Rabpit - Saika [CatchTheBeat] · forum

mingmichael

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-06-09T07:26:53+00:00

M4M request i guess(?)

[m1ng's Rain]
01:22:660 (6,1) - i think the HD should come between this two notes instead of 2 and 3 yes it is~ but because of the calm part, i decided no to use HD for every NC, just for to emphasize a sound like on 01:23:281 - and 01:24:522 -

looks ok for me, but patterns keep repeating may be a bit boring for the players. yes i did some repetition patterns here

well i will consider again from another modders hehee
good luck o/

Krfawy

m1ng's Rain
00:19:143 (3,4) - Maybe CTRL + H and CTRL + G every note alone? nope it can't. 00:19:143 (3) - will stack with 00:18:729 (2) - and it plays weird too ._.

POWODZENIA! XDDD

thanks for the mods, guys~ but sorry no changes atm ><

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-06-10T05:06:14+00:00

Mod/recheck requested in pm.

[Cup]

00:25:557 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not against this but you followed two different rhythm with these and this is not a wise decision on Cup. I suggest you to ignore the white tick at (1,2,3) and just add a repeat slider to the red ones.
01:11:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is kinda boring. How about to try to follow the beats at the red tick a little bit too? With some sliders, sometimes ignoring the white ticks.
01:22:867 (2) - How about trying to add some interesting patterns to these long slider. Something like an easier Z would be good.

I have one main problem with this, and that is there is no difference between parts. To avoid this you should try to increase the distance a bit during kiais. And remember, Cup should not contain any jump.

[Salad]

00:23:902 (2,3) - I think a repeat slider and a single circle with a jump would be better here.
00:33:833 (3) - To be honest I don't really want to see 1/4s on Salad. Its your choice but I don't like it.
00:34:247 (4,1) - I wonder why is this isn't a jump. It should be. o.o
00:43:764 (3,4,5) - Its okay to follow that beat and I'm not against it, but the ones at white ticks are much stronger. This means most unexperienced player will end up following that instead of the nice one in the background. To avoid this I suggest you to use a repeat slider instead of circles.
00:58:660 (2,3,4,1) - Same here.
01:24:936 (2,3,4) - I would like to delete/or move (3) 1/2 earlier and add a circle to 01:25:557. These are much stronger than the one at 01:25:350.
01:28:867 (3,4,1,2) - This is also a little bit weird. How about add a repeat at (3). Start (1) at 01:29:488 with a repeat? I think it sounds much better.
01:31:764 (3) - Between 01:31:971 and 01:32:385 should be a triplet. Those are much stronger than the ones at the previous and next red tick. 01:32:798 can be a jump anyways.

To be honest there are some place where its possible to add jump but you ignored it. Thats not a problem since the kiai isn't full of jumpable rhythms but at least please try to adjust your distances to add some differnce to the kiais. Currently its possible to fc this diff w/o pressing dash and on Salad jumps are allowed.

[Platter]

I already modded this but I still have some suggestion after testplay.

00:18:108 (5,1) - Hdash because a different rhythm is staring here.
00:47:901 (9,1) - Add Hdash here too. If you listen a bit closely there is a cimbal in the background and its good to have a bigger dash at these parts.
01:40:660 (4,1) - No Hdash. Why? Its always good to have one at the beginning of the kiai.

Also I suggest Tick rate 2 because it is very good for your longer sliders. Sometimes you ignored white tick which is not bad but having a tick at those places gives a nice feedback.

[Rain]

HP7 after 5? Thats a little crazy. (I will add a suggestion to this after the mod.)

Ah, very good flow. I like it. :3 My only problem is with this that even tho the kiais contains more Hdash there is no real difference. Because of this its hard to recognize the kiai. Please try to make some difference in the patterns just during the kiai. I won't give you suggestions, I leave the mapping to you but it would be good if you can make some movement a bit bigger. With an example: 00:35:488 (2,3,4,5,6) - Here its possible to place (3) to the right side and then with (4,5) comming back to left. Between (5,6) can be a Hdash especially because I think 00:36:316 (6,1) should be a repeat slider. If you can do something like this during both kiai the map will be perfect for me. :3
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Now about the HP7 on Rain. I think +1 needs to be added on every diff since 7 is good for this Rain. I'm not against this difference but with this it looks like the spread is missing a difficulty. Its entirely up to you to decide. Good luck with this mapset and star because of the Rain. :3

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-06-10T09:32:35+00:00

Serena- wrote:
M4M request i guess(?)
[Xinely's Salad]
to be honest, i don't really get the rhythm in this diff.(doesn't mean that its wrong or anything, just i suck at the rhythm thingy ~~the reason why i suck at mapping~~)
00:36:316 (5) - why does this slider end so quickly when 00:37:350 (3) - this is long? i think you should end it at 00:36:729 - or shorten the other slider aaa the music forced me to do this ~

the patterns are nice though

good luck o/

Kurokami wrote:
Mod/recheck requested in pm.

[Salad]

00:23:902 (2,3) - I think a repeat slider and a single circle with a jump would be better here. nope, pitch of music is on 00:24:316 -
00:33:833 (3) - To be honest I don't really want to see 1/4s on Salad. Its your choice but I don't like it. 1/4 is easy to catch in CtB, i guess it's fine
00:34:247 (4,1) - I wonder why is this isn't a jump. It should be. o.o i get it, fixed
00:43:764 (3,4,5) - Its okay to follow that beat and I'm not against it, but the ones at white ticks are much stronger. This means most unexperienced player will end up following that instead of the nice one in the background. To avoid this I suggest you to use a repeat slider instead of circles. consider now
00:58:660 (2,3,4,1) - Same here. ^
01:24:936 (2,3,4) - I would like to delete/or move (3) 1/2 earlier and add a circle to 01:25:557. These are much stronger than the one at 01:25:350.
01:28:867 (3,4,1,2) - This is also a little bit weird. How about add a repeat at (3). Start (1) at 01:29:488 with a repeat? I think it sounds much better.
01:31:764 (3) - Between 01:31:971 and 01:32:385 should be a triplet. Those are much stronger than the ones at the previous and next red tick. 01:32:798 can be a jump anyways.

To be honest there are some place where its possible to add jump but you ignored it. Thats not a problem since the kiai isn't full of jumpable rhythms but at least please try to adjust your distances to add some differnce to the kiais. Currently its possible to fc this diff w/o pressing dash and on Salad jumps are allowed.

no fix = fixed, i remapped some rhythms here. i just didn't give so many jumps because it might make newbie player who want try play salad after fchappyable in Cup diff feel too hard. thanks 4 mod thought~

~

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Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-06-10T12:40:56+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Mod/recheck requested in pm.

[Cup]

00:25:557 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not against this but you followed two different rhythm with these and this is not a wise decision on Cup. I suggest you to ignore the white tick at (1,2,3) and just add a repeat slider to the red ones. It's just a simple pattern. I don't see two different rhythms or something. I tried to make there a repeat slider and yes, it fits there, but i prefer my combination.
01:11:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is kinda boring. How about to try to follow the beats at the red tick a little bit too? With some sliders, sometimes ignoring the white ticks. hmm... I wanted to make an easy Cup. This pattern is very easy. At the end i added a small larger distance, you know... This cup has too many patterns with sliders, circles fit there perfectly imo.
01:22:867 (2) - How about trying to add some interesting patterns to these long slider. Something like an easier Z would be good. Yes, You're right, fixed. Now looks more interesting.

I have one main problem with this, and that is there is no difference between parts. To avoid this you should try to increase the distance a bit during kiais. And remember, Cup should not contain any jump. I didn't use the bigger distance, because it's just an easy Cup for beginners. Oh... I know that Cup shouldn't have jumps, dashes or something.

[Platter]

I already modded this but I still have some suggestion after testplay.

00:18:108 (5,1) - Hdash because a different rhythm is staring here. Sorry, but no. It's a soft beginning of this beatmap, not a spectacular moment or something. There is no sense to use it imo.
00:47:901 (9,1) - Add Hdash here too. If you listen a bit closely there is a cimbal in the background and its good to have a bigger dash at these parts. Yes, there i forgot to use the HDash... Added HDash and Finish for more spectacular effect.
01:40:660 (4,1) - No Hdash. Why? Its always good to have one at the beginning of the kiai. No, because previous pattern has the HDash. It's enough there.

Also I suggest Tick rate 2 because it is very good for your longer sliders. Sometimes you ignored white tick which is not bad but having a tick at those places gives a nice feedback. Sorry, I prefer the slider tick 1 to this diff if you had it in mind

Now about the HP7 on Rain. I think +1 needs to be added on every diff since 7 is good for this Rain. I'm not against this difference but with this it looks like the spread is missing a difficulty. Its entirely up to you to decide. Good luck with this mapset and star because of the Rain. :3

Added HP6 only to Platter. Thank You! Updated mine changes, Xinely's changes and no changes from ming as he said in-game.

Thank You!!

Last edited by Ollapeu 2014-07-17T12:36:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-06-20T09:34:29+00:00

Don't mod it yet. WIP (new Rain by me)

KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-07-12T05:29:03+00:00

Hello Kandai-sa !

I think you must add this to the tags :
chapter III 3

Only that, i can't mod CTB lol..

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-07-12T07:19:49+00:00

Notice me when you were finished!

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-07-12T14:47:45+00:00

Kazamastar11 wrote:
Hello Kandai-sa !

I think you must add this to the tags :
chapter III 3

Only that, i can't mod CTB lol..

Thank You! Updated.

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-07-15T12:20:59+00:00

Rain diff is finished. Back to pending.

Ready for mods, again.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-07-19T02:45:39+00:00

Mod request from my queue.

Actually I feel something wrong for my cup & salad modding, so will check platter~rain diffs only.

[Platter]
00:41:281 (4) - ctrl + h, then it would be delicious to catch.
01:12:729 (4) - ctrl + g please!
01:13:350 (1,2,3,4) - follow as above.

[Rain]
00:09:625 (5,6) - suggestion :

SPOILER

00:15:833 (3,4,1) -

SPOILER

00:28:867 (3,4) - you can add a bit long jump here.
00:30:315 (3,4) - ^
00:37:764 (7,8) - make more jump. It seems boring.
00:40:453 (2) - I think right side would be better.

like this

00:42:316 (3,4) - make more jump.
00:55:350 (2,3) - ^
00:56:798 (2,1) - ^
01:01:350 (1,2,3) - ^
01:34:453 (1,2,3) - ^
01:45:626 (4) - replace it to left side. It feels awkward for me.

[m1ng's Rain]
00:09:626 (4) - x : 256
00:10:867 (3,4,1) - make more jump.

Good work to both!

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-07-19T09:45:56+00:00

CLSW wrote:
Mod request from my queue.

Actually I feel something wrong for my cup & salad modding, so will check platter~rain diffs only.

[Platter]
00:41:281 (4) - ctrl + h, then it would be delicious to catch. fixed
01:12:729 (4) - ctrl + g please! I think it's fine as it is. I prefer the current pattern, sorry.
01:13:350 (1,2,3,4) - follow as above. I don't get what to do here. Could You explain this more precisely?

[Rain]
00:09:625 (5,6) - suggestion :
SPOILER
no changes
00:15:833 (3,4,1) -
SPOILER
This change makes here the HDashes, which are unnecessary here.
00:28:867 (3,4) - you can add a bit long jump here. fixed i guess
00:30:315 (3,4) - ^ ^ fixed
00:37:764 (7,8) - make more jump. It seems boring. Moved them a little bit
00:40:453 (2) - I think right side would be better.
like this
no changes, previous pattern was more jumpy, I'll keep with my pattern
00:42:316 (3,4) - make more jump. fixed
00:55:350 (2,3) - ^ ^moved them a little bit
00:56:798 (2,1) - ^ no changes
01:01:350 (1,2,3) - ^ moved (2) a little bit
01:34:453 (1,2,3) - ^ I don't know what to do here, so... jus moved (2) a little bit
01:45:626 (4) - replace it to left side. It feels awkward for me. Sorry, but no... This moment needs a HDash.

Good work to both!

Thanks!!

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2014-07-21T05:13:43+00:00

Mod time :3

[Cup]

00:21:626 (1,2,3) - I don't like (1) and (2) rhythm-wise. Considering (3) and the repeats are mapped to the piano, both the start and the end of (1) and (2) feel weird. I'd map it completely to the piano, like this:
SPOILER
00:28:247 (1,2) - ^
00:47:695 (4) - I'd replace it with a circle
00:53:074 (4) - End it on the red tick, so you follow the same instrument as (5)
SPOILER
00:58:040 (1) - I think this spinner ends too close to the next note. You need to give new players more time to react!
01:26:178 (1) - ^

[Xinely's Salad]
The rhythm in this diff is weird to me as the focus changes a lot, which can be confusing for newer players.

00:09:833 (4,1,2,3,4) - - I would have mapped this part like this:
SPOILER
00:14:591 - Add note
00:15:005 (1,2,3,4) - Same as the first suggestion: (1) should end at the white tick (00:15:419 - ) ; (2) should start at 00:15:626 - and end at 00:16:247 - ; (3) should end at 00:16:867 -
SPOILER
00:26:591 - I think a note fits well here
00:28:247 (1) - Use one of the custom hitsounds? The default whistle sounds really bad on this song
00:31:557 (1) - End it at the blue tick (00:32:281 - ) and add a note at 00:32:385 -
00:36:316 (5) - End it at the red tick (00:36:316 (5) - )
00:37:143 (2,3) - Delete (2), move (3) to 00:40:040 (5) - and end it at 00:37:971 -
00:40:040 (1,2) - Delete (1) and move (2) to 00:40:040 -
00:40:867 - Add note
00:41:074 (6,7) - Delete both and make a slider like 00:40:040 (5) - (same lenght, starting and ending in the red ticks)
00:49:557 (5) - End it on the white tick (00:50:178 - )
00:51:626 - Add a note
00:51:833 (1,2,3,4) - If you did ^, delete (3) and place (1) and (2) on the red ticks
01:22:040 - Add note
01:28:764 - Add note
01:26:178 (1) - I don't think this repeat slider fits. The repeat is precisely the place where there's nothing hinting at the song. Replace it with sliders or circles, placed on these ticks:
SPOILER
01:35:074 - Add note
01:35:902 - Add note
01:38:591 (3,4) - Move (3) to 01:38:385 - ; move (4) to 01:38:798 -
01:44:178 (4,1) - Delete (4), move (1) to 01:44:178 -
01:46:454 (2) - Move it to 01:46:660 -
01:51:833 (2,3,4, 5) - Delete (2) and (3). Move (4) to 01:52:040 - and end it on 01:52:453 - . Move (5) to 01:52:867 -
01:52:867 - Add note
01:53:695 - Add note

[Platter]

00:22:246 (3,4,1) - A little more movement here would be fine
00:29:074 (3) - Delete this note, the silence here creates a nice feeling
00:51:212 (8,1) - I think keeping the same pattern as before (e.g. 00:50:384 (6,7) - ) is better
01:28:764 - Add note
01:44:178 (1,2,3,4,1) - You could space them a bit more. For example, (2) at x:264, (3) at x:384, (4) at x: 296, (1) (pink combo) at x:488.
01:53:695 (7) - Move this one to the right (for example, x:360)

[Rain]

00:31:350 (1,1) - Distance should be reduced a bit.
00:43:143 (5,6) - This feels to forced, both rhythmically and with the jump
01:04:453 (1,2,3) - Personally I'm not a big fan of 3/4 slider hyperdashes, just an opinion
01:13:350 (3,4) - Move (4) a bit to the left
01:14:178 (6,7) - The jump can be larger (I tested it on the same position as (5) and it feels good
01:31:764 (2,3) - This feels a bit weird. I'd Ctrl+G (3) and move it a bit to the right. It will destroy the hyperdash, but a normal dash fits well too.
01:54:109 (10) - Move it a bit to the right

[m1ng's Rain]

00:40:660 (4,5) - This feels forced
01:12:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Transition from (7) to (8) feels weird given the distance between previous notes. I'd try to keep the hyperdash from (8) to (9), though.
01:35:591 (6) - Delete, it sounds weird. You can add a note at 01:35:488 -
01:35:281 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:36:729 (3,4) - ^
01:53:902 (5,6) - The jump feels weird. I would delete (6), convert (5) into two circles and add the jump between them.
01:40:453 (5,6,7,8,9) - Delete (7) and (9), and add note in 01:40:660 -

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-07-26T03:43:27+00:00

CLSW

Mod request from my queue.

Actually I feel something wrong for my cup & salad modding, so will check platter~rain diffs only.

[m1ng's Rain]
00:09:626 (4) - x : 256 moved to x:280~
00:10:867 (3,4,1) - make more jump. i think the current one is okay because of the calm part. so that's why i used a simple and easy jump

Good work to both!

ZiRoX

Mod time :3

[m1ng's Rain]

00:40:660 (4,5) - This feels forced does it? well i keep mine here /.\ because i think it doesn't feel forced actually but i moved (5) to left a bit
01:12:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Transition from (7) to (8) feels weird given the distance between previous notes. I'd try to keep the hyperdash from (8) to (9), though. agree with you. i tried to change those notes to be a slider then
01:35:591 (6) - Delete, it sounds weird. You can add a note at 01:35:488 - oh there xD i just wanted to use douplets pattern there and i think it flows with the song too
01:35:281 (4,5,6,7) - ^ same here~
01:36:729 (3,4) - ^ same xD
01:53:902 (5,6) - The jump feels weird. I would delete (6), convert (5) into two circles and add the jump between them. agree. fixed here
01:40:453 (5,6,7,8,9) - Delete (7) and (9), and add note in 01:40:660 - same like above for the douplets xD

[/quote]

thanks for the mods, guys!

m1ng's Rain

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Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-07-28T10:01:18+00:00

Updated Xinely's Salad and m1ng's Rain. I'll update my diffs asap.

Serena-

454 posts

Joined December 2012

Serena- 2014-07-28T12:21:49+00:00

srry for being late xD i forgot no kds, just checking the rain

[Rain]
01:04:453 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i think the rhythm should be the same (01:04:453 (1,2,3) - this and 01:06:109 (1,2,3) - )
01:43:557 (9) - this jump is a bit tight imo try reducing the distance

nothing much to say, nice diff, really sorry for waiting for my mod and getting this ;w;

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-07-28T13:03:11+00:00

[quote="ZiRoX"]Mod time :3

[Cup]

00:21:626 (1,2,3) - I don't like (1) and (2) rhythm-wise. Considering (3) and the repeats are mapped to the piano, both the start and the end of (1) and (2) feel weird. I'd map it completely to the piano, like this: sorry, but no. I prefer very simple rhyhtm to this difficulty.
SPOILER
00:28:247 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:47:695 (4) - I'd replace it with a circle changed this slider to the notes, because it feels right for me.
00:53:074 (4) - End it on the red tick, so you follow the same instrument as (5) Would be nice, but it doesn't fit here (Cup). I prefer this current, simpler pattern.
SPOILER
00:58:040 (1) - I think this spinner ends too close to the next note. You need to give new players more time to react! fixed
01:26:178 (1) - ^

fixed

[Platter]

00:22:246 (3,4,1) - A little more movement here would be fine As I said earlier, it's a calm beginning of the song (this is why they are so close to each other). No changes
00:29:074 (3) - Delete this note, the silence here creates a nice feeling ok, deleted
00:51:212 (8,1) - I think keeping the same pattern as before (e.g. 00:50:384 (6,7) - ) is better no changes
01:28:764 - Add note 0.0 ofc. fixed!
01:44:178 (1,2,3,4,1) - You could space them a bit more. For example, (2) at x:264, (3) at x:384, (4) at x: 296, (1) (pink combo) at x:488.fixed
01:53:695 (7) - Move this one to the right (for example, x:360)

fixed

[Rain]

00:31:350 (1,1) - Distance should be reduced a bit. fixed I guess
00:43:143 (5,6) - This feels to forced, both rhythmically and with the jump sorry, i'll keep with this pattern
01:04:453 (1,2,3) - Personally I'm not a big fan of 3/4 slider hyperdashes, just an opinion hmm... they fit here as they are imo.
01:13:350 (3,4) - Move (4) a bit to the left fixed
01:14:178 (6,7) - The jump can be larger (I tested it on the same position as (5) and it feels good fixed I guess
01:31:764 (2,3) - This feels a bit weird. I'd Ctrl+G (3) and move it a bit to the right. It will destroy the hyperdash, but a normal dash fits well too. no changes
01:54:109 (10) - Move it a bit to the right

ok

Thank You!!

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-07-28T13:14:53+00:00

Serena- wrote:
srry for being late xD i forgot no kds, just checking the rain

[Rain]
01:04:453 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i think the rhythm should be the same (01:04:453 (1,2,3) - this and 01:06:109 (1,2,3) - ) I don't get it. XD Could You explain me this one in-game?
01:43:557 (9) - this jump is a bit tight imo try reducing the distance fixed

nothing much to say, nice diff, really sorry for waiting for my mod and getting this ;w;

Thank You!!

ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 2014-08-01T13:50:30+00:00

Mod time

Rain

00:12:316 (4) - (not important) you can move this one to x=176 to make it generate hyperdash for more jumpy
00:44:385 (2) - (only a suggestion) how about move it into x = 144 to make the flow jump more open
00:46:867 (1,2,3,4) - - a suggestion , how about adding a beat at 00:47:488 - & make it like this
01:37:143 (7,9) - imo , it would be better if you move a few grid to right , to make the 01:37:557 (9,1) - jump not too heavy

m1ng's rain

00:46:453 (1,2) - sebenarnya ini bisa di improve timelinenya > _ > ,

Platter

00:34:453 (8) - x = 200
00:41:281 (4,5,1,2,3) - try this one *pic

Xinely's Salad

00:10:040 (1) - geser ke x = 400 (flow jump dari 00:09:005 (2,3,4) - lumayan tinggi)
00:31:350 (4) - kenapa gak di bikin jadi slider ? = - = , beat 00:31:350 (4,1) - terasa aneh klo di pisahin
00:33:419 (2) - add beat ?
00:51:833 (1) - distancenya terlalu jauh X_X ( x = 84)
01:34:247 (4,1) - ctrl+g ?

cup

00:15:005 (1,2) - imo , you can use the shape slider from 00:08:384 (1,2) - to make a more wider movement
01:39:626 (4) - x = 152

well overall looks good ,but i'm not noticing full & pointing some part that seems need to have suggestion because of my bad internet connection X_X
so, i'll try to check again after you got a few mods.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-08-02T01:53:50+00:00

ursa wrote:
Mod time

Xinely's Salad

00:10:040 (1) - geser ke x = 400 (flow jump dari 00:09:005 (2,3,4) - lumayan tinggi) gak jadi jump sih. well fine
00:31:350 (4) - kenapa gak di bikin jadi slider ? = - = , beat 00:31:350 (4,1) - terasa aneh klo di pisahin err sebenarnya gak terlalu masalah. bikin ritme lebih rumit dikit deh
00:33:419 (2) - add beat ? udah ada :<
00:51:833 (1) - distancenya terlalu jauh X_X ( x = 84) how can?! fixed
01:34:247 (4,1) - ctrl+g ? intentional, musiknya 01:34:247 - kuat so yeah

well overall looks good ,but i'm not noticing full & pointing some part that seems need to have suggestion because of my bad internet connection X_X
so, i'll try to check again after you got a few mods.

thanks urs o/

~

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mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-08-04T11:40:46+00:00

ursa wrote:
Mod time

m1ng's rain

00:46:453 (1,2) - sebenarnya ini bisa di improve timelinenya > _ > , sengaja dibuat sederhana yang disana jadi buat pattern yang sederhana + gampang disana wkwk xD

well overall looks good ,but i'm not noticing full & pointing some part that seems need to have suggestion because of my bad internet connection X_X
so, i'll try to check again after you got a few mods.

thanks for the mods~! i changed something on my diff

m1ng's Rain

osu file format v13

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Tags:mozarc mingmichael xinely Chapter III
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Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-08-04T12:09:02+00:00

ursa wrote:
Mod time

Rain

00:12:316 (4) - (not important) you can move this one to x=176 to make it generate hyperdash for more jumpy fixed
00:44:385 (2) - (only a suggestion) how about move it into x = 144 to make the flow jump more open sorry, no changes
00:46:867 (1,2,3,4) - - a suggestion , how about adding a beat at 00:47:488 - & make it like this no changes, break fits better.
01:37:143 (7,9) - imo , it would be better if you move a few grid to right , to make the 01:37:557 (9,1) - jump not too heavy fixed

Platter

00:34:453 (8) - x = 200 fixed
00:41:281 (4,5,1,2,3) - try this one *pic sorry, no changes

cup

00:15:005 (1,2) - imo , you can use the shape slider from 00:08:384 (1,2) - to make a more wider movement fixed
01:39:626 (4) - x = 152
fixed

well overall looks good ,but i'm not noticing full & pointing some part that seems need to have suggestion because of my bad internet connection X_X
so, i'll try to check again after you got a few mods.

Thank You! Updated

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-09-03T21:11:29+00:00

Mod requested in in-game. o/

[Cup]

AR/OD +1 to create better spread.

Two unnecessary green line at 00:34:247 and 01:14:591. Remove them.

00:21:626 (1,2) - These two is just not really fit. There are much stronger beats at the middle of the sliders. Try this way: Remove the repeat from (1), add a circle to 00:22:660, 1/1 slider (or 1/2 repeat slider) from 00:23:074 I prefer the 1/1 one, and a short 1/2 repeat slider from 00:23:902.
00:34:867 (1) - I'm not sure but these sliders sounds weird during the kiais. They fit but the white tick before the repeat is also strong. I would like to suggest to change these into two slider, 1/1 and 3/2 ones. Feel free to use this because maybe this will be too much for a Cup.
01:07:971 (1,2) - The timeline sounds weird here because 01:09:419 is strong beat. So having a circle right before it just doesn't seems right. Try this way: 01:07:971 - circle, 01:08:385 - circle, 01:08:798 - 1/1 slider. Or just two 1/1 slider.
01:39:005 (3,4,5,1) - Here is some weird distance change though the rhythm is constant. Move (4) a bit right or turn (3) a little to left.

Seems fine. The rhythm can be better but that is maybe too much for a Cup.

[Salad]

00:28:247 (1,2) - The beat at 00:28:453 gives stronger feedback. How about a 1/1 repeat slider here? 00:28:247 - circle, 00:28:453 - (1) or (2) should start here with a repeat. Also, add dash to either (1) or (2), I prefer (2).
00:29:695 - If you apply my previous suggestion then remove the slider here and just add a circle to this point.
00:56:798 (2) - Turn this a bit more to left. Weird to stand in one place.
01:00:316 (2,3) - A bit bigger movement would be nice here. Kinda easy to catch though there is a high pitched sound at (3). And also this is the start of the section.
01:07:764 (3,1) - Dash please. You also used finish on (1). q.q
01:26:178 (1) - Turn the tail a bit more to right. This part is all about moving.
01:34:247 (4,1) - I'm fine with this movement but maybe this can be hard for a newbie. Move (1) a bit back to right. Just a few grid is enough.
01:34:867 (2,3) - If you apply my previous suggestion please move these a bit to right as well with the same number of grids.
01:52:453 (4,5) - This jump is just out of place. The high pitched sound at 01:53:074 can be dash but (5) not. Although if you ctrl+g (4) and readjust the following patterns it will be nice. Also, use NC on (5) please. lol

That is all I found. Nice diff to begin with.

[Platter]

Why SV is the same as Salad? I would like to suggest you to use 1,5 but maybe it will be late now.

00:16:246 (6) - I wonder about this. Maybe it would be better if you delete this and add a bigger jump between (5,7). I'm not sure about this though. But if you change this then change 00:09:625 (3) - as well for consistency.
00:18:108 (5,1) - Its possible to add HDash here.
00:19:970 (1,2) - ^
00:33:626 (3,4) - Maybe the distance between these two triple is bit high. Catching this pattern on Platter is challenging enough I think. Move them closer a bit.
00:46:246 (4,5) - This is a good place for HDash too.
01:04:247 (1,2) - ^
01:05:901 (5) - I want to delete this note. Kinda useless because it gives nothing to the rhythm.
01:11:281 (1,2) - These are sounds weird because I want to catch circles at 01:11:488 and 01:11695. You probably recognize it why if you listen it. Better if you ignore 01:11:281 because the next red tick is stronger.
01:13:350 (1) - If you apply my previous suggestion then this should be 2 circle as well.
01:21:625 (3,4) - The distance should be here instead of 01:21:834 (4,1). Though a different pattern would be better where you can add a little distances at these sounds.
01:26:178 (1) - This spinner starts at the other side. I know its late to change now but it would be nice if you can.
01:35:281 (3,1) - Why you used HDash here? You ignored so many better place why this? Remove it please.
01:36:832 (4) - Move this to x:264 for better flow. The rhythm is not really different to keep that distance change.
01:43:971 (7,1) - HDash here please.
01:40:660 (4,1) - HDash here please instead of between (3,4). Provides better feedback and you also used one at 00:34:660 (9,1).

Nice diff although maybe too much 1/2 rhythm. I'm sure some of them can be removed because of stronger beat before/after. I mentioned a few in this mod. Also, you only used few HDash which is not bad but during the kiais it would nice a little more. I pointed out a few possible place to this as well. Just think about them since the diff is hard even w/o them.

[Rain]

00:09:005 (3) - Move this a bit back to right. I see point in this jump.
00:31:350 (1,1) - This distance is too sudden. Reduce it.
01:04:453 (1,2,3) - NO. These are not even following the correct rhythm. Please don't copy Spectator's mapping. lol (1,2) should be a simple 1/2 slider.
01:28:867 (6,7) - This distance a bit high too. Catching that triplet after HDash is "hard" enough.
01:31:764 (2,3) - If you want to keep this HDash at least make it to flow in a constant direction. For example change the direction of (3) to go right instead of back to left. This way you will get a flow type movement after the HDash.
01:36:729 (4,5,6) - This triplet looks a bit weird. o.o How about using the same pattern as 01:35:281 (3,4,5)?
01:41:695 (3,4) - This HDash is very weird. The strong beat is at 01:41:695 and not at 01:41:902. Please use that one as a HDash.
01:42:316 (5,6) - Same here.
01:43:143 (8,9) - Though this is not a HDash but almost the same goes for this as well. You have sliderend at that point and then a high distance where is nothing to jump.
01:46:660 (2,3) - Here again.
01:47:281 (5,6,1) - And again. Also I think (6) is useless.

The timeline and the patterns should follow the music a bit better, especially during the last kiai. If you change at least that this map will be almost perfect.

[m1ng's Rain]

One more Rain? o.o Broken difficulty spread here.

00:24:522 (5,1,2) - The HDash here is weird. The strong beats ar 00:24:729 and 00:25:143 but you used HDash at 00:24:936 which is weak compared with those. Adjust your patterns to be able to add HDash to the high pitched beats.
00:28:247 (1,2) - Again a weird HDash.
00:29:902 (1,2,3) - Same here. 00:30:109 and 00:30:522 provides better HDash.
00:31:143 (4,5,1) - Again.
00:36:316 (6,1) - HDash should be at (6).
01:02:798 (5,1) - ^ Just with (5) now.
01:04:247 (6,1) - 01:04:453 is much stronger.
01:31:764 (3,4) - Missing triplet?
01:35:281 (4,5,6,7) - No. Move (6) 1/4 back. Listen it with 50% and you will recognize this also.
01:36:729 (3,4) - Same here. It should be a triplet and note at 1/2 distance.
01:40:660 - I still hear beat here. o.o Add a circle please.
01:42:316 (5,6,1) - Again wrong HDash.
I'm not pointing out more because the second kiai will be the same as the first probably.

Listen the music carefully and use my mod to change the place of the HDashes. They requires just a little adjustment. White ticks are not always the best spot to use HDash. You need to follow the music with them.
[]

What I said on the second Rain is applies to both. Please change the Dashes on both Rain. If you are done with this get 1 or preferable 2 more mod and call me back. I want to be sure about a few more thing before I send this mapset forward. Good luck till then. o/

/Uh, I surprised I was able to point out this much even though I already modded this before. Well, I learned so much since then. *.*

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-09-15T10:17:17+00:00

~~I lol'd~~

SPOILER

You need to upload your beatmap once you revived it from eternal slumber, otherwise it falls back into Graveyard status again.
Also, tell me when you uploaded this and applied Kuro's mod. I am in the mood to mod this.

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-09-15T10:56:25+00:00

Sey wrote:
~~I lol'd~~
SPOILER

You need to upload your beatmap once you revived it from eternal slumber, otherwise it falls back into Graveyard status again.
Also, tell me when you uploaded this and applied Kuro's mod. I am in the mood to mod this.

Yep, i know. Done

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-09-15T11:22:33+00:00

Kurokami

Mod requested in in-game. o/

[m1ng's Rain]

One more Rain? o.o Broken difficulty spread here. it is not "more" lol i have mapped this rain before kandai mapped his own rain

00:24:522 (5,1,2) - The HDash here is weird. The strong beats ar 00:24:729 and 00:25:143 but you used HDash at 00:24:936 which is weak compared with those. Adjust your patterns to be able to add HDash to the high pitched beats.
00:28:247 (1,2) - Again a weird HDash.
00:29:902 (1,2,3) - Same here. 00:30:109 and 00:30:522 provides better HDash.
00:31:143 (4,5,1) - Again. fixed all
00:36:316 (6,1) - HDash should be at (6). i would prefer to use the HDash on (1) not (6) even the strong pitch sounds come out there
01:02:798 (5,1) - ^ Just with (5) now. same ^
01:04:247 (6,1) - 01:04:453 is much stronger. ^
01:31:764 (3,4) - Missing triplet? yes you are, added hue
01:35:281 (4,5,6,7) - No. Move (6) 1/4 back. Listen it with 50% and you will recognize this also. wokay. i agree with you too huehue
01:36:729 (3,4) - Same here. It should be a triplet and note at 1/2 distance. ^
01:40:660 - I still hear beat here. o.o Add a circle please. i accidentally gave a break there to make doublets and 4notes pattern :3
01:42:316 (5,6,1) - Again wrong HDash.
I'm not pointing out more because the second kiai will be the same as the first probably.

Listen the music carefully and use my mod to change the place of the HDashes. They requires just a little adjustment. White ticks are not always the best spot to use HDash. You need to follow the music with them. actually i used the HDashes constantly for every new combos and some part to emphasize the instruments (e.g : 00:22:040 - ; 00:25:350 - ; 00:27:005 - ; 00:28:660 - ; and similar sounds when the bell sounds come out there). but i have decided to remove some HDashes for the new combos which don't follow any particular sounds to be emphasized
and on the kiai parts i prefer to keep my HDash patterns (e.g : HDash between 00:36:316 (6,1) - ; 00:37:971 (5,1) - ; 01:47:488 (7,1) - and similar patterns like it). actually i didn't follow 100% instrument sounds for the HDashes, just some and i think for having the current HDashes aren't a problem since it's comfortable to be played
[]

What I said on the second Rain is applies to both. Please change the Dashes on both Rain. If you are done with this get 1 or preferable 2 more mod and call me back. I want to be sure about a few more thing before I send this mapset forward. Good luck till then. o/

/Uh, I surprised I was able to point out this much even though I already modded this before. Well, I learned so much since then. *.*

thanks for the mods :3
m1ng's Rain

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-09-15T11:42:07+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Mod requested in in-game. o/

[Salad]

00:28:247 (1,2) - The beat at 00:28:453 gives stronger feedback. How about a 1/1 repeat slider here? 00:28:247 - circle, 00:28:453 - (1) or (2) should start here with a repeat. Also, add dash to either (1) or (2), I prefer (2).
00:29:695 - If you apply my previous suggestion then remove the slider here and just add a circle to this point.
00:56:798 (2) - Turn this a bit more to left. Weird to stand in one place.
01:00:316 (2,3) - A bit bigger movement would be nice here. Kinda easy to catch though there is a high pitched sound at (3). And also this is the start of the section.
01:07:764 (3,1) - Dash please. You also used finish on (1). q.q
01:26:178 (1) - Turn the tail a bit more to right. This part is all about moving.
01:34:247 (4,1) - I'm fine with this movement but maybe this can be hard for a newbie. Move (1) a bit back to right. Just a few grid is enough. imo this is fine and catchable + read easily since this diff already Salad
01:34:867 (2,3) - If you apply my previous suggestion please move these a bit to right as well with the same number of grids.
01:52:453 (4,5) - This jump is just out of place. The high pitched sound at 01:53:074 can be dash but (5) not. Although if you ctrl+g (4) and readjust the following patterns it will be nice. Also, use NC on (5) please. lol oh nice!

That is all I found. Nice diff to begin with.

What I said on the second Rain is applies to both. Please change the Dashes on both Rain. If you are done with this get 1 or preferable 2 more mod and call me back. I want to be sure about a few more thing before I send this mapset forward. Good luck till then. o/

/Uh, I surprised I was able to point out this much even though I already modded this before. Well, I learned so much since then. *.*

which i don't reply = fixed
thanks Kurokami ;3

~

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Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-09-21T10:21:40+00:00

Mod time I guess.
It might be the case that some points overlap with Kurokami's mod because the mapper hasn't uploaded yet but it doesn't matter. I will return to this map anyway, with 100% guarantee.

[General]

You have a lot of inheriting sections which aren't necessary because they have the same settings. Erase the unnecessary ones. Since you have different inheriting sections in every difficulty you need to check each difficulty by itself. If you need help in that PM me ingame.

[Spread settings]
Talk with the Guest mappers about the following:

By now your HP-spread is 3-4-5-7-7. Increase the HP of the Platter to 5,5 to center it between HP4 in your Salad and HP7 in your Rain. This creates a more logic spread.
Salad should have AR/OD 6,5 to center it between AR5 in your Cup and AR8 in your Platter. The gap from AR5 directly to AR7 is quite high.

[Cup]

01:26:178 (1,1) - In Cups we avoid having 1/1 distances after a spinner due to lack of preparation phase. Keep at least a 1/1 + 1/2 or 2/1 distance afterwards!
00:34:660 (5,1) - Suggesting to just increase the distance slightly to emphasize the cymbal sound at 00:34:867 - a little better.
00:47:902 (5,1) - ^
Personally I think it would be cool if you map the sounds from 01:20:178 - until 01:21:005 - , but keep it easy there. (But this is only a suggestion, so you don't really have to)
01:40:247 (5,1) - Cymbal hitsound at (1) again, so emphasize it with a little higher distance.
01:54:109 - There should be a note here because it goes into comparability with the notes at 01:53:488 (5) - . Add a note there and let the spinner start at
01:54:729 - at least (for 1/1 distance because 1/2 distance would be kinda unrankable in a Cup). I really don't appreciate that you skip such an important beat here. Look how it is done in any other diff if you still feel unsure.

[Salad]

Very nice Salad, Xinely. It was very enjoyable to play but difficulty can be a little bit higher, sometimes you missed emphasizing a few important hitsounds, gonna mention these in my mod:
00:21:005 (5,1) - I know the cymbal is not that flashy here but consider increasing the distance a bit anyway to emphasize it a little bit more?
01:00:729 (3,1) - Same for this here... I think that cymbal really can be emphasized better...
01:07:764 (3,1) - Here too? But slighter because the hitsound isn't too strong here.
I suggested that for Cup, too: Personally I think it would be cool if you map the sounds from 01:20:178 - until 01:21:005 - . But maybe this is personal preference here.
01:34:247 (4,1) - I think another little Dash could fit here, based on the music. I know you rejected it before.
01:53:488 (6,7,8,9) - This here could be mapped more interesting. Try something like this:
SPOILER
I think many of the mentioned things has been mentioned by Kuro already, doesn't matter. Good job.

[Platter]

00:41:281 (4,1) - I don't know about this Pattern, during gameplay it looks a little awkward, here a suggestion to make it cleaner:
SPOILER
01:26:178 (1) - Why a spinner here? ;__; The rhythm from 01:24:522 (1,2,3,4) - goes on here, so you should definitely consider mapping this on notes, the spinner seems not very fitting to me as well.
01:40:660 (4,1) - This is a potential section for a Hyper due to the cymbal sound.

[Rain]

00:33:212 (5,1) - The HDash here feels very awkward and too late. According to the music it should appear at 00:33:005 (4,5) - instead. Also going from big Dash to Hyper is never a good idea because it doesn't feel very fluid to play. Consider re-arranging the notes here.
01:14:178 (6,7) - This is a potential point for a HDash because it emphasizes the Cymbal at 01:14:591 - .
01:53:902 (9,10) - ^ There is no cymbal here but the ending would feel better with a little HDash at this point.
Everything else has been pointed out in Kuro's mod already.

[m1ng's Rain]

00:18:316 - until 00:21:626 - : I find it very weird that you didn't use the Custom hitsounds as in the section before. Due to that this section feels empty, the actual hitsounds are barely audible. Take a look on the other difficulties and consider changing this.
00:46:453 (1,2) - Pls ming, bit too rough movement after all these HDashes, don't you think? Reduce it a bit, please.
01:30:936 (7,1) - This again is waaaaaaay too rough. Please reduce it!
01:54:109 (6) - Move this to x: 168 to create some HDash, I think this follows the flow better.
Again rest had been pointed out in Kuro's mod. ~~Kuro, you thief ;__;~~

This is my shortest mod ever, but this mapset is very nice. So I will definitely pay attention to this and return when I feel it is ready to go! Get a star icon by now.

Last edited by Sey 2014-09-21T22:41:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-09-21T11:15:11+00:00

everything is fixed here ~
thanks 4 nice mod Sey

~
@Kandai-sa : feel free to change AR OD to 6,5. i forgot that one lol

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-09-21T21:41:26+00:00

@Sey You stole my star. q.q

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-09-22T14:16:36+00:00

Sorry, I will update everything tomorrow.

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-09-23T11:30:44+00:00

fixed everything that sey mentioned

m1ng's Rain

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120,312,97143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,97350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,312,97557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,97764,6,0,L|112:288,1,80
368,192,98178,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,98798,2,0,L|304:192,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,99212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,192,99419,6,0,L|456:288,1,80
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112,312,100764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,312,100971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,72,102109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,312,102522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,312,103557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,192,105419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,108316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,108522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,312,113902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,114316,12,4,115971,0:0:0:0:

Krfawy

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Krfawy 2014-11-12T13:24:33+00:00

Posting it to make the mapper aware he should update something (I mean - this mapset).

Rusz dupsko i aktualizuj mapę bo z takim zapłonem to w 2069 roku będzie rankingowe. XD

PS.: Wisisz mi białą czekoladę z orzechami. Prawdopodobnie będę na BX-M5 :3

Ollapeu

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Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-12-31T18:20:06+00:00

Updated ming's and Xinely's diffs. Now it's time for mine diffs. x.x

Ollapeu

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Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-12-31T18:51:47+00:00

Something wrong is happening with this beatmap. I cannot update my diffs. I'll try to fix it asap. D:

Ollapeu

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Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2014-12-31T23:57:00+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Mod requested in in-game. o/

[Cup]

AR/OD +1 to create better spread.

Two unnecessary green line at 00:34:247 and 01:14:591. Remove them.

00:21:626 (1,2) - These two is just not really fit. There are much stronger beats at the middle of the sliders. Try this way: Remove the repeat from (1), add a circle to 00:22:660, 1/1 slider (or 1/2 repeat slider) from 00:23:074 I prefer the 1/1 one, and a short 1/2 repeat slider from 00:23:902. fixed i guess. x.x
00:34:867 (1) - I'm not sure but these sliders sounds weird during the kiais. They fit but the white tick before the repeat is also strong. I would like to suggest to change these into two slider, 1/1 and 3/2 ones. Feel free to use this because maybe this will be too much for a Cup. i'll keep with my pattern.
01:07:971 (1,2) - The timeline sounds weird here because 01:09:419 is strong beat. So having a circle right before it just doesn't seems right. Try this way: 01:07:971 - circle, 01:08:385 - circle, 01:08:798 - 1/1 slider. Or just two 1/1 slider. yeah, i did something similar
01:39:005 (3,4,5,1) - Here is some weird distance change though the rhythm is constant. Move (4) a bit right or turn (3) a little to left. fixed

Seems fine. The rhythm can be better but that is maybe too much for a Cup.

[Platter]

Why SV is the same as Salad? I would like to suggest you to use 1,5 but maybe it will be late now.

00:16:246 (6) - I wonder about this. Maybe it would be better if you delete this and add a bigger jump between (5,7). I'm not sure about this though. But if you change this then change 00:09:625 (3) - as well for consistency. nope
00:18:108 (5,1) - Its possible to add HDash here. ok
00:19:970 (1,2) - ^ nope
00:33:626 (3,4) - Maybe the distance between these two triple is bit high. Catching this pattern on Platter is challenging enough I think. Move them closer a bit. fixed
00:46:246 (4,5) - This is a good place for HDash too. ok
01:04:247 (1,2) - ^ nope
01:05:901 (5) - I want to delete this note. Kinda useless because it gives nothing to the rhythm. ok
01:11:281 (1,2) - These are sounds weird because I want to catch circles at 01:11:488 and 01:11695. You probably recognize it why if you listen it. Better if you ignore 01:11:281 because the next red tick is stronger. it looks fine imo. :C
01:13:350 (1) - If you apply my previous suggestion then this should be 2 circle as well.
01:21:625 (3,4) - The distance should be here instead of 01:21:834 (4,1). Though a different pattern would be better where you can add a little distances at these sounds. i'll stay with the current pattern
01:26:178 (1) - This spinner starts at the other side. I know its late to change now but it would be nice if you can. I did cuz the next pattern starts there (at the end).
01:35:281 (3,1) - Why you used HDash here? You ignored so many better place why this? Remove it please. fixed
01:36:832 (4) - Move this to x:264 for better flow. The rhythm is not really different to keep that distance change. DONE
01:43:971 (7,1) - HDash here please. DONE
01:40:660 (4,1) - HDash here please instead of between (3,4). Provides better feedback and you also used one at 00:34:660 (9,1). DONE

Nice diff although maybe too much 1/2 rhythm. I'm sure some of them can be removed because of stronger beat before/after. I mentioned a few in this mod. Also, you only used few HDash which is not bad but during the kiais it would nice a little more. I pointed out a few possible place to this as well. Just think about them since the diff is hard even w/o them.

[Rain]

00:09:005 (3) - Move this a bit back to right. I see point in this jump. fixed
00:31:350 (1,1) - This distance is too sudden. Reduce it. fixed
01:04:453 (1,2,3) - NO. These are not even following the correct rhythm. Please don't copy Spectator's mapping. lol (1,2) should be a simple 1/2 slider. they're following. I don't think it's a copy... D: I didn't think about his style when i was doing this pattern. It fits, so i'll keep them.
01:28:867 (6,7) - This distance a bit high too. Catching that triplet after HDash is "hard" enough. it's a Rain. :p no change
01:31:764 (2,3) - If you want to keep this HDash at least make it to flow in a constant direction. For example change the direction of (3) to go right instead of back to left. This way you will get a flow type movement after the HDash. i'm not sure. I wanted to make this pattern kinda hard. If someone will mention this, i'll change it.
01:36:729 (4,5,6) - This triplet looks a bit weird. o.o How about using the same pattern as 01:35:281 (3,4,5)? changed
01:41:695 (3,4) - This HDash is very weird. The strong beat is at 01:41:695 and not at 01:41:902. Please use that one as a HDash. idk what to do. Just deleted the hdash. xD
01:42:316 (5,6) - Same here. ^
01:43:143 (8,9) - Though this is not a HDash but almost the same goes for this as well. You have sliderend at that point and then a high distance where is nothing to jump.
01:46:660 (2,3) - Here again.
01:47:281 (5,6,1) - And again. Also I think (6) is useless. deleted

The timeline and the patterns should follow the music a bit better, especially during the last kiai. If you change at least that this map will be almost perfect.

What I said on the second Rain is applies to both. Please change the Dashes on both Rain. If you are done with this get 1 or preferable 2 more mod and call me back. I want to be sure about a few more thing before I send this mapset forward. Good luck till then. o/

/Uh, I surprised I was able to point out this much even though I already modded this before. Well, I learned so much since then. *.*

thank you so much

Ollapeu

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Ollapeu 2015-01-01T15:12:01+00:00

Sey wrote:
Mod time I guess.
It might be the case that some points overlap with Kurokami's mod because the mapper hasn't uploaded yet but it doesn't matter. I will return to this map anyway, with 100% guarantee.

[General]
You have a lot of inheriting sections which aren't necessary because they have the same settings. Erase the unnecessary ones. Since you have different inheriting sections in every difficulty you need to check each difficulty by itself. If you need help in that PM me ingame.
done i guess.

[Spread settings]
Talk with the Guest mappers about the following:
By now your HP-spread is 3-4-5-7-7. Increase the HP of the Platter to 5,5 to center it between HP4 in your Salad and HP7 in your Rain. This creates a more logic spread.
Salad should have AR/OD 6,5 to center it between AR5 in your Cup and AR8 in your Platter. The gap from AR5 directly to AR7 is quite high.

[Cup]
01:26:178 (1,1) - In Cups we avoid having 1/1 distances after a spinner due to lack of preparation phase. Keep at least a 1/1 + 1/2 or 2/1 distance afterwards! Deleted a spinner and added the slider.
00:34:660 (5,1) - Suggesting to just increase the distance slightly to emphasize the cymbal sound at 00:34:867 - a little better. fixed i guess.
00:47:902 (5,1) - ^ ^
Personally I think it would be cool if you map the sounds from 01:20:178 - until 01:21:005 - , but keep it easy there. (But this is only a suggestion, so you don't really have to) no change.
01:40:247 (5,1) - Cymbal hitsound at (1) again, so emphasize it with a little higher distance. ok
01:54:109 - There should be a note here because it goes into comparability with the notes at 01:53:488 (5) - . Add a note there and let the spinner start at added a slider which ends there
01:54:729 - at least (for 1/1 distance because 1/2 distance would be kinda unrankable in a Cup). I really don't appreciate that you skip such an important beat here. Look how it is done in any other diff if you still feel unsure.
o.o?

[Platter]
00:41:281 (4,1) - I don't know about this Pattern, during gameplay it looks a little awkward, here a suggestion to make it cleaner:
SPOILER
there is no picture. :[ Can you send it to me again or something?
01:26:178 (1) - Why a spinner here? ;__; The rhythm from 01:24:522 (1,2,3,4) - goes on here, so you should definitely consider mapping this on notes, the spinner seems not very fitting to me as well. fixed
01:40:660 (4,1) - This is a potential section for a Hyper due to the cymbal sound.
fixed previously (Kurokami's mod)

[Rain]
00:33:212 (5,1) - The HDash here feels very awkward and too late. According to the music it should appear at 00:33:005 (4,5) - instead. Also going from big Dash to Hyper is never a good idea because it doesn't feel very fluid to play. Consider re-arranging the notes here. i'll keep this pattern w/o the HDashes
01:14:178 (6,7) - This is a potential point for a HDash because it emphasizes the Cymbal at 01:14:591 - . ok
01:53:902 (9,10) - ^ There is no cymbal here but the ending would feel better with a little HDash at this point.
Everything else has been pointed out in Kuro's mod already.
ok

This is my shortest mod ever, but this mapset is very nice. So I will definitely pay attention to this and return when I feel it is ready to go! Get a star icon by now.

thank you. ^^

Seph

Seph 2015-01-05T12:44:38+00:00

kurwa

i mean, mod

[Cup]

00:39:833 (5,6) - i suggest using the same pattern with 00:38:178 (3,4) - (both sliders inclined to the right) to give it a little wee bit of a movement
00:52:247 (2) - could go below 00:53:074 (4) - but thats up to you
01:10:453 (4) - maybe delete the next note and make it a repeat slider
01:21:212 to 01:27:833 try lowering the volume by like 10%, seems a little loud for a calm part

[Xinely's Salad]
00:33:212 (1) - i would reduce its distance with 00:33:005 (9) -
01:38:178 (2) - a clap would best fit in here

[Platter]
HP + 1 or .5 i guess
nothing else, nice platter though!

[m1ng's Rain]
wow its mapped in 1/1 lmao amazing
00:19:143 (3,4) - I would incline this two to the right, something with what you did with 00:18:316 (1,2) -
01:13:350 (3) - maybe make it a triangle (putting it at x:40 y:304) of some sort?
01:25:971 (7,8,1) - increased spacing for the coming 01:26:385 (2) - jump?

[Rain]
00:11:695 (1,2,3,4) - spreading this out would be better for the next one (00:12:522 (1) - )
00:26:385 (3) - ctrl+g ?
00:39:419 (4) - should've kept the distance with the previous jump (aka the same distance between 00:38:178 (1,2) - )
00:50:798 (2) - ctrl+g
00:52:867 (7) - maybe place it above (5) so it would make a zigzag jump pattern
01:08:798 (5) - better if its in between (6) and (7)
01:40:247 (7,8) - i would ctrl+g these two to give a good introduction to the next kiai time

I guess thats it, sorry if its just nazi/minor suggestions since its already modded enough o/

Pappy

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Pappy 2015-01-09T21:38:55+00:00

Seph wrote:
kurwa

nice o3o

Vhy

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Vhy 2015-01-10T04:07:07+00:00

as request on forum PM

[Cup]
use CS3 instead for a better spread?
01:30:316 (5) - personally i will avoid using this kind of slider in every cup. on sightread matter, at the moment it could be hard for new player. consider using this kind of pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2489555
01:40:247 (5) - similar as above.
apart of that, they're fine to me

[Xinely's Salad]
00:25:557 (2) - bikin reverse nya ke kanan?
00:32:591 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - dari timeline dsni keliatan kalo spacing agak berantakan di bagian 00:33:005 (9,1,2) jadi agak susah ngikutin nya soal nya dsni pattern kmu pake circle semua. saran untuk 00:33:212 (1,2) mungkin bisa di convert jadi 1/1 slider biar lebih natural
00:47:695 (6,1) - masih bisa di tambah lg spacing nya dsni buat empasiz lebih finisher di (1) soal nya masih FCable tnpa pake dash. saran pindah semua note di 00:46:040 (3,4,5,6) ke kanan 8 grid (grid size tiny) biar sekaligus kasih spacing antara 00:45:626 (2,3)
01:25:971 (8,1) - aku ngerasa kalo spacing dsni harusnya dikasih lebih dari pattern2 sebelum nya karna new stanza dsni plus kmu pake slider sendiri yg sebelum nya cuman konstan circle

[Platter]
00:12:936 (5) - x:160 would be a nice spot to improve the flow better. the spacing of 00:12:108 (4,5) could be increased more a bit
00:27:626 (6,1) - yes generally the spacing here should be more and more than the prev note since it represent a new part of music. i suggest to use spacing equal as you did on 00:29:488 (5,6). besides the spacing matter, i'd really like to see the reverse at 00:27:626 (6) headed to right instead to improve the flow
00:32:281 (1) - honestly a single note that start on a blue tick is kinda weird to play. yep i know the music asked for it but i think it's better to use it as an end of the slider since... yeah it's unique. considering use this rhythm and pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2489991
00:39:833 (1,2,3) - don't you feel this play awkward? save your symmetry pattern for later. the spacing could be improved more here, the difference are too much
00:41:281 (4,1) - flow is a bit uncomfortable here because of the slider of (4) is vertically which the flow doesn't go well with the triplet. even it's just a 1/2 slider i suggest to make it headed to left instead. well it's something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2490023
00:43:143 (1,2) - why 3/4 slider? you know the music didn't asked for it. otherwise it is just kind of overmap here
00:50:384 (6) - flip it so the curve should be at left.
00:57:005 (6,7) - add spacing more. more than 00:56:798 (5,6) if needed
01:04:453 (2,3,4) - another 3/4 slider that shouldn't belong here
01:11:281 (1,2,3) - interesting pattern here but i prefer the reverse slider of (3) should be on right instead
01:22:867 (1,2,1,2) - really lack of movement since you're using slider here
01:27:419 (6) - ctrl+g and place it to around x:72? it really deserve a HDash here to emphasize the finisher on 01:27:832 (1)
01:29:488 (1,2,3) - holy i though they're a triplet on editor. i don't mind with the lack of movement here since they're fine to me but at least separate them of being in one direction like something you did on 01:30:522 (7,8,9) to make it less boring

[Rain]
00:09:005 (3,4) - as introducing part, this jump is surely too high if compared with the spacing on the rest pattern in general. consider lower the spacing slightly, 3 or 4 grid is enough
00:19:143 (3) - ctrl+g? a HDash seems not suitable with your current pattern and music. it's better to add one at 00:19:971 (6)
00:21:626 (5) - imo since you add a finisher here, the HDash should be at 00:21:212 (4) instead. if you agree'd this then move this note to x:488 or around
00:32:281 (1) - same as platter. i recommend using the rhythm given in platter. about the pattern it's your choice though
00:34:453 (5) - consider move this to x:288 to slowdown the movement between the note previous and next, it really match with the background music
01:04:453 (1,2,3) - again same case in platter but this wouldn't really a problem since this is rain diff. but honestly i prefer to spam a 1/2 slider with a HDash
01:31:764 (2,3) - that's a very rough HDash, but still readable due its bpm. make the slider on (3) more vertically to make it use as recovery time a little

[m1ng's Rain]
00:09:626 (4,1) - it wouldn't be hurt adding a HDash like you did on 00:16:247 (4,1) in this early part because why not
00:40:660 (4) - i don't see why youmap this as 3/4 slider here. just shorten this slider to a 1/2 long because there's a beat on 00:40:867 even it's barely to hear. also this is good to keep the rhythm continuously in 1/2 beat
00:41:902 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i see the point of the pattern here. i think the spacing between 00:42:729 (6,7) should be 2.40x (or move 00:42:936 (7) to x:336) regarding on how you periodically increase the amount of spacing on these pattern. stab me if i wrong

really clean mapset. seriously this should be ready to go :3
anyway good luck

Ollapeu

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Topic Starter

Ollapeu 2015-06-04T11:14:29+00:00

Seph wrote:
kurwa

i mean, mod

[Cup]
00:39:833 (5,6) - i suggest using the same pattern with 00:38:178 (3,4) - (both sliders inclined to the right) to give it a little wee bit of a movement Idk if i understood properly, but changed a little bit.
00:52:247 (2) - could go below 00:53:074 (4) - but thats up to you done.
01:10:453 (4) - maybe delete the next note and make it a repeat slider done.
01:21:212 to 01:27:833 try lowering the volume by like 10%, seems a little loud for a calm part done.

[Platter]
HP + 1 or .5 i guess
nothing else, nice platter though! Thanks. ^^ Done.

[Rain]
00:11:695 (1,2,3,4) - spreading this out would be better for the next one (00:12:522 (1) - ) Done i guess.
00:26:385 (3) - ctrl+g ? No, sorry.
00:39:419 (4) - should've kept the distance with the previous jump (aka the same distance between 00:38:178 (1,2) - ) This change deleted the HDash, but ok, done.
00:50:798 (2) - ctrl+g No, sorry.
00:52:867 (7) - maybe place it above (5) so it would make a zigzag jump pattern ok.
01:08:798 (5) - better if its in between (6) and (7) ok.
01:40:247 (7,8) - i would ctrl+g these two to give a good introduction to the next kiai time
Sorry, no changes here.

I guess thats it, sorry if its just nazi/minor suggestions since its already modded enough o/

Thank You so much!

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