NicolArmarfi - Three Stars [Osu|CatchTheBeat]‬ · forum‬

jossieP

Joined May 2010

jossieP 2012-02-16T02:50:35+00:00

>3</

[Easy]

- please, think about this seriously. Increase the distance snap, your objects are overlaping on a bad way >: I know is an [Easy] diff but be honest, overlaped objects are moar confusing for newbies. Distance snap x1,0 is good enough, since your slider velocity is 0.8, now let me explain why use x1,0.
The distance snap is a multiplier of slider velocity. If you have 0.8 slider velocity, the current distance multiply by x0,8 then we have this overlaped objects.

00:02:171 (1) - whistle instead finish on start of slider is moar soft for ears >_<
00:03:567 (2) - this must be copy paste > ctrl+j, ctrl+h of 00:02:171 (1).
00:07:055 (3) - whistle on repeat
and suddenly there is no whistles o.o
00:09:846 (1) - whistle on end of slider
00:12:637 (2) - whistle on repeat of slider
00:28:683 (3) - whistle on start of slider, the whistle on end of slider feels lonely >:
00:38:500 (2) - improve slider shape? o: ↓↓↓

SPOILER

screen:

200,204,38500,2,0,B|96:192|72:92|116:20|216:12|272:48|256:156,1,400,0|4

00:43:732 (2) - overlaped by previous slider start, no finish on end of slider
00:47:570 (3) - whistle >v<

[Normal]

- now the objects are not so overlaped because of highest slider velocity, comparated from [Easy]

00:07:753 (4) - bad overlap with (2,3)
00:09:148 (1,2) - overlap >3<
00:26:241 (6) - start and end of slider are so close D:
00:44:081 (5) - xD please remove the whistle
00:46:872 (5) - ↑

[Collab]

00:02:869 (4) - why this object is here <_< it should be stacked with 00:02:520 (2,3)
00:44:081 (7) - please no whistle .w.
00:46:872 (1) - ↑ at star of slider

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-02-16T08:31:47+00:00

ikari_kyon wrote:
>3</ Ikarin ~ XD

[Easy]

- please, think about this seriously. Increase the distance snap, your objects are overlaping on a bad way >: I know is an [Easy] diff but be honest, overlaped objects are moar confusing for newbies. Distance snap x1,0 is good enough, since your slider velocity is 0.8, now let me explain why use x1,0. Fix ~
The distance snap is a multiplier of slider velocity. If you have 0.8 slider velocity, the current distance multiply by x0,8 then we have this overlaped objects.

00:02:171 (1) - whistle instead finish on start of slider is moar soft for ears >_< Fix~
00:03:567 (2) - this must be copy paste > ctrl+j, ctrl+h of 00:02:171 (1). err.. I never known that notes can copy.. @w@"
00:07:055 (3) - whistle on repeat Fix ~
and suddenly there is no whistles o.o ahaha.. Gomen >.<"
00:09:846 (1) - whistle on end of slider Fix ~
00:12:637 (2) - whistle on repeat of slider Fix ~
00:28:683 (3) - whistle on start of slider, the whistle on end of slider feels lonely >: Fix ~ >.<"
00:38:500 (2) - improve slider shape? o: ↓↓↓ Gomen.. I dunno which one is the code for that note .. ;_;
SPOILER
screen:
200,204,38500,2,0,B|96:192|72:92|116:20|216:12|272:48|256:156,1,400,0|4
00:43:732 (2) - overlaped by previous slider start, no finish on end of slider Fix? ><"
00:47:570 (3) - whistle >v< Fix~

[Normal]

- now the objects are not so overlaped because of highest slider velocity, comparated from [Easy] o.o"

00:07:753 (4) - bad overlap with (2,3) What??? I dunno overlap.. gomen.. ;_;
00:09:148 (1,2) - overlap >3< ^
00:26:241 (6) - start and end of slider are so close D: Fix ~
00:44:081 (5) - xD please remove the whistle Fix ~ =w=''
00:46:872 (5) - ↑ ^

[Collab]

00:02:869 (4) - why this object is here <_< it should be stacked with 00:02:520 (2,3) Fix ~
00:44:081 (7) - please no whistle .w. Fix ~ =w=''
00:46:872 (1) - ↑ at star of slider Fix ~ =w=''

Arigatou! Ikarin ~ XD Also for the Star!! >.<"

UPDATE!!

cmn_891127

1,308 posts

Joined July 2010

cmn_891127 2012-02-17T06:55:44+00:00

so beautiful song~

IRC-mod

14:29 <cmn_891127> : hi~
14:29 *cmn_891127 is listening to (NicolArmarfi - Three Stars)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43530]
something about video,skip~
14:45 <cmn_891127> : normal is veryyyyyy good...
14:46 <cmn_891127> : collab
14:46 <cmn_891127> : 00:22:055 (2,3,4,5) -
14:46 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
14:46 <cmn_891127> : the hitsound is so small
14:46 <cmn_891127> : maybe it is unrankable
14:46 <Shana Aisaka> : should i change? ><?
14:47 <cmn_891127> : i am not sure, you need to ask some m/bat
14:47 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
14:48 <Shana Aisaka> : okay >.<"
14:49 <cmn_891127> : 00:44:430 (1) - the tail of the slider is too loud for me
14:50 <cmn_891127> : 00:51:232 (3) - I think remove it will be better
14:51 <Shana Aisaka> : okay~
14:51 <cmn_891127> : that's all~
14:51 <cmn_891127> : I really loooooooooooooove this song~~

GO!GO! Bubble it~

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-02-17T07:02:24+00:00

cmn_891127 wrote:
so beautiful song~

IRC-mod
14:29 <cmn_891127> : hi~
14:29 *cmn_891127 is listening to (NicolArmarfi - Three Stars)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43530]
something about video,skip~
14:45 <cmn_891127> : normal is veryyyyyy good...
14:46 <cmn_891127> : collab
14:46 <cmn_891127> : 00:22:055 (2,3,4,5) -
14:46 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
14:46 <cmn_891127> : the hitsound is so small
14:46 <cmn_891127> : maybe it is unrankable
14:46 <Shana Aisaka> : should i change? ><?
14:47 <cmn_891127> : i am not sure, you need to ask some m/bat
14:47 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
14:48 <Shana Aisaka> : okay >.<"
14:49 <cmn_891127> : 00:44:430 (1) - the tail of the slider is too loud for me
14:50 <cmn_891127> : 00:51:232 (3) - I think remove it will be better
14:51 <Shana Aisaka> : okay~
14:51 <cmn_891127> : that's all~
14:51 <cmn_891127> : I really loooooooooooooove this song~~

GO!GO! Bubble it~

Arigatou ~ cmn_891127 >w<" also for the star

Asgard

639 posts

Joined June 2011

Asgard 2012-02-17T08:14:34+00:00

okay
IRC mod

SPOILER

15:49 <Asgard> : do you have time?
15:50 <Asgard> : o.o?
15:50 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o! sure :3
15:51 <Asgard> : hm.. IRC mod ok?
15:51 <Shana Aisaka> : lol.. >w<" Okay ~ ^^
15:51 <Shana Aisaka> : ah.. In Collab right now I'm editing >.<"
15:52 <Asgard> : hm.. easy first >,<
15:52 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~ ><"
15:52 <Asgard> : 00:11:939 (1) -
15:52 <Asgard> : remove NC
15:52 <Asgard> : and
15:52 <Asgard> : 00:14:730 (3) -
15:52 <Asgard> : here NC
15:52 <Asgard> : 00:16:125 (1) - remove NC
15:52 <Shana Aisaka> : Okay ~
15:53 <Asgard> : 00:17:520 (3) -
15:53 <Asgard> : NC
15:53 <Asgard> : 00:19:613 (1) - remove NC
15:54 <Asgard> : 00:21:009 (6) - NC
15:54 <Asgard> : 00:21:706 (1) - removeNC
15:55 <Asgard> : 00:30:078 (4) - move 148,264
15:55 <Asgard> : 00:30:826 (1) - 204,328
15:55 <Asgard> : 00:32:221 (2) - 344,260
15:56 <Asgard> : hm.. wait
15:56 <Shana Aisaka> : Okay~
15:57 <Asgard> : 00:33:617 (3) -
15:57 <Asgard> : remove
15:57 <Asgard> : and
15:57 <Asgard> : 00:32:221 (2) - 1 repeat
15:57 <Asgard> : 00:34:314 (3) - move 388,192
15:57 <Asgard> : 00:35:012 (4) -
15:57 <Asgard> : first slider point : 412,116
15:57 <Asgard> : 2th : 392,68
15:58 <Asgard> : 3th : 412,116
15:58 <Asgard> : i think this is more better
15:59 <Shana Aisaka> : @w@''
15:59 <Asgard> : 00:38:500 (2) - ugly slider

15:59 <Asgard> : wait i fixing
15:59 <Shana Aisaka> : lol >.<"
16:05 <Asgard> : ok
16:06 <Asgard> : 1th 156,136
16:06 <Asgard> : 135,99
16:06 <Asgard> : no
16:06 <Asgard> : wait.
16:06 <Shana Aisaka> : lol.. ><"
16:07 <Asgard> : 212,256
16:07 <Asgard> : 176,236
16:07 <Asgard> : 144,176
16:07 <Asgard> : 176,116
16:07 <Asgard> : 256,80
16:07 <Asgard> : 336,116
16:07 <Asgard> : 368,176
16:08 <Asgard> : 336,236
16:08 <Shana Aisaka> : wow.. so many? @@?
16:08 <Asgard> : 330,256
16:08 <Asgard> : and reverse
16:08 <Asgard> : rotate -90
16:08 <Shana Aisaka> : I think i can't understand ;_;
16:09 <Shana Aisaka> : could you show it to me? >w<?
16:09 <Asgard> : wait
16:09 <Asgard> : i'll give code
16:10 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
16:10 <Asgard> : 168,228,38500,2,0,B|60:212|8:124|68:44|172:36|256:60|224:196|224:196,1,400,0|4
16:10 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/heD7
16:11 <Shana Aisaka> : hmm... how did you know that is the code? o.o?
16:11 <Asgard> : open osu file
16:11 <Asgard> : and.. find offset
16:11 <Asgard> : 38500
16:13 <Asgard> : hm..
16:13 <Asgard> : fix this?
16:13 <Shana Aisaka> : wait..
16:13 <Asgard> : hm..
16:13 <Asgard> : follow me
16:13 <Asgard> : just make slider
16:13 <Asgard> : anywhere
16:14 <Asgard> : and move fist slider point : 156,136
16:14 <Asgard> : and ctrl+click in slider line
16:14 <Shana Aisaka> : I think i found the code.. (lol)
16:14 <Asgard> : hm.
16:14 <Asgard> : okay
16:15 <Shana Aisaka> : i have replace it but still look the same @w@"
16:15 <Asgard> : hm..
16:16 <Asgard> : exit edit
16:16 <Asgard> : but still open osu file
16:16 <Asgard> : and save
16:16 <Asgard> : so maybe it will be change
16:18 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
16:19 <Asgard> : fixed?
16:19 <Shana Aisaka> : wait.
16:20 <Shana Aisaka> : hmm...
16:20 <Asgard> : slider length missed.
16:20 <Asgard> : wait
16:21 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o
16:22 <Asgard> : ok
16:22 <Asgard> : i'll give X and Y
16:22 <Asgard> : so just follow
16:22 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
16:22 <Shana Aisaka> : wakatta ><"
16:23 <Asgard> : first slider point : 156,136
16:23 <Asgard> : 2th 136,96
16:23 <Asgard> : 3th 68,68
16:23 <Asgard> : 4th 0,96
16:23 <Asgard> : 5th -32,180
16:23 <Asgard> : 6th 0,264
16:23 <Asgard> : 7th 68,292
16:23 <Asgard> : 8th 136,264
16:23 <Asgard> : 9th 156,224
16:25 <Asgard> : not yet?
16:26 <Shana Aisaka> : hmm.. should i remake it? >.<?
16:26 <Asgard> : hm..
16:26 <Asgard> : ok
16:26 <Asgard> : so.. skip easy?
16:29 <Asgard> : ??
16:29 <Shana Aisaka> : okay i just upload it ~
16:29 <Shana Aisaka> : the easy's slider >.<"
16:30 <Asgard> : hmm....
16:30 <Shana Aisaka> : still ugly? XD
16:31 <Shana Aisaka> : >.<"
16:31 <Asgard> : actually something is starnge
16:31 <Shana Aisaka> : strange* XD
16:31 <Asgard> : oh missed
16:31 <Asgard> : hm.. okay
16:31 <Shana Aisaka> : >w<''
16:31 <Asgard> : so next normal
16:32 <Shana Aisaka> : so it's good? XD
16:32 <Shana Aisaka> : okay then ~
16:32 <Asgard> : 00:06:009 (1) -
16:32 <Asgard> : so far
16:32 <Shana Aisaka> : owh.. yeah ><"
16:33 <Asgard> : don't forgot fix distance next note
16:33 <Asgard> : 00:07:055 (2,3,4) - like this
16:33 <Shana Aisaka> : okay
16:34 <Shana Aisaka> : done :3
16:34 <Asgard> : 00:16:474 (7) -
16:34 <Asgard> : NC?
16:35 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
16:35 <Asgard> : 00:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti jump hard for beginner
16:35 <Shana Aisaka> : no good?
16:35 <Asgard> : yes
16:36 <Shana Aisaka> : I have already use distance snap >.<" still dame kana? ><"
16:37 <Asgard> : no that's good
16:37 <Asgard> : but you don't used copy and paste
16:37 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o??
16:37 <Asgard> : i always use symmetry because i can't make shape very well
16:37 <Shana Aisaka> : do i really need it? ><"
16:37 <Asgard> : if you can't make shape and pettern
16:37 <Asgard> : just use symmetry
16:38 <Asgard> : yes
16:38 <Asgard> : hmm wait
16:38 <Shana Aisaka> : o.O
16:38 *Asgard is listening to (Tainaka Sachi - Unmeibito)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43011]
16:38 <Asgard> : look this map
16:38 <Asgard> : there are very very many symmetry
16:38 <Shana Aisaka> : lol >.<"
16:40 <Asgard> : if you can use symmetry very well, you will be good mapper
16:40 <Asgard> : okay so.. keep going
16:41 <Shana Aisaka> : hmmm @@"
16:41 <Asgard> : hm..
16:41 <Shana Aisaka> : i will try >.<"
16:42 <Asgard> : i think you don't need KIAI time
16:42 <Shana Aisaka> : for my map? ;_;
16:42 <Asgard> : yes..
16:42 <Shana Aisaka> : i want it >.<"
16:42 <Shana Aisaka> : cause it looks great XD
16:43 <Asgard> : hm..
16:43 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o?
16:43 <Asgard> : i think rhythm is very good
16:44 <Shana Aisaka> : thanks >w<"
16:44 <Asgard> : but note pattern is some strange :<
16:45 <Shana Aisaka> : O.o
16:45 <Asgard> : 00:39:372 - i think break time is not good
16:46 <Shana Aisaka> : okay then ;_;
16:46 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/heKG
16:47 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
16:48 <Asgard> : ok collob
16:48 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
16:48 <Asgard> : try use symmetry when you make next beatmap
16:49 <Asgard> : 00:02:695 (3) - remove and
16:49 <Asgard> : add here 00:03:406
16:49 <Asgard> : 00:03:406 -
16:49 <Asgard> : 00:09:846 (1) -
16:49 <Asgard> : overlap
16:50 <Shana Aisaka> : what is overlap ;_;
16:50 <Asgard> : side
16:51 <Shana Aisaka> : side? o.o?
16:51 <Asgard> : try this
16:51 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/heLG
16:51 <Asgard> : 00:09:846 (1) - 168 216
16:51 <Asgard> : and 1 repeat
16:53 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:10:892 (1) - 148 344
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:11:241 (2) - 256 27
16:53 <Asgard> : 276*
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:11:590 (3) - 364 344
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:11:939 (4) - 344 216
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:12:288 (1) - 256 124
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:12:637 (2) - 168 216
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:12:985 (3) - 344 216
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:13:334 (4) - 256 276
16:53 <Asgard> : i think this is more better
16:56 <Asgard> : 00:26:067 (5) - remove and
16:56 <Asgard> : 00:26:765 - add here
16:57 <Asgard> : 00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not good pattern
16:59 <Shana Aisaka> : everything is change accept ^
16:59 <Shana Aisaka> : so how should i do? o.o?
17:00 <Asgard> : hmm..
17:00 <Asgard> : well.. i can say 1 thing. just use symmetry
17:00 <Asgard> : um
17:01 <Shana Aisaka> : O.o''
17:02 <Shana Aisaka> : wait.
17:02 <Shana Aisaka> : I update first and try to look that pattern >.<"
17:03 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
17:03 <Shana Aisaka> : Update >w<"
17:05 <Asgard> : hmm..
17:05 <Shana Aisaka> : yes? ><?
17:05 <Shana Aisaka> : still dame ne? >.<"
17:06 <Asgard> : 00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - note good too

17:06 <Asgard> : like this
17:06 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/heOE
17:07 <Asgard> : make people can move easier
17:07 <Shana Aisaka> : lol
17:08 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
17:10 <Asgard> : maybe that's all
17:11 <Asgard> : oh and
17:11 <Asgard> : delete .osb file
17:11 <Asgard> : and full submit
17:11 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
17:11 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
17:11 <Asgard> : song setup - storyboarding - retterbox during breaks
17:11 <Asgard> : uncheck it

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-02-17T08:40:57+00:00

Asgard wrote:
okay
IRC mod
SPOILER
15:49 <Asgard> : do you have time?
15:50 <Asgard> : o.o?
15:50 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o! sure :3
15:51 <Asgard> : hm.. IRC mod ok?
15:51 <Shana Aisaka> : lol.. >w<" Okay ~ ^^
15:51 <Shana Aisaka> : ah.. In Collab right now I'm editing >.<"
15:52 <Asgard> : hm.. easy first >,<
15:52 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~ ><"
15:52 <Asgard> : 00:11:939 (1) -
15:52 <Asgard> : remove NC
15:52 <Asgard> : and
15:52 <Asgard> : 00:14:730 (3) -
15:52 <Asgard> : here NC
15:52 <Asgard> : 00:16:125 (1) - remove NC
15:52 <Shana Aisaka> : Okay ~
15:53 <Asgard> : 00:17:520 (3) -
15:53 <Asgard> : NC
15:53 <Asgard> : 00:19:613 (1) - remove NC
15:54 <Asgard> : 00:21:009 (6) - NC
15:54 <Asgard> : 00:21:706 (1) - removeNC
15:55 <Asgard> : 00:30:078 (4) - move 148,264
15:55 <Asgard> : 00:30:826 (1) - 204,328
15:55 <Asgard> : 00:32:221 (2) - 344,260
15:56 <Asgard> : hm.. wait
15:56 <Shana Aisaka> : Okay~
15:57 <Asgard> : 00:33:617 (3) -
15:57 <Asgard> : remove
15:57 <Asgard> : and
15:57 <Asgard> : 00:32:221 (2) - 1 repeat
15:57 <Asgard> : 00:34:314 (3) - move 388,192
15:57 <Asgard> : 00:35:012 (4) -
15:57 <Asgard> : first slider point : 412,116
15:57 <Asgard> : 2th : 392,68
15:58 <Asgard> : 3th : 412,116
15:58 <Asgard> : i think this is more better
15:59 <Shana Aisaka> : @w@''
15:59 <Asgard> : 00:38:500 (2) - ugly slider
15:59 <Asgard> : wait i fixing
15:59 <Shana Aisaka> : lol >.<"
16:05 <Asgard> : ok
16:06 <Asgard> : 1th 156,136
16:06 <Asgard> : 135,99
16:06 <Asgard> : no
16:06 <Asgard> : wait.
16:06 <Shana Aisaka> : lol.. ><"
16:07 <Asgard> : 212,256
16:07 <Asgard> : 176,236
16:07 <Asgard> : 144,176
16:07 <Asgard> : 176,116
16:07 <Asgard> : 256,80
16:07 <Asgard> : 336,116
16:07 <Asgard> : 368,176
16:08 <Asgard> : 336,236
16:08 <Shana Aisaka> : wow.. so many? @@?
16:08 <Asgard> : 330,256
16:08 <Asgard> : and reverse
16:08 <Asgard> : rotate -90
16:08 <Shana Aisaka> : I think i can't understand ;_;
16:09 <Shana Aisaka> : could you show it to me? >w<?
16:09 <Asgard> : wait
16:09 <Asgard> : i'll give code
16:10 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
16:10 <Asgard> : 168,228,38500,2,0,B|60:212|8:124|68:44|172:36|256:60|224:196|224:196,1,400,0|4
16:10 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/heD7
16:11 <Shana Aisaka> : hmm... how did you know that is the code? o.o?
16:11 <Asgard> : open osu file
16:11 <Asgard> : and.. find offset
16:11 <Asgard> : 38500
16:13 <Asgard> : hm..
16:13 <Asgard> : fix this?
16:13 <Shana Aisaka> : wait..
16:13 <Asgard> : hm..
16:13 <Asgard> : follow me
16:13 <Asgard> : just make slider
16:13 <Asgard> : anywhere
16:14 <Asgard> : and move fist slider point : 156,136
16:14 <Asgard> : and ctrl+click in slider line
16:14 <Shana Aisaka> : I think i found the code.. (lol)
16:14 <Asgard> : hm.
16:14 <Asgard> : okay
16:15 <Shana Aisaka> : i have replace it but still look the same @w@"
16:15 <Asgard> : hm..
16:16 <Asgard> : exit edit
16:16 <Asgard> : but still open osu file
16:16 <Asgard> : and save
16:16 <Asgard> : so maybe it will be change
16:18 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
16:19 <Asgard> : fixed?
16:19 <Shana Aisaka> : wait.
16:20 <Shana Aisaka> : hmm...
16:20 <Asgard> : slider length missed.
16:20 <Asgard> : wait
16:21 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o
16:22 <Asgard> : ok
16:22 <Asgard> : i'll give X and Y
16:22 <Asgard> : so just follow
16:22 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
16:22 <Shana Aisaka> : wakatta ><"
16:23 <Asgard> : first slider point : 156,136
16:23 <Asgard> : 2th 136,96
16:23 <Asgard> : 3th 68,68
16:23 <Asgard> : 4th 0,96
16:23 <Asgard> : 5th -32,180
16:23 <Asgard> : 6th 0,264
16:23 <Asgard> : 7th 68,292
16:23 <Asgard> : 8th 136,264
16:23 <Asgard> : 9th 156,224
16:25 <Asgard> : not yet?
16:26 <Shana Aisaka> : hmm.. should i remake it? >.<?
16:26 <Asgard> : hm..
16:26 <Asgard> : ok
16:26 <Asgard> : so.. skip easy?
16:29 <Asgard> : ??
16:29 <Shana Aisaka> : okay i just upload it ~
16:29 <Shana Aisaka> : the easy's slider >.<"
16:30 <Asgard> : hmm....
16:30 <Shana Aisaka> : still ugly? XD
16:31 <Shana Aisaka> : >.<"
16:31 <Asgard> : actually something is starnge
16:31 <Shana Aisaka> : strange* XD
16:31 <Asgard> : oh missed
16:31 <Asgard> : hm.. okay
16:31 <Shana Aisaka> : >w<''
16:31 <Asgard> : so next normal
16:32 <Shana Aisaka> : so it's good? XD
16:32 <Shana Aisaka> : okay then ~
16:32 <Asgard> : 00:06:009 (1) -
16:32 <Asgard> : so far
16:32 <Shana Aisaka> : owh.. yeah ><"
16:33 <Asgard> : don't forgot fix distance next note
16:33 <Asgard> : 00:07:055 (2,3,4) - like this
16:33 <Shana Aisaka> : okay
16:34 <Shana Aisaka> : done :3
16:34 <Asgard> : 00:16:474 (7) -
16:34 <Asgard> : NC?
16:35 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
16:35 <Asgard> : 00:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti jump hard for beginner
16:35 <Shana Aisaka> : no good?
16:35 <Asgard> : yes
16:36 <Shana Aisaka> : I have already use distance snap >.<" still dame kana? ><"
16:37 <Asgard> : no that's good
16:37 <Asgard> : but you don't used copy and paste
16:37 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o??
16:37 <Asgard> : i always use symmetry because i can't make shape very well
16:37 <Shana Aisaka> : do i really need it? ><"
16:37 <Asgard> : if you can't make shape and pettern
16:37 <Asgard> : just use symmetry
16:38 <Asgard> : yes
16:38 <Asgard> : hmm wait
16:38 <Shana Aisaka> : o.O
16:38 *Asgard is listening to (Tainaka Sachi - Unmeibito)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43011]
16:38 <Asgard> : look this map
16:38 <Asgard> : there are very very many symmetry
16:38 <Shana Aisaka> : lol >.<"
16:40 <Asgard> : if you can use symmetry very well, you will be good mapper
16:40 <Asgard> : okay so.. keep going
16:41 <Shana Aisaka> : hmmm @@"
16:41 <Asgard> : hm..
16:41 <Shana Aisaka> : i will try >.<"
16:42 <Asgard> : i think you don't need KIAI time
16:42 <Shana Aisaka> : for my map? ;_;
16:42 <Asgard> : yes..
16:42 <Shana Aisaka> : i want it >.<"
16:42 <Shana Aisaka> : cause it looks great XD
16:43 <Asgard> : hm..
16:43 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o?
16:43 <Asgard> : i think rhythm is very good
16:44 <Shana Aisaka> : thanks >w<"
16:44 <Asgard> : but note pattern is some strange :<
16:45 <Shana Aisaka> : O.o
16:45 <Asgard> : 00:39:372 - i think break time is not good
16:46 <Shana Aisaka> : okay then ;_;
16:46 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/heKG
16:47 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
16:48 <Asgard> : ok collob
16:48 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
16:48 <Asgard> : try use symmetry when you make next beatmap
16:49 <Asgard> : 00:02:695 (3) - remove and
16:49 <Asgard> : add here 00:03:406
16:49 <Asgard> : 00:03:406 -
16:49 <Asgard> : 00:09:846 (1) -
16:49 <Asgard> : overlap
16:50 <Shana Aisaka> : what is overlap ;_;
16:50 <Asgard> : side
16:51 <Shana Aisaka> : side? o.o?
16:51 <Asgard> : try this
16:51 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/heLG
16:51 <Asgard> : 00:09:846 (1) - 168 216
16:51 <Asgard> : and 1 repeat
16:53 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:10:892 (1) - 148 344
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:11:241 (2) - 256 27
16:53 <Asgard> : 276*
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:11:590 (3) - 364 344
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:11:939 (4) - 344 216
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:12:288 (1) - 256 124
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:12:637 (2) - 168 216
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:12:985 (3) - 344 216
16:53 <Asgard> : 00:13:334 (4) - 256 276
16:53 <Asgard> : i think this is more better
16:56 <Asgard> : 00:26:067 (5) - remove and
16:56 <Asgard> : 00:26:765 - add here
16:57 <Asgard> : 00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not good pattern
16:59 <Shana Aisaka> : everything is change accept ^
16:59 <Shana Aisaka> : so how should i do? o.o?
17:00 <Asgard> : hmm..
17:00 <Asgard> : well.. i can say 1 thing. just use symmetry
17:00 <Asgard> : um
17:01 <Shana Aisaka> : O.o''
17:02 <Shana Aisaka> : wait.
17:02 <Shana Aisaka> : I update first and try to look that pattern >.<"
17:03 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
17:03 <Shana Aisaka> : Update >w<"
17:05 <Asgard> : hmm..
17:05 <Shana Aisaka> : yes? ><?
17:05 <Shana Aisaka> : still dame ne? >.<"
17:06 <Asgard> : 00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - note good too
17:06 <Asgard> : like this
17:06 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/heOE
17:07 <Asgard> : make people can move easier
17:07 <Shana Aisaka> : lol
17:08 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
17:10 <Asgard> : maybe that's all
17:11 <Asgard> : oh and
17:11 <Asgard> : delete .osb file
17:11 <Asgard> : and full submit
17:11 <Shana Aisaka> : o.o''
17:11 <Shana Aisaka> : okay ~
17:11 <Asgard> : song setup - storyboarding - retterbox during breaks
17:11 <Asgard> : uncheck it

Arigatou Asgard!! >w<"

Okay ! After all the discussion about my map, and all is FIXED!! >w<"
UPDATE!!

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-02-17T13:33:56+00:00

Hi

Easy
00:21:009 (4) - new combo?
00:27:288 (1) - move to x:104 y:36 ? I think overlap with 00:24:497 (1) - is not good may be

00:27:288 (1) - remove new combo ?
00:30:826 (1,2,3,4) - try using same slider and use ctlr+< and ctrl+r I think it's better

00:36:407 (5) - spacing
00:41:988 (3) - you should new combo at the start of kiai time

00:42:686 (1) - remove new combo it if you did ^

Normal
I think you should add more whistle on single note , it can make better sound

for example : 00:03:218 (2,3,4) - , 00:03:218 (2,3,4) - at the start of the slider , 00:15:427 (4,6) - , 00:18:916 (1) - , around this :3
00:31:523 (1) - new combo here

Collab
00:08:102 (2) - up 1 grid look better

00:09:497 (4) - left 3 grid ^
00:19:265 (1) - not overlap with 3 is better :3
00:44:430 (1) - in my opinion , this is very near the last note

good luck

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2012-02-17T13:45:19+00:00

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
I think that sliders can pull much pretty , you can refer other's map .

[Normal]
00:30:826 (3) - add NC ?!
00:33:267 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) add NC ?!
00:37:453 (5,6,1) - (5) 1 grid left , 1 grid up , (6) 1 grid left , add NC and removed (1) NC !? like this http://puu.sh/hfK7

452,96,37453,1,0
400,60,37802,5,2

[Collab]
00:23:451 (6,1) - (6) add NC and remove (1) NC ?!
00:36:058 (6) - add NC ?!
00:43:384 (8) - add NC ?!
00:50:012 (9,1) - (9) remove NC and (1) add NC ?!

sorry to my poor English
good song~

and expect it to be ranked.
[Easy] I think it is ok beacaus I can't find any suggestion

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-02-18T02:33:57+00:00

Frostmourne wrote this ~

Frostmourne wrote:
Hi Hi ~ >w<"

Easy
00:21:009 (4) - new combo? Fix ~
00:27:288 (1) - move to x:104 y:36 ? I think overlap with 00:24:497 (1) - is not good may be Fix?
00:27:288 (1) - remove new combo ? Fix ~
00:30:826 (1,2,3,4) - try using same slider and use ctlr+< and ctrl+r I think it's better hmm.. Fix??
00:36:407 (5) - spacing Fix ~
00:41:988 (3) - you should new combo at the start of kiai time Okay ~ Fix ~
00:42:686 (1) - remove new combo it if you did ^ Fix ~

Normal
I think you should add more whistle on single note , it can make better sound
for example : 00:03:218 (2,3,4) - , 00:03:218 (2,3,4) - at the start of the slider , 00:15:427 (4,6) - , 00:18:916 (1) - , around this :3
00:31:523 (1) - new combo here Fix ~

Collab
00:08:102 (2) - up 1 grid look better Fix ~
00:09:497 (4) - left 3 grid ^ Fix ~
00:19:265 (1) - not overlap with 3 is better :3 okay ~ Fix~
00:44:430 (1) - in my opinion , this is very near the last note Yeah, Fix ~

good luck Thanks.

Thank you !! >w<"

l1106188 wrote this ~

l1106188 wrote:
Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it . This mod is helpful ~ >w<"

[General]
I think that sliders can pull much pretty , you can refer other's map . @w@"

[Normal]
00:30:826 (3) - add NC ?! Okay ~
00:33:267 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) add NC ?! Fix ~
00:37:453 (5,6,1) - (5) 1 grid left , 1 grid up , (6) 1 grid left , add NC and removed (1) NC !? like this http://puu.sh/hfK7 Fix ~
452,96,37453,1,0
400,60,37802,5,2
[Collab]
00:23:451 (6,1) - (6) add NC and remove (1) NC ?! Fix ~
00:36:058 (6) - add NC ?! Fix ~
00:43:384 (8) - add NC ?! Fix ~
00:50:012 (9,1) - (9) remove NC and (1) add NC ?! Fix ~

sorry to my poor English
good song~
and expect it to be ranked. Thanks ! >w<"
[Easy] I think it is ok beacaus I can't find any suggestion

Arigatou!

Okay! All is Fixed!!

UPDATE!!

hillaryzx

363 posts

Joined October 2010

hillaryzx 2012-02-18T09:00:44+00:00

Hi~ my mod for this map~(but short... T.T)
Nyan.... :3

General

- disabke letterbox in break to all diff....

Easy

AR -1

Normal

00:23:799 - add a circle here?
00:40:244 - add a note here..

Collab

Seems good...

Now, I'll give star and take my leave....

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-02-18T09:20:51+00:00

hillaryzx wrote:
Hi~ my mod for this map~(but short... T.T)
Nyan.... :3 Nyaan !! >w<"

General

- disabke letterbox in break to all diff.... Opps ~ I forgot about that . >.<" Fix ~

Easy

AR -1 okay ~

Normal

00:23:799 - add a circle here? Nice idea~
00:40:244 - add a note here.. okay ~ >w<"

Collab

Seems good... Arigatou

Now, I'll give star and take my leave....

Arigatou hillaryzx-kun ~ and for the star as well >w<"

Alright! Fixed!!

UPDATE!!

LaceWingfield

392 posts

Joined October 2010

LaceWingfield 2012-02-19T03:27:30+00:00

hi ~
mod request via in-game PM~

[Easy]
00:12:637 (4): 1 grid up seems better?
00:16:823 (4,1): 1 grid right?
00:32:221 (2): 1 grid left?
00:35:112 (4,5): 1 grid right?

[Normal]
00:07:753 (4): 1 grid left?

[Collab]
00:03:218 (4~6): spacing is different from the earlier notes.
00:13:382 (4): like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/246280
00:25:544 (4): spacing
00:27:985 (3): 2 grid up, 1 grid right?
00:32:570 (6): 1 grid down?
00:36:058 (1): spacing
00:50:709 (3): 1 grid right

nice map overall!
have star >w<~

Niva

Global Moderator

3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2012-02-19T04:18:22+00:00

Hi, Shana Aisaka~
I'm here for mod4mod again, if you don't mind >_<

[General]

-> I wonder, the song is only 00:57, and downloading with the video only costs ~3MB, so why not use a 192kbps audio instead (if any)? It won't greatly affect file size, but greatly affect sound quality :3
-> As this song is actually a sad-paced one, you might want to add a silver (or gold) slider border. Open the .osu file manually, and add these codes below "Combo4 : 0,128,255":

Silver:
SliderBorder : 211,211,211

Gold:
SliderBorder : 254,239,114

This is fully optional, though.
-> Another thing worth mentioning is a new timing section should be placed on 00:14:730 with 85.90 BPM. Yep, the piano gets slower there, and keep using 86.00 there will result in an incorrect timing.
-> Oh, and Nicol Armarfi to the tags, just in case.

[Easy]

00:02:171 (1,2,1,2,3) - I don't quite get your whistle pattern here, although they sounds fine. The piano hits high note every 2/1, so in my opinion, it's better to keep the whistling consistent at 2/1 here
00:07:055 (3) - Definitely moved way too up imo. Move it ~5 grids down and right, and it will flow better with the previous (2) (:
00:12:637 (4,1,2,3) - (optional) Although it's not a thing you must do, but it's better to arrange them in an arc like below, to build up more flow and avoid (2) touching the next (4):
SPOILER
00:21:009 (1) - (optional) This one also, consider moving this few grids up to prevent touching 00:20:311 (3)
00:24:497 (1,3) - Woah, ugly overlap imo. Just be creative with your slider shapes though - this won't be hard to fix xD
SPOILER
Also whistle on (1)'s end, if you want to (:
00:32:221 (2) - (optional) You could easily make a blanket pattern as you did on 00:33:616 (3,4) with (2)'s end being stacked to (6) though, it will play more beautiful imo :3
00:46:174 (4) - Whistle here on slider's start. I highly recommend this, the piano here needs a hitsound companion :3
00:48:267 (1,2) - Is it intentional you curve the slider this way? Because this is a 2/1 slider, the red waypoint is much better if placed on the second slider tick, for example:
SPOILER
00:51:756 (3) - (optional) Stack below (2) better for the ending imo

[Normal]

00:04:962 (5,1) - It would fit the piano more if (5) is extended by 1/2 while (1) is shortened by 1/2
00:09:148 (1) - Hmm, is this note really required? It doesn't follow anything in the music as I can hear. Also, this is just a Normal diff, don't let here be too hectic >_<
00:14:381 (3) - Whistle on slider's end to keep your whistle pattern here?
00:15:427 (4,5,6,1) - Sudden 90° linear slider here breaks your flow imo. The simplest thing you can do here, without altering your slider too much but still flowy, perhaps:
SPOILER
00:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why no whistle at all >_< At least one whistle should be here imo, either it's in (3) or (5) - I suggest (3) more though, because it's the downbeat
00:35:360 (5,1) - Sudden spacing change here. Is it intentional?
00:38:500 (3) - (optional) Curve it to the opposite direction (downward) to avoid touching (5)? (slider wave also plays beautiful here)
00:44:081 (5) - Normal hitfinish feels too explosive for the song imo. What's more, if you want to keep the normal hitfinish, they should've been placed in the downbeat instead.
00:46:872 (5) - Same as above
00:49:663 (4) - Rigid linear slider like this is very unfitting for the ending. Why not a bezier curve instead? At the picture below, you can see that (5)'s approachcircle could be used to guide you here:
SPOILER

[Collab]

00:03:218 (4,5,6) - I highly recommend to add whistle on either 4 or 6, else it will be too empty here
00:05:485 (2,4) - (optional) You can move (2) downward and (4) upward so this part won't be too linear and to increase the flow
00:09:497 (4) - Already tested, there's a note 1/8 after this from the music. Not something you have to add, though :3
00:09:846 (1) - Do you really need the new combo here? Also, (optional) make this encircle (4)?
00:13:683 (5) - To avoid such overlapping with (2), I suggest to arrange (5) like below:
SPOILER
00:23:799 (2) - (optional) Encircle (5)? Plays better than just a straight slider imo
00:24:497 (3,4) - Unexpected spacing change (well, I bet it's unintentional though)
00:32:221 (5,6,7) - I think it's better if you keep with symmetry here to make this part looks less random, for example:
SPOILER
00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 1/4 stream spam in a relaxing piano song orz... Do you really need this much >_< - Triples are okay to use in this song imo, but this one... orz
00:46:872 (1) - Same as [Normal], normal hitfinish is too explosive imo. (also those downbeat stuff)
00:50:709 (3,4) - (optional) I think it would be nice if there's a little jump on the ending, for example:
SPOILER

Oh, and one more stuff, you don't need awkward kiai position like that (although it's usable), short kiais plays better imo here.

Much neater and better than your Aoi Hana map~
My map's link is at your queue. Star ^^

KuronumaSawako

471 posts

Joined March 2011

KuronumaSawako 2012-02-19T04:56:59+00:00

Niva wrote:
SPOILER
Hi, Shana Aisaka~
I'm here for mod4mod again, if you don't mind >_<

[General]

-> I wonder, the song is only 00:57, and downloading with the video only costs ~3MB, so why not use a 192kbps audio instead (if any)? It won't greatly affect file size, but greatly affect sound quality :3
-> As this song is actually a sad-paced one, you might want to add a silver (or gold) slider border. Open the .osu file manually, and add these codes below "Combo4 : 0,128,255":
Silver:
SliderBorder : 211,211,211

Gold:
SliderBorder : 254,239,114
This is fully optional, though.
-> Another thing worth mentioning is a new timing section should be placed on 00:14:730 with 85.90 BPM. Yep, the piano gets slower there, and keep using 86.00 there will result in an incorrect timing.
-> Oh, and Nicol Armarfi to the tags, just in case.

[Easy]

00:02:171 (1,2,1,2,3) - I don't quite get your whistle pattern here, although they sounds fine. The piano hits high note every 2/1, so in my opinion, it's better to keep the whistling consistent at 2/1 here
00:07:055 (3) - Definitely moved way too up imo. Move it ~5 grids down and right, and it will flow better with the previous (2) (:
00:12:637 (4,1,2,3) - (optional) Although it's not a thing you must do, but it's better to arrange them in an arc like below, to build up more flow and avoid (2) touching the next (4):
00:21:009 (1) - (optional) This one also, consider moving this few grids up to prevent touching 00:20:311 (3)
00:24:497 (1,3) - Woah, ugly overlap imo. Just be creative with your slider shapes though - this won't be hard to fix xD

Also whistle on (1)'s end, if you want to (:
00:32:221 (2) - (optional) You could easily make a blanket pattern as you did on 00:33:616 (3,4) with (2)'s end being stacked to (6) though, it will play more beautiful imo :3
00:46:174 (4) - Whistle here on slider's start. I highly recommend this, the piano here needs a hitsound companion :3
00:48:267 (1,2) - Is it intentional you curve the slider this way? Because this is a 2/1 slider, the red waypoint is much better if placed on the second slider tick, for example:
00:51:756 (3) - (optional) Stack below (2) better for the ending imo
[Normal]

00:04:962 (5,1) - It would fit the piano more if (5) is extended by 1/2 while (1) is shortened by 1/2
00:09:148 (1) - Hmm, is this note really required? It doesn't follow anything in the music as I can hear. Also, this is just a Normal diff, don't let here be too hectic >_<
00:14:381 (3) - Whistle on slider's end to keep your whistle pattern here?
00:15:427 (4,5,6,1) - Sudden 90° linear slider here breaks your flow imo. The simplest thing you can do here, without altering your slider too much but still flowy, perhaps:
00:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why no whistle at all >_< At least one whistle should be here imo, either it's in (3) or (5) - I suggest (3) more though, because it's the downbeat
00:35:360 (5,1) - Sudden spacing change here. Is it intentional?
00:38:500 (3) - (optional) Curve it to the opposite direction (downward) to avoid touching (5)? (slider wave also plays beautiful here)
00:44:081 (5) - Normal hitfinish feels too explosive for the song imo. What's more, if you want to keep the normal hitfinish, they should've been placed in the downbeat instead.
00:46:872 (5) - Same as above
00:49:663 (4) - Rigid linear slider like this is very unfitting for the ending. Why not a bezier curve instead? At the picture below, you can see that (5)'s approachcircle could be used to guide you here:
[Collab]

00:03:218 (4,5,6) - I highly recommend to add whistle on either 4 or 6, else it will be too empty here
00:05:485 (2,4) - (optional) You can move (2) downward and (4) upward so this part won't be too linear and to increase the flow
00:09:497 (4) - Already tested, there's a note 1/8 after this from the music. Not something you have to add, though :3
00:09:846 (1) - Do you really need the new combo here? Also, (optional) make this encircle (4)?
00:13:683 (5) - To avoid such overlapping with (2), I suggest to arrange (5) like below:
00:23:799 (2) - (optional) Encircle (5)? Plays better than just a straight slider imo
00:24:497 (3,4) - Unexpected spacing change (well, I bet it's unintentional though)
00:32:221 (5,6,7) - I think it's better if you keep with symmetry here to make this part looks less random, for example:
00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 1/4 stream spam in a relaxing piano song orz... Do you really need this much >_< - Triples are okay to use in this song imo, but this one... orz
00:46:872 (1) - Same as [Normal], normal hitfinish is too explosive imo. (also those downbeat stuff)
00:50:709 (3,4) - (optional) I think it would be nice if there's a little jump on the ending, for example:
Oh, and one more stuff, you don't need awkward kiai position like that (although it's usable), short kiais plays better imo here.

Much neater and better than your Aoi Hana map~
My map's link is at your queue. Star ^^

Niva mod so pro

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-02-19T05:06:31+00:00

KuronumaSawako wrote:
Niva mod so pro

lol ~ yeah >.<"
I'll do my best !

Edit :

LaceWingfield wrote this ~

LaceWingfield wrote:
hi ~
mod request via in-game PM~

[Easy]
00:12:637 (4): 1 grid up seems better?
00:16:823 (4,1): 1 grid right?
00:32:221 (2): 1 grid left?
00:35:112 (4,5): 1 grid right?

[Normal]
00:07:753 (4): 1 grid left? ok ~

[Collab]
00:03:218 (4~6): spacing is different from the earlier notes. fix ~
00:13:382 (4): like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/246280
00:25:544 (4): spacing Fix~
00:27:985 (3): 2 grid up, 1 grid right?
00:32:570 (6): 1 grid down?
00:36:058 (1): spacing Fix ~
00:50:709 (3): 1 grid right

nice map overall! Arigatou!
have star >w<~

Thank you Lace!! >w<" also for the star!!

Niva wrote this ~

Niva wrote:
Hi, Shana Aisaka~
I'm here for mod4mod again, if you don't mind >_<

[General]

-> I wonder, the song is only 00:57, and downloading with the video only costs ~3MB, so why not use a 192kbps audio instead (if any)? It won't greatly affect file size, but greatly affect sound quality :3
-> As this song is actually a sad-paced one, you might want to add a silver (or gold) slider border. Open the .osu file manually, and add these codes below "Combo4 : 0,128,255": Sorry but I'm not agreed with this.
Silver:
SliderBorder : 211,211,211

Gold:
SliderBorder : 254,239,114
This is fully optional, though.
-> Another thing worth mentioning is a new timing section should be placed on 00:14:730 with 85.90 BPM. Yep, the piano gets slower there, and keep using 86.00 there will result in an incorrect timing.
-> Oh, and Nicol Armarfi to the tags, just in case.

[Easy]

00:02:171 (1,2,1,2,3) - I don't quite get your whistle pattern here, although they sounds fine. The piano hits high note every 2/1, so in my opinion, it's better to keep the whistling consistent at 2/1 here
00:07:055 (3) - Definitely moved way too up imo. Move it ~5 grids down and right, and it will flow better with the previous (2) (:
00:12:637 (4,1,2,3) - (optional) Although it's not a thing you must do, but it's better to arrange them in an arc like below, to build up more flow and avoid (2) touching the next (4):
SPOILER
00:21:009 (1) - (optional) This one also, consider moving this few grids up to prevent touching 00:20:311 (3)
00:24:497 (1,3) - Woah, ugly overlap imo. Just be creative with your slider shapes though - this won't be hard to fix xD
SPOILER
Also whistle on (1)'s end, if you want to (:
00:32:221 (2) - (optional) You could easily make a blanket pattern as you did on 00:33:616 (3,4) with (2)'s end being stacked to (6) though, it will play more beautiful imo :3
00:46:174 (4) - Whistle here on slider's start. I highly recommend this, the piano here needs a hitsound companion :3
00:48:267 (1,2) - Is it intentional you curve the slider this way? Because this is a 2/1 slider, the red waypoint is much better if placed on the second slider tick, for example:
SPOILER
00:51:756 (3) - (optional) Stack below (2) better for the ending imo
[Normal]

00:04:962 (5,1) - It would fit the piano more if (5) is extended by 1/2 while (1) is shortened by 1/2
00:09:148 (1) - Hmm, is this note really required? It doesn't follow anything in the music as I can hear. Also, this is just a Normal diff, don't let here be too hectic >_<
00:14:381 (3) - Whistle on slider's end to keep your whistle pattern here?
00:15:427 (4,5,6,1) - Sudden 90° linear slider here breaks your flow imo. The simplest thing you can do here, without altering your slider too much but still flowy, perhaps:
SPOILER
00:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why no whistle at all >_< At least one whistle should be here imo, either it's in (3) or (5) - I suggest (3) more though, because it's the downbeat
00:35:360 (5,1) - Sudden spacing change here. Is it intentional?
00:38:500 (3) - (optional) Curve it to the opposite direction (downward) to avoid touching (5)? (slider wave also plays beautiful here)
00:44:081 (5) - Normal hitfinish feels too explosive for the song imo. What's more, if you want to keep the normal hitfinish, they should've been placed in the downbeat instead.
00:46:872 (5) - Same as above
00:49:663 (4) - Rigid linear slider like this is very unfitting for the ending. Why not a bezier curve instead? At the picture below, you can see that (5)'s approachcircle could be used to guide you here:
SPOILER
[Collab]

00:03:218 (4,5,6) - I highly recommend to add whistle on either 4 or 6, else it will be too empty here
00:05:485 (2,4) - (optional) You can move (2) downward and (4) upward so this part won't be too linear and to increase the flow
00:09:497 (4) - Already tested, there's a note 1/8 after this from the music. Not something you have to add, though :3
00:09:846 (1) - Do you really need the new combo here? Also, (optional) make this encircle (4)?
00:13:683 (5) - To avoid such overlapping with (2), I suggest to arrange (5) like below:
SPOILER
00:23:799 (2) - (optional) Encircle (5)? Plays better than just a straight slider imo
00:24:497 (3,4) - Unexpected spacing change (well, I bet it's unintentional though)
00:32:221 (5,6,7) - I think it's better if you keep with symmetry here to make this part looks less random, for example:
SPOILER
00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 1/4 stream spam in a relaxing piano song orz... Do you really need this much >_< - Triples are okay to use in this song imo, but this one... orz
00:46:872 (1) - Same as [Normal], normal hitfinish is too explosive imo. (also those downbeat stuff)
00:50:709 (3,4) - (optional) I think it would be nice if there's a little jump on the ending, for example:
SPOILER
Oh, and one more stuff, you don't need awkward kiai position like that (although it's usable), short kiais plays better imo here.

Much neater and better than your Aoi Hana map~ lol thanks! >w<"
My map's link is at your queue. Star ^^

Thank you for your star and mod !

Too many mod so won't be write too many~

Shana Aisaka

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Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-02-19T07:37:37+00:00

Alright! It's Fixed!!

UPDATE!!

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-02-20T22:42:10+00:00

KuronumaSawako wrote:
Niva mod so pro

This^^ I would love a mod from him in my map.

Anyway on topic, here's your request from my modding queue.

[General]
-Remove OSB file. There's no storyboard in your map.
-Your video file has audio in it. Remove the audio off of the video.

[Easy]
-00:30:084 (6) - Make this hit circle blanklet with slider 5.

[Normal]
-Good

[Collab]
-Good

Beautiful map indeed. Just work on your blanklets.

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-02-21T16:25:57+00:00

Thanks for the kudosu! STAR~

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

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Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-02-22T10:25:42+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Thanks for the kudosu! STAR~

Arigatou :3

JoJo

1,177 posts

Joined July 2010

JoJo 2012-04-02T08:23:54+00:00

Hi meimeichan!
Sorry for delay >_<

Prepare to mod but..... Your timing is off completely.........
Try this:

1.BPM 85.800 OFFSET 2172

Yes only 1 timing point. I will ask kanpakyin to recheck the timing.
After fixing feel free to call me back at anytime and I'll do full mod!

Star for now! >A</

Shana Aisaka

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Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-04-18T13:09:59+00:00

JoJo wrote:
Hi meimeichan!
Sorry for delay >_<

Prepare to mod but..... Your timing is off completely.........
Try this:

1.BPM 85.800 OFFSET 2172

Yes only 1 timing point. I will ask kanpakyin to recheck the timing.
After fixing feel free to call me back at anytime and I'll do full mod!

Star for now! >A</

lol thanks XD will fix when i got time =w=''

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

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Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-05-10T07:18:00+00:00

Fix Timing already ~

UPDATE!!! :3

JoJo

1,177 posts

Joined July 2010

JoJo 2012-05-11T09:21:07+00:00

Hi meimei-chan again :>
OK~ Don't kudosu this since I have already get 2 from last post.

Purple - Unrankable stuff.
Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

Reset your timing section according to this image.↓
Select 4/4 common and add another timing section on 00:30:843 (4/4) to fix the downbeat for all diffs. Offset has no change so do not need resnapping.
Volume setting is too low. Sometimes players determine whether they have caught the notes on beat by hitsound so.
By the way add a mute sliderslide hitsound since this song is quiet but ruined by noisy sliderslide.
I don't know why you have set fountain effect on 00:44:829, not really fit the music.
Add storyboard of mapper's ID for different parts. Just suggestion.

[Collab]

00:06:813 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
00:13:360 (4) - New combo I guess.
00:29:444 (1,2) - Switch new combo.
00:38:185 (1,4) - ^ For map reading and downbeat. Then remove new combo on 00:40:283 (1).

[Normal]

0.8x spacing looks not good for gameplay. All notes are end to end. (Just comment.)
00:04:969 (5,1) - Switch new combo.
00:07:766 (4,1) - I prefer switching new combo here. Then looks you have to fix the spacing between them.
00:16:507 (1,2) - Little spacing issue I guess.

[Easy]

Same to Normal. 1.0x DS is much better than 0.8.
00:24:497 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
00:32:241 (2,3) - Fix the spacing here (Try move slider 3 some grids left).
00:33:640 (3,4) - Try to avoid overlap.
00:37:137 (1,2) - ^ Same, looks not good, try something like this↓
SPOILER
ATTACH[$2A$9G)68DBL00`}O~VX{AP.jpg]

That's it~ Good luck and I'm looking forward to your 1st ranked map! Go go go~

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

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Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-05-12T03:31:45+00:00

Fan-kun wrote ~

JoJo wrote:
Hi meimei-chan again :>
OK~ Don't kudosu this since I have already get 2 from last post.

Purple - Unrankable stuff.
Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
Reset your timing section according to this image.↓
[attachment=1:523a7]{Y9_512FSK@5[3SC4TE4VIH.jpg[/attachment:523a7]Select 4/4 common and add another timing section on 00:30:843 (4/4) to fix the downbeat for all diffs. Offset has no change so do not need resnapping.
Volume setting is too low. Sometimes players determine whether they have caught the notes on beat by hitsound so.
By the way add a mute sliderslide hitsound since this song is quiet but ruined by noisy sliderslide.
I don't know why you have set fountain effect on 00:44:829, not really fit the music.
Add storyboard of mapper's ID for different parts. Just suggestion.
[Collab]
00:06:813 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
00:13:360 (4) - New combo I guess.
00:29:444 (1,2) - Switch new combo.
00:38:185 (1,4) - ^ For map reading and downbeat. Then remove new combo on 00:40:283 (1).
[Normal]
0.8x spacing looks not good for gameplay. All notes are end to end. (Just comment.)
00:04:969 (5,1) - Switch new combo.
00:07:766 (4,1) - I prefer switching new combo here. Then looks you have to fix the spacing between them.
00:16:507 (1,2) - Little spacing issue I guess.
[Easy]
Same to Normal. 1.0x DS is much better than 0.8.
00:24:497 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
00:32:241 (2,3) - Fix the spacing here (Try move slider 3 some grids left).
00:33:640 (3,4) - Try to avoid overlap.
00:37:137 (1,2) - ^ Same, looks not good, try something like this↓
SPOILER
[attachment=0:523a7]$2A$9G)68DBL00`}O~VX{AP.jpg[/attachment:523a7]
That's it~ Good luck and I'm looking forward to your 1st ranked map! Go go go~

Done Fixing something but still got some problem in general.. =A='' send u message already.. :3

UPDATE some part ~ XD

Cilvery

346 posts

Joined May 2011

Cilvery 2012-06-04T10:53:14+00:00

Hi~ <request from my queue>

[Easy]
00:06:367 - add whistle

00:11:262 - ^

00:36:437 - ^

00:37:137 - remove whistle

00:37:836 - add whistle

[Normal]
00:09:514 - add whistle

[Collab]
00:10:913 - add finish or whistle

00:11:262 - ^

00:11:612 - ^

00:11:962 - add whistle

00:13:011 - ^
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
good luck~

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-06-17T05:59:46+00:00

Cilvery-san's mod

Cilvery wrote:
Hi~ <request from my queue>

[Easy]
00:06:367 - add whistle

00:11:262 - ^

00:36:437 - ^

00:37:137 - remove whistle

00:37:836 - add whistle

[Normal]
00:09:514 - add whistle

[Collab]
00:10:913 - add finish or whistle

00:11:262 - ^

00:11:612 - ^

00:11:962 - add whistle

00:13:011 - ^
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
good luck~

Wow.. Arigatou!! All diff add hitsound. :3
UPDATE!! >A<"

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2012-06-17T07:21:23+00:00

iroseka's modding from tha queue

Hi, this song is quite slow for me, so I am not going to check your rhythm (not good at it XD)

[Easy]
00:09:165 (4) - Just delete it?
00:22:451 (3) - Sayings that this silent slider at silent time is unrankable.
00:28:745 (5,6) - Check the slider shape and note arrangement. suggestion
00:42:731 (2,3,4,5) - The shape here is no good XD

[Normal]
00:09:514 (1) - DS
00:22:102 (1) - Shape

[Hard]
00:22:102 (2,3,4,5) - Slient unrankable notes

Naichatta

751 posts

Joined July 2010

Naichatta 2012-06-17T07:41:54+00:00

From my queue.

[General]
Collab

SPOILER

Normal

SPOILER

Green line resnap please~

[Easy]

00:35:738 (5,1) - switch NC
00:47:626 (5) - as in Collab

[Normal]

00:07:766 (5) - add NC. and ↓ like this

SPOILER

00:16:158 (6) - ↓ like this

SPOILER

00:31:542 (1) - remove NC
00:47:626 (1) - as in Collab

[Collab]

00:03:395 (5) - remove this note, it's better imo
00:06:018 (4) - ↓ like this

SPOILER

00:13:360 (4) - add NC
00:23:500 (1,3) - switch NC
00:35:388 (5) - remove whistle at slider ends
00:36:088 (1) - add whistle at slider head
00:47:626 (1) - Volume 30% it's better imo

That's all.

nice song~ good luck

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-06-17T09:29:12+00:00

All Mod is very useful !! Thanks!! >w<" iroseka, kusano !! :3

UPDATE!!

Ayu

1,126 posts

Joined December 2011

Ayu 2012-06-17T11:19:53+00:00

From my modding queue~

[Easy]

You use a lot of basic patterns, nothing wrong with that. Although you should work on your small sliders.
00:02:172 (1) - Maybe make sliders like this more like; http://puu.sh/BxdA
00:03:570 (2) - For this, copy paste (1) and Ctrl+J & Ctrl+R

furthermore nothing wrong with this difficulty.

[Normal]

I advice to don't make overlaps like 00:07:766 (5,6). Use a bigger spacing so they don't overlap.
The song has a BPM of 85 only, so there's nothing wrong with using a distance spacing of 1.2x for Normal.

00:04:969 (1) - Not sure if this is supposed to be an arc, but 2 anchors should be enough.
00:04:969 (1,2) - You could also make it like this: http://puu.sh/Bxgn (2 anchors instead of 3 on (1) and I lowered the anchor from (2))
00:16:158 (6) - This slider doesn't feels right to me.
00:26:297 (6) - This slider is pretty ugly. Try to just make a normal slider with a bow.
00:27:346 - 00:37:486 - A bit too much straight, if you ask me. Try to make it more smooth.
00:40:633 (5) - Slider end overlaps (3)
00:42:381 (2,2) - You shouldn't use red-anchors at a song like this. The song is way too slow paced for these kind of sliders.
00:49:724 (4) - Ugly slider. The anchors aren't placed in a good way and the red anchor at the slider end is totally unnecessary

[Collab]

00:08:815 (3,4) - Just make a single slider out of this; http://puu.sh/BxjW http://puu.sh/BxjZ
00:30:144 (2,3) - ^
00:32:591 (6) - Like I mentioned before, This song is too slow paced for sliders like this.
00:40:283 (6,7) - Put a note on 00:40:283 and make a slider from 00:40:633 to 00:41:332
00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Use less spacing and try to make it more pretty; http://puu.sh/BxlB

Suggestion; Make a Storyboard with the names for collab, so everyone can see who mapped which part.

[Overall]

The beatmap needs work before it's worth a bubble. Try to work on your sliders. Here's a nice thread about sliders: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Good luck with your beatmap

kurohana

520 posts

Joined October 2010

kurohana 2012-06-19T19:33:22+00:00

m4m :3

General

I'm not sure about kiai times... but this is up to you :3

Normal

00:03:220 (2) - maybe like this?

00:16:158 (6) - new combo

and use soft-sliderslide, it will sound much better :3

good luck :3

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-07-26T04:08:52+00:00

Ayu wrote this ~

Ayu wrote:
From my modding queue~

[Easy]

You use a lot of basic patterns, nothing wrong with that. Although you should work on your small sliders.
00:02:172 (1) - Maybe make sliders like this more like; http://puu.sh/BxdA Fix
00:03:570 (2) - For this, copy paste (1) and Ctrl+J & Ctrl+R Okay

furthermore nothing wrong with this difficulty. lol thx anyway =w=''

[Normal]

I advice to don't make overlaps like 00:07:766 (5,6). Use a bigger spacing so they don't overlap.
The song has a BPM of 85 only, so there's nothing wrong with using a distance spacing of 1.2x for Normal. Actually i don't really quite understand what is overlap means \o/ =A='' I tried my best though @w@"

00:04:969 (1) - Not sure if this is supposed to be an arc, but 2 anchors should be enough. what?
00:04:969 (1,2) - You could also make it like this: http://puu.sh/Bxgn (2 anchors instead of 3 on (1) and I lowered the anchor from (2))
00:16:158 (6) - This slider doesn't feels right to me. It's fine to me though XD
00:26:297 (6) - This slider is pretty ugly. Try to just make a normal slider with a bow. Okay
00:27:346 - 00:37:486 - A bit too much straight, if you ask me. Try to make it more smooth. Okay
00:40:633 (5) - Slider end overlaps (3) Fix
00:42:381 (2,2) - You shouldn't use red-anchors at a song like this. The song is way too slow paced for these kind of sliders. Okay
00:49:724 (4) - Ugly slider. The anchors aren't placed in a good way and the red anchor at the slider end is totally unnecessary Fix

[Collab]

00:08:815 (3,4) - Just make a single slider out of this; http://puu.sh/BxjW http://puu.sh/BxjZ Fix
00:30:144 (2,3) - ^ Fix
00:32:591 (6) - Like I mentioned before, This song is too slow paced for sliders like this. Okay
00:40:283 (6,7) - Put a note on 00:40:283 and make a slider from 00:40:633 to 00:41:332 Okay
00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Use less spacing and try to make it more pretty; http://puu.sh/BxlB Fix

Suggestion; Make a Storyboard with the names for collab, so everyone can see who mapped which part. Okay

[Overall]

The beatmap needs work before it's worth a bubble. Try to work on your sliders. Here's a nice thread about sliders: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Good luck with your beatmap Thank you :3

Wow.. The mod helps me a lot ! Thanks >A<!!

kurohana wrote this ~

kurohana wrote:
m4m :3

General
I'm not sure about kiai times... but this is up to you :3 It's okay to me

Normal
00:03:220 (2) - maybe like this? Fix
00:16:158 (6) - new combo Fix

and use soft-sliderslide, it will sound much better :3

good luck :3 Thank you

Thank you for your mod!! >w<!!

UPDATE!! >A<!!

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-07-26T05:09:40+00:00

Random mod

~~also my first~~

Items in BOLD are my comments / What I think about the map

Items in Blue are recommended

Items in Purple are unrankable

Regular text is just suggestion / nazi

[General]

If you do not mind , you should add a hard too because the song is very short

[Easy]
The diff is okay , But you can put more variation on your slider shapes and make some look nicer.

00:19:654 (2) - Line up with 00:16:857 (4) - ?
00:36:437 (2) - Move it down 4 boxes
00:43:780 (3) - This is really break rhythm >.< Try this rhythm instead

[Normal]

00:28:395 (3) - Move 4 boxes down
00:32:241 (4) - ^
00:16:158 (1) - This slider look a bit ugly , especially the curve
00:41:332 (6) - Move this to the left a bit

[Hard]

00:40:283 (6) - Spacing is off here a little.
00:46:927 (1) - Is there a reason for this new combo here?

Mapset is alright. Good luck!

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2012-07-26T05:27:38+00:00

Taris wrote:
Random mod

~~also my first~~ ~~Since this is your 1st mod i give u KUDOS lol~~
Items in BOLD are my comments / What I think about the map

Items in Blue are recommended

Items in Purple are unrankable

Regular text is just suggestion / nazi

[General]

If you do not mind , you should add a hard too because the song is very short No needed @w@"

[Easy]
The diff is okay , But you can put more variation on your slider shapes and make some look nicer.

00:19:654 (2) - Line up with 00:16:857 (4) - ? Fix?
00:36:437 (2) - Move it down 4 boxes no
00:43:780 (3) - This is really break rhythm >.< Try this rhythm instead
Fix

[Normal]

00:28:395 (3) - Move 4 boxes down
00:32:241 (4) - ^
00:16:158 (1) - This slider look a bit ugly , especially the curve Fix?
00:41:332 (6) - Move this to the left a bit

[Hard]

00:40:283 (6) - Spacing is off here a little. Opps Forgot to fix it.
00:46:927 (1) - Is there a reason for this new combo here?

Mapset is alright. Good luck! Thank you

Okay Fix a little .

UPDATE!!

Mapian101

10 posts

Joined August 2012

Mapian101 2012-10-27T23:09:50+00:00

I just thought id say that this is one of my favourite beatmaps so far on osu. i have played over 1200 songs and this one has a special spot as one of the top. <3 I hope there is a chance for this to get ranked. ~Niax

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2013-01-31T06:55:03+00:00

Mapian101 wrote:
I just thought id say that this is one of my favourite beatmaps so far on osu. i have played over 1200 songs and this one has a special spot as one of the top. <3 I hope there is a chance for this to get ranked. ~Niax

Thank you !! >w<!!

Kirino Kousaka

655 posts

Joined November 2010

Kirino Kousaka 2013-02-01T16:32:55+00:00

Hello Shana-chan~! >w< Modding from in-game request~

[General]

Reduce all your hitsound's volume by 5% to 10%? They're too loud too fit the bgm imo
Maybe you should remove the kiai fountain placed on 00:44:829. I kinda don't like it, but it's up to you.
Turn your sliderslide's sound into silent, they're making weird sounds that don't fit the music :<

[Easy]
00:42:032 (1) - Move this 1 grid downward so it would be blanketed nicely by 00:38:535 (4).
00:49:724 (3) - Turn it into this, to blanket the previous slider's end nicely :3

[Normal]
00:18:255 (4) - Turn it into this. If you did, fix the spacing of the next circles.
00:22:102 (1) - Move this tick 3 grids to the left and 1 grid downwards.

[Collab]
clear~

Sorry about the nazi stuff, but it will help on aesthetics :3
Nice map so star~ Good luck Shana-chan >w<

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2013-02-02T05:45:13+00:00

p/1341536
It's been ages lol XD

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2013-02-02T07:56:36+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/1341536
It's been ages lol XD

hahaha yeah XD anyway I'm gotta make this map ranked !

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2013-02-02T08:14:37+00:00

Kirino's Mod ~

Kirino Kousaka wrote:
Hello Shana-chan~! >w< Modding from in-game request~

[General]
Reduce all your hitsound's volume by 5% to 10%? They're too loud too fit the bgm imo
Maybe you should remove the kiai fountain placed on 00:44:829. I kinda don't like it, but it's up to you.
Turn your sliderslide's sound into silent, they're making weird sounds that don't fit the music :<

[Easy]
00:42:032 (1) - Move this 1 grid downward so it would be blanketed nicely by 00:38:535 (4).
00:49:724 (3) - Turn it into this, to blanket the previous slider's end nicely :3

[Normal]
00:18:255 (4) - Turn it into this. If you did, fix the spacing of the next circles.
00:22:102 (1) - Move this tick 3 grids to the left and 1 grid downwards.

[Collab]
clear~
[color=#FF4000]Sorry about the nazi stuff, but it will help on aesthetics :3
Nice map so star~ Good luck Shana-chan >w<

Fix all ! Thanks Kirino-san !! >///<!!

UPDATE!!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2013-02-03T13:35:24+00:00

hello

thank mod my map ^^

this time I mod your map

i can speak little english,sorry ><

easy

00:23:500 (3) - add note?

normal
00:22:102 (1) - +hitsound?

collab
00:49:549 (8) - add note ?
00:51:472 (4) - note + whistle sound

your song is good

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2013-02-04T05:06:52+00:00

smallboat's mod ~

smallboat wrote:
hello thank mod my map ^^

this time I mod your map

i can speak little english,sorry ><

easy

00:23:500 (3) - add note? add

normal
00:22:102 (1) - +hitsound? add

collab
00:49:549 (8) - add note ? no..
00:51:472 (4) - note + whistle sound no..

your song is good

Thank you for your mod >w<!!

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-02-05T05:38:10+00:00

Easy:

SPOILER

00:19:654 (2,3,1) - try another pattern is so confuse for new players check why:

00:44:130 2 grids right for be in curve with (2,3)

Normal:

SPOILER

00:04:269 move it to x:176 y:64 looks better with 2 and 3
00:11:262 (1,2,3) - make this pattern more curved since 1 and 2 in line look ugly imo
00:49:724 big slider then imo you need to be creative make it more fun :3

Collab:

SPOILER

add circle 00:09:689

Sorry about poor mod since i dont see anything wrong that are just suggestions

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2013-02-07T12:55:40+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Easy:

SPOILER
00:19:654 (2,3,1) - try another pattern is so confuse for new players check why:

00:44:130 2 grids right for be in curve with (2,3)

Normal:

SPOILER
00:04:269 move it to x:176 y:64 looks better with 2 and 3
00:11:262 (1,2,3) - make this pattern more curved since 1 and 2 in line look ugly imo
00:49:724 big slider then imo you need to be creative make it more fun :3

Collab:

SPOILER
add circle 00:09:689

Sorry about poor mod since i dont see anything wrong that are just suggestions

Thank you for your mod

Easy no change but Normal and Collab i fix some

UPDATE!!

jossieP

1,875 posts

Joined May 2010

jossieP 2013-02-12T22:40:30+00:00

I hate the gif on your sig, take stars and remove it

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2013-03-09T14:33:13+00:00

ikari_kyon wrote:
I hate the gif on your sig, take stars and remove it

lol ! >w<! anyway Arigatou ! ^^

Ikarin SUKI!! lol

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2013-04-02T07:09:54+00:00

hi ~

#modreqs ~

SPOILER

uhmm . pls use this one for the sliderslide >.< soft-sliderslide

Easy
00:08:815 (4) - / 00:20:353 (3) - add whistle ~ >.<

Normal
00:04:969 / 00:46:227 (3) - add finish ~
00:20:703 (5) - remove this slider then add a hitobject here 00:21:053 >.<
00:51:472 (2) - remove this ~

Collab
00:12:661 (2) - / 00:43:430 (1) - / 00:44:130 (5) - / 00:48:675 (5) - add whistle ~

SPOILER

thats all >.< Goodluck ~ Nice Collab :33

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2013-04-02T07:22:52+00:00

newtoniorock8 wrote this ~

newtoniorock8 wrote:
hi ~ #modreqs ~ Hi Thanks for mod ^^''
SPOILER
uhmm . pls use this one for the sliderslide >.< soft-sliderslide
Thanks ! Added !
Easy
00:08:815 (4) - / 00:20:353 (3) - add whistle ~ >.< fix ~
Normal
00:04:969 / 00:46:227 (3) - add finish ~ fix ~
00:20:703 (5) - remove this slider then add a hitobject here 00:21:053 >.< ermm no?
00:51:472 (2) - remove this ~ fix ~
Collab
00:12:661 (2) - / 00:43:430 (1) - / 00:44:130 (5) - / 00:48:675 (5) - add whistle ~ fix all ~

SPOILER
thats all >.< Goodluck ~ Nice Collab :33 Thank you >///<!!

Thank you so much!!
UPDATE!!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2013-04-26T22:31:18+00:00

Hello from " https://osu.ppy.sh/p/mod "

The roulette has chosen YOUR MAP to be my next mod! *Background Cheering and Applause!*

[General]
Tags:
Add: Disability Girls | As its the English name of the game, and it says right in your little picture on your beatmap listing

Lead-in Time: I don't believe you really need lead-in time for this song as the first note hits more than 2 seconds later. If you want though, you can make your lead-in time 828, so the first note will hit exactly 3 seconds after the song loads. (If you want 4 seconds, use 1828)

Sounds: Why not use a silent slider-slide? I personally think it fits with this song: http://puu.sh/2HHgJ.wav |

[Easy]
00:32:241 (2,3,4) - There is a little bit of a gap between each of these notes.
00:42:032 (1) - A bit loud for the volume you lowered before this. Maybe lower it by 10-20 and use what you have currently for the next notes?

[Normal]
Raise the settings up a bit. There is quite a gap between this difficulty and the collab. HP Drain / OD could easily go up by 1 more

Also I think the Distance between these notes is a bit too small.. 1.0 would have been better

Volume: No volume should go below 15-20% unless its the end of a spinner or slider. I would highly suggest raising the overall volume of this song by at least 5-10%

00:22:102 (1) - This slider doesn't seem needed.. delete it?
00:30:144 (2) - Volume at the end of this slider seems a bit too quiet, Raise it by 10%

[Collab]
Wa.... there's a video to this? Why isn't this on your Easy/Normal Difficulties?!?!? Add them!
00:04:269 (1,2) - Why not just combine these two into one slider? It would honestly play better, also check the volume and such like I suggested before
00:06:717 (6) - Volume here as well doesn't really need a decrease. Seems pointless
00:09:689 (4) - this piano note hits an 1/8th earlier. I realize you don't want to use 1/8ths, but this 1/4 is just hitting air at this point.. remove?
00:24:374 (3) - again. This note hits air.....
00:32:241 (5,6) - these would be better as two 1/2 sliders instead of a slider + circle to match the piano.
The rest of the song feels a bit overmapped, but I won't dig into it anymore. I'll leave it up to you to decide what or what not to remove.
00:50:773 (3,4) - A bit too much for a simple song. If you want to use the 1/4 here, then at least flip the slider to end near the 1/4 note.

Sorry for the short mod, good luck!

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2014-06-22T07:33:04+00:00

:3

Lanturn wrote:
Hello from " https://osu.ppy.sh/p/mod "

The roulette has chosen YOUR MAP to be my next mod! *Background Cheering and Applause!*

[General]
Tags:
Add: Disability Girls | As its the English name of the game, and it says right in your little picture on your beatmap listing

Lead-in Time: I don't believe you really need lead-in time for this song as the first note hits more than 2 seconds later. If you want though, you can make your lead-in time 828, so the first note will hit exactly 3 seconds after the song loads. (If you want 4 seconds, use 1828)

Sounds: Why not use a silent slider-slide? I personally think it fits with this song: http://puu.sh/2HHgJ.wav |

[Easy]
00:32:241 (2,3,4) - There is a little bit of a gap between each of these notes.
00:42:032 (1) - A bit loud for the volume you lowered before this. Maybe lower it by 10-20 and use what you have currently for the next notes?

[Normal]
Raise the settings up a bit. There is quite a gap between this difficulty and the collab. HP Drain / OD could easily go up by 1 more

Also I think the Distance between these notes is a bit too small.. 1.0 would have been better

Volume: No volume should go below 15-20% unless its the end of a spinner or slider. I would highly suggest raising the overall volume of this song by at least 5-10%

00:22:102 (1) - This slider doesn't seem needed.. delete it?
00:30:144 (2) - Volume at the end of this slider seems a bit too quiet, Raise it by 10%

[Collab]
Wa.... there's a video to this? Why isn't this on your Easy/Normal Difficulties?!?!? Add them!
00:04:269 (1,2) - Why not just combine these two into one slider? It would honestly play better, also check the volume and such like I suggested before
00:06:717 (6) - Volume here as well doesn't really need a decrease. Seems pointless
00:09:689 (4) - this piano note hits an 1/8th earlier. I realize you don't want to use 1/8ths, but this 1/4 is just hitting air at this point.. remove?
00:24:374 (3) - again. This note hits air.....
00:32:241 (5,6) - these would be better as two 1/2 sliders instead of a slider + circle to match the piano.
The rest of the song feels a bit overmapped, but I won't dig into it anymore. I'll leave it up to you to decide what or what not to remove.
00:50:773 (3,4) - A bit too much for a simple song. If you want to use the 1/4 here, then at least flip the slider to end near the 1/4 note.

Sorry for the short mod, good luck!

lol sorry late reply and thank you for your mod

UPADATE

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-06-23T11:53:15+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

tags suggetion:
Four Leaf Studios

[Easy]

00:28:745 (5,6) - blanket correctly
00:30:843 (1,2) - ^
00:32:241 (2,3) - avoid overlap
00:33:640 (3,4) - blanket correctly
00:38:535 (4) - suggetion
00:46:227 (6,1) - avoid overlap

[Normal]

00:08:465 (6,2,3) - avoid overlap
00:18:955 (1,2,3) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
00:25:948 (5,6) - not stack is better for good flow
00:44:829 (1,2) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
00:47:626 (1,2) - not good flow

[Collab]

00:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - conform DS

00:34:689~00:38:185- you can blanket more correctly. how about this?

SPOILER

270,87,34689,2,0,B|322:66|363:103,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,159,35388,2,0,B|252:173|241:228,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,237,36088,6,0,B|350:284|405:278,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,199,36787,2,0,B|422:153|394:104,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,150,37486,2,0,B|282:118|233:146,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,212,38185,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make more symmetric (and I suggest to increase DS)
00:47:976 (2,3,4) - curve more for good flow
SPOILER

good relax map <3
~Good Luck~

Fuuyu

856 posts

Joined September 2013

Fuuyu 2014-06-25T13:29:08+00:00

I'll give a a star instead . . .

btw the map is fine to me

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2014-10-25T13:27:01+00:00

RandomEffect's Mod

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
tags suggetion:
Four Leaf Studios Fix
[Easy]
00:28:745 (5,6) - blanket correctly Err what? can you explain it to me?
00:30:843 (1,2) - ^
00:32:241 (2,3) - avoid overlap Fix
00:33:640 (3,4) - blanket correctly
00:38:535 (4) - suggetion
00:46:227 (6,1) - avoid overlap Fix
[Normal]
00:08:465 (6,2,3) - avoid overlap Fix
00:18:955 (1,2,3) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
00:25:948 (5,6) - not stack is better for good flow Fix
00:44:829 (1,2) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
00:47:626 (1,2) - not good flow Fix

[Collab]
00:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - conform DS
00:34:689~00:38:185- you can blanket more correctly. how about this? Fix
SPOILER
270,87,34689,2,0,B|322:66|363:103,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,159,35388,2,0,B|252:173|241:228,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,237,36088,6,0,B|350:284|405:278,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,199,36787,2,0,B|422:153|394:104,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,150,37486,2,0,B|282:118|233:146,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,212,38185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make more symmetric (and I suggest to increase DS) Nothing wrong here
00:47:976 (2,3,4) - curve more for good flow
SPOILER
good relax map <3
~Good Luck~

Thank you Mod my map!

xLoupGarou's Post

xLoupGarou wrote:
I'll give a a star instead . . . btw the map is fine to me

aww thank you give me star ~

UPDATE!

Loughje

380 posts

Joined December 2014

Loughje 2015-02-03T20:36:51+00:00

Really fun relaxing beatmap, keep up the good work!

cmn_891127

1,308 posts

Joined July 2010

cmn_891127 2015-06-08T03:28:19+00:00

[Hitsound]

Use 0-byte .wav file to blank your soft-sliderslide.wav, and change all timing line to sampleset soft-1
blank hitsound link: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav

[Timing line]

Normal - 00:23:500 - useless, remove
Normal - 00:32:678 - unsnapped
Normal - 00:44:130 - useless, and you don't have custom sampleset (unless you use the blank slider)

[Slider tail]

Normal - 00:45:178 (2) - you double click the ending point, remove one
Collab - 00:08:815 (3) - ^
Collab - 00:30:144 (2) - ^
Easy - 00:46:227 (6) - ^
Easy - 00:44:130 (4) - ^

[Metadata]

Now Japanese can be used in Metadata

Source: かたわ少女

If you don't like the hitsound of slider tick, just use tick rate 1. If you change this one, then don't forget to double check the useless timing line.

(づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2015-06-08T04:03:06+00:00

Edit

cmn_891127 wrote:
[Hitsound]
Use 0-byte .wav file to blank your soft-sliderslide.wav, and change all timing line to sampleset soft-1
blank hitsound link: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav Thank you~ done ~
[Timing line]
Normal - 00:23:500 - useless, remove done ~
Normal - 00:32:678 - unsnapped umm.. sorry i didnt understand notes are snap and there's no timing here..
Normal - 00:44:130 - useless, and you don't have custom sampleset (unless you use the blank slider) done ~
[Slider tail]
Normal - 00:45:178 (2) - you double click the ending point, remove one done remove it
Collab - 00:08:815 (3) - ^ done remove it
Collab - 00:30:144 (2) - ^ done remove it
Easy - 00:46:227 (6) - ^ done remove it
Easy - 00:44:130 (4) - ^ done remove it
[Metadata]
Now Japanese can be used in Metadata
Source: かたわ少女 okay~
If you don't like the hitsound of slider tick, just use tick rate 1. If you change this one, then don't forget to double check the useless timing line. ohh i think i like how mine are now ^^ thank you

(づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Yay thank you so much!! I will edit it as soon as i at home!

Okay~ done editing it ^^ i hope no more mistake... ready for ranked !

UPDATE!

Hazuki

125 posts

Joined September 2013

Hazuki 2015-06-09T01:31:44+00:00

Little mod for Magic tree

00:43:081 (4,5) - Increase distance here feels nice

00:44:829 (1,2,3) - ^

That's all ^(

MBomb

MBomb 2015-06-09T01:32:58+00:00

-Neptune- wrote:
Little mod for Magic tree
00:43:081 (4,5) - Increase distance here feels nice - That dash key better be ready boi.

00:44:829 (1,2,3) - ^ - ^

That's all ^(

Thanks for the mod!

Salad

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Katawa Shoujo Cinematics - Shizune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 23451
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5318
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Three Stars
TitleUnicode:Three Stars
Artist:NicolArmarfi
ArtistUnicode:NicolArmarfi
Creator:Shana Aisaka
Version:MBomb's Salad
Source:かたわ少女
Tags:- Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios
BeatmapID:714772
BeatmapSetID:43530

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"6688_katawa_shoujo_hd_wallpaper.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
2172,699.300699300699,3,2,1,20,1,0
4969,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
6717,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
6892,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
10913,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
11262,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
11612,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
17206,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
18955,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
24549,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
24724,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
30493,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
30668,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
42032,-100,3,2,1,30,0,1
42206,-100,3,2,1,35,0,1
44130,-100,3,2,1,35,0,1
44304,-100,3,2,1,50,0,1
44654,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44829,-100,3,2,1,40,0,1
46927,-100,3,2,1,40,0,1
47102,-100,3,2,1,50,0,1
47626,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
49025,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
49724,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
50423,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
51123,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
51822,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 45,88,228
Combo3 : 128,64,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
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416,192,3220,2,0,L|352:152,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,4269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,4969,6,0,P|400:144|352:96,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,6018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,6367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,6717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,7067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,7417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,8465,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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72,192,12661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,192,16158,2,0,L|480:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,16857,2,0,P|192:128|304:80,1,375
480,192,18955,6,0,L|352:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,20004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,24549,6,0,L|384:152,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Histoire

482 posts

Joined December 2013

Histoire 2015-06-09T06:38:44+00:00

short mod from #modreq

sorry i don't really have much to mod since its a really short song

Normal: 00:51:822 (2) - since the music is softening i don't think a whistle is necessary, or you could soften it

sorry for bad mod

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2015-06-09T06:41:38+00:00

Edit

[ Evil ] wrote:
short mod from #modreq

sorry i don't really have much to mod since its a really short song

Normal: 00:51:822 (2) - since the music is softening i don't think a whistle is necessary, or you could soften it aww sorry no change..

sorry for bad mod

Its okay

i will check it after i arrive at home

Okay i already check and there's no change... but thank you for checking my map ^^

BoberOfDarkness

1,062 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2015-06-09T19:36:37+00:00

o/

Salad mod

Salad

00:00:074 - 00:00:773 - 00:01:472 - add notes here
00:03:220 (2) - maybe move a bit right?

00:06:018 (2) - I feel like this note is wrong place q.q Note should be at 00:06:105 -
00:06:368 (3) - this should be at 00:06:411 -

00:10:563 (4) - spinner fits better here

Good luck!

MBomb

MBomb 2015-06-09T21:29:05+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
o/

Salad mod

Salad
00:00:074 - 00:00:773 - 00:01:472 - add notes here - I want a consistent start time with standard diffs.
00:03:220 (2) - maybe move a bit right? - Done.

00:06:018 (2) - I feel like this note is wrong place q.q Note should be at 00:06:105 - - This sounds better to me snapped how it is now.
00:06:368 (3) - this should be at 00:06:411 - - I would prefer not to use 1/16 snap.

00:10:563 (4) - spinner fits better here - I want to keep the slider ticks for the background 1/2 beat here, I think it fits well, so no change.

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod!

Salad

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Katawa Shoujo Cinematics - Shizune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 23451
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Three Stars
TitleUnicode:Three Stars
Artist:NicolArmarfi
ArtistUnicode:NicolArmarfi
Creator:Shana Aisaka
Version:MBomb's Salad
Source:かたわ少女
Tags:- Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios
BeatmapID:714772
BeatmapSetID:43530

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2015-06-10T05:38:03+00:00

[Easy]

00:24:549 (1) - change from finish to whistle
00:44:130 (4) - ^ for tail
00:46:227 (6) - forgot about whistle?

[Normal]

00:02:172 (1) - change from finish to whistle
00:04:969 (1) - ^
00:07:766 (5,6) - forgot about whistle?
00:24:549 (1) - change from finish to whistle
00:42:032 (1) - ^
00:44:130 (5,1) - ^
00:46:227 (3,5) - ^

[Collab]

00:20:004 (2) - you forgot whistle on head
00:24:549 (1) - finish is not really fitable. use Whistle
00:42:032 (1) - ^
00:44:130 (5) - ^
00:44:479 (1) - ^ for tail
00:46:927 (9) - ^ for head

The instrument is piano. Whistle is highly recommend for this. GL!

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,463 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2015-06-10T10:22:54+00:00

Hello! Here's your timing (remove your first red line):

2182,699.300699300699,4,2,1,20,1,0
30852,699.300699300699,4,2,1,30,1,0
42022,740.740740740741,4,2,1,30,1,0
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48305,697.674418604651,4,2,1,30,1,0
50398,697.674418604651,4,2,1,40,1,0

Just copy it and paste (Ctrl+V) into Timing Panel (F6). The song is 4/4, not 3/4 as you might have thought, and some lines in the end are used to reset the metronome to set it on correct beat.

Absolute Zero

Featured Artist

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2015-06-10T13:17:37+00:00

Uh oh, a star fell from my pocket!

MB's Salad
00:10:563 (4) - Move this farther (or closer) from the last note, make it more defined as a dash?
00:21:752 (5) - This might be confusing as either a dash/no dash, maybe make it more defined?
00:29:444 (5) - move to x=336?

Short mod, looking good!

MBomb

MBomb 2015-06-10T14:34:05+00:00

afk98 wrote:
Uh oh, a star fell from my pocket!

MB's Salad
00:10:563 (4) - Move this farther (or closer) from the last note, make it more defined as a dash? - This is already one of the strongest dashes in the map ;w;
00:21:752 (5) - This might be confusing as either a dash/no dash, maybe make it more defined? - Made it a dash.
00:29:444 (5) - move to x=336? - Changed this pattern around a bit.

Short mod, looking good!

Thanks for the mod! As well as these changes, I moved around a few things to make it slightly more difficult, but it's still fairly easy. However I haven't applied TicClick's timing yet, I'll let you decide whether you want to do that.

Salad (Edited with updated timing because we agreed on it)

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Katawa Shoujo Cinematics - Shizune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 23451
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Three Stars
TitleUnicode:Three Stars
Artist:NicolArmarfi
ArtistUnicode:NicolArmarfi
Creator:Shana Aisaka
Version:MBomb's Salad
Source:かたわ少女
Tags:- Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios
BeatmapID:714772
BeatmapSetID:43530

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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32,192,31900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,32250,2,0,L|288:152,1,75
448,192,32949,2,0,L|384:152,1,75
192,192,33649,6,0,L|128:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,34698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,35397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,35747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,200,36096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,36446,6,0,L|288:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,37145,2,0,L|64:152,1,75
208,192,37845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,192,38544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,38893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39243,6,0,P|72:160|16:72,1,300,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,41341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,42022,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,192,42392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,42739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,43086,2,0,L|80:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,43780,2,0,L|272:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,44475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,44822,6,0,L|464:152,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,45516,2,0,L|160:152,1,75
416,192,46210,2,0,L|480:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,46905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,47599,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,48305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,48653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,49002,2,0,L|224:152,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,50398,2,0,P|392:116|288:40,1,300,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2015-06-10T15:45:47+00:00

-Hakurei-'s Mod

-Hakurei- wrote:

[Easy]
00:24:549 (1) - change from finish to whistle sorry no change
00:44:130 (4) - ^ for tail sorry no change
00:46:227 (6) - forgot about whistle? ok fixed ~
[Normal]
00:02:172 (1) - change from finish to whistle sorry no change
00:04:969 (1) - ^ sorry no change
00:07:766 (5,6) - forgot about whistle? ok fixed ~
00:24:549 (1) - change from finish to whistle sorry no change
00:42:032 (1) - ^ sorry no change
00:44:130 (5,1) - ^ ok fixed ~
00:46:227 (3,5) - ^ ok fixed ~
[Collab]
00:20:004 (2) - you forgot whistle on head ok fixed ~
00:24:549 (1) - finish is not really fitable. use Whistle sorry no change
00:42:032 (1) - ^ sorry no change
00:44:130 (5) - ^ sorry no change
00:44:479 (1) - ^ for tail sorry no change
00:46:927 (9) - ^ for head sorry no change
The instrument is piano. Whistle is highly recommend for this. GL!
Thank you so much and i have added some hitsound

Okay thank you so much for the mod!

TicClick's Timing Mod

TicClick wrote:
Hello! Here's your timing (remove your first red line):
2182,699.300699300699,4,2,1,20,1,0
30852,699.300699300699,4,2,1,30,1,0
42022,740.740740740741,4,2,1,30,1,0
42392,694.444444444444,4,2,1,35,1,1
42739,694.444444444444,4,2,1,35,1,1
44822,694.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
47957,697.674418604651,4,2,1,30,1,0
48305,697.674418604651,4,2,1,30,1,0
50398,697.674418604651,4,2,1,40,1,0
Just copy it and paste (Ctrl+V) into Timing Panel (F6). The song is 4/4, not 3/4 as you might have thought, and some lines in the end are used to reset the metronome to set it on correct beat.

Thank you for the timing <3 I hope there's nothing more unranked stuff..

UPDATE!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-06-11T09:18:30+00:00

Mod by - Magic Bomb -'s request:

General Comments:

Song Folder: No issues
Song Setup: Combo colours 1 and 3 are awfully similar, can you make them more distinct? Looks like you're following the hair colour of the girls in the bg image, so you could change one of them to "blonde" colour such as RGB 255,180,50. Also, enable Widescreen Support for the Collab diff so the BG matches the other diffs?
Metadata: Add "Katawa Shoujo" to tags (Even though you have the Japanese in the source, it would still be helpful to have the English in tags for an easier search
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: No Issues
AImod: First object is unsnapped in all Std diffs and 00:47:599 (1) is unsnapped in Normal - probably from when you changed the offset. Automatic resnap doesn't seem to like the first note after the offset when you do this for some reason, so fix these please

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Easy

00:07:077 (3) - NC here to follow a consistent NC pattern of every 4 beats
00:12:671 (4,1) - Swap NC here for the downbeat
00:16:168 (3,1) - ^
00:17:566 (1) - Slider tail is a more prominent piano note than the head or anything in the body and prominent notes should be clickable in most cases, so I would separate this into a 1/1 slider and circle. If you do this, put the NC on the single circle on the downbeat for consistency
00:21:063 (1,2) - Swap NC for the downbeat
00:27:356 (1) - All of a sudden your combos double in length to roughly 8 beats each - why? I'd NC here
00:28:755 (3) - Again, the more prominent sound is on the tail - consider reversing 00:28:056 (2,3) on the timeline. If you decide not to change, improve the blanket by moving the central grey node to [148,162]
00:30:154 (4,1) - Keep this NC pattern however - even though (1) has no special emphasis and the offset adjusting point is so marginal, 00:27:356 is a 5/4 measure. Since it's just one measure though, you don't need to change the time signature, so this is fine as it is
00:30:853 (1,2) - You can definitely improve this blanket, even with the low DS. Remove (1) and replace it with copy/paste (2) placed at [199,320]
00:33:649 (1) - NC for the downbeat
00:33:649 (3,4) - Move these up slightly to avoid the small overlap with the previous slider, and reblanket
00:35:747 (1,2) - Swap NC for the downbeat
00:38:544 (1) - Might seem silly, but for consistency, you should NC this as well since it occupies all of the following measure
00:38:544 (1,1,2) - DS is quite unequal here (0.86, 0.76) making this look untidy. Due to the low BPM I feel it's acceptable to break DS slightly here, so I would place the circle at [192,183] for symmetry (0.9x DS), and then adjust 00:42:739 (2,3,4) to return to 0.8x DS - Maintaining constant DS in Easy diffs is a Guideline, not a Rule, which I feel is acceptable to break in this case
00:44:127 (4) - Should be a clickable object to reset the kiai, so I'd change 00:43:780 (3,4) into a 1/2 slider and circle. If you do this, be sure the NC starts on the circle (downbeat+finish)
00:49:700 (1) - The downbeat at 00:50:398 has a stronger sound than the tail or head, so I would either separate this into a circle and 1/1 slider (and NC the slider), or, if you really want to keep this, move the red node so that the direction change occurs on the downbeat (and NC on the slider). Don't forget to reblanket here if you do this *in fact reblanket anyway, it's currently a little messy

Normal

Similar NC inconsistencies as in the Easy - what pattern are you following? Sometimes you NC every 4 beats, sometimes every 8, sometimes on strong notes and other times on weak notes. Try to find a consistent pattern and stick to it throughout
00:10:223 (3) - Consider splitting this slider up into circle + 1/2 slider, since you're mapping over the downbeat, which is a prominent piano note
00:11:972 (3) - ^ I'd split this into circle, 1/2 repeating slider, circle
00:14:419 (3) - ^ Again, mapping over prominent beats
00:16:168 (1) - Head and tail of the slider correspond to equally prominent beats, so both should be clickable
00:20:014 (4,5,6) - All of these sliders have the more prominent note on the tail and it feels very strange to play. Try something like this instead:
00:24:559 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 1/2 clicks might be a bit much for a Normal. Perhaps merge one or two of the circle pairs into 1/2 sliders?
00:26:307 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Too linear for my taste and quite plain, I'd see if you can add some direction change here for variety
00:30:853 (1,2,3) - Not necessarily flow-breaking, but quite out of place amongst the smooth flow you have throughout the map and nothing in the music really justifies the sudden direction changes. Consider making this smoother
00:33:299 (6,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:26:307 (6,1,2,3,4,5)
00:36:446 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Same as 00:24:559 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider adding some 1/2 sliders here for variety
00:38:544 (3) - Consider breaking this up into 1/2 slider and 1/1 slider so you can make the prominent note on the reverse clickable
00:43:433 (3,4,5,6,1) - Higher circle/slider ratio is more acceptable in the kiai (added difficulty) so if you were to keep any of the 1/2 circle patterns, keep this one
00:45:169 (2) - Slipt into circle + 1/2 slider to make the strong piano note in the body of (2) clickable

Collab

Might want to name the diff "Collab Hard" to give a better indication of difficulty, but this is just personal preference since the hardest diff in a set can use free naming
Spacing seems really random and inconsistent - e.g at 00:04:279 (1,2) you have a 1.50x DS jump to an almost unnoticeable background sound, whereas at 00:12:671 (2,3,1) you have a huge jump (1.71x) to a weaker note, immediately followed by the smallest jump in the section (1.07x) to one of the most prominent notes. This makes very little sense and makes the diff quite confusing to follow. This is just one instance - there are many more examples of inconsistent spacing throughout the map, so I would look through this again and ask yourself "does this jump/anti-jump make sense? What is it following in the music?"
00:04:279 (1) - Why NC just this one slider? I feel you can remove the NC here
00:09:874 (1) - ^ and also, the tail at 00:10:573 is a stronger beat, so should really be clickable
00:18:615 (3,2,3,4) - More strong beats on slider ends, please try repatterning this to make it more intuitive to play
00:34:698 (4) - Increase the curve slightly to improve the blanket - Central grey node to [325,62], tail node to [380,118]
00:38:194 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels kinda boring to just follow the same path back and forth - perhaps try something like this? (I reduced AR to show the full pattern) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3239700
00:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - I get you want to increase the difficulty, but you can't place clickable notes where there are no beats in the music. You could get the same effect by merging pairs of circles into 1/4 kick sliders, meaning that you still have the "stream" but are only clicking on prominent 1/2 notes
00:44:475 (1) - Start of the kiai is a prominent note with finish, so should really be clickable

MBomb's Salad

00:02:182 (1) - 00:03:230 (2) isn't a particularly prominent note, and aside from 00:10:573 (4) -, is the only place where dash is required in an intro which is very calm. I feel you should reduce the spacing here. Unless you want to move everything after, it might be easier to just move the first slider to the right, around x-304
00:14:419 (1,2) - Swap NC, since (2) is the more prominent note (and has the larger jump)
00:14:769 (1) - Feels like there should be a jump here, and also slightly higher spacing to 00:16:168 (3) so I would move (1,2) to x-96 or so
00:16:867 (4) - The next slider 00:18:965 (1) is on the border of requiring dash, so I'd move (4) to the left to make the jump more apparent. x-328 should do; you don't want to overdo it because of the upcoming direction change
00:23:510 (1) - Finish on 00:24:559 (1) means a bigger jump is required here, easiest solution is to move this repeat slider to around x-96
00:28:755 (3) - This note isn't as prominent as 00:27:706 (2) so I feel it should have slightly smaller spacing. Try x-304, since 00:29:105 (4) isn't exactly a weak note either, so spacing here could be increased slightly at the same time
00:30:853 (1) - 5.97x DS? That's pretty mean for a 1/4 beat in a Salad... I strongly advise you to reduce this to around 4.0x DS
00:33:649 (1) - Increase the spacing here for the downbeat, try x-160
00:39:243 (1) - Again, spacing could be increased here due to the prominent downbeat note. I'd Ctrl+G and move to x-104
00:43:086 (4,5) - I get that you want bigger jumps in the kiai, but these feel a tiny bit too much. I'd move them both x-16 towards each other. If you want a big jump, it should be to 00:44:822 (1) -, so you could also move 00:44:475 (6) to the left slightly, say x-128

This is all from me. Hopefully you find this mod helpful, but if you have any questions, feel free to get back to me and I'll do what I can to help.

Good luck! (:

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2015-06-11T12:22:15+00:00

JBHyperion's Mod

JBHyperion wrote:
Mod by - Magic Bomb -'s request:

General Comments:
Song Folder: No issues
Song Setup: Combo colours 1 and 3 are awfully similar, can you make them more distinct? Looks like you're following the hair colour of the girls in the bg image, so you could change one of them to "blonde" colour such as RGB 255,180,50. Also, enable Widescreen Support for the Collab diff so the BG matches the other diffs? Fix ~
Metadata: Add "Katawa Shoujo" to tags (Even though you have the Japanese in the source, it would still be helpful to have the English in tags for an easier search Fix ~
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: No Issues
AImod: First object is unsnapped in all Std diffs and 00:47:599 (1) is unsnapped in Normal - probably from when you changed the offset. Automatic resnap doesn't seem to like the first note after the offset when you do this for some reason, so fix these please Fix ~
Difficulty-Specific Comments:
Easy
00:07:077 (3) - NC here to follow a consistent NC pattern of every 4 beats Fix ~
00:12:671 (4,1) - Swap NC here for the downbeat Fix ~
00:16:168 (3,1) - ^ Fix ~
00:17:566 (1) - Slider tail is a more prominent piano note than the head or anything in the body and prominent notes should be clickable in most cases, so I would separate this into a 1/1 slider and circle. If you do this, put the NC on the single circle on the downbeat for consistency
00:21:063 (1,2) - Swap NC for the downbeat Fix ~
00:27:356 (1) - All of a sudden your combos double in length to roughly 8 beats each - why? I'd NC here Fix ~
00:28:755 (3) - Again, the more prominent sound is on the tail - consider reversing 00:28:056 (2,3) on the timeline. If you decide not to change, improve the blanket by moving the central grey node to [148,162] Fix ~
00:30:154 (4,1) - Keep this NC pattern however - even though (1) has no special emphasis and the offset adjusting point is so marginal, 00:27:356 is a 5/4 measure. Since it's just one measure though, you don't need to change the time signature, so this is fine as it is Fix ~
00:30:853 (1,2) - You can definitely improve this blanket, even with the low DS. Remove (1) and replace it with copy/paste (2) placed at [199,320]
00:33:649 (1) - NC for the downbeat Fix ~
00:33:649 (3,4) - Move these up slightly to avoid the small overlap with the previous slider, and reblanket Fix ~
00:35:747 (1,2) - Swap NC for the downbeat Fix ~
00:38:544 (1) - Might seem silly, but for consistency, you should NC this as well since it occupies all of the following measure Fix ~
00:38:544 (1,1,2) - DS is quite unequal here (0.86, 0.76) making this look untidy. Due to the low BPM I feel it's acceptable to break DS slightly here, so I would place the circle at [192,183] for symmetry (0.9x DS), and then adjust 00:42:739 (2,3,4) to return to 0.8x DS - Maintaining constant DS in Easy diffs is a Guideline, not a Rule, which I feel is acceptable to break in this case
00:44:127 (4) - Should be a clickable object to reset the kiai, so I'd change 00:43:780 (3,4) into a 1/2 slider and circle. If you do this, be sure the NC starts on the circle (downbeat+finish) Fix ~
00:49:700 (1) - The downbeat at 00:50:398 has a stronger sound than the tail or head, so I would either separate this into a circle and 1/1 slider (and NC the slider), or, if you really want to keep this, move the red node so that the direction change occurs on the downbeat (and NC on the slider). Don't forget to reblanket here if you do this *in fact reblanket anyway, it's currently a little messy Fix ~
Normal
Similar NC inconsistencies as in the Easy - what pattern are you following? Sometimes you NC every 4 beats, sometimes every 8, sometimes on strong notes and other times on weak notes. Try to find a consistent pattern and stick to it throughout
00:10:223 (3) - Consider splitting this slider up into circle + 1/2 slider, since you're mapping over the downbeat, which is a prominent piano note Fix ~
00:11:972 (3) - ^ I'd split this into circle, 1/2 repeating slider, circle Fix ~
00:14:419 (3) - ^ Again, mapping over prominent beats Fix ~
00:16:168 (1) - Head and tail of the slider correspond to equally prominent beats, so both should be clickable Fix ~
00:20:014 (4,5,6) - All of these sliders have the more prominent note on the tail and it feels very strange to play. Try something like this instead:
Fix ~
00:24:559 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 1/2 clicks might be a bit much for a Normal. Perhaps merge one or two of the circle pairs into 1/2 sliders? Fix ~
00:26:307 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Too linear for my taste and quite plain, I'd see if you can add some direction change here for variety Fix ~
00:30:853 (1,2,3) - Not necessarily flow-breaking, but quite out of place amongst the smooth flow you have throughout the map and nothing in the music really justifies the sudden direction changes. Consider making this smoother Fix ~
00:33:299 (6,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:26:307 (6,1,2,3,4,5) Fix ~
00:36:446 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Same as 00:24:559 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider adding some 1/2 sliders here for variety Fix ~
00:38:544 (3) - Consider breaking this up into 1/2 slider and 1/1 slider so you can make the prominent note on the reverse clickable Fix ~
00:43:433 (3,4,5,6,1) - Higher circle/slider ratio is more acceptable in the kiai (added difficulty) so if you were to keep any of the 1/2 circle patterns, keep this one
00:45:169 (2) - Slipt into circle + 1/2 slider to make the strong piano note in the body of (2) clickable Fix ~
Collab
Might want to name the diff "Collab Hard" to give a better indication of difficulty, but this is just personal preference since the hardest diff in a set can use free naming
Spacing seems really random and inconsistent - e.g at 00:04:279 (1,2) you have a 1.50x DS jump to an almost unnoticeable background sound, whereas at 00:12:671 (2,3,1) you have a huge jump (1.71x) to a weaker note, immediately followed by the smallest jump in the section (1.07x) to one of the most prominent notes. This makes very little sense and makes the diff quite confusing to follow. This is just one instance - there are many more examples of inconsistent spacing throughout the map, so I would look through this again and ask yourself "does this jump/anti-jump make sense? What is it following in the music?" Fix ~
00:04:279 (1) - Why NC just this one slider? I feel you can remove the NC here Fix ~
00:09:874 (1) - ^ and also, the tail at 00:10:573 is a stronger beat, so should really be clickable Fix ~
00:18:615 (3,2,3,4) - More strong beats on slider ends, please try repatterning this to make it more intuitive to play Fix ~
00:34:698 (4) - Increase the curve slightly to improve the blanket - Central grey node to [325,62], tail node to [380,118] Fix ~
00:38:194 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels kinda boring to just follow the same path back and forth - perhaps try something like this? (I reduced AR to show the full pattern) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3239700 Fix ~
00:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - I get you want to increase the difficulty, but you can't place clickable notes where there are no beats in the music. You could get the same effect by merging pairs of circles into 1/4 kick sliders, meaning that you still have the "stream" but are only clicking on prominent 1/2 notes Fix ~
00:44:475 (1) - Start of the kiai is a prominent note with finish, so should really be clickable Fix ~
This is all from me. Hopefully you find this mod helpful, but if you have any questions, feel free to get back to me and I'll do what I can to help.

Good luck! (: Thank you

ohh lol idk which part i did... but i think most of your mod i have fix it!

wow ~ thank you so much! I think my map got a bit improve now thanks to you !

Now waiting for MB Salad update

MBomb

MBomb 2015-06-11T16:04:00+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Mod by - Magic Bomb -'s request:

General Comments:
Song Folder: No issues
Song Setup: Combo colours 1 and 3 are awfully similar, can you make them more distinct? Looks like you're following the hair colour of the girls in the bg image, so you could change one of them to "blonde" colour such as RGB 255,180,50. Also, enable Widescreen Support for the Collab diff so the BG matches the other diffs? - Changed to what it was made to in the Standard diffs.
Metadata: Add "Katawa Shoujo" to tags (Even though you have the Japanese in the source, it would still be helpful to have the English in tags for an easier search
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: No Issues
AImod: First object is unsnapped in all Std diffs and 00:47:599 (1) is unsnapped in Normal - probably from when you changed the offset. Automatic resnap doesn't seem to like the first note after the offset when you do this for some reason, so fix these please
MBomb's Salad
00:02:182 (1) - 00:03:230 (2) isn't a particularly prominent note, and aside from 00:10:573 (4) -, is the only place where dash is required in an intro which is very calm. I feel you should reduce the spacing here. Unless you want to move everything after, it might be easier to just move the first slider to the right, around x-304 - Dash wasn't required here anyway but lowered the distance slightly, only 280 though.
00:14:419 (1,2) - Swap NC, since (2) is the more prominent note (and has the larger jump) - I currently have the NC pattern setup so there are NCs after what feels like a new "line" in the song, so not changed.
00:14:769 (1) - Feels like there should be a jump here, and also slightly higher spacing to 00:16:168 (3) so I would move (1,2) to x-96 or so - Done.
00:16:867 (4) - The next slider 00:18:965 (1) is on the border of requiring dash, so I'd move (4) to the left to make the jump more apparent. x-328 should do; you don't want to overdo it because of the upcoming direction change - Done.
00:23:510 (1) - Finish on 00:24:559 (1) means a bigger jump is required here, easiest solution is to move this repeat slider to around x-96 - This would make it a borderline normal jump, moved to x:80 instead to avoid that.
00:28:755 (3) - This note isn't as prominent as 00:27:706 (2) so I feel it should have slightly smaller spacing. Try x-304, since 00:29:105 (4) isn't exactly a weak note either, so spacing here could be increased slightly at the same time - Actually moved it a bit further back.
00:30:853 (1) - 5.97x DS? That's pretty mean for a 1/4 beat in a Salad... I strongly advise you to reduce this to around 4.0x DS - Tfw accidentally left a note in from when I was snapping timing points... removed instead, I don't think this note fits at all.
00:33:649 (1) - Increase the spacing here for the downbeat, try x-160 - Moved further, to x:128.
00:39:243 (1) - Again, spacing could be increased here due to the prominent downbeat note. I'd Ctrl+G and move to x-104 - Done.
00:43:086 (4,5) - I get that you want bigger jumps in the kiai, but these feel a tiny bit too much. I'd move them both x-16 towards each other. If you want a big jump, it should be to 00:44:822 (1) -, so you could also move 00:44:475 (6) to the left slightly, say x-128 - Sorry but I actually think the opposite here, this jump feels a bit small for the emphasis of the music here, so I increased distance. I did however follow your other suggestion of making the jump to 1 bigger.

This is all from me. Hopefully you find this mod helpful, but if you have any questions, feel free to get back to me and I'll do what I can to help.

Good luck! (:

Thanks for the mod! I'm just gonna make a few general points myself (No kudosu please).

General

I think it would be a good idea to snap the preview point to 00:23:510 - , rather than having a tiny bit of silence beforehand.
Whilst this song is unrelated to their storylines, add Lily Satou Emi Ibarazaki Hanako Ikezawa to tags, as they appear in the map's background.

Keep in mind that any of these changes you do take need to be added to my map as well, as I didn't apply them in case you didn't want to change.

And here's the .osu.

Salad

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Katawa Shoujo Cinematics - Shizune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 23451
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Three Stars
TitleUnicode:Three Stars
Artist:NicolArmarfi
ArtistUnicode:NicolArmarfi
Creator:Shana Aisaka
Version:MBomb's Salad
Source:かたわ少女
Tags:- Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios Katawa Shoujo
BeatmapID:714772
BeatmapSetID:43530

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"6688_katawa_shoujo_hd_wallpaper.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
2182,699.300699300699,4,2,1,20,1,0
4979,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
6727,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
6902,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
10923,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
11272,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
11622,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
17216,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
18965,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
24559,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
24734,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
30503,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
30678,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
30852,699.300699300699,4,2,1,30,1,0
42022,740.740740740741,4,2,1,30,1,0
42022,-100,3,2,1,30,0,1
42206,-100,3,2,1,35,0,1
42392,694.444444444444,4,2,1,35,1,1
42739,694.444444444444,4,2,1,35,1,1
44130,-100,3,2,1,35,0,1
44301,-100,3,2,1,50,0,1
44648,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
44822,694.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
44822,-100,3,2,1,40,0,1
46905,-100,3,2,1,40,0,1
47078,-100,3,2,1,50,0,1
47599,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
47957,697.674418604651,4,2,1,30,1,0
48305,697.674418604651,4,2,1,30,1,0
49002,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
49700,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
50398,697.674418604651,4,2,1,40,1,0
50398,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
51095,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
51793,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 45,88,228
Combo3 : 128,64,0
Combo4 : 255,255,128

[HitObjects]
280,192,2182,6,0,P|216:160|240:96,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,3230,2,0,L|368:152,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,4279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,4979,6,0,P|400:144|352:96,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,6028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,6377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,6727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,7077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,7426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,7776,6,0,L|320:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,8475,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,8825,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,192,9524,6,0,L|112:184,1,18.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,9874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,10223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,10573,2,0,P|472:128|376:96,1,300,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,12321,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,192,12671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,13021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,13370,2,0,L|208:128,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,14419,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,14769,2,0,L|32:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,15468,2,0,L|256:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,16168,2,0,L|480:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,16867,2,0,P|168:128|280:80,1,375
488,192,18965,6,0,L|360:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,20014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,20363,2,0,L|96:152|96:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21063,2,0,L|192:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,21762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,192,23510,6,0,L|16:152,2,75
336,192,24559,6,0,L|400:152,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,25608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25958,2,0,L|192:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,26657,2,0,L|448:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,27356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,27706,2,0,L|32:152,2,75,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,28755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,29105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,29454,2,0,L|224:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,30154,2,0,L|96:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,30853,6,0,L|304:152,1,75
192,192,31551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,31900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,32250,2,0,L|288:152,1,75
448,192,32949,2,0,L|384:152,1,75
128,192,33649,6,0,L|64:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,34698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,35397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,35747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,36096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,36446,6,0,L|288:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,37145,2,0,L|64:152,1,75
208,192,37845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,192,38544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,38893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,39243,6,0,P|197:183|343:190,1,300,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,41341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,42022,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,192,42392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,42739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,43086,2,0,L|80:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,43780,2,0,L|280:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,44475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,44822,6,0,L|464:152,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,45516,2,0,L|160:152,1,75
432,192,46210,2,0,L|496:152,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,46905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,47599,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,48305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,48653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,49002,2,0,L|224:152,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,50398,2,0,P|392:116|288:40,1,300,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2015-06-11T21:46:08+00:00

Meh. Mod post below this post.

Last edited by BeatofIke 2015-06-11T21:52:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2015-06-11T21:47:09+00:00

Polishing time! Expect lots of nazi mods.

[General]

I recommend that you re-do most of the beizer sliders and use the new circular slider algorithm (3-point slider). That would definitely polish your map better.
The timing still feels off to me. I was able to SS the map though (most likely because of low OD orz). For starters, I feel that the first and second red timing sections should have a BPM is 85.85 with 1 or 2 offset changes:
Image and Code
```
2182,698.89341875364,4,2,1,20,1,0
30836,698.89341875364,4,2,1,20,1,0
47603,698.89341875364,4,2,1,20,1,0
50392,708.800945067927,4,2,1,20,1,0
```

[Easy]

00:02:182 (1,2) - You can make each of these sliders symmetrical. Try the code below:

Code

364,192,2182,6,0,B|412:168|460:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,272,3580,2,0,B|412:296|364:272,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:07:077 (1) - Try removing the respect arrow and move this slider at 00:07:776 and add a hit circle here. It follows the piano better o3o.
00:08:825 (2) - How about adding a 1/1 slider instead? It helps capture the piano sound at 00:09:524.
00:12:671 (1) - Pretty much the same suggestion as 00:07:077.
00:21:063 (1,2) - I don't recommend stacking 00:19:664 (2,1) too soon in easy difficulty. I would just separate them like this:
Code
```
220,284,18965,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,232,19664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,20363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,21063,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,100,21762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
```
00:23:860 (3) - If fixed above, move this slider at 456|52 to fix spacing.

00:24:559 (1) - Make this slider smoother. It adds a nice polish hehe:

Code

412,120,24559,6,0,B|356:132|320:96|320:96|284:60|228:72,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:30:853 (1,2) - I guess....stack the end slider with 00:30:154 (5) by re-arranging the blanket sliders some how. Try this:
Code
```
192,328,30852,6,0,B|240:360|288:328,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,261,32250,2,0,B|193:229|145:261,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:36:446 (1,2) - I wouldn't overlap notes like this. Try reversing the curve so it blankets well with 1:
Code
```
228,104,36446,5,2,0:0:0:0:
297,62,37145,2,0,P|309:110|292:156,1,100
```
00:38:544 (3) - Since circular sliders exist now, you can make perfect circular shaped sliders by using 3 anchor points:
Image and Code
```
220,192,38544,2,0,P|66:248|102:88,1,400
```
00:44:127 (4) - Move this circle at 344|212.

[Normal]

I recommend re-mapping this difficulty using 1.0x distance snap spacing for this difficulty. You usually want to adjust the distance snap multiplier so that hit circles only one beat apart (1/1) don't overlap each other (you did this in your Easy difficulty, which is good). It's not unrankable, but your map would definitely look more polished if you consider it. The map is only 50 seconds long, so it shouldn't be too much of a hassle. What you did at 00:25:258 (3,4,5) is a good example of 1.0x spacing and you can see that the notes do not overlap each other, so it looks cleaner. Also, this is a Normal difficulty, so having bigger spacing is actually more beneficial o3o.

[Collab]

00:05:328 (1) - There are no sounds playing at the end of this slider. Consider replacing this slider with a hit circle.
00:09:612 (4) - This note sounds like 1/12 to me. I guess move this hitcircle at 00:09:582. Alternately, you could simply delete the note as well.

00:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - uhhh...why? Here's an better example of a better pattern:[/b]

Code

256,192,42022,5,4,0:0:0:0:
291,131,42392,2,0,L|316:87,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,28,42739,2,0,L|232:28,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,87,43086,2,0,L|221:130,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43433,2,0,L|281:235,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,294,43780,2,0,L|195:294,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,234,44127,2,0,L|186:190,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,136,44475,1,0,0:0:0:0:

..and other notes/stuff that could be polished imo.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-06-11T22:26:41+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:

[Collab]

00:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - uhhh...why? Here's an better example of a better pattern:[/b]

Code

256,192,42022,5,4,0:0:0:0:
291,131,42392,2,0,L|316:87,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,28,42739,2,0,L|232:28,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,87,43086,2,0,L|221:130,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43433,2,0,L|281:235,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,294,43780,2,0,L|195:294,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,234,44127,2,0,L|186:190,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,136,44475,1,0,0:0:0:0:

This is my bad - I intended to suggest this 1/4 kick timeline, but I guess the screenshot I used to explain myself in PM was taken a little too literally lol. Apologies Shana D:

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2015-06-12T05:07:45+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
General
I think it would be a good idea to snap the preview point to 00:23:510 - , rather than having a tiny bit of silence beforehand.
Whilst this song is unrelated to their storylines, add Lily Satou Emi Ibarazaki Hanako Ikezawa to tags, as they appear in the map's background.

Keep in mind that any of these changes you do take need to be added to my map as well, as I didn't apply them in case you didn't want to change.

Okay i already change the preview point~ and add some tags ~ Thank you

BeatofIke wrote:
Polishing time! Expect lots of nazi mods.

[General]
I recommend that you re-do most of the beizer sliders and use the new circular slider algorithm (3-point slider). That would definitely polish your map better.
The timing still feels off to me. I was able to SS the map though (most likely because of low OD orz). For starters, I feel that the first and second red timing sections should have a BPM is 85.85 with 1 or 2 offset changes:
Image and Code
2182,698.89341875364,4,2,1,20,1,0
30836,698.89341875364,4,2,1,20,1,0
47603,698.89341875364,4,2,1,20,1,0
50392,708.800945067927,4,2,1,20,1,0
[Easy]
00:02:182 (1,2) - You can make each of these sliders symmetrical. Try the code below:
Code
364,192,2182,6,0,B|412:168|460:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,272,3580,2,0,B|412:296|364:272,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:07:077 (1) - Try removing the respect arrow and move this slider at 00:07:776 and add a hit circle here. It follows the piano better o3o.
00:08:825 (2) - How about adding a 1/1 slider instead? It helps capture the piano sound at 00:09:524.
00:12:671 (1) - Pretty much the same suggestion as 00:07:077.
00:21:063 (1,2) - I don't recommend stacking 00:19:664 (2,1) too soon in easy difficulty. I would just separate them like this:
Code
220,284,18965,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,232,19664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,20363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,21063,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,100,21762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
00:23:860 (3) - If fixed above, move this slider at 456|52 to fix spacing.
00:24:559 (1) - Make this slider smoother. It adds a nice polish hehe:
Code
412,120,24559,6,0,B|356:132|320:96|320:96|284:60|228:72,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:30:853 (1,2) - I guess....stack the end slider with 00:30:154 (5) by re-arranging the blanket sliders some how. Try this:
Code
192,328,30852,6,0,B|240:360|288:328,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,261,32250,2,0,B|193:229|145:261,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:36:446 (1,2) - I wouldn't overlap notes like this. Try reversing the curve so it blankets well with 1:
Code
228,104,36446,5,2,0:0:0:0:
297,62,37145,2,0,P|309:110|292:156,1,100
00:38:544 (3) - Since circular sliders exist now, you can make perfect circular shaped sliders by using 3 anchor points:
Image and Code
220,192,38544,2,0,P|66:248|102:88,1,400
00:44:127 (4) - Move this circle at 344|212. All fix here~
[Normal]
I recommend re-mapping this difficulty using 1.0x distance snap spacing for this difficulty. You usually want to adjust the distance snap multiplier so that hit circles only one beat apart (1/1) don't overlap each other (you did this in your Easy difficulty, which is good). It's not unrankable, but your map would definitely look more polished if you consider it. The map is only 50 seconds long, so it shouldn't be too much of a hassle. What you did at 00:25:258 (3,4,5) is a good example of 1.0x spacing and you can see that the notes do not overlap each other, so it looks cleaner. Also, this is a Normal difficulty, so having bigger spacing is actually more beneficial o3o. umm... i already fix it and make the distance better and some notes and pattern ..

[Collab]
00:05:328 (1) - There are no sounds playing at the end of this slider. Consider replacing this slider with a hit circle.
00:09:612 (4) - This note sounds like 1/12 to me. I guess move this hitcircle at 00:09:582. Alternately, you could simply delete the note as well.
00:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - uhhh...why? Here's an better example of a better pattern:[/b]
Code
256,192,42022,5,4,0:0:0:0:
291,131,42392,2,0,L|316:87,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,28,42739,2,0,L|232:28,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,87,43086,2,0,L|221:130,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43433,2,0,L|281:235,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,294,43780,2,0,L|195:294,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,234,44127,2,0,L|186:190,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,136,44475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
..and other notes/stuff that could be polished imo.
All fix here~

Thank you

JBHyperion wrote

JBHyperion wrote:
[list][*]00:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - uhhh...why? Here's an better example of a better pattern:[/b]
This is my bad - I intended to suggest this 1/4 kick timeline, but I guess the screenshot I used to explain myself in PM was taken a little too literally lol. Apologies Shana D: haha its okay

[/quote]

Okay i already fix all.. if i forgot something please tell me in-game or here!

UPDATE!

DragonSlayer96

418 posts

Joined July 2012

DragonSlayer96 2015-06-20T02:55:26+00:00

General

Though I do not like stepping on toes, it does seem that timing is slightly off in some places such as 00:09:524 - (I can hear the note roughly at 00:09:518 - ) and here at 00:16:517 - (i can heat it roughly at 00:16:555 - )

I noticed かたわ少女 translates to Katawa Shoujo which you have in the tags. Why not add <Disability Girls> to the tags also because that is the english version of the source and some people might know it by that, not Katawa Shoujo (which you have a link on the original post that has this on it so I wonder why you would miss this anyway)

Salad

00:09:524 (1) - I thought this note was a triple so I slowed down the speed to 25% to see if it was a triple and noticed what I mentioned in general.

00:43:086 (4,5) - The music suggest a bigger jump to me
00:43:780 (5) - maybe point this to 00:44:475 (6) - more because the music a tad bit more calmer and - though you can walk from 5 to 6 - it gives the impression that you have to dash to catch it and it is unfitting from 5 to 6 in my eyes.
00:44:822 (1,2,3) - if it doesn't make timing jumps/hypers i would suggest a slightly bigger gaps for both of these jumps due to the music.

MBomb

MBomb 2015-06-23T15:58:35+00:00

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

Salad
00:09:524 (1) - I thought this note was a triple so I slowed down the speed to 25% to see if it was a triple and noticed what I mentioned in general.

00:43:086 (4,5) - The music suggest a bigger jump to me - Increased distance.
00:43:780 (5) - maybe point this to 00:44:475 (6) - more because the music a tad bit more calmer and - though you can walk from 5 to 6 - it gives the impression that you have to dash to catch it and it is unfitting from 5 to 6 in my eyes. - Done.
00:44:822 (1,2,3) - if it doesn't make timing jumps/hypers i would suggest a slightly bigger gaps for both of these jumps due to the music. - Done.

Thanks for the mod! Shana, I'll find another person to do a timing check, so don't worry about that.

Salad

osu file format v14

[General]
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Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2015-06-23T16:13:23+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

Salad
00:09:524 (1) - I thought this note was a triple so I slowed down the speed to 25% to see if it was a triple and noticed what I mentioned in general.

00:43:086 (4,5) - The music suggest a bigger jump to me - Increased distance.
00:43:780 (5) - maybe point this to 00:44:475 (6) - more because the music a tad bit more calmer and - though you can walk from 5 to 6 - it gives the impression that you have to dash to catch it and it is unfitting from 5 to 6 in my eyes. - Done.
00:44:822 (1,2,3) - if it doesn't make timing jumps/hypers i would suggest a slightly bigger gaps for both of these jumps due to the music. - Done.

Thanks for the mod! Shana, I'll find another person to do a timing check, so don't worry about that.

Salad

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Uhh okay thank you and sorry i forgot to tell you about the mod and will update it tomorrow cuz now im going to sleep

Okay done ~

UPDATE!

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,565 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2015-06-27T22:07:56+00:00

Timing check requested by MB. I'm starting to hate pianos, but this piece was quite short. Timing looks a bit more complex than it is atm. Check it out:

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I hope it's precise enough!

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Shana Aisaka 2015-06-28T01:03:49+00:00

Deif wrote:

Timing check requested by MB. I'm starting to hate pianos, but this piece was quite short. Timing looks a bit more complex than it is atm. Check it out:

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I hope it's precise enough!

Thank you so much ! Will update this night cuz now im working

Tyrell

425 posts

Joined July 2014

Tyrell 2015-06-29T07:31:41+00:00

Salad

00:03:230 (2) - Would reverse this slider for better flow. If you take this suggestion move the following note a bit to the right so the distance isn't too much.
00:16:168 (1) - Would suggest a NC here
00:21:063 (4) - would have this slider going to the right for better flow as well. If you take the suggestion you could have the next note be on the left end about x:152
00:49:002 (1) - Would suggest a NC here as well

Great salad. Didn't find much wrong other than minor personal recommendations, Very well done MB.

MBomb

MBomb 2015-06-30T15:41:55+00:00

Tyrell wrote:

Salad
00:03:230 (2) - Would reverse this slider for better flow. If you take this suggestion move the following note a bit to the right so the distance isn't too much. - The music here sounds like this kinda flow should fit.
00:16:168 (1) - Would suggest a NC here - I'm having it as one NC per "line" of the song (so for example if it was vocals, this would be on the same line).
00:21:063 (4) - would have this slider going to the right for better flow as well. If you take the suggestion you could have the next note be on the left end about x:152 - Sorry, I prefer this how it is, flow feels fine to me.
00:49:002 (1) - Would suggest a NC here as well - I feel the only place an NC would really fit here is 00:50:398 (7) - , and I'd prefer not to have single note combos, so I'm leaving this how it is, sorry.

Great salad. Didn't find much wrong other than minor personal recommendations, Very well done MB.

Thanks for the mod!

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2015-07-26T15:37:09+00:00

RIP again

MBomb

MBomb 2015-07-28T00:13:03+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
RIP again

Ikr

Shana Aisaka

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Shana Aisaka 2015-08-13T09:15:29+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
RIP again

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
BeatofIke wrote:
RIP again
Ikr

Ohh gosh I'm so sorry didn't online much and there's no one wants to mod anymore...

#Update

MBomb

MBomb 2015-10-11T22:38:32+00:00

Don't worry Shana, ranking will be soon, I promise <3 Updated one thing in my gd in an IRC with JBH. I've asked another BN to check tomorrow, too

Code

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Katawa Shoujo Cinematics - Shizune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 23510
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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Title:Three Stars
TitleUnicode:Three Stars
Artist:NicolArmarfi
ArtistUnicode:NicolArmarfi
Creator:Shana Aisaka
Version:MBomb's Salad
Source:かたわ少女
Tags:- Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios Katawa Shoujo  Lily Satou Emi Ibarazaki Hanako Ikezawa
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Shana Aisaka

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Shana Aisaka 2016-10-11T05:33:38+00:00

Again Revive! @@ i have already update for Magic Bomb CTB

UPDATE!!

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Shana Aisaka 2016-10-11T05:50:12+00:00

holy damn the audio cannot be added anymore ? zzz

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