kajiyatta wrote:

hi from #modreq
General
me likes this song 33 almost suggestions
Beginner
AR4 seems a bit faster , OD3 seems good I think
Placement
00:11:391(3) 1 grid down?
01:29:229(2) like this? it's more hitable for newbie I think.

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Rythem
01:52:904 add a note?
Hit Sonud
00:16:580(1) add whistle at head? I hear back sounds.

Basic
Placement
00:18:850(4) x:256 y:212 ?
01:30:850(1) it's a bit closer, so try to replace? e.g.)

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01:46:094(1) DS error?
Rythem
00:21:769(4) delete this note and start spinner this better I think. it fits with music.

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Frobe's Advanced
me likes this diff =3
Rythem
00:11:067(3) remove 1 repeat and add anote?

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Hit Sonud
00:44:472(3,4) add whistle at the head?

Extreme
wow, really pro map for your 1st map@@ awesome!
Placement
00:26:310(2) try this?

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00:27:607(2)^

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Hit Sonud
01:28:256(6) add whistle at the end?

that's all. so Excellent map, go Rank and star!

kajiyatta wrote:

Frobe's Advanced
me likes this diff =3
Rythem
00:11:067(3) remove 1 repeat and add anote?

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Hit Sonud
00:44:472(3,4) add whistle at the head?

Sonnyc wrote:

모딩 드려요~ ㅇㅅㅇ 별 너무 많으신듯 어여 장판 잡으세요

Beginner:

00:38:634 (4) - 슬라이더 속의 휘슬은 없애주세요 Fix
01:09:769 (1) - 그냥 생각이지만 상하 대칭이 아닌게 아쉽네요.. Nope
01:20:148 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가 끝에 박수는 왜 안넣으셨나요? 의도라면 두시고 실수면 뒤의 비슷한 사항도 고쳐주세요~ of course
01:39:607 (2) - 끝에 피니시? fix
01:42:202 (2) - 클랩 삭제 ^
01:43:499 (1) - 시작과 끝에 클랩 삭제 ^
01:52:904 (2,3) - 시작에 클랩? nope

Basic:

-- 비기너와 달리 박수가 없군요 ㅇㅅㅇ

00:04:904 (3) - 리버스. 디스탄스 따위.. of course and adjust next notes
00:07:499 (3) - ^ ^
00:16:580 (5) - 좀 더 왼쪽으로 움직이길 추천합니다 fix
00:56:472 (3) - 휘슬 삭제 nope i heard HL sound at that
01:07:823 (2) - 시작에 피니시 oops, Fix :3
01:08:472 (3) - 피니시 삭제 nope
01:36:040 (1) - (4)에 겹치는게 좋을 거 같습니다. 이후의 스페이싱은 알아서.. Fix

Frobe's Advanced:

00:11:067 (3) - 1/8 슬라이더로 바꾸는건 어떨까요 nope
00:32:148 (1) - 끝의 클랩 삭제 Fix
00:32:958 (4) - 중간의 휘슬 삭제 nope
00:42:526 (1) - 피니시 삭제 Fix
01:08:472 (1) - ^ nope
01:53:229 (1) - ^ nope

Extreme:

00:21:850 (1) - 님의 난이도와 동일하게 00:23:634에서 끝내세요 Fix xD
00:30:040 (3,4,5,6,7) - 연타가 적당하지 않은듯 합니다 (5,7) 삭제 Fix
01:23:715 (5) - 1칸 위로 Fix
01:45:121 (2,4) - ctrl+R nah

어려운 맵 모딩은 가능하지만 정작 매핑이 안되는 :OO cheer up
GOOD LUCK

NoHitter wrote:

[Beginner]
- 00:13:985 (3) - I suggest you reverse this (Ctrl+G) for better flow. sure. Fix
- 00:47:715 (2,3,4) - Make these into a repeat slider first, so that beginners can catch the rhythm first. You can use notes after that. of course I use repeat slider instead circle
- 00:59:391 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - IMO these combos should be placed 1/1 back, so that the notes will hit the downbeats. The rhythm is more distinct there. You can extend 01:07:823 (2) into a 1/1 slider. I fix and adjust them
- 01:21:769 (2,3) - [nazi] Move these right by one grid, so the slider blankets them better. You may want to adjust 01:22:742 (1) too. sure

[Basic]
- 00:21:121 (3) - I suggest you reverse this (Ctrl+G) for better flow. sure
- 00:37:337 (1) - IMO this looks better if you flip the slider vertically like this. Fix
- 00:42:526 (3,4,1,2,3) - May I suggest a pattern like this? It flows better. sure
- 00:46:418 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you start with the repeat sliders like the ones in 00:49:012 (1) first to familiarize players with the rhythm. OK fix
- 00:59:391 (1) - Placing it like this looks better IMO. Being centered between the two sliders. sure fix
- 01:40:904 (1,2) - [nazi] The overlap doesn't look good. fix and adjust
- 01:53:229 (1) - Don't see a reason why you need to new combo this. Remove new combo. OK

[Frobe's Advanced]
- 00:10:094 (1,2,3) - I suggest you change the pattern to this. It looks neater. Fix
- 00:17:877 () - Map this break! There's really no reason not to. I consider that
- 00:26:148 (2) - [nazi] The overlap doesn't look good IMO. Fix
- 00:36:526 (3) - I suggest you reverse this (Ctrl+G) for better flow. OK fix
- 01:13:012 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - The pattern here doesn't really play well since it looks really clumped up. OK I fix it. keep to Frobe's pattern
- 01:17:229 (4) - Would look better like this IMO. OK fix
- 01:25:012 (4) - Same as above. Like this. Fix too
- 01:48:364 (5,6,7,8) - Why not use a slider instead for consistency? You've been using sliders up until now. nope. ond day Frobe said me "I like that's pattern and othes too"

[Taiko]
- Note: Regarding the kiai, flashes may be used but they fit the song as they emphasize the x1.50 speed parts.
- 00:10:742 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - kkddkkkkk fits the music better here. Fix
- 00:15:283 (3) - k here. You've been using k to emphasize the music similar to these parts. [Like in 00:12:688 (3) and 00:14:634 (3)] Sure
- 00:19:175 (1) - Same as above.
- 00:44:472 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ddkkddkkk for more variation? You've already used ddddkkkkk. no. I think that's good
- 00:54:850 () - d. I can hear a distinct beat here. add a note
- 01:08:148 (7,8,1,2,3) - kdkdd or kdkdk? Fits the music better IMO. sure. I'm going to use kdkdk
- 01:17:067 () - d. I don't see why you left this part blank. There's a beat there. OK add a note

[Extreme]
- 00:05:229 (9) - Move one grid left then reverse? Flows better IMO. I think better now
- 00:09:445 (4) - I don't really recommend anti-jumps, but it fits the song here.
- 01:24:688 (3) - I suggest you place this where (1) was. It flows nicely! No change by that. but I replace that note due to your advice
- 01:44:796 (1,2,3,4) - Why not space these equally like this? Fix that

Lou-kun wrote:

-Easy-

Slider Vocalist need to go slower.
Plus you can add you'r own skin to make it popular. one day I consider that. but I know that's not need for my map

-Normal-

Needs at least one spinner for the multiplayer and online rankings. OK. but I have spinner at all diffs

Q:Why?

A:Because, in Mutliplayer some people spin better than others, That will cause them to win. And in online rankings, If you didn't add the spinner many people will be in the same rank.

Ps:-

The one that I didn't talk about is totally perfect. Keep on mind my comments.

Dark Fang wrote:

Lou-kun wrote:

-Easy-

Slider Vocalist need to go slower.
Plus you can add you'r own skin to make it popular. one day I consider that. but I know that's not need for my map

-Normal-

Needs at least one spinner for the multiplayer and online rankings. OK. but I have spinner at all diffs

Q:Why?

A:Because, in Mutliplayer some people spin better than others, That will cause them to win. And in online rankings, If you didn't add the spinner many people will be in the same rank.

Ps:-

The one that I didn't talk about is totally perfect. Keep on mind my comments.

Thanks for modding

intoon wrote:

SPOILER

20:33 intoon: 제가 여기다 일단 적어드릴테니 님 모딩 끝나고 읽어보세여
20:33 intoon: 참고로 익스트림만..
20:34 intoon: 00:02:148 (6,7,8,9,10) - 다른모양 추천드림
20:35 intoon: 00:06:202 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 00:06:850 (5,6) - 점프가 필요없는부분같아서 그래요
20:36 intoon: 00:24:364 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 여기 지루해요
20:36 intoon: 00:38:634 (1,2,3,4) - 애매하네요 2하고 3을 일정한 거리를 쓰던지 아예 점프로 만들던지 둘중하나
20:38 intoon: 00:43:823 (1,2,3,4) - 다른모양 추천하고싶어요 (개인적으로)
20:38 intoon: 00:45:445 (2,3,4,5,6) - 스냅은 상관없이 거리가 일정하지않아요....
20:39 intoon: 00:48:688 (4) - 노트 1개 change가 나을거같아요 00:49:499 (2,3) - 여기처럼..
20:40 intoon: 01:01:985 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 다른모양 추천드림 매우 많이........
20:40 intoon: 모양이라기보단 배치....
20:40 intoon: 01:07:175 (1,2,3) - 단타 6개가 훨~씬 나아요
20:42 intoon: 01:30:526 (1) - 여기 왠만하면 하얀색이던 검은색이던 여기만 특별한 컬러쓰세요, (여담이지만 린이
20:42 intoon: 이런거 좋아해요) 가비 따라하는거같긴한데 어쩔수 없어요
20:42 intoon: 01:30:526 (1) - ^
20:42 intoon: 01:38:310 (1,2,3) - 다른모양..
20:42 intoon: 01:38:958 (4,5,6) - ^
20:43 intoon: 01:43:823 (1,1) - remove nc
20:44 intoon: 01:53:229 (1,2,3) - 왠만하면 점프로 바꾸세요, 뭐 개인적 취향이시라면 할말은 없는데 점프만드는쪽의
20:44 intoon: 훨씬 나아보이네요..
20:44 intoon: =End=

simple irc modding
boooooooooooooooom

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Beginner]
00:16:580 (1) - remove sliderwhistle? Fix
01:07:175 (1) - http://puu.sh/1dYNm too get it tight maybe? the music is quite strong and i think some kind of emphesis is needed. Sure. I fix that
01:51:283 (1) - no. the hitsounds is too quiet and i don't see the need to do so. I think too
In general, i think the sliders in this diff could be made in a more pretty way. Even it's an Easy i think you could put more effort on it. ;w;

[Basic]
00:01:013 (1,2,3) - glad to see you could use such organized beats. It could be made better if you place the notes according some kind of rules. now it seems a bit loose (i mean, make 1/2/3 looks more like "in a group") OK fix that
00:54:202 (1) - honestly, a bit ugly, you surely could think some better ways for a slider... Fix that
00:58:094 (3) - ^ ^
01:35:067 (5) - remove the reverse, and it shows a "stop" effect at the beats, i think this fit the music better. OK

[Frobe's Advanced]
00:07:499 (5,6) - why not 4 circles as before. Fix
00:11:067 (3) - remove a reverse and add a note at 00:11:391 ? I think that's for Finish
00:24:364 (1) - this part...i kinda doubt about it because music is not that 1/2 all the time, the 3/4s should be something you could consider, or use some 3/4+1/4 would also make it better imo. I can't dare to touch that o_o
01:01:985 (1) - for this part you should really look at the extreme diff for the note choices... notes are very obviously "3 in a group" (even in the jubeat game itself), but i don't have such feeling when playing this one. I fix that
The problem in this diff is... it looks not a map for this song. Or say this is something i don't like. D:

[Extreme]
00:11:715 (1) - maybe 0.75x would be already enough. too short sliders looks not that good imo. OK I use 0.75x sv
00:12:850 - add a note? I think that's not good
00:24:364 (1) - 6*3/4 sliders in a row just makes this exciting part in a boring way. try to use various of way in this part, based on the main beats. That's good idea. but I follow main beat now.
01:00:040 (3,4) - move right a bit so the spacing looks more comfortable. Fix
01:07:175 (1) - the idea here expressed kinda enough, but i thnk you could do more at the "skill" part. (for example: use 1.2x, make the direction change a bit, larger the spacing http://puu.sh/1dZa4) sure i try make large spacing
01:20:148 (1,2,1,2) - still, i like the idea you showed, but don't you feel after you stress those "parts", as a whole they are a bit separated? though it may be a too much task for new mappers but still want to mention it here. I consider that, but not now.

-Kirito wrote:

안녕하세용.
#korea에서 부탁하셨습니당.
(조언을 별로 하지 못 해서 ㅈㅅ합니당.. )

[Beginner]
01:48:364 - Combo Add? Fix

[Basic]
00:25:661 (4) - NC? nope
00:28:256 (4) - NC? ^
00:42:526 (3) - NC? Fix
01:09:769 (1,1,1,1) - 흰색선에 맞춰보는게 어떠신지? 컨셉..
01:10:742 (2,2,2,2) - Combo Add? nope
01:39:607 (3) - NC? ^

[Frobe's Advanced]
01:31:175 (2) - NC? OK
01:36:364 (2) - NC? ^
01:39:607 (3) - NC? ^
01:47:067 (1) - NC? no

[Extreme]
00:05:877 - Combo Add? 아니되오!
00:08:472 - ^? ^
완벽한 난이도...

닭빵님 이 맵 좋아욧! 빨리 랭크되시길!! 헉 감사해요!

HelloSCV wrote:

IRC

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19:34 Dark Fang: 브레이크타임 매꿧는데 혹시 그부분만 모딩 가능하신가요?
19:34 HelloSCV: 넹
19:35 *Dark Fang is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/150494 Tatsh - HEAVENLY MOON [Frobe's Advanced]]
19:35 Dark Fang: 00:11:715 -
19:35 Dark Fang: ~ 00:21:445 -
19:38 HelloSCV: 박자 말인데
19:38 HelloSCV: 00:17:229 (7) -
19:38 HelloSCV: 노트추가
19:38 HelloSCV: 00:18:202 (3,4) -
19:38 HelloSCV: 삭제
19:39 Dark Fang: 스레에도 irc 모딩 올려주시면 감사합니다
19:39 HelloSCV: 넹
19:39 HelloSCV: 00:18:850 (4) - 00:18:526 (3) -
19:39 HelloSCV: 추가?
19:39 HelloSCV: 아 물론 슬라이더로 하셔도 좋구요
19:39 HelloSCV: 00:19:175 (1) - 1/1 슬라이더로?
19:40 HelloSCV: 굳이 잡자면 이정도

모딩모딩

NoHitter wrote:

Rechecked and bubbled!
Good luck.

Garven wrote:

[Advanced]
00:21:769 (1) - End this at 00:23:634 -
00:45:121 - Maybe increase the volume a little bit? Kind of hard to hear
01:18:526 (5,1) - This is just cruel. Either add a beat between or making the spacing larger please.

Garven wrote:

Ahoy

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best I'll keep tick rate

[Easy]
00:24:364 (1) - This is really soon after a spinner for an Easy - especially one with such a low star rating. It might be best to map through it. fix
00:56:796 (1) - This slider could look better. The curve is a little sharp and uneven. I trim that note
01:07:175 (3,4) - This has high potential to be quite confusing for newer players. It's fairly fast and quite short with more than one repeat with a note one beat afterward. I recommend you rethink this. hmm.. fix. longer than now
01:51:283 - I think a crescendo (gradual increase in volume) would work great here instead of keeping it all at a low volume. OK fix

[Basic]
00:08:796 (1,4) - I recommend you either stick with 3-hit sliders or 5-hit sliders. This is like that short slider from the Easy - Even though this is a Normal you still want to keep things at least consistent with the harder techniques used for this tier of difficulty. hmm... well.. I fix 00:08:796 (1) - this note. but keeping (4)
00:18:850 (4) - Maybe delete considering how tranquil the melody line is here I delete that note
00:30:850 (3) - This flows better ctrl + h'd. If you do this, you'll have to ctrl + h pretty much everything up until 00:44:472 (3) - fix
00:59:391 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe instead of having straight 1/1 rhythms here during this calm bridge, have a more stagnant rhythm such as this? Fix. but I use other rhythm

01:38:310 (1) - Same suggestion at this part. Maybe a simpler and smoother rhythm to transition better. ^

[Taiko]
01:30:850 (1) - That's... kinda weird. Probably best to keep it all at the same SV. hm..ok fix
01:36:040 (2) - ^ ^

[Extreme]
HP drain is too high. It's too hard to recover health from a mistake. change HP drain
00:09:445 (4) - Way too close to 3. Increase that spacing please. ok
01:35:715 (1) - You'll need tick rate 2 for these sliders anyway. I'll keep tick rate

Garven wrote:

For the Insane, you must have tick rate 2 if you want those .5x sliders.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:24:364 (1) - This is still soon after the spinner. Maybe adding a circle at 00:21:769 - and 00:23:067 - will work better I use circle instead spinner. I won't add circle at 00:23:067 - (if that have problem. I'll fix)

[Basic]
01:51:283 - You should apply that same crescendo you did in Beginner here (and the Taiko and Extreme) fix at Basic, Extreme.cuz lower sound is unplayable at taiko.

Wreath wrote:

랭크 화이팅!! >ㅅ</

☆～

Melophobia wrote:

[Extream]
01:08:472 (5) - This note cannot be muted, move green line to 01:08:553 - Fix
01:08:553 (1) - Since spinner end doesnt follow anything, it would be better to remove finish. also use soft sampleset instead. OK I use soft sampleset.
01:30:526 (1) - Better to use 0.75x instead. this is pretty confusing imo not only because change of slider speed is sudden but because 0.5x looks the same as 1.0x sliders. anyway it's fitting very well with the song so it's up to you. hm.. keeping now
01:35:715 (1) - ^ ^

[Adcanced]
00:51:445 - Since there's an extra bass drum in this section, add a note here? add note :3
01:08:472 (1) - Since spinner end doesnt follow anything, it would be better to remove finish. also use soft sampleset instead. same as above
01:48:364 (5,6,7,8) - Change them into a kick slider? there's no long stream like this elsewhere so it's much harder than the rest of difficulty~ Fix ~

[Basic]
00:21:769 (1) - This spinner is too loud compared with other diffs. try to mute it OK

[Beginner]
00:13:985 (3) - This combo is kinda long, so how about adding newcombo here? OK add newcombo
00:37:337 (1,2,3) - Considering that This difficulty is based on 1/1 of whitetick, This is too hard for beginners imo, change them into a slider or at least change (2,3) to a slider. hm.. keeping now.
00:41:229 (2,3) - for the same reason as above, CTRL+G for better rhythm and adjust placement. there wont be much difference but it will be much easier for beginners to get 300 well.. Fix that

Nice first map. Fix whatever you want and call me back for a recheck

Melophobia wrote:

Rechecked via IRC, and we added a spinner in the Beginner diff and fixed some minor stuff. And now everything looks fine to me! great first map :3

log

21:46 Melophobia: Hello :3
21:46 Dark Fang: Hello
21:46 Melophobia: i would like to ask you a quiestion before rechecking
21:47 Melophobia: there's no spinner in Beginner diff, but i think it would be best if you could find a way to add one
21:47 Melophobia: what do you think?
21:47 Dark Fang: hm...
21:48 Dark Fang: OK I will add spinner in Beginner diff
21:48 Melophobia: Thanks :3
21:48 Melophobia: i will rebubble after rechecking
21:48 Melophobia: i think Garven will do the rest
21:48 Dark Fang: i think too
21:57 Melophobia: sorry, i would like to recheck via irc now
21:57 Melophobia: do you have some time to do?
21:57 Dark Fang: OK
21:58 Melophobia: in Extreme
21:58 Melophobia: 00:21:769 (4) - Finish is too loud, whistle is better imo
22:00 Melophobia: in Basic
22:00 Melophobia: 00:01:013 (1) - Finish
22:00 Melophobia: 00:06:202 (1) - ^
22:01 Melophobia: everything else looks fine now, i will recheck again after fixes
22:02 Dark Fang: OK all fix
22:02 Melophobia: update please :3
22:02 Dark Fang: upload ~.
22:03 Dark Fang: wut.. I got an error
22:03 Dark Fang: stopping at 22.2%
22:03 Melophobia: maybe restart osu!?
22:03 Dark Fang: OK
22:03 Melophobia: i have gotten it once
22:03 Melophobia: yeah
22:04 Dark Fang: Finish ~
22:04 Melophobia: ok!
22:04 Dark Fang: btw I really thank you ~ :3
22:04 Melophobia: my pleasure :3
22:05 Melophobia: ah
22:05 Melophobia: 00:21:769 (1) -
22:05 Melophobia: need to be muted
22:05 Melophobia: in Beginner
22:05 Dark Fang: oh
22:06 Dark Fang: update ~ thank you for checking sound xD
22:06 Melophobia: hm
22:07 Melophobia: i think the following notes appear too suddenly
22:07 Melophobia: considering the level of this difficulty
22:07 Melophobia: i mean 00:24:364 (1) -
22:08 Dark Fang: Can I replace near by spinner?
22:08 Melophobia: nah just uneasy about recovery time
22:08 Melophobia: maybe
22:08 Melophobia: end the spinner at 00:23:067 - instead?
22:09 Dark Fang: hmm.. that's great
22:09 Melophobia: update it once again please
22:10 Dark Fang: update
22:11 Melophobia: ok

Rebubbled!
Enjoy my first bubble

W h i t e wrote:

congratz~ :3

haha5957 wrote:

앗 다큰빵님 다컸잖아 ㅊㅋㅊㅋ