Hi there, from my queue
[General]
You should use Grid Size Tiny (ctrl + 1) in the future to create better accuracy in your distance spacing
01:14:190 - kiai start
[Insane]
00:23:919 (2) - NC (New Combo) here instead of 00:23:717 (1) - You generally want to put a NC at every two downbeats (denoted by the long white tick)
00:48:649 (1,2) - blanket the slider like so: http://puu.sh/8nrzJ.jpg
00:50:271 (4,5,6,7,8) - you can use Compose -> Create Polygon Circles to make better star patterns
00:56:352 (1) - remove this NC if you want to follow your current NC pattern
00:56:554 (2) - Break up this slider to create this rhythm:

You want to get a slider head at 00:57:163 - to match the vocals
00:57:568 (4,5,6) - I highly recommend keeping these distances the same
01:07:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - No need for this rhythm. It doesn't really match the song at all
01:20:676 (9) - NC here instead of 01:22:095 (1) - to maintain NC pattern
01:23:717 (4) - and NC here if you do above
01:27:973 (7,8) - I don't recommend this slider layout. It's not really fun to play, doesn't help with flow, and doesn't look very nice
01:29:595 (7,8) - ^
01:31:723 (8) - symmetry
01:33:649 (2,3) - also this slider layout I think you should change
01:35:271 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - try this rhythm:

This will limit awkward pauses created by what you have mapped
[Wonkeee's Insane]
00:08:388 (5,6,7,8) - keep distances the same
00:15:055 (4,5) - blanket
00:16:166 (6) - I don't think a reverse slider like this fits here, because you miss this vocal at 00:16:833 -
break this up into two sliders like this

00:37:298 (1,2,3) - distance spacing (For this type of map, I would stick with one distance spacing and map with snapping on, only changing it during specific parts
00:39:122 (4,5,6,1) - avoid overlapping
00:41:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead:

This will make sure you map the key vocals in this sections
You should avoid mapping unintentional anti-jumps. This is when you have two objects that are far apart in time, but remain very close together.
This makes reading the map a little difficult in some sections, and these anti-jumps don't contribute to your map either.
Instances such as:
01:22:095 (1,2,3,4) -
01:23:717 (1,2,3,4) -
[Hard]
Many New Combo (NC) problems in this map
Your map is separated into bars. Each bar contains 4 beats, denoted by the white ticks at the top. The beginning of each bar (the first beat) is represented by the large white tick, followed by three smaller white ticks representing beats 2, 3, and 4. Generally, you want to have a NC at every two large white ticks.
The map begins by following the above pattern. However, when it gets to 00:30:406 - , the pattern stops and NC placement appears a little random.
Also another thing, I would use more sliders than hitcirles in this difficulty.
Things like 00:56:960 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - and 01:04:460 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
are a little difficulty to play, and not very intuitive
[Normal]
Also NC issues. Please see above on New Combo placement
well, the rhythm isn't too bad
[Easy]
00:11:499 (3) - Actually shift this slider so that it begins here 00:11:944 - better follows the song
[General]
You should use Grid Size Tiny (ctrl + 1) in the future to create better accuracy in your distance spacing
01:14:190 - kiai start
[Insane]
00:23:919 (2) - NC (New Combo) here instead of 00:23:717 (1) - You generally want to put a NC at every two downbeats (denoted by the long white tick)
00:48:649 (1,2) - blanket the slider like so: http://puu.sh/8nrzJ.jpg
00:50:271 (4,5,6,7,8) - you can use Compose -> Create Polygon Circles to make better star patterns
00:56:352 (1) - remove this NC if you want to follow your current NC pattern
00:56:554 (2) - Break up this slider to create this rhythm:
You want to get a slider head at 00:57:163 - to match the vocals
00:57:568 (4,5,6) - I highly recommend keeping these distances the same
01:07:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - No need for this rhythm. It doesn't really match the song at all
01:20:676 (9) - NC here instead of 01:22:095 (1) - to maintain NC pattern
01:23:717 (4) - and NC here if you do above
01:27:973 (7,8) - I don't recommend this slider layout. It's not really fun to play, doesn't help with flow, and doesn't look very nice
01:29:595 (7,8) - ^
01:31:723 (8) - symmetry
01:33:649 (2,3) - also this slider layout I think you should change
01:35:271 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - try this rhythm:
This will limit awkward pauses created by what you have mapped
[Wonkeee's Insane]
00:08:388 (5,6,7,8) - keep distances the same
00:15:055 (4,5) - blanket
00:16:166 (6) - I don't think a reverse slider like this fits here, because you miss this vocal at 00:16:833 -
break this up into two sliders like this
00:37:298 (1,2,3) - distance spacing (For this type of map, I would stick with one distance spacing and map with snapping on, only changing it during specific parts
00:39:122 (4,5,6,1) - avoid overlapping
00:41:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead:
This will make sure you map the key vocals in this sections
You should avoid mapping unintentional anti-jumps. This is when you have two objects that are far apart in time, but remain very close together.
This makes reading the map a little difficult in some sections, and these anti-jumps don't contribute to your map either.
Instances such as:
01:22:095 (1,2,3,4) -
01:23:717 (1,2,3,4) -
[Hard]
Many New Combo (NC) problems in this map
Your map is separated into bars. Each bar contains 4 beats, denoted by the white ticks at the top. The beginning of each bar (the first beat) is represented by the large white tick, followed by three smaller white ticks representing beats 2, 3, and 4. Generally, you want to have a NC at every two large white ticks.
The map begins by following the above pattern. However, when it gets to 00:30:406 - , the pattern stops and NC placement appears a little random.
Also another thing, I would use more sliders than hitcirles in this difficulty.
Things like 00:56:960 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - and 01:04:460 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
are a little difficulty to play, and not very intuitive
[Normal]
Also NC issues. Please see above on New Combo placement
well, the rhythm isn't too bad
[Easy]
00:11:499 (3) - Actually shift this slider so that it begins here 00:11:944 - better follows the song