Ayu wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Easy]

You use a lot of basic patterns, nothing wrong with that. Although you should work on your small sliders.
00:02:172 (1) - Maybe make sliders like this more like; http://puu.sh/BxdA Fix
00:03:570 (2) - For this, copy paste (1) and Ctrl+J & Ctrl+R Okay

furthermore nothing wrong with this difficulty. lol thx anyway =w=''

[Normal]

I advice to don't make overlaps like 00:07:766 (5,6). Use a bigger spacing so they don't overlap.
The song has a BPM of 85 only, so there's nothing wrong with using a distance spacing of 1.2x for Normal. Actually i don't really quite understand what is overlap means \o/ =A='' I tried my best though @w@"

00:04:969 (1) - Not sure if this is supposed to be an arc, but 2 anchors should be enough. what?
00:04:969 (1,2) - You could also make it like this: http://puu.sh/Bxgn (2 anchors instead of 3 on (1) and I lowered the anchor from (2))
00:16:158 (6) - This slider doesn't feels right to me. It's fine to me though XD
00:26:297 (6) - This slider is pretty ugly. Try to just make a normal slider with a bow. Okay
00:27:346 - 00:37:486 - A bit too much straight, if you ask me. Try to make it more smooth. Okay
00:40:633 (5) - Slider end overlaps (3) Fix
00:42:381 (2,2) - You shouldn't use red-anchors at a song like this. The song is way too slow paced for these kind of sliders. Okay
00:49:724 (4) - Ugly slider. The anchors aren't placed in a good way and the red anchor at the slider end is totally unnecessary Fix

[Collab]

00:08:815 (3,4) - Just make a single slider out of this; http://puu.sh/BxjW http://puu.sh/BxjZ Fix
00:30:144 (2,3) - ^ Fix
00:32:591 (6) - Like I mentioned before, This song is too slow paced for sliders like this. Okay
00:40:283 (6,7) - Put a note on 00:40:283 and make a slider from 00:40:633 to 00:41:332 Okay
00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Use less spacing and try to make it more pretty; http://puu.sh/BxlB Fix

Suggestion; Make a Storyboard with the names for collab, so everyone can see who mapped which part. Okay

[Overall]

The beatmap needs work before it's worth a bubble. Try to work on your sliders. Here's a nice thread about sliders: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Good luck with your beatmap Thank you :3

kurohana wrote:

m4m :3

General

I'm not sure about kiai times... but this is up to you :3 It's okay to me

Normal

00:03:220 (2) - maybe like this? Fix
00:16:158 (6) - new combo Fix

and use soft-sliderslide, it will sound much better :3

good luck :3 Thank you

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello Shana-chan~! >w< Modding from in-game request~

• [General]

1. Reduce all your hitsound's volume by 5% to 10%? They're too loud too fit the bgm imo
2. Maybe you should remove the kiai fountain placed on 00:44:829. I kinda don't like it, but it's up to you.
3. Turn your sliderslide's sound into silent, they're making weird sounds that don't fit the music :<
   
   [Easy]
4. 00:42:032 (1) - Move this 1 grid downward so it would be blanketed nicely by 00:38:535 (4).
5. 00:49:724 (3) - Turn it into this, to blanket the previous slider's end nicely :3
   
   [Normal]
6. 00:18:255 (4) - Turn it into this. If you did, fix the spacing of the next circles.
7. 00:22:102 (1) - Move this tick 3 grids to the left and 1 grid downwards.
   
   [Collab]
   clear~

[color=#FF4000]Sorry about the nazi stuff, but it will help on aesthetics :3
Nice map so star~ Good luck Shana-chan >w<

smallboat wrote:

hello thank mod my map ^^

this time I mod your map

i can speak little english,sorry ><


easy

00:23:500 (3) - add note? add

normal
00:22:102 (1) - +hitsound? add

collab
00:49:549 (8) - add note ? no..
00:51:472 (4) - note + whistle sound no..

your song is good

newtoniorock8 wrote:

hi ~ #modreqs ~ Hi Thanks for mod ^^''

SPOILER

uhmm . pls use this one for the sliderslide >.< soft-sliderslide

Thanks ! Added !
Easy
00:08:815 (4) - / 00:20:353 (3) - add whistle ~ >.< fix ~
Normal
00:04:969 / 00:46:227 (3) - add finish ~ fix ~
00:20:703 (5) - remove this slider then add a hitobject here 00:21:053 >.< ermm no?
00:51:472 (2) - remove this ~ fix ~
Collab
00:12:661 (2) - / 00:43:430 (1) - / 00:44:130 (5) - / 00:48:675 (5) - add whistle ~ fix all ~

SPOILER

thats all >.< Goodluck ~ Nice Collab :33 Thank you >///<!!

Lanturn wrote:

Hello from " https://osu.ppy.sh/p/mod "

The roulette has chosen YOUR MAP to be my next mod! *Background Cheering and Applause!*

[General]
Tags:
Add: Disability Girls | As its the English name of the game, and it says right in your little picture on your beatmap listing

Lead-in Time: I don't believe you really need lead-in time for this song as the first note hits more than 2 seconds later. If you want though, you can make your lead-in time 828, so the first note will hit exactly 3 seconds after the song loads. (If you want 4 seconds, use 1828)

Sounds: Why not use a silent slider-slide? I personally think it fits with this song: http://puu.sh/2HHgJ.wav |

[Easy]
00:32:241 (2,3,4) - There is a little bit of a gap between each of these notes.
00:42:032 (1) - A bit loud for the volume you lowered before this. Maybe lower it by 10-20 and use what you have currently for the next notes?


[Normal]
Raise the settings up a bit. There is quite a gap between this difficulty and the collab. HP Drain / OD could easily go up by 1 more

Also I think the Distance between these notes is a bit too small.. 1.0 would have been better

Volume: No volume should go below 15-20% unless its the end of a spinner or slider. I would highly suggest raising the overall volume of this song by at least 5-10%

00:22:102 (1) - This slider doesn't seem needed.. delete it?
00:30:144 (2) - Volume at the end of this slider seems a bit too quiet, Raise it by 10%

[Collab]
Wa.... there's a video to this? Why isn't this on your Easy/Normal Difficulties?!?!? Add them!
00:04:269 (1,2) - Why not just combine these two into one slider? It would honestly play better, also check the volume and such like I suggested before
00:06:717 (6) - Volume here as well doesn't really need a decrease. Seems pointless
00:09:689 (4) - this piano note hits an 1/8th earlier. I realize you don't want to use 1/8ths, but this 1/4 is just hitting air at this point.. remove?
00:24:374 (3) - again. This note hits air.....
00:32:241 (5,6) - these would be better as two 1/2 sliders instead of a slider + circle to match the piano.
The rest of the song feels a bit overmapped, but I won't dig into it anymore. I'll leave it up to you to decide what or what not to remove.
00:50:773 (3,4) - A bit too much for a simple song. If you want to use the 1/4 here, then at least flip the slider to end near the 1/4 note.


Sorry for the short mod, good luck!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   Four Leaf Studios Fix

[Easy]

1. 00:28:745 (5,6) - blanket correctly Err what? can you explain it to me?
2. 00:30:843 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:32:241 (2,3) - avoid overlap Fix
4. 00:33:640 (3,4) - blanket correctly
5. 00:38:535 (4) - suggetion
   
6. 00:46:227 (6,1) - avoid overlap Fix

[Normal]

1. 00:08:465 (6,2,3) - avoid overlap Fix
2. 00:18:955 (1,2,3) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
3. 00:25:948 (5,6) - not stack is better for good flow Fix
   
4. 00:44:829 (1,2) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
5. 00:47:626 (1,2) - not good flow Fix

[Collab]

1. 00:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - conform DS
2. 00:34:689~00:38:185- you can blanket more correctly. how about this? Fix
   
   SPOILER

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   306,159,35388,2,0,B|252:173|241:228,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   321,237,36088,6,0,B|350:284|405:278,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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   279,212,38185,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make more symmetric (and I suggest to increase DS) Nothing wrong here
4. 00:47:976 (2,3,4) - curve more for good flow
   
   SPOILER

   

good relax map <3
~Good Luck~

xLoupGarou wrote:

I'll give a a star instead . . . btw the map is fine to me

cmn_891127 wrote:

[Hitsound]

1. Use 0-byte .wav file to blank your soft-sliderslide.wav, and change all timing line to sampleset soft-1
   blank hitsound link: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav Thank you~ done ~

[Timing line]

1. Normal - 00:23:500 - useless, remove done ~
2. Normal - 00:32:678 - unsnapped umm.. sorry i didnt understand notes are snap and there's no timing here..
3. Normal - 00:44:130 - useless, and you don't have custom sampleset (unless you use the blank slider) done ~

[Slider tail]

1. Normal - 00:45:178 (2) - you double click the ending point, remove one done remove it
2. Collab - 00:08:815 (3) - ^ done remove it
3. Collab - 00:30:144 (2) - ^ done remove it
4. Easy - 00:46:227 (6) - ^ done remove it
5. Easy - 00:44:130 (4) - ^ done remove it

[Metadata]

• Now Japanese can be used in Metadata

1. Source: かたわ少女 okay~

If you don't like the hitsound of slider tick, just use tick rate 1. If you change this one, then don't forget to double check the useless timing line. ohh i think i like how mine are now ^^ thank you

(づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

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Version:MBomb's Salad
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Tags:- Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios
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[ Evil ] wrote:

short mod from #modreq

sorry i don't really have much to mod since its a really short song

Normal: 00:51:822 (2) - since the music is softening i don't think a whistle is necessary, or you could soften it aww sorry no change..

sorry for bad mod

osu file format v14

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Creator:Shana Aisaka
Version:MBomb's Salad
Source:かたわ少女
Tags:- Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios
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Title:Three Stars
TitleUnicode:Three Stars
Artist:NicolArmarfi
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Creator:Shana Aisaka
Version:MBomb's Salad
Source:かたわ少女
Tags:- Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios
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-Hakurei- wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:24:549 (1) - change from finish to whistle sorry no change
2. 00:44:130 (4) - ^ for tail sorry no change
3. 00:46:227 (6) - forgot about whistle? ok fixed ~

[Normal]

1. 00:02:172 (1) - change from finish to whistle sorry no change
2. 00:04:969 (1) - ^ sorry no change
3. 00:07:766 (5,6) - forgot about whistle? ok fixed ~
4. 00:24:549 (1) - change from finish to whistle sorry no change
5. 00:42:032 (1) - ^ sorry no change
6. 00:44:130 (5,1) - ^ ok fixed ~
7. 00:46:227 (3,5) - ^ ok fixed ~

[Collab]

1. 00:20:004 (2) - you forgot whistle on head ok fixed ~
2. 00:24:549 (1) - finish is not really fitable. use Whistle sorry no change
3. 00:42:032 (1) - ^ sorry no change
4. 00:44:130 (5) - ^ sorry no change
5. 00:44:479 (1) - ^ for tail sorry no change
6. 00:46:927 (9) - ^ for head sorry no change

The instrument is piano. Whistle is highly recommend for this. GL!
Thank you so much and i have added some hitsound

TicClick wrote:

Hello! Here's your timing (remove your first red line):

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Just copy it and paste (Ctrl+V) into Timing Panel (F6). The song is 4/4, not 3/4 as you might have thought, and some lines in the end are used to reset the metronome to set it on correct beat.

1. 00:07:077 (3) - NC here to follow a consistent NC pattern of every 4 beats
2. 00:12:671 (4,1) - Swap NC here for the downbeat
3. 00:16:168 (3,1) - ^
4. 00:17:566 (1) - Slider tail is a more prominent piano note than the head or anything in the body and prominent notes should be clickable in most cases, so I would separate this into a 1/1 slider and circle. If you do this, put the NC on the single circle on the downbeat for consistency
   00:21:063 (1,2) - Swap NC for the downbeat
5. 00:27:356 (1) - All of a sudden your combos double in length to roughly 8 beats each - why? I'd NC here
6. 00:28:755 (3) - Again, the more prominent sound is on the tail - consider reversing 00:28:056 (2,3) on the timeline. If you decide not to change, improve the blanket by moving the central grey node to [148,162]
7. 00:30:154 (4,1) - Keep this NC pattern however - even though (1) has no special emphasis and the offset adjusting point is so marginal, 00:27:356 is a 5/4 measure. Since it's just one measure though, you don't need to change the time signature, so this is fine as it is
   00:30:853 (1,2) - You can definitely improve this blanket, even with the low DS. Remove (1) and replace it with copy/paste (2) placed at [199,320]
8. 00:33:649 (1) - NC for the downbeat
9. 00:33:649 (3,4) - Move these up slightly to avoid the small overlap with the previous slider, and reblanket
10. 00:35:747 (1,2) - Swap NC for the downbeat
11. 00:38:544 (1) - Might seem silly, but for consistency, you should NC this as well since it occupies all of the following measure
    00:38:544 (1,1,2) - DS is quite unequal here (0.86, 0.76) making this look untidy. Due to the low BPM I feel it's acceptable to break DS slightly here, so I would place the circle at [192,183] for symmetry (0.9x DS), and then adjust 00:42:739 (2,3,4) to return to 0.8x DS - Maintaining constant DS in Easy diffs is a Guideline, not a Rule, which I feel is acceptable to break in this case
12. 00:44:127 (4) - Should be a clickable object to reset the kiai, so I'd change 00:43:780 (3,4) into a 1/2 slider and circle. If you do this, be sure the NC starts on the circle (downbeat+finish)
13. 00:49:700 (1) - The downbeat at 00:50:398 has a stronger sound than the tail or head, so I would either separate this into a circle and 1/1 slider (and NC the slider), or, if you really want to keep this, move the red node so that the direction change occurs on the downbeat (and NC on the slider). Don't forget to reblanket here if you do this *in fact reblanket anyway, it's currently a little messy

1. Similar NC inconsistencies as in the Easy - what pattern are you following? Sometimes you NC every 4 beats, sometimes every 8, sometimes on strong notes and other times on weak notes. Try to find a consistent pattern and stick to it throughout
2. 00:10:223 (3) - Consider splitting this slider up into circle + 1/2 slider, since you're mapping over the downbeat, which is a prominent piano note
3. 00:11:972 (3) - ^ I'd split this into circle, 1/2 repeating slider, circle
4. 00:14:419 (3) - ^ Again, mapping over prominent beats
5. 00:16:168 (1) - Head and tail of the slider correspond to equally prominent beats, so both should be clickable
6. 00:20:014 (4,5,6) - All of these sliders have the more prominent note on the tail and it feels very strange to play. Try something like this instead:
   
7. 00:24:559 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 1/2 clicks might be a bit much for a Normal. Perhaps merge one or two of the circle pairs into 1/2 sliders?
8. 00:26:307 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Too linear for my taste and quite plain, I'd see if you can add some direction change here for variety
9. 00:30:853 (1,2,3) - Not necessarily flow-breaking, but quite out of place amongst the smooth flow you have throughout the map and nothing in the music really justifies the sudden direction changes. Consider making this smoother
10. 00:33:299 (6,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:26:307 (6,1,2,3,4,5)
11. 00:36:446 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Same as 00:24:559 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider adding some 1/2 sliders here for variety
12. 00:38:544 (3) - Consider breaking this up into 1/2 slider and 1/1 slider so you can make the prominent note on the reverse clickable
13. 00:43:433 (3,4,5,6,1) - Higher circle/slider ratio is more acceptable in the kiai (added difficulty) so if you were to keep any of the 1/2 circle patterns, keep this one
14. 00:45:169 (2) - Slipt into circle + 1/2 slider to make the strong piano note in the body of (2) clickable

1. Might want to name the diff "Collab Hard" to give a better indication of difficulty, but this is just personal preference since the hardest diff in a set can use free naming
2. Spacing seems really random and inconsistent - e.g at 00:04:279 (1,2) you have a 1.50x DS jump to an almost unnoticeable background sound, whereas at 00:12:671 (2,3,1) you have a huge jump (1.71x) to a weaker note, immediately followed by the smallest jump in the section (1.07x) to one of the most prominent notes. This makes very little sense and makes the diff quite confusing to follow. This is just one instance - there are many more examples of inconsistent spacing throughout the map, so I would look through this again and ask yourself "does this jump/anti-jump make sense? What is it following in the music?"
3. 00:04:279 (1) - Why NC just this one slider? I feel you can remove the NC here
4. 00:09:874 (1) - ^ and also, the tail at 00:10:573 is a stronger beat, so should really be clickable
5. 00:18:615 (3,2,3,4) - More strong beats on slider ends, please try repatterning this to make it more intuitive to play
6. 00:34:698 (4) - Increase the curve slightly to improve the blanket - Central grey node to [325,62], tail node to [380,118]
7. 00:38:194 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels kinda boring to just follow the same path back and forth - perhaps try something like this? (I reduced AR to show the full pattern) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3239700
8. 00:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - I get you want to increase the difficulty, but you can't place clickable notes where there are no beats in the music. You could get the same effect by merging pairs of circles into 1/4 kick sliders, meaning that you still have the "stream" but are only clicking on prominent 1/2 notes
9. 00:44:475 (1) - Start of the kiai is a prominent note with finish, so should really be clickable

1. 00:02:182 (1) - 00:03:230 (2) isn't a particularly prominent note, and aside from 00:10:573 (4) -, is the only place where dash is required in an intro which is very calm. I feel you should reduce the spacing here. Unless you want to move everything after, it might be easier to just move the first slider to the right, around x-304
2. 00:14:419 (1,2) - Swap NC, since (2) is the more prominent note (and has the larger jump)
3. 00:14:769 (1) - Feels like there should be a jump here, and also slightly higher spacing to 00:16:168 (3) so I would move (1,2) to x-96 or so
4. 00:16:867 (4) - The next slider 00:18:965 (1) is on the border of requiring dash, so I'd move (4) to the left to make the jump more apparent. x-328 should do; you don't want to overdo it because of the upcoming direction change
5. 00:23:510 (1) - Finish on 00:24:559 (1) means a bigger jump is required here, easiest solution is to move this repeat slider to around x-96
6. 00:28:755 (3) - This note isn't as prominent as 00:27:706 (2) so I feel it should have slightly smaller spacing. Try x-304, since 00:29:105 (4) isn't exactly a weak note either, so spacing here could be increased slightly at the same time
7. 00:30:853 (1) - 5.97x DS? That's pretty mean for a 1/4 beat in a Salad... I strongly advise you to reduce this to around 4.0x DS
8. 00:33:649 (1) - Increase the spacing here for the downbeat, try x-160
9. 00:39:243 (1) - Again, spacing could be increased here due to the prominent downbeat note. I'd Ctrl+G and move to x-104
10. 00:43:086 (4,5) - I get that you want bigger jumps in the kiai, but these feel a tiny bit too much. I'd move them both x-16 towards each other. If you want a big jump, it should be to 00:44:822 (1) -, so you could also move 00:44:475 (6) to the left slightly, say x-128

JBHyperion wrote:

Mod by - Magic Bomb -'s request:

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: Combo colours 1 and 3 are awfully similar, can you make them more distinct? Looks like you're following the hair colour of the girls in the bg image, so you could change one of them to "blonde" colour such as RGB 255,180,50. Also, enable Widescreen Support for the Collab diff so the BG matches the other diffs? Fix ~
3. Metadata: Add "Katawa Shoujo" to tags (Even though you have the Japanese in the source, it would still be helpful to have the English in tags for an easier search Fix ~
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: No Issues
6. AImod: First object is unsnapped in all Std diffs and 00:47:599 (1) is unsnapped in Normal - probably from when you changed the offset. Automatic resnap doesn't seem to like the first note after the offset when you do this for some reason, so fix these please Fix ~

Difficulty-Specific Comments:
Easy

1. 00:07:077 (3) - NC here to follow a consistent NC pattern of every 4 beats Fix ~
2. 00:12:671 (4,1) - Swap NC here for the downbeat Fix ~
3. 00:16:168 (3,1) - ^ Fix ~
4. 00:17:566 (1) - Slider tail is a more prominent piano note than the head or anything in the body and prominent notes should be clickable in most cases, so I would separate this into a 1/1 slider and circle. If you do this, put the NC on the single circle on the downbeat for consistency
   00:21:063 (1,2) - Swap NC for the downbeat Fix ~
5. 00:27:356 (1) - All of a sudden your combos double in length to roughly 8 beats each - why? I'd NC here Fix ~
6. 00:28:755 (3) - Again, the more prominent sound is on the tail - consider reversing 00:28:056 (2,3) on the timeline. If you decide not to change, improve the blanket by moving the central grey node to [148,162] Fix ~
7. 00:30:154 (4,1) - Keep this NC pattern however - even though (1) has no special emphasis and the offset adjusting point is so marginal, 00:27:356 is a 5/4 measure. Since it's just one measure though, you don't need to change the time signature, so this is fine as it is Fix ~
   00:30:853 (1,2) - You can definitely improve this blanket, even with the low DS. Remove (1) and replace it with copy/paste (2) placed at [199,320]
8. 00:33:649 (1) - NC for the downbeat Fix ~
9. 00:33:649 (3,4) - Move these up slightly to avoid the small overlap with the previous slider, and reblanket Fix ~
10. 00:35:747 (1,2) - Swap NC for the downbeat Fix ~
11. 00:38:544 (1) - Might seem silly, but for consistency, you should NC this as well since it occupies all of the following measure Fix ~
    00:38:544 (1,1,2) - DS is quite unequal here (0.86, 0.76) making this look untidy. Due to the low BPM I feel it's acceptable to break DS slightly here, so I would place the circle at [192,183] for symmetry (0.9x DS), and then adjust 00:42:739 (2,3,4) to return to 0.8x DS - Maintaining constant DS in Easy diffs is a Guideline, not a Rule, which I feel is acceptable to break in this case
12. 00:44:127 (4) - Should be a clickable object to reset the kiai, so I'd change 00:43:780 (3,4) into a 1/2 slider and circle. If you do this, be sure the NC starts on the circle (downbeat+finish) Fix ~
13. 00:49:700 (1) - The downbeat at 00:50:398 has a stronger sound than the tail or head, so I would either separate this into a circle and 1/1 slider (and NC the slider), or, if you really want to keep this, move the red node so that the direction change occurs on the downbeat (and NC on the slider). Don't forget to reblanket here if you do this *in fact reblanket anyway, it's currently a little messy Fix ~

Normal

1. Similar NC inconsistencies as in the Easy - what pattern are you following? Sometimes you NC every 4 beats, sometimes every 8, sometimes on strong notes and other times on weak notes. Try to find a consistent pattern and stick to it throughout
2. 00:10:223 (3) - Consider splitting this slider up into circle + 1/2 slider, since you're mapping over the downbeat, which is a prominent piano note Fix ~
3. 00:11:972 (3) - ^ I'd split this into circle, 1/2 repeating slider, circle Fix ~
4. 00:14:419 (3) - ^ Again, mapping over prominent beats Fix ~
5. 00:16:168 (1) - Head and tail of the slider correspond to equally prominent beats, so both should be clickable Fix ~
6. 00:20:014 (4,5,6) - All of these sliders have the more prominent note on the tail and it feels very strange to play. Try something like this instead:
   Fix ~
7. 00:24:559 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 1/2 clicks might be a bit much for a Normal. Perhaps merge one or two of the circle pairs into 1/2 sliders? Fix ~
8. 00:26:307 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Too linear for my taste and quite plain, I'd see if you can add some direction change here for variety Fix ~
9. 00:30:853 (1,2,3) - Not necessarily flow-breaking, but quite out of place amongst the smooth flow you have throughout the map and nothing in the music really justifies the sudden direction changes. Consider making this smoother Fix ~
10. 00:33:299 (6,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:26:307 (6,1,2,3,4,5) Fix ~
11. 00:36:446 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Same as 00:24:559 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider adding some 1/2 sliders here for variety Fix ~
12. 00:38:544 (3) - Consider breaking this up into 1/2 slider and 1/1 slider so you can make the prominent note on the reverse clickable Fix ~
13. 00:43:433 (3,4,5,6,1) - Higher circle/slider ratio is more acceptable in the kiai (added difficulty) so if you were to keep any of the 1/2 circle patterns, keep this one
14. 00:45:169 (2) - Slipt into circle + 1/2 slider to make the strong piano note in the body of (2) clickable Fix ~

Collab

1. Might want to name the diff "Collab Hard" to give a better indication of difficulty, but this is just personal preference since the hardest diff in a set can use free naming
2. Spacing seems really random and inconsistent - e.g at 00:04:279 (1,2) you have a 1.50x DS jump to an almost unnoticeable background sound, whereas at 00:12:671 (2,3,1) you have a huge jump (1.71x) to a weaker note, immediately followed by the smallest jump in the section (1.07x) to one of the most prominent notes. This makes very little sense and makes the diff quite confusing to follow. This is just one instance - there are many more examples of inconsistent spacing throughout the map, so I would look through this again and ask yourself "does this jump/anti-jump make sense? What is it following in the music?" Fix ~
3. 00:04:279 (1) - Why NC just this one slider? I feel you can remove the NC here Fix ~
4. 00:09:874 (1) - ^ and also, the tail at 00:10:573 is a stronger beat, so should really be clickable Fix ~
5. 00:18:615 (3,2,3,4) - More strong beats on slider ends, please try repatterning this to make it more intuitive to play Fix ~
6. 00:34:698 (4) - Increase the curve slightly to improve the blanket - Central grey node to [325,62], tail node to [380,118] Fix ~
7. 00:38:194 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels kinda boring to just follow the same path back and forth - perhaps try something like this? (I reduced AR to show the full pattern) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3239700 Fix ~
8. 00:42:392 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - I get you want to increase the difficulty, but you can't place clickable notes where there are no beats in the music. You could get the same effect by merging pairs of circles into 1/4 kick sliders, meaning that you still have the "stream" but are only clicking on prominent 1/2 notes Fix ~
9. 00:44:475 (1) - Start of the kiai is a prominent note with finish, so should really be clickable Fix ~

This is all from me. Hopefully you find this mod helpful, but if you have any questions, feel free to get back to me and I'll do what I can to help.

Good luck! (: Thank you

ohh lol idk which part i did... but i think most of your mod i have fix it!