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- 00:04:734 (3) - I think this whole pattern would look a bit better if you would move this to x:268 y:264, kinda helps it become a better circle in a way. http://puu.sh/99iX2/3d5e472e7a.jpg
- 00:21:430 (2,1) - Small improvements in the blanket would be nice~ http://puu.sh/99j1a/598a1042f2.jpg
- 00:29:778 (1) - Is this NC really that necessary? I mean it doesn't feel like that. I'd just remove the combo from 00:31:865 (1) -
- 00:19:343 (1) - I think this slider could use some improvements, the red point makes it kind of awkward, might be just me though. http://puu.sh/99jqA/9154ca36b1.jpg So in this picture I made a slider that is pretty casual, has the blankety effect going on there and now the wave slider blankets with 2 too, so it makes sense! Idk, use it if you like.
- 00:29:778 (1) - Looks kind of funny because it's unbalanced, can you make it like 00:23:517 (1) - ? Or like this: http://puu.sh/99jAq/22608ad564.jpg
- 00:05:778 (3,4) - I dislike this because they are so close to each other, usually people blanket these or move them a bit further away, this is an example how I would prefer to see them; http://puu.sh/99jJr/3e2eb4a4d8.jpg
- 00:17:256 (1) - You can blanket it with 00:17:778 (2) - in order to make this better, see this example; http://puu.sh/99jOn/680b72e59d.jpg And now since you curved 2 to the opposite direction, move 00:18:300 (3) - more to the right so the transition is better.
- 00:29:517 (4,1,2) - Kind of disappointed that you guys didn't do a nice circle / star / square pattern with these notes, oh well, here's an example still; http://puu.sh/99jWv/903d8451ef.jpg Would look better imo
- 00:32:387 (2) - Curving it could be a possibility in order to make it look more clean, see this; http://puu.sh/99k0G/a0c8dd9c0c.jpg