Secretpipe wrote:

Hello ! Hey!

I promise a mod~

Let's go!

[General]
Two timing points in same moment sometimes ! Mm, since Priti pointed this out, I fixed this the way it should.

[Normal]
00:00:350 (1,2) - Maybe put the same slider ? Adjusted it a bit
01:23:052 (3) - Curv it ! K
02:16:566 (1) - Remove NC I can't because they totally belong to a separate combo, removing NC here would be pretty bad for me
02:37:160 (2) - NC Doesn't fit for me :/
03:01:971 (3,4) - Curv thse like (5) yes
03:07:160 (1,3) - Make (3) like (1) sure
03:19:485 (6,1) - Bad overlap It's not bad...?

[Kysphyxia's Hard]
00:15:917 (6) - NC
00:16:890 (9) - Blanket !
00:24:998 (1,2,3) - ^
00:40:728 (2,4,5,6,7) - Dat weird spacing ! It isn't weird, I just made the spacing smaller in order to players to catch that stream easily
00:45:431 (5,6,7,8,1) - This is a bit hard for a Hard! Nerfed it
00:51:917 (2) - NC nope
01:27:917 (3,4,1) - Weird flow here ! It isn't? :s
02:36:025 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - These notes makes me feel akward !
03:03:593 (3,4) - Fix bad overlap This is obviously intentional and it fits. ;:s
03:10:728 (4) - Ctrl G ?
03:27:593 (6) - NC
03:48:998 (2) - x:256 y:192 + NC No.. would make it inconsistent and the note is stacked with 3's start

Also , too busy for mod the Insane and the Extra ! Call me tomorrow !

Kenterz wrote:

Hello, as requested

Story Board

03:38:295 - I think it'll be nicer to do the same thing as before with the flashes
Maybe you can add Asphyxia and Kyshiro's name for the collab ?

Maybe for the SB names, although I want people to keep their eye on the SB more instead of seeing some names to bother it

Normal

00:23:052 (4) - The drum-hitnormal feels weird here on the tail of this slider =/ But it's consistent with everything else
00:51:431 - Inherited point not needed =P Even if I would remove it, it doesn't affect on anything so kinda pointless
00:57:431 (1) - I suggest to move the 2nd red anchor a bit down, then it'll be softer : sure

SPOILER

01:07:809 (1,3) - I don't really like this overlap, I think you should move it above (1) : sure

SPOILER

01:15:593 (1) - I think a 3/4 slider isn't needed here, add a 1/1 slider instead ? It's not a 3/4 slider, it's 1/2 and it fits so why not though?
01:36:349 - This little part feels empty compared with the 1st kiai time. Might be because another person mapped the first one, but I prefer to keep it like this ;-;
01:53:701 - Inherited point not needed explained
02:07:485 (3) - Maybe you should try to blanket with (2) ? That's quite impossible to do, the waveslider's waves aren't capable of doing that properly and I don't want to turn this into a basic curved slider.
02:10:079 (1) - You may reverse the 2nd curve ? It's just a suggestion, I also like the way you made it (I don't even know why I suggest this xDD) gg
02:38:458 - I think you should add a 1/2 slider with a reverse here to follow the voice and the song. It's a bit vicious because it doesn't follow the vocal here, instead of 02:37:160 (2) I wanted to catch the main beats there and I suppose I did that? Even so, it's completely fine and it plays nicely, some variety
02:58:079 (2,4) - It's quite overlapping here, try to move up 02:58:079 (2)'s 3rd anchor ? intentional
03:09:755 (1) - This curve looks a bit strange... Try to fix it maybe ? (move the 2nd anchor around 232|56) looks fine to me though
03:27:106 - Inherited point not needed Explained

Kysphyxia's Hard

00:40:728 (2) - I think this circle should be around 316|144 to respect the distance snap a bit kk
00:50:620 (7) - You should move it around 368|348 to be logical with the distance snap =P intentionalllllll
01:13:647 (4,5) - I don't really like this overlap, try to make (5) as a curve ? \:D/ I like it very much though.. ;-;
01:15:512 (3) - Move this circle a bit down ? It feels weird =/ sure
01:53:701 - This inherited point isn't needed. explained
02:09:431 (3,4) - They seems really close, maybe there's a problem with the distance snap ? I used 1.2 distance snap in this section, some of the objects are 1.22x and some 1.19, can't help it due to grid snap
02:57:268 (2) - This circle doesn't feel stacked with 02:57:431 (3) fix'd
03:27:106 - Inherited point not needed. ~
03:38:944 (5,6) - I think (5) and (6)'s head are too close, it's quite annoying I don't think so, leaving it as it is

Extra

00:10:241 (5) - I think this slider should end at 00:10:566 (or you can silence the end of the slider) If you listen carefully at 25%, it actually ends on the blue tick
01:06:349 (3) - I think it's better to unstack it (because I'll rage with hidden xD) sure

Wow this diff. is quite perfect \:D/

I hope my mod was helpful. I'd like to have your opinion, it'll help me a lot =D Your mod was useful, even though I denied a lot due to personal preferences, you can ask for more details in-game if you wish to do so. Thank you!!!
Good luck for rank ;3

HabiHolic wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]

00:40:566 (1) - Don't need NC Okay.
00:59:701 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1617555 Placing (2) below (1) makes for a better flow, IMO.

Oyatsu wrote:

Hinsvar's Insane

1. 00:02:133 (2) - I think it stacked 00:01:485 (4) - isn't nice. So I prefer mine The objects won't interfere each other while playing, and the flow of that pattern is just not really good compared to the current pattern.
   
   Example

   
   

   184,272,2133,2,0,P|168:240|148:208,1,60.0000022888184,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:09:106 (3,4,1) - I think pattern isn't nice. I want (3) is stacked completely with 00:07:971 (4) and 00:09:268 (4) - is at 412/112 ^
3. 00:09:431 (1) - it is a random slider? I prefer like this. Hope it will be nicer for you. Made it symmetrical with 00:08:620 (2).
   
   Example

   
   

   262,204,9431,6,0,L|278:56,1,120.000004577637,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:10:241 (1,1) - You forgot that this is Insane diff, so 00:10:728 (1) - move to 240/120, Don't worry about distance Uh, there is no rule that you have to space an object from a slider like 00:10:241 (1) to the point where they won't touch each other. I prefer the current pattern.
5. 00:12:349 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow and pattern Unfortunately, this actually broke the flow.
6. 00:14:295 (4) - ^ ^
7. 00:18:187 (1) - NC here for what? It isn't really needed Removed.
8. 00:21:674 (3) - Remove plz, don't overmap if there wasn't. Instrument or both vocal didn't have 1/4 here wtf? There's very clearly an instrument sound here.
9. 00:28:566 (5) - Make a slider 1/8 and add repeats, follow piano, why not? I don't want to make the rhythm too complicated.
10. 00:36:674 (1) - tail is at 336/212 to blanket plz. fix both (2) if you used copied-pattern I'm sure the blanket is better as is.
11. 00:39:917 (1) - Remove NC, it isn't needed Removed.
12. 00:44:944 (3) - 64/196, nicer pattern (64,276) instead.
13. 00:55:809 (4) - Move to right 1 grid (456/244) to be opposite Ah okay.
14. 00:59:052 (2) - How about moving to 284/136? Why so? I can't see any point of doing this.
15. 01:03:755 (4) - 472/220 to improve flow It creates an inconsistency in spacing, and I don't think the flow improved...
16. 01:12:755 - Here still has drum sound, I sugguest to you add note and creat stream instead I didn't hear anything that resembles a sound.
17. 01:21:431 (1) - Remove NC, NC at 01:22:890 (4) - instead This is the beginning of another pattern, so...
18. 01:26:620 (1) - Here has 3-1/4 piano and you didn't use, but 01:27:106 (3,4,1) - you want to over it, I only can hear "du-can", right? I also checked 25% and no sound here. My rhythm for these: Hmm... but I'd like to emphasize the vocal here instead since the vocal is far more dominant. But okay, removed 01:27:187 (4).
    
    Example

    
    

    336,248,86620,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,248,86701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,248,86782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    208,108,86944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    236,324,87106,1,0,0:0:0:0:

19. 01:27:917 (1) - Remove NC because no reason Yep.
20. 01:36:349 (1) - 168/44, 01:35:052 (1) - will round it and next it will be 01:36:998 (1) - . Nice? Uh, are you sure about the coordinate?
21. 01:43:160 (3) - A strong beat, NC? The music itself is still a part of the stanza that starts from 01:42:836, so I think this object should stay as a part of its current combo.
22. 01:46:404 (4) - Wanna better stack? I think it should be at 88/144 I never intended to make a stack or anything. Adjusted 01:46:079 (3,4), though.
23. 01:47:782 - Miss note here I don't think it can be mapped...
24. 01:53:863 (3,1) - Abit bored because near finish, so Stack with slider played will no creat a special pattern. My way is 168/252, straight with (4) and (2) Let's try (36,148) instead.
25. 02:33:917 (2,3) - Ctrrl+G to repeat rhythm, you don't hear strong beat first? Change placement afterward. Umm, I'm sure it's better to emphasize a strong beat with a circle.
26. 03:00:512 (5,6,1) - Again 1/4 rhythm, remove (6) plz I can feel an instrument's sound there, so uh...
27. 02:18:349 (2,3) - As above, Ctrl+G, I think guitar is stronger than piano, slider first after that is note. Change placement afterward While the part about the stronger instrument is correct, the instrument at 02:18:512 is still pretty strong to the point where it needs to be emphasized. And then again, there's nothing to accentuate at 02:18:674...
28. 02:40:404 - I can hear a small drum, check 25% you can hear it, add note if you can hear =w= Sure.
29. 03:21:917 (3) - tail is at 340/24 to blanket ^
30. 03:26:620 (5) - I remember you always NC this beat as previous rhythm times? Ah yep.
31. 03:32:782 (5) - Slider should be ended at 1/2 ( 03:32:944 ) and add note at 03:33:025. Just drum is small, you can hear carefully again? Umm, but the drum at 03:33:025 is stronger, and the instrument at 03:32:944 is almost unnoticeable.
32. 03:37:809 (4) - move to 252/92 to stack completely with tail of 03:38:620 (1) - Did... stuff.
33. 03:48:187 (2) - Move to 212/40 to creat trigle pattern with other circles Nope, for spacing consistency.
34. 03:48:349 (3) - Sorry but this didn't follow something. 3 drums 1/4 runs at 03:48:512 - . So I want to try this rhythm: Okay.
    
    Example

    

Priti wrote:

Hinsvar's Insane

1. -1 HP for better spread? Extra is already HP7 and Hard is HP5, so it would make sense for this to be HP6. Okay.
2. To be honest, I really don't like the usage of normal claps here, maybe get some nice sample that isn't as strong but still gives the effect that you want? Alternatively, use soft claps instead. Hmm, I'll figure out something later... No change for now since I think it's quite good as is, but I do think that something is... off.
3. 00:10:728 (1) - I'd say a soft finish will fit pretty well on head. Added.
4. 00:30:836 (3) - Add finish on tail to match the heavy drum sound in the song? ^
5. 00:51:593 (2) - There's nothing but vocals that backs this up, which makes this feel strange considering the vocal starts on 00:51:431 - Consider starting the mapping from either 00:51:431 - Or 00:51:755 The vocalist was only starting to pick up the lyrics there; it reaches the peak at 00:51:552, a yellow tick. But yep, it feels awkward to start here, so... let's use that yellow tick for 101% accuracy instead.
6. 01:12:998 (1) - Missing a soft finish on head? Oops.
7. 01:13:971 (2,1) - Blanket is kinda off, Ctrl + G 01:13:971 (2) - To be able to see the sliderball track on the sliderborder so you can perfect it. Done.
8. 01:39:268 (2,1) - Blanket is a bit off, curve 01:39:593 (1) - a tiny bit more to perfect it. ^
9. 01:46:728 (1,3) - Maybe blanket these two? Looks a bit strange at the moment. ^
10. 01:54:512 (1) - Volume is really low, consider using around 55% volume for this note for better impact. 50% should do.
11. 02:04:890 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off, not much else to say. This is why I should using grid snap. Done.
12. 02:22:728 (4,5,6) - The actual sound is 1/6, so maybe use a 1/6 slider that repeats twice instead of this? Used one that repeats four times instead.
13. 03:43:485 (1,2) - Blanket is off. Fixed.

Kenterz wrote:

Hinsvar's Insane

00:05:214 (4,1) - This distance seems quite equal as 00:05:052 (3,4)'s one. Try to decrease the distance between (3) and (4) Done.
00:23:701 (1) - The red anchor doesn't seems aligned with the 2 other anchors. Try to fix it please ^
00:26:944 (2) - Make it like 00:26:295 (1) It's intentional. At 00:26:295 (1,2,3), I intentionally made the sliders more curved the later it is in the map.
00:44:944 (3) - I think you should move it around 72|204 to create the "illusion" that it doesn't overlap =P Sure.
00:51:431 - I feel like it's a bit empty here. Btw it's just a suggestion There's nothing I can really map here but the vocalist's vocal pick-up breath lol
01:09:431 (3) - The red anchor doesn't looks at the middle of the slider (or it's the 1st curve which is increase compared to the 2nd curve) Fixed, I think.
02:20:458 (1,3) - Try to avoid this overlap please (stack it on 02:20:458 (1)'s tail) I personally feel that this overlap is cool, and I just don't feel like stacking them like that... It just feels wrong.
02:44:701 - Maybe you should add a circle here ? There's nothing to follow.
03:06:512 (4) - Use a 3/4 here and add a circle at 03:06:836 I'd rather use the slider to follow the vocal in the beginning and the end. Feels better that way, IMO.

1. Add audio lead-in manually? There's an epilepsy warning enabled so currently it feels too fast to start. 2000ms or so would be nice imo.
2. Tags in Kysphyxia's Hard is like wtf.
3. Mute the soft-sliderslide at least, it's pretty noisy especially at the very beginning of the song.
4. No pantsu in the BG please. ;_______;

you wrote:

Normal - Me (Priti mapped only the first chorus so I think it's better to rename it to normal only)

• Why don't you tag his name then? :<

1. Do you have any reason to add diff-specific SB codes into Extra and Normal? If not please remove all the codes from the difficulties, some elements are overlapping each other.
2. Disable Widescreen Support, it sometimes makes images appear strangely, most notably at 02:36:025 - . lol
3. Unused files;
   
   1. 9 (4).jpg
   2. 11 (1).jpg
   3. 11 (2).jpg
4. The file size of few images is much larger than they need to be. It's still rankable but please consider turning them down, it helps people play them more comfortably.
   
   1. 10 (1).jpg
   2. 29 (3).jpg

1. 00:00:350 ~ 00:10:728 - Add some whistles? Honestly not adding any hitsounds makes this section really plain and boring imo.
2. 00:49:647 (1) - You might as well add a finish here. The same goes for 01:51:917 -
3. 01:43:160 - Add a finish here for the sake of consistency with the previous kiai part.

irc part

14:34 *Melophobia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/391228 Sagara Kokoro - Hoshizora no Ima [Extra]]
14:34 Melophobia: why dont you try lyric sb
14:35 Asphyxia: because Kanari didn't want to?
14:35 Asphyxia: idk
14:35 *Asphyxia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/176708 Sagara Kokoro - Hoshizora no Ima [Insane]]
14:35 Asphyxia: it's from here
14:35 Asphyxia: but the VN SB is pretty cool even without the lyrics
14:36 Melophobia: ok
14:36 Asphyxia: also
14:36 Asphyxia: 01:23:377 (1,3) - pls no unrankable
14:36 Asphyxia: ((((
14:36 Melophobia: it's fine imo
14:36 Asphyxia: YES
14:36 Asphyxia: WOHOOO
14:36 Melophobia: 01:27:917 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -
14:37 Melophobia: This is rather not
14:37 Asphyxia: well idk what to do with those, since I obviously want to keep them as notes
14:37 Asphyxia: because this is an extra
14:37 Asphyxia: and people were complaining about the spacing
14:37 Asphyxia: so I made the spacing bigger
14:37 Melophobia: rofl
14:38 Asphyxia: so <.<
14:38 Asphyxia: also
14:38 Asphyxia: 01:46:728 (1) - made this curve less curvy so it doesn't touch the hp bar
14:38 Asphyxia: 01:47:377 (4) - and turned this into more fitting one
14:39 Melophobia: 01:46:079 (3,1) - are not stacked properly fyi
14:39 Melophobia: 01:49:322 - Finish
14:39 Asphyxia: k
14:39 Melophobia: hm
14:40 Asphyxia: all fix'd
14:40 Asphyxia: lemme see if other diffs have the finish too
14:40 Asphyxia: if not, gonna add
14:40 Asphyxia: 01:49:322 -
14:40 Melophobia: i think i will just throw my bubble away
14:40 Melophobia: im lazy
14:40 Melophobia: as fuck
14:41 Asphyxia: updated
14:41 Melophobia: oh wait
14:41 Melophobia: 00:47:052 (1) -
14:41 Asphyxia: yeah?
14:41 Melophobia: finiiish
14:42 Asphyxia: extra?
14:42 Asphyxia: ahhh
14:42 Asphyxia: ok
14:42 Asphyxia: 00:47:052 -
14:43 Asphyxia: ok
14:43 Asphyxia: can I update or is there more
14:43 Melophobia: 01:17:539 (4) - im not a fan of this 1/4 usage
14:43 Melophobia: shorten it by 1/4
14:44 Melophobia: 01:27:593 (2) - you might as well add a finish here
14:44 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/908sb.jpg
14:44 Asphyxia: how bout that oattern?
14:44 Asphyxia: pattern*
14:44 Asphyxia: does it look good
14:44 Melophobia: i dont care about pattern but rhythm
14:45 Melophobia: it flows nicely imo
14:45 Asphyxia: uhh
14:45 Asphyxia: yeah lemme add the finish on all diffs again then
14:45 Asphyxia: 01:27:593 -
14:46 Asphyxia: done
14:46 Melophobia: 02:21:431 (3,1) -
14:46 Melophobia: dont you think the spacing is too large
14:46 Melophobia: 5.47x wtf
14:46 Asphyxia: I mean every testplayer I've had got the hang of this in their first try
14:46 Asphyxia: but I can make the spacing less big
14:46 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/908z7.jpg
14:47 Asphyxia: now it's like 4.58
14:47 Melophobia: ok
14:48 Melophobia: 00:28:890 (1) - 02:43:809 -
14:48 Melophobia: finish!
14:49 Melophobia: 03:22:728 (1) -
14:49 Asphyxia: finish?
14:49 Asphyxia: ok
14:49 Asphyxia: 03:22:728 -
14:50 Asphyxia: k done

1. I'm not a fan of whistle usage in kiai sections, they just come every 2 beats and it's somehow uninspiring to me.
2. 00:05:052 (3,4) - I personally think this jump doesn't fit with melody, considering there's not heavy beat or something special here. And by normalizing the spacing you can emphasis the next (1) in a better way imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642036
3. 01:54:512 (1) - This is truly optional but I'd place this note closer to the middle of the screen if I were you; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1641979
4. 02:35:701 (1) - I think this newcombo is totally pointless and make the stream pattern look worse. Consider removing it. Same for 03:36:674 (1) - .
5. 02:45:755 (1) - I kind of dislike this slider because there's no background music so i find it unfitting. I'd rather remove it and add a spinner here like Extra diff.

1. This difficulty is way too hard for what the difficulty name shows cosindering the BPM. And it makes the difficulty gap between hard and normal really bad. Consider removing some notes/ streams to ease it.
2. 00:00:350 ~ 00:10:728 - Same as Extra, you might as well add some whistles to vivify this part.
3. 00:28:890 (1) - Add a finish here.
4. 00:47:052 (1) - ^
5. 00:49:647 (1) - ^
6. 00:50:944 (1,2) - Does this REALLY need such a large spacing? Considering how calm the background music is you really shouldn't use it imo.
7. 01:27:593 (2) - Add a finish here.
8. 01:49:322 - ^
9. 01:51:917 - ^
10. 02:42:836 (1,2) - This spacing is totally nonsense and just leads to unreadablities.
11. 02:43:809 - Add a finish here.
12. 03:37:809 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - No.

1. Next time please try to use a larger spacing when you decide to use a lot of 1/2. Closer spacing makes things look complex and turns out even harder.
2. 00:28:890 (1) - Add a finish here.
3. 00:30:187 (3) - Feels like there should be a pause here, how about trying this rhythm? http://puu.sh/90eoS.jpg
4. 00:49:647 - Add a finish here.
5. 01:01:322 - ^
6. 01:49:322 (1) - ^
7. 02:17:863 (3) - Shorten this slider by 1/2 beat so it fits better with the melody (piano sound) ?
8. 02:43:809 - Add a finish here.
9. 02:58:079 (2,4) - Avoid overlapping the end of (2) with the beginning of (4), since it probably causes beginners to misread the rhythm. You can rearrange it like this; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642222
10. 03:38:620 - This heavy beat is totally ignored and i find it really strange. :<

1. In easier difficulties you cannot put claps constantly due to long sliders and empty beats, so i suggest you use another hitsound logic (for example putting claps on every 1st and 3rd whitetick).
2. 00:00:350 ~ 00:10:728 - Consider adding some whistles. Currently the part feels really empty, considering easier difficulties contain less notes than others.
3. 00:19:809 - Add a finish here.
4. 00:26:295 - Fill in here? :<
5. 00:28:890 - Add a finish here.
6. 00:49:647 - ^
7. 01:18:187 - ^
8. 01:49:322 - ^
9. 01:51:917 (1) - ^
10. 02:43:160 (3,4) - I'm fine with all other 1/2 in this difficulty since they're reasonable enough and indeed makes sense, but this one is completely off with the melody and i think it causes beginners to misread the rhythm. Please move it toward by 1/2 beat so it fits better with the vocal.
11. 02:43:809 - Add a finish here.
12. 03:09:755 (1,3) - (1)'s end is too close to (3)'s beginning imo, and I don't think it looks that great. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642255
13. 03:22:728 - Add a finish here.
14. 03:38:620 - Map the middle of the slider? There's a heavy beat at 03:38:620 - and i want you to follow it.
15. 03:44:782 (1) - ^
    Awesome job. :3

1. Add Kanari to the tags, that's a new username of the storyboarder. She deserves a credit for it.
2. Please, disable the letterboxes, perhaps, you'll have to do it manually. (open .osu file and set LetterboxesinBreaks to 0). It may confllict with this amazing SB.

1. I would set OD a bit lower since the diff uses 2/1 beats and the rhythm itself is quite choppy. It will help beginners to stay alive and make the diff a bit friendlier.
2. 00:14:295 (1) - I would remove this NC snce it feels a bit out of your pattern and llooks extra here. It also hurts your comboing
3. 00:26:295 - insert a break here? Thqat long gap may be stressful for the beginners. Also, starting the break at 00:26:295 - will hlp you to emphasize the beat there!
4. 01:07:809 (3) - ahh, well, a new combo here would fit perfectly and make your comboing more consistent. It'll also fit better with themusic!
5. 03:09:755 (1,2,3) - minor - having a perfect triangle like you did it with 03:07:160 (1,2,3) - would be awesome. Try to fix the pattern, I bet it won't take too much of your precious time
6. 03:29:214 (1,2,3) - looks a bit confusing, consider fixing the DS if it's possible here. You can also contact me in-game if you want some help.
7. 03:46:728 (3,4) - felt a bit out of your pattern, I would try to avoid that stack since you didn't use them earlier.
   
   Well, the diff is fine, although OD or HP sould be reduced in order to make the diff a bit more playable.

1. Higher AR would fit better with the Sv. But higher AR also means higher Od and HP, so, consider that!
2. 00:20:458 (4) - consider replacing this slider with two 1/2 sliders. This one s too short and it'll be hard to notice the second reverse-arrow! This should be much more playable
   Note: well, 01:01:322 (3,4) - kinda the sam here. Look for an alternative way, because these sliders are too hard to read and they look really messy/confusing.
   Note2: 01:33:106 (2) - yup. The same for all these sliders.
3. 00:29:863 (2,4) - minor - this overlap looks quite messy, I'd recommend you to avoid that, if it's possible!
4. 01:26:944 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the calm part is meant to be relaxing, but it is rather hard to relax when you're supposed to click so many circles in a row! Consider adding a few sliders to make the pattern a bit easier!
5. 02:28:241 (3) - according to your combo pattern the object should have a new combo. Also, it will fit with the song, so add here a new combo, please.
   
   The diff is fine. I did not really like the 1/1 part but it's okay, I guess. Anyway, the diff seems pretty cool.

1. Both OD and HP Drain are too low, imo. Setting them a bit higher would make the spread a bit more balanced and add some challenge to the diff. Try it uin action, I promise, you'll like that!
2. 01:29:863 (1) - minor - oh, this little overlap looks so messy, it spoils the impression of a neat map, so hurry up and fix it, if it's possible!
3. 02:29:458 (1,2,3,4) - having both 1/4 and 1/2 stacks at the same combo is quite confusing. Consider unstacking either 1/2 or 1/4 pattern to make the diff a bit more readable
   
   The diff is fine, you did a good job, although the flow feels confusing in some parts.

1. 02:35:701 (1) - this NC feels a bit unnecessary and doesn't sounds really fitting to me. I would remove that to keep your comboing more consistent.
   
   Oh my gosh, it's Hinsvar! Do I really need to comment how awesome that diff is?

1. 00:25:647 (3) - a new combo here would reflect the antijump pattern proerly. Please, do it to make the diff more readable.
2. 00:46:566 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - either add a new combo to emphasize the switch from stack to stream or replace the stacked circles with a slider, that'd make the pattern much more readable, imo.
3. 01:53:214 (1,2) - consider swapping the NCs or adding a new combo to (2) since the beat at 01:53:701 - needs to be emphasized, imo.
   
   Impressive mapping, man! You've improved a lot and the diff was quite cool even when I've checked it first!

1. 00:14:295 (1) - Move it more into the middle of the playfield? I know it would break your spacing but it should be ok since the gaps are pretty high. Right now the slider looks a bit cornered. http://puu.sh/90m02.jpg
2. 00:25:647 (5) - 2/1-slider starting here? Because I think you should map this beat 00:26:295 -
3. 00:41:214 (3) - Make it less curvy for a better transition. The blanket is not perfect anyways. http://puu.sh/90mHK.jpg
4. 01:23:377 (1) - Rotate 10° so it is more away from 01:24:998 (2) -
5. 02:43:322 (4) - Delete and add circle at 02:43:485. I guess this was unintentional, and if not, plz xD This is an Easy and the beat is much more emphasized
6. 03:22:728 (3) - Start is near to 03:21:917 (2)'s start -> confusing for newbies. I dunno how to fix it easily though
   The diff is fine, though the extensive use of 1/2 might be difficult to play for newbies in my opinion.

1. 00:29:863 (2,3) - Change these so that 00:29:863 (2,4) - don't overlap? Might be a little bit confusing for newbies. http://puu.sh/90mPY.jpg
2. 00:57:431 (1) - I think the slidershape doesn't look good. The slight curves are not really recognizable. Why not flip this 00:56:133 (3) and use here? http://puu.sh/90mY2.jpg
3. 00:59:377 (8,1) - Transition could be better imo. http://puu.sh/90n0d.jpg
4. 01:45:431 (4) - The rhythm feels strange. You are mapping so many beats but here you suddenly use a 2/1-slider.. Change like this? http://puu.sh/90n8k.jpg
5. 03:28:890 (2,3) - Make a blanket?
   The Normal diff is ok. I don't like how you are mapping so many 1/2-beats there. Everything looks a bit cramped, as they all touch each other due to that. It's also difficult to play for newbies. In my opinion, you should get rid of some 1/2 here, especially outside of the kiai-times.

1. 01:35:701 (3) - Plays better if you use ctrl+g on this slider.

Melophobia wrote:

[Insane]

1. I'm not a fan of whistle usage in kiai sections, they just come every 2 beats and it's somehow uninspiring to me. Well, I can't really come up with anything innovative because of the music lol
2. 00:05:052 (3,4) - I personally think this jump doesn't fit with melody, considering there's not heavy beat or something special here. And by normalizing the spacing you can emphasis the next (1) in a better way imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1642036 Sure.
3. 01:54:512 (1) - This is truly optional but I'd place this note closer to the middle of the screen if I were you; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1641979 Pretty much impossible since it means I'll have to remap the few seconds before it lol
4. 02:35:701 (1) - I think this newcombo is totally pointless and make the stream pattern look worse. Consider removing it. Same for 03:36:674 (1) - . Done.
5. 02:45:755 (1) - I kind of dislike this slider because there's no background music so i find it unfitting. I'd rather remove it and add a spinner here like Extra diff. But how about that sound which becomes gradually louder? Made this a 2/1 slider instead.

-Bakari- wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]

1. 02:35:701 (1) - this NC feels a bit unnecessary and doesn't sounds really fitting to me. I would remove that to keep your comboing more consistent. Done!
   
   Oh my gosh, it's Hinsvar! Do I really need to comment how awesome that diff is? \o/

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]

1. 01:35:701 (3) - Plays better if you use ctrl+g on this slider. It'll break the flow to 01:36:025 (4).

Melophobia wrote:

[Hard]

1. 02:42:836 (1,2) - This spacing is totally nonsense and just leads to unreadablities. It's not nonsense, it's a calm part and the approach rate really makes this simple to read

-Bakari- wrote:

[Kysphyxia's Hard]

1. 02:29:458 (1,2,3,4) - having both 1/4 and 1/2 stacks at the same combo is quite confusing. Consider unstacking either 1/2 or 1/4 pattern to make the diff a bit more readable Unstacked the 1/4

Melophobia wrote:

Bubbled.

Irreversible wrote:

Ranked~

fancy sb!

1. 01:29:863 (4) - This slider is completely hidden and unexpected, it should be changed.

1. 01:27:917 (3,1,2,3,1) - This is the only part where you used 1/3 circles and it's pretty confusing to sightread, I'd prefer if you change these into sliders.