自己再组合组合后面改成长折返了
00:28:475 (4) - 可以延长到00:28:814 - 看了下好像并不合适，keep
00:29:378 (1,2) - 做成滑条，比较符合这里合唱的感觉【？我tm在说什么】 k
01:12:235 (5,1) - 这个……那么问题来了，这俩感觉不是特别直怎么办……所以01:12:235 (5,6) - 稍微修一下哇好的，你这皮肤看的好清楚，我用的默认..不仔细看还看不出来...
对比图
整容后：整容前：
01:21:483 (8,1,2) - 不好看……改了吧，虽然说摸图应该提出建议，但是每个人的审美是不一样的:3所以我就不附加排列了。好的ww
01:25:769 (2,3) - 呜哇……好狠心啊，01:26:220 (3) - 放这么远，放x200 y 208 和01:24:190 (3) - 这个stack吧嗯好.-.
kiai和不是kiai的地方ds几乎都是180没有什么区别呢……而且ds太高了对于排列来说就不太好控制。再有的问题就是有点乱用往返slider的感觉，也不是说乱用……就是用了以后让player感觉不舒服，例如00:16:746 (1,2) - 这里就让我觉得有些别扭，slider是个有弹性的东西，希望能加以琢磨和善用，虽然我也是作图弱鸡鸡，但是这一点还是能感觉到的节奏上有些单调了，几乎都是stream/二分之一slider，可以多仔细听听，很多地方可以根据vocal或者bgm里特殊的音而做出不一样的感觉。排列方面虽然不太理想，需要加一点火候:3，不过还是建议加强物件之间的联系，当然也不要太强求了。附上一张bpm差不多，排列比较好我也炒鸡喜欢的一张图http://osu.ppy.sh/b/167963啊……我自以为是地说了好多…/.\ 唔，排列真是硬伤啊，看了很多很多图自己摆的时候还是不会摆.感觉没救
然后是重点要看的nm
你现在这个nm的确有些悲剧了……
其实做nm很简单:3
就是疯狂无脑flow blanket
我做nm是不太喜欢小部分的overlap的，所以我们要调一个适合的sv和一个适合的ds
对我个人来说，当两个1/1slider正好可以blanket成这样的时候就是合适了
SPOILER
于是我采用的是sv 1.3 ds 1.3
.-.其他的有点难以描述，……我尝试做了几秒钟，你可以看看
但是我不建议完全按我的风格来做，因为每个人都有自己喜欢的柑橘，所以慢慢寻找吧少年:3
code
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Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
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那个……其他diff等你新的nm出来以后我一起看

谢谢y哥ww，我re完Normal再找你啦ww

Nyark Tolegna

191 posts

Joined December 2013

Nyark Tolegna 2014-11-23T09:06:32+00:00

I was passing by here~

Hard

00:02:084 - 00:02:987 - Need hit circle no ?
00:18:551 (1) - Blanket
00:54:190 (5,6,7) - it would be best to place them perpendicular

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-23T18:06:14+00:00

Coming back in

Overall:
00:07:724 - there ARE drums here, so it'd be nice if you added hitsounds to follow that.

Insane:
00:59:152 (3) - Overlaps with HP bar with standard skin
01:05:468 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe do a different combo color for this since it's hard to see with the video

Hard:
00:07:724 - Not sure if the hitsounds here neccesarily follow the music
00:14:942 - pls claps on 2 and 4
00:36:596 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider
00:46:521 (5) - Finish on end of slider?

Normal:
01:27:009 (1) - If I didn't mention this in my last mod, I'm literally retarded. There's no enough space between then end of the spinner and the next note!

Easy:
01:26:896 (1) - Hitsound or something at the end of this?

biggest issue now is just hitsounds being full and complete. The map itself is mostly fine.

Call me back after.

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-24T08:07:24+00:00

Hard

音量忽大忽小有点吓人…… 从人群中。。。改了
前奏几个beat没有跟啊，00:02:084 - 00:02:987 -00:06:596 00:08:400 -00:09:302 -00:10:205 - 差不多
00:06:821 (5) - 改成一个3/4折返slider吧唔。。
00:23:964 (4) - 3/4折返改成一拍还比较容易理解
01:12:235 -01:25:769 -这两个音做一下

[Hard]00:02:084 - 00:02:987 - Need hit circle no ?
00:18:551 (1) - Blanket
00:54:190 (5,6,7) - it would be best to place them perpendicular

thanks！

Hard:
00:07:724 - Not sure if the hitsounds here neccesarily follow the music
00:14:942 - pls claps on 2 and 4
00:36:596 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider
00:46:521 (5) - Finish on end of slider?

all fixed

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Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-26T10:20:49+00:00

all updated!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-26T23:18:44+00:00

my kudosu

One more thing:

Normal:
01:27:009 (1) - You put the hitsound in the easy but not the normal ;ww;!! pls finish boomtiy boom

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-27T19:16:33+00:00

uguu

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-28T00:01:35+00:00

CDFA wrote:
uguu

thanks!

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-28T07:24:49+00:00

飞腊

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-11-29T04:14:35+00:00

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Artist should be "sphere", not "Sphere"
http://www.planet-sphere.jp/main.php

Also, no Hatsukoi/sphere BG?

Didn't plan to check it but I feel bad by just throwing some random post, lol

[

Easy]
I have no complains here.

[

Normal]
00:06:821 (3) - This blanket could be slightly better.
00:08:626 (3) - ^
00:14:942 (1) - So we have this slider going up and the next slider is in the bottom, not a big deal, but could this slider (1) have the end going down?
00:32:084 (6) - This blanketting (7) would be cool.
00:40:205 (1) - This tiny overlap can be easily avoided. Example: http://puu.sh/d9DLx.png
01:17:423 (3,4) - This really feels weird while playing, as we have the strong vocals, then suddenly you go for the instrumental, it'd be nice to have something like you did in 01:02:987 (3,4) -

[

Hard]
00:34:340 - This beat feels empty with nothing on it, make 00:34:115 (3) - a 1/2 slider with a reverse?
01:12:235 - Something similar about this.
01:25:769 - ^

[

Insane]
00:06:821 (5,6,7,1) - The spacing here is really misleading, as the four notes aren't the same in time, but have a very similar spacing, and the spacing in 00:06:370 (2,3) - is very similar to 00:06:821 (5,6) - , despite being different in time too try using a smaller spacing in 00:07:498 (7,1) - and in 00:06:370 (2,3) -
00:14:490 (10,11) - I don't think this jump fits nicely there, as the next note has not a big impact to deserve it.
00:43:588 (9,1,2,3) - Same issue about misleading 3/4 spacings.
01:25:769 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider for this, I know the intention, but by 1/2 slider you'd have a small pause which would emphasize vocals nicely.

That'd be all, I guess.

Fycho

Global Moderator

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Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-29T05:18:08+00:00

okay, artist again:

according to the official site: http://planet-sphere.jp/main.php
some screenshots:

SPOILER

referring to this p/3455523 (it was not disqualified again, cuz it doesn't worth that, but not mean it's good, right?)

"sphere" only appears in picture not text.
in other words, both fine but we prefer Sphere more.

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-29T06:07:22+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Artist should be "sphere", not "Sphere" As fycho said, 'Sphere' has no problem here
http://www.planet-sphere.jp/main.php

Also, no Hatsukoi/sphere BG? i can't find a nice BG which related to this song for this map.and,i think it's not a big issue,if you can find one,ok,i will change it

Didn't plan to check it but I feel bad by just throwing some random post, lol

[ Easy]
I have no complains here.

[ Normal]
00:06:821 (3) - This blanket could be slightly better.
00:08:626 (3) - ^
00:14:942 (1) - So we have this slider going up and the next slider is in the bottom, not a big deal, but could this slider (1) have the end going down?
00:32:084 (6) - This blanketting (7) would be cool.
00:40:205 (1) - This tiny overlap can be easily avoided. Example: http://puu.sh/d9DLx.png
01:17:423 (3,4) - This really feels weird while playing, as we have the strong vocals, then suddenly you go for the instrumental, it'd be nice to have something like you did in 01:02:987 (3,4) -

[ Insane]
00:06:821 (5,6,7,1) - The spacing here is really misleading, as the four notes aren't the same in time, but have a very similar spacing, and the spacing in 00:06:370 (2,3) - is very similar to 00:06:821 (5,6) - , despite being different in time too try using a smaller spacing in 00:07:498 (7,1) - and in 00:06:370 (2,3) -
00:14:490 (10,11) - I don't think this jump fits nicely there, as the next note has not a big impact to deserve it.
00:43:588 (9,1,2,3) - Same issue about misleading 3/4 spacings.
01:25:769 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider for this, I know the intention, but by 1/2 slider you'd have a small pause which would emphasize vocals nicely.

That'd be all, I guess.

my part all fixed,thanks!

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-11-29T06:56:15+00:00

:C

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-29T19:56:12+00:00

Man I'm gonna need some industrial bubbles or something with how much they get popped

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-30T12:19:32+00:00

osu file format v13

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all fixed

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-30T14:18:44+00:00

ok
all updated!

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-12-02T03:56:12+00:00

First of all, I apologize for rushing a bubble pop. As both are correct, artist can stay for consistency with the other ranked versions of this song.
About the BG, eh, I haven't watched the show so I can't help much here and not going to be picky about this.

Just a few stuff I'd want to say before rebubble.

[Normal]
00:14:942 (1) - Rotate this 20° anti-clockwise, so it leads better to the next slider
00:40:205 (1) - I think you're missing a whistle here.
01:17:423 (3) - Remove the finish in the end and add it in the beginning of 01:17:874 (4) - also, you could try moving a bit the long slider because the way it leads next note is a bit bad.

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:12:235 (1) - A finish in the end would be nice.
01:25:769 - ^ Same here, add the whistle like in the previous slider too.

[Insane]
00:14:716 (11) - You could try removing this note to keep clean the strongest beats here.

Don't kudosu this post, poke me back.

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-12-02T04:06:52+00:00

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
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BeatmapSetID:213500

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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88,344,12235,2,0,P|116:280|96:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,116,12912,1,10,0:0:0:0:
20,79,13137,2,0,B|72:99|72:99|136:103|136:103|152:116,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,14039,2,0,L|508:56,2,140,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15844,2,0,P|236:264|252:192,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,16746,2,0,L|116:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,260,17197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17648,2,0,B|192:132|192:132|228:128|228:128|276:112,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,136,18325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,64,18551,6,0,P|348:124|376:204,1,140
412,324,19453,2,0,B|352:304|260:316,1,140
76,336,20355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,20581,2,0,P|110:333|145:327,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21483,2,0,L|92:216,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,84,22160,6,0,P|84:96|156:72,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,22836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,23062,2,0,P|423:95|492:83,1,140
256,192,23964,2,0,B|228:150|163:160|163:160|121:210|152:257,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24866,6,0,B|328:184|328:184|352:192|352:192|412:184,1,140
460,88,25543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,88,25769,2,0,P|484:144|476:204,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,36,26671,2,0,P|404:44|468:24,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,27573,2,0,P|192:60|140:76,2,105,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,28475,2,0,B|356:192|356:192|348:236|348:236|364:288,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,32,29378,6,0,P|325:64|256:72,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30280,2,0,P|172:100|160:152,2,105,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,31182,2,0,L|4:124,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,31633,2,0,P|43:275|63:341,1,140
156,312,32310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,312,32423,2,0,L|272:308,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,32987,6,0,P|400:348|496:328,1,140
420,256,33663,2,0,L|408:224,2,35,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,34115,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,184,34340,2,0,L|428:140,1,70,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,35017,2,0,L|264:176,1,70,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,35919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,36145,2,0,P|100:168|96:136,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,69,36596,6,0,P|95:42|172:69,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37498,2,0,L|328:80,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,37949,2,0,L|436:104,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,160,38400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,196,38851,6,0,P|361:206|428:172,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,39528,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,320,39754,2,0,P|220:312|180:316,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,40205,2,0,P|60:308|60:240,2,105,4|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,41107,2,0,P|140:184|104:124,2,105,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,42009,2,0,P|28:100|92:20,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,42912,6,0,L|432:68,1,140,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,43814,2,0,L|488:336,2,105,12|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,44716,2,0,P|311:220|212:191,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,45618,2,0,P|92:132|152:144,2,105,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,46521,2,0,P|232:132|200:208,1,140,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,47423,6,0,B|72:332|72:332|16:324,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,48325,2,0,P|228:280|176:236,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,328,49227,2,0,P|375:332|326:350,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,50130,2,0,P|368:172|408:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,51032,6,0,B|128:48|128:48|92:56|92:56|24:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,222,51934,2,0,B|100:232|100:232|128:220|128:220|188:232,2,140,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53287,2,0,L|180:132,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,54190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,266,54415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,54641,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,55092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55318,2,0,L|480:124,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,208,55994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,56220,1,12,0:0:0:0:
116,160,56671,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56896,1,12,0:0:0:0:
20,100,58250,6,0,P|128:84|188:100,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,58927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,59152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,236,59603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,60054,2,0,B|384:288|384:288|256:312,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,60957,2,0,B|40:288|40:288|24:224|56:176,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,61859,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62084,2,0,L|252:132,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,48,62536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62987,2,0,P|472:128|452:228,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,63663,2,0,L|368:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,64115,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65468,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67272,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68175,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69077,5,6,0:0:0:0:
28,344,69415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69979,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70881,2,0,P|136:48|88:144,1,251.999992309571,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,150,71784,6,0,P|148:132|268:144,1,167.999994873047,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,72460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,72686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,192,72912,2,0,L|504:204,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,284,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,73588,2,0,P|304:204|208:216,1,167.999994873047,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|388:336,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85318,2,0,B|432:96|432:96|364:100|364:100|316:92,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,44,86220,2,0,B|152:96|152:96|144:140|144:140|172:188,1,125.999996154785,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,4,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,4,0:0:0:0:

all fixed

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-12-02T04:47:30+00:00

Mapper poked me and rechecked all again, have your bubble back.

(。･∀･)ﾉ

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-12-05T14:05:54+00:00

k mod tmr

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-12-06T21:38:15+00:00

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-12-07T06:03:07+00:00

hard hp6太高了吧
神触又要rank

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-12-07T07:06:19+00:00

Elaine wrote:
hard hp6太高了吧
神触又要rank

作为一个成年人，我看到了这句话，感受到了强烈的震撼！

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-12-07T14:34:08+00:00

[General]

01:29:378 - Kiai在這裡結束
Tag: Delete "スフィア" as it's duplicated with the artist, add "TV Size".

[Insane]

HP7 畢竟這是Insane 儘量比Hard難一點
00:07:724 - Normal-finish
00:18:438 (8) - 這是overmap阿聽清楚的話前面幾個藍線都能放偏偏不放我也是服了
00:25:769 (1,2,3) - 擁擠在一起好醜能不能放開一點反正BPM好低 1/4jump也可以像00:35:468 (5,6,7) -
00:31:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 全都overlap在一起沒有特別的結構我看泡了就算啦下次注意一下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319401
00:42:009 (1,2) - 鼓點放錯了 http://puu.sh/dkD1Z.jpg
00:42:912 - 音量高點現在聽不到加了finish
00:42:460 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 這段突然忽略連擊的鼓點我聽著好不舒服而且那些鼓點很明顯不像前面的電音
00:50:919 - 幹嘛突然降音量聽不到音效啊
00:57:348 - 沒可能kiai開始音量反而降低
01:09:641 (4) - 放錯位置 01:09:528 - 才對
01:22:160 (2) - 刪掉不是重音更不是人聲就像01:22:611 (1,2,3) -
01:27:009 (1,1,2) - whistle比finish更適合
感覺節奏放的好隨便喜歡放3連就放3連聽著那裏舒服就放連打 2連 ;_;

[Hard]

前奏的密度比normal還低難度要提升阿
00:00:506 - Finish
00:01:182 (2) - Whistle 後面00:04:791 (2) - 都放了
00:04:115 (1) - Finish
00:01:408 (3,4) - 怎麼whistle放在尾巴放在頭部跟音樂阿就像00:03:212 (5) -
00:05:919 - 漏了whistle
00:07:724 (1) - Soft-finish阿
00:20:355 (3) - ^ 00:20:581 (4) - whistle在滑條尾為什麼你都在一些跟音樂不配合的地方加whistle 我實在搞不懂音效是用來配合節奏而不是自創節奏
00:18:551 - 我求求你加點clap 現在音效完全聽不出來 http://puu.sh/dkEpx.wav 後面一小節一clap我也聽不懂什麼時候才加?
00:23:964 (4) - 搞不懂這3/2滑條無論鼓點還是人聲都在白線
00:32:310 (6,7) - 這我也搞不懂能告訴我動機麼
00:38:400 (5) - 按照前面的DS 應該這樣放: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319510 另外加finish
01:02:987 (5,6) - 這兩個節奏交換能放clap也能對應人聲
01:03:663 (6,1) - 交換NC
01:09:979 (4) - Finish 01:10:881 - 也加
01:12:686 - ^
01:27:009 (1,1,2) - whistle比finish更適合

[Normal]

00:07:724 - Normal-finish
00:22:836 (2) - 突然從鼓點轉換成跟人聲有點彆扭建議這slider從白線00:23:062 - 開始
00:35:017 (4,5,6) - 太難了在hard我們才用3個1/2圓圈
00:42:799 - I 我說過了
00:54:641 - 氣氛不同了音量提高阿
00:56:445 (1,2) - 變成1個1/2滑條重音不在00:56:445 - http://puu.sh/dkGyF.jpg
00:57:348 - 提高音量
01:27:009 (1) - 低難度的轉盤在白線或者紅線開始因為要考慮到mania的玩家

[Easy]

OD2
00:40:205 - whistle
00:42:912 - Unrankable as of inaudible hitsounds, also for the next green line. Please raise the volume to 40%.
00:57:348 - Same as above, and it's also quite non-sense to have lowest volume at the beginning of the kiai
01:09:077 - Finish for the stress of vocal
01:11:784 - Descending volume is unnecessary here
01:23:513 - whistle
01:25:318 - ^
01:25:769 - Soft-clap with 40% volume, add back a 50% green line at 01:26:220 -

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-12-07T16:36:18+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[Hard]
前奏的密度比normal還低難度要提升阿对
00:00:506 - Finish
00:01:182 (2) - Whistle 後面00:04:791 (2) - 都放了
00:04:115 (1) - Finish
00:01:408 (3,4) - 怎麼whistle放在尾巴放在頭部跟音樂阿就像00:03:212 (5) -
00:05:919 - 漏了whistle
00:07:724 (1) - Soft-finish阿
00:20:355 (3) - ^ 00:20:581 (4) - whistle在滑條尾為什麼你都在一些跟音樂不配合的地方加whistle 我實在搞不懂音效是用來配合節奏而不是自創節奏你说的好有道理，我只能吃了电视
00:18:551 - 我求求你加點clap 現在音效完全聽不出來 http://puu.sh/dkEpx.wav 後面一小節一clap我也聽不懂什麼時候才加?我实在搞不懂给大白加好还是二白三白，越听越别扭快炸了
00:23:964 (4) - 搞不懂這3/2滑條無論鼓點還是人聲都在白線
00:32:310 (6,7) - 這我也搞不懂能告訴我動機麼这里有一个3/4，我又不囍昂把红线空着，已改
00:38:400 (5) - 按照前面的DS 應該這樣放: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319510 另外加finish
01:02:987 (5,6) - 這兩個節奏交換能放clap也能對應人聲
01:03:663 (6,1) - 交換NC
01:09:979 (4) - Finish 01:10:881 - 也加
01:12:686 - ^
01:27:009 (1,1,2) - whistle比finish更適合

全改了，节奏又加了点

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