Yay more hard 4k maps!
Random mod ??? I see that it's already bubbled, but I think it just needs a bit more polish (and metadata error).
If you disagree with anything it would help to state why, just to help me get better at doing this.
Columns: |1|2|3|4|
Column number enclosed in bracket indicates a chord:
for example, [14] would mean a chord on the first and fourth columns
[General]
- Artist name should be orangentle / Yu_Asahina as you are following the SDVX version (in difficulty naming and mp3). SDVX version is a different arrangement from BMS. It's in the tags but the artist is listed as above in the game, so change it to that
- Remember that SDVX effects only add background sounds, you can use the BMS version as a reference to any rhythms that are hard to hear
[INF]
00:08:163 (8163|3,8251|3,9559|0,9646|0) - I'm not seeing any audio cues these minijacks are going to, they feel random to me (unless there's something that I don't hear) It'd also play better if this whole section flowed smoothly without minijacks since this is the intro.
00:12:873 (12873|2,12873|0,12960|1,12960|3,13047|2,13047|0,13134|3,13134|1,13221|0,13221|2,13309|3,13309|1,13396|1,13396|3,13483|1,13483|3) - [14][23] based pattern would flow better in this case, something like this
http://puu.sh/acsvB.png00:13:832 (13832|2,13919|3,15315|2,15402|1) - missing notes to piano here? looks like you're ignoring the piano in this section idk
00:17:495 - ^
00:18:105 - ^
00:19:501 - ^
00:21:245 - ^
00:24:733 - ^
00:33:541 (33541|1) - minijack here feels a bit forced and doesn't go to any sounds in the song. change the pattern?
00:35:460 - add note to percussion here
00:41:303 - i think you can add a 1/8 burst here, like 4321[34] with [34] being what 00:41:477 (41477|2,41477|1,41477|3) - is now
00:42:785 - add note to piano
01:00:198 (60198|1,60460|0,60721|1,60983|3) - remove, there's no piano notes here
00:12:873 (12873|2) - add note to piano
01:13:309 - add note to bass kick
01:13:396 - this burst is 1/8, not 1/6
01:18:163 (78163|1,78221|2) - this is 1/4 here, the 1/6 is before the downbeat
01:21:158 - add note to piano
01:23:599 - add note to bass kick
01:25:169 (85169|3,85256|3,85344|1,85431|1) - Stuff like this at this density is needlessly hard to hit. Try to avoid making these anchors in anything fast. Generally for bursts like this it's best to make them a roll-type pattern (like 1234 21 4321 or 1234 12 4321) so they flow better and better emphasize the fast piano notes since your fingers move quickly from column to column.
01:25:866 (85866|0,85953|0,86041|2,86128|2) - ^
01:26:565 (86565|3,86652|3,86739|1,86826|1) - ^
01:33:047 (93047|1) - move to 1
01:33:105 (93105|0,93105|3) - start this section with a double on [34] so it flows smoothly to each hand
01:33:134 (93134|2,93163|1) - shift one column left
01:33:512 (93512|3) - move to 1
01:33:570 (93570|0) - move to 4
01:33:599 (93599|1,93628|2,93658|3) - move one column left
01:33:687 (93687|0) - move to 4
01:33:716 (93716|1) - move to 1
01:33:745 (93745|3) - move to 2
01:33:803 (93803|1) - move 2 columns right
01:34:355 (94355|3) - move to 3
01:34:442 (94442|2) - move to 1
01:34:501 (94501|0) - move to 3
01:34:530 (94530|2,94559|1) - move 1 column left
01:34:908 (94908|3) - move to 1
01:34:966 (94966|0) - move to 4
01:34:995 (94995|1,95024|2,95053|3) - move 1 column left
01:35:082 (95082|0) - move to 4
01:35:140 (95140|3) - move to 1
01:35:198 (95198|1) - move to 4
01:35:285 (95285|2,95373|1) - ctrl+h this so it's a better transition out of the 1/12 rolls
01:41:128 (101128|1,101194|2) - ctrl+h
01:41:390 (101390|1,101434|2,101499|1,101586|2) - ctrl+h
01:42:589 (102589|1) - move to 1
01:42:655 (102655|0) - move to 2
01:42:655 (102655|0) - move to 1
01:42:764 (102764|0,103636|2,103658|1,103701|2,103767|1,103832|2,103854|1,103897|2) - ctrl+h
01:42:764 (102764|3) - move to 1
01:43:134 (103134|3) - move to 3
01:43:265 (103265|2,103352|1) - move one column right
01:46:666 (106666|2,106768|2) - as i said before, try to avoid hidden minijacks like this at all costs. you can fix this by simply ctrl+h on 01:46:768 (106768|2,106826|1) -
only modded INF because lazy modder
please fix the artist name since it's (technically) incorrect right now
sorry if this pops the bubble, if bubble popped then i'll star this as soon as i get one