as request on forum PM
[Cup]
use CS3 instead for a better spread?
01:30:316 (5) - personally i will avoid using this kind of slider in every cup. on sightread matter, at the moment it could be hard for new player. consider using this kind of pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2489555
01:40:247 (5) - similar as above.
apart of that, they're fine to me
[Xinely's Salad]
00:25:557 (2) - bikin reverse nya ke kanan?
00:32:591 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - dari timeline dsni keliatan kalo spacing agak berantakan di bagian 00:33:005 (9,1,2) jadi agak susah ngikutin nya soal nya dsni pattern kmu pake circle semua. saran untuk 00:33:212 (1,2) mungkin bisa di convert jadi 1/1 slider biar lebih natural
00:47:695 (6,1) - masih bisa di tambah lg spacing nya dsni buat empasiz lebih finisher di (1) soal nya masih FCable tnpa pake dash. saran pindah semua note di 00:46:040 (3,4,5,6) ke kanan 8 grid (grid size tiny) biar sekaligus kasih spacing antara 00:45:626 (2,3)
01:25:971 (8,1) - aku ngerasa kalo spacing dsni harusnya dikasih lebih dari pattern2 sebelum nya karna new stanza dsni plus kmu pake slider sendiri yg sebelum nya cuman konstan circle
[Platter]
00:12:936 (5) - x:160 would be a nice spot to improve the flow better. the spacing of 00:12:108 (4,5) could be increased more a bit
00:27:626 (6,1) - yes generally the spacing here should be more and more than the prev note since it represent a new part of music. i suggest to use spacing equal as you did on 00:29:488 (5,6). besides the spacing matter, i'd really like to see the reverse at 00:27:626 (6) headed to right instead to improve the flow
00:32:281 (1) - honestly a single note that start on a blue tick is kinda weird to play. yep i know the music asked for it but i think it's better to use it as an end of the slider since... yeah it's unique. considering use this rhythm and pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2489991
00:39:833 (1,2,3) - don't you feel this play awkward? save your symmetry pattern for later. the spacing could be improved more here, the difference are too much
00:41:281 (4,1) - flow is a bit uncomfortable here because of the slider of (4) is vertically which the flow doesn't go well with the triplet. even it's just a 1/2 slider i suggest to make it headed to left instead. well it's something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2490023
00:43:143 (1,2) - why 3/4 slider? you know the music didn't asked for it. otherwise it is just kind of overmap here
00:50:384 (6) - flip it so the curve should be at left.
00:57:005 (6,7) - add spacing more. more than 00:56:798 (5,6) if needed
01:04:453 (2,3,4) - another 3/4 slider that shouldn't belong here
01:11:281 (1,2,3) - interesting pattern here but i prefer the reverse slider of (3) should be on right instead
01:22:867 (1,2,1,2) - really lack of movement since you're using slider here
01:27:419 (6) - ctrl+g and place it to around x:72? it really deserve a HDash here to emphasize the finisher on 01:27:832 (1)
01:29:488 (1,2,3) - holy i though they're a triplet on editor. i don't mind with the lack of movement here since they're fine to me but at least separate them of being in one direction like something you did on 01:30:522 (7,8,9) to make it less boring
[Rain]
00:09:005 (3,4) - as introducing part, this jump is surely too high if compared with the spacing on the rest pattern in general. consider lower the spacing slightly, 3 or 4 grid is enough
00:19:143 (3) - ctrl+g? a HDash seems not suitable with your current pattern and music. it's better to add one at 00:19:971 (6)
00:21:626 (5) - imo since you add a finisher here, the HDash should be at 00:21:212 (4) instead. if you agree'd this then move this note to x:488 or around
00:32:281 (1) - same as platter. i recommend using the rhythm given in platter. about the pattern it's your choice though
00:34:453 (5) - consider move this to x:288 to slowdown the movement between the note previous and next, it really match with the background music
01:04:453 (1,2,3) - again same case in platter but this wouldn't really a problem since this is rain diff. but honestly i prefer to spam a 1/2 slider with a HDash
01:31:764 (2,3) - that's a very rough HDash, but still readable due its bpm. make the slider on (3) more vertically to make it use as recovery time a little
[m1ng's Rain]
00:09:626 (4,1) - it wouldn't be hurt adding a HDash like you did on 00:16:247 (4,1) in this early part because why not
00:40:660 (4) - i don't see why youmap this as 3/4 slider here. just shorten this slider to a 1/2 long because there's a beat on 00:40:867 even it's barely to hear. also this is good to keep the rhythm continuously in 1/2 beat
00:41:902 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i see the point of the pattern here. i think the spacing between 00:42:729 (6,7) should be 2.40x (or move 00:42:936 (7) to x:336) regarding on how you periodically increase the amount of spacing on these pattern. stab me if i wrong
really clean mapset. seriously this should be ready to go :3
anyway good luck
[Cup]
use CS3 instead for a better spread?
01:30:316 (5) - personally i will avoid using this kind of slider in every cup. on sightread matter, at the moment it could be hard for new player. consider using this kind of pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2489555
01:40:247 (5) - similar as above.
apart of that, they're fine to me
[Xinely's Salad]
00:25:557 (2) - bikin reverse nya ke kanan?
00:32:591 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - dari timeline dsni keliatan kalo spacing agak berantakan di bagian 00:33:005 (9,1,2) jadi agak susah ngikutin nya soal nya dsni pattern kmu pake circle semua. saran untuk 00:33:212 (1,2) mungkin bisa di convert jadi 1/1 slider biar lebih natural
00:47:695 (6,1) - masih bisa di tambah lg spacing nya dsni buat empasiz lebih finisher di (1) soal nya masih FCable tnpa pake dash. saran pindah semua note di 00:46:040 (3,4,5,6) ke kanan 8 grid (grid size tiny) biar sekaligus kasih spacing antara 00:45:626 (2,3)
01:25:971 (8,1) - aku ngerasa kalo spacing dsni harusnya dikasih lebih dari pattern2 sebelum nya karna new stanza dsni plus kmu pake slider sendiri yg sebelum nya cuman konstan circle
[Platter]
00:12:936 (5) - x:160 would be a nice spot to improve the flow better. the spacing of 00:12:108 (4,5) could be increased more a bit
00:27:626 (6,1) - yes generally the spacing here should be more and more than the prev note since it represent a new part of music. i suggest to use spacing equal as you did on 00:29:488 (5,6). besides the spacing matter, i'd really like to see the reverse at 00:27:626 (6) headed to right instead to improve the flow
00:32:281 (1) - honestly a single note that start on a blue tick is kinda weird to play. yep i know the music asked for it but i think it's better to use it as an end of the slider since... yeah it's unique. considering use this rhythm and pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2489991
00:39:833 (1,2,3) - don't you feel this play awkward? save your symmetry pattern for later. the spacing could be improved more here, the difference are too much
00:41:281 (4,1) - flow is a bit uncomfortable here because of the slider of (4) is vertically which the flow doesn't go well with the triplet. even it's just a 1/2 slider i suggest to make it headed to left instead. well it's something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2490023
00:43:143 (1,2) - why 3/4 slider? you know the music didn't asked for it. otherwise it is just kind of overmap here
00:50:384 (6) - flip it so the curve should be at left.
00:57:005 (6,7) - add spacing more. more than 00:56:798 (5,6) if needed
01:04:453 (2,3,4) - another 3/4 slider that shouldn't belong here
01:11:281 (1,2,3) - interesting pattern here but i prefer the reverse slider of (3) should be on right instead
01:22:867 (1,2,1,2) - really lack of movement since you're using slider here
01:27:419 (6) - ctrl+g and place it to around x:72? it really deserve a HDash here to emphasize the finisher on 01:27:832 (1)
01:29:488 (1,2,3) - holy i though they're a triplet on editor. i don't mind with the lack of movement here since they're fine to me but at least separate them of being in one direction like something you did on 01:30:522 (7,8,9) to make it less boring
[Rain]
00:09:005 (3,4) - as introducing part, this jump is surely too high if compared with the spacing on the rest pattern in general. consider lower the spacing slightly, 3 or 4 grid is enough
00:19:143 (3) - ctrl+g? a HDash seems not suitable with your current pattern and music. it's better to add one at 00:19:971 (6)
00:21:626 (5) - imo since you add a finisher here, the HDash should be at 00:21:212 (4) instead. if you agree'd this then move this note to x:488 or around
00:32:281 (1) - same as platter. i recommend using the rhythm given in platter. about the pattern it's your choice though
00:34:453 (5) - consider move this to x:288 to slowdown the movement between the note previous and next, it really match with the background music
01:04:453 (1,2,3) - again same case in platter but this wouldn't really a problem since this is rain diff. but honestly i prefer to spam a 1/2 slider with a HDash
01:31:764 (2,3) - that's a very rough HDash, but still readable due its bpm. make the slider on (3) more vertically to make it use as recovery time a little
[m1ng's Rain]
00:09:626 (4,1) - it wouldn't be hurt adding a HDash like you did on 00:16:247 (4,1) in this early part because why not
00:40:660 (4) - i don't see why youmap this as 3/4 slider here. just shorten this slider to a 1/2 long because there's a beat on 00:40:867 even it's barely to hear. also this is good to keep the rhythm continuously in 1/2 beat
00:41:902 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i see the point of the pattern here. i think the spacing between 00:42:729 (6,7) should be 2.40x (or move 00:42:936 (7) to x:336) regarding on how you periodically increase the amount of spacing on these pattern. stab me if i wrong
really clean mapset. seriously this should be ready to go :3
anyway good luck