Vhy wrote:

BPM: 132.000
offset: 5410

Ikki KiDz wrote:

pas di bagian 3 / 4 spinner berturut2 itu terlalu cepet
susah buat dapetin perfectnya..
coba dikasih timing lebih pas dibagian itunya selebihnya bagus kok

IadzXenon wrote:

Thanks for modding, but for right now I'm focusing on playing than mapping. I'll reply your mod later. Sorry...

not94 wrote:

Insane Diff:
00:05:410 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe you shouldn't do so many circles, try sliders and blankets. I'll skip this for right now...
01:03:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ - ^
01:18:359 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I would also prefer large Jumps here. Jumping? All right...
00:26:318 (2) - make this slider half as long and use a reverse arrow I don't mind...
00:29:953 (2) - ^ - ^
01:24:268 (4,5,6) - this has to be a new combo Yes, you're right...
01:33:812 (10) - 01:44:493 (6) - youre right that is good to be faster.But please don't make it THAT fast. I don't know how to fix it... :/
01:58:137 place a circle here it sounds better Nope for now... :>
02:18:364 (1) - 02:31:535 (7) - in the last seconds you can do pretty high jumps. that makes the map more interesting. Yes you're right...
do some changes in the volume it sounds better ( kiai time could be louder) Allright...

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue ~

[General]
Every objects aren't snapped (maybe because of an offset or timing changed...) Yes you're right...
Japanese title : オワタP Ok...
Don't write "otawap" in the source and tags because it's already wrote for the artist. Same for the title of the song (in the tags) All right...

[Normal]
00:12:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Distance Snap I don't mind...
00:25:868 (6,7) - Blanket ? :

SPOILER

It's just a little blanket but no problem...
00:29:504 (8,9) - ^ No blanket...
00:46:321 (3,1,2,3) - Distance Snap Ooppss... :3
00:49:048 (1) - Ugly
I don't think so...
01:07:229 (1) - Place this circle at x:176 y:208 All right...
01:07:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Distance Snap (and don't forget to move up a little bit the (4) for a good square patern) Yes you're right...
01:11:775 (2,3) - Blanket ? Okay...
01:12:683 (3,4) - Distance Snap All right...
01:20:409 (4,5,1) - ^ - ^
01:24:955 (5) - x:184 y:72 All right...
01:25:409 (1,2) - Blanket

SPOILER

All right , but i changed by mine... :3
01:31:318 (6,7) - ^ - ^
01:32:682 - Break time in a Kiai Time ? Weird xD I don't know how to fix it, I don't know where I must place a break. But I hope this allowed...

[Hard]
01:21:317 (8,1) - Blanket ? No blanket...
01:31:089 (6,7) - Distance Snap I don't mind, it's okay just have some jumping right?

[Insane]
00:05:637 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange Patern =/ Yes you're right...
00:08:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ I don't think so for this because I don't know how to change it, Ill keep mine...
01:03:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - But I like this one ^w^ Thanks...
01:08:814 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Messy Yeah I know it's messy but I won't change it...

Hope it'll be helpful =3

IadzXenon wrote:

But please note that my name is IadzXenon not IdazXenon :/ . Please change it in your modding queue, it's sound isn't nice...

IadzXenon wrote:

01:32:682 - Break time in a Kiai Time ? Weird xD I don't know how to fix it, I don't know where I must place a break. But I hope this allowed...

Kenterz9 wrote:

IadzXenon wrote:

But please note that my name is IadzXenon not IdazXenon :/ . Please change it in your modding queue, it's sound isn't nice...

Oops, really sorry xD

IadzXenon wrote:

01:32:682 - Break time in a Kiai Time ? Weird xD I don't know how to fix it, I don't know where I must place a break. But I hope this allowed...

I think it's okay, just strange ^w^

HabiHolic wrote:

[Normal]

00:07:228 (5) - NC Here Rhythm flow Ok...
00:10:864 (5) - ^ - ^
00:12:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What distance is the difference? Tune in to the constant distance is unrankble Ouh, I'm understand now...
00:50:864 (1) - Delete the spinner looks better idea of ​​keeping notes I don't mind... :>
00:54:500 (1) - ^ - ^
00:59:955 - add note please Rhythm flow I'll skip for this time...
01:22:682 (2) - Suggestions for good eye look Reference photo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1206575 I think so...
01:32:682 - why this berak time? mapping please 01:39:500-this far I don't know how to fill it, for this I need BAT. If this allowed for break, I'll skip this...
01:39:955 (1,1,1,1) - all delete spiner Please make clear the part and then back to Yes just a spinner make this strange, but same reason, I don't know how to fill it...
01:46:546 (1,2) - don't like patten this batter Reference photo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1206585 I don't mind... :>


[Hard]

00:58:137 (10) - NC Please Ok...
00:59:955 - add note Same reason, I'll skip for this time
01:00:182 (1) - ctrl + g Oopps...
01:04:500 (6) - NC All right...
01:07:910 (5) - ^ - ^
01:11:546 (5) - ^ - ^

I'm disappointed in your map. Do not fit the layout of the map is not recommended intervals. This bitmap needs to be improved for Yeah I think so. I'm newmapper here and this is my first map. So I don't have much Experience... :/

Good Luck

IadzXenon wrote:

HabiHolic wrote:

01:39:955 (1,1,1,1) - all delete spiner Please make clear the part and then back to Yes just a spinner make this strange, but same reason, I don't know how to fill it... Now I have idea to fill this...

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi Hi...

Mod from French Modding Team :p

[Normal]

00:19:500 (1) - They are stack but the spacing is good ! Can you make something new ? Emh it's too hard for me to make new...
00:59:955 - Add a note ? Yeah like HabiHolic asked before to flow rhythm. But I prefer to add slider in 00:59:500 to 00:59:728... :>

That's all I found but I find it a little bit hard for a normal :3

[Hard]
00:09:046 (1) - Wrong spacing ( I think) It's hard for me to change it...
01:13:591 (6) - You should reverse it Make slider shorter than reverse it? I don't mind... :>
01:32:228 (7) - Too far ( wrong spacing) No problem just add some jumping right...
02:16:319 (10) - Use new combo ? Ooppsss...
02:32:228 (7) - Too far ( wrong spacing) Same reason, I want make some jumping...


[Insane]
01:17:682 (1) - Make it more simple ! It's hard for me to change it...

Yeah if I change some pattern then I need to remap. It's hard for me...


That's all I found again

Nicce beatmap and nice song! Ahh thank you very much...
Hope the best for you !
Good luck ! Thanks...

1. remove "vocaloid" from source
   it is no problem even if source is blank about vocaloid's song
   https://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r= ... aloid&m=-1
2. BG size should be 800x600
3. it is hard to play because skinning colour is similar to BG
   I recommend to change the colour of hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, at least

1. for normal diff, you use too many circles. I recommend to change several circles into slider
2. OD -1
3. for normal diff, avoid overlap as far as posibble.
   for example, 00:08:137 (3,2) - , 00:18:137 (5,1) - are not good
4. 00:44:500 (3) - curve more gently
5. 01:32:682~01:39:955- avoid setting Kiai-Time on break-time (apply to other diffs)
6. 01:45:410 (1) - very hard for beginner because of short spinner

1. 00:19:500~00:34:046- repeated similar patterns are boring
2. 00:40:637 (3,4,1) - avoid this overlap
3. 00:45:182 (1,2,3,4) - many circle's stack like this is boring and easy. it is better not to use too mach

1. 01:08:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to see. I recommend to avoid overlap
2. 01:32:682~01:46:773- SV 2.0x is too rapid...

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. remove "vocaloid" from source
   it is no problem even if source is blank about vocaloid's song
   https://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r= ... aloid&m=-1 Ouh, all right...
2. BG size should be 800x600 Oopss I never check this...
3. it is hard to play because skinning colour is similar to BG
   I recommend to change the colour of hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, at least All right...

[Normal]

1. for normal diff, you use too many circles. I recommend to change several circles into slider I'll try to minimalizier this...
2. OD -1 Ok...
3. for normal diff, avoid overlap as far as posibble.
   for example, 00:08:137 (3,2) - , 00:18:137 (5,1) - are not good I don't mind :> . Overlap as far as possible didn't make between note are very far right?
4. 00:44:500 (3) - curve more gently Fixed...
5. 01:32:682~01:39:955- avoid setting Kiai-Time on break-time (apply to other diffs) Skipped for this time. If this allowed and rankable I wouldn't change this. For this I'll asked BAT...
6. 01:45:410 (1) - very hard for beginner because of short spinner Hmhmhmhm yes you're right if I think again, hard for begginer player...

[Hard]

1. 00:19:500~00:34:046- repeated similar patterns are boring I agree...
2. 00:40:637 (3,4,1) - avoid this overlap Same reason, nope... :>
3. 00:45:182 (1,2,3,4) - many circle's stack like this is boring and easy. it is better not to use too mach Yes you're right...

[Insane]

1. 01:08:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to see. I recommend to avoid overlap Same reason again, I don't mind, and mostly because this is insane...
2. 01:32:682~01:46:773- SV 2.0x is too rapid... Emh, yes like not94 asked before, this is too fast, now I changed my mind. But this is make me to should remap... :/

if you adjust hitsound-volume, your map become enjoyable, imo Yes I'm waiting for my friend to give volume suggest...
~Good Luck~ Thanks very much...