intoon wrote:

SPOILER

20:33 intoon: 제가 여기다 일단 적어드릴테니 님 모딩 끝나고 읽어보세여
20:33 intoon: 참고로 익스트림만..
20:34 intoon: 00:02:148 (6,7,8,9,10) - 다른모양 추천드림
20:35 intoon: 00:06:202 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 00:06:850 (5,6) - 점프가 필요없는부분같아서 그래요
20:36 intoon: 00:24:364 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 여기 지루해요
20:36 intoon: 00:38:634 (1,2,3,4) - 애매하네요 2하고 3을 일정한 거리를 쓰던지 아예 점프로 만들던지 둘중하나
20:38 intoon: 00:43:823 (1,2,3,4) - 다른모양 추천하고싶어요 (개인적으로)
20:38 intoon: 00:45:445 (2,3,4,5,6) - 스냅은 상관없이 거리가 일정하지않아요....
20:39 intoon: 00:48:688 (4) - 노트 1개 change가 나을거같아요 00:49:499 (2,3) - 여기처럼..
20:40 intoon: 01:01:985 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 다른모양 추천드림 매우 많이........
20:40 intoon: 모양이라기보단 배치....
20:40 intoon: 01:07:175 (1,2,3) - 단타 6개가 훨~씬 나아요
20:42 intoon: 01:30:526 (1) - 여기 왠만하면 하얀색이던 검은색이던 여기만 특별한 컬러쓰세요, (여담이지만 린이
20:42 intoon: 이런거 좋아해요) 가비 따라하는거같긴한데 어쩔수 없어요
20:42 intoon: 01:30:526 (1) - ^
20:42 intoon: 01:38:310 (1,2,3) - 다른모양..
20:42 intoon: 01:38:958 (4,5,6) - ^
20:43 intoon: 01:43:823 (1,1) - remove nc
20:44 intoon: 01:53:229 (1,2,3) - 왠만하면 점프로 바꾸세요, 뭐 개인적 취향이시라면 할말은 없는데 점프만드는쪽의
20:44 intoon: 훨씬 나아보이네요..
20:44 intoon: =End=

simple irc modding
boooooooooooooooom

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Beginner]
00:16:580 (1) - remove sliderwhistle? Fix
01:07:175 (1) - http://puu.sh/1dYNm too get it tight maybe? the music is quite strong and i think some kind of emphesis is needed. Sure. I fix that
01:51:283 (1) - no. the hitsounds is too quiet and i don't see the need to do so. I think too
In general, i think the sliders in this diff could be made in a more pretty way. Even it's an Easy i think you could put more effort on it. ;w;

[Basic]
00:01:013 (1,2,3) - glad to see you could use such organized beats. It could be made better if you place the notes according some kind of rules. now it seems a bit loose (i mean, make 1/2/3 looks more like "in a group") OK fix that
00:54:202 (1) - honestly, a bit ugly, you surely could think some better ways for a slider... Fix that
00:58:094 (3) - ^ ^
01:35:067 (5) - remove the reverse, and it shows a "stop" effect at the beats, i think this fit the music better. OK

[Frobe's Advanced]
00:07:499 (5,6) - why not 4 circles as before. Fix
00:11:067 (3) - remove a reverse and add a note at 00:11:391 ? I think that's for Finish
00:24:364 (1) - this part...i kinda doubt about it because music is not that 1/2 all the time, the 3/4s should be something you could consider, or use some 3/4+1/4 would also make it better imo. I can't dare to touch that o_o
01:01:985 (1) - for this part you should really look at the extreme diff for the note choices... notes are very obviously "3 in a group" (even in the jubeat game itself), but i don't have such feeling when playing this one. I fix that
The problem in this diff is... it looks not a map for this song. Or say this is something i don't like. D:

[Extreme]
00:11:715 (1) - maybe 0.75x would be already enough. too short sliders looks not that good imo. OK I use 0.75x sv
00:12:850 - add a note? I think that's not good
00:24:364 (1) - 6*3/4 sliders in a row just makes this exciting part in a boring way. try to use various of way in this part, based on the main beats. That's good idea. but I follow main beat now.
01:00:040 (3,4) - move right a bit so the spacing looks more comfortable. Fix
01:07:175 (1) - the idea here expressed kinda enough, but i thnk you could do more at the "skill" part. (for example: use 1.2x, make the direction change a bit, larger the spacing http://puu.sh/1dZa4) sure i try make large spacing
01:20:148 (1,2,1,2) - still, i like the idea you showed, but don't you feel after you stress those "parts", as a whole they are a bit separated? though it may be a too much task for new mappers but still want to mention it here. I consider that, but not now.

-Kirito wrote:

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[Beginner]
01:48:364 - Combo Add? Fix

[Basic]
00:25:661 (4) - NC? nope
00:28:256 (4) - NC? ^
00:42:526 (3) - NC? Fix
01:09:769 (1,1,1,1) - 흰색선에 맞춰보는게 어떠신지? 컨셉..
01:10:742 (2,2,2,2) - Combo Add? nope
01:39:607 (3) - NC? ^

[Frobe's Advanced]
01:31:175 (2) - NC? OK
01:36:364 (2) - NC? ^
01:39:607 (3) - NC? ^
01:47:067 (1) - NC? no

[Extreme]
00:05:877 - Combo Add? 아니되오!
00:08:472 - ^? ^
완벽한 난이도...

닭빵님 이 맵 좋아욧! 빨리 랭크되시길!! 헉 감사해요!

HelloSCV wrote:

IRC

SPOILER

19:34 Dark Fang: 브레이크타임 매꿧는데 혹시 그부분만 모딩 가능하신가요?
19:34 HelloSCV: 넹
19:35 *Dark Fang is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/150494 Tatsh - HEAVENLY MOON [Frobe's Advanced]]
19:35 Dark Fang: 00:11:715 -
19:35 Dark Fang: ~ 00:21:445 -
19:38 HelloSCV: 박자 말인데
19:38 HelloSCV: 00:17:229 (7) -
19:38 HelloSCV: 노트추가
19:38 HelloSCV: 00:18:202 (3,4) -
19:38 HelloSCV: 삭제
19:39 Dark Fang: 스레에도 irc 모딩 올려주시면 감사합니다
19:39 HelloSCV: 넹
19:39 HelloSCV: 00:18:850 (4) - 00:18:526 (3) -
19:39 HelloSCV: 추가?
19:39 HelloSCV: 아 물론 슬라이더로 하셔도 좋구요
19:39 HelloSCV: 00:19:175 (1) - 1/1 슬라이더로?
19:40 HelloSCV: 굳이 잡자면 이정도

모딩모딩

NoHitter wrote:

Rechecked and bubbled!
Good luck.

Garven wrote:

[Advanced]
00:21:769 (1) - End this at 00:23:634 -
00:45:121 - Maybe increase the volume a little bit? Kind of hard to hear
01:18:526 (5,1) - This is just cruel. Either add a beat between or making the spacing larger please.

Garven wrote:

Ahoy

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best I'll keep tick rate

[Easy]
00:24:364 (1) - This is really soon after a spinner for an Easy - especially one with such a low star rating. It might be best to map through it. fix
00:56:796 (1) - This slider could look better. The curve is a little sharp and uneven. I trim that note
01:07:175 (3,4) - This has high potential to be quite confusing for newer players. It's fairly fast and quite short with more than one repeat with a note one beat afterward. I recommend you rethink this. hmm.. fix. longer than now
01:51:283 - I think a crescendo (gradual increase in volume) would work great here instead of keeping it all at a low volume. OK fix

[Basic]
00:08:796 (1,4) - I recommend you either stick with 3-hit sliders or 5-hit sliders. This is like that short slider from the Easy - Even though this is a Normal you still want to keep things at least consistent with the harder techniques used for this tier of difficulty. hmm... well.. I fix 00:08:796 (1) - this note. but keeping (4)
00:18:850 (4) - Maybe delete considering how tranquil the melody line is here I delete that note
00:30:850 (3) - This flows better ctrl + h'd. If you do this, you'll have to ctrl + h pretty much everything up until 00:44:472 (3) - fix
00:59:391 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe instead of having straight 1/1 rhythms here during this calm bridge, have a more stagnant rhythm such as this? Fix. but I use other rhythm

01:38:310 (1) - Same suggestion at this part. Maybe a simpler and smoother rhythm to transition better. ^

[Taiko]
01:30:850 (1) - That's... kinda weird. Probably best to keep it all at the same SV. hm..ok fix
01:36:040 (2) - ^ ^

[Extreme]
HP drain is too high. It's too hard to recover health from a mistake. change HP drain
00:09:445 (4) - Way too close to 3. Increase that spacing please. ok
01:35:715 (1) - You'll need tick rate 2 for these sliders anyway. I'll keep tick rate

Garven wrote:

For the Insane, you must have tick rate 2 if you want those .5x sliders.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:24:364 (1) - This is still soon after the spinner. Maybe adding a circle at 00:21:769 - and 00:23:067 - will work better I use circle instead spinner. I won't add circle at 00:23:067 - (if that have problem. I'll fix)

[Basic]
01:51:283 - You should apply that same crescendo you did in Beginner here (and the Taiko and Extreme) fix at Basic, Extreme.cuz lower sound is unplayable at taiko.

Wreath wrote:

랭크 화이팅!! >ㅅ</

☆～

Melophobia wrote:

[Extream]
01:08:472 (5) - This note cannot be muted, move green line to 01:08:553 - Fix
01:08:553 (1) - Since spinner end doesnt follow anything, it would be better to remove finish. also use soft sampleset instead. OK I use soft sampleset.
01:30:526 (1) - Better to use 0.75x instead. this is pretty confusing imo not only because change of slider speed is sudden but because 0.5x looks the same as 1.0x sliders. anyway it's fitting very well with the song so it's up to you. hm.. keeping now
01:35:715 (1) - ^ ^

[Adcanced]
00:51:445 - Since there's an extra bass drum in this section, add a note here? add note :3
01:08:472 (1) - Since spinner end doesnt follow anything, it would be better to remove finish. also use soft sampleset instead. same as above
01:48:364 (5,6,7,8) - Change them into a kick slider? there's no long stream like this elsewhere so it's much harder than the rest of difficulty~ Fix ~

[Basic]
00:21:769 (1) - This spinner is too loud compared with other diffs. try to mute it OK

[Beginner]
00:13:985 (3) - This combo is kinda long, so how about adding newcombo here? OK add newcombo
00:37:337 (1,2,3) - Considering that This difficulty is based on 1/1 of whitetick, This is too hard for beginners imo, change them into a slider or at least change (2,3) to a slider. hm.. keeping now.
00:41:229 (2,3) - for the same reason as above, CTRL+G for better rhythm and adjust placement. there wont be much difference but it will be much easier for beginners to get 300 well.. Fix that

Nice first map. Fix whatever you want and call me back for a recheck

Melophobia wrote:

Rechecked via IRC, and we added a spinner in the Beginner diff and fixed some minor stuff. And now everything looks fine to me! great first map :3

log

21:46 Melophobia: Hello :3
21:46 Dark Fang: Hello
21:46 Melophobia: i would like to ask you a quiestion before rechecking
21:47 Melophobia: there's no spinner in Beginner diff, but i think it would be best if you could find a way to add one
21:47 Melophobia: what do you think?
21:47 Dark Fang: hm...
21:48 Dark Fang: OK I will add spinner in Beginner diff
21:48 Melophobia: Thanks :3
21:48 Melophobia: i will rebubble after rechecking
21:48 Melophobia: i think Garven will do the rest
21:48 Dark Fang: i think too
21:57 Melophobia: sorry, i would like to recheck via irc now
21:57 Melophobia: do you have some time to do?
21:57 Dark Fang: OK
21:58 Melophobia: in Extreme
21:58 Melophobia: 00:21:769 (4) - Finish is too loud, whistle is better imo
22:00 Melophobia: in Basic
22:00 Melophobia: 00:01:013 (1) - Finish
22:00 Melophobia: 00:06:202 (1) - ^
22:01 Melophobia: everything else looks fine now, i will recheck again after fixes
22:02 Dark Fang: OK all fix
22:02 Melophobia: update please :3
22:02 Dark Fang: upload ~.
22:03 Dark Fang: wut.. I got an error
22:03 Dark Fang: stopping at 22.2%
22:03 Melophobia: maybe restart osu!?
22:03 Dark Fang: OK
22:03 Melophobia: i have gotten it once
22:03 Melophobia: yeah
22:04 Dark Fang: Finish ~
22:04 Melophobia: ok!
22:04 Dark Fang: btw I really thank you ~ :3
22:04 Melophobia: my pleasure :3
22:05 Melophobia: ah
22:05 Melophobia: 00:21:769 (1) -
22:05 Melophobia: need to be muted
22:05 Melophobia: in Beginner
22:05 Dark Fang: oh
22:06 Dark Fang: update ~ thank you for checking sound xD
22:06 Melophobia: hm
22:07 Melophobia: i think the following notes appear too suddenly
22:07 Melophobia: considering the level of this difficulty
22:07 Melophobia: i mean 00:24:364 (1) -
22:08 Dark Fang: Can I replace near by spinner?
22:08 Melophobia: nah just uneasy about recovery time
22:08 Melophobia: maybe
22:08 Melophobia: end the spinner at 00:23:067 - instead?
22:09 Dark Fang: hmm.. that's great
22:09 Melophobia: update it once again please
22:10 Dark Fang: update
22:11 Melophobia: ok

Rebubbled!
Enjoy my first bubble

W h i t e wrote:

congratz~ :3

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