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Asphyxia
Sorry for the delay.

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:734 (3) - I think this whole pattern would look a bit better if you would move this to x:268 y:264, kinda helps it become a better circle in a way. http://puu.sh/99iX2/3d5e472e7a.jpg
  2. 00:21:430 (2,1) - Small improvements in the blanket would be nice~ http://puu.sh/99j1a/598a1042f2.jpg
  3. 00:29:778 (1) - Is this NC really that necessary? I mean it doesn't feel like that. I'd just remove the combo from 00:31:865 (1) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:343 (1) - I think this slider could use some improvements, the red point makes it kind of awkward, might be just me though. http://puu.sh/99jqA/9154ca36b1.jpg So in this picture I made a slider that is pretty casual, has the blankety effect going on there and now the wave slider blankets with 2 too, so it makes sense! Idk, use it if you like.
  2. 00:29:778 (1) - Looks kind of funny because it's unbalanced, can you make it like 00:23:517 (1) - ? Or like this: http://puu.sh/99jAq/22608ad564.jpg
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:778 (3,4) - I dislike this because they are so close to each other, usually people blanket these or move them a bit further away, this is an example how I would prefer to see them; http://puu.sh/99jJr/3e2eb4a4d8.jpg
  2. 00:17:256 (1) - You can blanket it with 00:17:778 (2) - in order to make this better, see this example; http://puu.sh/99jOn/680b72e59d.jpg And now since you curved 2 to the opposite direction, move 00:18:300 (3) - more to the right so the transition is better.
  3. 00:29:517 (4,1,2) - Kind of disappointed that you guys didn't do a nice circle / star / square pattern with these notes, oh well, here's an example still; http://puu.sh/99jWv/903d8451ef.jpg Would look better imo
  4. 00:32:387 (2) - Curving it could be a possibility in order to make it look more clean, see this; http://puu.sh/99k0G/a0c8dd9c0c.jpg
Insane looks good, so does Mao's, although for Mao's difficulty there are room to improve, because some slider shapes like 00:34:995 (4) - and 00:36:039 (1) - are not that appealing. Just by making it more curvy or moving the red point could improve them so much. Also the transitions at 00:16:734 (6,1) - , 00:18:300 (4,5) - and 00:18:821 (5,1) - for example weren't the best but that's fine. Nice map overall. I guess you can call me back~
Topic Starter
Myxo

Asphyxia wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:734 (3) - I think this whole pattern would look a bit better if you would move this to x:268 y:264, kinda helps it become a better circle in a way. Ok http://puu.sh/99iX2/3d5e472e7a.jpg
  2. 00:21:430 (2,1) - Small improvements in the blanket would be nice~ http://puu.sh/99j1a/598a1042f2.jpg Sorry, I don't really see a difference
  3. 00:29:778 (1) - Is this NC really that necessary? I mean it doesn't feel like that. I'd just remove the combo from 00:31:865 (1) - Yes it is. Because the red combo colour is used when the storyboard turns red and that slider isn't part of the red section
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:343 (1) - I think this slider could use some improvements, the red point makes it kind of awkward, might be just me though. http://puu.sh/99jqA/9154ca36b1.jpg So in this picture I made a slider that is pretty casual, has the blankety effect going on there and now the wave slider blankets with 2 too, so it makes sense! Idk, use it if you like. I changed it, but I just used a curved slider instead
  2. 00:29:778 (1) - Looks kind of funny because it's unbalanced, can you make it like 00:23:517 (1) - ? Or like this: I changed ithttp://puu.sh/99jAq/22608ad564.jpg
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:778 (3,4) - I dislike this because they are so close to each other, usually people blanket these or move them a bit further away, this is an example how I would prefer to see them; http://puu.sh/99jJr/3e2eb4a4d8.jpg I really like this, so I'll keep it ;w;
  2. 00:17:256 (1) - You can blanket it with 00:17:778 (2) - in order to make this better, see this example; http://puu.sh/99jOn/680b72e59d.jpg And now since you curved 2 to the opposite direction, move 00:18:300 (3) - more to the right so the transition is better. I'm not sure, but I'd like to keep it since it fits the style of the map and I wanted to reuse the straight slider from before
  3. 00:29:517 (4,1,2) - Kind of disappointed that you guys didn't do a nice circle / star / square pattern with these notes, oh well, here's an example still; http://puu.sh/99jWv/903d8451ef.jpg Would look better imo Hmm sorry I didn't use any patterns like these in this mapset so it wouldn't really fit into it imo. Also, circle reusing
  4. 00:32:387 (2) - Curving it could be a possibility in order to make it look more clean, see this; http://puu.sh/99k0G/a0c8dd9c0c.jpg Fixed, but in a different way then in your screenie
Insane looks good, so does Mao's, although for Mao's difficulty there are room to improve, because some slider shapes like 00:34:995 (4) - and 00:36:039 (1) - are not that appealing. Just by making it more curvy or moving the red point could improve them so much. Also the transitions at 00:16:734 (6,1) - , 00:18:300 (4,5) - and 00:18:821 (5,1) - for example weren't the best but that's fine. Nice map overall. I guess you can call me back~
Thank you :) Awesome mod!
Mao
Well, I've tryed to make some adjustments to the slider's shapes. About the transitions, I actually like most of them. Not much to fix with them, it would take a lot of rearranging and they aren't bad at all imo.

Code
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 2648
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Nightmare -Overture-
TitleUnicode:ナイトメア - 序曲 -
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:バラエピキュリアン
Tags:Mao Baraepikyurian Rose Epicurean Naitomea -jokyoku- Yami no Kodomo Tachi
BeatmapID:382043
BeatmapSetID:155805

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CircleSize:6
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:7
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Topic Starter
Myxo
Updated :)
Asphyxia
Bub~
Mao
Herzlichen Glückwunsch zur Blase!
Topic Starter
Myxo
Thank you so much Asphyxia <33
Asphyxia
Re-bubbled~
Topic Starter
Myxo

Asphyxia wrote:

Re-bubbled~
Thank you <3
I forgot to add "Kenterz" to the tags before ^^
Asphyxia
Mapper wanted to change something so yeah. ~
Topic Starter
Myxo

Asphyxia wrote:

Mapper wanted to change something so yeah. ~
Thank you really much again <3 I just adjusted the diff settings, according to the new possibilities. I think the spread is better now.
Secretpipe
\:D/
Kenezz
After a minor changes on the tags/source:

Ranked
Mao
Gratz! \:D/
Topic Starter
Myxo
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH <3333
Asphyxia
Cool, graz!
Irreversible
gz :)
Topic Starter
Myxo

Irreversible wrote:

gz :)
Omg 2000 posts Irre-chan o:

Thanks for the gratz-ing guys :3
Nozhomi
Gratz Desperate-kun and Mao, great map :D
Muncheyz
Gratz man *thumbs up*
So much fun to play both insanes
GJ Desperate-kun and Mao
AruOtta
Congratz ;3
Kyouren
Gratzz!! Mao and Desperate-kun!

Wait, how are you know Artist is Hatsuki Yura?

I want delete my map & change artist is Roses Epicurean (Is insturmental not Singing)

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/92315




You use the MP3 is who? Because you MP3 is same like my MP3
Kenezz

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Gratzz!! Mao and Desperate-kun!

Wait, how are you know Artist is Hatsuki Yura?

I want delete my map & change artist is Roses Epicurean (Is insturmental not Singing)

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/92315

The artist is okay, if we assuming Roses Epicurean is the real artist then why this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/48621 have "Roses Epicurean" as source? Is a game really? I think no.
Roses Epicurean is the album/circle, and Hatsuki Yura the artist (the artist is the same although this song is instrumental).

I can't see the real problem here, if you have some evidence then shoot it.
Kyouren
><, sorry

spboxer3: no, i not sure ><
Beige
Congratz ~ <3
Kotone
Yes.Roses Epicurean is the album circle name,but Hatsuki Yura must not be Artist because she is the vocal.
http://puu.sh/9HE4T/0c3d4af054.jpg
As you see the music and arrange is done by キラ星ひかる. :3
Next time check it accurately please.
Pokie

Kenezz wrote:

The artist is okay, if we assuming Roses Epicurean is the real artist then why this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/48621 have "Roses Epicurean" as source? Is a game really? I think no.
Roses Epicurean is the album/circle, and Hatsuki Yura the artist (the artist is the same although this song is instrumental).

I can't see the real problem here, if you have some evidence then shoot it.
Hmm..I know I was a bit late, but lets have a clarification on the metadata.
  1. 葉月ゆら(Hatsuki Yura), A Female Vocalist
  2. Roses Epicurean, A Doujin Circle(Publisher)
  3. 闇童話工房(Yami Douwa Koubou), Album Title
  4. キラ星ひかる(KiraBosi Hikaru), Composer of the whole CD
Here are some references:
SPOILER

From Hatsuki Yura's homepage: http://hatukiyura.sakura.ne.jp/circle/


Doujin CD's information page: http://www.dojin-music.info/cd/1006/


Toranoana(Doujin Product Seller): http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/artic ... 45809.html


A main factor, Hatsuki Yura didn't sing as a vocalist on this instrumental version. We can't assume she contribute nothing on composing, but in fact Kirabosi Hikaru is the real composer. Therefore, using her name as artist doesn't seem reasonable.

Another error according to those sources above. We found nothing related to -Overture- from the current title, it supposed to be removed. Please rectify me if I'm wrong on this.


And meh, this map is now out of qualified. Please do checking on metadata more carefully if possible, don't make it happen again!
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Myxo
*Desperate-kun feels ashamed*

I should have checked the metadata myself right at the beginning and not copy it from another mapset...

Sorry.
Lach

Desperate-kun wrote:

copy it from another mapset...
The easiest way to have incorrect metadata. I actually meant to take a look at this when it got qualified because of the title, but never got around to it. ;_;
Kazuo Kun_old
I did easy perfect w/ FL NC HR HD But I'm not even on the top 50. Is this a bug or what is it?
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