452,96,37453,1,0
400,60,37802,5,2

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi~ my mod for this map~(but short... T.T)
Nyan.... :3 Nyaan !! >w<"

General

- disabke letterbox in break to all diff.... Opps ~ I forgot about that . >.<" Fix ~

Easy

AR -1 okay ~

Normal

00:23:799 - add a circle here? Nice idea~
00:40:244 - add a note here.. okay ~ >w<"

Collab

Seems good... Arigatou


Now, I'll give star and take my leave....

Silver:
SliderBorder : 211,211,211

Gold:
SliderBorder : 254,239,114

1. 00:02:171 (1,2,1,2,3) - I don't quite get your whistle pattern here, although they sounds fine. The piano hits high note every 2/1, so in my opinion, it's better to keep the whistling consistent at 2/1 here
2. 00:07:055 (3) - Definitely moved way too up imo. Move it ~5 grids down and right, and it will flow better with the previous (2) (:
3. 00:12:637 (4,1,2,3) - (optional) Although it's not a thing you must do, but it's better to arrange them in an arc like below, to build up more flow and avoid (2) touching the next (4):
   
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4. 00:21:009 (1) - (optional) This one also, consider moving this few grids up to prevent touching 00:20:311 (3)
5. 00:24:497 (1,3) - Woah, ugly overlap imo. Just be creative with your slider shapes though - this won't be hard to fix xD
   
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   Also whistle on (1)'s end, if you want to (:
6. 00:32:221 (2) - (optional) You could easily make a blanket pattern as you did on 00:33:616 (3,4) with (2)'s end being stacked to (6) though, it will play more beautiful imo :3
7. 00:46:174 (4) - Whistle here on slider's start. I highly recommend this, the piano here needs a hitsound companion :3
8. 00:48:267 (1,2) - Is it intentional you curve the slider this way? Because this is a 2/1 slider, the red waypoint is much better if placed on the second slider tick, for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:51:756 (3) - (optional) Stack below (2) better for the ending imo

1. 00:04:962 (5,1) - It would fit the piano more if (5) is extended by 1/2 while (1) is shortened by 1/2
2. 00:09:148 (1) - Hmm, is this note really required? It doesn't follow anything in the music as I can hear. Also, this is just a Normal diff, don't let here be too hectic >_<
3. 00:14:381 (3) - Whistle on slider's end to keep your whistle pattern here?
4. 00:15:427 (4,5,6,1) - Sudden 90° linear slider here breaks your flow imo. The simplest thing you can do here, without altering your slider too much but still flowy, perhaps:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why no whistle at all >_< At least one whistle should be here imo, either it's in (3) or (5) - I suggest (3) more though, because it's the downbeat
6. 00:35:360 (5,1) - Sudden spacing change here. Is it intentional?
7. 00:38:500 (3) - (optional) Curve it to the opposite direction (downward) to avoid touching (5)? (slider wave also plays beautiful here)
8. 00:44:081 (5) - Normal hitfinish feels too explosive for the song imo. What's more, if you want to keep the normal hitfinish, they should've been placed in the downbeat instead.
9. 00:46:872 (5) - Same as above
10. 00:49:663 (4) - Rigid linear slider like this is very unfitting for the ending. Why not a bezier curve instead? At the picture below, you can see that (5)'s approachcircle could be used to guide you here:
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:03:218 (4,5,6) - I highly recommend to add whistle on either 4 or 6, else it will be too empty here
2. 00:05:485 (2,4) - (optional) You can move (2) downward and (4) upward so this part won't be too linear and to increase the flow
3. 00:09:497 (4) - Already tested, there's a note 1/8 after this from the music. Not something you have to add, though :3
4. 00:09:846 (1) - Do you really need the new combo here? Also, (optional) make this encircle (4)?
5. 00:13:683 (5) - To avoid such overlapping with (2), I suggest to arrange (5) like below:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:23:799 (2) - (optional) Encircle (5)? Plays better than just a straight slider imo
7. 00:24:497 (3,4) - Unexpected spacing change (well, I bet it's unintentional though)
8. 00:32:221 (5,6,7) - I think it's better if you keep with symmetry here to make this part looks less random, for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 1/4 stream spam in a relaxing piano song orz... Do you really need this much >_< - Triples are okay to use in this song imo, but this one... orz
10. 00:46:872 (1) - Same as [Normal], normal hitfinish is too explosive imo. (also those downbeat stuff)
11. 00:50:709 (3,4) - (optional) I think it would be nice if there's a little jump on the ending, for example:
    
    SPOILER

    

Niva wrote:

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Hi, Shana Aisaka~
I'm here for mod4mod again, if you don't mind >_<

[General]

-> I wonder, the song is only 00:57, and downloading with the video only costs ~3MB, so why not use a 192kbps audio instead (if any)? It won't greatly affect file size, but greatly affect sound quality :3
-> As this song is actually a sad-paced one, you might want to add a silver (or gold) slider border. Open the .osu file manually, and add these codes below "Combo4 : 0,128,255":

Silver:
SliderBorder : 211,211,211

Gold:
SliderBorder : 254,239,114

This is fully optional, though.
-> Another thing worth mentioning is a new timing section should be placed on 00:14:730 with 85.90 BPM. Yep, the piano gets slower there, and keep using 86.00 there will result in an incorrect timing.
-> Oh, and Nicol Armarfi to the tags, just in case.

[Easy]

1. 00:02:171 (1,2,1,2,3) - I don't quite get your whistle pattern here, although they sounds fine. The piano hits high note every 2/1, so in my opinion, it's better to keep the whistling consistent at 2/1 here
2. 00:07:055 (3) - Definitely moved way too up imo. Move it ~5 grids down and right, and it will flow better with the previous (2) (:
3. 00:12:637 (4,1,2,3) - (optional) Although it's not a thing you must do, but it's better to arrange them in an arc like below, to build up more flow and avoid (2) touching the next (4):
   
4. 00:21:009 (1) - (optional) This one also, consider moving this few grids up to prevent touching 00:20:311 (3)
5. 00:24:497 (1,3) - Woah, ugly overlap imo. Just be creative with your slider shapes though - this won't be hard to fix xD
   
   Also whistle on (1)'s end, if you want to (:
6. 00:32:221 (2) - (optional) You could easily make a blanket pattern as you did on 00:33:616 (3,4) with (2)'s end being stacked to (6) though, it will play more beautiful imo :3
7. 00:46:174 (4) - Whistle here on slider's start. I highly recommend this, the piano here needs a hitsound companion :3
8. 00:48:267 (1,2) - Is it intentional you curve the slider this way? Because this is a 2/1 slider, the red waypoint is much better if placed on the second slider tick, for example:
   
9. 00:51:756 (3) - (optional) Stack below (2) better for the ending imo

[Normal]

1. 00:04:962 (5,1) - It would fit the piano more if (5) is extended by 1/2 while (1) is shortened by 1/2
2. 00:09:148 (1) - Hmm, is this note really required? It doesn't follow anything in the music as I can hear. Also, this is just a Normal diff, don't let here be too hectic >_<
3. 00:14:381 (3) - Whistle on slider's end to keep your whistle pattern here?
4. 00:15:427 (4,5,6,1) - Sudden 90° linear slider here breaks your flow imo. The simplest thing you can do here, without altering your slider too much but still flowy, perhaps:
   
5. 00:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why no whistle at all >_< At least one whistle should be here imo, either it's in (3) or (5) - I suggest (3) more though, because it's the downbeat
6. 00:35:360 (5,1) - Sudden spacing change here. Is it intentional?
7. 00:38:500 (3) - (optional) Curve it to the opposite direction (downward) to avoid touching (5)? (slider wave also plays beautiful here)
8. 00:44:081 (5) - Normal hitfinish feels too explosive for the song imo. What's more, if you want to keep the normal hitfinish, they should've been placed in the downbeat instead.
9. 00:46:872 (5) - Same as above
10. 00:49:663 (4) - Rigid linear slider like this is very unfitting for the ending. Why not a bezier curve instead? At the picture below, you can see that (5)'s approachcircle could be used to guide you here:
    

[Collab]

1. 00:03:218 (4,5,6) - I highly recommend to add whistle on either 4 or 6, else it will be too empty here
2. 00:05:485 (2,4) - (optional) You can move (2) downward and (4) upward so this part won't be too linear and to increase the flow
3. 00:09:497 (4) - Already tested, there's a note 1/8 after this from the music. Not something you have to add, though :3
4. 00:09:846 (1) - Do you really need the new combo here? Also, (optional) make this encircle (4)?
5. 00:13:683 (5) - To avoid such overlapping with (2), I suggest to arrange (5) like below:
   
6. 00:23:799 (2) - (optional) Encircle (5)? Plays better than just a straight slider imo
7. 00:24:497 (3,4) - Unexpected spacing change (well, I bet it's unintentional though)
8. 00:32:221 (5,6,7) - I think it's better if you keep with symmetry here to make this part looks less random, for example:
   
9. 00:42:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 1/4 stream spam in a relaxing piano song orz... Do you really need this much >_< - Triples are okay to use in this song imo, but this one... orz
10. 00:46:872 (1) - Same as [Normal], normal hitfinish is too explosive imo. (also those downbeat stuff)
11. 00:50:709 (3,4) - (optional) I think it would be nice if there's a little jump on the ending, for example:
    

Oh, and one more stuff, you don't need awkward kiai position like that (although it's usable), short kiais plays better imo here.

Much neater and better than your Aoi Hana map~
My map's link is at your queue. Star ^^

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Niva mod so pro

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Niva mod so pro

This^^ I would love a mod from him in my map.

Anyway on topic, here's your request from my modding queue.

[General]
-Remove OSB file. There's no storyboard in your map.
-Your video file has audio in it. Remove the audio off of the video.

[Easy]
-00:30:084 (6) - Make this hit circle blanklet with slider 5.

[Normal]
-Good

[Collab]
-Good

Beautiful map indeed. Just work on your blanklets.

BeatofIke wrote:

Thanks for the kudosu! STAR~

JoJo wrote:

Hi meimeichan!
Sorry for delay >_<

Prepare to mod but..... Your timing is off completely.........
Try this:

1.BPM 85.800 OFFSET 2172

Yes only 1 timing point. I will ask kanpakyin to recheck the timing.
After fixing feel free to call me back at anytime and I'll do full mod!

Star for now! >A</

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

1. Reset your timing section according to this image.↓
   Select 4/4 common and add another timing section on 00:30:843 (4/4) to fix the downbeat for all diffs. Offset has no change so do not need resnapping.
2. Volume setting is too low. Sometimes players determine whether they have caught the notes on beat by hitsound so.
3. By the way add a mute sliderslide hitsound since this song is quiet but ruined by noisy sliderslide.
4. I don't know why you have set fountain effect on 00:44:829, not really fit the music.
5. Add storyboard of mapper's ID for different parts. Just suggestion.

1. 00:06:813 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
2. 00:13:360 (4) - New combo I guess.
3. 00:29:444 (1,2) - Switch new combo.
4. 00:38:185 (1,4) - ^ For map reading and downbeat. Then remove new combo on 00:40:283 (1).

1. 0.8x spacing looks not good for gameplay. All notes are end to end. (Just comment.)
2. 00:04:969 (5,1) - Switch new combo.
3. 00:07:766 (4,1) - I prefer switching new combo here. Then looks you have to fix the spacing between them.
4. 00:16:507 (1,2) - Little spacing issue I guess.

1. Same to Normal. 1.0x DS is much better than 0.8.
2. 00:24:497 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
3. 00:32:241 (2,3) - Fix the spacing here (Try move slider 3 some grids left).
4. 00:33:640 (3,4) - Try to avoid overlap.
5. 00:37:137 (1,2) - ^ Same, looks not good, try something like this↓
   
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   ATTACH[$2A$9G)68DBL00`}O~VX{AP.jpg]

General

Normal

00:03:220 (2) - maybe like this?
00:16:158 (6) - new combo

Taris wrote:

Random mod

also my first Since this is your 1st mod i give u KUDOS lol
Items in BOLD are my comments / What I think about the map

Items in Blue are recommended

Items in Purple are unrankable

Regular text is just suggestion / nazi


[General]

If you do not mind , you should add a hard too because the song is very short No needed @w@"

[Easy]
The diff is okay , But you can put more variation on your slider shapes and make some look nicer.

00:19:654 (2) - Line up with 00:16:857 (4) - ? Fix?
00:36:437 (2) - Move it down 4 boxes no
00:43:780 (3) - This is really break rhythm >.< Try this rhythm instead

Fix

[Normal]

00:28:395 (3) - Move 4 boxes down
00:32:241 (4) - ^
00:16:158 (1) - This slider look a bit ugly , especially the curve Fix?
00:41:332 (6) - Move this to the left a bit

[Hard]

00:40:283 (6) - Spacing is off here a little. Opps Forgot to fix it.
00:46:927 (1) - Is there a reason for this new combo here?

Mapset is alright. Good luck! Thank you

Mapian101 wrote:

I just thought id say that this is one of my favourite beatmaps so far on osu. i have played over 1200 songs and this one has a special spot as one of the top. <3 I hope there is a chance for this to get ranked. ~Niax

• [General]

1. Reduce all your hitsound's volume by 5% to 10%? They're too loud too fit the bgm imo
2. Maybe you should remove the kiai fountain placed on 00:44:829. I kinda don't like it, but it's up to you.
3. Turn your sliderslide's sound into silent, they're making weird sounds that don't fit the music :<
   
   [Easy]
4. 00:42:032 (1) - Move this 1 grid downward so it would be blanketed nicely by 00:38:535 (4).
5. 00:49:724 (3) - Turn it into this, to blanket the previous slider's end nicely :3
   
   [Normal]
6. 00:18:255 (4) - Turn it into this. If you did, fix the spacing of the next circles.
7. 00:22:102 (1) - Move this tick 3 grids to the left and 1 grid downwards.
   
   [Collab]
   clear~

BeatofIke wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/1341536
It's been ages lol XD

Natsu wrote:

Easy:

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00:19:654 (2,3,1) - try another pattern is so confuse for new players check why:


00:44:130 2 grids right for be in curve with (2,3)

Normal:

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00:04:269 move it to x:176 y:64 looks better with 2 and 3
00:11:262 (1,2,3) - make this pattern more curved since 1 and 2 in line look ugly imo
00:49:724 big slider then imo you need to be creative make it more fun :3

Collab:

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add circle 00:09:689

Sorry about poor mod since i dont see anything wrong that are just suggestions

ikari_kyon wrote:

I hate the gif on your sig, take stars and remove it