Alright! It's Fixed!!
UPDATE!!
UPDATE!!
This^^ I would love a mod from him in my map.KuronumaSawako wrote:
Niva mod so pro
Arigatou :3BeatofIke wrote:
Thanks for the kudosu! STAR~
lol thanks XD will fix when i got time =w=''JoJo wrote:
Hi meimeichan!
Sorry for delay >_<
Prepare to mod but..... Your timing is off completely.........
Try this:
1.BPM 85.800 OFFSET 2172
Yes only 1 timing point. I will ask kanpakyin to recheck the timing.
After fixing feel free to call me back at anytime and I'll do full mod!
Star for now! >A</
JoJo wrote:
Hi meimei-chan again :>
OK~ Don't kudosu this since I have already get 2 from last post.[General]
- Purple - Unrankable stuff.
- Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
- Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[Collab]
- Reset your timing section according to this image.↓
[attachment=1:523a7]{Y9_512FSK@5[3SC4TE4VIH.jpg[/attachment:523a7]Select 4/4 common and add another timing section on 00:30:843 (4/4) to fix the downbeat for all diffs. Offset has no change so do not need resnapping.- Volume setting is too low. Sometimes players determine whether they have caught the notes on beat by hitsound so.
- By the way add a mute sliderslide hitsound since this song is quiet but ruined by noisy sliderslide.
- I don't know why you have set fountain effect on 00:44:829, not really fit the music.
- Add storyboard of mapper's ID for different parts. Just suggestion.
[Normal]
- 00:06:813 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
- 00:13:360 (4) - New combo I guess.
- 00:29:444 (1,2) - Switch new combo.
- 00:38:185 (1,4) - ^ For map reading and downbeat. Then remove new combo on 00:40:283 (1).
[Easy]
- 0.8x spacing looks not good for gameplay. All notes are end to end. (Just comment.)
- 00:04:969 (5,1) - Switch new combo.
- 00:07:766 (4,1) - I prefer switching new combo here. Then looks you have to fix the spacing between them.
- 00:16:507 (1,2) - Little spacing issue I guess.
That's it~ Good luck and I'm looking forward to your 1st ranked map! Go go go~
- Same to Normal. 1.0x DS is much better than 0.8.
- 00:24:497 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
- 00:32:241 (2,3) - Fix the spacing here (Try move slider 3 some grids left).
- 00:33:640 (3,4) - Try to avoid overlap.
- 00:37:137 (1,2) - ^ Same, looks not good, try something like this↓
SPOILER[attachment=0:523a7]$2A$9G)68DBL00`}O~VX{AP.jpg[/attachment:523a7]
Cilvery wrote:
Hi~ <request from my queue>
[Easy]
00:06:367 - add whistle
00:11:262 - ^
00:36:437 - ^
00:37:137 - remove whistle
00:37:836 - add whistle
[Normal]
00:09:514 - add whistle
[Collab]
00:10:913 - add finish or whistle
00:11:262 - ^
00:11:612 - ^
00:11:962 - add whistle
00:13:011 - ^
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good luck~
Ayu wrote:
From my modding queue~
[Easy]
You use a lot of basic patterns, nothing wrong with that. Although you should work on your small sliders.
00:02:172 (1) - Maybe make sliders like this more like; http://puu.sh/BxdA Fix
00:03:570 (2) - For this, copy paste (1) and Ctrl+J & Ctrl+R Okay
furthermore nothing wrong with this difficulty. lol thx anyway =w=''
[Normal]
I advice to don't make overlaps like 00:07:766 (5,6). Use a bigger spacing so they don't overlap.
The song has a BPM of 85 only, so there's nothing wrong with using a distance spacing of 1.2x for Normal. Actually i don't really quite understand what is overlap means \o/ =A='' I tried my best though @w@"
00:04:969 (1) - Not sure if this is supposed to be an arc, but 2 anchors should be enough. what?
00:04:969 (1,2) - You could also make it like this: http://puu.sh/Bxgn (2 anchors instead of 3 on (1) and I lowered the anchor from (2))
00:16:158 (6) - This slider doesn't feels right to me. It's fine to me though XD
00:26:297 (6) - This slider is pretty ugly. Try to just make a normal slider with a bow. Okay
00:27:346 - 00:37:486 - A bit too much straight, if you ask me. Try to make it more smooth. Okay
00:40:633 (5) - Slider end overlaps (3) Fix
00:42:381 (2,2) - You shouldn't use red-anchors at a song like this. The song is way too slow paced for these kind of sliders. Okay
00:49:724 (4) - Ugly slider. The anchors aren't placed in a good way and the red anchor at the slider end is totally unnecessary Fix
[Collab]
00:08:815 (3,4) - Just make a single slider out of this; http://puu.sh/BxjW http://puu.sh/BxjZ Fix
00:30:144 (2,3) - ^ Fix
00:32:591 (6) - Like I mentioned before, This song is too slow paced for sliders like this. Okay
00:40:283 (6,7) - Put a note on 00:40:283 and make a slider from 00:40:633 to 00:41:332 Okay
00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Use less spacing and try to make it more pretty; http://puu.sh/BxlB Fix
Suggestion; Make a Storyboard with the names for collab, so everyone can see who mapped which part. Okay
[Overall]
The beatmap needs work before it's worth a bubble. Try to work on your sliders. Here's a nice thread about sliders: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
Good luck with your beatmap Thank you :3
kurohana wrote:
m4m :3General
I'm not sure about kiai times... but this is up to you :3 It's okay to meNormal
00:03:220 (2) - maybe like this? Fix
00:16:158 (6) - new combo Fix
and use soft-sliderslide, it will sound much better :3
good luck :3 Thank you
Taris wrote:
Random modalso my firstSince this is your 1st mod i give u KUDOS lol
Items in BOLD are my comments / What I think about the map
Items in Blue are recommended
Items in Purple are unrankable
Regular text is just suggestion / nazi
[General]
If you do not mind , you should add a hard too because the song is very short No needed @w@"
[Easy]
The diff is okay , But you can put more variation on your slider shapes and make some look nicer.
00:19:654 (2) - Line up with 00:16:857 (4) - ? Fix?
00:36:437 (2) - Move it down 4 boxes no
00:43:780 (3) - This is really break rhythm >.< Try this rhythm instead Fix
[Normal]
00:28:395 (3) - Move 4 boxes down
00:32:241 (4) - ^
00:16:158 (1) - This slider look a bit ugly , especially the curve Fix?
00:41:332 (6) - Move this to the left a bit
[Hard]
00:40:283 (6) - Spacing is off here a little. Opps Forgot to fix it.
00:46:927 (1) - Is there a reason for this new combo here?
Mapset is alright. Good luck! Thank you
Mapian101 wrote:
I just thought id say that this is one of my favourite beatmaps so far on osu. i have played over 1200 songs and this one has a special spot as one of the top. <3 I hope there is a chance for this to get ranked. ~Niax
hahaha yeah XD anyway I'm gotta make this map ranked !BeatofIke wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/1341536
It's been ages lol XD
Kirino Kousaka wrote:
Hello Shana-chan~! >w< Modding from in-game request~
- [General]
[color=#FF4000]Sorry about the nazi stuff, but it will help on aesthetics :3
- Reduce all your hitsound's volume by 5% to 10%? They're too loud too fit the bgm imo
- Maybe you should remove the kiai fountain placed on 00:44:829. I kinda don't like it, but it's up to you.
- Turn your sliderslide's sound into silent, they're making weird sounds that don't fit the music :<
[Easy]- 00:42:032 (1) - Move this 1 grid downward so it would be blanketed nicely by 00:38:535 (4).
- 00:49:724 (3) - Turn it into this, to blanket the previous slider's end nicely :3
[Normal]- 00:18:255 (4) - Turn it into this. If you did, fix the spacing of the next circles.
- 00:22:102 (1) - Move this tick 3 grids to the left and 1 grid downwards.
[Collab]
clear~
Nice map so star~ Good luck Shana-chan >w<
smallboat wrote:
hello thank mod my map ^^
this time I mod your map
i can speak little english,sorry ><
easy
00:23:500 (3) - add note? add
normal
00:22:102 (1) - +hitsound? add
collab
00:49:549 (8) - add note ? no..
00:51:472 (4) - note + whistle sound no..
your song is good
Thank you for your mod Easy no change but Normal and Collab i fix someNatsu wrote:
Easy:SPOILER00:19:654 (2,3,1) - try another pattern is so confuse for new players check why:
00:44:130 2 grids right for be in curve with (2,3)
Normal:SPOILER00:04:269 move it to x:176 y:64 looks better with 2 and 3
00:11:262 (1,2,3) - make this pattern more curved since 1 and 2 in line look ugly imo
00:49:724 big slider then imo you need to be creative make it more fun :3
Collab:SPOILERadd circle 00:09:689
Sorry about poor mod since i dont see anything wrong that are just suggestions
lol ! >w<! anyway Arigatou ! ^^ikari_kyon wrote:
I hate the gif on your sig, take stars and remove it
newtoniorock8 wrote:
hi ~ #modreqs ~ Hi Thanks for mod ^^''SPOILERThanks ! Added !uhmm . pls use this one for the sliderslide >.< soft-sliderslide
Easy
00:08:815 (4) - / 00:20:353 (3) - add whistle ~ >.< fix ~
Normal
00:04:969 / 00:46:227 (3) - add finish ~ fix ~
00:20:703 (5) - remove this slider then add a hitobject here 00:21:053 >.< ermm no?
00:51:472 (2) - remove this ~ fix ~
Collab
00:12:661 (2) - / 00:43:430 (1) - / 00:44:130 (5) - / 00:48:675 (5) - add whistle ~ fix all ~SPOILERthats all >.< Goodluck ~ Nice Collab :33 Thank you >///<!!
Lanturn wrote:
Hello from " https://osu.ppy.sh/p/mod "
The roulette has chosen YOUR MAP to be my next mod! *Background Cheering and Applause!*
[General]
Tags:
Add: Disability Girls | As its the English name of the game, and it says right in your little picture on your beatmap listing
Lead-in Time: I don't believe you really need lead-in time for this song as the first note hits more than 2 seconds later. If you want though, you can make your lead-in time 828, so the first note will hit exactly 3 seconds after the song loads. (If you want 4 seconds, use 1828)
Sounds: Why not use a silent slider-slide? I personally think it fits with this song: http://puu.sh/2HHgJ.wav |
[Easy]
00:32:241 (2,3,4) - There is a little bit of a gap between each of these notes.
00:42:032 (1) - A bit loud for the volume you lowered before this. Maybe lower it by 10-20 and use what you have currently for the next notes?
[Normal]
Raise the settings up a bit. There is quite a gap between this difficulty and the collab. HP Drain / OD could easily go up by 1 more
Also I think the Distance between these notes is a bit too small.. 1.0 would have been better
Volume: No volume should go below 15-20% unless its the end of a spinner or slider. I would highly suggest raising the overall volume of this song by at least 5-10%
00:22:102 (1) - This slider doesn't seem needed.. delete it?
00:30:144 (2) - Volume at the end of this slider seems a bit too quiet, Raise it by 10%
[Collab]
Wa.... there's a video to this? Why isn't this on your Easy/Normal Difficulties?!?!? Add them!
00:04:269 (1,2) - Why not just combine these two into one slider? It would honestly play better, also check the volume and such like I suggested before
00:06:717 (6) - Volume here as well doesn't really need a decrease. Seems pointless
00:09:689 (4) - this piano note hits an 1/8th earlier. I realize you don't want to use 1/8ths, but this 1/4 is just hitting air at this point.. remove?
00:24:374 (3) - again. This note hits air.....
00:32:241 (5,6) - these would be better as two 1/2 sliders instead of a slider + circle to match the piano.
The rest of the song feels a bit overmapped, but I won't dig into it anymore. I'll leave it up to you to decide what or what not to remove.
00:50:773 (3,4) - A bit too much for a simple song. If you want to use the 1/4 here, then at least flip the slider to end near the 1/4 note.
Sorry for the short mod, good luck!
270,87,34689,2,0,B|322:66|363:103,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,159,35388,2,0,B|252:173|241:228,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,237,36088,6,0,B|350:284|405:278,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,199,36787,2,0,B|422:153|394:104,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,150,37486,2,0,B|282:118|233:146,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,212,38185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
[General][Easy]
- tags suggetion:
Four Leaf Studios Fix[Normal]
- 00:28:745 (5,6) - blanket correctly Err what? can you explain it to me?
- 00:30:843 (1,2) - ^
- 00:32:241 (2,3) - avoid overlap Fix
- 00:33:640 (3,4) - blanket correctly
- 00:38:535 (4) - suggetion
- 00:46:227 (6,1) - avoid overlap Fix
- 00:08:465 (6,2,3) - avoid overlap Fix
- 00:18:955 (1,2,3) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
- 00:25:948 (5,6) - not stack is better for good flow Fix
- 00:44:829 (1,2) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
- 00:47:626 (1,2) - not good flow Fix
[Collab]good relax map <3
- 00:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - conform DS
- 00:34:689~00:38:185- you can blanket more correctly. how about this? Fix
SPOILER270,87,34689,2,0,B|322:66|363:103,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,159,35388,2,0,B|252:173|241:228,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,237,36088,6,0,B|350:284|405:278,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,199,36787,2,0,B|422:153|394:104,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,150,37486,2,0,B|282:118|233:146,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,212,38185,1,0,0:0:0:0:- 00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make more symmetric (and I suggest to increase DS) Nothing wrong here
- 00:47:976 (2,3,4) - curve more for good flow
~Good Luck~
xLoupGarou wrote:
I'll give a a star instead . . . btw the map is fine to me