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[General]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
Hitsounding
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
good luck!
[General]
- It seems there are elements in the storyboard that are scripted but the files aren't in the download, I would talk to the storyboarder and see what's up with that http://puu.sh/82Owz.png
- I'd recommend a 10% increase in hitsounds overall, I understand that you want them to be quiet but remember that hitsounds are there to provide feedback to the player, and when they're so quiet all the time it's hard to get that feedback.
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
- 00:06:821 (1,2,3) - the pattern here could look a bit nicer, try moving 1 to x172 y92 and 2 to x420 y192, will look like this
- 00:48:561 (1,2) - try a pattern like this? would flow a bit better
- I think you could use claps a little more consistently like you did in the normal, if you're going to place them on the third beat of a measure like 00:04:734 (3) - , then why not do it for both measures and put one on the end of 00:02:648 (1) - as well? can go through the whole map like this, just an idea
- 00:08:908 (3,4) - a few more whistles would fit well, tail of 3 and head of 4 perhaps?
- 00:42:300 (3,4) - same as before
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
- nice
- 00:04:734 (1) - I'd move the whistle from the head to the tail
- 00:08:908 (1) - try a whistle on the end?
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
- 00:06:300 (4) - is this supposed to be a blanket? might want to make it clearer if it is or not, since right now it just looks like a messy blanket
- 00:26:648 (3,4) - the fact that you increase spacing here with the melody is cool, but they don't flow well into 00:27:691 (1,2,3) - after.
- 00:29:778 (1,2,3) - placement here looks odd, since 3 does not flow well with the rest of the combo, where it did at 00:27:691 (1,2,3) - right before. Might want to see what you can do about this
- 00:39:169 (3) - missed whistle?
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
- 00:08:387 (4,1) - since this is basically consistent for the whole map i'll just leave as a suggestion, I think it would be much nicer if you increased the spacing between these two notes a lot, since they're both sliders the motion will still be smooth to play and it will accent the high point in the melody
- 00:28:995 (2) - note is a bit tricky to read even nomod, I can only imagine that it'll be even more frustrating to play with hd
Hitsounding
- nice
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning
- 00:28:734 (5) - were you going for an equal triangle here? x408 y32 if you were (perhaps move 00:27:952 (2) - so it's centered again if you do)
- 00:42:300 (1,3) - if you drag 00:43:343 (3) - to 00:42:952 - you will be able to do the blanket for this a bit better
- 00:27:691 - it seems like in this section you were doing whistles on every beat but missed a couple? or if you're intentionally skipping some i would create a pattern with it, like beats 1, 3, and 4 have whistles and 2 does not, since at the moment it's inconsistent
good luck!