Sorry for lateness >_<
i guess no need to kd this until i do full mod..nvm lols.
[General]
SPOILER◘ Check AImod. It says the first kiai isn't snapped.
[Kantan]
SPOILER00:16:925 (21,22) - swap, then remove the don. imo 1/1 stream like this is too hard if you make it after and before a stream.
00:19:317 (25) - remove, for the same reason as above
00:22:108 (28) - change to kat? it has higher pitch than 00:22:506 (29) -
00:33:669 (48) - move to 00:34:068. duplet all of sudden which following nothing seems out of place
my suggestion on this first kiai
00:40:048 (4) - remove? much more better with triplet than 4plet >_<
00:40:845 (4) - move to 00:40:447 (4) -
00:42:440 (7) - move to 00:42:041
00:44:832 (12) - move to 00:45:231 and add finish. i have an explanation for this. yes, you're following the piano. but what about 00:45:231 that has louder drum? add a note, and it will be a very long stream. so that's why i suggest this
with this, you will be following the piano or whatever it is.
00:47:623 (17) - remove finish, because it's same with 00:46:825 (15) - , which you don't add finish at. but still, no need for adding finish there, because the music isn't strong when heard.
00:56:792 (31) - move to 00:56:393 for following the music
01:03:171 (45) - remove, it's weird to have this here.
01:03:570 add a note here, for following the music. suggesting kat, to make pattern easier.
01:15:132 (64) - change to k, it even has higher pitch than 01:15:531 (65) -
01:24:699 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - too long for a kantan. suggest removing 01:26:293 (85) -
01:29:483 (91) - move to 01:29:084 for following the music.
01:37:457 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - too long. remove 12 >w>
01:40:247 add a don here because drum there, then remove 01:40:646 (14) - to break the stream.
01:41:044 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - too long. my suggestion is kdk dk
01:52:207 (28) - change to don, it's lower than 01:52:606 (29) -
i don't get with the finish placements, especially on the 2nd kiai. 01:23:503 (79,82,85,87) - why adding finishes there, meanwhile you don't add some at the next part or the first kiai
[Futsuu]
SPOILER00:13:935 (15) - remove this, not a single music is playing there. and change 00:16:128 (21) - to kat, for higher music
00:20:314 (29) - remove this too for same reason as above. the music starts 00:20:114, not 0:20:314. therefore, adding note at 00:20:114 is out of option too, since there would be no break for the stream.
00:31:875 (52) - whoa. remove this, 2 triplets constantly is a no no at 185 bpm for futsuu. change 00:31:676 (51) - to don too, because lower pitch than 00:31:277 (50) - . in addition to those, move 00:32:872 (54) - to 00:33:669 to make a break.
00:39:251 (6) - remove this for 1/1 break. it's ok to remove this even tho it has music playing.
00:40:247 (8) - any strong reason to add this note? i personally don't hear anything that can be the reason (music or others; tho if you're saying you're following the violin or something that long, you may want to reconsider it since it's playing non-stop). instead of triplet there, suggesting add a k 00:41:842, because the constant lowing pitch. it suits there imo
00:42:839 (14) - try moving it to 00:43:437, as reflection of the music that starts 00:43:038. it's not possible to start it there, because it will make 4plet instead of 3plet.
00:47:224 (25) - remove this to make a break between the triplets
00:53:802 (41,42,43,44) - this is actually allowed at futsuu, but it has the wrong placement lols probably move 00:54:400 (44) - to 00:54:599 to make it following the music. or if you have a better idea, that would be good.
00:55:795 (46,47,48,49,50,51) - try to avoid double triplets like this. it's usually too hard to play for beginner. removing 50 will help
00:57:988 (53) - try adding finish here for the strong music >-<
00:59:981 (57,58,59) - i hope there's a strong reason to make a triplets here, i don't find one though. i suggest removing the stream, and making the next pattern follows the song with 1/2
01:01:975 (62,63,64) - same as above, i don't know why are you using triplet here when the music doesn't support imo.
01:19:118 (95) - remove this, since the piano starts at 01:19:317
01:20:314 (98) - any obvious reason why this note placed here? i heard nothing on the music, so i suggest removing this, and give the finish to 01:21:111 (100) -
01:29:283 (118) - same as above, remove this, since ddk on the middle of the 1/1 really freaks beginner out and sounds out of place
01:37:057 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - definitely no for this >_< try changing it to somtehing much more easier than double triplets like this and don't forget to give 1/1 break there~
01:40:446 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - ^. you may keep the 3plets at the back though, if you're using 1/1 for the notes before
Needs more finishers at some points to emphasize the music.
[Muzukashii]
SPOILERFirst part before the kiai is fine, for me at least but 00:14:134 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - just my opinion, but these are too boring and too crowded. try giving some spaces for the player to take a break and prepare self for the next notes >-<
Okay, but the first kiai part is way too hard than Futsuu. ddk is allowed, but it's not allowed to be freely used at muzukashii. example is this 00:38:254 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - without break and only 1/4 triplets at muzukashii, it's hard to play, not to mention that it's ddk not other simple pattern like ddd or kkk. i suggest you used either ddd or kkk at muzukashii than ddk or kkd. this 00:40:447 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - too, and the next pattern ;w; i can't mod it like this, or i will really changed your first kiai. i hope you have some ideas of how to change them >-<
00:53:404 (72) - remove it, since the flute or whatever it's stopped before it.
00:54:400 (76) - change to don, because its pitch is lower than 00:54:599 (77) -
00:55:795 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - this is ok, but i personally don't like a muzukashii with triplet like this without break. i don't know about other modders though
01:03:370 (112,113,114,115,116,117) - no. this isn't recommended at muzukashii. 3plets must have breaks often so it will be easier to play.
01:05:562 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - too. triplets like this must have at least 1/1 break >-<
same comment for the second kiai time. even though it's duplet, it's still 1/4 and need breaks oftenly.
[Oni]
SPOILER00:13:637 (3) - no need for a kat here, the music is still mellow, so take it easy at the beginning part.. and i don't see anything that can probably be the source of this kat.
00:20:015 (23) - ^
I agree with Hinsvar at this point. 00:38:852 - 00:41:643 AND 00:45:231 - 00:47:224. Have some spacings to give players a little rest moment or to emphasize certain parts/patterns. This kind of streams usually found at Inner Oni not Oni.
00:42:041 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - this too.
01:21:110 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237) - this is still too long for me, give some breaks, even though not 100% streams, but it's almost the same.
01:23:503 - 01:27:091 can be mapped with various patterns, so it won't make an unbalanced mapping on the kiai time.
Though it's weird to find some parts of the kiai empty, while the others are full, even though they have the same melodies and musics. Try to balance them, so it won't looks weird to when played.
The third kiai also looks very empty, except for the 1/4 stream which you should change because it's too difficult.
Too many 1/4 streams here. You should've considered some spaces for player to take a break. And try to follow the music. Stop when there's no music, and map when there's music, but don't make it overmapped. Don't forget to balance the diffspread between Oni and Muzukashii. i will really lose my sanity if i should mod 5 maps like this omg lols just kidding really
if i keep this up i will got into changing your mapping style very much lols. i maybe an average modder, i respect your mapping style, but if i feel it's too hard i won't keep silence. you may accept all (which will change your mapping style) or accept some (which you can make your own pattern, but not too far from my suggestions, or change it on your own will) or ignore some or ignore them all. but if you ignore them, please do tell the reason 'why would you ignore that.' keep in mind that i'm not a pro modder or a paranormal, that knew why wouldn't you accept my mod. don't be so stressed with what i wrote, it actually applies to all mapper lols. i just want to leave it here.
will edit this post for the rest mods. done!
And about recheck, probably the (best) answer is no for now. Modding this took me 2 days.. But if you want me to do it sometime in the future when you have more modder, i will gladly do it.
Good luck for rank~