neonat wrote:

General

Your first object starts at 00:00:474
You should give ample time at the start before the map begins, the current minimum needed is 2000ms. Go to .osu in Notepad and add the required AudioLeadIn needed before the map starts Done

Normal

00:16:423 (1) - finish/whistle on the start of the slider, whistle if you think finish is too loud Finish added
00:19:666 (1) - ^ because both of them are similar to 00:22:909 (1) - with the cymbals at the start of the slider Finish added
00:55:342 (3) - remove the finish on the start of this slider, it takes away some of the energy from the finish at 00:56:963 (1) which should have greater effect Finish removed
00:58:585 (2) - ^ same reasoning, for the sake of 01:00:207 (5) Finish removed
01:04:869 (6) - finish on start of slider, remove the finish at the end of the slider Done
01:17:842 (3) - finish on start of slider Finish added

Hard

00:06:030 (8) - whistle on start of slider Whistle added
00:19:666 (1) - finish on start of slider Done
00:24:328 (7) - remove all the whistles except the whistle at the start Done
00:53:720 (1) - finish on the start of slider Done
00:57:976 (4,5) - blanket better Fixed I think
01:04:260 (4) - remove the finish, it doesn't fit Took lots of listening, but I decided to go with your version in the end. So, changed.
01:04:868 (7) - remove the finish at the end of the slider, put a finish on the start of the slider instead ^
01:17:841 (5) - finish to go with the song Done
01:18:044 (6) - remove finish Done
01:19:666 (1) - finish Done
01:22:909 (1) - ^ Done

Insane

00:24:328 (7) - finish on start of slider Done
00:32:842 (8) - that wiggle in the slider holds the slider ball for too long, it's not distinct enough to be allowed I reduced the wiggle. I think it should be fine now, not sure.
00:53:721 (1) - finish Done
01:04:869 (12) - finish Done
01:05:072 (1) - remove finish Done
01:17:842 (8) - finish Done
01:18:044 (1) - remove finish Done
01:19:261 (5,6,7,8,1) - try to use a better curve/shape, this just too rough-looking Done
01:19:666 (1) - finish Done
01:22:910 (1) - ^ Done



I do not really think some of the rhythm used is really ideal though, doesn't seem to fit too good.
Good Luck

• 
  After playing for the first time i find there's one problem that, some notes are too close. I think it seems better when the notes are separate
  Change these plz:
  00:05:141 (4,5,6,7) -
  00:08:697 (3,4,5,6) -
  00:22:706 (6,1,2,3,4) -
  00:35:476 (3,4,5) -
  00:37:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
  01:09:936 (1,2,3,4) -
  01:17:841 (5,6,7,8) -
  Don't worry about the distance between them if you separate them. No need to keep the distance when you make a Hard diff
  And I suggest if you can put new combo on every LONG WHITE LINE
  00:02:697 (5,1) - Swap NC
  00:04:474 (3) - NC
  00:06:030 (8,1) - Swap NC
  00:08:030 (2) - NC
  00:09:808 (7) - ^
  00:18:652 (8) - Stack it on 5 or 6. It seems bad now
  00:24:328 (7) - Just put a note here and put a spin from 00:24:531 to 00:26:152
  01:19:666 (1,2,3,4) - Better if you don't use stack on them
  01:21:287 (1,2,3,4) - ^

• 
  Generally, it's too easy for an Insane diff
  00:03:364 (3) - Put it right after the slider
  00:04:919 (4,5) - Too close.
  00:27:774 (1,2,3) - Too far. I suggest use half distance or stack between the short stream, but i don't mean they are bad everytime you use.
  00:28:990 (6,7,8) - ^
  00:33:450 (3,4,5) - ^
  00:34:868 (4,5) - Blanket
  00:36:693 (3,4,5) - Stack on the end
  00:39:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too close
  00:41:760 (5,6,7) - Too far
  00:43:179 (3,4,5) - ^
  00:43:585 (6,7,8) - Too crowded. Try to separate them
  00:48:449 (3,4,5) - Too far
  00:52:098 (1,2,3,4) - Separate them
  00:53:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too crowded
  00:56:152 (1,2,3) - Too far
  00:58:382 (7,8,9) - Too far. I don't suggest to use this kind of stream because they aren't that good
  00:58:990 (2,3,4,5) - Too crowded
  01:01:624 (4,5) - Too close
  01:07:706 (7,8) - ^
  01:10:949 (7,8,9) - Don't need to put curve on them. A straight line will be better
  01:11:558 (2,3,4,5) - Too crowded
  01:15:611 (5) - 01:17:233 (2) - Don't use long slider in the KIAI TIME.
  01:18:450 (5,6,7) - Stack on the end
  01:21:692 (5,1) - Too close
  Too crowded for an Insane diff. Try more distance.

• 
  00:04:253 (2,4) - Don't use stack here. A triangle will be a better choice
  00:05:585 (6,7) - Try to make blanket better
  00:13:180 (1,3) - Don't use stack here. A triangle will be a better choice
  00:21:085 (6,3,5,6,7) - Don't use stack so often
  00:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - A long distant stream isn't a good choice. Use some short slider or kick return between them
  00:31:018 (1,2,3,4) - Too crowded
  00:32:842 (8) - This slider is unrankable
  00:39:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too crowded
  00:51:490 (5,6) - ^ You can move them to the right side a bit
  01:05:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too long/distant
  01:10:950 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Too crowded
  01:19:261 (5,6,7,8,1) - Too distant
  01:19:869 (2,3,4) - Stack to the head
  01:21:490 (2,3,4) - ^
  01:20:882 (6,7,8) - Too distant
  01:22:504 (6,7,8) - ^
  01:22:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  I suggest use half distance when you try to put a stream

- H i k a r i - wrote:

Hello. Mods from Paper Modding Team

[Wonkeee's Insane]

• 
  Generally, it's too easy for an Insane diff
  00:03:364 (3) - Put it right after the slider
  00:04:919 (4,5) - Too close.
  00:27:774 (1,2,3) - Too far. I suggest use half distance or stack between the short stream, but i don't mean they are bad everytime you use.
  00:28:990 (6,7,8) - ^
  00:33:450 (3,4,5) - ^
  00:34:868 (4,5) - Blanket
  00:36:693 (3,4,5) - Stack on the end
  00:39:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too close
  00:41:760 (5,6,7) - Too far
  00:43:179 (3,4,5) - ^
  00:43:585 (6,7,8) - Too crowded. Try to separate them
  00:48:449 (3,4,5) - Too far
  00:52:098 (1,2,3,4) - Separate them
  00:53:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too crowded
  00:56:152 (1,2,3) - Too far
  00:58:382 (7,8,9) - Too far. I don't suggest to use this kind of stream because they aren't that good
  00:58:990 (2,3,4,5) - Too crowded
  01:01:624 (4,5) - Too close
  01:07:706 (7,8) - ^
  01:10:949 (7,8,9) - Don't need to put curve on them. A straight line will be better
  01:11:558 (2,3,4,5) - Too crowded
  01:15:611 (5) - 01:17:233 (2) - Don't use long slider in the KIAI TIME.
  01:18:450 (5,6,7) - Stack on the end
  01:21:692 (5,1) - Too close
  Too crowded for an Insane diff. Try more distance.

Thanks for the mod! I took your advice on the spacing and I relocated most of the notes so that they would better suit an insane difficulty.

- H i k a r i - wrote:

Hello. Mods from Paper Modding Team

[Hard]

• 
  After playing for the first time i find there's one problem that, some notes are too close. I think it seems better when the notes are separate
  Change these plz:
  00:05:141 (4,5,6,7) - Pattern changed instead
  00:08:697 (3,4,5,6) - No need to increase distance on notes at the start of the song
  00:22:706 (6,1,2,3,4) - Already increased enough. Jump would be too much for a hard if increased further.
  00:35:476 (3,4,5) - Pattern change instead
  00:37:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern change instead
  01:09:936 (1,2,3,4) - No change
  01:17:841 (5,6,7,8) - No change
  Don't worry about the distance between them if you separate them. No need to keep the distance when you make a Hard diff
  And I suggest if you can put new combo on every LONG WHITE LINE
  00:02:697 (5,1) - Swap NC Done
  00:04:474 (3) - NC Nope
  00:06:030 (8,1) - Swap NC Done
  00:08:030 (2) - NC Keeping it every 2 while lines
  00:09:808 (7) - ^ Done
  00:18:652 (8) - Stack it on 5 or 6. It seems bad now Changed pattern instead
  00:24:328 (7) - Just put a note here and put a spin from 00:24:531 to 00:26:152 Suggested many times before, but I'm going to remain stubborn about replacing that slider with a spinner
  01:19:666 (1,2,3,4) - Better if you don't use stack on them No change
  01:21:287 (1,2,3,4) - ^ No change

[Insane]

• 
  00:04:253 (2,4) - Don't use stack here. A triangle will be a better choice Done
  00:05:585 (6,7) - Try to make blanket better Fixed I think
  00:13:180 (1,3) - Don't use stack here. A triangle will be a better choice Done
  00:21:085 (6,3,5,6,7) - Don't use stack so often Changed pattern
  00:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - A long distant stream isn't a good choice. Use some short slider or kick return between them Kept stream, but changed something about it
  00:31:018 (1,2,3,4) - Too crowded Made less crowded
  00:32:842 (8) - This slider is unrankable Changed slider
  00:39:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too crowded Changed pattern
  00:51:490 (5,6) - ^ You can move them to the right side a bit No change
  01:05:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too long/distant Made stream more symmetrical, but its still going to be there
  01:10:950 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Too crowded Spaced out more
  01:19:261 (5,6,7,8,1) - Too distant No change
  01:19:869 (2,3,4) - Stack to the head Done
  01:21:490 (2,3,4) - ^ Done
  01:20:882 (6,7,8) - Too distant No change
  01:22:504 (6,7,8) - ^ No change
  01:22:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ No change
  I suggest use half distance when you try to put a stream

1. 00:38:923 - map this (maybe stack with the slider)
2. 00:42:774 (3,4) - half beat slider
3. 00:43:382 (6,7) - half beat slider
4. 01:09:734 - map this

1. 00:13:180 (1) - finish
2. 00:16:423 (1) - finish
3. 00:19:666 (1) - finish
4. 00:22:909 (5) - finish, nc

Nekomata wrote:

Hard

1. 01:09:734 - map this

Nekomata wrote:

NM from queue.

Wonkeee's Insane

1. 00:13:180 (1) - finish Added
2. 00:16:423 (1) - finish Added
3. 00:19:666 (1) - finish Added
4. 00:22:909 (5) - finish, nc Changed

rui wrote:

From My Modding Queues

[General]

• 
  Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels. Although 1024x768 is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen).Really? I see some recent ranked maps that have 1366x768 pixel images like this one.

[Normal]

• 
  need change Kiai time start at 01:06:693 Oops fixed
  00:28:991 (4) - I know you follow vocal. but end of slider next white is better in Normal diff imo Changed this area around
  00:34:869 (2,3) - How about this? http://puu.sh/b7146.jpg
  00:45:613 (2) - not need this note imo I think this note is fine. Will keep for now.
  01:19:869 (2) - delete note Removed
  01:21:490 (6) - ^ ^
  01:24:328 (4) - ^ ^

[Hard]

• 
  00:05:364 (6) - delete note? Removed
  00:05:808 (8) - ^ ^
  00:19:666 (1) - Off-screen Fixed
  01:10:544 (4) - change slider? End of slider next white line Changed this area around
  01:12:977 (X) - add note? Done
  01:19:463 (X) - ^ Not this one

[Insane]

• 
  00:04:918 (5) - How about this ? http://puu.sh/b6ZtO.jpg Sure
  00:06:918 (10) - delete note is better imo Disagree
  00:15:004 (2) - move (256,348) (make triangle.) And 00:15:207 (3,4,5) - move (348,240) (stack 00:13:788 (4)) Done
  00:24:328 (7) - add finish start of slider and remove finish end of slider and add NC Done
  00:42:774 (5) - add NC Done
  00:45:815 (6) - add NC Done
  00:47:436 (2,3,4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/b70nr.jpg Changed
  00:52:504 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about this rhythm http://puu.sh/b70r9.jpg I like it! Changed.

Good luck

rui wrote:

From My Modding Queues

[Wonkeee's Insane]

• 
  00:02:030 (5) - delete this note? fit the pattern of 00:02:253 (1,2,3) - Changed; I deleted the note and adjusted both patterns.
  00:07:586 (2) - why this slider so close? Spaced out a bit. Must've moved it by accident with Distance Snap.
  00:52:098 (1,2,3,4) - how about this rhythm http://puu.sh/b6YZh.jpgI like the rhythm! It fits better with the music. Changed it with an extra note after the 2.

Good luck

1. 00:06:030 (1) - why do you use finish on slider end? i think no finish sound in music
2. 00:38:923 (6) - delete note? I think that there is no sound...
3. 00:45:815 (5) - add clap on slider end?
4. 01:04:260 (4) - clap?

1. 00:32:234 (6) - ctrl + G ? flow will be better
2. 00:32:639 (7) - add NC?
3. 00:39:937 (4) - add clap?
4. 01:19:058 - add note on x:212,y:280? I think it is a easy read to put this
5. 01:28:382 (9) - add reverse ?
   
   img

   

1. 00:10:475 (3,4,5) - it is not able to follow the song
   
   how about this pattern?

   
2. 00:19:261 (6) - add clap? same as 00:16:017 -
3. 01:17:234 (2) - ctrl + G ?
4. 01:19:666 (7) - NC
5. 01:13:179 (2) - a little curve?
   
   img

   
6. 01:23:213 (6,1) - too far away

ShiraKai wrote:

hi :3 from queue!

[Wonkeee's Insane]

1. 00:10:475 (3,4,5) - it is not able to follow the song
   
   how about this pattern?

   
   I agree with the change and I like your pattern!
2. 00:19:261 (6) - add clap? same as 00:16:017 - Added.
3. 01:17:234 (2) - ctrl + G ? Done and modified.
4. 01:19:666 (7) - NC Changed.
5. 01:13:179 (2) - a little curve? Decided to curve it and move it else where
   
   img

   
6. 01:23:213 (6,1) - too far away Good catch. Fixed.

good luck

ShiraKai wrote:

hi :3 from queue!
three diffs mod

[General]
none.

[Hard]

1. 00:06:030 (1) - why do you use finish on slider end? i think no finish sound in music Its supposed to fit the end of that vocal. Though, I think I'll remove it if it gets mentioned again.
2. 00:38:923 (6) - delete note? I think that there is no sound... Added this from another mod. I now think it sounds better without the note, so I deleted it.
3. 00:45:815 (5) - add clap on slider end? Done
4. 01:04:260 (4) - clap? Don't like how that sounds. No change.

[Insane]

1. 00:32:234 (6) - ctrl + G ? flow will be better Sure
2. 00:32:639 (7) - add NC? I disagree
3. 00:39:937 (4) - add clap? Done
4. 01:19:058 - add note on x:212,y:280? I think it is a easy read to put this Done
5. 01:28:382 (9) - add reverse ? I don't think it fits
   
   img

   

good luck

CDFA wrote:

Moe memes for nice kids and their moms

Overall:
Your claps are super inconsistent. In the higher diffs, you're doing too much, and in the lower diffs, you're not keeping it even. Claps should be on beats 2 and 4 of every measure (or the 1st and 3rd small white tick in a measure). Do that. And mostly only that. Guest diffs too.

Insane:
00:08:918 (7,8) - nah Changed
00:13:180 (1,2,3) - HELLO FARMER BROWN Aww man, you ruined my farming plans
Just gonna generalize right here again, jumps have a purpose. Jumps are not meant to be artificial fun-makers, because they're not. Can people play them? Yes. But it's not enjoyable to have to bounce around in a non-rhythmic manner just because the mapper wants them to. Welll then, looks like I have some work to do
00:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I've seen this pattern used a little bit, and it works when it gets gradually bigger. I just qualified a map with that. However, randomly shooting up all of a sudden is no fun I made it gradually rise
That generalization pretty much sums up the issues with the diff. And also the generalizations in Winky's diff should apply here too, to a little bit of a lesser extent.

Hard:
00:37:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is WAY too cramped. Space it out Changed around
01:19:666 (1,2,3,4) - Not a big fan of back-and-forth movement like this. But...but...this is, like, the only thing left from my version 6 11 months ago. Noooooo...I changed it...
01:21:287 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
tbh this is one of the weirdest things I see. This hard is pretty decent, especially since I'm not being super nitpicky. However, you to go insane and its really problematic. It's a common issue with a lot of mappers. Why is this? idunno Hurray, I'm not alone!

Normal:
01:04:869 (6) - Like the blanket idea is cool but tbh im not a super big fan of this combo in general I changed the rhythm around, without changing the blanket idea.

Easy:
Fine except for overall stuff

CDFA wrote:

Moe memes for nice kids and their moms

Overall:
Your claps are super inconsistent. In the higher diffs, you're doing too much, and in the lower diffs, you're not keeping it even. Claps should be on beats 2 and 4 of every measure (or the 1st and 3rd small white tick in a measure). Do that. And mostly only that. Guest diffs too.Changed most of the claps, I think.

Winky:
00:00:919 (2,3,4) - It's kind of weird starting this off with a jump because spacing hasn't really been established. Understandable. Changed.
00:09:364 (6) - This jump looks like a spacing error, and should be in a pattern with (4) Adjusted patterns.
00:09:808 (1,2) - This would feel nicer if you made it just notes Done.
tbh im not excited about this map's consistent 2.0x and 3.0x distance spacing. Instead of making a giant post, I'm just gonna say "Don't have all of these big jumps without a reason."Changed around almost everything to make it more consistent.
00:44:598 (9,1) - It's stuff like this that bothers me. You go from jumpy, to a random normal spacing, to a random jump again, when the music is completely stagnant As stated above, adjusted randomness.
00:52:504 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://youtu.be/5DkEhPXFXt8?list=FLaAMp ... UV94Q9c7TA Not very clear on what was so wrong, but changed it to a more straighter rhythm.
01:06:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - woohoo we hit the other overmapping landmark Changed.
That's about. . . even though I made a short mod post, I still feel like the guest mapper doesn't have a solid foundation on what an insane in, especially in the context of this song. It was just "make things hard because insanes are hard right" instead of "Make something fun that people of this skill level can play". I'd suggest taking a look at good insane maps and noting the differences between the diff and ranked insanes.Will do.

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi from modding queue

Wonkeee's Insane
Spacing problems. Once again, only pointing out the important ones!

00:05:586 (5) - NC. Also move this further away from (4)

00:08:696 (4) - NC

00:09:364 (6,1,2) - too far

00:10:697 (4) - delete this circle
- I think this sounds better

00:15:003 (2,3,4) - too far

00:19:261 (6) - clap

00:19:666 (1) - add finish

00:21:490 (7) - NC

00:27:774 (1,2,3) - delete (2,3)
- Plainly incorrect

00:29:091 (7) - delete

00:29:396 (8) - NC

00:31:017 (1,2,3,4) - too far

00:34:260 (1,2,3,4) - too far

00:39:124 (7) - NC

00:39:935 (4,5,6,7,8) - the triple should be between 00:39:936 - 00:40:139 Fixed.

00:42:369 (9) - NC

00:42:976 (2,3,4,5) - too far

00:43:990 (8) - NC

00:44:598 (9,1) - too far

00:47:234 (8) - NC

00:49:666 (4,5,6,7) - too far

00:50:477 (7) - NC

00:52:504 (2,3,4,5,6) - pretty sure you made a mistake here, check placement of (3,4,5,6) Changed to a more regular pattern.

00:53:720 (1) - remove clap

00:54:531 (4) - remove clap

00:55:139 (6) - remove clap

00:55:544 (7) - NC here,

00:56:152 (1) - remove NC and remove clap

00:56:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too far

00:56:963 (1) - remove clap

00:57:774 (4) - remove clap

00:58:585 (9) - remove clap

00:59:396 (3) - remove clap

01:00:207 (7) - NC

01:01:827 (5) - NC

01:04:463 (1) - there's a lot of cool stuff going on here, you sure you want this to be a spinner? Took your advice and made something out of it

01:13:179 (2) - NC

01:14:801 (2) - NC

01:16:423 (8) - NC

01:18:044 (5) - NC

01:20:476 (10) - remove clap

01:21:895 (1) - remove NC and remove clap at 01:22:301

01:22:909 (3) - NC

01:23:719 (3) - remove clap

01:24:125 (1) - remove NC and remove clap at 01:24:531

01:25:341 (2) - NC and remove clap

01:26:963 (2) - NC[/notice]


Work on the Insane difficulties, don't worry about how hard it is or the star rating, just map to the song (which is nice and slow, in this case)
Good luck!

Almost all NC and beat sounds and all the spacing issues were taken care of. As you said, I will try and map to the song rather than to map to a difficulty standard.

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi from modding queue
Sorry this is a little late!

BLUE = Suggestions (aka nothing wrong, but here's my Idea)
BLACK = Something I think should be changed

Normal
I recommend keeping the default sound for slider ticks on, especially since this has many sliders that are longer than 1/1 Alright

00:23:923 (2) - change into a circle at 00:23:923
- To give some time before the spinner Changing the slider into a circle doesn't sound right, and misses a beat right before the spinner. I understand that there isn't a lot of time before the spinner start, but it doesn't sound right to me to change it.

00:41:152 (2,1,3) - these sliders are not very fitting for the music
- If you want to keep these, please turn on the slider ticks I like these sliders, so that's why I turned the slider ticks back on.

00:41:152 (2) - try a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/bg2gZ/7e501149f0.jpg ^

00:43:990 (1,2,3) - try a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/bg32s/a62acacb9a.jpg
- the highlighted green (1) is where the new combo should begin Because I kept the long slider from before, I'll be keeping these sliders as well.

00:52:504 (4,5,6) - move these away from (3) OR change it into a 1/2 reverse slider Moved away

Hard
00:24:328 (7) - delete (7) then add circle at 00:24:328, spinner from 00:24:531 - 00:26:152
- There is no sound at the places where it's reversing Guess I'm finally removing this slider. Oh well. I put in a spinner that matches the normal difficulty.

00:26:558 (1,2) - move (1) to 00:26:761, delete (2)
- I see what you are doing but the drums are more powerful at 00:26:761 Done

00:30:207 (7) - remove clap Removed

00:38:315 (5,6) - this is a bit confusing, i suggest rearranging 00:39:125 (6,7,8,9) to somewhere else I think it should be fine.

00:43:179 (4) - remove clap Removed

00:46:625 - add a circle here Doesn't sound right to me

00:50:882 (2,3,4) - try a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/bg5ue/1da53ca34d.jpg
- Space here doesn't sound right Done

01:20:476 (5) - remove clap

01:22:098 (5) - remove clap

01:23:314 (3) - remove clap at 01:23:720

01:25:747 (8) - remove finish, add clap No change to the hitsounds here

Insane
In general the spacing is too far, it doesn't suit the song. I only pointed out the important ones but there's other stuff you can adjust the spacing
I also recommend lower the SV Yeah, I'm reworking the spacing from the last mod. Thanks for this mod, though, it was very helpful!

00:13:180 (1,2,3) - too far Fixed

00:15:207 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - too far Fixed

00:17:031 (2,3,4) - too far Fixed

00:24:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to a circle at 00:24:328 and spinner from 00:24:531 - 00:26:152 Spinner added

00:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I would map the drums here like this: http://puu.sh/bhC6k/a2fefb382c.jpg
- To keep what you had add circles at 00:26:355 and 00:26:457 and rearrange claps to be on 00:26:761 - 00:27:166 - 00:27:369 - 00:27:571 Disagree. Will be keeping the stream.

00:29:396 (8) - remove clap at 00:30:207 Fixed

00:32:234 (6) - try ctrl + g I reduced the size of the jump instead

00:40:342 (7,8,9,10,1) - too far Fixed

00:43:179 (3) - remove clap Fixed

00:44:598 (3,4,5,1) - too far Fixed

00:47:436 (2) - delete this circle
- I like the way this plays I think I will keep this circle

00:49:667 (8) - remove finish Changed the location of the finish

00:52:707 (4,5,6,7) - add clap to (5) and (7)
- I think it sounds better this way Whoa, that sounds really interesting! I like this change a lot.

00:54:531 (1) - remove clap Fixed

00:55:342 (1) - remove clap Fixed

00:56:152 (4) - remove clap at 00:56:152 Fixed

00:56:964 (1) - remove clap Fixed

00:57:775 (7) - remove clap at 00:58:179 Fixed

01:04:261 (9,10) - too far Fixed

01:18:044 (1,2,3) - too far Fixed

01:19:261 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - too far Fixed

01:20:477 (5) - remove clap

01:22:098 (5) - remove clap

01:23:315 (5) - remove clap at 01:23:720

01:24:328 (8) - remove clap

01:25:342 (10) - remove finish at 01:25:747

01:28:179 (8) - remove finish No change to the hitsounds here.

Work on the Insane difficulties, don't worry about how hard it is or the star rating, just map to the song (which is nice and slow, in this case)
Good luck!

• 00:33:044 (3) - add clap
  00:49:261 (3) - add clap
  00:51:693 (3) - add clap
  00:52:909 (5) - add clap at 00:53:315

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Title:Kaze no Traveler
TitleUnicode:風のトラベラー
Artist:Joe Rinoie with Mizuno Saaya
ArtistUnicode:Joe Rinoie with 水野佐彩
Creator:Amasuro
Version:Setsu's Easy
Source:Rune Factory 4
Tags:Traveler Wind Nintendo XSeed Harvest Moon Game Opening Wonkeee Setsurei
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Nozhomi wrote:

:P Hi~ from Strawberry Mousse Modding Queue.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- General :

1. Fix AiMod stuff (Audio Lead-In).

- Insane :

1. 00:17:234 (3,4,1) - Keep constant DS for them. Done
2. 00:39:126 (1,2,3) - ^ Done
3. 00:42:571 - Add a circle here. You fill every 1/2 rhythm and suddenly you make a break here. That's not logic. Changed a note into a slider and moved around this area.
4. 00:48:653 (6,7,8) - Keep constant DS. Intended for symmetry, no change. I did fix that off blanket, though.
5. 01:20:882 (6,7,8) - and similar, you change suddenly DS for 1/4 stream (1.0x) when you use 0.60x for 01:19:261 (6,7,8,9,1) - . That's not logic right ? So fix this. Changed all 1.0 streams
6. 01:28:990 - Would add a circle here. Doesn't sound right to me.

- Hard :

1. 00:02:697 (1) - Move it to 416:88 for flow, and move 00:03:141 (2,3) - to 292:96. Done
2. 00:21:693 (4) - Maybe CTRL+G but it's a pure suggestion. Like it as is
3. 00:24:125 (6) - Move it to 296:248 to put 00:23:517 (4,5,6) - on a same line. Done
4. 00:48:652 (5,6,7) - Bad blanket. Fixed both blankets
5. 00:52:909 (6) - GTRL+G it, flow is much better, and make you DS more coherent with 00:53:720 (1) - . Done
6. 00:55:544 (4,5) - Improve a little this blanket. I tried
7. 01:02:233 (7,8) - To not break the flow here, I suggest you this http://puu.sh/brqyB/affacbd384.jpg. Done
8. 01:08:922 (5,6) - I don't like flow here. Maybe rotate slider to fix that. Remapped this area a little
9. 01:10:139 (2) - incoherent DS here. Changed in the remap
10. 01:16:828 (2,4) - Bad blanket. Fixed
11. 01:17:841 (5,6,7,8) - You can avoid these overlap here you have space to do it. Fixed
12. 01:27:571 (4,5) - Blanket. Fixed both blankets

- Normal :

1. 00:37:504 (1,2) - Kind of bad flow here. Rotate 00:37:504 (1) - to fix that. Rotated
2. 01:15:612 (4,1) - Bad flow. Changed

That's all. You should work on construction mapset. It's messy atm.
Good luck. Mukyu~

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
first red section's offset need to -10 at least imo, I'm not 100% sure about it, you'd better find some timing pro to check I will ask the timing check thread

[Normal]
00:24:125 - repeat this slider with finish at 00:24:328 - and start the spinner later? would fit the song better imo Done
00:35:882 (3,4) - I don't recommend to use this kind of pattern in a Normal diff, it's really hard to read.. so don't stack the slider end under the circle please.. Pattern changed
01:14:801 (3,4) - ^ reverse arrow hiding by hitburst is not nice idea either Pattern changed
01:29:396 - same kind of suggestion as 00:24:125 - I'm not seeing this one. The spinner seems to fit right there and I don't see any where else to move it to.

[Hard]
00:24:328 - same kind of suggestion as 00:24:125 - in Normal diff Done
00:26:152 - the finish sounds really odd to me, it doesn't fit the song at all, I suggest to remove it Removed

[Insane]
00:24:328 - same Done
00:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - clap sounds odd here to me.. I suggest use some other hitsounds instead of them, such as whistles, would fit here better imo Changed

map still has huge room to be improved.. good luck

Setsurei wrote:

if you're talking about offset, please do so on all diffs, I'm following the other diffs' red line

Amasuro wrote:

Setsurei wrote:

if you're talking about offset, please do so on all diffs, I'm following the other diffs' red line

Ye, wcx said the timing for the first section is off, so I've been looking for a good offset for it. Wanted to ask a QAT/BAT for a concrete timing check.

Do you want me to change your timing when I decide to change the offset?

A i k a wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue~

[Normal]
00:06:030 (2) - This finish sound here is a bit strange since it doesn't make much sense to have one here~ Removed

01:04:058 (5,6) - A bit crowded here. No change


[Hard]
00:08:030 (3) - Longer slider, sounds better. Ok


00:37:706 (2,4) - This stack doesn't look good here, and looks even worse in play-mode ;_; Changed pattern


[Insane]
00:26:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Barely any beats here in the song, no sense to make such a long stream here. I've had this mentioned before, but I believe its to match that instrument in the background that sounds really fast...idk. I'm close to removing it, but I don't want to remove the stream yet.
00:53:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Feels wierd, they are too parallel. No change
01:29:193 (10) - You can add a circle here. Added

Gaia wrote:

sup from my queue

so i saw u used my answers for wcx's queue ur welcome
i sound like a jerk lol ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
If it makes you feel better, I didn't get the bubble. Lol.

so many diffs D: I'll only be taking a look at ur diffs then

[General]

this looks so sketch lol r u sure u have the right offset and stuffs Yeeep, aware of the offset problem

the spread between normal and hard is a bit big ): u have an easy so go ahead and add more stuffs to normal o: Ok, will try

[Normal]
00:02:696 (4) - think bending the other way would look a lot nicer Tried it. Makes it overlap weirdly with (5)
00:20:882 (2) - would look better if it was perpendicular or whatever lol ofc dont forget to change 00:22:098 (3) - too http://puu.sh/bFZH6/c645d242a8.jpg Changed
00:31:423 - you've had claps on every 2/4 till now so it sounds odd without it here. copy ur current soft-hitclap and rename to like soft-slidertick2 or something
and for the sliderticks that isnt on a 2/4 just make that section into soft:custom1 since u should add 1 for hard anyways It has been done
00:45:815 (3) - instead of kinda bent in the middle have it perfectly straight, also have middle square on slider tick http://puu.sh/bG3Vm/dcc3e392f4.jpg Fixed
00:48:044 (2) - blankets the side of ^? Yep, its supposed to blanket it
00:56:963 (1) - missing clap at end Fixed
01:11:558 (3) - looks better like this imo http://puu.sh/bG47w/e1d3ac00ca.jpg Changed

[Hard]
tick 2 better imo Hokay
use Soft:Custom1 instead of default soft cuz sliderslide isnt silenced Changed
00:08:030 (3,4,5,6,7) - doesnt really follow vocals Removed (6)
00:15:612 (7) - dont overlap it looks bad RIP pretty pentagon
00:32:841 (5) - so samething about the sliderticks Changed
00:38:112 (4) - slider should start here instead Wait, what? The slider does start there. I feel like you marked the wrong note here.
00:39:125 (6) - personally dislike stacking sliders on slider ends No change here
00:40:747 (1,2) - not good flow Fixed
01:00:207 (1) - x=264 instead Done
01:08:922 (5,6) - switch places in timeline Ooh, that sounds much better
01:12:368 (8,9,10,11,1) - ahh this spacing is massive ;v; Don't worry, they are now sliders
01:25:341 (7,8) - claps for beginnings of these too? I dunno, I kinda like the double finish

[Insane]
i think NC every measure instead of every 2 measures is better, you have some long combos after all. Ok
00:30:612 (10) - move this a bit so it doesnt directly overlap with 00:29:396 (8) - Fixed
00:41:153 (1) - curve it the other way, for a nice flow break emphasis, flows nicely into 2 as well Changed
00:58:382 (8) - a bit hidden cuz circle overlaps with slider I was going to rework this part a little anyway. Will change later.
01:28:382 (9) - make the lines parallel for a better looking shape http://puu.sh/bG5zb/a7a0da39fe.jpg Fixed

some parts feel messy.. usage of circles kinda reminds me of old maps but isn't cancer, yay !
keep improving this map

good luck and have fun!!! c:

Amasuro wrote:

so i saw u used my answers for wcx's queue ur welcome
i sound like a jerk lol ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
If it makes you feel better, I didn't get the bubble. Lol.

Gaia wrote:

Amasuro wrote:

so i saw u used my answers for wcx's queue ur welcome
i sound like a jerk lol ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
If it makes you feel better, I didn't get the bubble. Lol.

omg i didnt mean it that way in fact i was happy that someone thinks the same way as me
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

gomen ne :c

A i k a wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue~

[Wonkee's Insane]
00:06:030 (1) - Slider finish sound remove. Done.

00:10:474 (4) - Bad slider shape, feels bad to look at and play with.Smoothed it out a bit.


00:13:382 (2,4,5,2,4,5) - These are too parallel to each other, it feels repeating. Adjusted!

01:05:477 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream feels too fast and is not needed here at all. I kept the start of the slider but changed the end of it. I think it's okay there

Deif wrote:

As per your request, here's the timing I found. It's a bit unstable at the beginning, but the rest of the song has a constant rhythm (Remember to resnap notes, inherited sections and the preview point).



Hope it was helpful. Good luck!

Kenterz wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue \:D/

Normal

1. 00:03:353 (5,1) - The blanket is calling you... Please ;w; You can maybe try this exemple : (don't forget the symetry for 00:06:020 (2)) Done, and changed around the part afterwards too
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:796 (3,4) - You can try to modify these sliders to make these movements like one slider (like if they follow both this slider) :Wow, that's a pretty cool technique. I tried modifying the sliders to fit this.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:15:607 (4,1,2) - You can maybe try to make them blanket to make the pattern prettier and "polished" Blanket fixed on (1) and (2). I don't want to blanket (4) and (1) because the tail of (1) is stacked on the head of (3)
4. 00:24:526 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit with the song in my opinion, I suggest to delete it. Also, you can make the spinner finish on a beat, like at
5. 00:26:756 for exemple ? Finish removed and spinner extended
6. 00:36:283 (4) - This slider is too much curved, it's quite ridiculous. You may follow this exemple : Changed
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:39:120 (3,4,5) - This triangle pattern isn't perfectly equilateral, you should fix it to make the pattern cleaner Fixed
8. 00:45:607 (2,3) - These objects are quite bad for the rhythm. I suggest to start a slider from 00:45:608 to 00:46:824 and add a circle at 00:47:229 with a finish and a NC (don't forget to add the sliderticks) Rhythm changed, but I did a variation of your suggestion
9. 00:50:877 (2,3) - Quite the same problem as above =/ Rhythm changed
10. 00:53:715 (1,3) - These 2 sliders are too near, I suggest to move (3) 1 grid down, it'll not make an "overlap" Got changed while I was changing the rhythm above
11. 01:00:202 (5) - You sould add a NC here...
12. ...01:02:229 (1) - and delete this NC (to follow the NC logical)
13. 01:02:229 (1) - You should move this NC and place it at 01:03:445 (5) (this beat have a finish, so it's obvious it must be a new combo) Wow, these NC's were so off I have no idea why I never noticed them before. All NC's fixed.
14. 01:09:932 (1) - Maybe you can move it 1 grid down to avoid the "overlap" Fixed
15. 01:15:607 (4) - You really should delete the reverse and add a circle at 01:16:418 because it needs to be clickable (there's a finish on it). Also add a new combo if you added it please :3 I like this part as is
16. 01:25:743 (5) - Did you forget the hitclap on this circle ? Plz add it :3 Oops
17. 01:27:769 (3) - Add a clap on this slider's tail. Done

Hard

1. 00:06:020 (1) - I think the finish on the slider tail isn't needed, you should probably delete it Deleted
2. 00:09:777 (1,2) - The distance snap used between these 2 sliders isn't the same as the previous patterns (so you must use x1.2 of distance snap) Intentional. Using x1.2 would cause the sliders to overlap badly.
3. 00:15:404 (6,1) - These 2 objects aren't perfectly stacked Fixed
4. 00:18:040 (5,7) - There's an overlap here, you can maybe try to move (7) a bit to avoid it ? Fixed
5. 00:22:701 (6,1,2,3,4) - I really think this kind of pattern is too hard for a Hard diff, when you compare it to the previous patterns, you realise the distance snap used it too high. Changed pattern
6. 00:23:918 (5) - I suggest to delete the reverse and add a circle with a finish at 00:24:324 (to make this important beat clickable) Changed
7. 00:26:756 (1,2,3,4) - Just a suggestion, but you can maybe use drum hitsounds ? (clap/finish) Interesting, I like how it sounds. Changed.
8. 00:36:283 - Use the slidertick for the clap here, it's important for the rhythm :3 Done
9. 00:36:080 (4,5) - Try to avoid stacking, since it's hard to play it with Hidden mode =/ I suggest to move (5) at x88|y60 Changed
10. 00:46:013 - You forget the clap with the slidertick (and remove the one at 00:45:810 (5)'s tail) Fixed
11. 00:47:228 (1,2) - I suggest to add a 1/1 slider instead because there's too much circles for this pattern Changed
12. 00:58:581 - Don't forget to make this beat clickable, then add a circle here and make 00:58:175 (5) a 1/2 slider :3 I tried it, but I really don't like how it feels. No change.
13. 01:13:175 (1,2) - The blanket between these 2 sliders isn't perfect =/ (also the pattern is a bit weird imo) Blanket fixed, I think
14. 01:21:283 (1) - This NC doens't follow the previous NC pattern, you really should delete it Intended. I changed the NC pattern for this section.
15. 01:24:323 (6) - The curves of this slider aren't perfect. I suggest to use 2 construction point between the red anchor instead of 1 :Fixed slider
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:28:986 - 01:29:189 - I suggest to add 2 circles here to follow the song. Done

Insane

1. 00:07:131 (1,4) - These 2 sliders are too curved, the blanket with 00:07:565 (2) isn't perfect, so try to reduce the curve of both slider a bit Fixed
2. 00:13:783 (4,5) - I don't think stacking them is a good idea since it's going to be impossible to guess the first time with Hidden mode. I suggest to move (5) around x512|y72. Changed around this area
3. 00:14:391 (6,1) - Same issue as above ^
4. 00:15:303 (4) - This circle is overmapped. It means there's no beat on the song at this moment, so it's absurd to add a circle here, so it must be deleted Changed
5. 00:23:107 (2) - Same as above for the reverse of this slider (then you must use a 1/2 slider instead) Changed
6. 00:23:918 (5) - I suggest to delete the reverse and add a circle with a hitfinish at 00:24:324 (it'll follow the song) Changed
7. 00:30:607 (5) - This slider is too much curved, it makes the flow a bit weird because of the slider's movement Changed
8. 00:35:472 (4) - I think the finish on its tail isn't needed. If you want to keep it, then make the beat clickable. I decided to remove the finish
9. 00:36:081 (1) - This slider makes 00:36:283 impossible to clap with the slidertick. Maybe you can use 2 of slider tick rate then ? (The Hard has 2 of slider tick rate so Insane can have 2 too) I changed it to a beat and a 1/1 slider instead
10. 00:43:986 (1,3) - Like I said above, it's quite impossible to guess there's a circle here (for (3)) in Hidden mode =/ Hmm, no change for this one.
11. 00:45:810 (2) - Same as above / Use 2 of slider tick rate is a good idea I think Made the same change as above
12. 00:53:918 (2,2,2) - These 3 sliders are overmapped. The reverse (which is on a blue tick) doesn't follow the song since there's no beat at this moment. Please use 1/2 sliders instead. Changed the pattern in this area. Also fixes the problem people were having with the ds being overly huge at this section.
13. 00:57:262 (3,2) - Same as above for these 2 circles, they must be deleted. Deleted
14. 01:05:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The rhythm is wrong (there's many overmapped circles). The rhythm we can hear is this one : RIP only thing unchanged over 6 months, lol. I have changed the rhythm.
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:09:932 (1) - You may decrease the curve of this slider to increase the flow. Done
16. 01:10:641 (4,2) - These objects are overmapped for the same reason as every overmapped object in the diff. Looks like I'll be changing the pattern here. I'll do this later.
17. 01:12:769 (4,5,1) - The distance snap between these 3 objects isn't the same. It's really hard and annoying to play, so maybe you can move (5) around x48|y232 ? There is supposed to be a jump here. Since I'll be changing the pattern at this part, I'll see what I can do to make the jump clearer.
18. 01:17:127 (5) - ^ Removed
19. 01:19:965 (3,7,3,7,2,4) - Same as above (they are ALL overmapped and MUST be deleted :3) All deleted
20. 01:28:073 (3) - This one is also overmapped. Deleted
21. 01:29:189 - I suggest to add a circle here since it'll follow the song. Done

I hope my mod was helpful oAo I think your mod was more than helpful

Good luck for rank <3

Kenterz wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue \:D/

Wonkee's Insane

1. 00:08:000 (3,1) - These slider tail aren't perfectly stacked =/ Fixed.
2. 00:28:580 (3) - The slider doesn't have to be 1/4, it's overmapped since the beat on the blue tick doesn't exist on the song. Just use a simple 1/2 slider please. Done.
3. 00:29:086 (5) - Same as above, this beat doesn't exist in the song, so you MUST delete it. Very well.
4. 00:30:202 (2,2) - This overlap is bad, i really suggest to avoid it (maybe you can stack it with 00:30:202 (2)'s reverse)Adjusted and stacked the 2's.
5. 00:33:546 (4) - This beat must be deleted because it's overmapped !Ok. Will look out for overmapping.
6. 00:35:878 - This beat must be clickable if you can to follow the NC pattern (then you have to add a NC for the circle and delete the wrong one at 00:36:282 (1))Fixed all (most?) NC issues
7. 00:37:195 (4) - This beat is also overmapped and must be deleted. Done.
8. 00:39:323 (1) - Move the NC on 00:39:121 (7)Done.
9. 00:41:857 (6) - This one is also overmapped. You need to follow the beat of the song, it's the principle of the game ;w; Will try.
10. 00:43:275 (5) - Same as above
11. 00:46:924 (6) - ^Done all .
12. 00:48:546 (5) - ^
13. 00:50:878 (2) - This must be a 1/2 slider to follow the song Fixed.
14. 00:55:337 - This circle must be clickable for the same reason as above
15. 00:56:248 (2) - This circle is also overmapped and must be deleted
16. 00:56:147 (1) - This NC isn't needed, you must delete it
17. 00:58:479 (8) - ^
18. 01:00:607 (2) - ^
19. 01:04:661 (1) - Move the NC on 01:04:864 (2)
20. 01:05:472 (3,4,9,10) - The distance between (3)/(4) and (9)/(10) aren't the same as the distance between the circles in the stream.Changed. Adjusted shape and DS.
21. 01:10:032 (2,8) - These 2 circles are both not following the song. Instead of stream, you can make some jump patterns for exemple ? Changed pattern.
22. 01:18:039 (1,2,3) - The distance between these 3 objects isn't the same, the vectors 1->2 and 2->3 aren't equal (welcome to mathematics ;3) Seems like I didn't recheck with DS. Fixed.
23. 01:26:147 (1,2,3) - ^

The diff is quite poor. There's not a lot of patterns and there's some overmapped beats. Try to fix some of them and to add patterns, then it'll be a good map to play :3

Overall, tried to add patterns throughout! Thanks for pointing out the weak points!
Thanks for the mod!

1. Reduce OD by 1 tick, it's too high right now for the easiest difficulty of the mapset imo.

1. 00:48:040 (2,3,4) - Small spacing inconsistency here, try to fix it properly if possible.
2. 01:17:634 (1,2) - This stack is way too confusing for an Easy, try to place (1) somewhere else.
3. 01:24:526 (3) - New combo due to the lyrics and music change.
4. 01:25:742 (1) - Remove new combo from here afterwards.
5. 01:29:391 (1) - Add a finish to emphasize the end of the song.

1. 00:45:815 - Unsnapped green line, resnap it properly please.
2. 01:03:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing of this pattern is inconsistent, please don't forget to always use same spacing on Normals.

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick, they're the same as Normal right now, doesn't really make much sense.

1. 00:32:639 - Unsnapped green line, resnap it properly please.
2. 00:55:539 (4) - You should add that custom clap on this slider to be consistent with the rest of them.

1. I'd lower HP Drain by 1 tick, it feels too high for this kind of song to me.

1. 00:30:202 (2,3) - I know what you wanted to do here, but the spacing kinda feels too close and weird to play.
2. 00:47:635 (2) - Add a clap on slider start, it seems that you've missed it.
3. 01:05:067 (1,2) - Again, spacing way too close and kinda strange to play.

1. 00:19:256 (7) - This circle touches the HP Bar quite a lot, even though I think it's okay.

Andrea wrote:

~Normal~

1. 00:45:815 - Unsnapped green line, resnap it properly please. Fixed
2. 01:03:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing of this pattern is inconsistent, please don't forget to always use same spacing on Normals. Fixed

~Hard~

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick, they're the same as Normal right now, doesn't really make much sense. Done

1. 00:32:639 - Unsnapped green line, resnap it properly please. Fixed
2. 00:55:539 (4) - You should add that custom clap on this slider to be consistent with the rest of them. Fixed

~Insane~

1. 00:19:256 (7) - This circle touches the HP Bar quite a lot, even though I think it's okay. Moved it

Not bad to be a first map actually, keep it up. :3 Thanks!

Andrea wrote:

~Wonkeee's Insane~

1. I'd lower HP Drain by 1 tick, it feels too high for this kind of song to me. Ok. Fixed.

1. 00:30:202 (2,3) - I know what you wanted to do here, but the spacing kinda feels too close and weird to play. Oh I see it. Fixed.
2. 00:47:635 (2) - Add a clap on slider start, it seems that you've missed it. Added
3. 01:05:067 (1,2) - Again, spacing way too close and kinda strange to play. Adjusted.

Knotts wrote:

Hi, from my queue

General

1. Replace your soft-hitclap with this: http://puu.sh/chbja/c62fccd165.wav - it sounds a lot better tbh. Don't forget to rename the file if you end up using it. Hokay
2. Might want to search for a better quality mp3 if there is one. I think that's as good as it gets

Insane

1. 00:02:686 (6) - NC Done
2. 00:03:131 (7,1) - Make 00:03:131 (7) a circle and move 00:03:575 (1) to 00:03:353 to follow the vocals better Done
3. 00:03:575 (1) - Remove NC Done
4. 00:04:464 (5) - NC Done
5. 00:10:444 (3) - Move a little too the left so it looks like 00:09:777 (1,2) - is spaced the same apart as 00:09:777 (1,3). Nah, right now its stacked on the tail of 00:09:333 (8) - and I want to keep it that way.Example
6. 00:11:333 (1) - Add clap with the finish Done
7. 00:14:999 (2) - Remove clap Done
8. 00:15:202 (3) - Add clap Done
9. 00:15:608 (5) - Remove clap Done
10. 00:15:709 (6) - Add clap Done
11. 00:18:242 (2) - Remove clap Done
12. 00:18:445 (3) - Clap on head Done
13. 00:18:445 (3,4,5,6) - Rhythm should be something like this. Same with 00:15:405 (4,5,6,7). If you end up not changing it, remove clap from 00:18:851 (4). Yup, slowed down the music and you are absolutely right. Changed rhythm.
14. 00:19:458 (8) - Drum clap Done
15. 00:21:283 (1) - Remove clap from tail Done
16. 00:21:688 (2) - Clap Done
17. 00:21:891 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:18:445 (3,4,5,6). If you don't change, remove clap from 00:22:093 (4) and add to 00:22:195 (5) Done
18. 00:26:757 (3,7,9,11) - Drum finishes on these. Drum claps might work also, not sure which one sounds better so test them both out and see which you like I used both
19. 00:29:087 (6) - Overmap, This circle doesn't map any part of the music. I'd change 00:28:985 (5) into a 1/2 slider Done
20. 00:31:620 (4) - Move a little to the right so it's not overlapping with 00:31:013 (1) Done
21. 00:33:952 (6,7,8) - Overmap, but this one might not matter too much I think this one should be fine
22. 00:35:472 (4) - Moving this to somewhere around (235, 161) would look better Done
23. 00:39:121 (1) - Remove finish Done
24. 00:39:932 (4) - Remove clap and add clap to 00:40:033 (5) Done
25. 00:40:539 (8) - Drum finish Done
    00:40:539 (8,1) - This should have more spacing than 00:40:337 (7,8) because of the finish and what not. I think I prefer keeping the triangle here
26. 00:46:520 (4,6) - Clap Done
27. 00:53:006 (5,6) - Swap the clap from (6) to (5) I think I prefer it on (6)
28. 00:53:411 (8,9) - Drum finishes Done
29. 00:53:716 (1,2) - I'd turn this into a 1/1 slider to follow the vocals better, sounds nice to me Probably not going to touch the rhythm here.
30. 00:59:493 (4) - Clap Done
31. 01:02:634 (5) - Remove finish Done
32. 01:03:648 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Claps on all of these, remove all the finishes. Then do this to the volume. Sounds really cool to me like this. Might want to adjust the spacing after this, lower on the lower volume parts and then slowly increasing. Tis has been done. I think I might do this technique on that stream near the start too.
33. 01:04:864 (1) - Clap on tail Done
34. 01:05:472 (2,3) - Remove finish, clap on both Done
35. 01:05:776 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Remove all the hitsounding you have on any of these. Claps on 01:05:776 (4,5,6) and drum set with nothing on it for 01:06:081 (7,8,9,10,11,12). Might want to play around with the volume here too. Done. Playing around with the volume is fun, lol. Probably not going to change the spacing for this stream, though.
36. 01:09:222 (4) - Clap Done
37. 01:10:540 (3) - Triplet? Done
38. 01:12:364 (4) - Clap on the middle repeating part Done
39. 01:12:871 (6,7) - Drum finishes Done
40. 01:13:175 (1,2) - Change into a 1/1 slider to follow the vocals? Prefer not to
41. 01:15:709 (4) - Clap Done
42. 01:17:229 (5) - Remove finish Done
43. 01:18:445 (3) - Replace finish with clap an d you could add a circle at 01:18:547 Done
44. 01:18:648 (4) - Replace finish with clap Done
45. 01:19:256 (6,7,8,9) - Should be all claps, nothing else Done
46. 01:19:661 (1) - 1/1 slider? Done
47. 01:20:472 (3) - Remove clap Done
48. 01:22:094 (4,5) - Switch clap from (4) to (5) Done
49. 01:23:310 (5) - Remove clap from tail Done
50. 01:24:323 (1) - Finish on tail Done
51. 01:25:337 (4) - Remove finish on head and tail, add clap to tail Done
52. 01:25:945 (5,6) - Claps on both of these Done
53. 01:28:479 (4,6) - Claps Done
54. 01:28:986 (8,9) - Clap and Drum finish on 01:29:189 (10) Done
55. 01:29:391 - Add circle here with finish and NC, add spinner at 01:29:493. Done
    
    There were some questionable finishes but I couldn't decide whether to delete them or not.
    Apply these hitsound changes to other difficulties if possible.

This mod kinda killed me so now I'm too lazy to mod the rest lmao. I think the map sounds a lot better with this hitsounding and the new clap so please consider them. PM me if I'm being too lazy and I'll try to IRC with you or something lol

1. soft-slidertick and soft-sliderslide are both silenced which is not rankable, there are some diffs that have this issue,just remove the soft-slidertick
2. soft-sliderwhistle (2, 3, 7) are silenced I dunno if you are really using those files and what's the purpose of them, can you explain pls
3. I feel your timing really off in some points, maybe the first line need -10 -12, anyways will be cool if you ask some timing expert

1. AR 8 make your map look really overlaped and with a lot of objects at the same time, maybe try AR 8.5
2. 00:02:464 (5) - there are some objects in this mapset, that doesn't follow a clearly sound from the music, I guess is better if you remove those objects, since the pause feels better to me, same goes for 00:04:242 (4) - and other similars
3. 00:05:131 (4,5,6) - is nice how you are following the vocals with those sliders, but at the same time I feel this inconsistent, since you didn't the same at 00:04:464 (1,2) - (I'll suggest to make this 00:04:464 (1,2) - a slider to fit better the vocals)
4. 00:05:575 (5,6) - blanket is a bit off, not really a big problem, but ye
5. 00:06:686 (7,8) - similar to 00:02:464 -, if you really want to keep them, atleast use a slider instead
6. 00:08:000 (4,5) - a 1/1 slider will suit the music better, and you will bring more emphasis to 00:08:666
7. 00:08:000 about hitsounds you are missing a whistle here, since is in the music and you should remove the one at 00:08:444 (5) - which is not supported by nothing in the music
8. 00:10:444 (3,1) - mmmm this rhythm is a bit weird to me, mainly cuz the spinner should start at 00:11:555 - my suggestion is to add a repeat in 00:10:444 (3) - and move the spinner to 00:11:555 - like this
9. 00:13:175 (1,4) - this is not stacked correctly, sorry for nazi
10. 00:13:175 from this part you stopped using whistles, why? use a every stanza pattern or every first and third dowbeat, whistles make your map to don't sound plain T-T
11. 00:15:608 a bit wonder why you didn't map this beat (your doubles pattern is really weird to play) I preffer a stream here suit better the music, this apply to every other similar if you agree with me
12. 00:20:269 (4) - a repeat slider is better for this part, the drum at 00:20:472 - is really prominent to be ignored like that
13. 00:22:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is fine.. but the rhythm of the song bring you an oportunity to make somethink awesome, maybe use this rhythm
14. 00:24:526 (1) - consider to reduce volume at this spinner sound really bad in game
15. 00:27:161 (7) - why this finish? clap sound a lot better and is consistent with 00:26:756 (3) -
16. 00:27:566 (11) - ^
17. 00:31:824 (5,6) - there are some rhythms that can be better, you are mapping all in 1/2, but there are some spots like 00:31:824 (5,6) - where the music call for some triplets, maybe use some 174 repeat sliders at this point? should be like this
18. 00:33:243 (3,4) - again the rhythm doesn't sound good cuz make the feeling that you are following the vocals with 00:32:837 (2) - and then you suddenly change with 00:33:243 (3,4) - , this rhythm sound better for this part
19. 00:33:851 (5,6,7,8,1) - some streams shapes like this one looks really weird to me, using the tool at Compose > convert slider to stream can help you to make perfect curves
20. 00:36:081 (5) - missing NC, since you are following a every stanza pattern
21. 00:46:824 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:33:851
22. 00:48:445 (6,2) - with your current AR some overlaps are really noticeable as this one, (ignore this if you take my AR suggestion)
23. 00:53:716 (1,2) - weird rhythm that slider (2) is starting in a really weak beat for not reason (I think), a 1/1 slider can be your best option for this part if not just ctrl g the rhythm at 00:53:716 (1,2) -
24. 00:54:526 (1,2) - same as above ^, also this 00:54:526 (1) - NC is not necessary at all
25. 00:57:566 (4,5) - spacing
26. 01:10:337 (2,3,4,5,6) - nice pattern, but can you consider to move it to the center of the grid? for better looking
27. 01:24:729 (2,4) - this blanket is too close and look really bad in game

1. 00:09:777 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern look a bit random IMO, since the start of the map is really nice, maybe a square pattern can look better here?
2. 00:10:444 (4,1) - same feeling as insane diff about this rhythm, I don't feel comfortable with it, try this
3. 00:15:709 should be atriplet according to the music, the sound there is really prominent to be ignored
4. 00:18:851 (5) - , 00:22:094 (3) - there are some more spots like this one, instead of mapping 1/2 every time, you can try to add some triplets atleast where the music is really prominent, your rhythm will be improved a lot
5. 00:24:323 (1) - add a circle will finish here and start the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 later ( 00:24:425 - or 00:24:526 -)
6. 00:27:769 (1) - do you mind moving this to the center of the grid, like this look a lot better for me
7. 00:32:837 (2) - with this rhythm you are breaking your clap pattern, use a 1/2 repeat slider instead? so you can keep your clap pattern
8. 00:35:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - a perfect start pattern will look a lot better, the current one looks a bit messy to me
9. 00:46:520 should be a triplet here, the 1/2 slider sound really outplace, try a circle triplet or a 1/4 repeat slider
10. 00:52:702 this slider should be snaped at 1/4, there is nothing in the music at 00:52:905 - but yes in 00:52:803
11. 00:59:493 add a circle? same reason as the others
12. 01:09:323 (4,5) - bad overlap here, consider to avoid this cuz it doesn't look nicely in game
13. 01:29:391 (1) - same suggestion as 00:24:323

1. why is this tick rate 2 when the insanes are 1? make this consistent pls
2. 00:04:464 (4,5) - use more spacing here and try to avoid this kind of overlaps in every instance, 1,3 spacing seems fine
3. 00:08:000 (3,4,5) - ^ same as above, this look not nicely
4. 00:10:444 (2,1) - same suggestion as insane about the rhythm
5. 00:18:851 (7,8,9) - a perfect line will look better IMO
6. 00:32:836 tick hitsounding some really bad here in my opinion >:, consider to reduce the volume by maybe 10%? do the same for every instance where you use claps at the ticks
7. mostly fine, but I have some advices for this, 1º try to use some triplets to keep better spread with the insane, 2º avoid some overlaps due to the spacing for example 00:04:464 -, 3º use more whistles in this diff like I suggest you in insane

1. HP and OD -1 for better spread , also to have a more balanced settings
2. 00:00:909 (2,3) - just and advice maybe for future maps if you don't want to spacing again all the diff, use more spacing to avoid those overlaps in normal diffs, don't be afraid of big spacing
3. 00:10:444 (6,1) - same rhythm suggestion as the other diffs, also reduce the volume in the spinner, since sound really bad atm (this apply for every diff)
4. 00:52:499 (4,5,6) - a repeat slider will be a better idea here, not sure if normal players can do this (taking in consideration that is the first time that you use this kind of patterns)
5. mostly fine, same as other diffs try to work more with hitsounds and avoid overlaps

1. 00:27:770 (1) - too soon after a spinner
2. 01:17:634 (4,5) - avoid using stacks in easy diffs, new players can't read them, also is the onlyone in this diff o.o
3. 01:24:526 (1) - from here you arer starting breaking your combo pattern, why? 01:24:526 (1) -
4. 01:24:526 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:26:959 (4) - Add NC

Natsu wrote:

Wonkeee's Insane :

1. 00:09:777 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern look a bit random IMO, since the start of the map is really nice, maybe a square pattern can look better here? Made it into a square. Looks better!
2. 00:10:444 (4,1) - same feeling as insane diff about this rhythm, I don't feel comfortable with it, try this Done.
3. 00:15:709 should be atriplet according to the music, the sound there is really prominent to be ignored Fixed.
4. 00:18:851 (5) - , 00:22:094 (3) - there are some more spots like this one, instead of mapping 1/2 every time, you can try to add some triplets atleast where the music is really prominent, your rhythm will be improved a lot Fixed. Tried to look for more around the map and fixed them as well
5. 00:24:323 (1) - add a circle will finish here and start the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 later ( 00:24:425 - or 00:24:526 -) Done.
6. 00:27:769 (1) - do you mind moving this to the center of the grid, like this look a lot better for me Lol not at all. Looks better.
7. 00:32:837 (2) - with this rhythm you are breaking your clap pattern, use a 1/2 repeat slider instead? so you can keep your clap pattern Changed.
8. 00:35:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - a perfect start pattern will look a lot better, the current one looks a bit messy to me Fixed into a (hopefully) better one.
9. 00:46:520 should be a triplet here, the 1/2 slider sound really outplace, try a circle triplet or a 1/4 repeat slider Went with the 1/4 repeat.
10. 00:52:702 this slider should be snaped at 1/4, there is nothing in the music at 00:52:905 - but yes in 00:52:803 Changed.
11. 00:59:493 add a circle? same reason as the others Done.
12. 01:09:323 (4,5) - bad overlap here, consider to avoid this cuz it doesn't look nicely in game Arranged differently.
13. 01:29:391 (1) - same suggestion as 00:24:323 Done.

Natsu wrote:

M4M as Requested

General:

1. soft-slidertick and soft-sliderslide are both silenced which is not rankable, there are some diffs that have this issue,just remove the soft-slidertick Done
2. soft-sliderwhistle (2, 3, 7) are silenced I dunno if you are really using those files and what's the purpose of them, can you explain pls Umm, I dunno actually. I'll just remove them.
3. I feel your timing really off in some points, maybe the first line need -10 -12, anyways will be cool if you ask some timing expert But I already asked Deif about the timing...

Insane:

1. AR 8 make your map look really overlaped and with a lot of objects at the same time, maybe try AR 8.5 Done
2. 00:02:464 (5) - there are some objects in this mapset, that doesn't follow a clearly sound from the music, I guess is better if you remove those objects, since the pause feels better to me, same goes for 00:04:242 (4) - and other similars I've changed the opening around a bit
3. 00:05:131 (4,5,6) - is nice how you are following the vocals with those sliders, but at the same time I feel this inconsistent, since you didn't the same at 00:04:464 (1,2) - (I'll suggest to make this 00:04:464 (1,2) - a slider to fit better the vocals) Done
4. 00:05:575 (5,6) - blanket is a bit off, not really a big problem, but ye Got changed when I was changing around objects
5. 00:06:686 (7,8) - similar to 00:02:464 -, if you really want to keep them, atleast use a slider instead Removed when I was changing notes
6. 00:08:000 (4,5) - a 1/1 slider will suit the music better, and you will bring more emphasis to 00:08:666 Done
7. 00:08:000 about hitsounds you are missing a whistle here, since is in the music and you should remove the one at 00:08:444 (5) - which is not supported by nothing in the music Done
8. 00:10:444 (3,1) - mmmm this rhythm is a bit weird to me, mainly cuz the spinner should start at 00:11:555 - my suggestion is to add a repeat in 00:10:444 (3) - and move the spinner to 00:11:555 - like this Done
9. 00:13:175 (1,4) - this is not stacked correctly, sorry for nazi Fixed
10. 00:13:175 from this part you stopped using whistles, why? use a every stanza pattern or every first and third dowbeat, whistles make your map to don't sound plain T-T Okay. Will do.
11. 00:15:608 a bit wonder why you didn't map this beat (your doubles pattern is really weird to play) I preffer a stream here suit better the music, this apply to every other similar if you agree with me I think the doubles pattern should be fine, as I think it sounds worse when streamed imo
12. 00:20:269 (4) - a repeat slider is better for this part, the drum at 00:20:472 - is really prominent to be ignored like that Done
13. 00:22:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is fine.. but the rhythm of the song bring you an oportunity to make somethink awesome, maybe use I did change it, but I didn't use your timing. The triplets felt overmapped to me.this rhythm
14. 00:24:526 (1) - consider to reduce volume at this spinner sound really bad in game Done
15. 00:27:161 (7) - why this finish? clap sound a lot better and is consistent with 00:26:756 (3) - Changed
16. 00:27:566 (11) - ^ Changed
17. 00:31:824 (5,6) - there are some rhythms that can be better, you are mapping all in 1/2, but there are some spots like 00:31:824 (5,6) - where the music call for some triplets, maybe use some 174 repeat sliders at this point? should be like this Wait, triplets, really? I'm trying to listen in the music to where it sounds like I need triplets but I really can't hear it. No change.
18. 00:33:243 (3,4) - again the rhythm doesn't sound good cuz make the feeling that you are following the vocals with 00:32:837 (2) - and then you suddenly change with 00:33:243 (3,4) - , this rhythm sound better for this part Changed
19. 00:33:851 (5,6,7,8,1) - some streams shapes like this one looks really weird to me, using the tool at Compose > convert slider to stream can help you to make perfect curves Oh, I never knew about this tool. Fixed the stream.
20. 00:36:081 (5) - missing NC, since you are following a every stanza pattern Added
21. 00:46:824 (6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:33:851 Fixed
22. 00:48:445 (6,2) - with your current AR some overlaps are really noticeable as this one, (ignore this if you take my AR suggestion) I took the AR suggestion
23. 00:53:716 (1,2) - weird rhythm that slider (2) is starting in a really weak beat for not reason (I think), a 1/1 slider can be your best option for this part if not just ctrl g the rhythm at 00:53:716 (1,2) - I Ctrl-G'ed it
24. 00:54:526 (1,2) - same as above ^, also this 00:54:526 (1) - NC is not necessary at all Changed
25. 00:57:566 (4,5) - spacing Spaced them out more
26. 01:10:337 (2,3,4,5,6) - nice pattern, but can you consider to move it to the center of the grid? for better looking Done
27. 01:24:729 (2,4) - this blanket is too close and look really bad in game

Fixed

Hard:

1. why is this tick rate 2 when the insanes are 1? make this consistent pls Changed the tick rate on the insane to 2
2. 00:04:464 (4,5) - use more spacing here and try to avoid this kind of overlaps in every instance, 1,3 spacing seems fine Fixed
3. 00:08:000 (3,4,5) - ^ same as above, this look not nicely Fixed
4. 00:10:444 (2,1) - same suggestion as insane about the rhythm Changed
5. 00:18:851 (7,8,9) - a perfect line will look better IMO I think its fine as is
6. 00:32:836 tick hitsounding some really bad here in my opinion >:, consider to reduce the volume by maybe 10%? do the same for every instance where you use claps at the ticks Okay
7. mostly fine, but I have some advices for this, 1º try to use some triplets to keep better spread with the insane, 2º avoid some overlaps due to the spacing for example 00:04:464 -, 3º use more whistles in this diff like I suggest you in insane I disagree with the first point. I think the spread problem is actually between the Normal and the Hard since Wonkeee's Insane is pretty close in star rating to this hard. So I probably won't be adding the triplets.

Normal:

1. HP and OD -1 for better spread , also to have a more balanced settings HP down by 1
2. 00:00:909 (2,3) - just and advice maybe for future maps if you don't want to spacing again all the diff, use more spacing to avoid those overlaps in normal diffs, don't be afraid of big spacing Okay. Hopefully I won't have to respace this one
3. 00:10:444 (6,1) - same rhythm suggestion as the other diffs, also reduce the volume in the spinner, since sound really bad atm (this apply for every diff) Changed
4. 00:52:499 (4,5,6) - a repeat slider will be a better idea here, not sure if normal players can do this (taking in consideration that is the first time that you use this kind of patterns) Changed
5. mostly fine, same as other diffs try to work more with hitsounds and avoid overlaps Will do

I think insane and the overall hitsounds can have a bit more work, GL with this

Konei wrote:

Poke me for a mod after replying to Minakami Yuki's.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

M4M from No_Gu's modding team

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]

1. add 'ルーンファクトリー4' to source, move 'Rune Factory 4' to tags. Done

[Normal]

1. 00:06:020 (2) - add whistle at head to emphasize the vocal Done
2. 00:37:499 (1) - although it follows the ds, the repeat is too close to the former circle, move the repeat to x:382, y:10 for an example, feels better to me Moved
3. 00:48:039 (2,3) - hmm, blanket better? Fixed, I think
4. 00:50:878 (2) - same suggestion as 00:37:499 (1) - I think this one is fine
5. 00:52:499 (4) - ^ ^
6. 01:08:310 (5,1) - too close, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2153553 Fixed
7. 01:11:959 - missing slidertick Fixed
8. 01:16:824 (1,2) - yeah same reason, looks too close~ Changed
9. 01:28:175 - missing slidertick Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:07:131 (2,3,1,2) - whyyyyy are they in the same styleeeeeee? I think its fine...
2. 00:23:918 (4) - add nc for better reading Done
3. 00:24:526 (1) - recommend to silence the spin at end Done
4. 00:39:120 (5) - NC Nah, I want to keep the NC's on every other white tick
5. 00:39:932 (7) - also can clap at head, it fits the music Done
6. 00:59:391 (8) - also, lack hitsounds at head Done
7. 01:04:864 (7) - NC Same as above
   
   Most parts just keep ds and blanket, a little boring tho... Yeah, I mapped it a long time ago

[Insane]

1. 00:17:026 (2,3,4,5) - make it in a curve doesnt feels good when playing, for better choice you can https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2153946 I like that. Changed.
2. 00:24:324 (6) - flow suggestion, move it to somewhere like x:130, y:320 Done
3. 00:26:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - although there are actually some 1/4s in the music, but hears really strange and feels not well with this stream, I feels better with this http://puu.sh/cjxd0/420c79ad00.jpg, have a try? I will consider it
4. 00:48:851 (1,2,3) - sth in a line doesnt plays well Changed
5. 01:18:648 (5) - turn it to a tripet? Done
6. 01:22:905 (1,2,3,4) - it's quite overmapped here :< Will change it
7. 01:23:918 (6,2) - stack it Done
   
   Flows are not good imo, maybe you can learn some more from ranked maps to make your map more suitable and comfortable for playing~ Reworking the diff a bit

Good luck.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

M4M from No_Gu's modding team

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]

1. add 'ルーンファクトリー4' to source, move 'Rune Factory 4' to tags.

[Wonkeee's Insane]

1. od-1 hp-0.5 for make some difference with Insane, also to show this is a lower difficulty. Left it the same; I sorta want it to be an insane =P.
2. 00:22:094 (3,4,5) - dont make tripet like this(starting on a white tick is weirdddddd), recommend to add a note at 00:21:993 - Adjusted.
3. 00:24:324 (6) - finish Added.
4. 00:27:161 (1,2,3) - drum sampleset?
5. 00:46:824 (5,1) - why not make a jump here? Made a jump.
6. 00:53:006 (4,5) - why not move to x,192? Done.
7. 01:05:472 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - that's really weird to play since 2 is a 1/4 slider, the rhythm is quite hard to catch, just replace 2 with 2 notes Done.
8. 01:26:858 - add a note? Rearranged.
9. 01:28:581 (4,5,6,7) - weird distance Oops fixed.
10. 01:29:391 (8) - finish Added.
    
    same as Easy, the default clap actually doesnt fit the song, why dont use custom hitsounds? Not entirely sure why I am not. Willl consider
    Also, most of the parts are just mapped in 2.0x distance, the first feeling is that it's just a hard+ or like something.
    The diff itself has a big space to improve.

Good luck.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

[Setsu's Easy]

1. 00:04:464 (3) - make the end more like a curve from a circle? :> fixed
2. 00:34:256 (1) - finish at head? added
3. 00:40:742 (1) - ^ ^
4. 00:43:986 (1) - ^ ^
   
   Main problem of the Easy diff is hitsounds probably(especially clap), since the submitter have updated custom hitsounds and default hs doesnt fit at all, why not have a try on custom hs? at this case, I love the usage of defaults at this song

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Setsurei wrote:

@ Amasuro: sorry for the wait Amasuro.
next time you may remind me via in-game PM if I took so long on fixing stuffs (more than 48 hours)
I tend to forgot especially if I got bunch of activity to do

I open my mail 24/7, so I know if there's a new post there.
but after reading what's inside I forgot to fix since I sometimes can't fix directly after reading