Hi from my queue ~
Good luck ~
[General]
cus BPM is low , and seems you just follow distance spacing , it will be some depressing druing plaing
try to do some jump or some special design ~
maybe note it after
believe you can improve it more >.O
- I think 2nd kiai time should begin at 01:03:591 - 01:32:228 -
- 01:32:682 - why keep empty after ? It make strange :<
- 01:58:137 - feel like miss the lyrics here
- 00:11:546(4,5,6) - Do you sure you want to do like this pattern ? seems it's not very good to read.
Just point out to be a reference - 00:42:000(2) - suggest to make this slider straight to be symmetry with (1)
- 01:05:637(1,2,3) - How about some pattern like this ?
symmetry with 01:05:182(1,2,3) - , seems it will be much beatiful - 01:09:728(4,5,6) - seems you can overlapping (4) with 01:08:932(2) -
and (5) with 01:09:387(2) -
current's is some mess - 01:58:137 - Add a note to follow the lyrics ?
- 02:09:728(7,8) - this slider overlapping is so confuse
try to make it slant some - 02:13:364(7,8) - ^
- 02:20:637(1,2) - ^
- 02:24:273(1,2) - ^
cus BPM is low , and seems you just follow distance spacing , it will be some depressing druing plaing
try to do some jump or some special design ~
maybe note it after
believe you can improve it more >.O
Good luck ~